Episode 034: Batara Lattu Dan Cinta Pada Pandangan Pertamanya
by I La Galigo
Adapted Version
The grand palace of Tompotikka stood silent, its beauty hidden beneath years of dust and neglect, awaiting a new beginning. Commander Pangoriseng and his men from Ale Luwu had just arrived.
"We must be careful," Commander Pangoriseng cautioned, noting the dust. "Someone might still live here." His men wondered, scanning the silent, neglected rooms.
Suddenly, two princesses emerged, their faces radiant despite the dust. "Who are you?" Princess Adiluhu asked, her eyes bright with curiosity. Princess Tenriabeng watched them.
"We are from Ale Luwu, on a peaceful mission," Commander Pangoriseng replied. "We wish to stay and renovate this palace, making it fit for habitation."
Princess Tenriabeng still hesitated. Lady Temmala, observing, stepped forward. "Princess Adiluhu, we must treat guests with respect," she stated, upholding tradition.
After a brief discussion, they agreed. "We accept," Princess Adiluhu said. "But you must truly repair this place." Princess Tenriabeng nodded, her caution easing.
Commander Pangoriseng returned to the boat, reporting the successful meeting to
Original Story
Episode 034: Batara Lattu Dan Cinta Pada Pandangan Pertamanya
Rombongan pasukan dari Ale Luwu telah tiba di depan Istana Tompotikka. La Pangoriseng mengamati kondisi istana yang megah, tetapi tampak kusam dan tak terurus. "Kita harus hati-hati dengan lantainya," ujarnya sambil memperhatikan setiap langkah. We Temmala yang mengawasi, tampak cemas.
"Haruskah kita melaporkan keadaan ini?" tanya La Hendri Giling.
"Biarkan kami memeriksa lebih dalam," jawab La Pangoriseng. "Mungkin ada yang tinggal."
Tiba-tiba, dua putri Tompotikka muncul, wajah mereka bersinar di antara debu dan kesunyian istana. "Siapa kalian?" tanya We Adiluhu, matanya menyala penasaran.
"Kami dari Ale Luwu, datang dengan misi damai," jawab La Pangoriseng. "Kami ingin menginap di sini dan merenovasi istana agar layak untuk dihuni."
"Sebisa mungkin, tapi kondisi di sini..." We Tenriabeng mengerutkan dahi, ragu.
"We Datu Sengeng, kita harus memperlakukan tamu dengan hormat," potong We Temmala, tegas.
Setelah perundingan, mereka sepakat. "Kami setuju, tapi jangan lupa untuk memperbaiki keadaan di sini," kata We Adiluhu menyetujui usulan itu.
La Pangoriseng kembali ke perahu Tanete Manurung, menyampaikan hasil pertemuan kepada Batara Lattu. "Mereka setuju, tapi kita harus segera bergerak," ujarnya.
Batara Lattu hanya mengangguk, namun pikirannya terfokus pada kecantikan kedua putri. "Aku ingin bertemu mereka," ia menggumam.
"Bagaimana kalau kita menyamar?" usul La Pangoriseng. "Kita bisa berpura-pura menjadi pekerja renovasi."
"Kedengarannya baik. Yuk, kita ubah pakaian," sahut La Hendri Giling.
Ketiga lelaki itu berpakaian seperti pasukan Ale Luwu, menutupi wajah dan kepala. Ketika mereka tiba kembali di istana, Batara Lattu menyapu setiap sudut dengan matanya, mencari kedua putri.
Tak lama, matanya mengarah ke We Adiluhu dan We Tenriabeng. Betapa menawannya! Ketika melihat mereka, hatinya berdebar.
"Sungguh, tak ada yang lebih indah," ucap Batara Lattu, terpesona. Namun, rasa malu tiba-tiba menghantamnya. "Aku harus pergi," ia berlari kembali ke perahu.
"We Pangoriseng, apa yang terjadi dengannya?" tanya La Hendri Giling dengan heran.
"Dia pasti terpesona. Kita mesti cepat menyelesaikan rencana ini," jawab La Pangoriseng.
Sesampainya di perahu, Batara Lattu berbaring, mengeluh karena merasa demam. "Kau harus segera melamar salah satu dari mereka!" desak La Hendri Giling, sambil tertawa.
La Pangoriseng menatap Batara Lattu dengan serius, "Ayo kita rencanakan pertemuan besok."
"Semoga mereka mau menerimanya," ucap Batara Lattu, meski hatinya masih bergetar oleh perasaan baru.
Story DNA
Plot Summary
A group from Ale Luwu arrives at the neglected Tompotikka Palace, intending to renovate it. They encounter the palace's two beautiful princesses, who cautiously agree to their stay. Batara Lattu, the leader of the Ale Luwu group, is instantly smitten upon seeing the princesses while disguised as a worker. Overwhelmed by his feelings, he retreats, feigning illness. His companions realize his true emotions and plan a formal meeting for him to propose to one of the princesses.
Themes
Emotional Arc
curiosity to infatuation
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The Bugis people are an ethnic group from South Sulawesi, Indonesia, known for their maritime traditions and rich oral literature. 'Batara' is a title often associated with deities or high-ranking nobles in Indonesian mythology and history.
Plot Beats (15)
- A contingent from Ale Luwu, led by La Pangoriseng, arrives at the grand but neglected Tompotikka Palace.
- La Pangoriseng and his men discuss the palace's condition and the possibility of inhabitants.
- Two princesses, We Adiluhu and We Tenriabeng, emerge, questioning the visitors.
- La Pangoriseng explains their peaceful mission to stay and renovate the palace.
- We Temmala intervenes, advocating for hospitality towards the guests.
- The princesses agree to the stay and renovation, with a condition that the palace be repaired.
- La Pangoriseng reports the agreement to Batara Lattu on the boat.
- Batara Lattu, intrigued by the princesses' beauty, expresses a desire to meet them.
- La Pangoriseng suggests they disguise themselves as renovation workers to enter the palace.
- Batara Lattu, La Pangoriseng, and La Hendri Giling don disguises and return to the palace.
- Batara Lattu sees We Adiluhu and We Tenriabeng and is instantly captivated by their beauty.
- Overwhelmed by emotion, Batara Lattu declares his enchantment and abruptly leaves, returning to the boat.
- La Hendri Giling questions Batara Lattu's strange behavior, while La Pangoriseng deduces his infatuation.
- Batara Lattu feigns a fever on the boat, prompting La Hendri Giling to suggest he propose.
- La Pangoriseng plans a formal meeting for Batara Lattu to propose to one of the princesses, with Batara Lattu expressing hope for their acceptance.
Characters
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Batara Lattu
None explicitly mentioned, but implied to be of noble bearing.
Attire: Initially, implied to be noble attire, later disguised as a worker from Ale Luwu.
Enamored, shy, easily flustered.
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La Pangoriseng
None explicitly mentioned.
Attire: Military attire from Ale Luwu, later disguised as a worker.
Cautious, strategic, observant.
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We Adiluhu
Wajah mereka bersinar di antara debu dan kesunyian istana.
Attire: Implied to be traditional attire for a princess of Tompotikka, perhaps somewhat dusty.
Curious, agreeable, welcoming.
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We Tenriabeng
Wajah mereka bersinar di antara debu dan kesunyian istana.
Attire: Implied to be traditional attire for a princess of Tompotikka, perhaps somewhat dusty.
Hesitant, cautious, agreeable.
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La Hendri Giling
None explicitly mentioned.
Attire: Military attire from Ale Luwu, later disguised as a worker.
Questioning, amused, encouraging.
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We Temmala
None explicitly mentioned.
Attire: Implied to be traditional attire, perhaps of a noblewoman or attendant.
Anxious, firm, respectful of tradition.
Locations
Istana Tompotikka
A magnificent palace that appears dull and unkempt, with dusty and silent interiors. The floors require careful attention.
Mood: Neglected, silent, initially unwelcoming but becomes a place of negotiation and potential renovation.
The Ale Luwu delegation arrives, negotiates entry, and Batara Lattu first encounters the two princesses here, leading to his infatuation.
Perahu Tanete Manurung
A boat, likely docked or anchored, serving as a temporary base for the Ale Luwu forces.
Mood: Strategic, a place for planning and reflection, later becomes a refuge for Batara Lattu's lovesickness.
La Pangoriseng reports back to Batara Lattu, and Batara Lattu retreats here after being overwhelmed by his feelings for the princesses, feigning illness.