Episode 035: Lamaran Batara Lattu Yang Ditolak

by I La Galigo

folk tale romance solemn Ages 8-14 373 words 2 min read
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Prince Batara Lattu embarked on a crucial journey toward the grand Tompotikka Palace. Accompanied by his trusted Chief Advisor and loyal Royal Companion, he traveled to propose a marriage, hoping to forge a powerful alliance.

"We must be prepared for any outcome," the Chief Advisor remarked, acknowledging the proposal's gravity. The Royal Companion nodded, understanding the significant political implications of this union.

Upon reaching the palace gates, their magnificent attire caught the eye of We Temmala, the royal guardian. She greeted them, her expression revealing genuine surprise at their unexpected arrival.

"We have come to seek the hand of one of your esteemed royal princesses," the Chief Advisor declared, his voice resonating with formal respect. The words hung in the air, weighty with expectation.

Inside, Princess We Adiluhu and Princess We Datu exchanged startled glances. A palpable tension filled the chamber as the suddenness of the proposal registered on their faces.

Prince Batara Lattu, radiating confidence, urged his Chief Advisor forward. "State our purpose clearly! This union will bring great honor to us and further the greatness of Ale Luwu."

We Temmala paused, her expression solemn. "Alas, the King and Queen are no longer with us. Before their passing, they established a sacred tradition: the eldest princess cannot marry before her younger sister."

Prince Batara Lattu’s gaze settled firmly upon Princess We Datu. "My journey here is for one purpose: I wish to marry Princess We Datu and make her my queen."

Princess We Datu, visibly flustered by the prince's direct address, lowered her eyes. "I… I require some time to consider such an important proposal," she murmured, her voice soft.

The Chief Advisor stepped forward again. "Our intentions are honorable, and we sincerely hope for strong cooperation between Tompotikka and Ale Luwu, ensuring lasting peace."

During the formal lunch, Prince Batara Lattu found his appetite diminished. A heavy feeling settled in his chest, his thoughts consumed by Princess We Datu's impending decision.

Following the meal, We Temmala approached them with a regretful expression. "Thank you for your patience, but a final decision cannot be given today. More time is required for due consideration."

Prince Batara Lattu's face betrayed a flicker of disappointment, yet he nodded with a show of grace. "Very well, we shall await your decision patiently," he affirmed.

With heavy hearts, the prince and his entourage departed the palace. Prince Batara Lattu's thoughts, however, remained fixed on Princess We Datu, despite the proposal's uncertain fate.

Original Story 373 words · 2 min read

Episode 035: Lamaran Batara Lattu Yang Ditolak

Batara Lattu dan rombongannya bergegas menuju Istana Tompotikka. Dalam perjalanan, La Pangoriseng berkata, "Kita harus siap menghadapi segala kemungkinan. Lamaran ini adalah langkah besar."

La Togeq Langi' menambahkan, "Kita lihat saja bagaimana reaksi putri-putri itu. Mari fokus pada tujuan kita."

Sampai di istana, mereka disambut oleh We Temmala, yang tampak terkejut melihat kedatangan mereka. "Kehormatan apa yang membawa kalian kembali ke sini?" tanyanya, sambil mengamati pakaian mereka yang megah. "Kami datang untuk melamar salah satu dari putri kerajaan ini," jawab La Pangoriseng.

Mendengar hal itu, kedua putri, We Adiluhu dan We Datu, saling bertukar pandang dengan rasa malu. "Apa? Begitu cepat?" We Adiluhu terhenyak, merasakan ketegangan di udara.

"La Pangoriseng, sampaikan maksud kami!" seru Batara Lattu dengan penuh percaya diri. "Semua ini untuk kehormatan kami dan kebesaran Ale Luwu."

We Temmala terdiam, merenungkan situasi yang tidak terduga ini. "Mungkin yang memiliki wewenang untuk menentukan adalah Raja dan Ratu. Namun, sayangnya, mereka telah tiada," ujarnya perlahan.

La Pangoriseng menjelaskan, "Sebelum mereka meninggalkan kami, ada pesan untuk menjaga kesetaraan antara putri-putri ini. Putri yang tertua tidak boleh menikah lebih dahulu."

We Datu mendengarkan dengan cermat, hati berdebar. "Jadi, kalian benar-benar bermaksud mengajukan lamaran?" tanyanya, suaranya bergetar.

Batara Lattu menatap kedua putri dengan rasa penuh harap. "Kedatanganku ke sini sudah jelas. Aku ingin melamar We Datu untuk menjadi permaisuriku," kata Batara Lattu.

Mendengar pengakuan itu, suasana dalam ruangan menjadi tegang. We Datu, tampak bingung, "Aku perlu waktu untuk mempertimbangkan."

La Pangoriseng menambahkan, "Kami datang dengan niat baik. Semoga kerjasama antara Tompotikka dan Ale Luwu terjalin demi kedamaian."

Ketika mereka beranjak untuk menjalani makan siang, suasana hati Batara Lattu terasa berat. "Apa yang akan mereka putuskan?" bisiknya kepada La Togeq Langi'.

Setelah makan, We Temmala menghampiri mereka. "Terima kasih atas kesabaran kalian. Namun, jawabannya belum bisa disampaikan. Kami butuh waktu," paparnya.

Batara Lattu tampak kecewa tetapi berusaha memahami. "Baiklah, kami akan menunggu."

Dengan kepala penuh harapan dan ketidakpastian, mereka melangkah keluar istana. "Kita harus tetap tenang dan menunggu," fikir Batara Lattu, tertarik pada keindahan We Datu meski rasa hatinya terombang-ambing oleh penolakan itu.

Ketegangan menyelimuti setiap langkah mereka, sementara di tempat lain, rencana dari Singking Wero semakin mendekat. "Apa yang akan terjadi selanjutnya?" bisik We Temmala pada dirinya sendiri.


Story DNA

Plot Summary

Batara Lattu and his entourage journey to Istana Tompotikka to propose marriage to one of the princesses, hoping to forge an alliance. Upon arrival, they announce their intention, surprising the princesses. Batara Lattu specifically declares his desire to marry We Datu, but the guardian, We Temmala, explains a tradition preventing the eldest princess from marrying first and that a decision cannot be made immediately. Batara Lattu leaves disappointed but still hopeful, while an unseen threat from Singking Wero is hinted at.

Themes

honortraditionunrequited lovepolitical alliance

Emotional Arc

hope to disappointment

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: ambiguous

Cultural Context

Origin: Bugis
Era: timeless fairy tale

The Bugis people are an ethnic group from South Sulawesi, Indonesia, known for their maritime traditions and complex social structures, often reflected in their oral literature.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. Batara Lattu and his entourage, including La Pangoriseng and La Togeq Langi', travel to Istana Tompotikka for a marriage proposal.
  2. La Pangoriseng and La Togeq Langi' discuss the importance and potential reactions to the proposal.
  3. They arrive at the palace and are greeted by We Temmala, who is surprised by their visit.
  4. La Pangoriseng announces their intention to propose to one of the royal princesses.
  5. The princesses, We Adiluhu and We Datu, react with shock and tension.
  6. Batara Lattu confidently urges La Pangoriseng to state their purpose, emphasizing honor and the greatness of Ale Luwu.
  7. We Temmala explains that the King and Queen are deceased, and a tradition prevents the eldest princess from marrying first.
  8. Batara Lattu declares his intention to marry We Datu.
  9. We Datu, flustered, requests time to consider the proposal.
  10. La Pangoriseng reiterates their good intentions and hope for cooperation between Tompotikka and Ale Luwu.
  11. Batara Lattu feels heavy-hearted during lunch, wondering about the decision.
  12. After lunch, We Temmala informs them that a decision cannot be made yet and more time is needed.
  13. Batara Lattu, though disappointed, accepts the delay.
  14. They leave the palace, Batara Lattu still drawn to We Datu despite the uncertainty.
  15. We Temmala ponders the looming plans of Singking Wero, hinting at future conflict.

Characters

Batara Lattu

Batara Lattu

human young adult male

Implied to be of noble bearing and dressed in magnificent attire suitable for a royal suitor.

Attire: Magnificent attire, fitting for a royal suitor from Ale Luwu.

His regal attire, signifying his royal status and purpose.

Confident, hopeful, determined, somewhat impatient.

La Pangoriseng

La Pangoriseng

human adult male

Unknown, but likely a trusted advisor.

Attire: Implied to be dressed in magnificent attire as part of Batara Lattu's retinue.

His role as the primary speaker and negotiator for Batara Lattu.

Prudent, diplomatic, strategic.

La Togeq Langi'

La Togeq Langi'

human adult male

Unknown, but likely a trusted companion.

Attire: Implied to be dressed in magnificent attire as part of Batara Lattu's retinue.

His presence as a quiet, steady companion to Batara Lattu.

Observant, supportive, focused.

We Temmala

We Temmala

human adult female

Unknown, but holds a position of authority in the absence of the King and Queen.

Attire: Implied to be appropriate for someone managing a royal palace.

Her role as the temporary authority figure in the palace, conveying decisions.

Surprised, thoughtful, cautious, diplomatic.

We Adiluhu

We Adiluhu

human young adult female

A princess of Tompotikka.

Attire: Royal attire, likely traditional Bugis dress.

Her initial reaction of surprise and embarrassment at the proposal.

Shy, surprised, perhaps a little flustered.

We Datu

We Datu

human young adult female

A princess of Tompotikka, described as beautiful.

Attire: Royal attire, likely traditional Bugis dress.

Her beauty and her thoughtful, hesitant demeanor when faced with the proposal.

Shy, thoughtful, hesitant, beautiful.

Locations

Road to Tompotikka Palace

transitional Implied fair weather for travel

A path or road leading towards a grand palace, where Batara Lattu and his entourage travel.

Mood: Anticipatory, determined, hopeful

Batara Lattu and his group discuss their marriage proposal plans while en route.

road/path traveling entourage palace in the distance (implied)

Tompotikka Palace Interior

indoor day Implied pleasant indoor conditions

The main reception area or a grand room within the palace where guests are received. It's a formal setting suitable for important discussions.

Mood: Formal, tense, expectant, later disappointed

Batara Lattu proposes to We Datu, and the proposal is met with hesitation and a request for time.

palace architecture formal seating (implied) We Temmala and the princesses Batara Lattu and his entourage

Palace Dining Area

indoor afternoon Implied pleasant indoor conditions

A dining space within the palace where Batara Lattu and his group are served lunch.

Mood: Heavy, uncertain, anxious

Batara Lattu eats lunch, filled with anxiety about the princesses' decision.

dining table food/meal Batara Lattu and La Togeq Langi' conversing quietly

Palace Entrance/Exit

transitional day Implied fair weather

The grand entrance or exit of the palace, where Batara Lattu and his group depart.

Mood: Disappointed, uncertain, reflective

Batara Lattu and his group leave the palace, still awaiting a decision on the marriage proposal.

palace doors/archway departing entourage