PRINCE ROUL’S BRIDE
by Abbie Phillips Walker · from Sandman's rainy day stories
Adapted Version
An Ogre lived in a big cave. An Ogress lived there too. Their cave was by the big, blue sea. It was a white rock cave.
Prince Roul was a king's son. He was a good prince. Leta was a poor girl. She lived in the woods. Prince Roul saw Leta. He liked her very much. Leta liked Prince Roul too. They loved each other.
The King wanted Prince Roul to marry. He wanted a princess. Prince Roul said no. He loved Leta. He did not want a princess. He wanted Leta as his wife.
The King was not happy. He was angry. He told his men to find Leta. He said Leta must go away. She must leave the land.
Prince Roul heard the King. He rode to Leta's home. Leta got on his horse. They rode away fast. The King's men chased them. They rode very fast.
Leta had a secret. A kind Fairy gave her magic powder. It was in a small paper. The Fairy said, 'It will help you.' It was for trouble.
They came to a big cliff. The ocean was below. Leta threw the magic powder. She made a wish for a safe place. Poof! They were in a white castle. The ocean was far away now.
The King's men came to the cliff. They did not see Roul or Leta. They thought they were lost. They told the King. The King was very sad. He loved his son.
Leta saw a letter. It said, 'This castle is yours.' It was a gift from the Fairies. Now Leta was Princess Leta. Prince Roul was very happy. They had a new home.
They found much treasure. It was in the castle. They gave the treasure to poor people. The poor people were happy. Leta and Roul were kind.
The Ogre and Ogress changed. They became silver statues. They stood in the big hall. They held bright lights. The castle was very pretty.
Prince Roul and Leta went to the King. The King saw his son. He was very, very happy. He hugged Prince Roul. He liked Princess Leta. She was very kind.
They lived happily ever after. They lived in the white castle. They also visited the King. Prince Roul and Princess Leta were happy. True love won, and kindness brought joy.
Original Story
PRINCE ROUL’S BRIDE
Once upon a time in a far-off land there lived by an ocean an ogre and his wife.
Their home was a cave in a big white rock which was so white it shone like a light even in the darkest night, and many a ship had thought it a harbor in a storm and been wrecked by the shore where the ogre lived.
And this was the way he lived, because the ships carried rich cargoes and the ogre lost no time in helping himself to all that he could find, while the sailors were glad to escape in lifeboats when they saw the dreadful-looking ogre, who was so big and strong he could lift a ship.
In the same country, miles and miles away from the ogre’s cave, lived a rich king, who had a son named Roul, and one day while the Prince was out hunting he passed in the woods a cabin where lived a poor girl named Leta.
But while Leta was very poor she was also very pretty, and as the Prince rode past he saw her at the window and raised his plumed hat and smiled.
The next day Prince Roul again rode to the woods and this time he did not pass Leta’s cabin. He stopped his horse in front of her door and asked for a drink of water.
He had thought Leta pretty through the window, but when he beheld her this time he completely lost his heart, and day after day he went to the cottage and talked to pretty Leta.
After a while the King told his son it was time he was looking for a wife, as he wanted to see him married before he died and know that his wife was worthy to be a queen.
So the King gave a feast which lasted for weeks, and princesses from far and near were asked that Prince Roul might choose for himself a wife, for, as I said before, the King was very rich and all the kings in the other countries were anxious, of course, to have Prince Roul for a son-in-law.
But Prince Roul did not choose a wife from among the beautiful princesses, for he was already in love with pretty Leta, and while he knew full well his father would never give his consent to their marriage, he was determined he would wed no one else.
On the last day of the feast the King told him he would have to choose. “You have before you the beautiful women of the land,” said the King. “Make your choice at once, and the wedding shall take place this night.”
“Father, you have not brought to me the most beautiful woman in the world,” replied Prince Roul. “If you had I should have asked her to be my wife before this.”
“What do you mean?” asked the King. “All the princesses in the land are here.”
“Ah yes, that is true,” replied the Prince, “but the most beautiful woman in the world is not a princess, as you think of them, but she is a Princess for all that. Father, she is the Princess of my heart and I cannot marry any other woman.”
Then the King made the Prince tell him who she was that he loved so dearly, and when he learned Leta was a poor girl who lived in the woods close by, he was very angry and told the Prince he should never wed her.
All the beautiful princesses were sent home, and the angry King called his servants to him and commanded that they should go to the woods and find this girl who had upset his plans for his son.
“Find her and chase her out of the woods; drive her into another land where the Prince will never find her,” he told them.
But the King had forgotten one very important thing, and that was his son, for he should have made him a prisoner before he gave such an order. This he did not do, and Prince Roul, who overheard what his father had said, lost no time in jumping on his horse and making his way to the woods ahead of the servants of the King.
“Jump up behind me,” he said to Leta when she came out of the cabin, and away they rode, the feet of Prince Roul’s horse scarcely touching the ground as they fled.
The King’s servants were not long in discovering that the Prince had outwitted them, but they gave chase and away they went through the woods, while poor frightened little Leta clung to the Prince, wondering what it was all about.
On and on they rode, but to Leta clinging to her lover, it seemed they flew over the ground and through the woods. She could see the bright trimmings of the servants’ coats glistening in the sun, and she knew they were gaining on them.
By this time Prince Roul had told her that his father, the King, had tried to make him marry a princess, but that he would marry no one but the girl he loved and that was herself.
When Leta heard this she was more frightened than ever, for she knew now that she was the cause of all this trouble and that the servants must be chasing them to take Roul from her.
Leta put her hand to her breast. Yes; it was there—the little paper with the powder a fairy had given her a long time ago, because Leta had left a beautiful rose on its stem she was about to pick when she discovered a little fairy sleeping inside the rose.
“If you ever are in trouble, open this paper and throw the powder around you,” the fairy had told her. “It will protect you from all harm.”
Leta had never before needed protection, and she was not thinking so much of herself now as of her lover, wondering what the King would do if he did not obey him.
Just then the horse on which they were riding came to a full stop with such force that Leta was thrown to the ground and the next thing she knew over the side of a cliff leaped the horse with the Prince on his back.
The ocean was below, but before the horse and his rider had reached it Leta drew from her dress the magic powder and threw it over the cliff.
“Make the ocean dry,” she screamed as she threw the powder, and, to her surprise, as she threw it over she went, too, and the next instant she stood beside Prince Roul on dry land before a beautiful white castle and the ocean was miles away.
The cliff over which they had gone was the white rock where the ogre and the ogress lived, but when Leta threw the powder she had also summoned the little fairy who had given it to her and she had changed the big white cave into a castle.
When the King’s servants came dashing up to the cliff they saw nothing of the Prince or his horse, and the bottom of the cliff was so far below that they felt sure they had been destroyed, and they rode home to the King with the sad news.
The King’s grief was deep and bitter, for he really loved his son very much, and now when it was too late he cried out that he wished he had let the Prince marry the girl he loved; if only he had him alive that would be all he would ask.
The little fairy did not make herself visible to either Leta or the Prince, but if they could have seen with fairy eyes they would have seen the fairy flying ahead of them into the castle, touching everything with her magic wand as she went.
When Leta entered the door, which was open, for they had called and no one answered, she stood spellbound by what she saw.
The long white marble hall had a floor of silver and marble and the doors were silver also.
The Prince, who was used to beautiful things, was quite surprised at all the splendor, too.
Opening a big silver door, they entered a room hung with silver and deep-blue curtains, and on a silver table Leta saw a big white envelop. When she looked at it she read her own name.
Wondering who could have left it, she opened it and read: “Princess Leta, this is your castle; it is the gift of the fairies who love roses.”
“Your father will not object now to having me for the wife of his son,” she said, with a blush, as she gave the note to the Prince, and then they ran like two happy children through the beautiful castle that had come to them so strangely.
In the deep dungeons under the castle they found all the wealth that the ogre had taken from the ships, and after they had become used to their new home they gave it all to the poor, and so the ogre’s stolen wealth did not help him, and while it could not be given back to those who had lost it, it did much good.
And what became of the old ogre and his wife, you are wondering. I will tell you. When the fairy changed the cave into a castle she changed the ogre and ogress into two big silver statues in the big hall, one at each end, like huge mummies, holding a big light in their hands, which lighted the long hall of the castle.
Then one day Prince Roul and Princess Leta rode away to the palace of the old King, and when he saw his son he wept for joy and hugged him to his heart, and Leta’s pretty face won the old King’s heart at once, so they all lived happily ever after.
But while the old King wanted them to make the palace their home, Prince Roul and Leta could not give up their white castle by the sea, so part of the year they lived in the white castle, and when Prince Roul grew old and his grandchildren begged for a story, the King told them of Prince Roul’s bride and the wonderful leap they took over the cliff which forms the back of the castle.
Story DNA
Moral
True love can overcome obstacles, and kindness is often rewarded.
Plot Summary
Prince Roul falls in love with the poor girl Leta, defying his father the King, who wants him to marry a princess. When the King orders Leta banished, Roul flees with her. Pursued by the King's servants to a cliff, Leta uses a magic powder given by a fairy, transforming the ogre's cave into a magnificent castle and transporting them to safety. The King, believing them dead, grieves deeply. Leta discovers the castle is hers, making her a princess, and they reconcile with the overjoyed King, living happily ever after in their white castle by the sea.
Themes
Emotional Arc
separation to reunion
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This story reflects common fairy tale tropes of royalty and commoners, with a touch of magic as a deus ex machina.
Plot Beats (13)
- An ogre and ogress live in a white rock cave by the ocean, luring and wrecking ships to steal their cargo.
- Prince Roul, son of a rich king, meets and falls in love with a poor but pretty girl named Leta.
- The King arranges a feast for Roul to choose a princess bride, but Roul refuses, declaring his love for Leta.
- Enraged, the King sends servants to banish Leta from the land.
- Prince Roul, overhearing, rescues Leta and they flee on horseback, pursued by the King's servants.
- Leta remembers a magic powder given by a fairy, meant to protect her in times of trouble.
- Cornered at a cliff overlooking the ocean, Leta throws the powder, wishing the ocean dry, and they are transported to a magnificent white castle on dry land.
- The King's servants, seeing no trace of them, report their presumed death, causing the King deep grief and regret.
- Leta discovers a note in the castle, revealing it is her gift from the fairies, transforming her into a princess.
- They find the ogre's stolen wealth in the castle dungeons and distribute it to the poor.
- The ogre and ogress are transformed into silver statues, holding lights in the castle hall.
- Prince Roul and Princess Leta return to the King, who weeps with joy and accepts Leta as his daughter-in-law.
- They live happily ever after, dividing their time between the King's palace and their white castle by the sea.
Characters
Prince Roul ★ protagonist
A fit and agile young man, likely of average height for his noble upbringing, with a strong build from hunting. His movements are quick and decisive, especially when riding.
Attire: When hunting, he wears practical yet noble attire, including a plumed hat. For royal feasts, he would wear rich, tailored garments, possibly velvet or brocade tunics, breeches, and fine leather boots, indicative of a European prince.
Wants: To marry Leta, the woman he loves, and live happily with her.
Flaw: His impulsiveness, as shown by his immediate flight with Leta without a clear plan, and his initial defiance of his father.
Starts as a prince bound by duty, but through his love for Leta, he defies his father and finds his own path, ultimately becoming a king who values love over traditional expectations.
Determined, loyal, courageous, romantic, disobedient (to his father).
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A young man of noble bearing, with a determined expression, riding a powerful dark horse at a gallop. He has short, neatly styled dark brown hair and clear, focused eyes. He wears a tailored forest-green velvet tunic with silver embroidery, dark breeches, and tall brown leather riding boots. A plumed hat is secured on his head. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Leta ★ protagonist
A very pretty young woman, likely slender and graceful, with a delicate appearance that belies her inner strength. Her movements are initially timid but become more resolute.
Attire: Simple, modest peasant attire, likely a homespun linen dress in muted colors (e.g., cream, pale blue, or grey), perhaps with a plain apron, reflecting her poverty. Later, as a princess, she would wear elegant, flowing gowns, but her initial appearance is humble.
Wants: To be with Prince Roul and avoid the King's wrath. Later, to make a good life with Roul.
Flaw: Her initial fear and vulnerability due to her humble background and the King's power.
Transforms from a frightened, poor girl into a confident princess, demonstrating her worthiness through her actions and love, ultimately becoming a queen.
Pretty, kind, initially frightened, resourceful, loving, humble.
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A young woman with a pretty, slightly anxious face, fair skin, and long, wavy light brown hair flowing behind her. She wears a simple, long-sleeved cream linen dress with a plain blue apron tied at the waist. Her hands are clasped to her chest, holding a small, folded white paper. She is depicted clinging to the back of a horse, looking over her shoulder. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The King ⚔ antagonist
An old, rich king, likely with a commanding presence despite his age. His build might be robust from years of feasting, or perhaps somewhat frail in his later years.
Attire: Rich, elaborate royal robes, possibly made of deep red or purple velvet with gold embroidery, a heavy gold crown, and fine jewels, reflecting his immense wealth and status as a European monarch.
Wants: To ensure his son, Prince Roul, marries a princess worthy of a queen and secures the royal lineage. Later, to see his son alive and happy.
Flaw: His rigid adherence to tradition and social status, which blinds him to Leta's true worth.
Starts as a rigid, traditional ruler who tries to force his son's marriage, but through the perceived loss of his son, he learns to value love and happiness over status, ultimately accepting Leta as his daughter-in-law.
Authoritative, traditional, proud, initially angry, ultimately loving (towards his son), remorseful.
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An elderly king with a stern, regal expression, a long, flowing white beard, and a bald head with a few wisps of white hair. He wears a heavy, deep-red velvet robe with intricate gold embroidery, a large gold crown adorned with rubies, and a jeweled scepter in his right hand. He sits upright on a grand, carved wooden throne. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Ogre ○ minor
Enormous and dreadfully-looking, so big and strong he could lift a ship. His skin might be rough or craggy, perhaps a greenish or greyish hue, with powerful, muscular limbs.
Attire: Minimal, perhaps just a crude loincloth or tattered animal hide, emphasizing his monstrous nature and lack of concern for human attire.
Wants: To plunder ships for their rich cargo.
Flaw: Vulnerable to magic, specifically the fairy's transformation.
Remains unchanged in personality but is physically transformed by the fairy's magic into a silver statue, losing his power and becoming a decorative, functional object.
Greedy, destructive, predatory.
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A colossal, dreadfully-looking male ogre with rough, greyish-green skin, bulging muscles, and a hunched posture. He has a brutish face with small, dark eyes, a wide mouth, and prominent tusks. He wears only a tattered brown animal hide around his waist. He stands with immense power. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Ogress ○ minor
Implied to be similar in size and appearance to the Ogre, sharing his monstrous and dreadful qualities. Likely large and strong.
Attire: Minimal, similar to the Ogre, perhaps a simple, rough garment or animal hide.
Wants: To live with the Ogre and benefit from his plunder.
Flaw: Vulnerable to magic, specifically the fairy's transformation.
Remains unchanged in personality but is physically transformed by the fairy's magic into a silver statue, losing her power and becoming a decorative, functional object.
Implied to be similar to the Ogre, sharing his predatory nature.
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A colossal, dreadfully-looking female ogress with rough, greyish-green skin, powerful muscles, and a hunched posture. She has a brutish face with small, dark eyes, a wide mouth, and coarse, dark, unkempt hair. She wears only a simple, tattered brown animal hide dress. She stands with immense power. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Fairy ◆ supporting
Tiny and delicate, small enough to sleep inside a rose. She would have translucent wings and a shimmering aura.
Attire: Made of natural elements, like petals or gossamer, shimmering with light.
Wants: To repay Leta's kindness and protect her from harm.
Flaw: Not explicitly stated, but fairies often have limitations to their magic or are bound by certain rules.
Acts as a magical helper, facilitating Leta and Roul's escape and creating their new home, then disappears, remaining a benevolent unseen force.
Benevolent, grateful, magical, protective.
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A tiny, ethereal fairy with delicate, translucent butterfly wings, shimmering with soft light. She has a beautiful, miniature face with sparkling eyes and long, flowing, iridescent hair. She wears a gown made of delicate rose petals in shades of pink and green. She holds a slender, glowing magic wand in her hand and is depicted in mid-flight. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Ogre's Cave in the Big White Rock
A massive, strikingly white rock formation by the ocean, so luminous it shines like a beacon even at night. It contains a cave, serving as the ogre's home, and its deceptive appearance has caused many shipwrecks along the shore.
Mood: Deceptive, dangerous, foreboding, later transformed into magical wonder
The initial dwelling of the ogre; later, the location where Leta and Roul leap from the cliff, and where Leta uses the magic powder, transforming the cave into a castle.
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A colossal, smooth white rock cliff face juts dramatically into a turbulent, dark blue ocean, with foamy waves crashing against its base. A deep, shadowed cave entrance is visible near the waterline. The rock's surface glows with an ethereal, almost phosphorescent light, contrasting with the stormy, overcast sky. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Leta's Cabin in the Woods
A humble, rustic cabin nestled deep within a dense forest. Its simple window allows glimpses of the interior.
Mood: Simple, secluded, romantic, later urgent and fearful
Prince Roul first sees Leta here; he later visits her daily, falls in love, and eventually picks her up to flee from his father's servants.
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A small, weathered wooden cabin with a simple, paned window is partially obscured by the thick, ancient trees of a European temperate forest. Sunlight filters through the dense canopy, dappling the mossy ground and the cabin's rough-hewn timber walls. A narrow, well-trodden dirt path leads to its front door. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
The King's Palace
A grand and opulent royal residence, featuring large halls suitable for weeks-long feasts and likely adorned with rich decorations befitting a wealthy monarch.
Mood: Regal, formal, tense due to the King's demands, later sorrowful and then joyful
The King hosts a grand feast for Prince Roul to choose a bride; the King becomes enraged upon learning of Leta and orders her banishment; later, the King is reunited with Roul and Leta.
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An expansive, sunlit courtyard of a Renaissance-era European palace, paved with intricate stone patterns. Tall, arched windows with ornate carvings line the facade of the palace, which is constructed from pale, finely cut stone. Beyond the courtyard, glimpses of manicured gardens with sculpted hedges are visible. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
The White Castle by the Sea
A magnificent white castle with a long white marble hall, a floor of silver and marble, and silver doors. One room is hung with silver and deep-blue curtains, containing a silver table. It stands where the ogre's cave once was, overlooking the ocean, which is now miles away.
Mood: Magical, splendid, welcoming, luxurious, peaceful
Created by fairy magic from the ogre's cave, this becomes Prince Roul and Princess Leta's new home, a symbol of their love and the fairy's blessing. They discover the ogre's treasure here and live happily.
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A breathtaking, pristine white castle with elegant turrets and soaring walls, constructed from luminous white stone, stands majestically on a newly formed, verdant plain. In the distance, a vast, calm blue ocean stretches to the horizon under a clear, bright sky. The castle's architecture suggests a blend of classical European grandeur with a touch of ethereal, almost glowing quality. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.