THE CLEVER TURTLE
by Ada M. Skinner · from Merry Tales
Adapted Version
Once there was a little turtle. He lived on a big rock near a river. He looked at the king's palace.
The Clever Turtle sat on a warm rock. He saw the big palace. He heard Prince Leo and Prince Max. They played in their garden. They had a pretty lake there. The turtle felt sad. He wanted to play in the lake too.
Two men came to the river. They had big nets. They talked about fish. "Fish go to the lake," one man said. "The King wants a surprise." Turtle heard this. He thought, "Fish in the lake!"
The Clever Turtle felt jealous. "I am cleverer than fish," he thought. He saw a big bucket. The men put fish in it. The turtle moved very fast. He slipped into a bucket. The men did not see him.
Next morning, Prince Leo ran to the lake. Prince Max ran too. They saw the fish. "Look!" cried Prince Leo. Then they saw the turtle. "A strange creature!" cried Prince Max. They were very scared.
The princes ran to The King. "A monster is in our lake!" they cried. The King heard them. He sent his men. "Catch the creature," he said. The men caught the turtle.
The King asked, "What to do?" One man said, "Burn it!" Another said, "Squash it!" Prince Leo said, "His shell is strong." Prince Max said, "Yes, very strong."
The Old Man spoke. He was afraid of water. "Throw it in the river," he said. "The river goes to the big sea. The creature will go away. It will not come back."
The Clever Turtle heard this. He poked out his head. He made a scared face. He cried, "Oh, no! Not the river! Please do not throw me there! I am very scared of the river. Burn me or squash me! But not the river, please!"
The King heard the turtle. He believed the turtle. "Throw him in the river!" The King said. The men took the turtle. They walked to the river.
The men threw the turtle. Splash! He landed in the water. The Clever Turtle laughed. "Ha ha ha!" he said. He swam very fast. He swam to his home rock. He loved his home. He was safe there. He tricked them all. He was very clever. He was very happy.
The Clever Turtle was happy. He learned his home was best. The turtle was safe. He was happy in his river home. He was a very clever turtle!
Original Story
THE CLEVER TURTLE
A turtle lay upon a large rock sunning himself. His eyes were turned toward the palace of the king which overlooked the beautiful river. He could hear the merry voices of the little princes playing in the royal courtyard.
“What happy times they have!” thought the turtle. “I have heard that there is a lovely little lake in the princes’ playground, where they have fine fun, swimming and sailing tiny boats. How dull it is living out here on the rocks! I’m sure I should be happier if I lived in a royal courtyard.”
At that moment the turtle was startled by the voices of two men who were carrying fishing nets and large buckets to the river. 80He slipped under the rock and lay very still and listened.
“You see,” said one of the men, “we are to put the fishes into the courtyard lake and surprise the young princes. His majesty, the king, heard them wish that fishes swam in their lake, and he decided to surprise them.”
“How happy they will be in the morning!” replied the other man. “Come, let us climb to the edge of these rocks and throw our nets into the river. Then we will draw them in, empty the fishes into those buckets, and carry them to the courtyard lake this evening.”
When the turtle heard that some of his neighbors were to live in the royal courtyard, he was very jealous indeed!
“Fishes are such stupid creatures!” he said to himself. “How much more delight a turtle would give those young princes. I’ll not live on this rock any longer. I’ll slip very quietly into one of those buckets, and the men will carry me into the royal courtyard. They will never notice me. Fishes for the delight of royalty! It is absurd!”
81The next morning the little princes took their sailboats and ran to the lake in the courtyard.
“See, see!” cried one of them. “Our wish has come true! There are fishes swimming about in the water. Oh, what fun?”
“Come away! Come, come, brother!” shouted the other little prince in terror. “See, there is a demon on the bank! Perhaps the fishes belong to him! Come!”
To the turtle’s great surprise off ran the lads, crying out, “A demon has come to live on the bank of our lake!”
When the king saw how frightened the princes were, he ordered an attendant to capture the demon and bring him to the palace. So, before the poor turtle could make up his mind what to do, he was caught and brought before the king.
“How shall we kill him?” asked an attendant.
“Throw him into the fire,” said one.
“Drop a large rock on his head and crush him,” said another.
82“Oh, that would not do,” said one of the princes. “See! He has pulled his head inside that shell back of his. Perhaps his back is too strong to be crushed by a rock.”
“I have it,” said an old servant who was afraid of the water, “let us fling him over the rocks into the river. Then he will be swept away into the sea and drowned.”
In a twinkling out came the turtle’s head.
“My friends,” he said, “pray do not throw me into the river that flows to the great wide sea! Of all your plans to punish me, that is the worst! Burn me, or crush me if you will, but do not throw me into the river that flows to the great wide sea! I shudder at the thought of it.”
“Take the demon to the rocks and throw him into the river,” said the king.
“Ha! ha! ha!” laughed the turtle when he whirled about in the water and swam back to the friendly rocks where he had lived so long.
Story DNA
Moral
Be content with your lot, and if you must deceive, do so with a clear escape plan.
Plot Summary
A turtle, bored with his life, envies the royal princes and their courtyard lake. He overhears a plan to stock the lake with fish and cunningly sneaks into a bucket to be transported there. However, the princes are terrified by his appearance, mistaking him for a demon, and the king orders his capture and execution. When various death methods are proposed, the clever turtle feigns extreme fear of being thrown into the river. The king, believing this to be the worst punishment, orders him cast into the river, allowing the turtle to swim freely back to his home, having outsmarted everyone.
Themes
Emotional Arc
envy to fear to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This story uses common folk tale tropes of animal trickery and human gullibility, found across many cultures.
Plot Beats (10)
- A turtle suns himself on a rock, observing the king's palace and envying the princes' happy life and courtyard lake.
- He overhears two men discussing their plan to surprise the princes by stocking their lake with fish from the river.
- Jealous of the fish, the turtle decides to sneak into one of the buckets to be carried to the royal courtyard.
- The next morning, the princes discover the turtle in their lake and, frightened, mistake him for a demon.
- The king is informed of the 'demon' and orders it captured and brought before him.
- The king's attendants and princes suggest various ways to kill the turtle, including burning or crushing him.
- An old servant suggests throwing the turtle into the river to be swept out to sea and drowned, as he is afraid of water.
- The turtle, hearing this, immediately pokes out his head and dramatically pleads not to be thrown into the river, claiming it's his greatest fear.
- Convinced by the turtle's performance, the king orders him thrown into the river.
- The turtle is thrown into the river and, laughing, swims back to his familiar rocks, having successfully tricked everyone.
Characters
The Clever Turtle ★ protagonist
A medium-sized freshwater turtle, with a sturdy, domed shell that is a mottled dark green and brown, providing excellent camouflage against rocks and riverbeds. His skin is a dull olive-green, leathery and wrinkled, particularly around his neck and limbs. He has strong, webbed feet adapted for swimming and scuttling over rocks.
Attire: None, as he is a turtle. His shell serves as his natural armor and home.
Wants: To escape his 'dull' life on the rocks and live in the royal courtyard, believing it to be a more prestigious and enjoyable existence.
Flaw: His arrogance and jealousy, which lead him to put himself in a dangerous situation.
He attempts to elevate his status by trickery, gets caught, and then uses his cunning to escape a dire situation, ultimately returning to his original home, perhaps with a renewed appreciation for it.
Clever, jealous, cunning, ambitious, and a bit arrogant. He believes himself superior to fish and is driven by a desire for a more exciting life.
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A medium-sized freshwater turtle, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a sturdy, domed shell that is mottled dark green and brown. His skin is a dull olive-green, leathery and wrinkled. His small reptilian face has a pointed snout and beady dark eyes that show intelligence. He has strong, webbed feet. He is standing upright, looking directly ahead with a slightly smug expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The King ◆ supporting
A man of regal bearing, likely of a sturdy build, reflecting his position of authority. His height is average to tall. His skin tone would be consistent with a ruler in a warm, possibly Middle Eastern or South Asian climate, perhaps olive or light brown, with a well-maintained appearance.
Attire: Rich, flowing robes made of fine silk or brocade, in deep jewel tones like sapphire blue or emerald green, possibly with gold embroidery. He would wear a jeweled turban or a simple gold circlet, and perhaps a wide sash at his waist. His attire would be practical for a warm climate but clearly denote his royal status.
Wants: To ensure the happiness and safety of his young princes.
Flaw: His immediate reaction to his children's fear, leading him to make quick judgments without full investigation.
Remains largely unchanged, acting as a figure of authority and a catalyst for the turtle's predicament and eventual escape.
Benevolent (towards his children), decisive, concerned for his children's well-being, and somewhat easily swayed by their fears.
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A dignified adult man of average height and sturdy build, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has an olive skin tone, a neatly trimmed dark beard, and dark, authoritative eyes. He wears rich, flowing robes of deep sapphire blue silk with intricate gold embroidery along the hems and cuffs. A jeweled turban sits on his head, and a wide, gold-threaded sash is tied at his waist. He stands with an erect, commanding posture. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
First Little Prince ◆ supporting
A slender young boy, perhaps around 6-8 years old, with the delicate features of a child. His skin would be fair or lightly tanned, reflecting a life of play outdoors. He is agile and energetic.
Attire: Comfortable but finely made tunic and trousers, likely made of light cotton or linen in soft, muted colors like cream, light blue, or pale green. The tunic might have simple embroidery at the collar or cuffs. Soft leather slippers or sandals would complete his outfit, suitable for play.
Wants: To play and enjoy the new fish in the lake.
Flaw: Childish fear and susceptibility to imagination, leading him to misinterpret the turtle.
Remains a child, experiencing a moment of fear and then relief.
Excitable, joyful, easily frightened, imaginative (seeing a 'demon').
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A slender young boy, around 7 years old, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a round, youthful face with bright, wide-set dark eyes and fair skin. His dark hair is slightly tousled. He wears a light blue linen tunic with simple white embroidery at the collar and matching comfortable trousers. Soft leather sandals are on his feet. He holds a small, wooden toy sailboat in one hand and has an expression of wide-eyed terror. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Other Little Prince ◆ supporting
A slender young boy, slightly younger or older than his brother, perhaps around 5-7 years old. Similar build and features to his brother, reflecting their familial relation.
Attire: Comfortable but finely made tunic and trousers, similar to his brother's but perhaps in a different soft color like pale green or cream. The tunic might have simple embroidery. Soft leather slippers or sandals.
Wants: To play and enjoy the new fish, then to escape the perceived 'demon'.
Flaw: Childish fear and susceptibility to imagination, leading him to misinterpret the turtle.
Remains a child, experiencing a moment of fear and then relief.
Excitable, easily frightened, prone to panic, protective of his brother.
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A slender young boy, around 6 years old, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a round, youthful face with bright, alert dark eyes and fair skin. His dark hair is short and neatly combed. He wears a pale green linen tunic with simple white trim and matching comfortable trousers. Soft leather sandals are on his feet. He holds a small, wooden toy sailboat in one hand and has an expression of wide-eyed terror, pointing with his free hand. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Old Servant ○ minor
A thin, stooped elderly man, with a lifetime of service etched into his posture. His height would be average but diminished by age. His skin would be wrinkled and weathered, perhaps a darker tone from years of outdoor work, consistent with a servant in a warm climate.
Attire: Simple, practical tunic and trousers made of coarse cotton or linen in muted, earthy tones like brown, grey, or off-white. He might wear a simple head covering, like a plain cloth cap or a wrapped cloth, to protect from the sun. His clothes would be clean but well-worn.
Wants: To find a solution to the 'demon' problem, driven by his fear of water.
Flaw: His fear of water, which ironically leads him to suggest the turtle's escape route.
A minor character, his role is to provide the critical suggestion for the turtle's 'punishment'.
Observant, cautious (afraid of water), practical, and surprisingly clever in his suggestion.
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A thin, stooped elderly man, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a kind, wrinkled face with wise, faded dark eyes and sparse white hair. His skin is weathered and tanned. He wears a simple, well-worn tunic of coarse grey linen and matching trousers. A plain, light-colored cloth is wrapped around his head. He stands with a slight stoop, a thoughtful expression on his face. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Riverbank Rocks
A large rock formation on the bank of a beautiful river, overlooking a distant royal palace. The rocks are exposed and suitable for sunning.
Mood: Peaceful, initially envious, later triumphant
The turtle observes the palace, overhears the fishermen's plan, and later returns here after escaping.
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A wide, slow-moving river reflects the clear morning sky, its banks lined with smooth, sun-warmed river stones and a few larger, ancient-looking boulders. Sparse, hardy river grasses and small, flowering shrubs cling to the edges of the bank. In the distance, across the river, the elegant, tiered roofs and whitewashed walls of a Malay-style palace are visible, nestled among lush tropical foliage. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Royal Courtyard Lake
A lovely, small lake within the royal courtyard, intended for the princes' play. It is surrounded by the palace grounds.
Mood: Playful, then fearful, then chaotic
The turtle is brought here, the princes discover him, and mistake him for a demon.
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A serene, clear pond with lily pads floats in the center of a meticulously kept royal courtyard, paved with smooth, light-colored flagstones. The pond is surrounded by low, manicured hedges and vibrant tropical flowers. In the background, the ornate, carved wooden pillars and intricate lattice work of a traditional Malay palace rise, with its distinctive tiered, gabled roofs peeking above the courtyard walls. Sunlight casts dappled shadows across the flagstones. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
King's Audience Chamber
The interior of the king's palace where he holds court. It is a formal setting where decisions are made.
Mood: Formal, tense, authoritative
The turtle is brought before the king, and various methods of punishment are debated.
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Inside a grand Malay palace audience chamber, the air is cool and dim, filtered through high, carved wooden screens. Polished dark hardwood floors reflect the soft light. The king's raised platform, adorned with rich textiles, sits at one end, flanked by intricately carved wooden pillars supporting a high, coffered ceiling. Attendants stand respectfully on woven pandan mats. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
