The Water-lily

by Andrew Lang · from The Blue Fairy Book

fairy tale transformation hopeful Ages 8-14 529 words 3 min read
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the bridge. Again he heard the water-lily’s lament, and, hesitating no

longer, smeared himself all over with mud, and, saying: “From a man into

a crab,” plunged into the river. For one moment the water hissed in

his ears, and then all was silent. He swam up to the plant and began

to loosen its roots, but so firmly were they fixed in the mud and reeds

that this took him a long time. He then grasped them and rose to the

surface, letting the water flow over the flower. The current carried

them down the stream, but nowhere could he see the mountain ash. At last

he saw it, and close by the large stone. Here he stopped and said: “From

a crab into a man, from a water-lily into a maiden,” and to his delight

found himself once more a prince, and the maiden was by his side. She

was ten times more beautiful than before, and wore a magnificent pale

yellow robe, sparkling with jewels. She thanked him for having freed her

from the cruel witch’s power, and willingly consented to marry him.

But when they came to the bridge where he had left his horse it was

nowhere to be seen, for, though the Prince thought he had been a crab

only a few hours, he had in reality been under the water for more than

ten days. While they were wondering how they should reach his father’s

court, they saw a splendid coach driven by six gaily caparisoned horses

coming along the bank. In this they drove to the palace. The King and

Queen were at church, weeping for their son, whom they had long mourned

for dead. Great was their delight and astonishment when the Prince

entered, leading the beautiful maiden by the hand. The wedding was at

once celebrated and there was feasting and merry-making throughout the

kingdom for six weeks.

Some time afterward the Prince and his bride were sitting in the garden,

when a crow said to them: “Ungrateful creatures! Have you forgotten the

two poor maidens who helped you in your distress? Must they spin gold

flax for ever? Have no pity on the old witch. The three maidens are

princesses, whom she stole away when they were children together, with

all the silver utensils, which she turned into gold flax. Poison were

her fittest punishment.”

The Prince was ashamed of having forgotten his promise and set out at

once, and by great good fortune reached the hut when the old woman was

away. The maidens had dreamed that he was coming, and were ready to go

with him, but first they made a cake in which they put poison, and

left it on a table where the old woman was likely to see it when she

returned. She did see it, and thought it looked so tempting that she

greedily ate it up and at once died.

In the secret chamber were found fifty wagon-loads of gold flax, and as

much more was discovered buried. The hut was razed to the ground, and

the Prince and his bride and her two sisters lived happily ever after.


Story DNA

Moral

Promises made in times of distress should be kept, and true gratitude extends beyond immediate salvation.

Plot Summary

A prince hears a water-lily's lament and transforms into a crab to free the enchanted maiden within. After successfully breaking her spell and returning to his kingdom, they marry. However, a crow reminds the prince of his forgotten promise to free two other maidens. He returns to the witch's hut, where the maidens, having anticipated his arrival, poison the witch. With the witch dead and her treasures recovered, the prince, his bride, and her sisters live happily ever after.

Themes

courage and sacrificegratitude and promisegood vs. evilredemption

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three (maidens), direct address from animal (crow)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: happy
Magic: transformation (man to crab, water-lily to maiden), enchantment by a witch, talking animals (crow), magical foresight (maidens' dream)
the water-lily (symbol of the enchanted maiden)gold flax (symbol of the witch's ill-gotten gains and the maidens' suffering)

Cultural Context

Origin: European (likely German or Slavic, given the motifs of witches and transformations, though presented by a Scottish collector)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Andrew Lang collected and retold fairy tales from various European traditions, making this a compilation rather than a single origin.

Plot Beats (13)

  1. A prince hears a water-lily's lament and learns it is an enchanted maiden.
  2. He smears himself with mud, transforms into a crab, and plunges into the river to free her.
  3. As a crab, he struggles to loosen the water-lily's roots, which are firmly fixed.
  4. He succeeds, rises to the surface, and transforms himself back into a prince and the water-lily into a beautiful maiden.
  5. They discover that ten days have passed, and the prince's horse is gone, but a splendid coach appears to take them to the palace.
  6. The King and Queen, who had mourned their son as dead, are overjoyed by his return with the maiden.
  7. The prince and the maiden marry, and the kingdom celebrates for six weeks.
  8. A crow reminds the prince that he forgot his promise to the two other maidens who helped him.
  9. Ashamed, the prince immediately sets out for the witch's hut, finding her away.
  10. The maidens, having dreamed of his arrival, prepare a poisoned cake for the witch.
  11. The witch returns, greedily eats the cake, and dies.
  12. Fifty wagon-loads of gold flax and other treasures are found in the secret chamber and buried around the hut.
  13. The hut is razed, and the prince, his bride, and her two sisters live happily ever after.

Characters

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The Prince

human young adult male

Handsome, brave

Attire: Initially fine princely attire, later mud-covered, then princely attire again

Covered head-to-toe in river mud

Brave, forgetful but ultimately good-hearted, determined

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The Water-Lily Maiden

human young adult female

Extremely beautiful

Attire: Magnificent pale yellow robe sparkling with jewels

Pale yellow jeweled robe

Kind, grateful, gentle

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The Witch

human elderly female

Implied to be ugly and cruel

Attire: Drab, tattered clothing

Greedily devouring a poisoned cake

Cruel, greedy, wicked

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First Maiden

human young adult female

Fair

Attire: Simple peasant dress

Spinning gold flax

Helpful, resourceful

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Second Maiden

human young adult female

Fair

Attire: Simple peasant dress

Spinning gold flax

Helpful, resourceful

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The Crow

animal adult unknown

Black feathers

A black crow perched on a garden wall

Reminding, observant

Locations

Riverbank by the Bridge

outdoor

A river flowing under a bridge, with a water-lily growing in the water. Muddy banks.

Mood: Melancholy, mysterious, then hopeful

The prince first hears the water-lily's lament and transforms into a crab to free her.

bridge water-lily mud river current

Underwater Reeds near Mountain Ash

outdoor

Murky river bottom with firmly fixed water-lily roots, reeds, and a large stone near a mountain ash tree.

Mood: Silent, laborious, magical

The prince, as a crab, struggles to free the water-lily, then transforms back into a prince with the maiden.

water-lily roots reeds large stone mountain ash tree

Royal Palace Garden

outdoor

A garden where the Prince and his bride are sitting.

Mood: Peaceful, domestic

A crow reminds the Prince of his promise to the two maidens.

garden sitting area

Witch's Hut

indoor

A hut where the witch lives and forces two maidens to spin gold flax. Contains a secret chamber.

Mood: Eerie, oppressive, secretive

The Prince rescues the maidens, and the witch is poisoned.

spinning wheel gold flax table with poisoned cake secret chamber