The Enchanted Head

by Andrew Lang · from The Brown Fairy Book

fairy tale transformation whimsical Ages 8-14 2460 words 11 min read
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Original Story 2460 words · 11 min read

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The Enchanted Head

Once upon a time an old woman lived in a small cottage near the sea

with her two daughters. They were very poor, and the girls seldom left

the house, as they worked all day long making veils for the ladies to

wear over their faces, and every morning, when the veils were finished,

the other took them over the bridge and sold them in the city. Then she

bought the food that they needed for the day, and returned home to do

her share of veil-making.

One morning the old woman rose even earlier than usual, and set off for

the city with her wares. She was just crossing the bridge when,

suddenly, she knocked up against a human head, which she had never seen

there before. The woman started back in horror; but what was her

surprise when the head spoke, exactly as if it had a body joined on to

it.

“Take me with you, good mother!” it said imploringly; “take me with you

back to your house.”

At the sound of these words the poor woman nearly went mad with terror.

Have that horrible thing always at home? Never! never! And she turned

and ran back as fast as she could, not knowing that the head was

jumping, dancing, and rolling after her. But when she reached her own

door it bounded in before her, and stopped in front of the fire,

begging and praying to be allowed to stay.

All that day there was no food in the house, for the veils had not been

sold, and they had no money to buy anything with. So they all sat

silent at their work, inwardly cursing the head which was the cause of

their misfortunes.

When evening came, and there was no sign of supper, the head spoke, for

the first time that day:

“Good mother, does no one ever eat here? During all the hours I have

spent in your house not a creature has touched anything.”

“No,” answered the old woman, “we are not eating anything.”

“And why not, good mother?”

“Because we have no money to buy any food.”

“Is it your custom never to eat?”

“No, for every morning I go into the city to sell my veils, and with

the few shillings I get for them I buy all we want. To-day I did not

cross the bridge, so of course I had nothing for food.”

“Then I am the cause of your having gone hungry all day?” asked the

head.

“Yes, you are,” answered the old woman.

“Well, then, I will give you money and plenty of it, if you will only

do as I tell you. In an hour, as the clock strikes twelve, you must be

on the bridge at the place where you met me. When you get there call

out ‘Ahmed,’ three times, as loud as you can. Then a negro will appear,

and you must say to him: ‘The head, your master, desires you to open

the trunk, and to give me the green purse which you will find in it.’”

“Very well, my lord,” said the old woman, “I will set off at once for

the bridge.” And wrapping her veil round her she went out.

Midnight was striking as she reached the spot where she had met the

head so many hours before.

“Ahmed! Ahmed! Ahmed!” cried she, and immediately a huge negro, as tall

as a giant, stood on the bridge before her.

“What do you want?” asked he.

“The head, your master, desires you to open the trunk, and to give me

the green purse which you will find in it.”

“I will be back in a moment, good mother,” said he. And three minutes

later he placed a purse full of sequins in the old woman’s hand.

No one can imagine the joy of the whole family at the sight of all this

wealth. The tiny, tumble-down cottage was rebuilt, the girls had new

dresses, and their mother ceased selling veils. It was such a new thing

to them to have money to spend, that they were not as careful as they

might have been, and by-and-by there was not a single coin left in the

purse. When this happened their hearts sank within them, and their

faces fell.

“Have you spent your fortune?” asked the head from its corner, when it

saw how sad they looked. “Well, then, go at midnight, good mother, to

the bridge, and call out ‘Mahomet!’ three times, as loud as you can. A

negro will appear in answer, and you must tell him to open the trunk,

and to give you the red purse which he will find there.”

The old woman did not need twice telling, but set off at once for the

bridge.

“Mahomet! Mahomet! Mahomet!” cried she, with all her might; and in an

instant a negro, still larger than the last, stood before her.

“What do you want?” asked he.

“The head, your master, bids you open the trunk, and to give me the red

purse which you will find in it.”

“Very well, good mother, I will do so,” answered the negro, and, the

moment after he had vanished, he reappeared with the purse in his hand.

This time the money seemed so endless that the old woman built herself

a new house, and filled it with the most beautiful things that were to

be found in the shops. Her daughters were always wrapped in veils that

looked as if they were woven out of sunbeams, and their dresses shone

with precious stones. The neighbours wondered where all this sudden

wealth had sprung from, but nobody knew about the head.

“Good mother,” said the head, one day, “this morning you are to go to

the city and ask the sultan to give me his daughter for my bride.”

“Do what?” asked the old woman in amazement. “How can I tell the sultan

that a head without a body wishes to become his son-in-law? They will

think that I am mad, and I shall be hooted from the palace and stoned

by the children.”

“Do as I bid you,” replied the head; “it is my will.”

The old woman was afraid to say anything more, and, putting on her

richest clothes, started for the palace. The sultan granted her an

audience at once, and, in a trembling voice, she made her request.

“Are you mad, old woman?” said the sultan, staring at her.

“The wooer is powerful, O Sultan, and nothing is impossible to him.”

“Is that true?”

“It is, O Sultan; I swear it,” answered she.

“Then let him show his power by doing three things, and I will give him

my daughter.”

“Command, O gracious prince,” said she.

“Do you see that hill in front of the palace?” asked the sultan.

“I see it,” answered she.

“Well, in forty days the man who has sent you must make that hill

vanish, and plant a beautiful garden in its place. That is the first

thing. Now go, and tell him what I say.”

So the old woman returned and told the head the sultan’s first

condition.

“It is well,” he replied; and said no more about it.

For thirty-nine days the head remained in its favourite corner. The old

woman thought that the task set before was beyond his powers, and that

no more would be heard about the sultan’s daughter. But on the

thirty-ninth evening after her visit to the palace, the head suddenly

spoke.

“Good mother,” he said, “you must go to-night to the bridge, and when

you are there cry ‘Ali! Ali! Ali!’ as loud as you can. A negro will

appear before you, and you will tell him that he is to level the hill,

and to make, in its place, the most beautiful garden that ever was

seen.”

“I will go at once,” answered she.

It did not take her long to reach the bridge which led to the city, and

she took up her position on the spot where she had first seen the head,

and called loudly “Ali! Ali! Ali.” In an instant a negro appeared

before her, of such a huge size that the old woman was half frightened;

but his voice was mild and gentle as he said: “What is it that you

want?”

“Your master bids you level the hill that stands in front of the

sultan’s palace and in its place to make the most beautiful garden in

the world.”

“Tell my master he shall be obeyed,” replied Ali; “it shall be done

this moment.” And the old woman went home and gave Ali’s message to the

head.

Meanwhile the sultan was in his palace waiting till the fortieth day

should dawn, and wondering that not one spadeful of earth should have

been dug out of the hill.

“If that old woman has been playing me a trick,” thought he, “I will

hang her! And I will put up a gallows to-morrow on the hill itself.”

But when to-morrow came there was no hill, and when the sultan opened

his eyes he could not imagine why the room was so much lighter than

usual, and what was the reason of the sweet smell of flowers that

filled the air.

“Can there be a fire?” he said to himself; “the sun never came in at

this window before. I must get up and see.” So he rose and looked out,

and underneath him flowers from every part of the world were blooming,

and creepers of every colour hung in chains from tree to tree.

Then he remembered. “Certainly that old woman’s son is a clever

magician!” cried he; “I never met anyone as clever as that. What shall

I give him to do next? Let me think. Ah! I know.” And he sent for the

old woman, who by the orders of the head, was waiting below.

“Your son has carried out my wishes very nicely,” he said. “The garden

is larger and better than that of any other king. But when I walk

across it I shall need some place to rest on the other side. In forty

days he must build me a palace, in which every room shall be filled

with different furniture from a different country, and each more

magnificent than any room that ever was seen.” And having said this he

turned round and went away.

“Oh! he will never be able to do that,” thought she; “it is much more

difficult than the hill.” And she walked home slowly, with her head

bent.

“Well, what am I to do next?” asked the head cheerfully. And the old

woman told her story.

“Dear me! is that all? why it is child’s play,” answered the head; and

troubled no more about the palace for thirty-nine days. Then he told

the old woman to go to the bridge and call for Hassan.

“What do you want, old woman?” asked Hassan, when he appeared, for he

was not as polite as the others had been.

“Your master commands you to build the most magnificent palace that

ever was seen,” replied she; “and you are to place it on the borders of

the new garden.”

“He shall be obeyed,” answered Hassan. And when the sultan woke he saw,

in the distance, a palace built of soft blue marble, resting on slender

pillars of pure gold.

“That old woman’s son is certainly all-powerful,” cried he; “what shall

I bid him do now?” And after thinking some time he sent for the old

woman, who was expecting the summons.

“The garden is wonderful, and the palace the finest in the world,” said

he, “so fine, that my servants would cut but a sorry figure in it. Let

your son fill it with forty slaves whose beauty shall be unequalled,

all exactly like each other, and of the same height.”

This time the king thought he had invented something totally

impossible, and was quite pleased with himself for his cleverness.

Thirty-nine days passed, and at midnight on the night of the last the

old woman was standing on the bridge.

“Bekir! Bekir! Bekir!” cried she. And a negro appeared, and inquired

what she wanted.

“The head, your master, bids you find forty slaves of unequalled

beauty, and of the same height, and place them in the sultan’s palace

on the other side of the garden.”

And when, on the morning of the fortieth day, the sultan went to the

blue palace, and was received by the forty slaves, he nearly lost his

wits from surprise.

“I will assuredly give my daughter to the old woman’s son,” thought he.

“If I were to search all the world through I could never find a more

powerful son-in-law.”

And when the old woman entered his presence he informed her that he was

ready to fulfil his promise, and she was to bid her son appear at the

palace without delay.

This command did not at all please the old woman, though, of course,

she made no objections to the sultan.

“All has gone well so far,” she grumbled, when she told her story to

the head,” but what do you suppose the sultan will say, when he sees

his daughter’s husband?”

“Never mind what he says! Put me on a silver dish and carry me to the

palace.”

So it was done, though the old woman’s heart beat as she laid down the

dish with the head upon it.

At the sight before him the king flew into a violent rage.

“I will never marry my daughter to such a monster,” he cried. But the

princess placed her head gently on his arm.

“You have given your word, my father, and you cannot break it,” said

she.

“But, my child, it is impossible for you to marry such a being,”

exclaimed the sultan.

“Yes, I will marry him. He had a beautiful head, and I love him

already.”

So the marriage was celebrated, and great feasts were held in the

palace, though the people wept tears to think of the sad fate of their

beloved princess. But when the merry-making was done, and the young

couple were alone, the head suddenly disappeared, or, rather, a body

was added to it, and one of the handsomest young men that ever was seen

stood before the princess.

“A wicked fairy enchanted me at my birth,” he said, “and for the rest

of the world I must always be a head only. But for you, and you only, I

am a man like other men.”

“And that is all I care about,” said the princess.

[Traditions populaires de toutes les nations (Asie Mineure)].


Story DNA

Moral

True worth and love can be found beyond superficial appearances, and promises, once made, should be kept.

Plot Summary

An impoverished old woman encounters a talking, disembodied head that follows her home. Initially a burden, the head soon provides immense wealth through summoned magical servants. The head then demands the old woman propose marriage to the Sultan's daughter, who sets three impossible tasks: creating a garden, building a palace, and filling it with identical slaves. The head's servants magically complete each task. Despite the Sultan's outrage at the head's appearance, the Princess accepts it as her husband, leading to the head's transformation into a handsome man, revealing a curse that only allowed him to appear as a head to others.

Themes

appearance vs. realityperseveranceloyaltyhidden power

Emotional Arc

despair to hope to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three (for summoning servants), direct address to reader (implied in descriptions of wonder)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs. society (old woman vs. poverty, head vs. Sultan's skepticism)
Ending: happy
Magic: talking disembodied head, magical servants (Ahmed, Mahomet, Ali, Hassan, Bekir) summoned by name, instantaneous creation of gardens, palaces, and people, transformation curse
the head (symbol of hidden potential/true self)the bridge (threshold between worlds/states)the purses (instant wealth)

Cultural Context

Origin: Middle Eastern (implied by names like Ahmed, Mahomet, Ali, Hassan, Bekir, Sultan)
Era: timeless fairy tale

The use of 'negro' and the portrayal of these characters as magical servants who appear on command reflects a historical and cultural context where such figures might be depicted in folklore, often without the nuanced understanding of race and slavery prevalent today. The names used (Ahmed, Mahomet, Ali, Hassan, Bekir) are common in Islamic cultures.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. An old woman and her two daughters live in poverty, making and selling veils.
  2. The old woman encounters a talking, disembodied head on a bridge, which insists on coming home with her.
  3. The head's presence prevents the old woman from selling veils, leading to the family's hunger.
  4. The head instructs the old woman to summon 'Ahmed' at midnight on the bridge, who provides a green purse full of money.
  5. The family spends all the money, and the head instructs the old woman to summon 'Mahomet' for a red purse, providing even greater wealth.
  6. The head commands the old woman to ask the Sultan for his daughter's hand in marriage.
  7. The Sultan, skeptical, sets three impossible tasks for the suitor: make a hill vanish and plant a garden in 40 days.
  8. The head instructs the old woman to summon 'Ali', who magically creates the garden overnight.
  9. The Sultan sets the second task: build a magnificent palace with unique rooms in 40 days.
  10. The head instructs the old woman to summon 'Hassan', who magically builds the palace overnight.
  11. The Sultan sets the third task: fill the palace with forty identical, beautiful slaves in 40 days.
  12. The head instructs the old woman to summon 'Bekir', who magically provides the slaves overnight.
  13. The Sultan, impressed, agrees to the marriage and demands the suitor appear.
  14. The old woman presents the head on a silver dish, enraging the Sultan, but the Princess accepts the head as her husband.
  15. After the wedding, the head transforms into a handsome man, revealing a curse that only allowed him to be a head to others, but a man to his wife.

Characters

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The Enchanted Head

human (enchanted) young adult male

Initially only a severed head, later a handsome young man

Attire: None as a head; later, royal garments befitting a prince

A disembodied human head on a silver platter

Demanding, powerful, ultimately loving and grateful

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The Old Woman

human elderly female

Initially poor and worn, later wealthy and well-dressed

Attire: Starts in simple peasant clothes, ends in rich garments and veils

A bent old woman in rich robes, carrying a silver platter

Initially fearful, then greedy, ultimately obedient and resourceful

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The Sultan

human adult male

Royal and imposing

Attire: Elaborate sultan's robes and turban

A stern-faced sultan on his throne

Skeptical, demanding, impressed by power

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The Princess

human young adult female

Beautiful

Attire: Royal princess attire

A beautiful princess placing her hand on a severed head

Gentle, obedient, loving, accepting

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Ahmed

human adult male

Huge negro, as tall as a giant

Attire: Servant's clothing

A giant negro handing over a green purse

Obedient

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Mahomet

human adult male

Negro, still larger than the last

Attire: Servant's clothing

A giant negro handing over a red purse

Obedient

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Ali

human adult male

Huge size

Attire: Servant's clothing

A giant negro leveling a hill

Obedient

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Hassan

human adult male

No details given

Attire: Servant's clothing

A giant negro building a palace

Less polite, but still obedient

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Bekir

human adult male

No details given

Attire: Servant's clothing

A giant negro finding forty slaves

Obedient

Locations

Small Cottage near the Sea

indoor

Tiny, tumble-down, later rebuilt

Mood: poor, humble, later comfortable

The old woman and her daughters live here; the head resides here and gives instructions.

fire veil-making tools silver dish

Bridge to the City

transitional morning, midnight

Where the old woman first encounters the head

Mood: eerie, magical

The old woman meets the enchanted head and later summons the negro servants.

stone bridge river below

Sultan's Palace

outdoor

Where the Sultan lives and makes demands

Mood: opulent, powerful

The old woman petitions the Sultan, and the prince marries the princess.

throne room gallows view of the hill

Garden

outdoor morning

A beautiful garden with flowers from every part of the world and colorful creepers hanging from tree to tree.

Mood: magical, beautiful

The Sultan marvels at the garden that has been created.

flowers creepers trees

Blue Marble Palace

outdoor morning

Built of soft blue marble, resting on slender pillars of pure gold, filled with furniture from different countries.

Mood: opulent, magical

The Sultan marvels at the palace that has been created.

blue marble gold pillars varied furniture