The Crab and the Monkey

by Andrew Lang · from The Crimson Fairy Book

fairy tale moral tale solemn Ages 8-14 938 words 5 min read
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Original Story 938 words · 5 min read

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The Crab And The Monkey

There was once a crab who lived in a hole on the shady side of a

mountain. She was a very good housewife, and so careful and industrious

that there was no creature in the whole country whose hole was so neat

and clean as hers, and she took great pride in it.

One day she saw lying near the mouth of her hole a handful of cooked

rice which some pilgrim must have let fall when he was stopping to eat

his dinner. Delighted at this discovery, she hastened to the spot, and

was carrying the rice back to her hole when a monkey, who lived in some

trees near by, came down to see what the crab was doing. His eyes shone

at the sight of the rice, for it was his favourite food, and like the

sly fellow he was, he proposed a bargain to the crab. She was to give

him half the rice in exchange for the kernel of a sweet red kaki fruit

which he had just eaten. He half expected that the crab would laugh in

his face at this impudent proposal, but instead of doing so she only

looked at him for a moment with her head on one side and then said that

she would agree to the exchange. So the monkey went off with his rice,

and the crab returned to her hole with the kernel.

For some time the crab saw no more of the monkey, who had gone to pay a

visit on the sunny side of the mountain; but one morning he happened to

pass by her hole, and found her sitting under the shadow of a beautiful

kaki tree.

“Good day,” he said politely, “you have some very fine fruit there! I

am very hungry, could you spare me one or two?”

“Oh, certainly,” replied the crab, “but you must forgive me if I cannot

get them for you myself. I am no tree-climber.”

“Pray do not apologise,” answered the monkey. “Now that I have your

permission I can get them myself quite easily.” And the crab consented

to let him go up, merely saying that he must throw her down half the

fruit.

In another moment he was swinging himself from branch to branch, eating

all the ripest kakis and filling his pockets with the rest, and the

poor crab saw to her disgust that the few he threw down to her were

either not ripe at all or else quite rotten.

“You are a shocking rogue,” she called in a rage; but the monkey took

no notice, and went on eating as fast as he could. The crab understood

that it was no use her scolding, so she resolved to try what cunning

would do.

“Sir Monkey,” she said, “you are certainly a very good climber, but now

that you have eaten so much, I am quite sure you would never be able to

turn one of your somersaults.” The monkey prided himself on turning

better somersaults than any of his family, so he instantly went head

over heels three times on the bough on which he was sitting, and all

the beautiful kakis that he had in his pockets rolled to the ground.

Quick as lightning the crab picked them up and carried a quantity of

them into her house, but when she came up for another the monkey sprang

on her, and treated her so badly that he left her for dead. When he had

beaten her till his arm ached he went his way.

It was a lucky thing for the poor crab that she had some friends to

come to her help or she certainly would have died then and there. The

wasp flew to her, and took her back to bed and looked after her, and

then he consulted with a rice-mortar and an egg which had fallen out of

a nest near by, and they agreed that when the monkey returned, as he

was sure to do, to steal the rest of the fruit, that they would punish

him severely for the manner in which he had behaved to the crab. So the

mortar climbed up to the beam over the front door, and the egg lay

quite still on the ground, while the wasp set down the water-bucket in

a corner. Then the crab dug itself a deep hole in the ground, so that

not even the tip of her claws might be seen.

Soon after everything was ready the monkey jumped down from his tree,

and creeping to the door began a long hypocritical speech, asking

pardon for all he had done. He waited for an answer of some sort, but

none came. He listened, but all was still; then he peeped, and saw no

one; then he went in. He peered about for the crab, but in vain;

however, his eyes fell on the egg, which he snatched up and set on the

fire. But in a moment the egg had burst into a thousand pieces, and its

sharp shell struck him in the face and scratched him horribly. Smarting

with pain he ran to the bucket and stooped down to throw some water

over his head. As he stretched out his hand up started the wasp and

stung him on the nose. The monkey shrieked and ran to the door, but as

he passed through down fell the mortar and struck him dead. “After that

the crab lived happily for many years, and at length died in peace

under her own kaki tree.

[From Japanische Mährchen.]


Story DNA

Moral

Cruelty and greed will eventually be met with cunning and collective justice.

Plot Summary

A diligent crab trades rice for a kaki seed from a sly monkey, growing a beautiful tree. The monkey later abuses the crab's generosity, eating all the good fruit and brutally beating her. The injured crab's friends—a wasp, a rice-mortar, and an egg—conspire to avenge her. They set a trap in the crab's hole, leading to the monkey's painful and fatal encounter with each of them, ensuring justice for the crab.

Themes

justicecunning vs. brute forceconsequences of crueltyfriendship and loyalty

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: personification

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: talking animals, a fruit kernel growing into a tree quickly
the kaki tree (representing the crab's industry and eventual reward)the rice (initial temptation and source of conflict)the tools/animals (representing collective justice)

Cultural Context

Origin: Japanese
Era: timeless fairy tale

This story, 'Saru Kani Gassen' (The Monkey-Crab Battle), is a well-known Japanese folktale, often depicting the triumph of the weak and clever over the strong and cruel.

Plot Beats (14)

  1. A diligent crab finds a handful of cooked rice near her hole.
  2. A sly monkey tricks the crab into exchanging half the rice for a kaki fruit kernel.
  3. The crab plants the kernel, and it grows into a beautiful kaki tree.
  4. The monkey returns, sees the tree, and asks the crab for fruit, promising to share.
  5. The monkey climbs the tree, eats the best fruit, and throws down only rotten ones to the crab.
  6. The crab, angered, tricks the monkey into performing somersaults, causing him to drop all the good fruit.
  7. The crab gathers the dropped fruit, but the monkey springs on her and beats her severely, leaving her for dead.
  8. The crab's friends (a wasp, a rice-mortar, and an egg) find her injured and vow revenge.
  9. The friends set a trap in the crab's hole: the mortar above the door, the egg on the ground, the wasp by a water bucket, and the crab hidden.
  10. The monkey returns, feigns apology, and enters the crab's hole.
  11. The monkey picks up the egg, which bursts when he puts it on the fire, scratching his face.
  12. The monkey runs to the water bucket, where the wasp stings him on the nose.
  13. The monkey shrieks and runs for the door, where the mortar falls and kills him.
  14. The crab emerges from her hiding place, and lives happily ever after under her kaki tree.

Characters

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Crab

crab adult female

Industrious, lives in a neat hole

Tiny crab claws clutching a kaki fruit

Industrious, cunning, vengeful

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Monkey

monkey adult male

Sly, agile

Monkey mid-somersault, dropping kaki fruit

Sly, greedy, boastful

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Wasp

wasp adult unknown

Flying insect with a stinger

Wasp stinging the monkey's nose

Helpful, loyal

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Rice-Mortar

object ageless unknown

Heavy wooden mortar

Heavy wooden mortar falling from above

Silent, deadly

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Egg

object ageless unknown

Fragile egg

Egg exploding on the fire

Deceptive, explosive

Locations

Crab's Hole

outdoor

A neat and clean hole on the shady side of a mountain.

Mood: peaceful, industrious

The crab discovers the rice and makes a deal with the monkey.

hole mountain cooked rice entrance

Kaki Tree

outdoor morning

A beautiful kaki tree growing near the crab's hole, laden with sweet red fruit.

Mood: deceptive, tempting

The monkey tricks the crab and steals the kakis.

kaki tree ripe kakis branches shadow

Crab's Home Interior

indoor

The interior of the crab's hole, containing a hearth.

Mood: dangerous, vengeful

The wasp, rice-mortar, and egg set a trap for the monkey.

hearth water-bucket beam over the door deep hole in the ground