The Strong Prince

by Andrew Lang · from The Crimson Fairy Book

fairy tale transformation solemn Ages 8-14 2052 words 9 min read
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The Strong Prince

Once upon a time there lived a king who was so fond of wine that he

could not go to sleep unless he knew he had a great flaskful tied to

his bed-post. All day long he drank till he was too stupid to attend to

his business, and everything in the kingdom went to rack and ruin. But

one day an accident happened to him, and he was struck on the head by a

falling bough, so that he fell from his horse and lay dead upon the

ground.

His wife and son mourned his loss bitterly, for, in spite of his

faults, he had always been kind to them. So they abandoned the crown

and forsook their country, not knowing or caring where they went.

At length they wandered into a forest, and being very tired, sat down

under a tree to eat some bread that they had brought with them. When

they had finished the queen said: “My son, I am thirsty; fetch me some

water.”

The prince got up at once and went to a brook which he heard gurgling

near at hand. He stooped and filled his hat with the water, which he

brought to his mother; then he turned and followed the stream up to its

source in a rock, where it bubbled out clear and fresh and cold. He

knelt down to take a draught from the deep pool below the rock, when he

saw the reflection of a sword hanging from the branch of a tree over

his head. The young man drew back with a start; but in a moment he

climbed the tree, cutting the rope which held the sword, and carried

the weapon to his mother.

The queen was greatly surprised at the sight of anything so splendid in

such a lonely place, and took it in her hands to examine it closely. It

was of curious workmanship, wrought with gold, and on its handle was

written: “The man who can buckle on this sword will become stronger

than other men.” The queen’s heart swelled with joy as she read these

words, and she bade her son lose no time in testing their truth. So he

fastened it round his waist, and instantly a glow of strength seemed to

run through his veins. He took hold of a thick oak tree and rooted it

up as easily as if it had been a weed.

This discovery put new life into the queen and her son, and they

continued their walk through the forest. But night was drawing on, and

the darkness grew so thick that it seemed as if it could be cut with a

knife. They did not want to sleep in the wood, for they were afraid of

wolves and other wild beasts, so they groped their way along, hand in

hand, till the prince tripped over something which lay across the path.

He could not see what it was, but stooped down and tried to lift it.

The thing was very heavy, and he thought his back would break under the

strain. At last with a great heave he moved it out of the road, and as

it fell he knew it was a huge rock. Behind the rock was a cave which it

was quite clear was the home of some robbers, though not one of the

band was there.

Hastily putting out the fire which burned brightly at the back, and

bidding his mother come in and keep very still, the prince began to

pace up and down, listening for the return of the robbers. But he was

very sleepy, and in spite of all his efforts he felt he could not keep

awake much longer, when he heard the sound of the robbers returning,

shouting and singing as they marched along. Soon the singing ceased,

and straining his ears he heard them discussing anxiously what had

become of their cave, and why they could not see the fire as usual.

“This must be the place,” said a voice, which the prince took to be

that of the captain. “Yes, I feel the ditch before the entrance.

Someone forgot to pile up the fire before we left and it has burnt

itself out! But it is all right. Let every man jump across, and as he

does so cry out ‘Hop! I am here.’ I will go last. Now begin.”

The man who stood nearest jumped across, but he had no time to give the

call which the captain had ordered, for with one swift, silent stroke

of the prince’s sword, his head rolled into a corner. Then the young

man cried instead, “Hop! I am here.”

The second man, hearing the signal, leapt the ditch in confidence, and

was met by the same fate, and in a few minutes eleven of the robbers

lay dead, and there remained only the captain.

Now the captain had wound round his neck the shawl of his lost wife,

and the stroke of the prince’s sword fell harmless. Being very cunning,

however, he made no resistance, and rolled over as if he were as dead

as the other men. Still, the prince was no fool, and wondered if indeed

he was as dead as he seemed to be; but the captain lay so stiff and

stark, that at last he was taken in.

The prince next dragged the headless bodies into a chamber in the cave,

and locked the door. Then he and his mother ransacked the place for

some food, and when they had eaten it they lay down and slept in peace.

With the dawn they were both awake again, and found that, instead of

the cave which they had come to the night before, they now were in a

splendid castle, full of beautiful rooms. The prince went round all

these and carefully locked them up, bidding his mother take care of the

keys while he was hunting.

Unfortunately, the queen, like all women, could not bear to think that

there was anything which she did not know. So the moment that her son

had turned his back, she opened the doors of all the rooms, and peeped

in, till she came to the one where the robbers lay. But if the sight of

the blood on the ground turned her faint, the sight of the robber

captain walking up and down was a greater shock still. She quickly

turned the key in the lock, and ran back to the chamber she had slept

in.

Soon after her son came in, bringing with him a large bear, which he

had killed for supper. As there was enough food to last them for many

days, the prince did not hunt the next morning, but, instead, began to

explore the castle. He found that a secret way led from it into the

forest; and following the path, he reached another castle larger and

more splendid than the one belonging to the robbers. He knocked at the

door with his fist, and said that he wanted to enter; but the giant, to

whom the castle belonged, only answered: “I know who you are. I have

nothing to do with robbers.”

“I am no robber,” answered the prince. “I am the son of a king, and I

have killed all the band. If you do not open to me at once I will break

in the door, and your head shall go to join the others.”

He waited a little, but the door remained shut as tightly as before.

Then he just put his shoulder to it, and immediately the wood began to

crack. When the giant found that it was no use keeping it shut, he

opened it, saying: “I see you are a brave youth. Let there be peace

between us.”

And the prince was glad to make peace, for he had caught a glimpse of

the giant’s beautiful daughter, and from that day he often sought the

giant’s house.

Now the queen led a dull life all alone in the castle, and to amuse

herself she paid visits to the robber captain, who flattered her till

at last she agreed to marry him. But as she was much afraid of her son,

she told the robber that the next time the prince went to bathe in the

river, he was to steal the sword from its place above the bed, for

without it the young man would have no power to punish him for his

boldness.

The robber captain thought this good counsel, and the next morning,

when the young man went to bathe, he unhooked the sword from its nail

and buckled it round his waist. On his return to the castle, the prince

found the robber waiting for him on the steps, waving the sword above

his head, and knowing that some horrible fate was in store, fell on his

knees and begged for mercy. But he might as well have tried to squeeze

blood out of a stone. The robber, indeed, granted him his life, but

took out both his eyes, which he thrust into the prince’s hand, saying

brutally:

“Here, you had better keep them! You may find them useful!”

Weeping, the blind youth felt his way to the giant’s house, and told

him all the story.

The giant was full of pity for the poor young man, but inquired

anxiously what he had done with the eyes. The prince drew them out of

his pocket, and silently handed them to the giant, who washed them

well, and then put them back in the prince’s head. For three days he

lay in utter darkness; then the light began to come back, till soon he

saw as well as ever.

But though he could not rejoice enough over the recovery of his eyes,

he bewailed bitterly the loss of his sword, and that it should have

fallen to the lot of his bitter enemy.

“Never mind, my friend,” said the giant, “I will get it back for you.”

And he sent for the monkey who was his head servant.

“Tell the fox and the squirrel that they are to go with you, and fetch

me back the prince’s sword,” ordered he.

The three servants set out at once, one seated on the back of the

others, the ape, who disliked walking, being generally on top. Directly

they came to the window of the robber captain’s room, the monkey sprang

from the backs of the fox and the squirrel, and climbed in. The room

was empty, and the sword hanging from a nail. He took it down, and

buckling it round his waist, as he had seen the prince do, swung

himself down again, and mounting on the backs of his two companions,

hastened to his master. The giant bade him give the sword to the

prince, who girded himself with it, and returned with all speed to the

castle.

“Come out, you rascal! come out, you villain!” cried he, “and answer to

me for the wrong you have done. I will show you who is the master in

this house!”

The noise he made brought the robber into the room. He glanced up to

where the sword usually hung, but it was gone; and instinctively he

looked at the prince’s hand, where he saw it gleaming brightly. In his

turn he fell on his knees to beg for mercy, but it was too late. As he

had done to the prince, so the prince did to him, and, blinded, he was

thrust forth, and fell down a deep hole, where he is to this day. His

mother the prince sent back to her father, and never would see her

again. After this he returned to the giant, and said to him:

“My friend, add one more kindness to those you have already heaped on

me. Give me your daughter as my wife.”

So they were married, and the wedding feast was so splendid that there

was not a kingdom in the world that did not hear of it. And the prince

never went back to his father’s throne, but lived peacefully with his

wife in the forest, where, if they are not dead, they are living still.

[From Ungarische Volksmarchen.]


Story DNA

Moral

Betrayal, especially from those closest to you, can lead to suffering, but true strength and loyalty will ultimately prevail and bring justice.

Plot Summary

After his drunken king father dies, a prince and his queen mother are exiled. The prince discovers a magical sword granting immense strength, which he uses to clear a robber's cave and befriend a giant whose daughter he loves. However, his mother, bored and flattered by the surviving robber captain, betrays him, leading to the prince being blinded and losing his sword. With the giant's help, the prince recovers his sight and sword, exacts justice on the robber, banishes his mother, and marries the giant's daughter, living a peaceful life in the forest.

Themes

betrayalredemptionjusticepower and responsibility

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three, direct address to reader (implied)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: magical sword granting strength, giant with magical servants, eyes being restored after removal
the magical sword (power, destiny)the eyes (sight, vulnerability, restoration)the forest (exile, new beginnings, danger)

Cultural Context

Origin: Hungarian
Era: timeless fairy tale

Collected by Andrew Lang, this tale is from 'Ungarische Volksmarchen' (Hungarian Folk Tales), reflecting Central European oral traditions where themes of strength, betrayal, and justice are prevalent.

Plot Beats (12)

  1. A king dies from an accident, leaving his queen and prince to wander the forest in exile.
  2. The prince finds a magical sword that grants him superhuman strength when buckled on.
  3. The prince and queen find a robber's cave, and the prince slays all but the captain, who feigns death.
  4. The prince discovers a secret passage to a giant's castle and befriends the giant, falling in love with his daughter.
  5. The queen, bored and flattered by the surviving robber captain, conspires with him to steal the prince's sword.
  6. The robber captain steals the sword, blinds the prince, and thrusts his eyes into his hand.
  7. The blind prince seeks refuge with the giant, who restores his eyesight using the prince's own eyes.
  8. The giant sends his magical servants (monkey, fox, squirrel) to retrieve the sword from the robber captain.
  9. The monkey successfully steals the sword back from the robber captain.
  10. The prince, re-armed with his sword, confronts the robber captain, blinds him, and casts him into a deep hole.
  11. The prince banishes his mother back to her father's kingdom, vowing never to see her again.
  12. The prince marries the giant's daughter and lives happily ever after in the forest, forsaking his old kingdom.

Characters

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The Strong Prince

human young adult male

Strong, capable of uprooting trees and moving boulders

Attire: Initially royal attire, later practical hunting clothes, always with the magical sword.

The magical sword strapped to his waist

Brave, determined, forgiving (initially), vengeful when wronged

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The Queen

human adult female

Not explicitly described, but likely regal in bearing

Attire: Worn but elegant royal garments, reflecting her former status.

A set of keys clutched nervously in her hand

Anxious, easily manipulated, curious to a fault

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The Robber Captain

human adult male

Cunning and ruthless, physically fit from a life of banditry

Attire: Ragged clothing, a stolen shawl around his neck.

The stolen shawl wrapped around his neck

Treacherous, manipulative, cruel

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The Giant

giant adult male

Imposing size, physically strong

Attire: Simple, functional clothing suitable for his size.

Towering height and a booming voice

Wise, fair, helpful

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The Giant's Daughter

giant young adult female

Beautiful

Attire: Not described

Her beauty

Not described

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The Monkey

animal adult male

Agile and clever

Riding on the backs of the fox and squirrel

Clever, resourceful, dislikes walking

Locations

Forest Brook

outdoor

A clear, fresh, and cold brook bubbling from a rock into a deep pool.

Mood: peaceful, fateful

The prince finds the magical sword.

brook rock deep pool sword hanging from a tree branch

Robber's Cave/Castle

transitional night

A cave hidden behind a large rock, with a fire burning at the back. Later transforms into a splendid castle with beautiful rooms.

Mood: eerie, dangerous, then opulent

The prince defeats the robbers and claims their home, which transforms into a castle.

large rock ditch before the entrance fire headless bodies beautiful rooms

Giant's Castle

indoor

A castle larger and more splendid than the robber's castle.

Mood: grand, welcoming (eventually)

The prince befriends the giant and falls in love with his daughter; the giant restores the prince's sight.

strong door giant's daughter secret way to the robber's castle