The Enchanted Snake

by Andrew Lang · from The Green Fairy Book

fairy tale transformation hopeful Ages 8-14 2939 words 13 min read
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Original Story 2939 words · 13 min read

THE ENCHANTED SNAKE

There was once upon a time a poor woman who would have given all she

possessed for a child, but she hadn't one.

Now it happened one day that her husband went to the wood to collect

brushwood, and when he had brought it home, he discovered a pretty

little snake among the twigs.

When Sabatella, for that was the name of the peasant's wife, saw the

little beast, she sighed deeply and said, 'Even the snakes have their

brood; I alone am unfortunate and have no children.' No sooner had she

said these words than, to her intense surprise, the little snake looked

up into her face and spoke: 'Since you have no children, be a mother to

me instead, and I promise you will never repent it, for I will love you

as if I were your own son.'

At first Sabatella was frightened to death at hearing a snake speak, but

plucking up her courage, she replied, 'If it weren't for any other

reason than your kindly thought, I would agree to what you say, and I

will love you and look after you like a mother.'

So she gave the snake a little hole in the house for its bed, fed it

with all the nicest food she could think of, and seemed as if she never

could show it enough kindness. Day by day it grew bigger and fatter, and

at last one morning it said to Cola-Mattheo, the peasant, whom it always

regarded as its father, 'Dear papa, I am now of a suitable age and wish

to marry.'

'I'm quite agreeable,' answered Mattheo, 'and I'll do my best to find

another snake like yourself and arrange a match between you.'

'Why, if you do that,' replied the snake, 'we shall be no better than

the vipers and reptiles, and that's not what I want at all. No; I'd much

prefer to marry the King's daughter; therefore I pray you go without

further delay, and demand an audience of the King, and tell him a snake

wishes to marry his daughter.'

Cola-Mattheo, who was rather a simpleton, went as he was desired to the

King, and having obtained an audience, he said, 'Your Majesty, I have

often heard that people lose nothing by asking, so I have come to

inform you that a snake wants to marry your daughter, and I'd be glad to

know if you are willing to mate a dove with a serpent?'

The King, who saw at once that the man was a fool, said, in order to get

quit of him, 'Go home and tell your friend the snake that if he can turn

this palace into ivory, inlaid with gold and silver, before to-morrow at

noon, I will let him marry my daughter.' And with a hearty laugh he

dismissed the peasant.

When Cola-Mattheo brought this answer back to the snake, the little

creature didn't seem the least put out, but said, 'To-morrow morning,

before sunrise, you must go to the wood and gather a bunch of green

herbs, and then rub the threshold of the palace with them, and you'll

see what will happen.'

Cola-Mattheo, who was, as I have said before, a great simpleton, made no

reply; but before sunrise next morning he went to the wood and gathered

a bunch of St. John's Wort, and rosemary, and suchlike herbs, and rubbed

them, as he had been told, on the floor of the palace. Hardly had he

done so than the walls immediately turned into ivory, so richly inlaid

with gold and silver that they dazzled the eyes of all beholders. The

King, when he rose and saw the miracle that had been performed, was

beside himself with amazement, and didn't know what in the world he was

to do.

But when Cola-Mattheo came next day, and, in the name of the snake,

demanded the hand of the Princess, the King replied, 'Don't be in such a

hurry; if the snake really wants to marry my daughter, he must do some

more things first, and one of these is to turn all the paths and walls

of my garden into pure gold before noon to-morrow.'

When the snake was told of this new condition, he replied, 'To-morrow

morning, early, you must go and collect all the odds and ends of rubbish

you can find in the streets, and then take them and throw them on the

paths and walls of the garden, and you'll see then if we won't be more

than a match for the old King.'

So Cola-Mattheo rose at cock-crow, took a large basket under his arm,

and carefully collected all the broken fragments of pots and pans, and

jugs and lamps, and other trash of that sort. No sooner had he scattered

them over the paths and walls of the King's garden than they became one

blaze of glittering gold, so that everyone's eyes were dazzled with the

brilliancy, and everyone's soul was filled with wonder. The King, too,

was amazed at the sight, but still he couldn't make up his mind to part

with his daughter, so when Cola-Mattheo came to remind him of his

promise he replied, 'I have still a third demand to make. If the snake

can turn all the trees and fruit of my garden into precious stones, then

I promise him my daughter in marriage.'

When the peasant informed the snake what the King had said, he replied,

'To-morrow morning, early, you must go to the market and buy all the

fruit you see there, and then sow all the stones and seeds in the palace

garden, and, if I'm not mistaken, the King will be satisfied with the

result.'

Cola-Mattheo rose at dawn, and taking a basket on his arm, he went to

the market, and bought all the pomegranates, apricots, cherries, and

other fruit he could find there, and sowed the seeds and stones in the

palace garden. In one moment, the trees were all ablaze with rubies,

emeralds, diamonds, and every other precious stone you can think of.

This time the King felt obliged to keep his promise, and calling his

daughter to him, he said, 'My dear Grannonia,' for that was the

Princess's name, 'more as a joke than anything else, I demanded what

seemed to me impossibilities from your bridegroom, but now that he has

done all I required, I am bound to stick to my part of the bargain. Be a

good child, and as you love me, do not force me to break my word, but

give yourself up with as good grace as you can to a most unhappy fate.'

'Do with me what you like, my lord and father, for your will is my law,'

answered Grannonia.

When the King heard this, he told Cola-Mattheo to bring the snake to the

palace, and said that he was prepared to receive the creature as his

son-in-law.

The snake arrived at court in a carriage made of gold and drawn by six

white elephants; but wherever it appeared on the way, the people fled in

terror at the sight of the fearful reptile.

When the snake reached the palace, all the courtiers shook and trembled

with fear down to the very scullion, and the King and Queen were in such

a state of nervous collapse that they hid themselves in a far-away

turret. Grannonia alone kept her presence of mind, and although both her

father and mother implored her to fly for her life, she wouldn't move a

step, saying, 'I'm certainly not going to fly from the man you have

chosen for my husband.'

[Illustration]

As soon as the snake saw Grannonia, it wound its tail round her and

kissed her. Then, leading her into a room, it shut the door, and

throwing off its skin, it changed into a beautiful young man with golden

locks, and flashing eyes, who embraced Grannonia tenderly, and said all

sorts of pretty things to her.

When the King saw the snake shut itself into a room with his daughter,

he said to his wife, 'Heaven be merciful to our child, for I fear it is

all over with her now. This cursed snake has most likely swallowed her

up.' Then they put their eyes to the keyhole to see what had happened.

Their amazement knew no bounds when they saw a beautiful youth standing

before their daughter with the snake's skin lying on the floor beside

him. In their excitement they burst open the door, and seizing the skin

they threw it into the fire. But no sooner had they done this than the

young man called out, 'Oh, wretched people! what have you done?' and

before they had time to look round he had changed himself into a dove,

and dashing against the window he broke a pane of glass, and flew away

from their sight.

But Grannonia, who in one and the same moment saw herself merry and sad,

cheerful and despairing, rich and beggared, complained bitterly over

this robbery of her happiness, this poisoning of her cup of joy, this

unlucky stroke of fortune, and laid all the blame on her parents, though

they assured her that they had meant no harm. But the Princess refused

to be comforted, and at night, when all the inhabitants of the palace

were asleep, she stole out by a back door, disguised as a peasant woman,

determined to seek for her lost happiness till she found it. When she

got to the outskirts of the town, led by the light of the moon, she met

a fox, who offered to accompany her, an offer which Grannonia gladly

accepted, saying 'You are most heartily welcome, for I don't know my way

at all about the neighbourhood.'

So they went on their way together, and came at last to a wood, where,

being tired with walking, they paused to rest under the shade of a tree,

where a spring of water sported with the tender grass, refreshing it

with its crystal spray.

They laid themselves down on the green carpet and soon fell fast asleep,

and did not waken again till the sun was high in the heavens. They rose

up and stood for some time listening to the birds singing, because

Grannonia delighted in their songs.

When the fox perceived this, he said: 'If you only understood, as I do,

what these little birds are saying, your pleasure would be even

greater.'

Provoked by his words--for we all know that curiosity is as deeply

inborn in every woman as even the love of talking--Grannonia implored

the fox to tell her what the birds had said.

At first the wily fox refused to tell her what he had gathered from the

conversation of the birds, but at last he gave way to her entreaties,

and told her that they had spoken of the misfortunes of a beautiful

young Prince, whom a wicked enchantress had turned into a snake for the

period of seven years. At the end of this time he had fallen in love

with a charming Princess, but that when he had shut himself up into a

room with her, and had thrown off his snake's skin, her parents had

forced their way into the room and had burnt the skin, whereupon the

Prince, changed into the likeness of a dove, had broken a pane of glass

in trying to fly out of the window, and had wounded himself so badly

that the doctors despaired of his life.

Grannonia, when she learnt that they were talking of her lover, asked at

once whose son he was, and if there was any hope of his recovery; to

which the fox made answer that the birds had said he was the son of the

King of Vallone Grosso, and that the only thing that could cure him was

to rub the wounds on his head with the blood of the very birds who had

told the tale.

Then Grannonia knelt down before the fox, and begged him in her sweetest

way to catch the birds for her and procure their blood, promising at the

same time to reward him richly.

'All right,' said the fox, 'only don't be in such a hurry; let's wait

till night, when the little birds have gone to roost, then I'll climb up

and catch them all for you.'

So they passed the day, talking now of the beauty of the Prince, now of

the father of the Princess, and then of the misfortune that had

happened. At last the night arrived, and all the little birds were

asleep high up on the branches of a big tree. The fox climbed up

stealthily and caught the little creatures with his paws one after the

other; and when he had killed them all he put their blood into a little

bottle which he wore at his side, and returned with it to Grannonia, who

was beside herself with joy at the result of the fox's raid. But the fox

said, 'My dear daughter, your joy is in vain, because, let me tell you,

this blood is of no earthly use to you unless you add some of mine to

it,' and with these words he took to his heels.

Grannonia, who saw her hopes dashed to the ground in this cruel way, had

recourse to flattery and cunning, weapons which have often stood the sex

in good stead, and called out after the fox, 'Father Fox, you would be

quite right to save your skin, if, in the first place, I didn't feel I

owed so much to you, and if, in the second, there weren't other foxes in

the world; but as you know how grateful I feel to you, and as there are

heaps of other foxes about, you can trust yourself to me. Don't behave

like the cow that kicks the pail over after it has filled it with milk,

but continue your journey with me, and when we get to the capital you

can sell me to the King as a servant girl.'

It never entered the fox's head that even foxes can be outwitted, so

after a bit he consented to go with her; but he hadn't gone far before

the cunning girl seized a stick, and gave him such a blow with it on the

head, that he dropped down dead on the spot. Then Grannonia took some of

his blood and poured it into her little bottle, and went on her way as

fast as she could to Vallone Grosso.

When she arrived there she went straight to the Royal palace, and let

the King be told she had come to cure the young Prince.

The King commanded her to be brought before him at once, and was much

astonished when he saw that it was a girl who undertook to do what all

the cleverest doctors of his kingdom had failed in. As an attempt hurts

no one, he willingly consented that she should do what she could.

'All I ask,' said Grannonia, 'is that, should I succeed in what you

desire, you will give me your son in marriage.'

The King, who had given up all hopes of his son's recovery, replied:

'Only restore him to life and health and he shall be yours. It is only

fair to give her a husband who gives me a son.'

And so they went into the Prince's room. The moment Grannonia had rubbed

the blood on his wounds the illness left him, and he was as sound and

well as ever. When the King saw his son thus marvellously restored to

life and health, he turned to him and said: 'My dear son, I thought of

you as dead, and now, to my great joy and amazement, you are alive

again. I promised this young woman that if she should cure you, to

bestow your hand and heart on her, and seeing that Heaven has been

gracious, you must fulfil the promise I made her; for gratitude alone

forces me to pay this debt.'

But the Prince answered: 'My lord and father, I would that my will were

as free as my love for you is great. But as I have plighted my word to

another maiden, you will see yourself, and so will this young woman,

that I cannot go back from my word, and be faithless to her whom I

love.'

When Grannonia heard these words, and saw how deeply rooted the Prince's

love for her was, she felt very happy, and blushing rosy red, she said:

'But should I get the other lady to give up her rights, would you then

consent to marry me?'

'Far be it from me,' replied the Prince, 'to banish the beautiful

picture of my love from my heart. Whatever she may say, my heart and

desire will remain the same, and though I were to lose my life for it,

I couldn't consent to this exchange.'

Grannonia could keep silence no longer, and throwing off her peasant's

disguise, she discovered herself to the Prince, who was nearly beside

himself with joy when he recognised his fair lady-love. He then told his

father at once who she was, and what she had done and suffered for his

sake.

Then they invited the King and Queen of Starza-Longa to their Court, and

had a great wedding feast, and proved once more that there is no better

seasoning for the joys of true love than a few pangs of grief.

Kletke.


Story DNA

Moral

True love can overcome any obstacle, and sometimes, suffering deepens joy.

Plot Summary

A childless peasant woman adopts a talking snake, who later desires to marry a Princess. The snake, through magic, fulfills the King's impossible tasks to win his daughter's hand. After marrying, the snake transforms into a handsome Prince, but the Princess's parents burn his shed skin, causing him to turn into a wounded dove and fly away. The Princess, Grannonia, embarks on a quest, aided by a talking fox, to find and cure her enchanted Prince. She eventually succeeds, revealing her identity to the Prince, and they marry, overcoming all obstacles through perseverance and true love.

Themes

love and devotionperseveranceappearance vs. realityfate and destiny

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three (King's tasks), dramatic irony (parents' actions), personification (fox, birds)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural (curse) and person vs person (King's demands, parents' interference)
Ending: happy
Magic: talking animals (snake, fox, birds), transformation (snake to prince, prince to dove, prince cured), enchanted objects (snake skin), magical tasks (palace, garden transformations), magical cure (blood of birds and fox)
the snake (disguise, hidden nobility)the snake skin (the curse, the barrier to true form)the dove (vulnerability, escape, wounded love)the fox (cunning, guide, sacrifice)

Cultural Context

Origin: Italian (Sicilian, likely, given names like Sabatella, Cola-Mattheo, Grannonia, Vallone Grosso, Starza-Longa)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Andrew Lang collected this tale, likely from an Italian source. The names and specific magical elements (St. John's Wort) ground it in a European folk tradition.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. A childless peasant woman, Sabatella, adopts a talking snake found by her husband, Cola-Mattheo.
  2. The snake grows and asks Cola-Mattheo to arrange his marriage to the King's daughter.
  3. The King, thinking Cola-Mattheo a fool, sets three impossible tasks for the snake: turn the palace to ivory and gold, turn garden paths to gold, and turn garden trees/fruit to precious stones.
  4. The snake, through magical instructions given to Cola-Mattheo, accomplishes all three tasks, amazing the King.
  5. The Princess Grannonia reluctantly agrees to marry the snake, accepting her fate.
  6. The snake arrives at the palace, terrifying everyone except Grannonia, and takes her to a room.
  7. Inside the room, the snake sheds its skin and transforms into a handsome young Prince.
  8. The King and Queen, peeking through the keyhole, see the Prince and the discarded snake skin, and burn the skin.
  9. Burning the skin causes the Prince to turn into a wounded dove and fly away, leaving Grannonia distraught.
  10. Grannonia, blaming her parents, disguises herself as a peasant and leaves the palace to find her lost love.
  11. She meets a talking fox who reveals the Prince's curse (seven years as a snake by an enchantress) and the cure (blood of specific birds and the fox's own blood).
  12. The fox catches the birds, but then tries to trick Grannonia into needing his blood; Grannonia outwits and kills the fox to obtain his blood.
  13. Grannonia arrives at the Prince's kingdom, offers to cure him, and demands his hand in marriage as payment.
  14. The Prince, cured by Grannonia, initially refuses to marry her, stating his loyalty to the Princess he loves (Grannonia herself).
  15. Grannonia reveals her identity, and the Prince, overjoyed, marries her, with both families celebrating their union.

Characters

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Sabatella

human adult female

Poor peasant woman

Attire: Simple, practical peasant dress of the time

Longing gaze towards an empty cradle

Kind, maternal

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Cola-Mattheo

human adult male

Simple peasant

Attire: Rough peasant clothing

Carrying a bundle of brushwood

Simple-minded, obedient

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The Snake

magical creature ageless male

Initially a pretty little snake, later a handsome prince

Attire: As a prince: fine royal garments

Emerald green snake with intelligent eyes

Resourceful, determined, loving

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The King

human adult male

Powerful, regal

Attire: Richly adorned royal robes

Rubbing his chin in contemplation while seated on his throne

Skeptical, reluctant, eventually yielding

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Grannonia

human young adult female

Beautiful princess

Attire: Initially, princess gowns; later, peasant disguise

Holding a vial of blood, determined expression

Brave, resourceful, cunning, loving

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The Fox

animal adult male

Wily fox

Fox with blood dripping from its jaws

Wily, greedy, ultimately outsmarted

Locations

Poor Woman's House

indoor

A humble dwelling with a small hole for the snake's bed.

Mood: simple, nurturing

The snake is taken in and cared for, beginning his transformation.

small hole food twigs

King's Palace

outdoor morning

Initially a standard palace, transformed into ivory inlaid with gold and silver, and later surrounded by a garden with golden paths and walls, and trees bearing precious stones.

Mood: magical, opulent, dazzling

The snake performs impossible tasks to win the princess's hand.

ivory walls gold and silver inlay golden paths trees with precious stones garden

Wood

outdoor morning

A forest where Cola-Mattheo gathers brushwood and herbs.

Mood: natural, quiet

Cola-Mattheo gathers the items needed to transform the palace.

brushwood green herbs St. John's Wort rosemary

Big Tree

outdoor night

A large tree with many branches where the little birds roost at night.

Mood: peaceful, dark

The fox climbs the tree and catches the birds for their blood.

branches little birds leaves

Prince's Room in the Royal Palace of Vallone Grosso

indoor

The room where the wounded Prince lies ill, later healed by Grannonia.

Mood: sickly, hopeful, miraculous

Grannonia heals the Prince and reveals her true identity.

wounds bed blood