The Enchanted Watch

by Andrew Lang · from The Green Fairy Book

fairy tale transformation whimsical Ages 8-14 1798 words 8 min read
Cover: The Enchanted Watch
Original Story 1798 words · 8 min read

THE ENCHANTED WATCH

Once upon a time there lived a rich man who had three sons. When they

grew up, he sent the eldest to travel and see the world, and three years

passed before his family saw him again. Then he returned, magnificently

dressed, and his father was so delighted with his behaviour, that he

gave a great feast in his honour, to which all the relations and friends

were invited.

When the rejoicings were ended, the second son begged leave of his

father to go in his turn to travel and mix with the world. The father

was enchanted at the request, and gave him plenty of money for his

expenses, saying, 'If you behave as well as your brother, I will do

honour to you as I did to him.' The young man promised to do his best,

and his conduct during three years was all that it should be. Then he

went home, and his father was so pleased with him that his feast of

welcome was even more splendid than the one before.

The third brother, whose name was Jenik, or Johnnie, was considered the

most foolish of the three. He never did anything at home except sit over

the stove and dirty himself with the ashes; but he also begged his

father's leave to travel for three years. 'Go if you like, you idiot;

but what good will it do you?'

The youth paid no heed to his father's observations as long as he

obtained permission to go. The father saw him depart with joy, glad to

get rid of him, and gave him a handsome sum of money for his needs.

Once, as he was making one of his journeys, Jenik chanced to cross a

meadow where some shepherds were just about to kill a dog. He entreated

them to spare it, and to give it to him instead, which they willingly

did, and he went on his way, followed by the dog. A little further on he

came upon a cat, which someone was going to put to death. He implored

its life, and the cat followed him. Finally, in another place, he saved

a serpent, which was also handed over to him, and now they made a party

of four--the dog behind Jenik, the cat behind the dog, and the serpent

behind the cat.

Then the serpent said to Jenik, 'Go wherever you see me go,' for in the

autumn, when all the serpents hide themselves in their holes, this

serpent was going in search of his king, who was king of all the snakes.

Then he added: 'My king will scold me for my long absence, everyone else

is housed for the winter, and I am very late. I shall have to tell him

what danger I have been in, and how, without your help, I should

certainly have lost my life. The king will ask what you would like in

return, and be sure you beg for the watch which hangs on the wall. It

has all sorts of wonderful properties, you only need to rub it to get

whatever you like.'

[Illustration]

No sooner said than done. Jenik became the master of the watch, and the

moment he got out he wished to put its virtues to the proof. He was

hungry, and thought it would be delightful to eat in the meadow a loaf

of new bread and a steak of good beef washed down by a flask of wine, so

he scratched the watch, and in an instant it was all before him. Imagine

his joy!

Evening soon came, and Jenik rubbed his watch, and thought it would be

very pleasant to have a room with a comfortable bed and a good supper.

In an instant they were all before him. After supper he went to bed and

slept till morning, as every honest man ought to do. Then he set forth

for his father's house, his mind dwelling on the feast that would be

awaiting him. But as he returned in the same old clothes in which he

went away, his father flew into a great rage, and refused to do anything

for him. Jenik went to his old place near the stove, and dirtied himself

in the ashes without anybody minding.

The third day, feeling rather dull, he thought it would be nice to see a

three-story house filled with beautiful furniture, and with vessels of

silver and gold. So he rubbed the watch, and there it all was. Jenik

went to look for his father, and said to him: 'You offered me no feast

of welcome, but permit me to give one to you, and come and let me show

you my plate.'

The father was much astonished, and longed to know where his son had got

all this wealth. Jenik did not reply, but begged him to invite all their

relations and friends to a grand banquet.

So the father invited all the world, and everyone was amazed to see such

splendid things, so much plate, and so many fine dishes on the table.

After the first course Jenik prayed his father to invite the King, and

his daughter the Princess. He rubbed his watch and wished for a carriage

ornamented with gold and silver, and drawn by six horses, with harness

glittering with precious stones. The father did not dare to sit in this

gorgeous coach, but went to the palace on foot. The King and his

daughter were immensely surprised with the beauty of the carriage, and

mounted the steps at once to go to Jenik's banquet. Then Jenik rubbed

his watch afresh, and wished that for six miles the way to the house

should be paved with marble. Who ever felt so astonished as the King?

Never had he travelled over such a gorgeous road.

When Jenik heard the wheels of the carriage, he rubbed his watch and

wished for a still more beautiful house, four stories high, and hung

with gold, silver, and damask; filled with wonderful tables, covered

with dishes such as no king had ever eaten before. The King, the Queen,

and the Princess were speechless with surprise. Never had they seen such

a splendid palace, nor such a high feast! At dessert the King asked

Jenik's father to give him the young man for a son-in-law. No sooner

said than done! The marriage took place at once, and the King returned

to his own palace, and left Jenik with his wife in the enchanted house.

Now Jenik was not a very clever man, and at the end of a very short time

he began to bore his wife. She inquired how he managed to build palaces

and to get so many precious things. He told her all about the watch, and

she never rested till she had stolen the precious talisman. One night

she took the watch, rubbed it, and wished for a carriage drawn by four

horses; and in this carriage she at once set out for her father's

palace. There she called to her own attendants, bade them follow her

into the carriage, and drove straight to the sea-side. Then she rubbed

her watch, and wished that the sea might be crossed by a bridge, and

that a magnificent palace might arise in the middle of the sea. No

sooner said than done. The Princess entered the house, rubbed her watch,

and in an instant the bridge was gone.

Left alone, Jenik felt very miserable. His father, mother, and brothers,

and, indeed, everybody else, all laughed at him. Nothing remained to him

but the cat and dog whose lives he had once saved. He took them with him

and went far away, for he could no longer live with his family. He

reached at last a great desert, and saw some crows flying towards a

mountain. One of them was a long way behind, and when he arrived his

brothers inquired what had made him so late. 'Winter is here,' they

said, 'and it is time to fly to other countries.' He told them that he

had seen in the middle of the sea the most wonderful house that ever was

built.

On hearing this, Jenik at once concluded that this must be the

hiding-place of his wife. So he proceeded directly to the shore with his

dog and his cat. When he arrived on the beach, he said to the dog: 'You

are an excellent swimmer, and you, little one, are very light; jump on

the dog's back and he will take you to the palace. Once there, he will

hide himself near the door, and you must steal secretly in and try to

get hold of my watch.'

No sooner said than done. The two animals crossed the sea; the dog hid

near the house, and the cat stole into the chamber. The Princess

recognised him, and guessed why he had come; and she took the watch down

to the cellar and locked it in a box. But the cat wriggled its way into

the cellar, and the moment the Princess turned her back, he scratched

and scratched till he had made a hole in the box. Then he took the watch

between his teeth, and waited quietly till the Princess came back.

Scarcely had she opened the door when the cat was outside, and the

watch into the bargain.

The cat was no sooner beyond the gates than she said to the dog:

'We are going to cross the sea; be very careful not to speak to me.'

The dog laid this to heart and said nothing; but when they approached

the shore he could not help asking, 'Have you got the watch?'

The cat did not answer--he was afraid that he might let the talisman

fall. When they touched the shore the dog repeated his question.

'Yes,' said the cat.

And the watch fell into the sea. Then our two friends began each to

accuse the other, and both looked sorrowfully at the place where their

treasure had fallen in. Suddenly a fish appeared near the edge of the

sea. The cat seized it, and thought it would make them a good supper.

'I have nine little children,' cried the fish. 'Spare the father of a

family!'

'Granted,' replied the cat; 'but on condition that you find our watch.'

The fish executed his commission, and they brought the treasure back to

their master. Jenik rubbed the watch and wished that the palace, with

the Princess and all its inhabitants, should be swallowed up in the sea.

No sooner said than done. Jenik returned to his parents, and he and his

watch, his cat and his dog, lived together happily to the end of their

days.

Deulin.


Story DNA

Moral

Kindness, even to the lowliest creatures, can lead to unexpected rewards, and those who are underestimated may possess hidden strengths.

Plot Summary

Jenik, the youngest and most underestimated of three brothers, saves a dog, cat, and serpent during his travels. In gratitude, the serpent helps him acquire an enchanted watch that grants wishes. Jenik uses the watch to become wealthy and marry a Princess, but she tricks him, steals the watch, and flees to a palace in the sea. With the help of his loyal dog and cat, Jenik retrieves the watch, then uses its power to destroy the Princess and her palace, returning home to live happily ever after.

Themes

underestimated potentialkindness rewardedthe dangers of revealing secretsjustice/revenge

Emotional Arc

humiliation to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three, direct address to reader (e.g., 'Imagine his joy!')

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person (Jenik vs. Princess), person vs society (Jenik vs. family's low expectations)
Ending: moral justice
Magic: enchanted watch (wish-granting talisman), talking animals, instantaneous creation of objects/structures, magical bridge creation/disappearance
the enchanted watch (power, desire, temptation)the stove/ashes (humiliation, low status)the animals (loyalty, unexpected aid)

Cultural Context

Origin: Slavic (implied by name 'Jenik' and 'Deulin' attribution, likely French retelling of a Slavic tale)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Andrew Lang was a Scottish poet and folklorist who compiled many fairy tales from various cultures, often adapting them for an English-speaking audience. 'Deulin' likely refers to Charles Deulin, a French folklorist.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. A rich man's two elder sons travel, return successful, and are celebrated with feasts.
  2. The youngest son, Jenik, considered foolish, also asks to travel and is reluctantly given permission and money.
  3. During his travels, Jenik saves a dog, a cat, and a serpent from being killed.
  4. The grateful serpent leads Jenik to its king and instructs him to ask for an enchanted watch that grants wishes.
  5. Jenik obtains the watch and immediately uses it to conjure food and shelter, testing its power.
  6. Jenik returns home in his old clothes, is scorned by his father, and retreats to the stove.
  7. Jenik uses the watch to create a three-story house with treasures and invites his family to a grand banquet.
  8. Jenik further impresses everyone by inviting the King and Princess, creating a lavish carriage and a marble road, and conjuring an even grander palace and feast.
  9. The King, impressed, arranges for Jenik to marry the Princess, and they live in the enchanted palace.
  10. The Princess, bored, tricks Jenik into revealing the watch's secret, then steals it and uses it to create a palace in the middle of the sea, destroying the bridge behind her.
  11. Jenik, abandoned and mocked, takes his dog and cat and sets out to find his wife, learning of her location from crows.
  12. Jenik sends the dog and cat to retrieve the watch; the cat cleverly navigates the palace, finds the watch locked in a cellar, and scratches it out of a box.
  13. During the return journey across the sea, the dog's question causes the cat to drop the watch, but a fish, whose life the cat spared, retrieves it.
  14. Jenik recovers the watch and uses it to make the Princess and her palace disappear into the sea.
  15. Jenik returns to his parents and lives happily ever after with his watch, dog, and cat.

Characters

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Jenik

human young adult male

Initially described as dirty from sitting by the stove, later capable of great splendor.

Attire: Starts in simple, ash-covered clothes, but later wears magnificent attire befitting his magically-created wealth.

Ash-covered face transforming into a regal visage.

Initially seen as foolish, but proves to be kind-hearted (saving the animals) and resourceful.

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The Father

human adult male

Rich and presumably well-dressed.

Attire: Fine clothes appropriate to a wealthy man of the time.

Beaming with pride at his eldest sons, then shocked at Jenik's transformation.

Materialistic, easily impressed by outward appearances, and initially dismissive of Jenik.

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The Princess

human young adult female

Beautiful, as befitting a princess.

Attire: Elegant gowns and jewels, reflecting her royal status.

Sneaking away with the enchanted watch.

Greedy, manipulative, and ultimately treacherous.

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The Dog

animal adult male

Strong swimmer.

Attire: None.

Swimming across the sea with the cat on its back.

Loyal, obedient, but prone to speaking without thinking.

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The Cat

animal adult female

Small and agile.

Attire: None.

Slipping into the cellar to steal the watch.

Clever, stealthy, and resourceful.

Locations

Meadow

outdoor Implied to be temperate, suitable for grazing animals

A grassy field where shepherds were about to kill a dog. Later, Jenik enjoys a meal of bread, beef, and wine here.

Mood: Initially threatening, then peaceful and pleasant

Jenik saves the dog, cat, and serpent. He later uses the watch to conjure a meal.

grass shepherds dog loaf of bread steak wine flask

Jenik's Three-Story House

indoor Not specified, but implied to be comfortable

A lavish house filled with beautiful furniture, vessels of silver and gold, and fine dishes.

Mood: Opulent, astonishing, impressive

Jenik hosts a grand banquet to impress his father and the King.

furniture silver vessels gold vessels fine dishes banquet table

Marble Road

transitional Not specified

A six-mile stretch of road paved with marble.

Mood: Gorgeous, astonishing

Jenik creates the road to impress the King and Princess on their way to the banquet.

marble road carriage

Palace in the Middle of the Sea

indoor Not specified

A magnificent palace built in the middle of the sea, accessible by a bridge. Later swallowed by the sea.

Mood: Isolated, luxurious, ultimately doomed

The Princess hides the watch here; the cat retrieves it; the palace is destroyed.

palace bridge sea cellar

Desert Shore

outdoor Dry, arid

A desolate beach where Jenik and his animals arrive after being abandoned by his wife.

Mood: Desolate, hopeless

The cat drops the watch into the sea; a fish retrieves it.

sand sea fish