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The enchanted watch

by Andrew Lang

The enchanted watch

Jenik's Magic Watch

CEFR A1 Age 5 499 words 3 min Canon 100/100

Once, a kind boy named Jenik lived. He had two brothers. They traveled far. They came home rich. Their father was very happy.

Jenik wanted to travel too. His father said, "Go, you foolish boy." He gave Jenik some money.

Jenik walked and walked. He saw a dog in danger. "Please, do not hurt him," said Jenik. He saved the dog. He saw a cat in danger. He saved the cat. He saw a little snake in danger. He saved the snake.

The snake was happy. "Come with me," it said. The snake-king lived under the ground. "Thank you for helping," said the king. "Ask for a gift." Jenik saw a magic watch on the wall. "I want that watch," he said. The king gave it to him. "Rub it and wish," said the snake.

Jenik was hungry. He rubbed the magic watch. "I wish for bread and meat," he wished. Can you believe it? The food appeared! He wished for a bed. A soft bed appeared.

Jenik went home. His old clothes were dirty. His father was not happy. "You look poor," he said. Jenik sat by the stove.

Jenik felt a little sad. He rubbed the magic watch. "I wish for a big house," he wished. A big, beautiful house appeared! "Come see my house!" he told his family. They were very surprised.

Jenik wished for fancy things. He wished for a coach. He wished for a pretty road. The King and the Princess came to visit. They were amazed. The King was very impressed.

The King said, "You can marry my daughter!" Jenik and the Princess were happy. They lived in the magic house.

The Princess wanted the magic watch. "Tell me your secret," she said. Jenik told her. One night, she took the watch. She wished for a coach. She drove far away. She wished for a palace in the sea. She went inside.

Jenik was left alone. He was sad. He had his Dog and his Cat. Birds told him where the Princess went. "To the palace in the sea," they said.

Jenik went to the sea. "Get my watch back," he told his friends. Dog swam across the sea. Cat rode on his back. Cat saw a fish in a net. Cat set the fish free. Cat went into the palace. The watch was in a box. Cat scratched the box. He got the watch!

Cat and Dog swam back. "Do you have it?" asked Dog. "Yes!" said Cat. Oops! The watch fell into the water. They felt very bad.

A little fish swam up. It was the fish Cat helped! "I will find your watch," said the fish. The fish found the watch! It gave the watch to Cat.

Jenik got his magic watch back. He rubbed it. "I wish my Princess home," he wished. The Princess appeared. She said she was sorry. They were friends again.

Jenik, Dog, and Cat lived happily. They were always kind. And they were always friends.

Original Story 1798 words · 8 min read

_THE ENCHANTED WATCH_ Once upon a time there lived a rich man who had three sons. When they grew up, he sent the eldest to travel and see the world, and three years passed before his family saw him again. Then he returned, magnificently dressed, and his father was so delighted with his behaviour, that he gave a great feast in his honour, to which all the relations and friends were invited. When the rejoicings were ended, the second son begged leave of his father to go in his turn to travel and mix with the world. The father was enchanted at the request, and gave him plenty of money for his expenses, saying, 'If you behave as well as your brother, I will do honour to you as I did to him.' The young man promised to do his best, and his conduct during three years was all that it should be. Then he went home, and his father was so pleased with him that his feast of welcome was even more splendid than the one before. The third brother, whose name was Jenik, or Johnnie, was considered the most foolish of the three. He never did anything at home except sit over the stove and dirty himself with the ashes; but he also begged his father's leave to travel for three years. 'Go if you like, you idiot; but what good will it do you?' The youth paid no heed to his father's observations as long as he obtained permission to go. The father saw him depart with joy, glad to get rid of him, and gave him a handsome sum of money for his needs. Once, as he was making one of his journeys, Jenik chanced to cross a meadow where some shepherds were just about to kill a dog. He entreated them to spare it, and to give it to him instead, which they willingly did, and he went on his way, followed by the dog. A little further on he came upon a cat, which someone was going to put to death. He implored its life, and the cat followed him. Finally, in another place, he saved a serpent, which was also handed over to him, and now they made a party of four--the dog behind Jenik, the cat behind the dog, and the serpent behind the cat. Then the serpent said to Jenik, 'Go wherever you see me go,' for in the autumn, when all the serpents hide themselves in their holes, this serpent was going in search of his king, who was king of all the snakes. Then he added: 'My king will scold me for my long absence, everyone else is housed for the winter, and I am very late. I shall have to tell him what danger I have been in, and how, without your help, I should certainly have lost my life. The king will ask what you would like in return, and be sure you beg for the watch which hangs on the wall. It has all sorts of wonderful properties, you only need to rub it to get whatever you like.' [Illustration] No sooner said than done. Jenik became the master of the watch, and the moment he got out he wished to put its virtues to the proof. He was hungry, and thought it would be delightful to eat in the meadow a loaf of new bread and a steak of good beef washed down by a flask of wine, so he scratched the watch, and in an instant it was all before him. Imagine his joy! Evening soon came, and Jenik rubbed his watch, and thought it would be very pleasant to have a room with a comfortable bed and a good supper. In an instant they were all before him. After supper he went to bed and slept till morning, as every honest man ought to do. Then he set forth for his father's house, his mind dwelling on the feast that would be awaiting him. But as he returned in the same old clothes in which he went away, his father flew into a great rage, and refused to do anything for him. Jenik went to his old place near the stove, and dirtied himself in the ashes without anybody minding. The third day, feeling rather dull, he thought it would be nice to see a three-story house filled with beautiful furniture, and with vessels of silver and gold. So he rubbed the watch, and there it all was. Jenik went to look for his father, and said to him: 'You offered me no feast of welcome, but permit me to give one to you, and come and let me show you my plate.' The father was much astonished, and longed to know where his son had got all this wealth. Jenik did not reply, but begged him to invite all their relations and friends to a grand banquet. So the father invited all the world, and everyone was amazed to see such splendid things, so much plate, and so many fine dishes on the table. After the first course Jenik prayed his father to invite the King, and his daughter the Princess. He rubbed his watch and wished for a carriage ornamented with gold and silver, and drawn by six horses, with harness glittering with precious stones. The father did not dare to sit in this gorgeous coach, but went to the palace on foot. The King and his daughter were immensely surprised with the beauty of the carriage, and mounted the steps at once to go to Jenik's banquet. Then Jenik rubbed his watch afresh, and wished that for six miles the way to the house should be paved with marble. Who ever felt so astonished as the King? Never had he travelled over such a gorgeous road. When Jenik heard the wheels of the carriage, he rubbed his watch and wished for a still more beautiful house, four stories high, and hung with gold, silver, and damask; filled with wonderful tables, covered with dishes such as no king had ever eaten before. The King, the Queen, and the Princess were speechless with surprise. Never had they seen such a splendid palace, nor such a high feast! At dessert the King asked Jenik's father to give him the young man for a son-in-law. No sooner said than done! The marriage took place at once, and the King returned to his own palace, and left Jenik with his wife in the enchanted house. Now Jenik was not a very clever man, and at the end of a very short time he began to bore his wife. She inquired how he managed to build palaces and to get so many precious things. He told her all about the watch, and she never rested till she had stolen the precious talisman. One night she took the watch, rubbed it, and wished for a carriage drawn by four horses; and in this carriage she at once set out for her father's palace. There she called to her own attendants, bade them follow her into the carriage, and drove straight to the sea-side. Then she rubbed her watch, and wished that the sea might be crossed by a bridge, and that a magnificent palace might arise in the middle of the sea. No sooner said than done. The Princess entered the house, rubbed her watch, and in an instant the bridge was gone. Left alone, Jenik felt very miserable. His father, mother, and brothers, and, indeed, everybody else, all laughed at him. Nothing remained to him but the cat and dog whose lives he had once saved. He took them with him and went far away, for he could no longer live with his family. He reached at last a great desert, and saw some crows flying towards a mountain. One of them was a long way behind, and when he arrived his brothers inquired what had made him so late. 'Winter is here,' they said, 'and it is time to fly to other countries.' He told them that he had seen in the middle of the sea the most wonderful house that ever was built. On hearing this, Jenik at once concluded that this must be the hiding-place of his wife. So he proceeded directly to the shore with his dog and his cat. When he arrived on the beach, he said to the dog: 'You are an excellent swimmer, and you, little one, are very light; jump on the dog's back and he will take you to the palace. Once there, he will hide himself near the door, and you must steal secretly in and try to get hold of my watch.' No sooner said than done. The two animals crossed the sea; the dog hid near the house, and the cat stole into the chamber. The Princess recognised him, and guessed why he had come; and she took the watch down to the cellar and locked it in a box. But the cat wriggled its way into the cellar, and the moment the Princess turned her back, he scratched and scratched till he had made a hole in the box. Then he took the watch between his teeth, and waited quietly till the Princess came back. Scarcely had she opened the door when the cat was outside, and the watch into the bargain. The cat was no sooner beyond the gates than she said to the dog: 'We are going to cross the sea; be very careful not to speak to me.' The dog laid this to heart and said nothing; but when they approached the shore he could not help asking, 'Have you got the watch?' The cat did not answer--he was afraid that he might let the talisman fall. When they touched the shore the dog repeated his question. 'Yes,' said the cat. And the watch fell into the sea. Then our two friends began each to accuse the other, and both looked sorrowfully at the place where their treasure had fallen in. Suddenly a fish appeared near the edge of the sea. The cat seized it, and thought it would make them a good supper. 'I have nine little children,' cried the fish. 'Spare the father of a family!' 'Granted,' replied the cat; 'but on condition that you find our watch.' The fish executed his commission, and they brought the treasure back to their master. Jenik rubbed the watch and wished that the palace, with the Princess and all its inhabitants, should be swallowed up in the sea. No sooner said than done. Jenik returned to his parents, and he and his watch, his cat and his dog, lived together happily to the end of their days. Deulin.

Moral of the Story

Kindness, even to the lowliest creatures, can lead to unexpected rewards, and those who are underestimated may possess hidden strengths.


Characters 5 characters

Jenik ★ protagonist

human young adult male

Initially described as dirty from sitting by the stove, later capable of great splendor.

Attire: Starts in simple, ash-covered clothes, but later wears magnificent attire befitting his magically-created wealth.

Initially seen as foolish, but proves to be kind-hearted (saving the animals) and resourceful.

The Father ◆ supporting

human adult male

Rich and presumably well-dressed.

Attire: Fine clothes appropriate to a wealthy man of the time.

Materialistic, easily impressed by outward appearances, and initially dismissive of Jenik.

The Princess ⚔ antagonist

human young adult female

Beautiful, as befitting a princess.

Attire: Elegant gowns and jewels, reflecting her royal status.

Greedy, manipulative, and ultimately treacherous.

The Dog ◆ supporting

animal adult male

Strong swimmer.

Attire: None.

Loyal, obedient, but prone to speaking without thinking.

The Cat ◆ supporting

animal adult female

Small and agile.

Attire: None.

Clever, stealthy, and resourceful.

Locations 5 locations
Meadow

Meadow

outdoor Implied to be temperate, suitable for grazing animals

A grassy field where shepherds were about to kill a dog. Later, Jenik enjoys a meal of bread, beef, and wine here.

Mood: Initially threatening, then peaceful and pleasant

Jenik saves the dog, cat, and serpent. He later uses the watch to conjure a meal.

grassshepherdsdogloaf of breadsteakwine flask
Jenik's Three-Story House

Jenik's Three-Story House

indoor Not specified, but implied to be comfortable

A lavish house filled with beautiful furniture, vessels of silver and gold, and fine dishes.

Mood: Opulent, astonishing, impressive

Jenik hosts a grand banquet to impress his father and the King.

furnituresilver vesselsgold vesselsfine dishesbanquet table
Marble Road

Marble Road

transitional Not specified

A six-mile stretch of road paved with marble.

Mood: Gorgeous, astonishing

Jenik creates the road to impress the King and Princess on their way to the banquet.

marbleroadcarriage
Palace in the Middle of the Sea

Palace in the Middle of the Sea

indoor Not specified

A magnificent palace built in the middle of the sea, accessible by a bridge. Later swallowed by the sea.

Mood: Isolated, luxurious, ultimately doomed

The Princess hides the watch here; the cat retrieves it; the palace is destroyed.

palacebridgeseacellar
Desert Shore

Desert Shore

outdoor Dry, arid

A desolate beach where Jenik and his animals arrive after being abandoned by his wife.

Mood: Desolate, hopeless

The cat drops the watch into the sea; a fish retrieves it.

sandseafish

Story DNA fairy tale · whimsical

Moral

Kindness, even to the lowliest creatures, can lead to unexpected rewards, and those who are underestimated may possess hidden strengths.

Plot Summary

Jenik, the youngest and most underestimated of three brothers, saves a dog, cat, and serpent during his travels. In gratitude, the serpent helps him acquire an enchanted watch that grants wishes. Jenik uses the watch to become wealthy and marry a Princess, but she tricks him, steals the watch, and flees to a palace in the sea. With the help of his loyal dog and cat, Jenik retrieves the watch, then uses its power to destroy the Princess and her palace, returning home to live happily ever after.

Themes

underestimated potentialkindness rewardedthe dangers of revealing secretsjustice/revenge

Emotional Arc

humiliation to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three, direct address to reader (e.g., 'Imagine his joy!')

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person (Jenik vs. Princess), person vs society (Jenik vs. family's low expectations)
Ending: moral justice
Magic: enchanted watch (wish-granting talisman), talking animals, instantaneous creation of objects/structures, magical bridge creation/disappearance
the enchanted watch (power, desire, temptation)the stove/ashes (humiliation, low status)the animals (loyalty, unexpected aid)

Cultural Context

Origin: Slavic (implied by name 'Jenik' and 'Deulin' attribution, likely French retelling of a Slavic tale)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Andrew Lang was a Scottish poet and folklorist who compiled many fairy tales from various cultures, often adapting them for an English-speaking audience. 'Deulin' likely refers to Charles Deulin, a French folklorist.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. A rich man's two elder sons travel, return successful, and are celebrated with feasts.
  2. The youngest son, Jenik, considered foolish, also asks to travel and is reluctantly given permission and money.
  3. During his travels, Jenik saves a dog, a cat, and a serpent from being killed.
  4. The grateful serpent leads Jenik to its king and instructs him to ask for an enchanted watch that grants wishes.
  5. Jenik obtains the watch and immediately uses it to conjure food and shelter, testing its power.
  6. Jenik returns home in his old clothes, is scorned by his father, and retreats to the stove.
  7. Jenik uses the watch to create a three-story house with treasures and invites his family to a grand banquet.
  8. Jenik further impresses everyone by inviting the King and Princess, creating a lavish carriage and a marble road, and conjuring an even grander palace and feast.
  9. The King, impressed, arranges for Jenik to marry the Princess, and they live in the enchanted palace.
  10. The Princess, bored, tricks Jenik into revealing the watch's secret, then steals it and uses it to create a palace in the middle of the sea, destroying the bridge behind her.
  11. Jenik, abandoned and mocked, takes his dog and cat and sets out to find his wife, learning of her location from crows.
  12. Jenik sends the dog and cat to retrieve the watch; the cat cleverly navigates the palace, finds the watch locked in a cellar, and scratches it out of a box.
  13. During the return journey across the sea, the dog's question causes the cat to drop the watch, but a fish, whose life the cat spared, retrieves it.
  14. Jenik recovers the watch and uses it to make the Princess and her palace disappear into the sea.
  15. Jenik returns to his parents and lives happily ever after with his watch, dog, and cat.

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