The Half-chick

by Andrew Lang · from The Green Fairy Book

fairy tale cautionary tale solemn Ages 8-14 1497 words 7 min read
Cover: The Half-chick
Original Story 1497 words · 7 min read

THE HALF-CHICK

Once upon a time there was a handsome black Spanish hen, who had a large

brood of chickens. They were all fine, plump little birds, except the

youngest, who was quite unlike his brothers and sisters. Indeed, he was

such a strange, queer-looking creature, that when he first chipped his

shell his mother could scarcely believe her eyes, he was so different

from the twelve other fluffy, downy, soft little chicks who nestled

under her wings. This one looked just as if he had been cut in two. He

had only one leg, and one wing, and one eye, and he had half a head and

half a beak. His mother shook her head sadly as she looked at him and

said:

'My youngest born is only a half-chick. He can never grow up a tall

handsome cock like his brothers. They will go out into the world and

rule over poultry yards of their own; but this poor little fellow will

always have to stay at home with his mother.' And she called him Medio

Pollito, which is Spanish for half-chick.

Now though Medio Pollito was such an odd, helpless-looking little thing,

his mother soon found that he was not at all willing to remain under her

wing and protection. Indeed, in character he was as unlike his brothers

and sisters as he was in appearance. They were good, obedient chickens,

and when the old hen chicked after them, they chirped and ran back to

her side. But Medio Pollito had a roving spirit in spite of his one leg,

and when his mother called to him to return to the coop, he pretended

that he could not hear, because he had only one ear.

When she took the whole family out for a walk in the fields, Medio

Pollito would hop away by himself, and hide among the Indian corn. Many

an anxious minute his brothers and sisters had looking for him, while

his mother ran to and fro cackling in fear and dismay.

As he grew older he became more self-willed and disobedient, and his

manner to his mother was often very rude, and his temper to the other

chickens very disagreeable.

One day he had been out for a longer expedition than usual in the

fields. On his return he strutted up to his mother with the peculiar

little hop and kick which was his way of walking, and cocking his one

eye at her in a very bold way he said:

'Mother, I am tired of this life in a dull farmyard, with nothing but a

dreary maize field to look at. I'm off to Madrid to see the King.'

'To Madrid, Medio Pollito!' exclaimed his mother; 'why, you silly chick,

it would be a long journey for a grown-up cock, and a poor little thing

like you would be tired out before you had gone half the distance. No,

no, stay at home with your mother, and some day, when you are bigger, we

will go a little journey together.'

But Medio Pollito had made up his mind, and he would not listen to his

mother's advice, nor to the prayers and entreaties of his brothers and

sisters.

'What is the use of our all crowding each other up in this poky little

place?' he said. 'When I have a fine courtyard of my own at the King's

palace, I shall perhaps ask some of you to come and pay me a short

visit,' and scarcely waiting to say good-bye to his family, away he

stumped down the high road that led to Madrid.

'Be sure that you are kind and civil to everyone you meet,' called his

mother, running after him; but he was in such a hurry to be off, that he

did not wait to answer her, or even to look back.

A little later in the day, as he was taking a short cut through a field,

he passed a stream. Now the stream was all choked up, and overgrown with

weeds and water-plants, so that its waters could not flow freely.

'Oh! Medio Pollito,' it cried, as the half-chick hopped along its banks,

'do come and help me by clearing away these weeds.'

'Help you, indeed!' exclaimed Medio Pollito, tossing his head, and

shaking the few feathers in his tail. 'Do you think I have nothing to do

but to waste my time on such trifles? Help yourself, and don't trouble

busy travellers. I am off to Madrid to see the King,' and hoppity-kick,

hoppity-kick, away stumped Medio Pollito.

A little later he came to a fire that had been left by some gipsies in

a wood. It was burning very low, and would soon be out.

'Oh! Medio Pollito,' cried the fire, in a weak, wavering voice as the

half-chick approached, 'in a few minutes I shall go quite out, unless

you put some sticks and dry leaves upon me. Do help me, or I shall die!'

'Help you, indeed!' answered Medio Pollito. 'I have other things to do.

Gather sticks for yourself, and don't trouble me. I am off to Madrid to

see the King,' and hoppity-kick, hoppity-kick, away stumped Medio

Pollito.

The next morning, as he was getting near Madrid, he passed a large

chestnut tree, in whose branches the wind was caught and entangled. 'Oh!

Medio Pollito,' called the wind, 'do hop up here, and help me to get

free of these branches. I cannot come away, and it is so uncomfortable.'

'It is your own fault for going there,' answered Medio Pollito. 'I can't

waste all my morning stopping here to help you. Just shake yourself off,

and don't hinder me, for I am off to Madrid to see the King,' and

hoppity-kick, hoppity-kick, away stumped Medio Pollito in great glee,

for the towers and roofs of Madrid were now in sight. When he entered

the town he saw before him a great splendid house, with soldiers

standing before the gates. This he knew must be the King's palace, and

he determined to hop up to the front gate and wait there until the King

came out. But as he was hopping past one of the back windows the King's

cook saw him:

'Here is the very thing I want,' he exclaimed, 'for the King has just

sent a message to say that he must have chicken broth for his dinner,'

and opening the window he stretched out his arm, caught Medio Pollito,

and popped him into the broth-pot that was standing near the fire. Oh!

how wet and clammy the water felt as it went over Medio Pollito's head,

making his feathers cling to his side.

'Water, water!' he cried in his despair, 'do have pity upon me, and do

not wet me like this.'

'Ah! Medio Pollito,' replied the water, 'you would not help me when I

was a little stream away on the fields, now you must be punished.'

Then the fire began to burn and scald Medio Pollito, and he danced and

hopped from one side of the pot to the other, trying to get away from

the heat, and crying out in pain:

'Fire, fire! do not scorch me like this; you can't think how it hurts.'

'Ah! Medio Pollito,' answered the fire, 'you would not help me when I

was dying away in the wood. You are being punished.'

At last, just when the pain was so great that Medio Pollito thought he

must die, the cook lifted up the lid of the pot to see if the broth was

ready for the King's dinner.

'Look here!' he cried in horror, 'this chicken is quite useless.

It is burnt to a cinder. I can't send it up to the royal table;' and

opening the window he threw Medio Pollito out into the street. But the

wind caught him up, and whirled him through the air so quickly that

Medio Pollito could scarcely breathe, and his heart beat against his

side till he thought it would break.

[Illustration]

'Oh, wind!' at last he gasped out, 'if you hurry me along like this you

will kill me. Do let me rest a moment, or----' but he was so breathless

that he could not finish his sentence.

'Ah! Medio Pollito,' replied the wind, 'when I was caught in the

branches of the chestnut tree you would not help me; now you are

punished.' And he swirled Medio Pollito over the roofs of the houses

till they reached the highest church in the town, and there he left him

fastened to the top of the steeple.

And there stands Medio Pollito to this day. And if you go to Madrid, and

walk through the streets till you come to the highest church, you will

see Medio Pollito perched on his one leg on the steeple, with his one

wing drooping at his side, and gazing sadly out of his one eye over the

town.

Spanish Tradition.


Story DNA

Moral

Selfishness and a refusal to help others will eventually lead to one's own downfall and suffering.

Plot Summary

Medio Pollito, a disobedient and half-formed chick, leaves his home for Madrid against his mother's wishes. Along the way, he encounters a choked stream, a dying fire, and a trapped wind, refusing to help any of them. Upon reaching Madrid, he is caught by the King's cook and thrown into a pot, where the water and fire torment him, mirroring his earlier refusals. Finally, he is discarded and caught by the wind, which carries him to a church steeple, transforming him into a weathercock, forever stuck and gazing sadly over the city as a consequence of his selfishness.

Themes

consequences of selfishnessdisobedience and rebellionkarma and poetic justicepride and humility

Emotional Arc

pride to suffering

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: repetition of character's catchphrase, personification of natural elements, rule of three (encounters with elements)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs self
Ending: moral justice
Magic: talking animals, personified natural elements (stream, fire, wind), transformation (chick to weathercock)
Medio Pollito (symbol of selfishness and pride)The weathercock (symbol of eternal punishment and a warning)The journey to Madrid (symbol of ambition/escape)

Cultural Context

Origin: Spanish
Era: timeless fairy tale

The story reflects traditional values of obedience, community, and the consequences of pride, common in many European folk traditions.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. A black Spanish hen hatches a brood, including a strange, half-formed chick named Medio Pollito.
  2. Medio Pollito is disobedient and self-willed, ignoring his mother's calls and wandering off.
  3. He announces his intention to go to Madrid to see the King, despite his mother's warnings and family's pleas.
  4. Medio Pollito leaves, ignoring his mother's advice to be kind and civil.
  5. He encounters a choked stream and refuses to help clear its weeds, stating he's too busy for such trifles.
  6. He encounters a dying fire and refuses to add sticks, telling it to help itself.
  7. Near Madrid, he encounters the wind caught in a chestnut tree and refuses to free it, blaming the wind for its predicament.
  8. Upon arriving in Madrid, he is spotted by the King's cook, who needs a chicken for broth.
  9. Medio Pollito is captured and put into a pot of water.
  10. The water scalds him, reminding him of his refusal to help the stream.
  11. The fire burns him, reminding him of his refusal to help the dying fire.
  12. The cook finds him burnt to a cinder and throws him out the window.
  13. The wind catches Medio Pollito, reminding him of his past refusal to help.
  14. The wind carries him to the highest church steeple and leaves him there, transformed into a weathercock.
  15. Medio Pollito remains on the steeple to this day, a sad, permanent fixture.

Characters

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Medio Pollito

chicken child male

Half a chick: one leg, one wing, one eye, half a head and beak

Attire: Downy yellow feathers, sparse tail feathers

Half a chick perched precariously on one leg

Self-willed, disobedient, rude, selfish

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Mother Hen

chicken adult female

Handsome black Spanish hen, plump

Attire: Typical hen plumage

Black hen with outstretched wings, clucking worriedly

Anxious, caring, maternal

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Stream

water source ageless unknown

Choked up with weeds and water-plants, unable to flow freely

A trickle of water struggling through dense weeds

Helpless, pleading

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Fire

fire ageless unknown

Burning low, about to go out

A few glowing embers surrounded by ash

Weak, wavering, desperate

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Wind

air current ageless unknown

Caught and entangled in the branches of a chestnut tree

Gale tangled in tree branches

Uncomfortable, trapped, vengeful

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King's Cook

human adult male

Not described, but likely stout from his profession

Attire: White apron, cook's uniform

Cook's arm reaching out of a window

Opportunistic, practical

Locations

Farmyard

outdoor

Dull, with a dreary maize field nearby

Mood: boring, safe

Medio Pollito expresses his desire to leave for Madrid

hen house maize field mother hen other chicks

Choked Stream

outdoor afternoon

Overgrown with weeds and water-plants, preventing the water from flowing freely

Mood: distressed

Medio Pollito refuses to help the stream

water weeds water-plants banks

Dying Fire in the Woods

outdoor dusk dry

Burning low, about to go out without more fuel

Mood: desperate

Medio Pollito refuses to help the fire

embers ashes dry leaves sticks

King's Kitchen

indoor morning

A broth-pot standing near the fire

Mood: dangerous, scalding

Medio Pollito is caught and thrown into the broth-pot

broth-pot fire cook window

Church Steeple in Madrid

transitional windy

The highest church in town, with Medio Pollito perched on top

Mood: lonely, exposed

Medio Pollito is placed on the steeple by the wind as punishment

steeple one-legged half-chick roofs of Madrid wind