The Magic Swan

by Andrew Lang · from The Green Fairy Book

fairy tale transformation whimsical Ages 5-10 1518 words 7 min read
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Original Story 1518 words · 7 min read

THE MAGIC SWAN

There were once upon a time three brothers, of whom the eldest was

called Jacob, the second Frederick, and the youngest Peter. This

youngest brother was made a regular butt of by the other two, and they

treated him shamefully. If anything went wrong with their affairs, Peter

had to bear the blame and put things right for them, and he had to

endure all this ill-treatment because he was weak and delicate and

couldn't defend himself against his stronger brothers. The poor creature

had a most trying life of it in every way, and day and night he pondered

how he could make it better. One day, when he was in the wood gathering

sticks and crying bitterly, a little old woman came up to him and asked

him what was the matter; and he told her all his troubles.

'Come, my good youth,' said the old dame, when he had finished his tale

of woe, 'isn't the world wide enough? Why don't you set out and try your

fortune somewhere else?'

Peter took her words to heart, and left his father's house early one

morning to try his fortune in the wide world, as the old woman had

advised him. But he felt very bitterly parting from the home where he

had been born, and where he had at least passed a short but happy

childhood, and sitting down on a hill he gazed once more fondly on his

native place.

Suddenly the little old woman stood before him, and, tapping him on the

shoulder, said, 'So far good, my boy; but what do you mean to do now?'

Peter was at a loss what to answer, for so far he had always thought

that fortune would drop into his mouth like a ripe cherry. The old

woman, who guessed his thoughts, laughed kindly and said, 'I'll tell you

what you must do, for I've taken a fancy to you, and I'm sure you won't

forget me when you've made your fortune.'

Peter promised faithfully he wouldn't, and the old woman continued:

'This evening at sunset go to yonder pear-tree which you see growing at

the cross roads. Underneath it you will find a man lying asleep, and a

beautiful large swan will be fastened to the tree close to him. You must

be careful not to waken the man, but you must unfasten the swan and take

it away with you. You will find that everyone will fall in love with its

beautiful plumage, and you must allow anyone who likes to pull out a

feather. But as soon as the swan feels as much as a finger on it, it

will scream out, and then you must say, "Swan, hold fast." Then the hand

of the person who has touched the bird will be held as in a vice, and

nothing will set it free, unless you touch it with this little stick

which I will make you a present of. When you have captured a whole lot

of people in this way, lead your train straight on with you; you will

come to a big town where a Princess lives who has never been known to

laugh. If you can only make her laugh your fortune is made; then I beg

you won't forget your old friend.'

Peter promised again that he wouldn't, and at sunset he went to the tree

the old woman had mentioned. The man lay there fast asleep, and a large

beautiful swan was fastened to the tree beside him by a red cord. Peter

loosed the bird, and led it away with him without disturbing the bird's

master.

He walked on with the swan for some time, and came at last to a

building-yard where some men were busily at work. They were all lost in

admiration of the bird's beautiful plumage, and one forward youth, who

was covered with clay from head to foot, called out, 'Oh, if I'd only

one of those feathers how happy I should be!'

'Pull one out then,' said Peter kindly, and the youth seized one from

the bird's tail; instantly the swan screamed, and Peter called out,

'Swan, hold fast,' and do what he could the poor youth couldn't get his

hand away. The more he howled the more the others laughed, till a girl

who had been washing clothes in the neighbouring stream hurried up to

see what was the matter. When she saw the poor boy fastened to the swan

she felt so sorry for him that she stretched out her hand to free him.

The bird screamed.

'Swan, hold fast,' called out Peter, and the girl was caught also.

When Peter had gone on for a bit with his captives, they met a chimney

sweep, who laughed loudly over the extraordinary troop, and asked the

girl what she was doing.

'Oh, dearest John,' replied the girl, 'give me your hand and set me

free from this cursed young man.'

'Most certainly I will, if that's all you want,' replied the sweep, and

gave the girl his hand. The bird screamed.

'Swan, hold fast,' said Peter, and the black man was added to their

number.

They soon came to a village where a fair was being held. A travelling

circus was giving a performance, and the clown was just doing his

tricks. He opened his eyes wide with amazement when he saw the

remarkable trio fastened on to the swan's tail.

'Have you gone raving mad, Blackie?' he asked as well as he could for

laughing.

'It's no laughing matter,' the sweep replied. 'This wench has got so

tight hold of me that I feel as if I were glued to her. Do set me free,

like a good clown, and I'll do you a good turn some day.'

Without a moment's hesitation the clown grasped the black outstretched

hand. The bird screamed.

'Swan, hold fast,' called out Peter, and the clown became the fourth of

the party.

Now in the front row of the spectators sat the respected and popular

Mayor of the village, who was much put out by what he considered nothing

but a foolish trick. So much annoyed was he that he seized the clown by

the hand and tried to tear him away, in order to hand him over to the

police.

Then the bird screamed, and Peter called out, 'Swan, hold fast,' and the

dignified Mayor shared the fate of his predecessors.

The Mayoress, a long thin stick of a woman, enraged at the insult done

to her husband, seized his free arm and tore at it with all her might,

with the only result that she too was forced to swell the procession.

After this no one else had any wish to join them.

Soon Peter saw the towers of the capital in front of him. Just before

entering it, a glittering carriage came out to meet him, in which was

seated a young lady as beautiful as the day, but with a very solemn and

serious expression. But no sooner had she perceived the motley crowd

fastened to the swan's tail than she burst into a loud fit of laughter,

in which she was joined by all her servants and ladies in waiting.

'The Princess has laughed at last,' they all cried with joy.

She stepped out of her carriage to look more closely at the wonderful

sight, and laughed again over the capers the poor captives cut. She

ordered her carriage to be turned round and drove slowly back into the

town, never taking her eyes off Peter and his procession.

When the King heard the news that his daughter had actually laughed, he

was more than delighted, and had Peter and his marvellous train brought

before him. He laughed himself when he saw them till the tears rolled

down his cheeks.

[Illustration]

'My good friend,' he said to Peter, 'do you know what I promised the

person who succeeded in making the Princess laugh?'

'No, I don't,' said Peter.

'Then I'll tell you,' answered the King; 'a thousand gold crowns or a

piece of land. Which will you choose?'

Peter decided in favour of the land. Then he touched the youth, the

girl, the sweep, the clown, the Mayor, and the Mayoress with his little

stick, and they were all free again, and ran away home as if a fire were

burning behind them; and their flight, as you may imagine, gave rise to

renewed merriment.

Then the Princess felt moved to stroke the swan, at the same time

admiring its plumage. The bird screamed.

'Swan, hold fast,' called out Peter, and so he won the Princess for his

bride. But the swan flew up into the air, and vanished in the blue

horizon. Peter now received a duchy as a present, and became a very

great man indeed; but he did not forget the little old woman who had

been the cause of all his good fortune, and appointed her as head

housekeeper to him and his royal bride in their magnificent castle.

Kletke.


Story DNA

Moral

Kindness and perseverance, even in the face of adversity, can lead to unexpected good fortune and reward.

Plot Summary

Peter, the youngest and mistreated brother, leaves home after an old woman gives him a magical swan and stick. As he journeys, anyone who touches the swan becomes magically stuck to it, forming a comical procession. This bizarre chain of people, including a youth, a girl, a chimney sweep, a clown, a mayor, and a mayoress, eventually makes the perpetually serious Princess laugh. The King, overjoyed, offers Peter a reward, and when the Princess herself touches the swan and becomes stuck, Peter wins her hand in marriage, becoming a duke and remembering his magical benefactor.

Themes

perseverancekindnessfortunejustice

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three (initially for brothers, then for first three captives), repetition of 'Swan, hold fast'

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs society (Peter's initial mistreatment, then his challenge to make the princess laugh)
Ending: happy
Magic: magical swan that sticks people, magical stick that frees people, wise old woman with magical knowledge
the swan (represents Peter's fortune and power)the stick (represents control and release)

Cultural Context

Origin: German (Kletke)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Andrew Lang collected and retold many European fairy tales, often from German sources like Kletke. The story reflects common themes and structures found in 19th-century European folklore collections.

Plot Beats (14)

  1. Peter, the youngest of three brothers, is mistreated by his older siblings and wishes for a better life.
  2. An old woman advises Peter to leave home and seek his fortune, then gives him a magical swan and a stick with specific instructions.
  3. Peter finds the swan and its sleeping master, unfastens the swan, and leads it away.
  4. A youth in a building-yard admires the swan's feathers, pulls one out, and is magically stuck to the swan when Peter commands, 'Swan, hold fast.'
  5. A girl washing clothes tries to free the youth and also becomes stuck to the swan.
  6. A chimney sweep encounters the group, tries to free the girl, and becomes the third captive.
  7. At a fair, a clown tries to free the chimney sweep and becomes stuck.
  8. The village Mayor, annoyed by the spectacle, tries to intervene and becomes stuck to the clown.
  9. The Mayoress, enraged, tries to free her husband and also becomes part of the growing chain of captives.
  10. Peter and his procession arrive at the capital, where the Princess, known for never laughing, bursts into laughter at the sight.
  11. The King, overjoyed by his daughter's laughter, offers Peter a reward: a thousand gold crowns or land.
  12. Peter chooses the land, then uses his stick to free all the captives, who flee in panic.
  13. The Princess, admiring the swan, touches it and becomes stuck, prompting Peter to command 'Swan, hold fast,' thereby winning her as his bride.
  14. The swan flies away, and Peter becomes a duke, marrying the Princess and appointing the old woman as his head housekeeper.

Characters

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Peter

human young adult male

Weak and delicate

Attire: Simple peasant clothing suitable for gathering sticks in the woods

Carrying a large, beautiful swan

Kind, obedient

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Old Woman

human elderly female

Little

Attire: Simple, perhaps slightly magical, old-fashioned clothing

Tapping Peter on the shoulder with a knowing smile

Helpful, wise

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Princess

human young adult female

Beautiful

Attire: Elegant gown befitting a princess, possibly with jewels

Bursting into laughter at the sight of the procession

Initially solemn, then joyful

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King

human adult male

Not described

Attire: Royal robes and crown

Tears rolling down his cheeks from laughter

Delighted, generous

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Magic Swan

magical creature ageless non-human

Large, beautiful plumage

Its radiant white plumage and the people stuck to its tail

Magical, obedient to Peter

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Mayor

human adult male

Respected and popular

Attire: Formal attire befitting a mayor

Stuck to the clown, looking indignant

Pompous, easily annoyed

Locations

Wood Gathering Spot

outdoor

A place in the woods where Peter gathers sticks and cries, a little old woman appears to him.

Mood: desolate, sorrowful

Peter meets the old woman who sets him on his quest.

sticks trees old woman

Crossroads Pear Tree

transitional sunset

A pear tree at a crossroads where a man sleeps with a swan tied to the tree.

Mood: magical, mysterious

Peter finds the magic swan.

pear tree red cord sleeping man swan

Building-Yard

outdoor

A construction site where men are working and become captivated by the swan's feathers.

Mood: busy, humorous

The first person gets stuck to the swan.

clay-covered youth tools building materials stream

Town Square

outdoor

A village square with a fair, including a circus performance and a clown.

Mood: festive, chaotic

More people get stuck to the swan, including the mayor.

circus tent clown spectators mayor

Capital City Entrance

transitional

The entrance to the capital city, where a glittering carriage with the princess appears.

Mood: triumphant, joyful

The princess laughs, breaking the curse.

towers carriage princess ladies in waiting