Prunella

by Andrew Lang · from The Grey Fairy Book

fairy tale transformation hopeful Ages 8-14 1937 words 9 min read
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Original Story 1937 words · 9 min read

Prunella

There was once upon a time a woman who had an only daughter. When the

child was about seven years old she used to pass every day, on her way

to school, an orchard where there was a wild plum tree, with delicious

ripe plums hanging from the branches. Each morning the child would pick

one, and put it into her pocket to eat at school. For this reason she

was called Prunella. Now, the orchard belonged to a witch. One day the

witch noticed the child gathering a plum, as she passed along the road.

Prunella did it quite innocently, not knowing that she was doing wrong

in taking the fruit that hung close to the roadside. But the witch was

furious, and next day hid herself behind the hedge, and when Prunella

came past, and put out her hand to pluck the fruit, she jumped out and

seized her by the arm.

‘Ah! you little thief!’ she exclaimed. ‘I have caught you at last. Now

you will have to pay for your misdeeds.’

The poor child, half dead with fright, implored the old woman to

forgive her, assuring her that she did not know she had done wrong,

and promising never to do it again. But the witch had no pity, and she

dragged Prunella into her house, where she kept her till the time should

come when she could have her revenge.

As the years passed Prunella grew up into a very beautiful girl. Now her

beauty and goodness, instead of softening the witch’s heart, aroused her

hatred and jealousy.

One day she called Prunella to her, and said: ‘Take this basket, go to

the well, and bring it back to me filled with water. If you don’t I will

kill you.’

The girl took the basket, went and let it down into the well again

and again. But her work was lost labour. Each time, as she drew up the

basket, the water streamed out of it. At last, in despair, she gave

it up, and leaning against the well she began to cry bitterly, when

suddenly she heard a voice at her side saying ‘Prunella, why are you

crying?’

Turning round she beheld a handsome youth, who looked kindly at her, as

if he were sorry for her trouble.

‘Who are you,’ she asked, ‘and how do you know my name?’

‘I am the son of the witch,’ he replied, ‘and my name is Bensiabel. I

know that she is determined that you shall die, but I promise you that

she shall not carry out her wicked plan. Will you give me a kiss, if I

fill your basket?’

‘No,’ said Prunella, ‘I will not give you a kiss, because you are the

son of a witch.’

‘Very well,’ replied the youth sadly. ‘Give me your basket and I will

fill it for you.’ And he dipped it into the well, and the water stayed

in it. Then the girl returned to the house, carrying the basket filled

with water. When the witch saw it, she became white with rage, and

exclaimed ‘Bensiabel must have helped you.’ And Prunella looked down,

and said nothing.

‘Well, we shall see who will win in the end,’ said the witch, in a great

rage.

The following day she called the girl to her and said: ‘Take this sack

of wheat. I am going out for a little; by the time I return I shall

expect you to have made it into bread. If you have not done it I will

kill you.’ Having said this she left the room, closing and locking the

door behind her.

Poor Prunella did not know what to do. It was impossible for her to

grind the wheat, prepare the dough, and bake the bread, all in the short

time that the witch would be away. At first she set to work bravely, but

when she saw how hopeless her task was, she threw herself on a chair,

and began to weep bitterly. She was roused from her despair by hearing

Bensiabel’s voice at her side saying: ‘Prunella, Prunella, do not weep

like that. If you will give me a kiss I will make the bread, and you

will be saved.’

‘I will not kiss the son of a witch,’ replied Prunella.

But Bensiabel took the wheat from her, and ground it, and made the

dough, and when the witch returned the bread was ready baked in the

oven.

Turning to the girl, with fury in her voice, she said: ‘Bensiabel must

have been here and helped you;’ and Prunella looked down, and said

nothing.

‘We shall see who will win in the end,’ said the witch, and her eyes

blazed with anger.

Next day she called the girl to her and said: ‘Go to my sister, who

lives across the mountains. She will give you a casket, which you must

bring back to me.’ This she said knowing that her sister, who was a

still more cruel and wicked witch than herself, would never allow the

girl to return, but would imprison her and starve her to death. But

Prunella did not suspect anything, and set out quite cheerfully. On the

way she met Bensiabel.

‘Where are you going, Prunella?’ he asked.

‘I am going to the sister of my mistress, from whom I am to fetch a

casket.’

‘Oh poor, poor girl!’ said Bensiabel. ‘You are being sent straight to

your death. Give me a kiss, and I will save you.’

But again Prunella answered as before, ‘I will not kiss the son of a

witch.’

‘Nevertheless, I will save your life,’ said Bensiabel, ‘for I love you

better than myself. Take this flagon of oil, this loaf of bread, this

piece of rope, and this broom. When you reach the witch’s house, oil the

hinges of the door with the contents of the flagon, and throw the loaf

of bread to the great fierce mastiff, who will come to meet you. When

you have passed the dog, you will see in the courtyard a miserable woman

trying in vain to let down a bucket into the well with her plaited hair.

You must give her the rope. In the kitchen you will find a still more

miserable woman trying to clean the hearth with her tongue; to her you

must give the broom. You will see the casket on the top of a cupboard,

take it as quickly as you can, and leave the house without a moment’s

delay. If you do all this exactly as I have told you, you will not be

killed.’

So Prunella, having listened carefully to his instructions, did just

what he had told her. She reached the house, oiled the hinges of the

door, threw the loaf to the dog, gave the poor woman at the well the

rope, and the woman in the kitchen the broom, caught up the casket from

the top of the cupboard, and fled with it out of the house. But the

witch heard her as she ran away, and rushing to the window called out to

the woman in the kitchen: ‘Kill that thief, I tell you!’

But the woman replied: ‘I will not kill her, for she has given me a

broom, whereas you forced me to clean the hearth with my tongue.’

Then the witch called out in fury to the woman at the well: ‘Take the

girl, I tell you, and fling her into the water, and drown her!’

But the woman answered: ‘No, I will not drown her, for she gave me this

rope, whereas you forced me to use my hair to let down the bucket to

draw water.’

Then the witch shouted to the dog to seize the girl and hold her fast;

but the dog answered: ‘No, I will not seize her, for she gave me a loaf

of bread, whereas you let me starve with hunger.’

The witch was so angry that she nearly choked, as she called out: ‘Door,

bang upon her, and keep her a prisoner.’

But the door answered: ‘I won’t, for she has oiled my hinges, so that

they move quite easily, whereas you left them all rough and rusty.’

And so Prunella escaped, and, with the casket under her arm, reached the

house of her mistress, who, as you may believe, was as angry as she was

surprised to see the girl standing before her, looking more beautiful

than ever. Her eyes flashed, as in furious tones she asked her, ‘Did you

meet Bensiabel?’

But Prunella looked down, and said nothing.

‘We shall see,’ said the witch, ‘who will win in the end. Listen, there

are three cocks in the hen-house; one is yellow, one black, and the

third is white. If one of them crows during the night you must tell me

which one it is. Woe to you if you make a mistake. I will gobble you up

in one mouthful.’

Now Bensiabel was in the room next to the one where Prunella slept. At

midnight she awoke hearing a cock crow.

‘Which one was that?’ shouted the witch.

Then, trembling, Prunella knocked on the wall and whispered: ‘Bensiabel,

Bensiabel, tell me, which cock crowed?’

‘Will you give me a kiss if I tell you?’ he whispered back through the

wall.

But she answered ‘No.’

Then he whispered back to her: ‘Nevertheless, I will tell you. It was

the yellow cock that crowed.’

The witch, who had noticed the delay in Prunella’s answer, approached

her door calling angrily: ‘Answer at once, or I will kill you.’

So Prunella answered: ‘It was the yellow cock that crowed.’

And the witch stamped her foot and gnashed her teeth.

Soon after another cock crowed. ‘Tell me now which one it is,’ called

the witch. And, prompted by Bensiabel, Prunella answered: ‘That is the

black cock.’

A few minutes after the crowing was heard again, and the voice of the

witch demanding ‘Which one was that?’

And again Prunella implored Bensiabel to help her. But this time he

hesitated, for he hoped that Prunella might forget that he was a witch’s

son, and promise to give him a kiss. And as he hesitated he heard an

agonised cry from the girl: ‘Bensiabel, Bensiabel, save me! The witch is

coming, she is close to me, I hear the gnashing of her teeth!’

With a bound Bensiabel opened his door and flung himself against the

witch. He pulled her back with such force that she stumbled, and falling

headlong, dropped down dead at the foot of the stairs.

Then, at last, Prunella was touched by Bensiabel’s goodness and kindness

to her, and she became his wife, and they lived happily ever after.

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Story DNA

Moral

True kindness and selflessness will ultimately triumph over cruelty and hatred, and even the most stubborn hearts can be softened by genuine love.

Plot Summary

Young Prunella is captured by a wicked witch for innocently picking plums. As she grows, the witch, driven by jealousy, sets impossible tasks for her, intending to kill her. The witch's son, Bensiabel, secretly helps Prunella repeatedly, despite her initial coldness towards him. When the witch sends Prunella on a death mission to her even crueler sister, Bensiabel provides magical aid, allowing Prunella to escape by showing kindness to the sister's enslaved servants. In a final deadly test, Bensiabel directly intervenes, causing the witch's demise and saving Prunella. Prunella, finally touched by his unwavering goodness, marries Bensiabel, and they live happily ever after.

Themes

goodness vs. evilperseverancelove and sacrificeredemption

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three, repetition of phrases

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: happy
Magic: witchcraft, impossible tasks made possible by magic, talking animals, sentient inanimate objects (door), magical assistance
the leaky basket (impossible task)the casket (a dangerous quest item)the cocks (a test of knowledge and life)

Cultural Context

Origin: English
Era: timeless fairy tale

Andrew Lang's fairy books compiled stories from various European traditions, often adapting them for a Victorian English audience. This story reflects common European fairy tale tropes.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. Young Prunella, named for her habit, innocently picks plums from a witch's orchard.
  2. The witch catches Prunella, accuses her of theft, and drags her home to be her captive.
  3. Prunella grows into a beautiful and good young woman, intensifying the witch's hatred.
  4. The witch gives Prunella an impossible task: fill a leaky basket with water, threatening death.
  5. Bensiabel, the witch's son, appears, offers to help for a kiss, but helps anyway when Prunella refuses.
  6. The witch gives Prunella another impossible task: bake bread from wheat in a short time, threatening death.
  7. Bensiabel again helps Prunella, despite her continued refusal to kiss him, and the bread is made.
  8. The witch sends Prunella to her even crueler sister for a casket, intending for Prunella to be killed.
  9. Bensiabel intercepts Prunella, warns her of the danger, and gives her magical items and instructions to survive the sister's house.
  10. Prunella follows Bensiabel's instructions, gaining the gratitude of the sister's enslaved servants (door, dog, women) by showing them kindness.
  11. The sister's servants refuse to harm Prunella when commanded by the sister, allowing her to escape with the casket.
  12. The witch, enraged by Prunella's return, sets a final test: identify which of three cocks crows at night, threatening to eat her if she fails.
  13. Bensiabel helps Prunella identify the first two cocks, but hesitates for a kiss on the third, hoping she will relent.
  14. As the witch approaches to kill Prunella for her delayed answer, Bensiabel bursts in, pushes the witch, causing her to fall to her death.
  15. Prunella, finally recognizing Bensiabel's true love and goodness, marries him, and they live happily ever after.

Characters

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Prunella

human child female

Very beautiful girl as she grows older

Attire: Simple dress appropriate for a young girl in a fairy tale setting, later more mature but still modest attire

A single ripe plum clutched in her hand

Innocent, initially naive, eventually grateful and kind

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The Witch

human elderly female

Frightening appearance, white with rage

Attire: Dark, ragged robes

Eyes blazing with anger

Cruel, jealous, vengeful

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Bensiabel

human young adult male

Handsome youth

Attire: Simple but well-kept clothing, perhaps hinting at his magical heritage

A flagon of oil

Kind, helpful, persistent

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Witch's Sister

human elderly female

More cruel and wicked than her sister

Attire: Similar to the first witch, but perhaps even more tattered

Holding a casket

Cruel, wicked

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Yellow Cock

animal adult male

Yellow feathers

Bright yellow plumage

Vocal

Locations

Orchard Roadside

outdoor morning varies, implied to be plum season

A wild plum tree with ripe plums hanging from the branches, close to the roadside.

Mood: innocent, tempting, later menacing

Prunella is caught stealing plums by the witch.

wild plum tree ripe plums road hedge

Witch's House

indoor

Implied to be a dark and unpleasant place where Prunella is held captive.

Mood: oppressive, fearful, magical

Prunella performs impossible tasks, aided by Bensiabel.

locked door oven cupboard hen-house

Well

outdoor

A well where Prunella is tasked with filling a basket with holes.

Mood: desperate, hopeless

Prunella meets Bensiabel for the first time.

well basket with holes water

Witch's Sister's House

transitional

A dangerous house with a fierce dog, a woman drawing water with her hair, and another cleaning the hearth with her tongue.

Mood: threatening, magical, bizarre

Prunella uses the items given by Bensiabel to escape.

door hinges fierce mastiff well kitchen hearth casket