The Goblin Pony

by Andrew Lang · from The Grey Fairy Book

fairy tale cautionary tale solemn Ages 8-14 704 words 4 min read
Cover: The Goblin Pony
Original Story 704 words · 4 min read

The Goblin Pony

‘Don’t stir from the fireplace to-night,’ said old Peggy, ‘for the

wind is blowing so violently that the house shakes; besides, this is

Hallow-e’en, when the witches are abroad, and the goblins, who are their

servants, are wandering about in all sorts of disguises, doing harm to

the children of men.’

‘Why should I stay here?’ said the eldest of the young people. ‘No,

I must go and see what the daughter of old Jacob, the rope-maker, is

doing. She wouldn’t close her blue eyes all night if I didn’t visit her

father before the moon had gone down.’

‘I must go and catch lobsters and crabs’ said the second, ‘and not all

the witches and goblins in the world shall hinder me.’

So they all determined to go on their business or pleasure, and scorned

the wise advice of old Peggy. Only the youngest child hesitated a

minute, when she said to him, ‘You stay here, my little Richard, and I

will tell you beautiful stories.’

But he wanted to pick a bunch of wild thyme and some blackberries by

moonlight, and ran out after the others. When they got outside the house

they said: ‘The old woman talks of wind and storm, but never was the

weather finer or the sky more clear; see how majestically the moon

stalks through the transparent clouds!’

Then all of a sudden they noticed a little black pony close beside them.

‘Oh, ho!’ they said, ‘that is old Valentine’s pony; it must have escaped

from its stable, and is going down to drink at the horse-pond.’

‘My pretty little pony,’ said the eldest, patting the creature with his

hand, ‘you mustn’t run too far; I’ll take you to the pond myself.’

With these words he jumped on the pony’s back and was quickly followed

by his second brother, then by the third, and so on, till at last they

were all astride the little beast, down to the small Richard, who didn’t

like to be left behind.

On the way to the pond they met several of their companions, and they

invited them all to mount the pony, which they did, and the little

creature did not seem to mind the extra weight, but trotted merrily

along.

The quicker it trotted the more the young people enjoyed the fun; they

dug their heels into the pony’s sides and called out, ‘Gallop, little

horse, you have never had such brave riders on your back before!’

In the meantime the wind had risen again, and the waves began to howl;

but the pony did not seem to mind the noise, and instead of going to the

pond, cantered gaily towards the sea-shore.

Richard began to regret his thyme and blackberries, and the eldest

brother seized the pony by the mane and tried to make it turn round, for

he remembered the blue eyes of Jacob the rope-maker’s daughter. But he

tugged and pulled in vain, for the pony galloped straight on into the

sea, till the waves met its forefeet. As soon as it felt the water it

neighed lustily and capered about with glee, advancing quickly into the

foaming billows. When the waves had covered the children’s legs they

repented their careless behaviour, and cried out: ‘The cursed little

black pony is bewitched. If we had only listened to old Peggy’s advice

we shouldn’t have been lost.’

The further the pony advanced, the higher rose the sea; at last the

waves covered the children’s heads and they were all drowned.

Towards morning old Peggy went out, for she was anxious about the fate

of her grandchildren. She sought them high and low, but could not

find them anywhere. She asked all the neighbours if they had seen the

children, but no one knew anything about them, except that the eldest

had not been with the blue-eyed daughter of Jacob the rope-maker.

As she was going home, bowed with grief, she saw a little black pony

coming towards her, springing and curveting in every direction. When it

got quite near her it neighed loudly, and galloped past her so quickly

that in a moment it was out of her sight.

[From the French, Kletke.]


Story DNA

Moral

Disregarding the warnings of the wise and succumbing to temptation can lead to dire consequences.

Plot Summary

On Hallow-e'en, old Peggy warns her grandchildren to stay indoors due to the stormy weather and wandering goblins. Ignoring her advice, the children go out and encounter a small black pony, which they all, along with their companions, mount for fun. The pony, however, carries them not to the pond but into the sea, where they realize too late it is a bewitched creature, and they all drown. The next morning, a grief-stricken Peggy searches in vain, only to see the goblin pony gallop past her, confirming her worst fears.

Themes

disobedienceconsequencestemptationwisdom vs. folly

Emotional Arc

carefree to terror

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three (initially three older children, then all, then companions), foreshadowing

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: tragic
Magic: goblin pony (supernatural creature disguised as an animal), witches and goblins being 'abroad' on Hallow-e'en
the goblin pony (temptation, supernatural danger)Hallow-e'en (a time of heightened supernatural activity and danger)

Cultural Context

Origin: French (translated by Andrew Lang)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Andrew Lang was a Scottish poet, novelist, and literary critic, known for collecting and publishing fairy tales from various cultures in his 'Fairy Books' series. This specific tale is noted as 'From the French, Kletke,' indicating its origin.

Plot Beats (13)

  1. Old Peggy warns her grandchildren about Hallow-e'en dangers and advises them to stay by the fire.
  2. The older children dismiss Peggy's warnings, planning to go out for personal reasons; only the youngest hesitates briefly.
  3. All the children, including the youngest, leave the house, finding the weather clear and pleasant.
  4. They encounter a small black pony, which they believe to be a neighbor's, and decide to take it to the pond.
  5. One by one, all the children, then their companions, mount the pony, which carries them all without effort.
  6. The children enjoy the ride, urging the pony to gallop faster, despite the rising wind and waves.
  7. The pony veers towards the sea instead of the pond, ignoring the eldest brother's attempts to turn it.
  8. The pony gallops into the sea, neighing with glee as the waves begin to cover the children.
  9. The children realize their fatal mistake, regretting their disobedience and crying out as the waves engulf them.
  10. The pony continues deeper into the sea until all the children are drowned.
  11. The next morning, old Peggy, worried, searches for her grandchildren but cannot find them.
  12. Neighbors confirm they haven't seen the children, except for a detail about the eldest.
  13. Grief-stricken, Peggy sees the little black pony, now lively and unburdened, gallop past her and disappear.

Characters

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Old Peggy

human elderly female

Not described physically, but implied to be frail due to her age and concern for the weather.

Attire: Simple, practical clothing typical of an elderly woman in a rural setting, such as a long dress, shawl, and apron.

Her worried, wrinkled face peering out into the stormy night.

Wise, cautious, caring

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The Goblin Pony

magical creature ageless unknown

Small, black pony.

Attire: None.

Its black, wet coat gleaming under the moonlight as it gallops into the sea.

Deceptive, malevolent, gleeful

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Richard

human child male

Small, young.

Attire: Simple child's clothing.

A small boy clinging to the pony's back, looking back with regret.

Impulsive, easily led, regretful

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Eldest Brother

human young adult male

Strong enough to jump on a pony.

Attire: Clothing suitable for visiting a young woman, perhaps slightly finer than everyday wear.

Desperately pulling at the pony's mane, trying to turn it back.

Headstrong, amorous, ultimately regretful

Locations

Old Peggy's Fireplace

indoor night autumn, windy

Warm fireplace inside a house, a safe haven from the night

Mood: safe, comforting, but with an undercurrent of foreboding

The children are warned about the dangers of Hallowe'en.

fireplace burning fire old Peggy children

Moonlit Path

outdoor night autumn, clear sky

A clear path under a bright moon, initially appearing safe and inviting

Mood: deceptive, initially calm but turning treacherous

The children encounter the goblin pony and begin their fateful ride.

moon transparent clouds path black pony

Sea Shore

transitional night autumn, stormy, windy

A sandy beach leading into a stormy sea with foaming billows

Mood: dangerous, chaotic, deadly

The goblin pony carries the children into the sea, where they drown.

sand waves foaming billows sea black pony