The Story of Bensurdatu
by Andrew Lang · from The Grey Fairy Book
Original Story
The Story of Bensurdatu
There was once a king and a queen who had three wonderfully beautiful
daughters, and their one thought, from morning till night, was how they
could make the girls happy.
One day the princesses said to the king, ‘Dear father, we want so much
to have a picnic, and eat our dinner in the country.’
‘Very well, dear children, let us have a picnic by all means,’ answered
he, and gave orders that everything should be got ready.
When luncheon was prepared it was put into a cart, and the royal family
stepped into a carriage and drove right away into the country. After
a few miles they reached a house and garden belonging to the king, and
close by was their favourite place for lunch. The drive had made them
very hungry, and they ate with a hearty appetite, till almost all the
food had disappeared.
When they had quite done, they said to their parents: ‘Now we should
like to wander about the garden a little, but when you want to go home,
just call to us.’ And they ran off, laughing, down a green glade, which
led to the garden.
But no sooner had they stepped across the fence, than a dark cloud
came down and covered them, and prevented them seeing whither they were
going.
Meanwhile the king and queen sat lazily among the heather, and an hour
or two slipped away. The sun was dropping towards the horizon, and they
began to think it was time to go home. So they called to their daughters
and called again, but no one answered them.
Frightened at the silence, they searched every corner of the garden, the
house, and the neighbouring wood, but no trace of the girls was to be
found anywhere. The earth seemed to have swallowed them up. The poor
parents were in despair. The queen wept all the way home, and for many
days after, and the king issued a proclamation that whoever should bring
back his lost daughters should have one of them to wife, and should,
after his death, reign in his stead.
Now two young generals were at that time living at the court, and when
they heard the king’s declaration, they said one to the other: ‘Let us
go in search of them; perhaps we shall be the lucky persons.’
And they set out, each mounted on a strong horse, taking with them a
change of raiment and some money.
But though they inquired at every village they rode through, they could
hear nothing of the princesses, and by-and-by their money was all spent,
and they were forced to sell their horses, or give up the search. Even
this money only lasted a little while longer, and nothing but their
clothes lay between them and starvation. They sold the spare garments
that were bound on their saddles, and went in the coats they stood up
in to the inn, to beg for some food, as they were really starving. When,
however, they had to pay for what they had eaten and drank, they said to
the host: ‘We have no money, and naught but the clothes we stand up in.
Take these, and give us instead some old rags, and let us stay here
and serve you.’ And the innkeeper was content with the bargain, and the
generals remained, and were his servants.
All this time the king and queen remained in their palace hungering for
their children, but not a word was heard of either of them or of the
generals who had gone to seek for them.
Now there was living in the palace a faithful servant of the king’s
called Bensurdatu, who had served him for many years, and when
Bensurdatu saw how grieved the king was, he lifted up his voice and said
to him: ‘Your majesty, let me go and seek your daughters.’
‘No, no, Bensurdatu,’ replied the king. ‘Three daughters have I lost,
and two generals, and shall I lose you also?’
But Bensurdatu said again: ‘Let me now go, your majesty; trust me, and I
will bring you back your daughters.’
Then the king gave way, and Bensurdatu set forth, and rode on till he
came to the inn, where he dismounted and asked for food. It was brought
by the two generals, whom he knew at once in spite of their miserable
clothes, and, much astonished, asked them how in the world they came
there.
They told him all their adventures, and he sent for the innkeeper, and
said to him: ‘Give them back their garments, and I will pay everything
that they owe you.’
And the innkeeper did as he was bid, and when the two generals
were dressed in their proper clothes, they declared they would join
Bensurdatu, and with him seek for the king’s daughters.
The three companions rode on for many miles, and at length they came to
a wild place, without sign of a human being. It was getting dark, and
fearing to be lost on this desolate spot they pushed on their horses,
and at last saw a light in the window of a tiny hut.
‘Who comes there?’ asked a voice, as they knocked at the door.
‘Oh! have pity on us, and give us a night’s shelter,’ replied
Bensurdatu; ‘we are three tired travellers who have lost our way.’
Then the door was opened by a very old woman who stood back, and
beckoned them to enter. ‘Whence do you come, and whither do you go?’
said she.
‘Ah, good woman, we have a heavy task before us,’ answered Bensurdatu,
‘we are bound to carry the king’s daughters back to the palace!’
‘Oh, unhappy creatures,’ cried she, ‘you know not what you are doing!
The king’s daughters were covered by a thick cloud, and no one knows
where they may now be.’
‘Oh, tell us, if you know, my good woman,’ entreated Bensurdatu, ‘for
with them lies all our happiness.’
‘Even if I were to tell you,’ answered she, ‘you could not rescue them.
To do that you would have to go to the very bottom of a deep river, and
though certainly you would find the king’s daughters there, yet the
two eldest are guarded by two giants, and the youngest is watched by a
serpent with seven heads.’
The two generals, who stood by listening, were filled with terror at her
words, and wished to return immediately; but Bensurdatu stood firm, and
said: ‘Now we have got so far we must carry the thing through. Tell us
where the river is, so that we may get there as soon as possible.’ And
the old woman told them, and gave them some cheese, wine, and bread,
so that they should not set forth starving; and when they had eaten and
drunk they laid themselves down to sleep.
The sun had only just risen above the hills next morning before they all
woke, and, taking leave of the wise woman who had helped them, they rode
on till they came to the river.
‘I am the eldest,’ said one of the generals, ‘and it is my right to go
down first.’
So the others fastened a cord round him, and gave him a little bell, and
let him down into the water. But scarcely had the river closed above
his head when such dreadful rushing sounds and peals of thunder came
crashing round about him that he lost all his courage, and rang his
bell, if perchance it might be heard amidst all this clamour. Great was
his relief when the rope began slowly to pull him upwards.
Then the other general plunged in; but he fared no better than the
first, and was soon on dry ground again.
‘Well, you are a brave pair!’ said Bensurdatu, as he tied the rope round
his own waist; ‘let us see what will happen to me.’ And when he heard
the thunder and clamour round about him he thought to himself, ‘Oh, make
as much noise as you like, it won’t hurt me!’ When his feet touched the
bottom he found himself in a large, brilliantly lighted hall, and in the
middle sat the eldest princess, and in front of her lay a huge giant,
fast asleep. Directly she saw Bensurdatu she nodded to him, and asked
with her eyes how he had come there.
For answer he drew his sword, and was about to cut off the giant’s head,
when she stopped him quickly, and made signs to hide himself, as the
giant was just beginning to wake. ‘I smell the flesh of a man!’ murmured
he, stretching his great arms.
‘Why, how in the world could any man get down here?’ replied she; ‘you
had better go to sleep again.’
So he turned over and went to sleep. Then the princess signed to
Bensurdatu, who drew his sword and cut off the giant’s head with such a
blow that it flew into the corner. And the heart of the princess leapt
within her, and she placed a golden crown on the head of Bensurdatu, and
called him her deliverer.
‘Now show me where your sisters are,’ he said, ‘that I may free them
also.’
So the princess opened a door, and led him into another hall, wherein
sat her next sister, guarded by a giant who was fast asleep. When the
second princess saw them, she made a sign to them to hide themselves,
for the giant was showing symptoms of waking.
‘I smell man’s flesh!’ murmured he, sleepily.
‘Now, how could any man get down here?’ asked she; ‘go to sleep again.’
And as soon as he closed his eyes, Bensurdatu stole out from his corner,
and struck such a blow at his head that it flew far, far away. The
princess could not find words to thank Bensurdatu for what he had done,
and she too placed in his hand a golden crown.
‘Now show me where your youngest sister is,’ said he, ‘that I may free
her also.’
‘Ah! that I fear you will never be able to do,’ sighed they, ‘for she is
in the power of a serpent with seven heads.’
‘Take me to him,’ replied Bensurdatu. ‘It will be a splendid fight.’
Then the princess opened a door, and Bensurdatu passed through, and
found himself in a hall that was even larger than the other two. And
there stood the youngest sister, chained fast to the wall, and before
her was stretched a serpent with seven heads, horrible to see. As
Bensurdatu came forward it twisted all its seven heads in his direction,
and then made a quick dart to snatch him within its grasp. But
Bensurdatu drew his sword and laid about him, till the seven heads were
rolling on the floor. Flinging down his sword he rushed to the princess
and broke her chains, and she wept for joy, and embraced him, and took
the golden crown from off her head, and placed it in his hand.
‘Now we must go back to the upper world,’ said Bensurdatu, and led her
to the bottom of the river. The other princesses were waiting there, and
he tied the rope round the eldest, and rung his bell. And the generals
above heard, and drew her gently up. They then unfastened the cord and
threw it back into the river, and in a few moments the second princess
stood beside her sister.
So now there were left only Bensurdatu and the youngest princess. ‘Dear
Bensurdatu,’ said she, ‘do me a kindness, and let them draw you up
before me. I dread the treachery of the generals.
‘No, no,’ replied Bensurdatu, ‘I certainly will not leave you down here.
There is nothing to fear from my comrades.’
‘If it is your wish I will go up then; but first I swear that if you do
not follow to marry me, I shall stay single for the rest of my life.’
Then he bound the rope round her, and the generals drew her up.
But instead of lowering the rope again into the river, envy at the
courage and success of Bensurdatu so filled the hearts of the two
generals, that they turned away and left him to perish. And, more than
that, they threatened the princesses, and forced them to promise to tell
their parents that it was the two generals who had set them free. ‘And
if they should ask you about Bensurdatu, you must say you have never
seen him,’ they added; and the princesses, fearing for their lives,
promised everything, and they rode back to court together.
The king and queen were beside themselves with joy when they saw their
dear children once more. But when the generals had told their story, and
the dangers they had run, the king declared that they had gained their
reward, and that the two eldest princesses should become their wives.
And now we must see what poor Bensurdatu was doing.
He waited patiently a long, long time, but when the rope never came back
he knew he had been right, and that his comrades had betrayed him. ‘Ah,
now I shall never reach the world again,’ murmured he; but being a brave
man, and knowing that moaning his fate would profit him nothing, he rose
and began to search through the three halls, where, perhaps, he might
find something to help him. In the last one stood a dish, covered with
food, which reminded him that he was hungry, and he sat down and ate and
drank.
Months passed away, when, one morning, as he was walking through the
halls, he noticed a purse hanging on the wall, which had never been
there before. He took it down to examine it, and nearly let it fall with
surprise when a voice came from the purse saying: ‘What commands have
you?’
‘Oh, take me out of this horrible place, and up into the world again;
‘and in a moment he was standing by the river bank, with the purse
tightly grasped in his hand.
‘Now let me have the most beautiful ship that ever was built, all manned
and ready for sea.’ And there was the ship, with a flag floating from
its mast on which were the words, ‘King with the three crowns.’ Then
Bensurdatu climbed on board, and sailed away to the city where the three
princesses dwelt; and when he reached the harbour he blew trumpets and
beat drums, so that every one ran to the doors and windows. And the king
heard too, and saw the beautiful vessel, and said to himself: ‘That must
indeed be a mighty monarch, for he has three crowns while I have only
one.’ So he hastened to greet the stranger, and invited him to his
castle, for, thought he, ‘this will be a fine husband for my youngest
daughter.’ Now, the youngest princess had never married, and had turned
a deaf ear to all her wooers.
Such a long time had passed since Bensurdatu had left the palace, that
the king never guessed for a moment that the splendidly clad stranger
before him was the man whom he had so deeply mourned as dead. ‘Noble
lord,’ said he, ‘let us feast and make merry together, and then, if
it seem good to you, do me the honour to take my youngest daughter to
wife.’
And Bensurdatu was glad, and they all sat down to a great feast, and
there were great rejoicings. But only the youngest daughter was sad, for
her thoughts were with Bensurdatu. After they arose from the table the
king said to her, ‘Dear child, this mighty lord does you the honour to
ask your hand in marriage.’
‘Oh, father,’ answered she, ‘spare me, I pray you, for I desire to
remain single.’
Then Bensurdatu turned to her, and said: ‘And if I were Bensurdatu,
would you give the same answer to me?’
And as she stood silently gazing at him, he added: ‘Yes, I am
Bensurdatu; and this is my story.’
The king and queen had their hearts stirred within them at the tale of
his adventures, and when he had ended the king stretched out his hand,
and said: ‘Dear Bensurdatu, my youngest daughter shall indeed be your
wife; and when I die my crown shall be yours. As for the men who have
betrayed you, they shall leave the country and you shall see them no
more.’
And the wedding feast was ordered, and rejoicings were held for three
days over the marriage of Bensurdatu and the youngest princess.
[From the Sicilianische Märchen.]
Story DNA
Moral
True courage and loyalty will eventually be rewarded, while treachery and envy lead to disgrace.
Plot Summary
Three princesses vanish during a picnic, prompting the king to offer a royal reward for their return. After two generals fail, the loyal servant Bensurdatu embarks on the quest, rescuing the generals and learning from an old woman that the princesses are held captive beneath a river by giants and a seven-headed serpent. Bensurdatu bravely descends, defeats the monstrous guardians, and frees the princesses, but the envious generals betray him by cutting the rope, leaving him trapped and claiming credit for the rescue. Bensurdatu escapes the underworld with a magical purse, returns in disguise as a powerful monarch, and reveals his true identity to the youngest princess and the court, leading to his marriage to the princess and the banishment of the treacherous generals.
Themes
Emotional Arc
despair to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Sicilianische Märchen refers to a collection of Sicilian fairy tales, often reflecting a blend of Mediterranean and European folklore traditions.
Plot Beats (15)
- King and queen's three daughters vanish during a picnic, swallowed by a dark cloud.
- King offers a reward for their return: marriage to a princess and succession to the throne.
- Two generals attempt the quest, fail, run out of money, and become inn servants.
- Bensurdatu, a loyal servant, convinces the king to let him search for the princesses.
- Bensurdatu finds and rescues the two generals, who join his quest.
- They meet an old woman who reveals the princesses are at the bottom of a river, guarded by giants and a seven-headed serpent.
- The two generals attempt to descend into the river but are frightened by the noise and quickly pulled back up.
- Bensurdatu descends, defeats the two giants guarding the elder princesses, and then the seven-headed serpent guarding the youngest.
- Bensurdatu brings the princesses back to the river bottom, and the generals pull them up one by one.
- The youngest princess, fearing treachery, asks Bensurdatu to go up last, but he insists she go first.
- The generals, out of envy, cut the rope, abandoning Bensurdatu and forcing the princesses to lie about their rescue.
- Bensurdatu discovers a magical purse in the underworld, which grants his wishes, allowing him to return to the surface.
- Bensurdatu arrives in the king's city as a grand monarch, 'King with the three crowns,' and is invited to the palace.
- The king offers his youngest daughter's hand to Bensurdatu, who then reveals his true identity to her and the court.
- Bensurdatu marries the youngest princess, the generals are banished, and he is named heir to the throne.
Characters
Bensurdatu
Initially poorly dressed, later splendidly clad
Attire: Starts in simple clothes, then rags, ends in magnificent royal attire
Brave, loyal, resourceful
King
No specific details given
Attire: Royal robes and crown
Grief-stricken, trusting, grateful
Youngest Princess
Beautiful
Attire: Princess attire, including a golden crown
Loyal, discerning, grateful
First General
Strong
Attire: Starts in general's uniform, then rags, then back to uniform
Envious, treacherous, opportunistic
Second General
Strong
Attire: Starts in general's uniform, then rags, then back to uniform
Envious, treacherous, opportunistic
Serpent with Seven Heads
Seven heads, horrible to see
Aggressive, menacing
Locations
Royal Garden
A garden with a green glade leading to a fence, and heather nearby where the king and queen sit.
Mood: peaceful, carefree, then suddenly mysterious and frightening
The princesses vanish after crossing the fence into the garden.
Tiny Hut in a Wild Place
A small, isolated hut with a light in the window, located in a desolate, wild area.
Mood: eerie, foreboding, mysterious
Bensurdatu and the generals receive information about the princesses' location.
Bottom of the Deep River
Three large halls, each grander than the last, located at the bottom of a deep river.
Mood: magical, dangerous, surreal
Bensurdatu rescues the princesses, battling giants and a seven-headed serpent.
Royal Palace
A grand palace where the king and queen reside, and where feasts and celebrations are held.
Mood: joyful, relieved, then tense and deceptive
The princesses return, the generals lie, and Bensurdatu eventually reveals his true identity.
River Bank
The edge of the river where Bensurdatu is transported after months in the halls.
Mood: hopeful, transformative
Bensurdatu escapes the halls and begins his journey back to the palace.