The Story of Bensurdatu

by Andrew Lang · from The Grey Fairy Book

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The Story of Bensurdatu

There was once a king and a queen who had three wonderfully beautiful

daughters, and their one thought, from morning till night, was how they

could make the girls happy.

One day the princesses said to the king, ‘Dear father, we want so much

to have a picnic, and eat our dinner in the country.’

‘Very well, dear children, let us have a picnic by all means,’ answered

he, and gave orders that everything should be got ready.

When luncheon was prepared it was put into a cart, and the royal family

stepped into a carriage and drove right away into the country. After

a few miles they reached a house and garden belonging to the king, and

close by was their favourite place for lunch. The drive had made them

very hungry, and they ate with a hearty appetite, till almost all the

food had disappeared.

When they had quite done, they said to their parents: ‘Now we should

like to wander about the garden a little, but when you want to go home,

just call to us.’ And they ran off, laughing, down a green glade, which

led to the garden.

But no sooner had they stepped across the fence, than a dark cloud

came down and covered them, and prevented them seeing whither they were

going.

Meanwhile the king and queen sat lazily among the heather, and an hour

or two slipped away. The sun was dropping towards the horizon, and they

began to think it was time to go home. So they called to their daughters

and called again, but no one answered them.

Frightened at the silence, they searched every corner of the garden, the

house, and the neighbouring wood, but no trace of the girls was to be

found anywhere. The earth seemed to have swallowed them up. The poor

parents were in despair. The queen wept all the way home, and for many

days after, and the king issued a proclamation that whoever should bring

back his lost daughters should have one of them to wife, and should,

after his death, reign in his stead.

Now two young generals were at that time living at the court, and when

they heard the king’s declaration, they said one to the other: ‘Let us

go in search of them; perhaps we shall be the lucky persons.’

And they set out, each mounted on a strong horse, taking with them a

change of raiment and some money.

But though they inquired at every village they rode through, they could

hear nothing of the princesses, and by-and-by their money was all spent,

and they were forced to sell their horses, or give up the search. Even

this money only lasted a little while longer, and nothing but their

clothes lay between them and starvation. They sold the spare garments

that were bound on their saddles, and went in the coats they stood up

in to the inn, to beg for some food, as they were really starving. When,

however, they had to pay for what they had eaten and drank, they said to

the host: ‘We have no money, and naught but the clothes we stand up in.

Take these, and give us instead some old rags, and let us stay here

and serve you.’ And the innkeeper was content with the bargain, and the

generals remained, and were his servants.

All this time the king and queen remained in their palace hungering for

their children, but not a word was heard of either of them or of the

generals who had gone to seek for them.

Now there was living in the palace a faithful servant of the king’s

called Bensurdatu, who had served him for many years, and when

Bensurdatu saw how grieved the king was, he lifted up his voice and said

to him: ‘Your majesty, let me go and seek your daughters.’

‘No, no, Bensurdatu,’ replied the king. ‘Three daughters have I lost,

and two generals, and shall I lose you also?’

But Bensurdatu said again: ‘Let me now go, your majesty; trust me, and I

will bring you back your daughters.’

Then the king gave way, and Bensurdatu set forth, and rode on till he

came to the inn, where he dismounted and asked for food. It was brought

by the two generals, whom he knew at once in spite of their miserable

clothes, and, much astonished, asked them how in the world they came

there.

They told him all their adventures, and he sent for the innkeeper, and

said to him: ‘Give them back their garments, and I will pay everything

that they owe you.’

And the innkeeper did as he was bid, and when the two generals

were dressed in their proper clothes, they declared they would join

Bensurdatu, and with him seek for the king’s daughters.

The three companions rode on for many miles, and at length they came to

a wild place, without sign of a human being. It was getting dark, and

fearing to be lost on this desolate spot they pushed on their horses,

and at last saw a light in the window of a tiny hut.

‘Who comes there?’ asked a voice, as they knocked at the door.

‘Oh! have pity on us, and give us a night’s shelter,’ replied

Bensurdatu; ‘we are three tired travellers who have lost our way.’

Then the door was opened by a very old woman who stood back, and

beckoned them to enter. ‘Whence do you come, and whither do you go?’

said she.

‘Ah, good woman, we have a heavy task before us,’ answered Bensurdatu,

‘we are bound to carry the king’s daughters back to the palace!’

‘Oh, unhappy creatures,’ cried she, ‘you know not what you are doing!

The king’s daughters were covered by a thick cloud, and no one knows

where they may now be.’

‘Oh, tell us, if you know, my good woman,’ entreated Bensurdatu, ‘for

with them lies all our happiness.’

‘Even if I were to tell you,’ answered she, ‘you could not rescue them.

To do that you would have to go to the very bottom of a deep river, and

though certainly you would find the king’s daughters there, yet the

two eldest are guarded by two giants, and the youngest is watched by a

serpent with seven heads.’

The two generals, who stood by listening, were filled with terror at her

words, and wished to return immediately; but Bensurdatu stood firm, and

said: ‘Now we have got so far we must carry the thing through. Tell us

where the river is, so that we may get there as soon as possible.’ And

the old woman told them, and gave them some cheese, wine, and bread,

so that they should not set forth starving; and when they had eaten and

drunk they laid themselves down to sleep.

The sun had only just risen above the hills next morning before they all

woke, and, taking leave of the wise woman who had helped them, they rode

on till they came to the river.

‘I am the eldest,’ said one of the generals, ‘and it is my right to go

down first.’

So the others fastened a cord round him, and gave him a little bell, and

let him down into the water. But scarcely had the river closed above

his head when such dreadful rushing sounds and peals of thunder came

crashing round about him that he lost all his courage, and rang his

bell, if perchance it might be heard amidst all this clamour. Great was

his relief when the rope began slowly to pull him upwards.

Then the other general plunged in; but he fared no better than the

first, and was soon on dry ground again.

‘Well, you are a brave pair!’ said Bensurdatu, as he tied the rope round

his own waist; ‘let us see what will happen to me.’ And when he heard

the thunder and clamour round about him he thought to himself, ‘Oh, make

as much noise as you like, it won’t hurt me!’ When his feet touched the

bottom he found himself in a large, brilliantly lighted hall, and in the

middle sat the eldest princess, and in front of her lay a huge giant,

fast asleep. Directly she saw Bensurdatu she nodded to him, and asked

with her eyes how he had come there.

For answer he drew his sword, and was about to cut off the giant’s head,

when she stopped him quickly, and made signs to hide himself, as the

giant was just beginning to wake. ‘I smell the flesh of a man!’ murmured

he, stretching his great arms.

‘Why, how in the world could any man get down here?’ replied she; ‘you

had better go to sleep again.’

So he turned over and went to sleep. Then the princess signed to

Bensurdatu, who drew his sword and cut off the giant’s head with such a

blow that it flew into the corner. And the heart of the princess leapt

within her, and she placed a golden crown on the head of Bensurdatu, and

called him her deliverer.

‘Now show me where your sisters are,’ he said, ‘that I may free them

also.’

So the princess opened a door, and led him into another hall, wherein

sat her next sister, guarded by a giant who was fast asleep. When the

second princess saw them, she made a sign to them to hide themselves,

for the giant was showing symptoms of waking.

‘I smell man’s flesh!’ murmured he, sleepily.

‘Now, how could any man get down here?’ asked she; ‘go to sleep again.’

And as soon as he closed his eyes, Bensurdatu stole out from his corner,

and struck such a blow at his head that it flew far, far away. The

princess could not find words to thank Bensurdatu for what he had done,

and she too placed in his hand a golden crown.

‘Now show me where your youngest sister is,’ said he, ‘that I may free

her also.’

‘Ah! that I fear you will never be able to do,’ sighed they, ‘for she is

in the power of a serpent with seven heads.’

‘Take me to him,’ replied Bensurdatu. ‘It will be a splendid fight.’

Then the princess opened a door, and Bensurdatu passed through, and

found himself in a hall that was even larger than the other two. And

there stood the youngest sister, chained fast to the wall, and before

her was stretched a serpent with seven heads, horrible to see. As

Bensurdatu came forward it twisted all its seven heads in his direction,

and then made a quick dart to snatch him within its grasp. But

Bensurdatu drew his sword and laid about him, till the seven heads were

rolling on the floor. Flinging down his sword he rushed to the princess

and broke her chains, and she wept for joy, and embraced him, and took

the golden crown from off her head, and placed it in his hand.

‘Now we must go back to the upper world,’ said Bensurdatu, and led her

to the bottom of the river. The other princesses were waiting there, and

he tied the rope round the eldest, and rung his bell. And the generals

above heard, and drew her gently up. They then unfastened the cord and

threw it back into the river, and in a few moments the second princess

stood beside her sister.

So now there were left only Bensurdatu and the youngest princess. ‘Dear

Bensurdatu,’ said she, ‘do me a kindness, and let them draw you up

before me. I dread the treachery of the generals.

‘No, no,’ replied Bensurdatu, ‘I certainly will not leave you down here.

There is nothing to fear from my comrades.’

‘If it is your wish I will go up then; but first I swear that if you do

not follow to marry me, I shall stay single for the rest of my life.’

Then he bound the rope round her, and the generals drew her up.

But instead of lowering the rope again into the river, envy at the

courage and success of Bensurdatu so filled the hearts of the two

generals, that they turned away and left him to perish. And, more than

that, they threatened the princesses, and forced them to promise to tell

their parents that it was the two generals who had set them free. ‘And

if they should ask you about Bensurdatu, you must say you have never

seen him,’ they added; and the princesses, fearing for their lives,

promised everything, and they rode back to court together.

The king and queen were beside themselves with joy when they saw their

dear children once more. But when the generals had told their story, and

the dangers they had run, the king declared that they had gained their

reward, and that the two eldest princesses should become their wives.

And now we must see what poor Bensurdatu was doing.

He waited patiently a long, long time, but when the rope never came back

he knew he had been right, and that his comrades had betrayed him. ‘Ah,

now I shall never reach the world again,’ murmured he; but being a brave

man, and knowing that moaning his fate would profit him nothing, he rose

and began to search through the three halls, where, perhaps, he might

find something to help him. In the last one stood a dish, covered with

food, which reminded him that he was hungry, and he sat down and ate and

drank.

Months passed away, when, one morning, as he was walking through the

halls, he noticed a purse hanging on the wall, which had never been

there before. He took it down to examine it, and nearly let it fall with

surprise when a voice came from the purse saying: ‘What commands have

you?’

‘Oh, take me out of this horrible place, and up into the world again;

‘and in a moment he was standing by the river bank, with the purse

tightly grasped in his hand.

‘Now let me have the most beautiful ship that ever was built, all manned

and ready for sea.’ And there was the ship, with a flag floating from

its mast on which were the words, ‘King with the three crowns.’ Then

Bensurdatu climbed on board, and sailed away to the city where the three

princesses dwelt; and when he reached the harbour he blew trumpets and

beat drums, so that every one ran to the doors and windows. And the king

heard too, and saw the beautiful vessel, and said to himself: ‘That must

indeed be a mighty monarch, for he has three crowns while I have only

one.’ So he hastened to greet the stranger, and invited him to his

castle, for, thought he, ‘this will be a fine husband for my youngest

daughter.’ Now, the youngest princess had never married, and had turned

a deaf ear to all her wooers.

Such a long time had passed since Bensurdatu had left the palace, that

the king never guessed for a moment that the splendidly clad stranger

before him was the man whom he had so deeply mourned as dead. ‘Noble

lord,’ said he, ‘let us feast and make merry together, and then, if

it seem good to you, do me the honour to take my youngest daughter to

wife.’

And Bensurdatu was glad, and they all sat down to a great feast, and

there were great rejoicings. But only the youngest daughter was sad, for

her thoughts were with Bensurdatu. After they arose from the table the

king said to her, ‘Dear child, this mighty lord does you the honour to

ask your hand in marriage.’

‘Oh, father,’ answered she, ‘spare me, I pray you, for I desire to

remain single.’

Then Bensurdatu turned to her, and said: ‘And if I were Bensurdatu,

would you give the same answer to me?’

And as she stood silently gazing at him, he added: ‘Yes, I am

Bensurdatu; and this is my story.’

The king and queen had their hearts stirred within them at the tale of

his adventures, and when he had ended the king stretched out his hand,

and said: ‘Dear Bensurdatu, my youngest daughter shall indeed be your

wife; and when I die my crown shall be yours. As for the men who have

betrayed you, they shall leave the country and you shall see them no

more.’

And the wedding feast was ordered, and rejoicings were held for three

days over the marriage of Bensurdatu and the youngest princess.

[From the Sicilianische Märchen.]


Story DNA

Moral

True courage and loyalty will eventually be rewarded, while treachery and envy lead to disgrace.

Plot Summary

Three princesses vanish during a picnic, prompting the king to offer a royal reward for their return. After two generals fail, the loyal servant Bensurdatu embarks on the quest, rescuing the generals and learning from an old woman that the princesses are held captive beneath a river by giants and a seven-headed serpent. Bensurdatu bravely descends, defeats the monstrous guardians, and frees the princesses, but the envious generals betray him by cutting the rope, leaving him trapped and claiming credit for the rescue. Bensurdatu escapes the underworld with a magical purse, returns in disguise as a powerful monarch, and reveals his true identity to the youngest princess and the court, leading to his marriage to the princess and the banishment of the treacherous generals.

Themes

loyalty and betrayalcourage and perseverancejustice and rewardtrue love and devotion

Emotional Arc

despair to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three, direct address to reader (implied, e.g., 'And now we must see what poor Bensurdatu was doing.')

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural, person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: dark cloud that abducts princesses, giants, seven-headed serpent, magical talking purse that grants wishes, underwater realm
the three crowns (symbolizing Bensurdatu's triple victory and eventual kingship)the magical purse (representing unexpected aid and power)the rope (symbolizing connection, rescue, and betrayal)

Cultural Context

Origin: Sicilian
Era: timeless fairy tale

Sicilianische Märchen refers to a collection of Sicilian fairy tales, often reflecting a blend of Mediterranean and European folklore traditions.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. King and queen's three daughters vanish during a picnic, swallowed by a dark cloud.
  2. King offers a reward for their return: marriage to a princess and succession to the throne.
  3. Two generals attempt the quest, fail, run out of money, and become inn servants.
  4. Bensurdatu, a loyal servant, convinces the king to let him search for the princesses.
  5. Bensurdatu finds and rescues the two generals, who join his quest.
  6. They meet an old woman who reveals the princesses are at the bottom of a river, guarded by giants and a seven-headed serpent.
  7. The two generals attempt to descend into the river but are frightened by the noise and quickly pulled back up.
  8. Bensurdatu descends, defeats the two giants guarding the elder princesses, and then the seven-headed serpent guarding the youngest.
  9. Bensurdatu brings the princesses back to the river bottom, and the generals pull them up one by one.
  10. The youngest princess, fearing treachery, asks Bensurdatu to go up last, but he insists she go first.
  11. The generals, out of envy, cut the rope, abandoning Bensurdatu and forcing the princesses to lie about their rescue.
  12. Bensurdatu discovers a magical purse in the underworld, which grants his wishes, allowing him to return to the surface.
  13. Bensurdatu arrives in the king's city as a grand monarch, 'King with the three crowns,' and is invited to the palace.
  14. The king offers his youngest daughter's hand to Bensurdatu, who then reveals his true identity to her and the court.
  15. Bensurdatu marries the youngest princess, the generals are banished, and he is named heir to the throne.

Characters

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Bensurdatu

human young adult male

Initially poorly dressed, later splendidly clad

Attire: Starts in simple clothes, then rags, ends in magnificent royal attire

Tattered rags transforming into kingly robes

Brave, loyal, resourceful

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King

human adult male

No specific details given

Attire: Royal robes and crown

Single crown, symbol of his kingdom

Grief-stricken, trusting, grateful

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Youngest Princess

human young adult female

Beautiful

Attire: Princess attire, including a golden crown

Golden crown briefly held by Bensurdatu

Loyal, discerning, grateful

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First General

human young adult male

Strong

Attire: Starts in general's uniform, then rags, then back to uniform

General's uniform hiding a deceitful heart

Envious, treacherous, opportunistic

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Second General

human young adult male

Strong

Attire: Starts in general's uniform, then rags, then back to uniform

General's uniform hiding a deceitful heart

Envious, treacherous, opportunistic

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Serpent with Seven Heads

magical creature ageless non-human

Seven heads, horrible to see

Seven heads twisting in unison

Aggressive, menacing

Locations

Royal Garden

outdoor afternoon Varies, sunny enough for a picnic

A garden with a green glade leading to a fence, and heather nearby where the king and queen sit.

Mood: peaceful, carefree, then suddenly mysterious and frightening

The princesses vanish after crossing the fence into the garden.

fence green glade heather carriage picnic cart

Tiny Hut in a Wild Place

indoor dusk Implied to be cold or dangerous, as the travelers seek shelter

A small, isolated hut with a light in the window, located in a desolate, wild area.

Mood: eerie, foreboding, mysterious

Bensurdatu and the generals receive information about the princesses' location.

window light door old woman

Bottom of the Deep River

transitional N/A

Three large halls, each grander than the last, located at the bottom of a deep river.

Mood: magical, dangerous, surreal

Bensurdatu rescues the princesses, battling giants and a seven-headed serpent.

giants serpent with seven heads golden crown chains rope

Royal Palace

indoor N/A

A grand palace where the king and queen reside, and where feasts and celebrations are held.

Mood: joyful, relieved, then tense and deceptive

The princesses return, the generals lie, and Bensurdatu eventually reveals his true identity.

throne feast table crowns

River Bank

outdoor morning N/A

The edge of the river where Bensurdatu is transported after months in the halls.

Mood: hopeful, transformative

Bensurdatu escapes the halls and begins his journey back to the palace.

purse ship flag