What Came of Picking Flowers

by Andrew Lang · from The Grey Fairy Book

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What Came of Picking Flowers

There was once a woman who had three daughters whom she loved very much.

One day the eldest was walking in a water-meadow, when she saw a pink

growing in the stream. She stooped to pick the flower, but her hand had

scarcely touched it, when she vanished altogether. The next morning the

second sister went out into the meadow, to see if she could find any

traces of the lost girl, and as a branch of lovely roses lay trailing

across her path, she bent down to move it away, and in so doing,

could not resist plucking one of the roses. In a moment she too had

disappeared. Wondering what could have become of her two sisters, the

youngest followed in their footsteps, and fell a victim to a branch

of delicious white jessamine. So the old woman was left without any

daughters at all.

She wept, and wept, and wept, all day and all night, and went on weeping

so long, that her son, who had been a little boy when his sisters

disappeared, grew up to be a tall youth. Then one night he asked his

mother to tell him what was the matter.

When he had heard the whole story, he said, ‘Give me your blessing,

mother, and I will go and search the world till I find them.’

So he set forth, and after he had travelled several miles without any

adventures, he came upon three big boys fighting in the road. He stopped

and inquired what they were fighting about, and one of them answered:

‘My lord! our father left to us, when he died, a pair of boots, a key,

and a cap. Whoever puts on the boots and wishes himself in any place,

will find himself there. The key will open every door in the world, and

with the cap on your head no one can see you. Now our eldest brother

wants to have all three things for himself, and we wish to draw lots for

them.’

‘Oh, that is easily settled,’ said the youth. ‘I will throw this stone

as far as I can, and the one who picks it up first, shall have the three

things.’ So he took the stone and flung it, and while the three brothers

were running after it, he drew hastily on the boots, and said, ‘Boots,

take me to the place where I shall find my eldest sister.’

The next moment the young man was standing on a steep mountain before

the gates of a strong castle guarded by bolts and bars and iron chains.

The key, which he had not forgotten to put in his pocket, opened the

doors one by one, and he walked through a number of halls and corridors,

till he met a beautiful and richly-dressed young lady who started back

in surprise at the sight of him, and exclaimed, ‘Oh, sir, how did

you contrive to get in here?’ The young man replied that he was her

brother, and told her by what means he had been able to pass through the

doors. In return, she told him how happy she was, except for one thing,

and that was, her husband lay under a spell, and could never break it

till there should be put to death a man who could not die.

They talked together for a long time, and then the lady said he had

better leave her as she expected her husband back at any moment, and he

might not like him to be there; but the young man assured her she need

not be afraid, as he had with him a cap which would make him invisible.

They were still deep in conversation when the door suddenly opened, and

a bird flew in, but he saw nothing unusual, for, at the first noise, the

youth had put on his cap. The lady jumped up and brought a large

golden basin, into which the bird flew, reappearing directly after as

a handsome man. Turning to his wife, he cried, ‘I am sure someone is in

the room!’ She got frightened, and declared that she was quite alone,

but her husband persisted, and in the end she had to confess the truth.

‘But if he is really your brother, why did you hide him?’ asked he.

‘I believe you are telling me a lie, and if he comes back I shall kill

him!’

At this the youth took off his cap, and came forward. Then the husband

saw that he was indeed so like his wife that he doubted her word no

longer, and embraced his brother-in-law with delight. Drawing a feather

from his bird’s skin, he said, ‘If you are in danger and cry, “Come and

help me, King of the Birds,” everything will go well with you.’

The young man thanked him and went away, and after he had left the

castle he told the boots that they must take him to the place where his

second sister was living. As before, he found himself at the gates of

a huge castle, and within was his second sister, very happy with her

husband, who loved her dearly, but longing for the moment when he should

be set free from the spell that kept him half his life a fish. When he

arrived and had been introduced by his wife to her brother, he welcomed

him warmly, and gave him a fish-scale, saying, ‘If you are in danger,

call to me, “Come and help me, King of the Fishes,” and everything will

go well with you.’

The young man thanked him and took his leave, and when he was outside

the gates he told the boots to take him to the place where his youngest

sister lived. The boots carried him to a dark cavern, with steps of iron

leading up to it. Inside she sat, weeping and sobbing, and as she had

done nothing else the whole time she had been there, the poor girl had

grown very thin. When she saw a man standing before her, she sprang to

her feet and exclaimed, ‘Oh, whoever you are, save me and take me from

this horrible place!’ Then he told her who he was, and how he had seen

her sisters, whose happiness was spoilt by the spell under which both

their husbands lay, and she, in turn, related her story. She had been

carried off in the water-meadow by a horrible monster, who wanted to

make her marry him by force, and had kept her a prisoner all these years

because she would not submit to his will. Every day he came to beg her

to consent to his wishes, and to remind her that there was no hope of

her being set free, as he was the most constant man in the world, and

besides that he could never die. At these words the youth remembered his

two enchanted brothers-in-law, and he advised his sister to promise to

marry the old man, if he would tell her why he could never die. Suddenly

everything began to tremble, as if it was shaken by a whirlwind, and the

old man entered, and flinging himself at the feet of the girl, he said:

‘Are you still determined never to marry me? If so you will have to sit

there weeping till the end of the world, for I shall always be faithful

to my wish to marry you!’ ‘Well, I will marry you,’ she said, ‘if you

will tell me why it is that you can never die.’

Then the old man burst into peals of laughter. ‘Ah, ah, ah! You are

thinking how you would be able to kill me? Well, to do that, you would

have to find an iron casket which lies at the bottom of the sea, and has

a white dove inside, and then you would have to find the egg which

the dove laid, and bring it here, and dash it against my head.’ And

he laughed again in his certainty that no one had ever got down to

the bottom of the sea, and that if they did, they would never find the

casket, or be able to open it. When he could speak once more, he said,

‘Now you will be obliged to marry me, as you know my secret.’ But she

begged so hard that the wedding might be put off for three days, that

he consented, and went away rejoicing at his victory. When he had

disappeared, the brother took off the cap which had kept him invisible

all this time, and told his sister not to lose heart as he hoped in

three days she would be free. Then he drew on his boots, and wished

himself at the seashore, and there he was directly. Drawing out the

fish-scale, he cried, ‘Come and help me, King of the Fishes!’ and

his brother-in-law swam up, and asked what he could do. The young man

related the story, and when he had finished his listener summoned all

the fishes to his presence. The last to arrive was a little sardine, who

apologised for being so late, but said she had hurt herself by knocking

her head against an iron casket that lay in the bottom of the sea. The

king ordered several of the largest and strongest of his subjects to

take the little sardine as a guide, and bring him the iron casket. They

soon returned with the box placed across their backs and laid it down

before him. Then the youth produced the key and said ‘Key, open that

box!’ and the key opened it, and though they were all crowding round,

ready to catch it, the white dove within flew away.

It was useless to go after it, and for a moment the young man’s heart

sank. The next minute, however, he remembered that he had still his

feather, and drew it out crying, ‘Come to me, King of the Birds!’ and

a rushing noise was heard, and the King of the Birds perched on his

shoulder, and asked what he could do to help him. His brother-in-law

told him the whole story, and when he had finished the King of the Birds

commanded all his subjects to hasten to his presence. In an instant

the air was dark with birds of all sizes, and at the very last came the

white dove, apologising for being so late by saying that an old friend

had arrived at his nest, and he had been obliged to give him some

dinner. The King of the Birds ordered some of them to show the young man

the white dove’s nest, and when they reached it, there lay the egg which

was to break the spell and set them all free. When it was safely in his

pocket, he told the boots to carry him straight to the cavern where his

youngest sister sat awaiting him.

Now it was already far on into the third day, which the old man had

fixed for the wedding, and when the youth reached the cavern with his

cap on his head, he found the monster there, urging the girl to keep her

word and let the marriage take place at once. At a sign from her brother

she sat down and invited the old monster to lay his head on her lap. He

did so with delight, and her brother standing behind her back passed

her the egg unseen. She took it, and dashed it straight at the horrible

head, and the monster started, and with a groan that people took for the

rumblings of an earthquake, he turned over and died.

As the breath went out of his body the husbands of the two eldest

daughters resumed their proper shapes, and, sending for their

mother-in-law, whose sorrow was so unexpectedly turned into joy, they

had a great feast, and the youngest sister was rich to the end of her

days with the treasures she found in the cave, collected by the monster.

[From the Portuguese.]


Story DNA

Moral

Family bonds and cleverness can overcome seemingly insurmountable obstacles and evil.

Plot Summary

Three sisters vanish after picking enchanted flowers. Years later, their grown brother embarks on a quest to find them. He acquires magical items—traveling boots, a universal key, and an invisibility cap—and uses them to locate his two eldest sisters, both married to men under animal-transformation spells, from whom he gains magical aids. He then finds his youngest sister imprisoned by an immortal monster. With his sister's help, he tricks the monster into revealing his vulnerability—an egg hidden within a dove, inside a casket at the bottom of the sea. Using his magical aids, he retrieves the egg and, with his sister, defeats the monster, breaking all spells and reuniting his family in joy and wealth.

Themes

family loyaltyperseverancecouragethe power of magic

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three, magical realism

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: happy
Magic: enchanted flowers causing disappearance, magical boots for instant travel, universal key, invisibility cap, transformation spells (bird-man, fish-man), magical feather and fish-scale for summoning, immortal monster with a hidden life source (egg), talking animals (King of Fishes, King of Birds, sardine, dove)
the flowers (initial enchantment/danger)the magical items (tools for overcoming obstacles)the egg (the monster's vulnerable life force)

Cultural Context

Origin: Portuguese
Era: timeless fairy tale

Fairy tales from this region often feature elements of magic, quests, and moral lessons, reflecting a blend of European folklore traditions.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. Three sisters disappear one by one after picking enchanted flowers in a water-meadow.
  2. Their mother grieves for years, and her son grows into a young man.
  3. The son learns of his sisters' disappearance and vows to find them.
  4. He encounters three brothers fighting over magical items (traveling boots, universal key, invisibility cap) and tricks them into giving him all three.
  5. Using the boots, he travels to his eldest sister's castle, uses the key to enter, and the cap to hide from her bird-man husband.
  6. He reveals himself, learns of his brother-in-law's spell, and receives a magical feather for help.
  7. He travels to his second sister's castle, learns of her fish-man husband's spell, and receives a magical fish-scale for help.
  8. He travels to a dark cavern where his youngest sister is imprisoned by an immortal monster who wants to marry her.
  9. The sister, advised by her invisible brother, tricks the monster into revealing the secret to his immortality: an egg inside a dove, inside an iron casket at the bottom of the sea.
  10. The monster grants a three-day delay for the wedding, confident in his invincibility.
  11. The brother uses the fish-scale to summon the King of the Fishes, who retrieves the iron casket from the seabed.
  12. He uses the key to open the casket, releasing a white dove.
  13. He uses the feather to summon the King of the Birds, who helps him find the dove's nest and retrieve the magical egg.
  14. On the third day, the brother returns to the cavern, and his sister, with the egg, smashes it against the monster's head, killing him.
  15. The monster's death breaks the spells on the other two brothers-in-law, and the family reunites, celebrating with a feast and discovering the monster's treasures.

Characters

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The Mother

human elderly female

Initially grief-stricken and aged by sorrow, later joyful

Attire: Simple, mourning clothes (inferred)

Tear-streaked face

Loving, sorrowful, ultimately joyful

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The Youth

human young adult male

Tall and strong from his travels

Attire: Travel-worn clothes, magical boots, cap, and key

Magical boots

Brave, determined, resourceful

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Eldest Sister

human young adult female

Beautiful and richly dressed

Attire: Rich gown befitting a castle

Rich gown

Happy but trapped, longing for her husband's freedom

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Second Sister

human young adult female

Happy and loved by her husband

Attire: Fine clothes befitting her status

Fish scale

Happy but longing for her husband's freedom

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Youngest Sister

human young adult female

Thin and weakened from captivity

Attire: Tattered, simple dress

Tattered dress

Resilient, clever, desperate for freedom

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King of the Birds

magical creature ageless male

A majestic bird with vibrant plumage

Attire: Feathers

Vibrant plumage

Powerful, helpful, commanding

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King of the Fishes

magical creature ageless male

A large, regal fish

Attire: Scales

Fish scales

Powerful, helpful, commanding

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The Monster

monster elderly male

Horrible and imposing

Attire: None specified

Egg smashed on head

Persistent, cruel, boastful

Locations

Water-meadow

outdoor morning spring

A meadow with a stream, where pinks, roses, and white jessamine grow.

Mood: peaceful, deceptive

The three sisters vanish after picking flowers.

stream pink flowers roses white jessamine

Mountain Castle

outdoor

A strong castle on a steep mountain, guarded by bolts, bars, and iron chains, with halls and corridors inside.

Mood: imposing, secure

The eldest sister is found, married to a man under a bird spell.

steep mountain iron gates bolts bars iron chains halls corridors

Dark Cavern

indoor

A dark cavern with iron steps leading up to it, where the youngest sister is held prisoner.

Mood: desolate, oppressive

The youngest sister is rescued, and the monster is defeated.

iron steps treasure damp stone walls

Seashore

outdoor

A seashore where the hero summons the King of the Fishes.

Mood: open, hopeful

The hero calls upon the King of the Fishes to retrieve the iron casket.

sand waves horizon