A French Puck

by Andrew Lang · from The Lilac Fairy Book

fairy tale trickster tale whimsical Ages 5-10 1103 words 5 min read
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Original Story 1103 words · 5 min read

A FRENCH PUCK

AMONG the mountain pastures and valleys that lie in the centre of France

there dwelt a mischievous kind of spirit, whose delight it was to play

tricks on everybody, and particularly on the shepherds and the cowboys.

They never knew when they were safe from him, as he could change himself

into a man, woman or child, a stick, a goat, a ploughshare. Indeed,

there was only one thing whose shape he could not take, and that was a

needle. At least, he could transform himself into a needle, but try as

he might he never was able to imitate the hole, so every woman would

have found him out at once, and this he knew.

Now the hour oftenest chosen by this naughty sprite (whom we will call

Puck) for performing his pranks was about midnight, just when the

shepherds and cowherds, tired out with their long day's work, were sound

asleep. Then he would go into the cowsheds and unfasten the chains that

fixed each beast in its own stall, and let them fall with a heavy clang

to the ground. The noise was so loud that it was certain to awaken the

cowboys, however fatigued they might be, and they dragged themselves

wearily to the stable to put back the chains. But no sooner had they

returned to their beds than the same thing happened again, and so on

till the morning. Or perhaps Puck would spend his night in plaiting

together the manes and tails of two of the horses, so that it would take

the grooms hours of labour to get them right in the morning, while Puck,

hidden among the hay in the loft, would peep out to watch them,

enjoying himself amazingly all the time.

   *       *       *       *       *

One evening more than eighty years ago a man named William was passing

along the bank of a stream when he noticed a sheep who was bleating

loudly. William thought it must have strayed from the flock, and that he

had better take it home with him till he could discover its owner. So he

went up to where it was standing, and as it seemed so tired that it

could hardly walk, he hoisted it on his shoulders and continued on his

way. The sheep was pretty heavy, but the good man was merciful and

staggered along as best he could under his load.

'It is not much further,' he thought to himself as he reached an avenue

of walnut trees, when suddenly a voice spoke out from over his head, and

made him jump.

'Where are you?' said the voice, and the sheep answered:

'Here on the shoulders of a donkey.'

In another moment the sheep was standing on the ground and William was

running towards home as fast as his legs would carry him. But as he

went, a laugh, which yet was something of a bleat, rang in his ears, and

though he tried not to hear, the words reached him, 'Oh, dear! What fun

I have had, to be sure!'

   *       *       *       *       *

Puck was careful not always to play his tricks in the same place, but

visited one village after another, so that everyone trembled lest he

should be the next victim. After a bit he grew tired of cowboys and

shepherds, and wondered if there was no one else to give him some sport.

At length he was told of a young couple who were going to the nearest

town to buy all that they needed for setting up house. Quite certain

that they would forget something which they could not do without, Puck

waited patiently till they were jogging along in their cart on their

return journey, and changed himself into a fly in order to overhear

their conversation.

For a long time it was very dull--all about their wedding day next

month, and who were to be invited. This led the bride to her wedding

dress, and she gave a little scream.

'Just think! Oh! how could I be so stupid! I have forgotten to buy the

different coloured reels of cotton to match my clothes!'

'Dear, dear!' exclaimed the young man. 'That is unlucky; and didn't

you tell me that the dressmaker was coming in to-morrow?'

'Yes, I did,' and then suddenly she gave another little scream, which

had quite a different sound from the first. 'Look! Look!'

The bridegroom looked, and on one side of the road he saw a large ball

of thread of all colours--of all the colours, that is, of the dresses

that were tied on to the back of the cart.

'Well, that is a wonderful piece of good fortune,' cried he, as he

sprang out to get it. 'One would think a fairy had put it there on

purpose.'

'Perhaps she has,' laughed the girl, and as she spoke she seemed to hear

an echo of her laughter coming from the horse, but of course that was

nonsense.

   *       *       *       *       *

The dressmaker was delighted with the thread that was given her. It

matched the stuffs so perfectly, and never tied itself in knots, or

broke perpetually, as most thread did. She finished her work much

quicker than she expected, and the bride said she was to be sure to come

to the church and see her in her wedding dress.

There was a great crowd assembled to witness the ceremony, for the young

people were immense favourites in the neighbourhood, and their parents

were very rich. The doors were open, and the bride could be seen from

afar, walking under the chestnut avenue.

'What a beautiful girl!' exclaimed the men. 'What a lovely dress!'

whispered the women. But just as she entered the church and took the

hand of the bridegroom, who was waiting for her, a loud noise was heard.

'Crick! crack! Crick! crack!' and the wedding garments fell to the

ground, to the great confusion of the wearer.

Not that the ceremony was put off for a little thing like that. Cloaks

in profusion were instantly offered to the young bride, but she was so

upset that she could hardly keep from tears. One of the guests, more

curious than the rest, stayed behind to examine the dress, determined,

if she could, to find out the cause of the disaster.

'The thread must have been rotten,' she said to herself. 'I will see

if I can break it.' But search as she would she could find none.

The thread had vanished.

From 'Littérature Orale de l'Auvergne,' par Paul Sébillot.

Story DNA

Plot Summary

A mischievous French spirit, Puck, loves playing pranks on people, especially shepherds and cowboys, often by unfastening chains or plaiting horse manes. He once tricked a kind man, William, by posing as a lost sheep, then revealing himself with a taunt. Later, Puck targeted a young couple, creating magical thread for the bride's wedding dress after she forgot to buy some. On their wedding day, Puck caused the dress to fall apart at the altar, leaving the bride embarrassed and the magical thread vanished without a trace.

Themes

mischiefsupernatural interventionhuman vulnerabilityplayfulness

Emotional Arc

amusement to mild frustration

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: episodic structure, direct address to reader (e.g., "whom we will call Puck")

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: moral justice
Magic: a shapeshifting spirit (Puck), talking animals (Puck as sheep, horse seeming to echo laughter), magical thread that appears and disappears
the needle (Puck's one limitation)the magical thread (Puck's specific intervention)

Cultural Context

Origin: French
Era: timeless fairy tale

The story explicitly mentions 'more than eighty years ago' for the William incident, placing it roughly in the early 19th century relative to Lang's publication, but the overall feel is timeless folklore. The reference to 'Littérature Orale de l'Auvergne' indicates its origin in French oral tradition.

Plot Beats (12)

  1. A mischievous spirit, Puck, lives in central France, able to transform into anything but a perfect needle.
  2. Puck's favorite pranks involve unfastening cattle chains at midnight, waking tired cowboys.
  3. Puck also enjoys plaiting horses' manes and tails, causing hours of work for grooms.
  4. One evening, a man named William finds a bleating sheep and carries it home, believing it to be lost.
  5. The sheep, actually Puck, speaks from William's shoulders, calling him a "donkey," and William flees in terror.
  6. Puck, bored with shepherds, decides to target a young couple preparing for their wedding.
  7. Puck transforms into a fly to eavesdrop on the couple returning from town, learning the bride forgot sewing thread.
  8. Puck creates a ball of multi-colored thread on the road, which the couple finds and believes to be good fortune.
  9. The dressmaker uses the magical thread, finding it perfect and easy to work with, finishing the dress quickly.
  10. On the wedding day, as the bride enters the church and takes the groom's hand, a loud 'Crick! crack!' is heard.
  11. The wedding dress falls to the ground, embarrassing the bride, who is given cloaks to cover herself.
  12. A curious guest tries to examine the fallen dress to find the cause, but the thread has completely vanished.

Characters

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Puck

magical creature ageless male

Can change into any form except a needle with a hole

Attire: Variable, depending on the form he takes

A mischievous grin, regardless of the form he's in

Mischievous, playful, restless

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William

human adult male

Strong enough to carry a sheep

Attire: Peasant clothing suitable for rural France in the 1840s: woolen trousers, linen shirt, perhaps a simple jacket

Staggering under the weight of the transformed Puck

Merciful, easily frightened

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The Bride

human young adult female

None explicitly stated, but implied to be beautiful

Attire: Wedding dress appropriate for a rural French bride in the 1840s: simple white gown, perhaps with lace or ribbon trim

Standing in her ruined wedding dress

Forgetful, easily delighted

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The Bridegroom

human young adult male

None explicitly stated

Attire: Wedding attire suitable for a rural French groom in the 1840s: dark suit or coat, white shirt, possibly a cravat

Standing beside his bride as her dress falls apart

Practical, easily impressed

Locations

Mountain Pastures and Valleys

outdoor

General setting for Puck's mischief, unspecified visual details

Mood: mischievous, playful

Introduction of Puck and his general habits

pastures valleys mountains

Cowsheds

indoor night

Stalls with chains for the cows

Mood: eerie, disruptive

Puck unfastens the cow chains

cows chains stalls

Avenue of Walnut Trees by a Stream

outdoor evening unspecified

A path lined with walnut trees near a stream

Mood: ominous, surprising

William carries Puck disguised as a sheep

walnut trees stream sheep

Roadside

outdoor unspecified unspecified

Road where the couple is traveling by cart

Mood: fortunate, deceptive

The couple finds the magical thread

cart ball of thread dresses

Church

indoor unspecified unspecified

A church with open doors and a chestnut avenue leading to it

Mood: joyful, chaotic

The bride's dress falls apart

altar wedding garments crowd chestnut avenue