The Battle of the Birds

by Andrew Lang · from The Lilac Fairy Book

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THE BATTLE OF THE BIRDS

THERE was to be a great battle between all the creatures of the earth

and the birds of the air. News of it went abroad, and the son of the

king of Tethertown said that when the battle was fought he would be

there to see it, and would bring back word who was to be king. But in

spite of that, he was almost too late, and every fight had been fought

save the last, which was between a snake and a great black raven. Both

struck hard, but in the end the snake proved the stronger, and would

have twisted himself round the neck of the raven till he died had not

the king's son drawn his sword, and cut off the head of the snake at a

single blow. And when the raven beheld that his enemy was dead, he was

grateful, and said:

'For thy kindness to me this day, I will show thee a sight. So come up

now on the root of my two wings.' The king's son did as he was bid, and

before the raven stopped flying, they had passed over seven bens and

seven glens and seven mountain moors.

'Do you see that house yonder?' said the raven at last. 'Go straight to

it, for a sister of mine dwells there, and she will make you right

welcome. And if she asks, "Wert thou at the battle of the birds?" answer

that thou wert, and if she asks, "Didst thou see my likeness?" answer

that thou sawest it, but be sure thou meetest me in the morning at this

place.'

The king's son followed what the raven told him and that night he had

meat of each meat, and drink of each drink, warm water for his feet, and

a soft bed to lie in.

Thus it happened the next day, and the next, but on the fourth morning,

instead of meeting the raven, in his place the king's son found waiting

for him the handsomest youth that ever was seen, with a bundle in his

hand.

[Illustration: How the King's Son saved the Raven from the Snake

by H. J. Ford 1910]

'Is there a raven hereabouts?' asked the king's son, and the youth

answered:

'I am that raven, and I was delivered by thee from the spells that bound

me, and in reward thou wilt get this bundle. Go back by the road thou

camest, and lie as before, a night in each house, but be careful not to

unloose the bundle till thou art in the place wherein thou wouldst most

wish to dwell.'

Then the king's son set out, and thus it happened as it had happened

before, till he entered a thick wood near his father's house. He had

walked a long way, and suddenly the bundle seemed to grow heavier; first

he put it down under a tree, and next he thought he would look at it.

The string was easy to untie, and the king's son soon unfastened the

bundle. What was it he saw there? Why, a great castle with an orchard

all about it, and in the orchard fruit and flowers and birds of every

kind. It was all ready for him to dwell in, but instead of being in the

midst of the forest, he did wish he had left the bundle unloosed till

he had reached the green valley close to his father's palace. Well, it

was no use wishing, and with a sigh he glanced up, and beheld a huge

giant coming towards him.

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'Bad is the place where thou hast built thy house, king's son,' said the

giant.

'True; it is not here that I wish it to be,' answered the king's son.

'What reward wilt thou give me if I put it back in the bundle?' asked

the giant.

'What reward dost thou ask?' answered the king's son.

'The first boy thou hast when he is seven years old,' said the giant.

'If I have a boy thou shalt get him,' answered the king's son, and as he

spoke the castle and the orchard were tied up in the bundle again.

'Now take thy road, and I will take mine,' said the giant. 'And if thou

forgettest thy promise, I will remember it.'

Light of heart the king's son went on his road, till he came to the

green valley near his father's palace. Slowly he unloosed the bundle,

fearing lest he should find nothing but a heap of stones or rags. But

no! all was as it had been before, and as he opened the castle door

there stood within the most beautiful maiden that ever was seen.

'Enter, king's son,' said she, 'all is ready, and we will be married at

once,' and so they were.

The maiden proved a good wife, and the king's son, now himself a king,

was so happy that he forgot all about the giant. Seven years and a day

had gone by, when one morning, while standing on the ramparts, he beheld

the giant striding towards the castle. Then he remembered his promise,

and remembered, too, that he had told the queen nothing about it. Now he

must tell her, and perhaps she might help him in his trouble.

The queen listened in silence to his tale, and after he had finished,

she only said:

'Leave thou the matter between me and the giant,' and as she spoke, the

giant entered the hall and stood before them.

'Bring out your son,' cried he to the king, 'as you promised me seven

years and a day since.'

The king glanced at his wife, who nodded, so he answered:

'Let his mother first put him in order,' and the queen left the hall,

and took the cook's son and dressed him in the prince's clothes, and led

him up to the giant, who held his hand, and together they went out along

the road. They had not walked far when the giant stopped and stretched

out a stick to the boy.

'If your father had that stick, what would he do with it?' asked he.

'If my father had that stick, he would beat the dogs and cats that

steal the king's meat,' replied the boy.

'Thou art the cook's son!' cried the giant. 'Go home to thy mother;' and

turning his back he strode straight to the castle.

'If you seek to trick me this time, the highest stone will soon be the

lowest,' said he, and the king and queen trembled, but they could not

bear to give up their boy.

'The butler's son is the same age as ours,' whispered the queen; 'he

will not know the difference,' and she took the child and dressed him in

the prince's clothes, and the giant led him away along the road. Before

they had gone far he stopped, and held out a stick.

'If thy father had that rod, what would he do with it?' asked the giant.

'He would beat the dogs and cats that break the king's glasses,'

answered the boy.

'Thou art the son of the butler!' cried the giant. 'Go home to thy

mother;' and turning round he strode back angrily to the castle.

'Bring out thy son at once,' roared he, 'or the stone that is highest

will be lowest,' and this time the real prince was brought.

   *       *       *       *       *

But though his parents wept bitterly and fancied the child was suffering

all kinds of dreadful things, the giant treated him like his own son,

though he never allowed him to see his daughters. The boy grew to be a

big boy, and one day the giant told him that he would have to amuse

himself alone for many hours, as he had a journey to make. So the boy

wandered by the river, and down to the sea, and at last he wandered to

the top of the castle, where he had never been before. There he paused,

for the sound of music broke upon his ears, and opening a door near him,

he beheld a girl sitting by the window, holding a harp.

'Haste and begone, I see the giant close at hand,' she whispered

hurriedly, 'but when he is asleep, return hither, for I would speak with

thee.' And the prince did as he was bid, and when midnight struck he

crept back to the top of the castle.

'To-morrow,' said the girl, who was the giant's daughter, 'to-morrow

thou wilt get the choice of my two sisters to marry, but thou must

answer that thou wilt not take either, but only me. This will anger him

greatly, for he wishes to betroth me to the son of the king of the Green

City, whom I like not at all.'

Then they parted, and on the morrow, as the girl had said, the giant

called his three daughters to him, and likewise the young prince, to

whom he spoke.

'Now, O son of the king of Tethertown, the time has come for us to part.

Choose one of my two elder daughters to wife, and thou shalt take her to

your father's house the day after the wedding.'

'Give me the youngest instead,' replied the youth, and the giant's face

darkened as he heard him.

'Three things must thou do first,' said he.

'Say on, I will do them,' replied the prince, and the giant left the

house, and bade him follow to the byre, where the cows were kept.

'For a hundred years no man has swept this byre,' said the giant, 'but

if by nightfall, when I reach home, thou hast not cleaned it so that a

golden apple can roll through it from end to end, thy blood shall pay

for it.'

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All day long the youth toiled, but he might as well have tried to empty

the ocean. At length, when he was so tired he could hardly move, the

giant's youngest daughter stood in the doorway.

'Lay down thy weariness,' said she, and the king's son, thinking he

could only die once, sank on the floor at her bidding, and fell sound

asleep. When he woke the girl had disappeared, and the byre was so clean

that a golden apple could roll from end to end of it. He jumped up in

surprise, and at that moment in came the giant.

'Hast thou cleaned the byre, king's son?' asked he.

'I have cleaned it,' answered he.

'Well, since thou wert so active to-day, to-morrow thou wilt thatch this

byre with a feather from every different bird, or else thy blood shall

pay for it,' and he went out.

Before the sun was up, the youth took his bow and his quiver and set off

to kill the birds. Off to the moor he went, but never a bird was to be

seen that day. At last he got so tired with running to and fro that he

gave up heart.

'There is but one death I can die,' thought he. Then at midday came the

giant's daughter.

'Thou art tired, king's son?' said she.

'I am,' answered he; 'all these hours have I wandered, and there fell

but these two blackbirds, both of one colour.'

'Lay down thy weariness on the grass,' said she, and he did as she bade

him, and fell fast asleep.

When he woke the girl had disappeared, and he got up, and returned to

the byre. As he drew near, he rubbed his eyes hard, thinking he was

dreaming, for there it was, beautifully thatched, just as the giant had

wished. At the door of the house he met the giant.

'Hast thou thatched the byre, king's son?'

'I have thatched it.'

[Illustration: How the King's Son fetched the Magpie's Eggs]

'Well, since thou hast been so active to-day, I have something else for

thee! Beside the loch thou seest over yonder there grows a fir tree. On

the top of the fir tree is a magpie's nest, and in the nest are five

eggs. Thou wilt bring me those eggs for breakfast, and if one is cracked

or broken, thy blood shall pay for it.'

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Before it was light next day, the king's son jumped out of bed and ran

down to the loch. The tree was not hard to find, for the rising sun

shone red on the trunk, which was five hundred feet from the ground to

its first branch. Time after time he walked round it, trying to find

some knots, however small, where he could put his feet, but the bark was

quite smooth, and he soon saw that if he was to reach the top at all, it

must be by climbing up with his knees like a sailor. But then he was a

king's son and not a sailor, which made all the difference.

However, it was no use standing there staring at the fir, at least he

must try to do his best, and try he did till his hands and knees were

sore, for as soon as he had struggled up a few feet, he slid back again.

Once he climbed a little higher than before, and hope rose in his heart,

then down he came with such force that his hands and knees smarted worse

than ever.

'This is no time for stopping,' said the voice of the giant's daughter,

as he leant against the trunk to recover his breath.

'Alas! I am no sooner up than down,' answered he.

'Try once more,' said she, and she laid a finger against the tree and

bade him put his foot on it. Then she placed another finger a little

higher up, and so on till he reached the top, where the magpie had built

her nest.

'Make haste now with the nest,' she cried, 'for my father's breath is

burning my back,' and down he scrambled as fast as he could, but the

girl's little finger had caught in a branch at the top, and she was

obliged to leave it there. But she was too busy to pay heed to this, for

the sun was getting high over the hills.

'Listen to me,' she said. 'This night my two sisters and I will be

dressed in the same garments, and you will not know me. But when my

father says 'Go to thy wife, king's son,' come to the one whose right

hand has no little finger.'

So he went and gave the eggs to the giant, who nodded his head.

'Make ready for thy marriage,' cried he, 'for the wedding shall take

place this very night, and I will summon thy bride to greet thee.' Then

his three daughters were sent for, and they all entered dressed in green

silk of the same fashion, and with golden circlets round their heads.

The king's son looked from one to another. Which was the youngest?

Suddenly his eyes fell on the hand of the middle one, and there was no

little finger.

'Thou hast aimed well this time too,' said the giant, as the king's son

laid his hand on her shoulder, 'but perhaps we may meet some other way;'

and though he pretended to laugh, the bride saw a gleam in his eye which

warned her of danger.

The wedding took place that very night, and the hall was filled with

giants and gentlemen, and they danced till the house shook from top to

bottom. At last everyone grew tired, and the guests went away, and the

king's son and his bride were left alone.

'If we stay here till dawn my father will kill thee,' she whispered,

'but thou art my husband and I will save thee, as I did before,' and she

cut an apple into nine pieces, and put two pieces at the head of the

bed, and two pieces at the foot, and two pieces at the door of the

kitchen, and two at the big door, and one outside the house. And when

this was done, and she heard the giant snoring, she and the king's son

crept out softly and stole across to the stable, where she led out the

blue-grey mare and jumped on its back, and her husband mounted before

her. Not long after, the giant awoke.

'Are you asleep?' asked he.

'Not yet,' answered the apple at the head of the bed, and the giant

turned over, and soon was snoring as loudly as before. By and bye he

called again.

'Are you asleep?'

'Not yet,' said the apple at the foot of the bed, and the giant was

satisfied. After a while, he called a third time, 'Are you asleep?'

'Not yet,' replied the apple in the kitchen, but when, in a few minutes,

he put the question for the fourth time and received an answer from the

apple outside the house door, he guessed what had happened, and ran to

the room to look for himself.

The bed was cold and empty!

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'My father's breath is burning my back,' cried the girl, 'put thy hand

into the ear of the mare, and whatever thou findest there, throw it

behind thee.' And in the mare's ear there was a twig of sloe tree, and

as he threw it behind him there sprung up twenty miles of thornwood so

thick that scarce a weasel could go through it. And the giant, who was

striding headlong forwards, got caught in it, and it pulled his hair and

beard.

'This is one of my daughter's tricks,' he said to himself, 'but if I had

my big axe and my wood-knife, I would not be long making a way through

this,' and off he went home and brought back the axe and the wood-knife.

It took him but a short time to cut a road through the blackthorn, and

then he laid the axe and the knife under a tree.

'I will leave them there till I return,' he murmured to himself, but a

hoodie crow, which was sitting on a branch above, heard him.

'If thou leavest them,' said the hoodie, 'we will steal them.'

'You will,' answered the giant, 'and I must take them home.' So he took

them home, and started afresh on his journey.

'My father's breath is burning my back,' cried the girl at midday. 'Put

thy finger in the mare's ear and throw behind thee whatever thou findest

in it,' and the king's son found a splinter of grey stone, and threw it

behind him, and in a twinkling twenty miles of solid rock lay between

them and the giant.

'My daughter's tricks are the hardest things that ever met me,' said the

giant, 'but if I had my lever and my crowbar, I would not be long in

making my way through this rock also,' but as he had not got them, he

had to go home and fetch them. Then it took him but a short time to hew

his way through the rock.

'I will leave the tools here,' he murmured aloud when he had finished.

'If thou leavest them, we will steal them,' said a hoodie who was

perched on a stone above him, and the giant answered:

'Steal them if thou wilt; there is no time to go back.'

   *       *       *       *       *

'My father's breath is burning my back,' cried the girl; 'look in the

mare's ear, king's son, or we are lost,' and he looked, and found a tiny

bladder full of water, which he threw behind him, and it became a great

loch. And the giant, who was striding on so fast, could not stop

himself, and he walked right into the middle and was drowned.

The blue-grey mare galloped on like the wind, and the next day the

king's son came in sight of his father's house.

'Get down and go in,' said the bride, 'and tell them that thou hast

married me. But take heed that neither man nor beast kiss thee, for then

thou wilt cease to remember me at all.'

'I will do thy bidding,' answered he, and left her at the gate. All who

met him bade him welcome, and he charged his father and mother not to

kiss him, but as he greeted them his old greyhound leapt on his neck,

and kissed him on the mouth. And after that he did not remember the

giant's daughter.

All that day she sat on a well which was near the gate, waiting,

waiting, but the king's son never came. In the darkness she climbed up

into an oak tree that shadowed the well, and there she lay all night,

waiting, waiting.

On the morrow, at midday, the wife of a shoemaker who dwelt near the

well went to draw water for her husband to drink, and she saw the shadow

of the girl in the tree, and thought it was her own shadow.

[Illustration: So the Giant Was Drowned in the MIDDLE OF THE LAKE]

'How handsome I am, to be sure,' said she, gazing into the well, and as

she stooped to behold herself better, the jug struck against the stones

and broke in pieces, and she was forced to return to her husband without

the water, and this angered him.

'Thou hast turned crazy,' said he in wrath. 'Go thou, my daughter, and

fetch me a drink,' and the girl went, and the same thing befell her as

had befallen her mother.

'Where is the water?' asked the shoemaker, when she came back, and as

she held nothing save the handle of the jug he went to the well himself.

He too saw the reflection of the woman in the tree, but looked up to

discover whence it came, and there above him sat the most beautiful

woman in the world.

'Come down,' he said, 'for a while thou canst stay in my house,' and

glad enough the girl was to come.

Now the king of the country was about to marry, and the young men about

the court thronged the shoemaker's shop to buy fine shoes to wear at the

wedding.

'Thou hast a pretty daughter,' said they when they beheld the girl

sitting at work.

'Pretty she is,' answered the shoemaker, 'but no daughter of mine.'

'I would give a hundred pounds to marry her,' said one.

'And I,' 'And I,' cried the others.

'That is no business of mine,' answered the shoemaker, and the young men

bade him ask her if she would choose one of them for a husband, and to

tell them on the morrow. Then the shoemaker asked her, and the girl said

that she would marry the one who would bring his purse with him. So the

shoemaker hurried to the youth who had first spoken, and he came back,

and after giving the shoemaker a hundred pounds for his news, he sought

the girl, who was waiting for him.

'Is it thou?' inquired she. 'I am thirsty, give me a drink from the well

that is out yonder.' And he poured out the water, but he could not move

from the place where he was; and there he stayed till many hours had

passed by.

'Take away that foolish boy,' cried the girl to the shoemaker at last,

'I am tired of him,' and then suddenly he was able to walk, and betook

himself to his home, but he did not tell the others what had happened to

him.

Next day there arrived one of the other young men, and in the evening,

when the shoemaker had gone out and they were alone, she said to him,

'See if the latch is on the door.' The young man hastened to do her

bidding, but as soon as he touched the latch, his fingers stuck to it,

and there he had to stay for many hours, till the shoemaker came back,

and the girl let him go. Hanging his head, he went home, but he told no

one what had befallen him.

Then was the turn of the third man, and his foot remained fastened to

the floor, till the girl unloosed it. And thankfully he ran off, and was

not seen looking behind him.

   *       *       *       *       *

'Take the purse of gold,' said the girl to the shoemaker, 'I have no

need of it, and it will better thee.' And the shoemaker took it and told

the girl he must carry the shoes for the wedding up to the castle.

'I would fain get a sight of the king's son before he marries,' sighed

she.

'Come with me, then,' answered he; 'the servants are all my friends, and

they will let you stand in the passage down which the king's son will

pass, and all the company too.'

Up they went to the castle, and when the young men saw the girl standing

there, they led her into the hall where the banquet was laid out and

poured her out some wine. She was just raising the glass to drink when a

flame went up out of it, and out of the flame sprang two pigeons, one of

gold and one of silver. They flew round and round the head of the girl,

when three grains of barley fell on the floor, and the silver pigeon

dived down, and swallowed them.

'If thou hadst remembered how I cleaned the byre, thou wouldst have

given me my share,' cooed the golden pigeon, and as he spoke three more

grains fell, and the silver pigeon ate them as before.

'If thou hadst remembered how I thatched the byre, thou wouldst have

given me my share,' cooed the golden pigeon again; and as he spoke three

more grains fell, and for the third time they were eaten by the silver

pigeon.

'If thou hadst remembered how I got the magpie's nest, thou wouldst have

given me my share,' cooed the golden pigeon.

Then the king's son understood that they had come to remind him of what

he had forgotten, and his lost memory came back, and he knew his wife,

and kissed her. But as the preparations had been made, it seemed a pity

to waste them, so they were married a second time, and sat down to the

wedding feast.

From 'Tales of the West Highlands.'

Story DNA

Moral

Promises, especially those made under duress, have consequences, and true love can overcome forgetfulness and magical interference.

Plot Summary

A king's son saves a raven, who, revealed as an enchanted youth, gives him a magical bundle. Opening it prematurely, the prince makes a deal with a giant for his firstborn son to move the resulting castle. Seven years later, the giant claims the child, but the queen tries to trick him. The real prince is taken, falls in love with the giant's daughter, and they escape using her magic to create obstacles that drown the pursuing giant. Upon returning, the prince forgets his bride due to a magical kiss, but his memory is restored by magical pigeons at his second wedding, leading to their true reunion.

Themes

gratitude and loyaltythe power of memoryovercoming obstaclesthe nature of promises

Emotional Arc

fear to relief, forgetfulness to remembrance, separation to reunion

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three, magical transformation, repetition of phrases (e.g., 'My father's breath is burning my back')

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: happy
Magic: talking animals (raven, pigeons, hoodie crow), transformation (raven to youth, giant's daughter's magic), enchanted objects (magical bundle, mare's ear items), magical amnesia/memory restoration, magical traps
the magical bundle (opportunity, temptation)the mare's ear (source of magical aid)the pigeons (memory, truth)

Cultural Context

Origin: Scottish (Highlands)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Collected by Andrew Lang, likely from oral traditions or earlier written collections of Scottish folklore. Reflects common European fairy tale motifs like forgotten brides, magical helpers, and giants.

Plot Beats (17)

  1. King's son attends the Battle of the Birds and saves a raven from a snake.
  2. The raven, a transformed youth, rewards the king's son with a magical bundle, warning him not to open it until he reaches his desired dwelling place.
  3. The king's son, impatient, opens the bundle in a forest, manifesting a castle, and a giant appears.
  4. The giant agrees to move the castle in exchange for the king's firstborn son at age seven.
  5. The king's son marries the maiden from the castle, has a son, and forgets his promise.
  6. Seven years later, the giant returns; the queen substitutes the cook's son, then the butler's son, but the giant identifies them.
  7. The real prince is given to the giant, who raises him but keeps him from his daughters.
  8. The prince discovers the giant's daughter, who is also under a spell, and they fall in love and plan to escape.
  9. The giant's daughter helps the prince choose her over her sisters, angering the giant.
  10. The prince and giant's daughter escape on a magical mare, pursued by the giant.
  11. The daughter uses magical items from the mare's ear to create a thornwood forest, then a rock wall, to impede the giant.
  12. The daughter creates a loch, drowning the giant.
  13. They arrive at the king's father's house; the daughter warns the prince not to be kissed, but his dog kisses him, making him forget her.
  14. The forgotten daughter waits by a well, is discovered by a shoemaker, and stays with him.
  15. The daughter magically traps several suitors at the shoemaker's shop.
  16. At the king's son's second wedding, the daughter uses magical pigeons to remind him of their shared past and his forgotten promise.
  17. The king's son remembers his true bride, and they marry again.

Characters

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King's Son

human young adult male

Handsome

Attire: Fine tunic and hose, perhaps with a short sword at his side, suitable for travel and battle

Cutting off the snake's head with his sword

Brave, easily forgetful, kind

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Raven/Youth

magical creature young adult male

As a raven: great black bird. As a youth: handsome

Attire: As a raven: black feathers. As a youth: simple but well-made tunic and trousers

Transforming from a raven into a handsome youth

Grateful, helpful, loyal

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Giant

giant adult male

Huge

Attire: Roughspun clothing, perhaps with a belt of animal hide

Striding towards the castle with a menacing look

Deceptive, demanding, easily tricked

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Queen/Giant's Daughter

magical creature young adult female

Most beautiful maiden that ever was seen

Attire: Elegant gown befitting a queen, possibly with subtle magical enhancements

Transforming into a blue-grey mare

Intelligent, resourceful, loving

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Shoemaker

human adult male

Ordinary looking

Attire: Leather apron, simple tunic and trousers

Holding a pair of fine shoes

Opportunistic, easily manipulated

Locations

Battlefield

outdoor Implied fair weather for a battle

A place where creatures of the earth fought birds of the air, with a snake battling a great black raven as the final fight.

Mood: Violent, decisive

The King's son saves the raven, leading to his magical journey.

snake raven blood weapons

Sister's House

indoor night

A welcoming house with meat of each meat, drink of each drink, warm water for feet, and a soft bed.

Mood: Comfortable, hospitable, magical

The King's son is sheltered and given instructions, furthering his quest.

soft bed warm water plentiful food drink

Thick Wood

outdoor

A dense forest near the king's father's house, where the bundle becomes heavy.

Mood: Ominous, fateful

The King's son unwraps the bundle, creating a castle and encountering the giant.

trees undergrowth bundle castle

Green Valley near Palace

outdoor

A lush valley close to the king's father's palace, the desired location for the castle.

Mood: Peaceful, desirable

The King's son finally places the castle where he wants it and marries the maiden.

greenery palace castle orchard

Shoemaker's Shop

indoor day

A small shop where shoes are made, with a well nearby and an oak tree shadowing it.

Mood: Domestic, deceptive

The giant's daughter waits, tricks suitors, and prepares to reveal herself.

shoes well oak tree tools

Castle Banquet Hall

indoor day

A grand hall laid out for a wedding banquet.

Mood: Festive, revelatory

The pigeons reveal the King's forgotten past, reuniting him with his true wife.

banquet table wine pigeons (gold and silver) guests