The Hoodie-Crow

by Andrew Lang · from The Lilac Fairy Book

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THE HOODIE-CROW

ONCE there lived a farmer who had three daughters, and good useful girls

they were, up with the sun, and doing all the work of the house. One

morning they all ran down to the river to wash their clothes, when a

hoodie came round and sat on a tree close by.

'Wilt thou wed me, thou farmer's daughter?' he said to the eldest.

'Indeed I won't wed thee,' she answered, 'an ugly brute is the hoodie.'

And the bird, much offended, spread his wings and flew away. But the

following day he came back again, and said to the second girl:

'Wilt thou wed me, farmer's daughter?'

'Indeed I will not,' answered she, 'an ugly brute is the hoodie.' And

the hoodie was more angry than before, and went away in a rage. However,

after a night's rest he was in a better temper, and thought that he

might be more lucky the third time, so back he went to the old place.

'Wilt thou wed me, farmer's daughter?' he said to the youngest.

'Indeed I will wed thee; a pretty creature is the hoodie,' answered she,

and on the morrow they were married.

   *       *       *       *       *

'I have something to ask thee,' said the hoodie when they were far away

in his own house. 'Wouldst thou rather I should be a hoodie by day and a

man by night, or a man by day and a hoodie by night?'

[Illustration: INDEED I WILL WED THEE; A PRETTY CREATURE IS THE HOODIE]

The girl was surprised at his words, for she did not know that he could

be anything but a hoodie at all times.

Still she said nothing of this, and only replied, 'I would rather thou

wert a man by day and a hoodie by night.' And so he was; and a handsomer

man or a more beautiful hoodie never was seen. The girl loved them both,

and never wished for things to be different.

By and bye they had a son, and very pleased they both were. But in the

night soft music was heard stealing close towards the house, and every

man slept, and the mother slept also. When they woke again it was

morning, and the baby was gone. High and low they looked for it, but

nowhere could they find it, and the farmer, who had come to see his

daughter, was greatly grieved, as he feared it might be thought that he

had stolen it, because he did not want the hoodie for a son-in-law.

The next year the hoodie's wife had another son, and this time a watch

was set at every door. But it was no use. In vain they all determined

that, come what might, they would not close their eyes; at the first

note of music they all fell asleep, and when the farmer arrived in the

morning to see his grandson, he found them all weeping, for while they

had slept the baby had vanished.

Well, the next year it all happened again, and the hoodie's wife was so

unhappy that her husband resolved to take her away to another house he

had, and her sisters with her for company. So they set out in a coach

which was big enough to hold them, and had not gone very far when the

hoodie suddenly said:

'You are sure you have not forgotten anything?'

'I have forgotten my coarse comb,' answered the wife, feeling in her

pocket, and as she spoke the coach changed into a withered faggot, and

the man became a hoodie again, and flew away.

The two sisters returned home, but the wife followed the hoodie.

Sometimes she would see him on a hilltop, and then would hasten after

him, hoping to catch him. But by the time she had got to the top of the

hill, he would be in the valley on the other side. When night came, and

she was tired, she looked about for some place to rest, and glad she was

to see a little house full of light straight in front of her, and she

hurried towards it as fast as she could.

At the door stood a little boy, and the sight of him filled her heart

with pleasure, she did not know why. A woman came out, and bade her

welcome, and set before her food, and gave her a soft bed to lie on. And

the hoodie's wife lay down, and so tired was she, that it seemed to her

but a moment before the sun rose, and she awoke again. From hill to hill

she went after the hoodie, and sometimes she saw him on the top; but

when she got to the top, he had flown into the valley, and when she

reached the valley he was on the top of another hill--and so it happened

till night came round again. Then she looked round for some place to

rest in, and she beheld a little house of light before her, and fast she

hurried towards it. At the door stood a little boy, and her heart was

filled with pleasure at the sight of him, she did not know why. After

that a woman bade her enter, and set food before her, and gave her a

soft bed to lie in. And when the sun rose she got up, and left the

house, in search of the hoodie. This day everything befell as on the two

other days, but when she reached the small house, the woman bade her

keep awake, and if the hoodie flew into the room, to try to seize him.

But the wife had walked far, and was very tired, and strive as she

would, she fell sound asleep.

Many hours she slept, and the hoodie entered through a window, and let

fall a ring on her hand. The girl awoke with a start, and leant forward

to grasp him, but he was already flying off, and she only seized a

feather from his wing. And when dawn came, she got up and told the

woman.

'He has gone over the hill of poison,' said she, 'and there you cannot

follow him without horse-shoes on your hands and feet. But I will help

you. Put on this suit of men's clothes, and go down this road till you

come to the smithy, and there you can learn to make horse-shoes for

yourself.'

The girl thanked her, and put on the clothes and went down the road to

do her bidding. So hard did she work, that in a few days she was able to

make the horse-shoes. Early one morning she set out for the hill of

poison. On her hands and feet she went, but even with the horse-shoes on

she had to be very careful not to stumble, lest some poisoned thorns

should enter into her flesh, and she should die. But when at last she

was over, it was only to hear that her husband was to be married that

day to the daughter of a great lord.

   *       *       *       *       *

Now there was to be a race in the town, and everyone meant to be there,

except the stranger who had come over the hill of poison--everyone, that

is, but the cook, who was to make the bridal supper. Greatly he loved

races, and sore was his heart to think that one should be run without

his seeing it, so when he beheld a woman whom he did not know coming

along the street, hope sprang up in him.

'Will you cook the wedding feast in place of me?' he said, 'and I will

pay you well when I return from the race.'

Gladly she agreed, and cooked the feast in a kitchen that looked into

the great hall, where the company were to eat it. After that she watched

the seat where the bridegroom was sitting, and taking a plateful of the

broth, she dropped the ring and the feather into it, and set it herself

before him.

With the first spoonful he took up the ring, and a thrill ran through

him; in the second he beheld the feather and rose from his chair.

'Who has cooked this feast?' asked he, and the real cook, who had come

back from the race, was brought before him.

'He may be the cook, but he did not cook this feast,' said the

bridegroom, and then inquiry was made, and the girl was summoned to the

great hall.

'That is my married wife,' he declared, 'and no one else will I have,'

and at that very moment the spells fell off him, and never more would he

be a hoodie. Happy indeed were they to be together again, and little did

they mind that the hill of poison took long to cross, for she had to go

some way forwards, and then throw the horse-shoes back for him to put on.

Still, at last they were over, and they went back the way she had come,

and stopped at the three houses in order to take their little sons to

their own home.

But the story never says who had stolen them, nor what the coarse comb

had to do with it.

From 'West Highland Tales.'

Story DNA

Moral

True love and unwavering loyalty can overcome enchantments and great obstacles.

Plot Summary

A hoodie-crow proposes to three sisters; the youngest accepts and marries him, discovering he is a man by day and crow by night. They have three sons, but each is mysteriously stolen. When the wife forgets a 'coarse comb', her husband transforms back into a crow and abandons her. She embarks on a perilous journey, learning to make horseshoes to cross a 'hill of poison', only to find her husband about to marry another. Disguised as a cook, she uses a ring and feather to reveal her identity, breaking the spell and reuniting her family.

Themes

perseveranceloyaltylove's powersacrifice

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three, direct address to reader (e.g., "But the story never says...")

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: happy
Magic: talking animal (hoodie-crow), transformation (man to crow, coach to faggot), enchantment/spell, magical sleep-inducing music, mysterious helpful woman, magical objects (ring, feather, coarse comb)
the hoodie-crow (enchantment, hidden nature)the ring (bond, recognition)the feather (proof, connection)the coarse comb (trigger for transformation/spell)the hill of poison (obstacle, trial)

Cultural Context

Origin: Scottish (West Highland Tales)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Collected by Andrew Lang, part of a tradition of oral storytelling from the Scottish Highlands, often featuring elements of magic and perseverance.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. A hoodie-crow proposes marriage to three farmer's daughters; the first two refuse, but the youngest accepts.
  2. The youngest daughter marries the hoodie-crow and discovers he can be a man by day and a crow by night, choosing the former.
  3. They have three sons, but each is mysteriously stolen after soft music lulls everyone to sleep.
  4. The husband decides to move his family, but when his wife forgets her 'coarse comb', he transforms back into a crow and the coach into a faggot, separating them.
  5. The wife follows the crow, seeing him on hilltops but never catching him, until she finds a mysterious house where a woman and a boy offer her rest.
  6. This happens two more nights; on the third, the woman advises her to stay awake to catch the crow.
  7. The wife falls asleep, but the crow leaves a ring on her hand and she catches a feather from his wing as he flies away.
  8. The woman tells her the crow has gone over the 'hill of poison' and instructs her to wear men's clothes and learn to make horseshoes to follow.
  9. The wife learns blacksmithing and crosses the dangerous hill of poison on her hands and feet, wearing horseshoes.
  10. Upon crossing, she learns her husband is about to marry a lord's daughter.
  11. She takes the place of the cook for the wedding feast.
  12. She places the ring and feather in the groom's broth, which he finds, prompting him to ask who cooked the meal.
  13. The wife is summoned, and the groom recognizes her, declaring her his true wife, which breaks the spell permanently.
  14. They reunite, cross the hill of poison together (with her helping him), and retrieve their three sons from the mysterious houses.
  15. They return home as a complete family, with the mystery of the coarse comb and the baby-stealer unresolved.

Characters

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Hoodie-Crow

magical creature adult male

Initially an ugly hoodie-crow, later a handsome man

Attire: As a man: fine clothing befitting his station; as a hoodie-crow: feathers

A crow wearing a ring on its claw

Enchanted, conflicted, ultimately loving and redeemable

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Farmer's Youngest Daughter

human young adult female

Not explicitly described, but implied to be fair/attractive

Attire: Simple peasant dress, apron, practical for housework

A woman wearing ill-fitting men's clothes and horseshoes on her hands and feet

Kind, loyal, determined

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Farmer

human adult male

Strong, weathered from working the land

Attire: Homespun clothing, practical for farm work

A worried man with a pitchfork

Protective, worried, initially skeptical

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Woman of the House

magical creature adult female

Kind face, welcoming demeanor

Attire: Simple but clean and welcoming attire

A woman standing in a doorway of a house filled with light

Helpful, wise, magical

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Little Boy

unknown child male

Pleasant, innocent

Attire: Simple child's clothing

A small child standing in a doorway

Innocent, welcoming

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Cook

human adult male

Eager, easily distracted

Attire: Cook's apron

A cook's hat askew

Enthusiastic, easily bribed

Locations

Riverbank

outdoor morning

A river where the farmer's daughters wash clothes, with a tree nearby for the hoodie-crow to perch.

Mood: peaceful, mundane

The hoodie-crow proposes to the farmer's daughters.

river laundry tree hoodie-crow

Hoodie-Crow's House

indoor night

A house far away, where the hoodie-crow lives with his wife. Later, the house is visited by soft music at night.

Mood: initially loving, later mysterious and sorrowful

The babies are stolen away by soft music.

bed doors windows sleeping people

Little Houses of Light

indoor night

Three identical small houses, each filled with light. Each has a little boy at the door and a welcoming woman inside.

Mood: safe, comforting, mysterious

The wife finds shelter and is warned about the hoodie-crow.

soft bed food little boy warm light

Hill of Poison

outdoor morning

A dangerous hill covered in poisoned thorns, requiring horse-shoes on hands and feet to cross.

Mood: treacherous, perilous

The wife crosses the hill to find her husband.

poisoned thorns steep slope horse-shoes

Wedding Feast Hall

indoor afternoon

A great hall where a wedding feast is prepared, with a kitchen looking into it.

Mood: festive, tense

The wife reveals her identity and breaks the spell on the hoodie-crow.

long tables wedding guests kitchen broth