The Stones of Plouhinec

by Andrew Lang · from The Lilac Fairy Book

fairy tale moral tale hopeful Ages 8-14 2591 words 12 min read
Cover: The Stones of Plouhinec
Original Story 2591 words · 12 min read

THE STONES OF PLOUHINEC

PERHAPS some of you may have read a book called 'Kenneth; or the

Rear-Guard of the Grand Army of Napoleon.' If so, you will remember how

the two Scotch children found in Russia were taken care of by the French

soldiers and prevented as far as possible from suffering from the

horrors of the terrible Retreat. One of the soldiers, a Breton, often

tried to make them forget how cold and hungry they were by telling them

tales of his native country, Brittany, which is full of wonderful

things. The best and warmest place round the camp fire was always given

to the children, but even so the bitter frost would cause them to

shiver. It was then that the Breton would begin: 'Plouhinec is a small

town near Hennebonne by the sea,' and would continue until Kenneth or

Effie would interrupt him with an eager question. Then he forgot how his

mother had told him the tale, and was obliged to begin all over again,

so the story lasted a long while, and by the time it was ended the

children were ready to be rolled up in whatever coverings could be

found, and go to sleep.

It is this story that I am going to tell to you.

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Plouhinec is a small town near Hennebonne by the sea. Around it

stretches a desolate moor, where no corn can be grown, and the grass is

so coarse that no beast grows fat on it. Here and there are scattered

groves of fir trees, and small pebbles are so thick on the ground that

you might almost take it for a beach. On the further side, the fairies,

or korigans, as the people called them, had set up long long ago two

rows of huge stones; indeed, so tall and heavy were they, that it seemed

as if all the fairies in the world could not have placed them upright.

Not far off from this great stone avenue, and on the banks of the little

river Intel, there lived a man named Marzinne and his sister Rozennik.

They always had enough black bread to eat, and wooden shoes or sabots to

wear, and a pig to fatten, so the neighbours thought them quite rich;

and what was still better, they thought themselves rich also.

Rozennik was a pretty girl, who knew how to make the best of everything,

and she could, if she wished, have chosen a husband from the young men

of Plouhinec, but she cared for none of them except Bernèz, whom she had

played with all her life, and Bernèz, though he worked hard, was so very

very poor that Marzinne told him roughly he must look elsewhere for a

wife. But whatever Marzinne might say Rozennik smiled and nodded to him

as before, and would often turn her head as she passed, and sing

snatches of old songs over her shoulder.

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Christmas Eve had come, and all the men who worked under Marzinne or on

the farms round about were gathered in the large kitchen to eat the soup

flavoured with honey followed by rich puddings, to which they were

always invited on this particular night. In the middle of the table was

a large wooden bowl, with wooden spoons placed in a circle round it, so

that each might dip in his turn. The benches were filled, and Marzinne

was about to give the signal, when the door was suddenly thrown open,

and an old man came in, wishing the guests a good appetite for their

supper. There was a pause, and some of the faces looked a little

frightened; for the new comer was well known to them as a beggar, who

was also said to be a wizard who cast spells over the cattle, and caused

the corn to grow black, and old people to die, of what, nobody knew.

Still, it was Christmas Eve, and besides it was as well not to offend

him, so the farmer invited him in, and gave him a seat at the table and

a wooden spoon like the rest.

There was not much talk after the beggar's entrance, and everyone was

glad when the meal came to an end, and the beggar asked if he might

sleep in the stable, as he should die of cold if he were left outside.

Rather unwillingly Marzinne gave him leave, and bade Bernèz take the key

and unlock the door. There was certainly plenty of room for a dozen

beggars, for the only occupants of the stable were an old donkey and a

thin ox; and as the night was bitter, the wizard lay down between them

for warmth, with a sack of reeds for a pillow.

He had walked far that day, and even wizards get tired sometimes, so in

spite of the hard floor he was just dropping off to sleep, when midnight

struck from the church tower of Plouhinec. At this sound the donkey

raised her head and shook her ears, and turned towards the ox.

'Well, my dear cousin,' said she, 'and how have you fared since last

Christmas Eve, when we had a conversation together?'

Instead of answering at once, the ox eyed the beggar with a long look of

disgust.

'What is the use of talking,' he replied roughly, 'when a

good-for-nothing creature like that can hear all we say?'

'Oh, you mustn't lose time in grumbling,' rejoined the donkey gaily,

'and don't you see that the wizard is asleep?'

'His wicked pranks do not make him rich, certainly,' said the ox, 'and

he isn't even clever enough to have found out what a piece of luck

might befall him a week hence.'

'What piece of luck?' asked the donkey.

'Why, don't you know,' inquired the ox, 'that once every hundred years

the stones on Plouhinec heath go down to drink at the river, and that

while they are away the treasures underneath them are uncovered?'

'Ah, I remember now,' replied the donkey, 'but the stones return so

quickly to their places, that you certainly would be crushed to death

unless you have in your hands a bunch of crowsfoot and of five-leaved

trefoil.'

'Yes, but that is not enough,' said the ox; 'even supposing you get

safely by, the treasures you have brought with you will crumble into

dust if you do not give in exchange a baptized soul. It is needful that

a Christian should die before you can enjoy the wealth of Plouhinec.'

The donkey was about to ask some further questions, when she suddenly

found herself unable to speak: the time allowed them for conversation

was over.

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'Ah, my dear creatures,' thought the beggar, who had of course heard

everything, 'you are going to make me richer than the richest men of

Vannes or Lorient. But I have no time to lose; to-morrow I must begin to

hunt for the precious plants.'

He did not dare to seek too near Plouhinec, lest somebody who knew the

story might guess what he was doing, so he went away further towards the

south, where the air was softer and the plants are always green. From

the instant it was light, till the last rays had faded out of the sky,

he searched every inch of ground where the magic plants might grow; he

scarcely gave himself a minute to eat and drink, but at length he found

the crowsfoot in a little hollow! Well, that was certainly a great deal,

but after all, the crowsfoot was of no use without the trefoil, and

there was so little time left.

He had almost given up hope, when on the very last day before it was

necessary that he should start for Plouhinec, he came upon a little

clump of trefoil, half hidden under a rock. Hardly able to breathe from

excitement, he sat down and hunted eagerly through the plant which he

had torn up. Leaf after leaf he threw aside in disgust, and he had

nearly reached the end when he gave a cry of joy--the five-leaved

trefoil was in his hand.

The beggar scrambled to his feet, and without a pause walked quickly

down the road that led northwards. The moon was bright, and for some

hours he kept steadily on, not knowing how many miles he had gone, nor

even feeling tired. By and bye the sun rose, and the world began to

stir, and stopping at a farmhouse door, he asked for a cup of milk and

slice of bread and permission to rest for a while in the porch. Then he

continued his journey, and so, towards sunset on New Year's Eve, he came

back to Plouhinec.

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As he was passing the long line of stones, he saw Bernèz working with a

chisel on the tallest of them all.

'What are you doing there?' called the wizard, 'do you mean to hollow

out for yourself a bed in that huge column?'

'No,' replied Bernèz quietly, 'but as I happened to have no work to do

to-day, I thought I would just carve a cross on this stone. The holy

sign can never come amiss.'

'I believe you think it will help you to win Rozennik,' laughed the old

man.

Bernèz ceased his task for a moment to look at him.

'Ah, so you know about that,' replied he; 'unluckily Marzinne wants a

brother-in-law who has more pounds than I have pence.'

'And suppose I were to give you more pounds than Marzinne ever dreamed

of?' whispered the sorcerer, glancing round to make sure that no one

overheard him.

'You?'

'Yes, I.'

'And what am I to do to gain the money,' inquired Bernèz, who knew quite

well that the Breton peasant gives nothing for nothing.

'What I want of you only needs a little courage,' answered the old man.

'If that is all, tell me what I have got to do, and I will do it,' cried

Bernèz, letting fall his chisel. 'If I have to risk thirty deaths, I am

ready.'

When the beggar knew that Bernèz would give him no trouble, he told him

how, during that very night, the treasures under the stones would be

uncovered, and how in a very few minutes they could take enough to make

them both rich for life. But he kept silence as to the fate that awaited

the man who was without the crowsfoot and the trefoil, and Bernèz

thought that nothing but boldness and quickness were necessary. So he

said:

'Old man, I am grateful, indeed, for the chance you have given me, and

there will always be a pint of my blood at your service. Just let me

finish carving this cross. It is nearly done, and I will join you in the

fir wood at whatever hour you please.'

'You must be there without fail an hour before midnight,' answered the

wizard, and went on his way.

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As the hour struck from the great church at Plouhinec, Bernèz entered

the wood. He found the beggar already there with a bag in each hand, and

a third slung round his neck.

'You are punctual,' said the old man, 'but we need not start just yet.

You had better sit down and think what you will do when your pockets are

filled with gold and silver and jewels.'

'Oh, it won't take me long to plan out that,' returned Bernèz with a

laugh. 'I shall give Rozennik everything she can desire, dresses of all

sorts, from cotton to silk, and good things of all kinds to eat, from

white bread to oranges.'

'The silver you find will pay for all that, and what about the gold?'

'With the gold I shall make rich Rozennik's relations and every friend

of hers in the parish,' replied he.

'So much for the gold; and the jewels?'

'Then,' cried Bernèz, 'I will divide the jewels amongst everybody in the

world, so that they may be wealthy and happy; and I will tell them that

it is Rozennik who would have it so.'

'Hush! it is close on midnight--we must go,' whispered the wizard, and

together they crept to the edge of the wood.

With the first stroke of twelve a great noise arose over the silent

heath, and the earth seemed to rock under the feet of the two watchers.

The next moment by the light of the moon they beheld the huge stones

near them leave their places and go down the slope leading to the river,

knocking against each other in their haste. Passing the spot where stood

Bernèz and the beggar, they were lost in the darkness. It seemed as if a

procession of giants had gone by.

'Quick,' said the wizard, in a low voice, and he rushed towards the

empty holes, which even in the night shone brightly from the treasures

within them. Flinging himself on his knees, the old man began filling

the wallets he had brought, listening intently all the time for the

return of the stones up the hill, while Bernèz more slowly put handfuls

of all he could see into his pockets.

The sorcerer had just closed his third wallet, and was beginning to

wonder if he could carry away any more treasures when a low murmur as of

a distant storm broke upon his ears.

The stones had finished drinking, and were hastening back to their

places.

On they came, bent a little forward, the tallest of them all at their

head, breaking everything that stood in their way. At the sight Bernèz

stood transfixed with horror, and said,

'We are lost! They will crush us to death.'

'Not me!' answered the sorcerer, holding up the crowsfoot and the

five-leaved trefoil, 'for these will preserve me. But in order to keep

my riches, I was obliged to sacrifice a Christian to the stones, and an

evil fate threw you in my way.' And as he spoke he stretched out the

magic herbs to the stones, which were advancing rapidly. As if

acknowledging a power greater than theirs, the monstrous things

instantly parted to the right and left of the wizard, but closed their

ranks again as they approached Bernèz.

The young man did not try to escape, he knew it was useless, and sank on

his knees and closed his eyes. But suddenly the tall stone that was

leading stopped straight in front of Bernèz, so that no other could get

past.

It was the stone on which Bernèz had carved the cross, and it was now a

baptized stone, and had power to save him.

So the stone remained before the young man till the rest had taken their

places, and then, darting like a bird to its own hole, came upon the

beggar, who, thinking himself quite safe, was staggering along under the

weight of his treasures.

Seeing the stone approaching, he held out the magic herbs which he

carried, but the baptized stone was no longer subject to the spells that

bound the rest, and passed straight on its way, leaving the wizard

crushed into powder in the heather.

Then Bernèz went home, and showed his wealth to Marzinne, who this time

did not refuse him as a brother-in-law, and he and Rozennik were

married, and lived happy for ever after.

From 'Le Foyer Breton,' par Emile Souvestre.

Story DNA

Moral

Selfless generosity and faith are rewarded, while greed and treachery lead to destruction.

Plot Summary

In Brittany, a poor but good-hearted young man named Bernèz loves Rozennik, but her brother Marzinne rejects him due to his poverty. A cunning wizard overhears animals revealing the secret of ancient stones that move once a century, uncovering vast treasures, but requiring magic herbs and a 'baptized soul' sacrifice. The wizard recruits Bernèz, who is carving a cross on one of the stones, to help him collect the treasure, intending to sacrifice him. At the climax, as the stones return, the wizard betrays Bernèz, but the stone with the cross protects him, and the wizard is crushed by the very stone Bernèz had blessed. Bernèz returns wealthy, marries Rozennik, and they live happily ever after.

Themes

greed vs. generositydivine intervention/providencethe power of faith/goodnessjustice

Emotional Arc

despair to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three, foreshadowing, direct address to reader (framing device)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person (wizard vs. Bernèz), person vs. supernatural (Bernèz vs. the stones/fate)
Ending: moral justice
Magic: talking animals (donkey and ox), magical moving stones, hidden treasure, wizardry/sorcery, magic herbs (crowsfoot, five-leaved trefoil), the power of a carved cross/baptized stone
the stones of Plouhinec (ancient power, hidden wealth, danger)the carved cross (faith, protection, goodness)the magic herbs (worldly power, selfish protection)the treasure (temptation, reward)

Cultural Context

Origin: French (Breton)
Era: timeless fairy tale

The framing device references Napoleon's Grand Army retreat from Russia, placing the storytelling context in the early 19th century, though the tale itself is timeless.

Plot Beats (13)

  1. A Breton soldier tells children a story about Plouhinec, a small town near Hennebonne.
  2. The story introduces the desolate moor with ancient, massive stones and the siblings Marzinne and Rozennik, with Rozennik in love with the poor Bernèz.
  3. On Christmas Eve, a beggar (wizard) is reluctantly given shelter in Marzinne's stable.
  4. At midnight, the wizard overhears the donkey and ox discussing the Plouhinec stones' century-old ritual of going to the river, revealing treasures, and the need for magic herbs and a 'baptized soul' sacrifice.
  5. The wizard spends a week diligently searching for and finding the protective crowsfoot and five-leaved trefoil.
  6. On New Year's Eve, the wizard encounters Bernèz carving a cross on one of the stones.
  7. The wizard tempts Bernèz with a share of the treasure, omitting the sacrifice requirement, and Bernèz agrees, promising to share his wealth generously.
  8. At midnight, the stones move to the river, revealing the treasures beneath.
  9. The wizard and Bernèz begin collecting treasure from the exposed holes.
  10. As the stones return, the wizard reveals his plan to sacrifice Bernèz, using his herbs to protect himself.
  11. The stone Bernèz carved the cross on stops, protecting him from the returning stones.
  12. The wizard, laden with treasure and thinking himself safe, is crushed by the 'baptized' stone, which is unaffected by his magic.
  13. Bernèz returns home wealthy, marries Rozennik, and they live happily ever after.

Characters

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Marzinne

human adult male

Implied to be a farmer, robust build

Attire: Typical Breton peasant clothing: breeches, linen shirt, waistcoat, perhaps a short jacket

Stern face and shrewd eyes, counting coins

Materialistic, initially disapproving, eventually swayed by wealth

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Rozennik

human young adult female

Pretty

Attire: Traditional Breton peasant dress: simple linen dress, apron, possibly a coif

Smiling over her shoulder, singing

Loving, persistent, kind-hearted

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Bernèz

human young adult male

Hardworking but poor

Attire: Simple, worn peasant clothing: breeches, linen shirt, sabots

Carving a cross into a standing stone

Brave, generous, devoted

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The Beggar

human elderly male

Old, bent, carries bags

Attire: Tattered rags, patched clothing, multiple bags

Holding crowsfoot and trefoil, eyes gleaming with avarice

Greedy, treacherous, manipulative

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Kenneth

human child male

Cold and hungry

Attire: Tattered clothing

Shivering by the campfire

Eager

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Effie

human child female

Cold and hungry

Attire: Tattered clothing

Shivering by the campfire

Curious

Locations

Plouhinec Moor

outdoor night winter, cold

A desolate moor where no corn can be grown, with coarse grass, scattered groves of fir trees, and small pebbles thick on the ground.

Mood: desolate, eerie

The stones leave their places to drink, revealing treasures.

coarse grass fir trees pebbles heath

Marzinne's Kitchen

indoor night Christmas Eve

A large kitchen with a long table, benches filled with men, and a large wooden bowl in the middle with wooden spoons around it.

Mood: festive, tense

The beggar arrives and is given supper.

large wooden bowl wooden spoons long table benches

Stable

indoor night bitter winter night

A stable with an old donkey and a thin ox.

Mood: cold, cramped

The animals reveal the secret of the stones to the beggar.

old donkey thin ox sack of reeds

Stone Avenue on Plouhinec Heath

outdoor night

Two rows of huge, tall, and heavy stones set up long ago.

Mood: magical, dangerous

Bernèz is saved by the stone he carved a cross on, and the wizard is crushed.

huge stones empty holes treasures