The Golden-headed Fish

by Andrew Lang · from The Olive Fairy Book

fairy tale adventure hopeful Ages 8-14 2580 words 12 min read
Cover: The Golden-headed Fish

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 293 words 2 min Canon 100/100

A King lived in a sunny land. But the King was sad. He could not see.

A wise man came. He said a special fish could help. The fish had a golden head. It must be caught in many days.

The Prince went to the big sea. He looked for the fish. He looked for many days. He caught the fish at last.

The fish looked at the Prince. It had sad eyes. The Prince was kind. He let the fish go. He felt sad for his father.

The King was very angry. The Prince did not bring the fish. The King told him to leave.

The Queen helped her son. She gave him gold. She said, "Find a helper. Pay him after a year." The Prince left on a ship.

The Prince found a new home. He needed a helper. A Helper came. He said, "Pay me later." The Prince was happy.

A big monster lived by the sea. It was very scary. The Helper made it go away. The Prince got many gifts.

They went to a new land. The Princess was beautiful. But something bad happened. Her husbands always left. The Prince wanted to marry her.

It was the wedding night. The Prince saw a dark shadow. It came from the Princess. It was a bad spell.

The Helper was watching. He stopped the bad spell. The Prince was safe. The Princess was free.

The Prince and Princess were happy. They lived together. Later, the Prince became king. His father was gone.

The Helper wanted to leave. The King was sad. The Helper said, "I am the fish. You were kind to me. I helped you."

The Prince was kind. Good things happened because of his kindness. Always be kind!

Original Story 2580 words · 12 min read

THE GOLDEN-HEADED FISH

Once upon a time there lived in Egypt a king who lost his sight from a

bad illness. Of course he was very unhappy, and became more so as

months passed, and all the best doctors in the land were unable to

cure him. The poor man grew so thin from misery that everyone thought

he was going to die, and the prince, his only son, thought so too.

Great was therefore the rejoicing through Egypt when a traveller

arrived in a boat down the river Nile, and after questioning the

people as to the reason of their downcast looks, declared that he was

court physician to the king of a far country, and would, if allowed,

examine the eyes of the blind man. He was at once admitted into the

royal presence, and after a few minutes of careful study announced

that the case, though very serious, was not quite hopeless.

'Somewhere in the Great Sea,' he said, 'there exists a Golden-headed

Fish. If you can manage to catch this creature, bring it to me, and I

will prepare an ointment from its blood which will restore your sight.

For a hundred days I will wait here, but if at the end of that time

the fish should still be uncaught I must return to my own master.'

[Illustration: THE PRINCE HAS PITY ON THE GOLD-HEADED FISH]

The next morning the young prince set forth in quest of the fish,

taking with him a hundred men, each man carrying a net. Quite a little

fleet of boats was awaiting them and in these they sailed to the

middle of the Great Sea. During three months they laboured diligently

from sunrise to sunset, but though they caught large multitudes of

fishes, not one of them had a golden head.

'It is quite useless now,' said the prince on the very last night.

'Even if we find it this evening, the hundred days will be over in an

hour, and long before we could reach the Egyptian capital the doctor

will be on his way home. Still, I will go out again, and cast the net

once more myself.' And so he did, and at the very moment that the

hundred days were up, he drew in the net with the Golden-headed Fish

entangled in its meshes.

'Success has come, but, as happens often, it is too late,' murmured

the young man, who had studied in the schools of philosophy; 'but, all

the same, put the fish in that vessel full of water, and we will take

it back to show my father that we have done what we could.' But when

he drew near the fish it looked up at him with such piteous eyes that

he could not make up his mind to condemn it to death. For he knew well

that, though the doctors of his own country were ignorant of the

secret of the ointment, they would do all in their power to extract

something from the fish's blood. So he picked up the prize of so much

labour, and threw it back into the sea, and then began his journey

back to the palace. When at last he reached it he found the king in a

high fever, caused by his disappointment, and he refused to believe

the story told him by his son.

'Your head shall pay for it! Your head shall pay for it!' cried he;

and bade the courtiers instantly summon the executioner to the palace.

But of course somebody ran at once to the queen, and told her of the

king's order, and she put common clothes on the prince, and filled his

pockets with gold, and hurried him on board a ship which was sailing

that night for a distant island.

'Your father will repent some day, and then he will be thankful to

know you are alive,' said she. 'But one last counsel will I give you,

and that is, take no man into your service who desires to be paid

every month.'

The young prince thought this advice rather odd. If the servant had to

be paid anyhow, he did not understand what difference it could make

whether it was by the year or by the month. However, he had many times

proved that his mother was wiser than he, so he promised obedience.

   *       *       *       *       *

After a voyage of several weeks, he arrived at the island of which his

mother had spoken. It was full of hills and woods and flowers, and

beautiful white houses stood everywhere in gardens.

'What a charming spot to live in,' thought the prince. And he lost no

time in buying one of the prettiest of the dwellings.

Then servants came pressing to offer their services; but as they all

declared that they must have payment at the end of every month, the

young man, who remembered his mother's words, declined to have

anything to say to them. At length, one morning, an Arab appeared and

begged that the prince would engage him.

'And what wages do you ask?' inquired the prince, when he had

questioned the new-comer and found him suitable.

'I do not want money,' answered the Arab; 'at the end of a year you

can see what my services are worth to you, and can pay me in any way

you like.' And the young man was pleased, and took the Arab for his

servant.

Now, although no one would have guessed it from the look of the side

of the island where the prince had landed, the other part was a

complete desert, owing to the ravages of a horrible monster which came

up from the sea, and devoured all the corn and cattle. The governor

had sent bands of soldiers to lie in wait for the creature in order to

kill it; but, somehow, no one ever happened to be awake at the moment

that the ravages were committed. It was in vain that the sleepy

soldiers were always punished severely--the same thing invariably

occurred next time; and at last heralds were sent throughout the

island to offer a great reward to the man who could slay the monster.

As soon as the Arab heard the news, he went straight to the governor's

palace.

'If my master can succeed in killing the monster, what reward will you

give him?' asked he.

'My daughter and anything besides that he chooses,' answered the

governor. But the Arab shook his head.

'Give him your daughter and keep your wealth,' said he; 'but,

henceforward, let her share in your gains, whatever they are.'

'It is well,' replied the governor; and ordered a deed to be prepared,

which was signed by both of them.

That night the Arab stole down to the shore to watch, but, before he

set out, he rubbed himself all over with some oil which made his skin

smart so badly that there was no chance of his going to sleep as the

soldiers had done. Then he hid himself behind a large rock and waited.

By-and-by a swell seemed to rise on the water, and, a few minutes

later, a hideous monster--part bird, part beast, and part

serpent--stepped noiselessly on to the rocks. It walked stealthily up

towards the fields, but the Arab was ready for it, and, as it passed,

plunged his dagger into the soft part behind the ear. The creature

staggered and gave a loud cry, and then rolled over dead, with its

feet in the sea.

The Arab watched for a little while, in order to make sure that there

was no life left in his enemy, but as the huge body remained quite

still, he quitted his hiding-place, and cut off the ears of his foe.

These he carried to his master, bidding him show them to the governor,

and declare that he himself, and no other, had killed the monster.

'But it was you, and not I, who slew him,' objected the prince.

'Never mind; do as I bid you. I have a reason for it,' answered the

Arab. And though the young man did not like taking credit for what he

had never done, at length he gave in.

The governor was so delighted at the news that he begged the prince to

take his daughter to wife that very day; but the prince refused,

saying that all he desired was a ship which would carry him to see the

world. Of course this was granted him at once, and when he and his

faithful Arab embarked they found, heaped up in the vessel, stores of

diamonds and precious stones, which the grateful governor had secretly

placed there.

So they sailed, and they sailed, and they sailed; and at length they

reached the shores of a great kingdom. Leaving the prince on board,

the Arab went into the town to find out what sort of a place it was.

After some hours he returned, saying that he heard that the king's

daughter was the most beautiful princess in the world, and that the

prince would do well to ask for her hand.

Nothing loth, the prince listened to this advice, and taking some of

the finest necklaces in his hand, he mounted a splendid horse which

the Arab had bought for him, and rode up to the palace, closely

followed by his faithful attendant.

The strange king happened to be in a good humour, and they were

readily admitted to his presence. Laying down his offerings on the

steps of the throne, he prayed the king to grant him his daughter in

marriage.

The monarch listened to him in silence; but answered, after a pause:

'Young man, I will give you my daughter to wife, if that is your wish;

but first I must tell you that she has already gone through the

marriage ceremony with a hundred and ninety young men, and not one of

them lived for twelve hours after. So think, while there is yet

time.'

The prince did think, and was so frightened that he very nearly went

back to his ship without any more words. But just as he was about to

withdraw his proposal the Arab whispered:

'Fear nothing, but take her.'

'The luck must change some time,' he said, at last; 'and who would not

risk his head for the hand of such a peerless princess?'

'As you will,' replied the king. 'Then I will give orders that the

marriage shall be celebrated to-night.'

And so it was done; and after the ceremony the bride and bridegroom

retired to their own apartments to sup by themselves, for such was the

custom of the country. The moon shone bright, and the prince walked to

the window to look out upon the river and upon the distant hills, when

his gaze suddenly fell on a silken shroud neatly laid out on a couch,

with his name embroidered in gold thread across the front; for this

also was the pleasure of the king.

Horrified at the spectacle, he turned his head away, and this time his

glance rested on a group of men, digging busily beneath the window. It

was a strange hour for any one to be at work, and what was the hole

for? It was a curious shape, so long and narrow, almost like---- Ah!

yes, that was what it was! It was his grave that they were digging!

The shock of the discovery rendered him speechless, yet he stood

fascinated and unable to move. At this moment a small black snake

darted from the mouth of the princess, who was seated at the table,

and wriggled quickly towards him. But the Arab was watching for

something of the sort to happen, and seizing the serpent with some

pincers that he held in one hand, he cut off its head with a sharp

dagger.

The king could hardly believe his eyes when, early the next morning,

his new son-in-law craved an audience of his Majesty.

'What, you?' he cried, as the young man entered.

'Yes, I. Why not?' asked the bridegroom, who thought it best to

pretend not to know anything that had occurred. 'You remember, I told

you that the luck must turn at last, and so it has. But I came to ask

whether you would be so kind as to bid the gardeners fill up a great

hole right underneath my window, which spoils the view.'

'Oh! certainly, yes; of course it shall be done!' stammered the king.

'Is there anything else?'

'No, nothing, thank you,' replied the prince, as he bowed and

withdrew.

Now, from the moment that the Arab cut off the snake's head, the

spell, or whatever it was, seemed to have been taken off the princess,

and she lived very happily with her husband. The days passed swiftly

in hunting in the forests, or sailing on the broad river that flowed

past the palace, and when night fell she would sing to her harp, or

the prince would tell her tales of his own country.

One evening a man in a strange garb, with a face burnt brown by the

sun, arrived at court. He asked to see the bridegroom, and falling on

his face announced that he was a messenger sent by the queen of Egypt,

proclaiming him king in succession to his father, who was dead.

'Her Majesty begs you will set out without delay, and your bride also,

as the affairs of the kingdom are somewhat in disorder,' ended the

messenger.

Then the young man hastened to seek an audience of his father-in-law,

who was delighted to find that his daughter's husband was not merely

the governor of a province, as he had supposed, but the king of a

powerful country. He at once ordered a splendid ship to be made ready,

and in a week's time rode down to the harbour, to bid farewell to the

young couple.

In spite of her grief for the dead king, the queen was overjoyed to

welcome her son home, and commanded the palace to be hung with

splendid stuffs to do honour to the bride. The people expected great

things from their new sovereign, for they had suffered much from the

harsh rule of the old one, and crowds presented themselves every

morning with petitions in their hands, which they hoped to persuade

the king to grant. Truly, he had enough to keep him busy; but he was

very happy for all that, till, one night, the Arab came to him, and

begged permission to return to his own land.

Filled with dismay the young man said: 'Leave me! Do you really wish

to leave me?' Sadly the Arab bowed his head.

'No, my master; never could I wish to leave you! But I have received a

summons, and I dare not disobey it.'

The king was silent, trying to choke down the grief he felt at the

thought of losing his faithful servant.

'Well, I must not try to keep you,' he faltered out at last. 'That

would be a poor return for all that you have done for me! Everything I

have is yours; take what you will, for without you I should long ago

have been dead!'

'And without you, I should long ago have been dead,' answered the

Arab. 'I am the Golden-headed Fish.'

(Adapted from Contes Arméniens. Par Frédéric Macler, Paris. Ernest

Leroux, Editeur.)


Story DNA

Moral

Acts of kindness, even when seemingly unrewarded, can lead to unexpected and profound blessings.

Plot Summary

A blind Egyptian king needs a Golden-headed Fish to regain his sight. His son, the prince, catches the fish but releases it out of pity, leading to his banishment. Exiled, the prince hires a mysterious Arab servant who secretly helps him overcome a monster and marry a cursed princess whose previous husbands all died. The Arab saves the prince by killing a magical snake on the wedding night. Years later, after the prince becomes king of Egypt, the Arab reveals he is the Golden-headed Fish, repaying the prince's earlier act of mercy, and then departs.

Themes

loyaltycompassionfatehidden identity

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: happy
Magic: Golden-headed Fish with healing blood, sea monster (part bird, part beast, part serpent), cursed princess (snake emerging from mouth), magical oil to prevent sleep
the Golden-headed Fish (representing fate, reward, and hidden power)the black snake (representing the curse)

Cultural Context

Origin: Armenian
Era: timeless fairy tale

Adapted from Armenian tales, suggesting a blend of Middle Eastern and possibly Mediterranean influences in its narrative elements and setting.

Plot Beats (13)

  1. The King of Egypt goes blind, and all doctors fail to cure him.
  2. A foreign physician arrives, stating that only an ointment made from the blood of a Golden-headed Fish can restore the king's sight within 100 days.
  3. The prince embarks on a quest, and on the very last day, catches the Golden-headed Fish.
  4. Out of pity, the prince releases the fish back into the sea, knowing he has failed the physician's deadline.
  5. The king, enraged by his son's failure and disappointment, orders the prince's execution.
  6. The queen secretly helps the prince escape, giving him gold and advising him to only hire servants who don't demand monthly pay.
  7. The prince travels to a distant island, buys a house, and eventually hires an Arab servant who agrees to be paid after a year.
  8. The Arab secretly kills a sea monster that has been ravaging the island, allowing the prince to take credit and receive a ship filled with treasure.
  9. The prince and Arab sail to another kingdom, where the Arab advises the prince to marry the beautiful princess, despite her reputation for her husbands dying on their wedding night.
  10. On the wedding night, the prince discovers a shroud with his name and men digging his grave, then sees a black snake emerge from the princess's mouth.
  11. The Arab intervenes, killing the snake with a dagger, thus breaking the curse on the princess and saving the prince's life.
  12. The prince and princess live happily, and the prince is later summoned back to Egypt to become king after his father's death.
  13. After the prince is established as king, the Arab servant requests to leave, revealing himself to be the Golden-headed Fish, repaying the prince's earlier act of mercy.

Characters

The Prince (later King of Egypt)

The Prince (later King of Egypt)

human young adult male

Lean and somewhat refined build, typical of royalty, but capable of enduring hardship. His features would be consistent with an ancient Egyptian noble, perhaps with an olive complexion, dark eyes, and a strong, aquiline nose.

Attire: Initially, fine linen tunics and kilts, possibly with a broad collar (wesekh) and sandals, indicative of an Egyptian prince. When exiled, he wears common, simple linen clothes in muted earth tones. Later, as a wealthy resident on the island, he would wear more elaborate, but still practical, tunics and trousers, perhaps of fine cotton or silk, suitable for a merchant or noble in a prosperous island setting. As a suitor, he wears splendid, richly embroidered robes, possibly of silk, adorned with precious necklaces as offerings.

Wants: To cure his father's blindness, to survive his exile, to find a suitable life, and ultimately, to rule justly.

Flaw: Can be easily frightened or discouraged (e.g., by the princess's curse), and initially lacks self-reliance, relying on his mother's and the Arab's wisdom.

Transforms from a somewhat dependent prince into a self-reliant, wise, and just king, learning the value of unconventional wisdom and the true nature of loyalty.

His thoughtful expression combined with the simple, yet noble, attire he wears during his exile, contrasting with his royal origins.

Compassionate, obedient (to his mother), thoughtful, somewhat naive (initially), courageous (when prompted), and grateful.

The King of Egypt

The King of Egypt

human elderly male

A frail, elderly man, significantly thinned by illness and misery. His skin would be pale and drawn, with visible signs of his blindness.

Attire: Initially, he would wear the traditional elaborate linen robes of an Egyptian pharaoh, perhaps a nemes headdress, but due to his illness, his attire would be simpler, perhaps a loose, comfortable linen tunic and kilt, possibly disheveled.

Wants: To regain his sight and alleviate his suffering.

Flaw: His illness and blindness make him vulnerable and lead to poor judgment (condemning his son).

His illness and subsequent disappointment lead to his tyrannical decision to execute his son, and he eventually dies, paving the way for his son's return.

His gaunt, blind face, reflecting his deep misery and illness.

Desperate, easily disappointed, prone to rash anger, but deeply unhappy.

The Queen of Egypt

The Queen of Egypt

human adult female

A regal woman, likely with a dignified bearing despite her husband's illness. Her features would be consistent with an ancient Egyptian queen, with an elegant profile and dark, knowing eyes.

Attire: Elegant, flowing linen robes, possibly in white or cream, with a broad collar (wesekh) and subtle gold accents. She might wear a simple, yet regal, diadem or headpiece.

Wants: To protect her son and ensure his survival, and to see him eventually reclaim his rightful place.

Flaw: Her love for her son makes her vulnerable to her husband's rash decisions.

Acts as a protector and guide for her son, ensuring his escape and giving him crucial advice that ultimately leads to his success.

Her wise, knowing eyes and the decisive way she acts to save her son.

Wise, protective, resourceful, loving, and decisive.

The Arab (The Golden-headed Fish)

The Arab (The Golden-headed Fish)

magical creature (in human form) adult male

In human form, he is a man with a face 'burnt brown by the sun,' suggesting a life spent outdoors. He would have a lean, resilient build, typical of someone from a desert region. His features would be consistent with an Arab man, with strong, defined features.

Attire: Simple, practical desert attire: a loose-fitting white or light-colored thobe (tunic), possibly with a simple woven belt, and a keffiyeh or turban to protect from the sun. His 'strange garb' later in the story suggests a distinctive, perhaps slightly exotic, but still practical, traveler's outfit.

Wants: To repay the Prince's compassion by serving him and guiding him to his destiny, thus fulfilling his own purpose.

Flaw: Bound by a 'summons' that he 'dare not disobey,' implying a higher, external power controls his ultimate fate.

Serves as the Prince's faithful, magical guide and protector, revealing his true identity only when his service is complete, and then departing.

His sun-burnt, wise face, framed by a keffiyeh, with deep, knowing eyes, hinting at his true, magical nature.

Loyal, wise, self-sacrificing, patient, observant, and mysterious.

The Princess (later Queen of Egypt)

The Princess (later Queen of Egypt)

human young adult female

Described as 'the most beautiful princess in the world.' Her features would be elegant and refined, consistent with royalty from a prosperous, perhaps Middle Eastern or North African, island kingdom. She would have a graceful build.

Attire: Exquisite, flowing gowns made of fine silk or brocade, in rich colors like sapphire blue, emerald green, or deep crimson, possibly embroidered with gold thread. She would wear delicate jewelry, such as necklaces, bracelets, and earrings, appropriate for a princess of a wealthy kingdom.

Wants: Initially, she is a victim of a curse. After the curse is broken, her motivation is to live a happy life with her husband.

Flaw: Her curse makes her a danger to her suitors and prevents her from having agency.

Transforms from a cursed, silent figure into a loving and happy wife and queen after the Arab breaks the spell, allowing her to live a normal life.

Her breathtaking beauty, contrasted with the subtle hint of the curse that once afflicted her (perhaps a slight pallor or a momentary flicker in her eyes before the spell is broken).

Initially cursed and therefore a passive figure, but after the spell is broken, she becomes loving, harmonious, and content.

The King of the Distant Island

The King of the Distant Island

human adult male

A powerful and imposing figure, befitting a king who has endured the loss of many potential sons-in-law. His features would be strong and perhaps a bit weary, consistent with a ruler from a prosperous island kingdom, possibly Middle Eastern or North African.

Attire: Rich, flowing robes of fine fabric, such as silk or brocade, in deep, regal colors, possibly with gold embroidery. He would wear a jeweled turban or a crown, and perhaps a heavy gold necklace or pendant.

Wants: To find a suitable husband for his daughter, despite the curse, and to ensure her well-being.

Flaw: His inability to break the curse on his daughter, leading to great sorrow.

Initially resigned to his daughter's fate, he is overjoyed when the Prince breaks the curse, leading to a happy alliance between their kingdoms.

His stern, yet weary, expression, reflecting the burden of his daughter's curse.

Resigned, cautious, honest (about the curse), and ultimately delighted by his daughter's happiness.

Locations

Royal Palace of Egypt

Royal Palace of Egypt

indoor Implied warm, dry Egyptian climate

The opulent residence of the King of Egypt, where he suffers from blindness and later fever. It is a place of royal decrees, family drama, and eventually, a joyful return.

Mood: Initially somber and anxious due to the king's illness, later filled with despair and anger, then finally joyous and celebratory upon the prince's return.

The king's illness and the doctor's diagnosis; the prince's banishment; the queen's intervention; the prince's eventual return as king.

Throne room Royal chambers Courtyards Executioner's quarters (implied) Splendid stuffs for decoration
The Great Sea

The Great Sea

outdoor sunrise to sunset Implied warm, clear weather suitable for sailing and fishing; calm waters.

A vast expanse of water where the prince and his hundred men search for the Golden-headed Fish. It is a place of arduous labor and eventual success, tinged with philosophical reflection.

Mood: Tense and hopeful during the search, then despairing as time runs out, finally a moment of profound pity and quiet sacrifice.

The prince's three-month quest for the fish; his decision to release the Golden-headed Fish.

Fleet of small boats Fishing nets Multitudes of ordinary fish The Golden-headed Fish Vessel full of water
Distant Island - Prince's Dwelling

Distant Island - Prince's Dwelling

indoor Pleasant, mild island climate with hills, woods, and flowers.

A charming white house with a garden, purchased by the prince on a hilly, wooded island. It becomes his temporary home and a place of new beginnings and challenges.

Mood: Initially peaceful and idyllic, then becomes a base for strategic planning and a place of domestic life.

The prince settles on the island; he hires the Arab servant; he lives here before and after slaying the monster.

White house Garden Hills and woods in the distance Servants' quarters (implied)
Distant Island - Governor's Palace

Distant Island - Governor's Palace

indoor night (for the wedding) Implied warm island climate; clear moonlit night for the wedding.

The residence of the island's governor, a place of political power, fear of the sea monster, and later, a fateful marriage ceremony. It features specific customs for royal weddings.

Mood: Initially one of fear and desperation due to the monster, then shifts to a tense, foreboding atmosphere during the wedding, and finally relief and celebration.

The Arab negotiates the reward for slaying the monster; the prince's wedding to the princess; the Arab saves the prince from the snake; the king's surprise at the prince's survival.

Throne room Marriage ceremony hall Bridal apartments Window overlooking a river and distant hills Silken shroud with gold embroidery Grave being dug beneath the window