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The snake prince

by Andrew Lang

The snake prince

The Enchanted Snake Prince

CEFR A1 Age 5 424 words 2 min Canon 95/100

Once upon a time, an old woman was very poor. She had no food. She was sad. She went to the river with her pot. A snake was inside her pot! She took the pot home. She wanted the snake to go away. But a pretty necklace fell out! It was shiny and nice.

The old woman showed the necklace to the king. The king liked it very much. He gave her some money. The old woman was very happy. She had food now.

The king put the necklace in a big chest. Later, he opened the chest. A baby boy was inside! The king and queen were surprised. They were very happy. They wanted a baby. They loved the baby boy. He grew up to be a prince.

The prince met a princess. They got married. They loved each other. But the princess's mother told her a secret. "Be quiet," she said. "Wait for the prince to tell his secret." The princess was quiet for a long time. The prince was sad.

One night, the prince took the princess to the river. "I am a magic snake," he said. Then he went into the water. The princess was very sad. She lived by the river. She was sad for a long time.

One morning, she saw mud on the floor. The next morning, there was more mud. She stayed awake at night. She saw a snake! "Who are you?" she asked. "I am your husband," said the snake. "I am the prince." The princess cried. "Can I help you?" she asked. "Yes," said the snake. "Put milk and sugar in your room. The Snake Queen will come. Ask her for me." Then the snake went away.

The princess put bowls of milk in her room. She waited. The Snake Queen came with many snakes. The princess was a little scared but brave. The big Snake Queen came near. "Give me back my husband!" said the princess. The Snake Queen looked at her. "You will have him soon," she said. The princess was very glad and sat down.

The next day, the princess put on a pretty dress. She made her house nice. At night, the prince came back! He was not a snake now. He was a man. They were so happy. They hugged and laughed.

They went to the king and queen. All were happy. The bells rang. The old woman helped with their children. They all smiled.

And so, love and bravery can fix any problem. They lived happy ever after.

Original Story 2855 words · 13 min read

_THE SNAKE PRINCE_ Once upon a time there lived by herself, in a city, an old woman who was desperately poor. One day she found that she had only a handful of flour left in the house, and no money to buy more nor hope of earning it. Carrying her little brass pot, very sadly she made her way down to the river to bathe and to obtain some water, thinking afterwards to come home and to make herself an unleavened cake of what flour she had left; and after that she did not know what was to become of her. Whilst she was bathing she left her little brass pot on the river bank covered with a cloth, to keep the inside nice and clean; but when she came up out of the river and took the cloth off to fill the pot with water, she saw inside it the glittering folds of a deadly snake. At once she popped the cloth again into the mouth of the pot and held it there; and then she said to herself: 'Ah, kind death! I will take thee home to my house, and there I will shake thee out of my pot and thou shalt bite me and I will die, and then all my troubles will be ended.' With these sad thoughts in her mind the poor old woman hurried home, holding her cloth carefully in the mouth of the pot; and when she got home she shut all the doors and windows, and took away the cloth, and turned the pot upside down upon her hearthstone. What was her surprise to find that, instead of the deadly snake which she expected to see fall out of it, there fell out with a rattle and a clang a most magnificent necklace of flashing jewels! For a few minutes she could hardly think or speak, but stood staring; and then with trembling hands she picked the necklace up, and folding it in the corner of her veil, she hurried off to the king's hall of public audience. 'A petition, O king!' she said. 'A petition for thy private ear alone!' And when her prayer had been granted, and she found herself alone with the king, she shook out her veil at his feet, and there fell from it in glittering coils the splendid necklace. As soon as the king saw it he was filled with amazement and delight, and the more he looked at it the more he felt that he must possess it at once. So he gave the old woman five hundred silver pieces for it, and put it straightway into his pocket. Away she went full of happiness; for the money that the king had given her was enough to keep her for the rest of her life. As soon as he could leave his business the king hurried off and showed his wife his prize, with which she was as pleased as he, if not more so; and, as soon as they had finished admiring the wonderful necklace, they locked it up in the great chest where the queen's jewellery was kept, the key of which hung always round the king's neck. A short while afterwards, a neighbouring king sent a message to say that a most lovely girl baby had been born to him; and he invited his neighbours to come to a great feast in honour of the occasion. The queen told her husband that of course they must be present at the banquet, and she would wear the new necklace which he had given her. They had only a short time to prepare for the journey, and at the last moment the king went to the jewel chest to take out the necklace for his wife to wear, but he could see no necklace at all, only, in its place, a fat little boy baby crowing and shouting. The king was so astonished that he nearly fell backwards, but presently he found his voice, and called for his wife so loudly that she came running, thinking that the necklace must at least have been stolen. 'Look here! look!' cried the king, 'haven't we always longed for a son? And now heaven has sent us one!' 'What do you mean?' cried the queen. 'Are you mad?' 'Mad? no, I hope not,' shouted the king, dancing in excitement round the open chest. 'Come here, and look! Look what we've got instead of that necklace!' Just then the baby let out a great crow of joy, as though he would like to jump up and dance with the king; and the queen gave a cry of surprise, and ran up and looked into the chest. 'Oh!' she gasped, as she looked at the baby, 'what a darling! Where could he have come from?' 'I'm sure I can't say,' said the king; 'all I know is that we locked up a necklace in the chest, and when I unlocked it just now there was no necklace, but a baby, and as fine a baby as ever was seen.' By this time the queen had the baby in her arms. 'Oh, the blessed one!' she cried, 'fairer ornament for the bosom of a queen than any necklace that ever was wrought. Write,' she continued, 'write to our neighbour and say that we cannot come to his feast, for we have a feast of our own, and a baby of our own! Oh, happy day!' So the visit was given up; and, in honour of the new baby, the bells of the city, and its guns, and its trumpets, and its people, small and great, had hardly any rest for a week; there was such a ringing, and banging, and blaring, and such fireworks, and feasting, and rejoicing, and merry-making, as had never been seen before. A few years went by; and, as the king's boy baby and his neighbour's girl baby grew and throve, the two kings arranged that as soon as they were old enough they should marry; and so, with much signing of papers and agreements, and wagging of wise heads, and stroking of grey beards, the compact was made, and signed, and sealed, and lay waiting for its fulfilment. And this too came to pass; for, as soon as the prince and princess were eighteen years of age, the kings agreed that it was time for the wedding; and the young prince journeyed away to the neighbouring kingdom for his bride, and was there married to her with great and renewed rejoicings. Now, I must tell you that the old woman who had sold the king the necklace had been called in by him to be the nurse of the young prince; and although she loved her charge dearly, and was a most faithful servant, she could not help talking just a little, and so, by-and-by, it began to be rumoured that there was some magic about the young prince's birth; and the rumour of course had come in due time to the ears of the parents of the princess. So now that she was going to be the wife of the prince, her mother (who was curious, as many other people are) said to her daughter on the eve of the ceremony: 'Remember that the first thing you must do is to find out what this story is about the prince. And in order to do it, you must not speak a word to him whatever he says until he asks you why you are silent; then you must ask him what the truth is about his magic birth; and until he tells you, you must not speak to him again.' And the princess promised that she would follow her mother's advice. Therefore when they were married, and the prince spoke to his bride, she did not answer him. He could not think what was the matter, but even about her old home she would not utter a word. At last he asked why she would not speak; and then she said: 'Tell me the secret of your birth.' Then the prince was very sad and displeased, and although she pressed him sorely he would not tell her, but always reply: 'If I tell you, you will repent that ever you asked me.' For several months they lived together; and it was not such a happy time for either as it ought to have been, for the secret was still a secret, and lay between them like a cloud between the sun and the earth, making what should be fair, dull and sad. [Illustration: THE SNAKE PRINCE VISITS HIS WIFE] At length the prince could bear it no longer; so he said to his wife one day: 'At midnight I will tell you my secret if you still wish it; but you will repent it all your life.' However, the princess was overjoyed that she had succeeded, and paid no attention to his warnings. That night the prince ordered horses to be ready for the princess and himself a little before midnight. He placed her on one, and mounted the other himself, and they rode together down to the river to the place where the old woman had first found the snake in her brass pot. There the prince drew rein and said sadly: 'Do you still insist that I should tell you my secret?' And the princess answered 'Yes.' 'If I do,' answered the prince, 'remember that you will regret it all your life.' But the princess only replied 'Tell me!' 'Then,' said the prince, 'know that I am the son of the king of a far country, but by enchantment I was turned into a snake.' The word 'snake' was hardly out of his lips when he disappeared, and the princess heard a rustle and saw a ripple on the water; and in the faint moonlight she beheld a snake swimming into the river. Soon it disappeared and she was left alone. In vain she waited with beating heart for something to happen, and for the prince to come back to her. Nothing happened and no one came; only the wind mourned through the trees on the river bank, and the night birds cried, and a jackal howled in the distance, and the river flowed black and silent beneath her. In the morning they found her, weeping and dishevelled, on the river bank; but no word could they learn from her or from anyone as to the fate of her husband. At her wish they built on the river bank a little house of black stone; and there she lived in mourning, with a few servants and guards to watch over her. A long, long time passed by, and still the princess lived in mourning for her prince, and saw no one, and went nowhere away from her house on the river bank and the garden that surrounded it. One morning, when she woke up, she found a stain of fresh mud upon the carpet. She sent for the guards, who watched outside the house day and night, and asked them who had entered her room while she was asleep. They declared that no one _could_ have entered, for they kept such careful watch that not even a bird could fly in without their knowledge; but none of them could explain the stain of mud. The next morning, again, the princess found another stain of wet mud, and she questioned everyone most carefully; but none could say how the mud came there. The third night the princess determined to lie awake herself and watch; and, for fear that she might fall asleep, she cut her finger with a penknife and rubbed salt into the cut, that the pain of it might keep her from sleeping. So she lay awake, and at midnight she saw a snake come wriggling along the ground with some mud from the river in its mouth; and when it came near the bed, it reared up its head and dropped its muddy head on the bedclothes. She was very frightened, but tried to control her fear, and called out: 'Who are you, and what do you here?' And the snake answered: 'I am the prince, your husband, and I am come to visit you.' Then the princess began to weep; and the snake continued: 'Alas! did I not say that if I told you my secret you would repent it? and have you not repented?' 'Oh, indeed!' cried the poor princess, 'I have repented it, and shall repent it all my life! Is there nothing I can do?' And the snake answered: 'Yes, there is one thing, if you dared to do it.' 'Only tell me,' said the princess, 'and I will do _anything_!' 'Then,' replied the snake, 'on a certain night you must put a large bowl of milk and sugar in each of the four corners of this room. All the snakes in the river will come out to drink the milk, and the one that leads the way will be the queen of the snakes. You must stand in her way at the door, and say: "Oh, Queen of Snakes, Queen of Snakes, give me back my husband!" and perhaps she will do it. But if you are frightened, and do not stop her, you will never see me again.' And he glided away. On the night of which the snake had told her, the princess got four large bowls of milk and sugar, and put one in each corner of the room, and stood in the doorway waiting. At midnight there was a great hissing and rustling from the direction of the river, and presently the ground appeared to be alive with horrible writhing forms of snakes, whose eyes glittered and forked tongues quivered as they moved on in the direction of the princess's house. Foremost among them was a huge, repulsive scaly creature that led the dreadful procession. The guards were so terrified that they all ran away; but the princess stood in the doorway, as white as death, and with her hands clasped tight together for fear she should scream or faint, and fail to do her part. As they came closer and saw her in the way, all the snakes raised their horrid heads and swayed them to and fro, and looked at her with wicked beady eyes, while their breath seemed to poison the very air. Still the princess stood firm, and, when the leading snake was within a few feet of her, she cried: 'Oh, Queen of Snakes, Queen of Snakes, give me back my husband!' Then all the rustling, writhing crowd of snakes seemed to whisper to one another 'Her husband? her husband?' But the queen of snakes moved on until her head was almost in the princess's face, and her little eyes seemed to flash fire. And still the princess stood in the doorway and never moved, but cried again: 'Oh, Queen of Snakes, Queen of Snakes, give me back my husband!' Then the queen of snakes replied: 'To-morrow you shall have him--to-morrow!' When she heard these words and knew that she had conquered, the princess staggered from the door, and sank upon her bed and fainted. As in a dream, she saw that her room was full of snakes, all jostling and squabbling over the bowls of milk until it was finished. And then they went away. [Illustration: 'QUEEN OF SNAKES, GIVE ME BACK MY HUSBAND'] In the morning the princess was up early, and took off the mourning dress which she had worn for five whole years, and put on gay and beautiful clothes. And she swept the house and cleaned it, and adorned it with garlands and nosegays of sweet flowers and ferns, and prepared it as though she were making ready for her wedding. And when night fell she lit up the woods and gardens with lanterns, and spread a table as for a feast, and lit in the house a thousand wax candles. Then she waited for her husband, not knowing in what shape he would appear. And at midnight there came striding from the river the prince, laughing, but with tears in his eyes; and she ran to meet him, and threw herself into his arms, crying and laughing too. So the prince came home; and the next day they two went back to the palace, and the old king wept with joy to see them. And the bells, so long silent, were set a-ringing again, and the guns firing, and the trumpets blaring, and there was fresh feasting and rejoicing. And the old woman who had been the prince's nurse became nurse to the prince's children--at least she was called so; though she was far too old to do anything for them but love them. Yet she still thought that she was useful, and knew that she was happy. And happy, indeed, were the prince and princess, who in due time became king and queen, and lived and ruled long and prosperously. (Major Campbell, Feroshepore.)

Moral of the Story

Perseverance and unwavering love can overcome even the most daunting magical obstacles and transform sorrow into lasting happiness.


Characters 6 characters

The Old Woman ◆ supporting

human elderly female

Poor, frail

Attire: Simple, patched clothing typical of a poor woman in the story's setting

Desperate, initially suicidal but resourceful and ultimately kind

The King ◆ supporting

human adult male

Not explicitly described, but likely of strong build

Attire: Richly decorated robes, crown, jewelry

Greedy (initially), easily delighted, loving

The Queen ◆ supporting

human adult female

Beautiful, regal

Attire: Luxurious gowns, fine jewelry

Excited, maternal, easily pleased

The Prince ★ protagonist

human young adult male

Handsome

Attire: Princely attire, fine fabrics

Secretive, loving, cursed

The Princess ★ protagonist

human young adult female

Lovely

Attire: Initially mourning clothes, later beautiful gowns

Mournful, brave, determined

Queen of Snakes ⚔ antagonist

magical creature ageless female

Huge, repulsive, scaly

Attire: Scales

Imposing, powerful, grudgingly merciful

Locations 5 locations
Old Woman's House

Old Woman's House

indoor day

A humble dwelling with only a handful of flour left, containing a hearthstone.

Mood: desolate, impoverished

The old woman discovers the jeweled necklace instead of a snake.

brass pothearthstonelittle flour
River Bank

River Bank

outdoor day

A riverbank where the old woman bathes and leaves her brass pot.

Mood: peaceful, fateful

The old woman intends to commit suicide by snakebite but finds jewels instead.

riverbrass potcloth covering the pot
King's Hall of Public Audience

King's Hall of Public Audience

indoor day

A grand hall where the king receives petitions.

Mood: formal, opulent

The old woman presents the necklace to the king.

king's throneveiljeweled necklace
Queen's Jewel Chest

Queen's Jewel Chest

indoor day

A large chest where the queen's jewelry is kept, secured with a lock and key.

Mood: secure, magical

The necklace transforms into a baby.

jewel chestnecklacebaby boy
Princess's Black Stone House by the River

Princess's Black Stone House by the River

indoor night

A little house of black stone built on the river bank, surrounded by a garden.

Mood: mournful, eerie, tense

The princess confronts the Queen of Snakes and the prince returns.

black stone wallscarpet with mud stainsbowls of milk and sugar

Story DNA fairy tale · hopeful

Moral

Perseverance and unwavering love can overcome even the most daunting magical obstacles and transform sorrow into lasting happiness.

Plot Summary

A poor old woman discovers a snake in her pot, which transforms into a valuable necklace. She sells it to the king, but the necklace then transforms into a baby boy, who becomes the prince. Years later, the prince marries a princess who, following her mother's advice, refuses to speak until he reveals the secret of his birth. He eventually confesses he is an enchanted snake and disappears. After five years of mourning, the princess discovers her snake-husband secretly visiting and is given a dangerous task: to confront the terrifying Queen of Snakes. With immense courage, she succeeds, breaking the enchantment, and the prince returns to his human form, allowing them to live happily ever after.

Themes

perseverancelove and commitmentthe power of faith/beliefovercoming fear

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three, direct address to reader (e.g., 'Now, I must tell you'), repetition for emphasis

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: happy
Magic: transformation (snake to necklace, necklace to baby, prince to snake, snake to prince), enchantment/curse, talking animals (snake-prince, Queen of Snakes), magical tasks to break curses
the brass pot (container of fate/transformation)the necklace (symbol of hidden value/transformation)the snake (symbol of enchantment, hidden identity, danger, and transformation)the river (boundary, place of transformation)

Cultural Context

Origin: Indian (specifically noted as 'Major Campbell, Feroshepore' indicating a British colonial collection of Indian folklore)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Collected by Major Campbell in Feroshepore (Firozpur, India), indicating it's likely an adaptation or translation of an Indian folk tale into English. The themes and motifs are common in South Asian folklore.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. An old, poor woman finds a snake in her pot, intending for it to bite her, but it transforms into a valuable necklace.
  2. She sells the necklace to the king for a large sum, ending her poverty.
  3. The king and queen admire the necklace, but it transforms into a baby boy in their jewel chest.
  4. The king and queen adopt the baby, celebrating his arrival, and he grows into a prince.
  5. An arranged marriage is made between the prince and a neighboring princess.
  6. The princess's mother instructs her to discover the secret of the prince's birth by refusing to speak until he reveals it.
  7. The prince, after months of silence and unhappiness, takes the princess to the riverbank at midnight and reveals he was a snake by enchantment, disappearing into the water.
  8. The princess lives in mourning for five years in a black stone house by the river.
  9. She discovers muddy stains in her room for two nights, then stays awake to find a snake, her husband, visiting her.
  10. The snake-prince tells her she repented asking his secret, but offers a dangerous way to break the enchantment.
  11. The princess must place milk and sugar in the room's corners and confront the Queen of Snakes at midnight.
  12. Despite extreme fear and her guards fleeing, the princess bravely confronts the terrifying Queen of Snakes, demanding her husband back.
  13. The Queen of Snakes promises to return him the next day, and the princess faints from relief.
  14. The princess prepares her house for his return, and at midnight, the prince reappears in human form.
  15. They return to the palace, reuniting with the king and queen, and live happily ever after, with the old woman becoming their children's nurse.

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