The Cat's Elopement

by Andrew Lang · from The Pink Fairy Book

fairy tale romance hopeful Ages 8-14 1122 words 5 min read
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Original Story 1122 words · 5 min read

The Cat’s Elopement

[From the Japanische Marchen und Sagen, von David Brauns (Leipzig:

Wilhelm Friedrich).]

Once upon a time there lived a cat of marvellous beauty, with a skin as

soft and shining as silk, and wise green eyes, that could see even in

the dark. His name was Gon, and he belonged to a music teacher, who

was so fond and proud of him that he would not have parted with him for

anything in the world.

Now not far from the music master’s house there dwelt a lady who

possessed a most lovely little pussy cat called Koma. She was such a

little dear altogether, and blinked her eyes so daintily, and ate her

supper so tidily, and when she had finished she licked her pink nose so

delicately with her little tongue, that her mistress was never tired of

saying, ‘Koma, Koma, what should I do without you?’

Well, it happened one day that these two, when out for an evening

stroll, met under a cherry tree, and in one moment fell madly in love

with each other. Gon had long felt that it was time for him to find a

wife, for all the ladies in the neighbourhood paid him so much attention

that it made him quite shy; but he was not easy to please, and did not

care about any of them. Now, before he had time to think, Cupid had

entangled him in his net, and he was filled with love towards Koma. She

fully returned his passion, but, like a woman, she saw the difficulties

in the way, and consulted sadly with Gon as to the means of overcoming

them. Gon entreated his master to set matters right by buying Koma, but

her mistress would not part from her. Then the music master was asked to

sell Gon to the lady, but he declined to listen to any such suggestion,

so everything remained as before.

At length the love of the couple grew to such a pitch that they

determined to please themselves, and to seek their fortunes together.

So one moonlight night they stole away, and ventured out into an unknown

world. All day long they marched bravely on through the sunshine, till

they had left their homes far behind them, and towards evening they

found themselves in a large park. The wanderers by this time were very

hot and tired, and the grass looked very soft and inviting, and the

trees cast cool deep shadows, when suddenly an ogre appeared in this

Paradise, in the shape of a big, big dog! He came springing towards them

showing all his teeth, and Koma shrieked, and rushed up a cherry tree.

Gon, however, stood his ground boldly, and prepared to give battle, for

he felt that Koma’s eyes were upon him, and that he must not run away.

But, alas! his courage would have availed him nothing had his enemy once

touched him, for he was large and powerful, and very fierce. From her

perch in the tree Koma saw it all, and screamed with all her might,

hoping that some one would hear, and come to help. Luckily a servant of

the princess to whom the park belonged was walking by, and he drove off

the dog, and picking up the trembling Gon in his arms, carried him to

his mistress.

So poor little Koma was left alone, while Gon was borne away full of

trouble, not in the least knowing what to do. Even the attention paid

him by the princess, who was delighted with his beauty and pretty ways,

did not console him, but there was no use in fighting against fate, and

he could only wait and see what would turn up.

The princess, Gon’s new mistress, was so good and kind that everybody

loved her, and she would have led a happy life, had it not been for a

serpent who had fallen in love with her, and was constantly annoying her

by his presence. Her servants had orders to drive him away as often as

he appeared; but as they were careless, and the serpent very sly, it

sometimes happened that he was able to slip past them, and to frighten

the princess by appearing before her. One day she was seated in her

room, playing on her favourite musical instrument, when she felt

something gliding up her sash, and saw her enemy making his way to kiss

her cheek. She shrieked and threw herself backwards, and Gon, who had

been curled up on a stool at her feet, understood her terror, and with

one bound seized the snake by his neck. He gave him one bite and one

shake, and flung him on the ground, where he lay, never to worry the

princess any more. Then she took Gon in her arms, and praised and

caressed him, and saw that he had the nicest bits to eat, and the

softest mats to lie on; and he would have had nothing in the world to

wish for if only he could have seen Koma again.

Time passed on, and one morning Gon lay before the house door, basking

in the sun. He looked lazily at the world stretched out before him,

and saw in the distance a big ruffian of a cat teasing and ill-treating

quite a little one. He jumped up, full of rage, and chased away the big

cat, and then he turned to comfort the little one, when his heart nearly

burst with joy to find that it was Koma. At first Koma did not know him

again, he had grown so large and stately; but when it dawned upon her

who it was, her happiness knew no bounds. And they rubbed their heads

and their noses again and again, while their purring might have been

heard a mile off.

Paw in paw they appeared before the princess, and told her the story of

their life and its sorrows. The princess wept for sympathy, and promised

that they should never more be parted, but should live with her to the

end of their days. By-and-bye the princess herself got married, and

brought a prince to dwell in the palace in the park. And she told him

all about her two cats, and how brave Gon had been, and how he had

delivered her from her enemy the serpent.

And when the prince heard, he swore they should never leave them, but

should go with the princess wherever she went. So it all fell out as

the princess wished; and Gon and Koma had many children, and so had the

princess, and they all played together, and were friends to the end of

their lives.


Story DNA

Moral

True love, when combined with courage and loyalty, can overcome great obstacles and lead to lasting happiness.

Plot Summary

Two beautiful cats, Gon and Koma, fall deeply in love but are separated by their owners' refusal to let them be together. They elope, but a dangerous dog separates them, leading Gon to be taken in by a kind princess. Gon proves his bravery by saving the princess from a serpent. Later, Gon encounters and rescues a small cat being bullied, only to discover it is his beloved Koma. Reunited, they tell their story to the princess, who ensures they live happily ever after, eventually having families alongside her own.

Themes

love conquers allperseveranceloyaltybravery

Emotional Arc

separation and suffering to reunion and triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: personification of animals, rule of three (obstacles)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person (owners' refusal), person vs nature (dog, serpent), person vs self (Gon's internal struggle)
Ending: happy
Magic: talking animals (implied, as they tell their story and express complex emotions), personification of animals
cherry tree (initial meeting place, love)serpent (obstacle, evil)dog (obstacle, danger)

Cultural Context

Origin: Japanese (as presented by Andrew Lang from a German collection)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Andrew Lang's collections often drew from various global sources, translating and adapting them for a Western audience. The 'Japanische Marchen und Sagen' by David Brauns would have been a German compilation of Japanese folklore.

Plot Beats (13)

  1. Gon, a beautiful cat, lives with a music teacher who adores him.
  2. Koma, a lovely pussy cat, lives with a lady who adores her.
  3. Gon and Koma meet under a cherry tree and fall deeply in love.
  4. Their owners refuse to sell or exchange them, preventing their union.
  5. The two cats elope one moonlight night, seeking their fortune together.
  6. They encounter a large, fierce dog in a park, which frightens Koma up a tree.
  7. A princess's servant drives off the dog and carries the trembling Gon to his mistress, separating the lovers.
  8. Gon, though well-cared for by the princess, is heartbroken and longs for Koma.
  9. Gon bravely saves the princess from a persistent, annoying serpent by attacking and killing it.
  10. Time passes, and Gon, now large and stately, sees a bully cat attacking a smaller cat.
  11. Gon chases away the bully and discovers the small cat is Koma, leading to a joyful reunion.
  12. Gon and Koma tell their story to the princess, who weeps with sympathy and promises they will never be parted.
  13. The princess marries a prince, and Gon and Koma, along with their children and the princess's children, live happily ever after together.

Characters

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Gon

cat adult male

Marvellous beauty, soft and shining silk-like skin, wise green eyes

Shining silk fur

Brave, loving, loyal

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Koma

cat young adult female

Lovely little pussy cat

Daintily licking her pink nose

Dainty, tidy, loving

👤

Music Teacher

human adult male

Not described

Attire: Inferred traditional Japanese clothing

Holding Gon tenderly

Fond, proud

👤

Lady

human adult female

Not described

Attire: Inferred traditional Japanese clothing

Saying 'Koma, Koma, what should I do without you?'

Loving

✦

Dog

dog adult male

Big, big, large and powerful, fierce

Showing all his teeth

Aggressive, fierce

👤

Princess

human young adult female

Not described

Attire: Inferred traditional Japanese royal clothing

Playing her musical instrument

Good, kind, sympathetic

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Serpent

magical creature ageless male

Sly

Gliding up the princess's sash

Annoying, persistent

Locations

Music Master's House

indoor

House of Gon's owner, not far from another lady's house

Mood: peaceful, domestic

Gon lives here contentedly before meeting Koma.

musical instruments soft mats for Gon nearby cherry tree

Cherry Tree Meeting Spot

outdoor evening

A cherry tree between the music master's house and the lady's house

Mood: romantic, fateful

Gon and Koma meet and fall in love.

cherry blossoms pathway between houses soft light

Park Paradise

outdoor evening sunny

A large park with soft grass and cool, deep shadows from trees

Mood: inviting, but dangerous

Gon and Koma are attacked by a dog; Gon is rescued and taken to the princess.

soft grass tall trees deep shadows ogre dog

Princess's Room

indoor day

A room in the princess's residence with musical instruments

Mood: refined, elegant, initially threatened

Gon saves the princess from the serpent.

musical instrument stool sash soft mats

Before the House Door

transitional morning sunny

Area outside the princess's house

Mood: peaceful, fortunate

Gon and Koma are reunited.

sunlight view of the distance other cats