The ratcatcher
by Andrew Lang

The Piper and the Town's Promise
Once, a small town had many rats. The rats were everywhere. They were in the houses. They were in the shops. They were in the streets. The rats were big and small. They made noises all night. The people were very sad. They could not sleep well. They could not eat their food. They needed help quickly. They asked the Town Leader. "Please help us," they cried. "Our town is full of rats." The Town Leader was worried. He did not know what to do.
A man came to town one day. He had a pipe in his hand. "I can help you," he said. "I can take away all the rats." "Give me one coin for each rat." The people were happy to hear this. They talked to the Town Leader. "Should we pay him?" they asked.
The Town Leader was clever. He said, "Yes, we will pay." But he did not mean it. He thought he could cheat. He planned to pay less money. "We will save money," he thought.
The piper played his pipe. The music was very pretty. It was sweet and nice. The piper played his pipe again. All the rats heard the music. They came out of the houses. They came out of the shops. They followed the piper closely. The piper walked to the river. The rats followed him closely. They went away into the water. The town had no more rats. The people were very happy now. "No more rats!" they cheered.
The next day, the piper came back. He said, "I helped many rats." "Please pay me now for my work." He waited for his money. The Town Leader came out to see him. The Town Leader laughed at him. He said, "No, we will not pay." "We will not pay you much." He gave the piper only a little money. It was not enough at all. "This is all you get," he said.
The piper was very angry. He said, "You broke your promise." "That is not fair to me." "The children will have to pay." He put on his hat and left. The piper walked away slowly.
The people in the town laughed. They did not believe him. They thought he was just joking. They went back to their homes. "He is just a silly man," they said.
On Sunday, the piper came back again. It was a sunny day. He played his pipe once more. The music was very happy. It sounded like fun and joy. The piper played his pipe sweetly. All the children heard the music. They came out of the houses. They came out of the school. They followed the piper happily. They danced and smiled as they walked. "Come with me!" the music seemed to say.
The piper walked to a hill. There was a big cave there. The children went inside to play. It looked like a great adventure. The piper smiled at them all. "Follow me!" he said gently.
Three children were slow that day. They could not keep up with others. They stayed outside the cave. They told their parents what happened. "Our children are gone!" the parents cried. The parents were very scared.
They looked for the cave quickly. It was closed very tightly. They could not open it. They felt very worried and sad. They called for help loudly. "Where are our children?" they cried.
The Town Leader was very sad. He had five children inside. He said, "I was wrong." "I should have kept my promise." "You must keep promises," the people said. The Town Leader said he was sorry. "I am truly sorry," he said.
"We will pay!" he called. "We are truly sorry!" The town called out together. Then the cave opened slowly. The children came out smiling. They were happy and safe. The piper was there waiting. The Town Leader paid him fairly. "Thank you," said the piper kindly. "Always keep your promises from now." The town learned a good lesson. They were all happy again. "Promises are important," they said.
Original Story
The ratcatcher.’ The town council had just assembled to consider once more this plague of Egypt, from which no one could save the town. The stranger sent word to the counsellors that, if they would make it worth his while, he would rid them of all their rats before night, down to the very last. ‘Then he is a sorcerer!’ cried the citizens with one voice; ‘we must beware of him.’ The Town Counsellor, who was considered clever, reassured them. He said: ‘Sorcerer or no, if this bagpiper speaks the truth, it was he who sent us this horrible vermin that he wants to rid us of to-day for money. Well, we must learn to catch the devil in his own snares. You leave it to me.’ ‘Leave it to the Town Counsellor,’ said the citizens one to another. And the stranger was brought before them. ‘Before night,’ said he, ‘I shall have despatched all the rats in Hamel if you will but pay me a _gros_ a head.’ ‘A _gros_ a head!’ cried the citizens, ‘but that will come to millions of florins!’ The Town Counsellor simply shrugged his shoulders and said to the stranger: ‘A bargain! To work; the rats will be paid one _gros_ a head as you ask.’ The bagpiper announced that he would operate that very evening when the moon rose. He added that the inhabitants should at that hour leave the streets free, and content themselves with looking out of their windows at what was passing, and that it would be a pleasant spectacle. When the people of Hamel heard of the bargain, they too exclaimed: ‘A _gros_ a head! but this will cost us a deal of money!’ ‘Leave it to the Town Counsellor,’ said the town council with a malicious air. And the good people of Hamel repeated with their counsellors, ‘Leave it to the Town Counsellor.’ Towards nine at night the bagpiper re-appeared on the market place. He turned, as at first, his back to the church, and the moment the moon rose on the horizon, ‘Trarira, trari!’ the bagpipes resounded. It was first a slow, caressing sound, then more and more lively and urgent, and so sonorous and piercing that it penetrated as far as the farthest alleys and retreats of the town. Soon from the bottom of the cellars, the top of the garrets, from under all the furniture, from all the nooks and corners of the houses, out come the rats, search for the door, fling themselves into the street, and trip, trip, trip, begin to run in file towards the front of the town hall, so squeezed together that they covered the pavement like the waves of flooded torrent. When the square was quite full the bagpiper faced about, and, still playing briskly, turned towards the river that runs at the foot of the walls of Hamel. Arrived there he turned round; the rats were following. ‘Hop! hop!’ he cried, pointing with his finger to the middle of the stream, where the water whirled and was drawn down as if through a funnel. And hop! hop! without hesitating, the rats took the leap, swam straight to the funnel, plunged in head foremost and disappeared. The plunging continued thus without ceasing till midnight. At last, dragging himself with difficulty, came a big rat, white with age, and stopped on the bank. It was the king of the band. ‘Are they all there, friend Blanchet?’ asked the bagpiper. ‘They are all there,’ replied friend Blanchet. ‘And how many were they?’ ‘Nine hundred and ninety thousand, nine hundred and ninety-nine.’ ‘Well reckoned?’ ‘Well reckoned.’ ‘Then go and join them, old sire, and au revoir.’ Then the old white rat sprang in his turn into the river, swam to the whirlpool and disappeared. When the bagpiper had thus concluded his business he went to bed at his inn. And for the first time during three months the people of Hamel slept quietly through the night. The next morning, at nine o’clock, the bagpiper repaired to the town hall, where the town council awaited him. ‘All your rats took a jump into the river yesterday,’ said he to the counsellors, ‘and I guarantee that not one of them comes back. They were nine hundred and ninety thousand, nine hundred and ninety-nine, at one _gros_ a head. Reckon!’ ‘Let us reckon the heads first. One _gros_ a head is one head the _gros_. Where are the heads?’ The ratcatcher did not expect this treacherous stroke. He paled with anger and his eyes flashed fire. ‘The heads!’ cried he, ‘if you care about them, go and find them in the river.’ ‘So,’ replied the Town Counsellor, ‘you refuse to hold to the terms of your agreement? We ourselves could refuse you all payment. But you have been of use to us, and we will not let you go without a recompense,’ and he offered him fifty crowns. ‘Keep your recompense for yourself,’ replied the ratcatcher proudly. ‘If you do not pay me I will be paid by your heirs.’ Thereupon he pulled his hat down over his eyes, went hastily out of the hall, and left the town without speaking to a soul. When the Hamel people heard how the affair had ended they rubbed their hands, and with no more scruple than their Town Counsellor, they laughed over the ratcatcher, who, they said, was caught in his own trap. But what made them laugh above all was his threat of getting himself paid by their heirs. Ha! they wished that they only had such creditors for the rest of their lives. Next day, which was a Sunday, they all went gaily to church, thinking that after Mass they would at last be able to eat some good thing that the rats had not tasted before them. They never suspected the terrible surprise that awaited them on their return home. No children anywhere, they had all disappeared! ‘Our children! where are our poor children?’ was the cry that was soon heard in all the streets. Then through the east door of the town came three little boys, who cried and wept, and this is what they told: While the parents were at church a wonderful music had resounded. Soon all the little boys and all the little girls that had been left at home had gone out, attracted by the magic sounds, and had rushed to the great market-place. There they found the ratcatcher playing his bagpipes at the same spot as the evening before. Then the stranger had begun to walk quickly, and they had followed, running, singing and dancing to the sound of the music, as far as the foot of the mountain which one sees on entering Hamel. At their approach the mountain had opened a little, and the bagpiper had gone in with them, after which it had closed again. Only the three little ones who told the adventure had remained outside, as if by a miracle. One was bandy-legged and could not run fast enough; the other, who had left the house in haste, one foot shod the other bare, had hurt himself against a big stone and could not walk without difficulty; the third had arrived in time, but in harrying to go in with the others had struck so violently against the wall of the mountain that he fell backwards at the moment it closed upon his comrades. At this story the parents redoubled their lamentations. They ran with pikes and mattocks to the mountain, and searched till evening to find the opening by which their children had disappeared, without being able to find it. At last, the night falling, they returned desolate to Hamel. But the most unhappy of all was the Town Counsellor, for he lost three little boys and two pretty little girls, and to crown all, the people of Hamel overwhelmed him with reproaches, forgetting that the evening before they had all agreed with him. What had become of all these unfortunate children? The parents always hoped they were not dead, and that the rat-catcher, who certainly must have come out of the mountain, would have taken them with him to his country. That is why for several years they sent in search of them to different countries, but no one ever came on the trace of the poor little ones. It was not till much later that anything was to be heard of them. About one hundred and fifty years after the event, when there was no longer one left of the fathers, mothers, brothers or sisters of that day, there arrived one evening in Hamel some merchants of Bremen returning from the East, who asked to speak with the citizens. They told that they, in crossing Hungary, had sojourned in a mountainous country called Transylvania, where the inhabitants only spoke German, while all around them nothing was spoken but Hungarian. These people also declared that they came from Germany, but they did not know how they chanced to be in this strange country. ‘Now,’ said the merchants of Bremen, ‘these Germans cannot be other than the descendants of the lost children of Hamel.’ The people of Hamel did not doubt it; and since that day they regard it as certain that the Transylvanians of Hungary are their country folk, whose ancestors, as children, were brought there by the ratcatcher. There are more difficult things to believe than that.[16] [16] Ch. Marelles. THE TRUE HISTORY OF LITTLE GOLDEN HOOD You know the tale of poor Little Red Riding-hood, that the Wolf deceived and devoured, with her cake, her little butter can, and her Grandmother; well, the true story happened quite differently, as we know now. And first of all the little girl was called and is still called Little Golden-hood; secondly, it was not she, nor the good grand-dame, but the wicked Wolf who was, in the end, caught and devoured. Only listen. The story begins something like the tale. There was once a little peasant girl, pretty and nice as a star in its season. Her real name was Blanchette, but she was more often called Little Golden-hood, on account of a wonderful little cloak with a hood, gold- and fire-coloured, which she always had on. This little hood was given her by her Grandmother, who was so old that she did not know her age; it ought to bring her good luck, for it was made of a ray of sunshine, she said. And as the good old woman was considered something of a witch, everyone thought the little hood rather bewitched too. And so it was, as you will see. One day the mother said to the child: ‘Let us see, my little Golden-hood, if you know now how to find your way by yourself. You shall take this good piece of cake to your Grandmother for a Sunday treat to-morrow. You will ask her how she is, and come back at once, without stopping to chatter on the way with people you don’t know. Do you quite understand?’ ‘I quite understand,’ replied Blanchette gaily. And off she went with the cake, quite proud of her errand. But the Grandmother lived in another village, and there was a big wood to cross before getting there. At a turn of the road under the trees, suddenly ‘Who goes there?’ ‘Friend Wolf.’ He had seen the child start alone, and the villain was waiting to devour her; when at the same moment he perceived some wood-cutters who might observe him, and he changed his mind. Instead of falling upon Blanchette he came frisking up to her like a good dog. ‘’Tis you! my nice Little Golden-hood,’ said he. So the little girl stops to talk with the Wolf, who, for all that, she did not know in the least. ‘You know me, then!’ said she; ‘what is your name?’ ‘My name is friend Wolf. And where are you going thus, my pretty one, with your little basket on your arm?’ ‘I am going to my Grandmother, to take her a good piece of cake for her Sunday treat to-morrow.’ ‘And where does she live, your Grandmother?’ ‘She lives at the other side of the wood, in the first house in the village, near the windmill, you know.’ ‘Ah! yes! I know now,’ said the Wolf. ‘Well, that’s just where I’m going; I shall get there before you, no doubt, with your little bits of legs, and I’ll tell her you’re coming to see her; then she’ll wait for you.’ Thereupon the Wolf cuts across the wood, and in five minutes arrives at the Grandmother’s house. He knocks at the door: toc, toc. No answer. He knocks louder. Nobody. Then he stands up on end, puts his two fore-paws on the latch and the door opens. Not a soul in the house. The old woman had risen early to sell herbs in the town, and she had gone off in such haste that she had left her bed unmade, with her great night-cap on the pillow. ‘Good!’ said the Wolf to himself, ‘I know what I’ll do.’ He shuts the door, pulls on the Grandmother’s night-cap down to his eyes, then he lies down all his length in the bed and draws the curtains. In the meantime the good Blanchette went quietly on her way, as little girls do, amusing herself here and there by picking Easter daisies, watching the little birds making their nests, and running after the butterflies which fluttered in the sunshine. At last she arrives at the door. Knock, knock. ‘Who is there?’ says the Wolf, softening his rough voice as best he can. ‘It’s me, Granny, your little Golden-hood. I’m bringing you a big piece of cake for your Sunday treat to-morrow.’ ‘Press your finger on the latch, then push and the door opens.’ ‘Why, you’ve got a cold, Granny,’ said she, coming in. ‘Ahem! a little, a little...’ replies the Wolf, pretending to cough. ‘Shut the door well, my little lamb. Put your basket on the table, and then take off your frock and come and lie down by me: you shall rest a little.’ The good child undresses, but observe this! She kept her little hood upon her head. When she saw what a figure her Granny cut in bed, the poor little thing was much surprised. ‘Oh!’ cries she, ‘how like you are to friend Wolf, Grandmother!’ ‘That’s on account of my night-cap, child,’ replies the Wolf. ‘Oh! what hairy arms you’ve got, Grandmother!’ ‘All the better to hug you, my child.’ ‘Oh! what a big tongue you’ve got, Grandmother!’ ‘All the better for answering, child.’ ‘Oh! what a mouthful of great white teeth you have, Grandmother!’ ‘That’s for crunching little children with!’ And the Wolf opened his jaws wide to swallow Blanchette. But she put down her head crying: ‘Mamma! Mamma!’ and the Wolf only caught her little hood. Thereupon, oh dear! oh dear! he draws back, crying and shaking his jaw as if he had swallowed red-hot coals. It was the little fire-coloured hood that had burnt his tongue right down his throat. The little hood, you see, was one of those magic caps that they used to have in former times, in the stories, for making oneself invisible or invulnerable. So there was the Wolf with his throat burnt, jumping off the bed and trying to find the door, howling and howling as if all the dogs in the country were at his heels. Just at this moment the Grandmother arrives, returning from the town with her long sack empty on her shoulder. ‘Ah, brigand!’ she cries, ‘wait a bit!’ Quickly she opens her sack wide across the door, and the maddened Wolf springs in head downwards. It is he now that is caught, swallowed like a letter in the post. For the brave old dame shuts her sack, so; and she runs and empties it in the well, where the vagabond, still howling, tumbles in and is drowned. ‘Ah, scoundrel! you thought you would crunch my little grandchild! Well, to-morrow we will make her a muff of your skin, and you yourself shall be crunched, for we will give your carcass to the dogs.’ Thereupon the Grandmother hastened to dress poor Blanchette, who was still trembling with fear in the bed. ‘Well,’ she said to her, ‘without my little hood where would you be now, darling?’ And, to restore heart and legs to the child, she made her eat a good piece of her cake, and drink a good draught of wine, after which she took her by the hand and led her back to the house. And then, who was it who scolded her when she knew all that had happened? It was the mother. But Blanchette promised over and over again that she would never more stop to listen to a Wolf, so that at last the mother forgave her. And Blanchette, the Little Golden-hood, kept her word. And in fine weather she may still be seen in the fields with her pretty little hood, the colour of the sun. But to see her you must rise early.[17] [17] Ch. Marelles.
Moral of the Story
Betrayal and greed, especially when dealing with those who hold power, will inevitably lead to severe and unexpected retribution.
Characters
The Ratcatcher ★ protagonist
Implied to be unremarkable until angered, then eyes flash fire
Attire: Implied to wear traveling clothes, perhaps with a distinctive hat
Proud, easily angered, skilled
Town Counsellor ⚔ antagonist
Not described, but implied to be well-fed and self-important
Attire: Formal town council attire, reflecting his position
Treacherous, greedy, manipulative
Blanchet ○ minor
Large, white with age
Loyal, dutiful
The Children ◆ supporting
Not described
Attire: Sunday best clothing
Innocent, easily led
Locations

Town Hall of Hamel
A place where the town council assembles, with a large square outside
Mood: tense, then treacherous
The ratcatcher makes a deal with the council and is later betrayed.

Streets of Hamel
Narrow alleys and main streets filled with houses, leading to the town hall and the river
Mood: eerie, surreal
The rats are lured from their hiding places and follow the piper.

River at the Foot of the Walls of Hamel
A deep river with a strong current and a whirlpool
Mood: ominous, watery
The rats are drowned in the whirlpool.
Story DNA
Moral
Betrayal and greed, especially when dealing with those who hold power, will inevitably lead to severe and unexpected retribution.
Plot Summary
The rat-infested town of Hamel hires a mysterious ratcatcher who promises to rid them of their plague for a high price. The Town Counsellor, intending to cheat him, agrees. The ratcatcher successfully lures all the rats into the river, but when he demands payment, the townspeople refuse and mock him. Enraged, the ratcatcher returns on Sunday and, with his magical pipes, lures all the town's children into a mountain, which closes behind them, never to be seen again, leaving the town in profound sorrow and regret for their greed.
Themes
Emotional Arc
initial relief to profound sorrow and regret
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This story is a retelling of the legend of the Pied Piper of Hamelin, a German folk tale dating back to the Middle Ages, often interpreted as an allegory for various historical events, including child crusades, plagues, or emigration.
Plot Beats (15)
- Hamel is overrun by rats, and the town council is desperate.
- A stranger, the ratcatcher, offers to remove all rats for a 'gros' per head.
- The Town Counsellor, believing he can outsmart the ratcatcher, agrees to the exorbitant price, intending to renege.
- The ratcatcher plays his pipes, luring all the rats out of the town and into the river, where they drown.
- The ratcatcher returns for payment, stating the exact number of rats (990,999).
- The Town Counsellor refuses full payment, offering only a small recompense and mocking the ratcatcher.
- The ratcatcher, enraged, vows to be paid by their heirs and leaves Hamel.
- The townspeople, including the Town Counsellor, laugh at the ratcatcher's threat.
- The next day, Sunday, while the adults are at church, the ratcatcher returns and plays his pipes again.
- All the children of Hamel are drawn by the music and follow the ratcatcher to a mountain.
- The mountain opens, and the ratcatcher leads the children inside, after which it closes, trapping them.
- Three children, due to various physical impediments, are left behind and recount the event to the horrified parents.
- The parents desperately search the mountain but cannot find the opening or their children.
- The Town Counsellor is particularly devastated, having lost five children, and is reproached by the townspeople.
- Years later, merchants from Bremen suggest that German-speaking people in Transylvania are the descendants of Hamel's lost children.





