The Envious Neighbour

by Andrew Lang · from The Violet Fairy Book

fairy tale moral tale hopeful Ages 8-14 1711 words 8 min read
Cover: The Envious Neighbour
Original Story 1711 words · 8 min read

THE ENVIOUS NEIGHBOUR

Long, long ago an old couple lived in a village, and, as they had no

children to love and care for, they gave all their affection to a little

dog. He was a pretty little creature, and instead of growing spoilt and

disagreeable at not getting everything he wanted, as even children will

do sometimes, the dog was grateful to them for their kindness, and never

left their side, whether they were in the house or out of it.

One day the old man was working in his garden, with his dog, as usual,

close by. The morning was hot, and at last he put down his spade and

wiped his wet forehead, noticing, as he did so, that the animal was

snuffling and scratching at a spot a little way off. There was nothing

very strange in this, as all dogs are fond of scratching, and he went

on quietly with his digging, when the dog ran up to his master, barking

loudly, and back again to the place where he had been scratching.

This he did several times, till the old man wondered what could be the

matter, and, picking up the spade, followed where the dog led him.

The dog was so delighted at his success that he jumped round, barking

loudly, till the noise brought the old woman out of the house.

Curious to know if the dog had really found anything, the husband began

to dig, and very soon the spade struck against something. He stooped

down and pulled out a large box, filled quite full with shining gold

pieces. The box was so heavy that the old woman had to help to carry it

home, and you may guess what a supper the dog had that night! Now that

he had made them rich, they gave him every day all that a dog likes best

to eat, and the cushions on which he lay were fit for a prince.

The story of the dog and his treasure soon became known, and a neighbour

whose garden was next the old people’s grew so envious of their good

luck that he could neither eat nor sleep. As the dog had discovered a

treasure once, this foolish man thought he must be able to discover one

always, and begged the old couple to lend him their pet for a little

while, so that he might be made rich also.

‘How can you ask such a thing?’ answered the old man indignantly.

‘You know how much we love him, and that he is never out of our sight

for five minutes.’

But the envious neighbour would not heed his words, and came daily with

the same request, till at last the old people, who could not bear to

say no to anyone, promised to lend the dog, just for a night or two.

No sooner did the man get hold of the dog than he turned him into the

garden, but the dog did nothing but race about, and the man was forced

to wait with what patience he could.

The next morning the man opened the house door, and the dog bounded

joyfully into the garden, and, running up to the foot of a tree, began

to scratch wildly. The man called loudly to his wife to bring a spade,

and followed the dog, as he longed to catch the first glimpse of the

expected treasure. But when he had dug up the ground, what did he find?

Why, nothing but a parcel of old bones, which smelt so badly that he

could not stay there a moment longer. And his heart was filled with rage

against the dog who had played him this trick, and he seized a pickaxe

and killed it on the spot, before he knew what he was doing. When he

remembered that he would have to go with his story to the old man and

his wife he was rather frightened, but there was nothing to be gained

by putting it off, so he pulled a very long face and went to his

neighbour’s garden.

‘Your dog,’ said he, pretending to weep, ‘has suddenly fallen down dead,

though I took every care of him, and gave him everything he could wish

for. And I thought I had better come straight and tell you.’

Weeping bitterly, the old man went to fetch the body of his favourite,

and brought it home and buried it under the fig-tree where he had found

the treasure. From morning till night he and his wife mourned over their

loss, and nothing could comfort them.

At length, one night when he was asleep, he dreamt that the dog appeared

to him and told him to cut down the fig-tree over his grave, and out of

its wood to make a mortar. But when the old man woke and thought of his

dream he did not feel at all inclined to cut down the tree, which bore

well every year, and consulted his wife about it. The woman did not

hesitate a moment, and said that after what had happened before, the

dog’s advice must certainly be obeyed, so the tree was felled, and a

beautiful mortar made from it. And when the season came for the rice

crop to be gathered the mortar was taken down from its shelf, and the

grains placed in it for pounding, when, lo and behold! in a twinkling of

an eye, they all turned into gold pieces. At the sight of all this gold

the hearts of the old people were glad, and once more they blessed their

faithful dog.

But it was not long before this story also came to the ears of their

envious neighbour, and he lost no time in going to the old people and

asking if they happened to have a mortar which they could lend him. The

old man did not at all like parting with his precious treasure, but he

never could say no, so the neighbour went off with the mortar under his

arm.

The moment he got into his own house he took a great handful of rice,

and began to shell off the husks, with the help of his wife. But,

instead of the gold pieces for which they looked, the rice turned into

berries with such a horrible smell that they were obliged to run away,

after smashing the mortar in a rage and setting fire to the bits.

The old people next door were naturally very much put out when they

learned the fate of their mortar, and were not at all comforted by the

explanations and excuses made by their neighbour. But that night the dog

again appeared in a dream to his master, and told him that he must go

and collect the ashes of the burnt mortar and bring them home. Then,

when he heard that the Daimio, or great lord to whom this part of the

country belonged, was expected at the capital, he was to carry the ashes

to the high road, through which the procession would have to pass. And

as soon as it was in sight he was to climb up all the cherry-trees and

sprinkle the ashes on them, and they would soon blossom as they had

never blossomed before.

This time the old man did not wait to consult his wife as to whether he

was to do what his dog had told him, but directly he got up he went to

his neighbour’s house and collected the ashes of the burnt mortar. He

put them carefully in a china vase, and carried it to the high road,

Sitting down on a seat till the Daimio should pass. The cherry-trees

were bare, for it was the season when small pots of them were sold to

rich people, who kept them in hot places, so that they might blossom

early and decorate their rooms. As to the trees in the open air, no one

would ever think of looking for the tiniest bud for more than a month

yet. The old man had not been waiting very long before he saw a cloud of

dust in the far distance, and knew that it must be the procession of the

Daimio. On they came, every man dressed in his finest clothes, and the

crowd that was lining the road bowed their faces to the ground as they

went by. Only the old man did not bow himself, and the great lord saw

this, and bade one of his courtiers, in anger, go and inquire why he had

disobeyed the ancient customs. But before the messenger could reach him

the old man had climbed the nearest tree and scattered his ashes far and

wide, and in an instant the white flowers had flashed into life, and the

heart of the Daimio rejoiced, and he gave rich presents to the old man,

whom he sent for to his castle.

We may be sure that in a very little while the envious neighbour had

heard this also, and his bosom was filled with hate. He hastened to the

place where he had burned the mortar, collected a few of the ashes which

the old man had left behind, and took them to the road, hoping that

his luck might be as good as the old man’s, or perhaps even better.

His heart beat with pleasure when he caught the first glimpses of the

Daimio’s train, and he held himself ready for the right moment. As the

Daimio drew near he flung a great handful of ashes over the trees, but

no buds or flowers followed the action: instead, the ashes were all

blown back into the eyes of the Daimio and his warriors, till they cried

out from pain. Then the prince ordered the evil-doer to be seized and

bound and thrown into prison, where he was kept for many months. By the

time he was set free everybody in his native village had found out his

wickedness, and they would not let him live there any longer; and as he

would not leave off his evil ways he soon went from bad to worse, and

came to a miserable end.

(Japanische Marchen.)


Story DNA

Moral

Envy and greed lead to destruction and misery, while kindness and gratitude bring blessings.

Plot Summary

A kind old couple's loyal dog discovers a treasure, making them rich. An envious neighbor borrows the dog, kills it in a rage when it only finds bones, and lies about its death. The dog's spirit guides the old man to create a magical mortar that turns rice into gold. The neighbor's attempt to use the mortar backfires, leading to its destruction. Finally, the dog's spirit instructs the old man to scatter the mortar's ashes, causing cherry trees to blossom for a passing lord, who rewards the old man. The envious neighbor's attempt to replicate this magic results in his imprisonment and eventual miserable end, while the kind couple lives happily ever after.

Themes

gratitude vs. envykarma and justicethe power of kindnessthe destructive nature of greed

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three (dog's magical gifts), direct address to reader ("you may guess")

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: dog finding treasure, dog communicating through dreams, mortar turning rice into gold, ashes causing cherry trees to blossom instantly
the dog (loyalty, gratitude, good fortune)the fig tree/mortar (transformation, blessings)the cherry blossoms (beauty, divine favor)the ashes (destruction, but also potential for rebirth/magic)

Cultural Context

Origin: Japanese
Era: timeless fairy tale

This story is a variant of a common Japanese folktale, 'The Dog and the Demon' or 'The Old Man Who Made Withered Trees Blossom,' often featuring a magical dog and a greedy neighbor, highlighting traditional Japanese values of kindness, humility, and respect for nature.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. An old, childless couple loves their loyal dog.
  2. The dog unearths a treasure chest of gold, making the couple rich.
  3. An envious neighbor, hearing of their fortune, begs to borrow the dog.
  4. The neighbor takes the dog, but it only finds old bones, enraging him.
  5. The neighbor kills the dog with a pickaxe and lies to the old couple about its death.
  6. The old couple mourns their dog and buries it under a fig tree.
  7. The dog appears in a dream, instructing the old man to make a mortar from the fig tree.
  8. The mortar magically turns rice into gold pieces when used.
  9. The envious neighbor borrows the magical mortar, but it turns rice into foul-smelling berries, and he smashes it in a rage.
  10. The dog appears in a second dream, instructing the old man to collect the mortar's ashes.
  11. The old man scatters the ashes on bare cherry trees as the Daimio's procession passes, causing them to blossom instantly.
  12. The Daimio is delighted and richly rewards the old man.
  13. The envious neighbor attempts to replicate the feat with leftover ashes, but they blind the Daimio and his guards.
  14. The neighbor is imprisoned, then banished from the village, and eventually dies miserably.
  15. The kind old couple lives happily ever after, blessed by their dog's magic.

Characters

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Old Man

human elderly male

Old, works in a garden

Attire: Simple peasant clothing, perhaps a straw hat for sun (inferred)

Carrying a china vase filled with ashes

Kind, gentle, obedient, easily persuaded

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Old Woman

human elderly female

Old, helps her husband

Attire: Simple peasant dress, apron (inferred)

Helping to carry the heavy box of gold

Supportive, practical, decisive

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Dog

animal adult unknown

Pretty, small

Sniffing and scratching at the base of a tree

Grateful, loyal, helpful

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Envious Neighbour

human adult male

Not specified, but likely similar to the old man in build

Attire: Villager's clothing, perhaps slightly shabbier than the old man's (inferred)

Eyes wide with greed, clutching ashes

Envious, greedy, foolish, wicked

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Daimio

human adult male

Dressed in finery

Attire: Richly decorated robes, ceremonial attire

Being showered with ashes, then marveling at the blossoming trees

Powerful, observant, appreciative of beauty

Locations

Old Couple's Garden

outdoor morning hot

A garden where the old man works, with a spot where the dog snuffles and scratches. Fig tree grows here.

Mood: peaceful, lucky

The dog discovers a box filled with gold pieces.

spade dog spot for digging fig tree

Envious Neighbor's Garden

outdoor morning

A garden next to the old couple's, where the neighbor attempts to find treasure.

Mood: frustrated, angry

The neighbor digs up old bones and kills the dog in anger.

tree parcel of old bones pickaxe

High Road with Cherry Trees

outdoor pre-spring

A road lined with bare cherry trees, awaiting the Daimio's procession.

Mood: anticipatory, magical

The old man makes the cherry trees blossom, and the envious neighbor fails.

cherry trees china vase with ashes procession of the Daimio