The Lute Player

by Andrew Lang · from The Violet Fairy Book

fairy tale transformation hopeful Ages 8-14 1467 words 7 min read
Cover: The Lute Player
Original Story 1467 words · 7 min read

THE LUTE PLAYER

Once upon a time there was a king and queen who lived happily and

comfortably together. They were very fond of each other and had nothing

to worry them, but at last the king grew restless. He longed to go out

into the world, to try his strength in battle against some enemy and to

win all kinds of honour and glory.

So he called his army together and gave orders to start for a distant

country where a heathen king ruled who ill-treated or tormented everyone

he could lay his hands on. The king then gave his parting orders and

wise advice to his ministers, took a tender leave of his wife, and set

off with his army across the seas.

I cannot say whether the voyage was short or long; but at last he

reached the country of the heathen king and marched on, defeating all

who came in his way. But this did not last long, for in time he came

to a mountain pass, where a large army was waiting for him, who put his

soldiers to flight, and took the king himself prisoner.

He was carried off to the prison where the heathen king kept his

captives, and now our poor friend had a very bad time indeed. All night

long the prisoners were chained up, and in the morning they were yoked

together like oxen and had to plough the land till it grew dark.

This state of things went on for three years before the king found

any means of sending news of himself to his dear queen, but at last he

contrived to send this letter: ‘Sell all our castles and palaces,

and put all our treasures in pawn and come and deliver me out of this

horrible prison.’

The queen received the letter, read it, and wept bitterly as she said to

herself, ‘How can I deliver my dearest husband? If I go myself and the

heathen king sees me he will just take me to be one of his wives. If I

were to send one of the ministers!--but I hardly know if I can depend on

them.’

She thought, and thought, and at last an idea came into her head.

She cut off all her beautiful long brown hair and dressed herself in

boy’s clothes. Then she took her lute and, without saying anything to

anyone, she went forth into the wide world.

She travelled through many lands and saw many cities, and went through

many hardships before she got to the town where the heathen king lived.

When she got there she walked all round the palace and at the back

she saw the prison. Then she went into the great court in front of

the palace, and taking her lute in her hand, she began to play so

beautifully that one felt as though one could never hear enough.

After she had played for some time she began to sing, and her voice was

sweeter than the lark’s:

 ‘I come from my own country far

       Into this foreign land,

  Of all I own I take alone

       My sweet lute in my hand.



 ‘Oh!  who will thank me for my song,

       Reward my simple lay?

   Like lover’s sighs it still shall rise

       To greet thee day by day.



 ‘I sing of blooming flowers

       Made sweet by sun and rain;

  Of all the bliss of love’s first kiss,

       And parting’s cruel pain.



 ‘Of the sad captive’s longing

       Within his prison wall,

  Of hearts that sigh when none are nigh

       To answer to their call.



 ‘My song begs for your pity,

       And gifts from out your store,

  And as I play my gentle lay

      I linger near your door.



 ‘And if you hear my singing

      Within your palace, sire,

 Oh! give, I pray, this happy day,

      To me my heart’s desire.’

No sooner had the heathen king heard this touching song sung by such a

lovely voice, than he had the singer brought before him.

‘Welcome, O lute player,’ said he. ‘Where do you come from?’

‘My country, sire, is far away across many seas. For years I have been

wandering about the world and gaining my living by my music.’

‘Stay here then a few days, and when you wish to leave I will give you

what you ask for in your song--your heart’s desire.’

So the lute player stayed on in the palace and sang and played almost

all day long to the king, who could never tire of listening and almost

forgot to eat or drink or to torment people.

He cared for nothing but the music, and nodded his head as he declared,

‘That’s something like playing and singing. It makes me feel as if some

gentle hand had lifted every care and sorrow from me.’

After three days the lute player came to take leave of the king.

‘Well,’ said the king, ‘what do you desire as your reward?’

‘Sire, give me one of your prisoners. You have so many in your prison,

and I should be glad of a companion on my journeys. When I hear his

happy voice as I travel along I shall think of you and thank you.’

‘Come along then,’ said the king, ‘choose whom you will.’ And he took

the lute player through the prison himself.

The queen walked about amongst the prisoners, and at length she picked

out her husband and took him with her on her journey. They were long on

their way, but he never found out who she was, and she led him nearer

and nearer to his own country.

When they reached the frontier the prisoner said:

‘Let me go now, kind lad; I am no common prisoner, but the king of this

country. Let me go free and ask what you will as your reward.’

‘Do not speak of reward,’ answered the lute player. ‘Go in peace.’

‘Then come with me, dear boy, and be my guest.’

‘When the proper time comes I shall be at your palace,’ was the reply,

and so they parted.

The queen took a short way home, got there before the king and changed

her dress.

An hour later all the people in the palace were running to and fro and

crying out: ‘Our king has come back! Our king has returned to us.’

The king greeted every one very kindly, but he would not so much as look

at the queen.

Then he called all his council and ministers together and said to them:

‘See what sort of a wife I have. Here she is falling on my neck, but

when I was pining in prison and sent her word of it she did nothing to

help me.’

And his council answered with one voice, ‘Sire, when news was brought

from you the queen disappeared and no one knew where she went. She only

returned to-day.’

Then the king was very angry and cried, ‘Judge my faithless wife!

Never would you have seen your king again, if a young lute player had

not delivered him. I shall remember him with love and gratitude as long

as I live.’

Whilst the king was sitting with his council, the queen found time to

disguise herself. She took her lute, and slipping into the court in

front of the palace she sang, clear and sweet:

 ‘I sing the captive’s longing

       Within his prison wall,

  Of hearts that sigh when none are nigh

       To answer to their call.



 ‘My song begs for your pity,

       And gifts from out your store,

  And as I play my gentle lay

       I linger near your door.



 ‘And if you hear my singing

       Within your palace, sire,

  Oh!  give, I pray, this happy day,

       To me my heart’s desire.’

As soon as the king heard this song he ran out to meet the lute player,

took him by the hand and led him into the palace.

‘Here,’ he cried, ‘is the boy who released me from my prison. And now,

my true friend, I will indeed give you your heart’s desire.’

‘I am sure you will not be less generous than the heathen king was,

sire. I ask of you what I asked and obtained from him. But this time I

don’t mean to give up what I get. I want YOU--yourself!’

And as she spoke she threw off her long cloak and everyone saw it was

the queen.

Who can tell how happy the king was? In the joy of his heart he gave a

great feast to the whole world, and the whole world came and rejoiced

with him for a whole week.

I was there too, and ate and drank many good things. I sha’n’t forget

that feast as long as I live.

(From the Russian.)


Story DNA

Moral

True love and devotion can overcome great obstacles, and appearances can be deceiving.

Plot Summary

A king, seeking glory, is captured and enslaved by a heathen king. His devoted queen, upon receiving his plea for help, disguises herself as a male lute player and travels to the enemy kingdom. She charms the heathen king with her music, requests a prisoner as her reward, and cleverly chooses her husband, leading him home without revealing her identity. Upon his return, the king publicly condemns his wife for her perceived inaction, but the queen, still in disguise, sings her song, revealing her true identity and the full extent of her courageous rescue, leading to a joyous reconciliation and celebration.

Themes

love and devotioncourage and resourcefulnessmisjudgment and redemptionthe power of art

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three, direct address to reader (at the end), song lyrics embedded in narrative

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person (king vs heathen king, queen vs circumstances, king vs queen's perceived inaction)
Ending: happy
Magic: the almost magical effect of the lute player's music on the heathen king
the lute (representing art, disguise, and the queen's agency)the boy's clothes (representing transformation and freedom)the song (representing communication, emotion, and a plea)

Cultural Context

Origin: Russian
Era: timeless fairy tale

The story reflects common fairy tale tropes of royal courts, distant wars, and the resourcefulness of women in disguise, prevalent across many European folk traditions.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. A king, restless despite happiness, decides to go to war in a distant land.
  2. The king is defeated in battle and captured by a heathen king, forced into hard labor.
  3. After three years, the king sends a letter to his queen, asking her to sell everything to ransom him.
  4. The queen, determined to rescue her husband, cuts her hair, dresses as a boy, takes her lute, and sets out alone.
  5. She travels to the heathen king's city, finds the prison, and then plays and sings in front of the palace.
  6. The heathen king is captivated by her music and invites her into the palace, promising her heart's desire as a reward.
  7. After three days of playing, the lute player asks for one prisoner as her reward.
  8. The heathen king agrees, and the lute player chooses her husband from the prison.
  9. The queen leads her husband home, maintaining her disguise, and they part ways at the border.
  10. The queen takes a shortcut, arrives home before the king, and changes back into her royal attire.
  11. The king returns, but instead of greeting the queen, he publicly condemns her for not helping him.
  12. The queen, disguised once more as the lute player, sings her song outside the palace.
  13. The king recognizes the song, brings the lute player inside, and offers a reward.
  14. The lute player reveals herself as the queen, proving her loyalty and resourcefulness.
  15. The king is overjoyed, and a grand feast is held to celebrate their reunion.

Characters

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The King

human adult male

Strong, capable of leading an army

Attire: Royal attire, armor for battle, fine clothing

Wearing his crown askew after imprisonment

Courageous, somewhat restless, grateful

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The Queen

human adult female

Beautiful, resourceful, disguised as a young boy

Attire: Boy's clothes, lute player's attire, royal gown

Chopped-off brown hair tucked under a cap, holding a lute

Intelligent, loyal, brave

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The Heathen King

human adult male

Powerful, cruel, easily swayed by music

Attire: Rich, barbaric clothing, possibly with jewels and furs

Sitting on his throne, captivated by the lute player

Cruel, easily charmed, somewhat naive

Locations

Heathen King's Prison

indoor night

A dark prison where captives are chained at night and yoked to plough the land during the day.

Mood: desolate

The king is held captive and forced to work as a prisoner.

chains yokes ploughed fields prison walls

Palace Courtyard

outdoor

The great court in front of the heathen king's palace, where the queen plays her lute.

Mood: hopeful

The queen uses her music to gain access to the king and his prison.

lute palace facade singing queen prison at the back

King's Palace

indoor

The king's palace where he holds court and listens to the lute player.

Mood: opulent

The king is confronted by his wife disguised as the lute player.

throne council king lute player