The Story of Halfman

by Andrew Lang · from The Violet Fairy Book

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THE STORY OF HALFMAN

In a certain town there lived a judge who was married but had no

children. One day he was standing lost in thought before his house, when

an old man passed by.

‘What is the matter, sir, said he, ‘you look troubled?’

‘Oh, leave me alone, my good man!’

‘But what is it?’ persisted the other.

‘Well, I am successful in my profession and a person of importance, but

I care nothing for it all, as I have no children.’

Then the old man said, ‘Here are twelve apples. If your wife eats them,

she will have twelve sons.’

The judge thanked him joyfully as he took the apples, and went to seek

his wife. ‘Eat these apples at once,’ he cried, ‘and you will have

twelve sons.’

So she sat down and ate eleven of them, but just as she was in the

middle of the twelfth her sister came in, and she gave her the half that

was left.

The eleven sons came into the world, strong and handsome boys; but when

the twelfth was born, there was only half of him.

By-and-by they all grew into men, and one day they told their father it

was high time he found wives for them. ‘I have a brother,’ he answered,

‘who lives away in the East, and he has twelve daughters; go and marry

them.’ So the twelve sons saddled their horses and rode for twelve days,

till they met an old woman.

‘Good greeting to you, young men!’ said she, ‘we have waited long for

you, your uncle and I. The girls have become women, and are sought, in

marriage by many, but I knew you would come one day, and I have kept

them for you. Follow me into my house.’

And the twelve brothers followed her gladly, and their father’s brother

stood at the door, and gave them meat and drink. But at night, when

every one was asleep, Halfman crept softly to his brothers, and said to

them, ‘Listen, all of you! This man is no uncle of ours, but an ogre.’

‘Nonsense; of course he is our uncle,’ answered they.

‘Well, this very night you will see!’ said Halfman. And he did not go to

bed, but hid himself and watched.

Now in a little while he saw the wife of the ogre steal into the room

on tiptoe and spread a red cloth over the brothers and then go and cover

her daughters with a white cloth. After that she lay down and was soon

snoring loudly. When Halfman was quite sure she was sound asleep, he

took the red cloth from his brothers and put it on the girls, and laid

their white cloth over his brothers. Next he drew their scarlet caps

from their heads and exchanged them for the veils which the ogre’s

daughters were wearing. This was hardly done when he heard steps coming

along the floor, so he hid himself quickly in the folds of a curtain.

There was only half of him!

The ogress came slowly and gently along, stretching out her hands before

her, so that she might not fall against anything unawares, for she had

only a tiny lantern slung at her waist, which did not give much light.

And when she reached the place where the sisters were lying, she stooped

down and held a corner of the cloth up to the lantern. Yes! it certainly

was red! Still, to make sure that there was no mistake, she passed her

hands lightly over their heads, and felt the caps that covered them.

Then she was quite certain the brothers lay sleeping before her, and

began to kill them one by one. And Halfman whispered to his brothers,

‘Get up and run for your lives, as the ogress is killing her daughters.’

The brothers needed no second bidding, and in a moment were out of the

house.

By this time the ogress had slain all her daughters but one, who awoke

suddenly and saw what had happened. ‘Mother, what are you doing?’ cried

she. ‘Do you know that you have killed my sisters?’

‘Oh, woe is me!’ wailed the ogress. ‘Halfman has outwitted me after

all!’ And she turned to wreak vengeance on him, but he and his brothers

were far away.

They rode all day till they got to the town where their real uncle

lived, and inquired the way to his house.

‘Why have you been so long in coming?’ asked he, when they had found

him.

‘Oh, dear uncle, we were very nearly not coming at all!’ replied they.

‘We fell in with an ogress who took us home and would have killed us if

it had not been for Halfman. He knew what was in her mind and saved us,

and here we are. Now give us each a daughter to wife, and let us return

whence we came.’

‘Take them!’ said the uncle; ‘the eldest for the eldest, the second for

the second, and so on to the youngest.’

But the wife of Halfman was the prettiest of them all, and the other

brothers were jealous and said to each other: ‘What, is he who is only

half a man to get the best? Let us put him to death and give his wife to

our eldest brother!’ And they waited for a chance.

After they had all ridden, in company with their brides, for some

distance, they arrived at a brook, and one of them asked, ‘Now, who will

go and fetch water from the brook?’

‘Halfman is the youngest,’ said the elder brother, ‘he must go.’

So Halfman got down and filled a skin with water, and they drew it up by

a rope and drank. When they had done drinking, Halfman, who was standing

in the middle of the stream, called out: ‘Throw me the rope and draw me

up, for I cannot get out alone.’ And the brothers threw him a rope to

draw him up the steep bank; but when he was half-way up they cut the

rope, and he fell back into the stream. Then the brothers rode away as

fast as they could, with his bride.

Halfman sank down under the water from the force of the fall, but

before he touched the bottom a fish came and said to him, ‘Fear nothing,

Halfman; I will help you.’ And the fish guided him to a shallow place,

so that he scrambled out. On the way it said to him, ‘Do you understand

what your brothers, whom you saved from death, have done to you?’

‘Yes; but what am I to do?’ asked Halfman.

‘Take one of my scales,’ said the fish, ‘and when you find yourself in

danger, throw it in the fire. Then I will appear before you.’

‘Thank you,’ said Halfman, and went his way, while the fish swam back to

its home.

The country was strange to Halfman, and he wandered about without

knowing where he was going, till he suddenly found the ogress standing

before him. ‘Ah, Halfman, have I got you at last? You killed my

daughters and helped your brothers to escape. What do you think I shall

do with you?’

‘Whatever you like!’ said Halfman.

‘Come into my house, then,’ said the ogress, and he followed her.

‘Look here!’ she called to her husband, ‘I have got hold of Halfman. I

am going to roast him, so be quick and make up the fire!’

So the ogre brought wood, and heaped it up till the flames roared up the

chimney. Then he turned to his wife and said: ‘It is all ready, let us

put him on!’

‘What is the hurry, my good ogre?’ asked Halfman. ‘You have me in your

power, and I cannot escape. I am so thin now, I shall hardly make one

mouthful. Better fatten me up; you will enjoy me much more.’

‘That is a very sensible remark,’ replied the ogre; ‘but what fattens

you quickest?’

‘Butter, meat, and red wine,’ answered Halfman.

‘Very good; we will lock you into this room, and here you shall stay

till you are ready for eating.’

So Halfman was locked into the room, and the ogre and his wife brought

him his food. At the end of three months he said to his gaolers: ‘Now I

have got quite fat; take me out, and kill me.’

‘Get out, then!’ said the ogre.

‘But,’ went on Halfman, ‘you and your wife had better go to invite your

friends to the feast, and your daughter can stay in the house and look

after me!’

‘Yes, that is a good idea,’ answered they.

‘You had better bring the wood in here,’ continued Halfman, ‘and I will

split it up small, so that there may be no delay in cooking me.’

So the ogress gave Halfman a pile of wood and an axe, and then set out

with her husband, leaving Halfman and her daughter busy in the house.

After he had chopped for a little while he called to the girl, ‘Come and

help me, or else I shan’t have it all ready when your mother gets back.’

‘All right,’ said she, and held a billet of wood for him to chop.

But he raised his axe and cut off her head, and ran away like the wind.

By-and-by the ogre and his wife returned and found their daughter

lying without her head, and they began to cry and sob, saying, ‘This is

Halfman’s work, why did we listen to him?’ But Halfman was far away.

When he escaped from the house he ran on straight before him for some

time, looking for a safe shelter, as he knew that the ogre’s legs were

much longer than his, and that it was his only chance. At last he saw

an iron tower which he climbed up. Soon the ogre appeared, looking right

and left lest his prey should be sheltering behind a rock or tree, but

he did not know Halfman was so near till he heard his voice calling,

‘Come up! come up! you will find me here!’

‘But how can I come up?’ said the ogre, ‘I see no door, and I could not

possibly climb that tower.’

‘Oh, there is no door,’ replied Halfman.

‘Then how did you climb up?’

‘A fish carried me on his back.’

‘And what am I to do?’

‘You must go and fetch all your relations, and tell them to bring plenty

of sticks; then you must light a fire, and let it burn till the tower

becomes red hot. After that you can easily throw it down.’

‘Very good,’ said the ogre, and he went round to every relation he had,

and told them to collect wood and bring it to the tower where Halfman

was. The men did as they were ordered, and soon the tower was glowing

like coral, but when they flung themselves against it to overthrow it,

they caught themselves on fire and were burnt to death. And overhead sat

Halfman, laughing heartily. But the ogre’s wife was still alive, for she

had taken no part in kindling the fire.

‘Oh,’ she shrieked with rage, ‘you have killed my daughters and my

husband, and all the men belonging to me; how can I get at you to avenge

myself?’

‘Oh, that is easy enough,’ said Halfman. ‘I will let down a rope, and if

you tie it tightly round you, I will draw it up.’

‘All right,’ returned the ogress, fastening the rope which Halfman let

down. ‘Now pull me up.’

‘Are you sure it is secure?’

‘Yes, quite sure.’

‘Don’t be afraid.’

‘Oh, I am not afraid at all!’

So Halfman slowly drew her up, and when she was near the top he let go

the rope, and she fell down and broke her neck. Then Halfman heaved a

great sigh and said, ‘That was hard work; the rope has hurt my hands

badly, but now I am rid of her for ever.’

So Halfman came down from the tower, and went on, till he got to a

desert place, and as he was very tired, he lay down to sleep. While

it was still dark, an ogress passed by, and she woke him and said,

‘Halfman, to-morrow your brother is to marry your wife.’

‘Oh, how can I stop it?’ asked he. ‘Will you help me?’

‘Yes, I will,’ replied the ogress.

‘Thank you, thank you!’ cried Halfman, kissing her on the forehead. ‘My

wife is dearer to me than anything else in the world, and it is not my

brother’s fault that I am not dead long ago.’

‘Very well, I will rid you of him,’ said the ogress, ‘but only on one

condition. If a boy is born to you, you must give him to me!’

‘Oh, anything,’ answered Halfman, ‘as long as you deliver me from my

brother, and get me my wife.’

‘Mount on my back, then, and in a quarter of an hour we shall be there.’

The ogress was as good as her word, and in a few minutes they arrived at

the outskirts of the town where Halfman and his brothers lived. Here

she left him, while she went into the town itself, and found the wedding

guests just leaving the brother’s house. Unnoticed by anyone, the ogress

crept into a curtain, changing herself into a scorpion, and when the

brother was going to get into bed, she stung him behind the ear, so that

he fell dead where he stood. Then she returned to Halfman and told him

to go and claim his bride. He jumped up hastily from his seat, and

took the road to his father’s house. As he drew near he heard sounds

of weeping and lamentations, and he said to a man he met: ‘What is the

matter?’

‘The judge’s eldest son was married yesterday, and died suddenly before

night.’

‘Well,’ thought Halfman, ‘my conscience is clear anyway, for it is quite

plain he coveted my wife, and that is why he tried to drown me.’ He

went at once to his father’s room, and found him sitting in tears on

the floor. ‘Dear father,’ said Halfman, ‘are you not glad to see me? You

weep for my brother, but I am your son too, and he stole my bride from

me and tried to drown me in the brook. If he is dead, I at least am

alive.’

‘No, no, he was better than you!’ moaned the father.

‘Why, dear father?’

‘He told me you had behaved very ill,’ said he.

‘Well, call my brothers,’ answered Halfman, ‘as I have a story to tell

them.’ So the father called them all into his presence. Then Halfman

began: ‘After we were twelve days’ journey from home, we met an ogress,

who gave us greeting and said, “Why have you been so long coming? The

daughters of your uncle have waited for you in vain,” and she bade us

follow her to the house, saying, “Now there need be no more delay; you

can marry your cousins as soon as you please, and take them with you to

your own home.” But I warned my brothers that the man was not our uncle,

but an ogre.

‘When we lay down to sleep, she spread a red cloth over us, and covered

her daughters with a white one; but I changed the cloths, and when the

ogress came back in the middle of the night, and looked at the cloths,

she mistook her own daughters for my brothers, and killed them one by

one, all but the youngest. Then I woke my brothers, and we all stole

softly from the house, and we rode like the wind to our real uncle.

‘And when he saw us, he bade us welcome, and married us to his twelve

daughters, the eldest to the eldest, and so on to me, whose bride was

the youngest of all and also the prettiest. And my brothers were filled

with envy, and left me to drown in a brook, but I was saved by a fish

who showed me how to get out. Now, you are a judge! Who did well, and

who did evil--I or my brothers?’

‘Is this story true?’ said the father, turning to his sons.

‘It is true, my father,’ answered they. ‘It is even as Halfman has said,

and the girl belongs to him.’

Then the judge embraced Halfman and said to him: ‘You have done well, my

son. Take your bride, and may you both live long and happily together!’

At the end of the year Halfman’s wife had a son, and not long after she

came one day hastily into the room, and found her husband weeping. ‘What

is the matter?’ she asked.

‘The matter?’ said he.

‘Yes, why are you weeping?’

‘Because,’ replied Halfman, ‘the baby is not really ours, but belongs to

an ogress.’

‘Are you mad?’ cried the wife. ‘What do you mean by talking like that?’

‘I promised,’ said Halfman, ‘when she undertook to kill my brother and

to give you to me, that the first son we had should be hers.’

‘And will she take him from us now?’ said the poor woman.

‘No, not quite yet,’ replied Halfman; ‘when he is bigger.’

‘And is she to have all our children?’ asked she.

‘No, only this one,’ returned Halfman.

Day by day the boy grew bigger, and one day as he was playing in the

street with the other children, the ogress came by. ‘Go to your father,’

she said, ‘and repeat this speech to him: “I want my forfeit; when am I

to have it?”’

‘All right,’ replied the child, but when he went home forgot all about

it. The next day the ogress came again, and asked the boy what answer

the father had given. ‘I forgot all about it,’ said he.

‘Well, put this ring on your finger, and then you won’t forget.’

‘Very well,’ replied the boy, and went home.

The next morning, as he was at breakfast, his mother said to him,

‘Child, where did you get that ring?’

‘A woman gave it to me yesterday, and she told me, father, to tell you

that she wanted her forfeit, and when was she to have it?’

Then his father burst into tears and said, ‘If she comes again you

must say to her that your parents bid her take her forfeit at once, and

depart.’

At this they both began to weep afresh, and his mother kissed him, and

put on his new clothes and said, ‘If the woman bids you to follow her,

you must go,’ but the boy did not heed her grief, he was so pleased

with his new clothes. And when he went out, he said to his play-fellows,

‘Look how smart I am; I am going away with my aunt to foreign lands.’

At that moment the ogress came up and asked him, ‘Did you give my

message to your father and mother?’

‘Yes, dear aunt, I did.’

‘And what did they say?’

‘Take it away at once!’

So she took him.

But when dinner-time came, and the boy did not return, his father and

mother knew that he would never come back, and they sat down and wept

all day. At last Halfman rose up and said to his wife, ‘Be comforted; we

will wait a year, and then I will go to the ogress and see the boy, and

how he is cared for.’

‘Yes, that will be the best,’ said she.

The year passed away, then Halfman saddled his horse, and rode to the

place where the ogress had found him sleeping. She was not there, but

not knowing what to do next, he got off his horse and waited. About

midnight she suddenly stood before him.

‘Halfman, why did you come here?’ said she.

‘I have a question I want to ask you.’

‘Well, ask it; but I know quite well what it is. Your wife wishes you to

ask whether I shall carry off your second son as I did the first.’

‘Yes, that is it,’ replied Halfman. Then he seized her hand and said,

‘Oh, let me see my son, and how he looks, and what he is doing.’

The ogress was silent, but stuck her staff hard in the earth, and the

earth opened, and the boy appeared and said, ‘Dear father, have you come

too?’ And his father clasped him in his arms, and began to cry. But the

boy struggled to be free, saying ‘Dear father, put me down. I have got

a new mother, who is better than the old one; and a new father, who is

better than you.’

Then his father sat him down and said, ‘Go in peace, my boy, but listen

first to me. Tell your father the ogre and your mother the ogress, that

never more shall they have any children of mine.’

‘All right,’ replied the boy, and called ‘Mother!’

‘What is it?’

‘You are never to take away any more of my father and mother’s

children!’

‘Now that I have got you, I don’t want any more,’ answered she.

Then the boy turned to his father and said, ‘Go in peace, dear father,

and give my mother greeting and tell her not to be anxious any more, for

she can keep all her children.’

And Halfman mounted his horse and rode home, and told his wife all he

had seen, and the message sent by Mohammed--Mohammed the son of Halfman,

the son of the judge.

(Marchen und Gedichte aus der Stadt Tripolis. Hans von Stumme.)


Story DNA

Moral

Even those who seem disadvantaged can possess great cunning and resourcefulness, and betrayal often leads to its own downfall.

Plot Summary

A judge's wife gives birth to eleven whole sons and one 'Halfman' after eating magical apples. Halfman, though physically incomplete, proves to be the most cunning, saving his brothers from an ogress. However, his jealous brothers betray him, leaving him to drown. Halfman is saved by a magical fish and later outwits the same ogress, eventually making a deal with her to kill his betraying brother in exchange for his firstborn son. After reclaiming his bride and exposing his brothers' treachery, Halfman's son is taken by the ogress but eventually returns, ensuring the family's future safety.

Themes

jealousy and betrayalresourcefulness and cunningfamily loyalty and conflictfate and consequence

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three, direct address to reader (implied through moral questions)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: magical apples for conception, ogres/ogresses with supernatural abilities (shapeshifting, strength, magic staff), talking fish, magical scale for summoning help
the half-apple/Halfman (symbol of incompleteness and unique strength)red and white cloths (symbol of life and death, identity confusion)the fish (symbol of unexpected aid/nature's help)

Cultural Context

Origin: Arabian
Era: timeless fairy tale

Collected by Hans von Stumme from Tripoli, suggesting a North African/Middle Eastern oral tradition.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. A judge and his wife, childless, receive twelve magical apples from an old man to conceive sons.
  2. The wife eats eleven and a half apples, giving birth to eleven whole sons and one 'Halfman'.
  3. The twelve sons travel to marry their uncle's daughters, but Halfman discovers their 'uncle' is an ogre.
  4. Halfman switches the cloths and caps of his brothers and the ogress's daughters, causing the ogress to kill her own children.
  5. Halfman and his brothers escape to their real uncle, marry his daughters, but the brothers become jealous of Halfman's beautiful bride.
  6. The brothers trick Halfman into fetching water from a brook, then cut his rope, leaving him to drown.
  7. A magical fish saves Halfman, gives him a scale for help, and he wanders until he encounters the ogress again.
  8. Halfman tricks the ogress and ogre into fattening him up instead of eating him immediately.
  9. Halfman tricks the ogress's daughter into helping him escape and kill her parents.
  10. Halfman makes a deal with the ogress to kill his betraying brother in exchange for their firstborn son.
  11. The ogress kills Halfman's eldest brother on his wedding night, allowing Halfman to return and claim his bride.
  12. Halfman reveals his brothers' treachery to his father, who acknowledges Halfman's truth and reunites him with his wife.
  13. Halfman's wife gives birth to a son, whom Halfman must give to the ogress due to his promise.
  14. The ogress takes the son, but Halfman later visits him, and the son, now named Mohammed, returns to his parents, ensuring no more children are taken.
  15. Halfman returns home, and his family lives happily, with the son's return signifying the end of the ogress's claim.

Characters

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Halfman

human young adult male

Only half a man; presumably one side of his body is missing

Attire: Period-appropriate clothing, likely simple tunic and trousers, perhaps with a leather belt. Scarlet cap.

Missing half his body

Clever, brave, loyal

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The Judge

human adult male

Distinguished, well-fed

Attire: Judge's robes, indicating his profession and status

Judge's wig

Grief-stricken (initially), grateful, just

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The Judge's Wife

human adult female

Anxious, maternal

Attire: Modest, practical dress suitable for a woman of her station

Tearful expression

Anxious, maternal, loving

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The Ogress

magical creature ageless female

Large, imposing, physically strong

Attire: Simple, dark clothing, perhaps with a belt for carrying tools

Tiny lantern at her waist

Deceptive, vengeful, ruthless

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The Brothers

human young adult male

Strong, handsome

Attire: Riding clothes, scarlet caps

Group of identical men

Envious, treacherous, easily misled

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Mohammed

human child male

Healthy, growing boy

Attire: New clothes

New ring on his finger

Forgetful, easily influenced

Locations

Judge's House

transitional

The judge is standing 'lost in thought before his house'.

Mood: contemplative, domestic

The judge receives the apples from the old man, setting the story in motion.

house judge street

Ogre's House

indoor night

A house where the brothers are offered meat and drink, with a room where they sleep under red cloths.

Mood: deceptive, dangerous, suspenseful

Halfman foils the ogress's plan to kill his brothers.

beds red cloth white cloth tiny lantern scarlet caps curtains

Brook with Steep Bank

outdoor

A brook with a steep bank where Halfman is betrayed and thrown into the water.

Mood: treacherous, desolate

Halfman is betrayed by his brothers and rescued by a fish.

brook steep bank rope water skin fish

Ogress's Abode (Earth Opening)

transitional midnight

The place where the ogress appears, and where she strikes her staff to open the earth, revealing Halfman's son.

Mood: eerie, magical, sorrowful

Halfman sees his son, who now prefers the ogress and ogre as his parents.

ogress staff earth opening Halfman's son