The Dead Wife

by Andrew Lang · from The Yellow Fairy Book

folk tale transformation melancholy Ages 8-14 701 words 4 min read
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Original Story 701 words · 4 min read

THE DEAD WIFE[20]

Once upon a time there were a man and his wife who lived in the

forest, very far from the rest of the tribe. Very often they spent the

day in hunting together, but after a while the wife found that she had

so many things to do that she was obliged to stay at home; so he went

alone, though he found that when his wife was not with him he never

had any luck. One day, when he was away hunting, the woman fell ill,

and in a few days she died. Her husband grieved bitterly, and buried

her in the house where she had passed her life; but as the time went

on he felt so lonely without her that he made a wooden doll about her

height and size for company, and dressed it in her clothes. He seated

it in front of the fire, and tried to think he had his wife back

again. The next day he went out to hunt, and when he came home the

first thing he did was to go up to the doll and brush off some of the

ashes from the fire which had fallen on its face. But he was very busy

now, for he had to cook and mend, besides getting food, for there was

no one to help him. And so a whole year passed away.

At the end of that time he came back from hunting one night and found

some wood by the door and a fire within. The next night there was not

only wood and fire, but a piece of meat in the kettle, nearly ready

for eating. He searched all about to see who could have done this, but

could find no one. The next time he went to hunt he took care not to

go far, and came in quite early. And while he was still a long way off

he saw a woman going into the house with wood on her shoulders. So he

made haste, and opened the door quickly, and instead of the wooden

doll, his wife sat in front of the fire.

Then she spoke to him and said, ‘The Great Spirit felt sorry for you,

because you would not be comforted, so he let me come back to you, but

you must not stretch out your hand to touch me till we have seen the

rest of our people. If you do, I shall die.’

[Footnote 20: From the Iroquois.]

So the man listened to her words, and the woman dwelt there, and

brought the wood and kindled the fire, till one day her husband said

to her, ‘It is now two years since you died. Let us now go back to our

tribe. Then you will be well, and I can touch you.’

[Illustration: The Indian Finds His Wife Sitting by the Fire.]

And with that he prepared food for the journey, a string of deer’s

flesh for her to carry, and one for himself; and so they started. Now

the camp of the tribe was distant six days’ journey, and when they

were yet one day’s journey off it began to snow, and they felt weary

and longed for rest. Therefore they made a fire, cooked some food, and

spread out their skins to sleep.

Then the heart of the man was greatly stirred, and he stretched out

his arms to his wife, but she waved her hands and said, ‘We have seen

no one yet; it is too soon.’

But he would not listen to her, and caught her to him, and behold! he

was clasping the wooden doll. And when he saw it was the doll he

pushed it from him in his misery and rushed away to the camp, and told

them all his story. And some doubted, and they went back with him to

the place where he and his wife had stopped to rest, and there lay the

doll, and besides, they saw in the snow the steps of two people, and

the foot of one was like the foot of the doll. And the man grieved

sore all the days of his life.


Story DNA

Moral

Impatience and a failure to heed warnings can lead to the loss of what is most desired.

Plot Summary

A man, grieving his deceased wife, carves a wooden doll in her likeness. After a year, his wife mysteriously returns, brought back by the Great Spirit, but warns him not to touch her until they reach their tribe. On the final night of their journey, the husband, overcome with longing, embraces her, causing her to transform back into the wooden doll. He is left with renewed grief, and the tribe finds evidence confirming his tragic tale.

Themes

grief and losslove and longingimpatience and consequencethe supernatural

Emotional Arc

suffering to hope to renewed suffering

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs self
Ending: tragic
Magic: resurrection/return from the dead, divine intervention (Great Spirit), transformation (wife to doll and back)
the wooden doll (representing grief, longing, and the wife's temporary return)the fire (symbolizing home, warmth, and the wife's domestic presence)

Cultural Context

Origin: Iroquois (Native American)
Era: timeless fairy tale

This story reflects Iroquois spiritual beliefs and traditional ways of life, emphasizing the connection between the spiritual world and daily existence, and the significance of community.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. A man and his wife live in isolation in the forest; the wife stays home while the husband hunts.
  2. The wife falls ill and dies, and the husband buries her in their home, grieving deeply.
  3. Overcome with loneliness, the husband carves a wooden doll in his wife's image, dresses it, and places it by the fire.
  4. The husband struggles with domestic tasks for a year, as there is no one to help him.
  5. He begins to find wood, fire, and cooked food mysteriously appearing in his home after hunting.
  6. The husband hides and observes, seeing a woman enter his house with wood.
  7. He rushes in and finds his wife, alive, sitting by the fire instead of the doll.
  8. His wife explains the Great Spirit allowed her return but warns him not to touch her until they see their people.
  9. They live together for a time, with the wife performing domestic duties, and the husband decides it's time to return to the tribe.
  10. They prepare for a six-day journey to the tribe's camp.
  11. On the final night, just one day from the camp, they make a fire and prepare to sleep.
  12. Overcome with emotion, the husband reaches out and embraces his wife, ignoring her warning.
  13. His wife instantly transforms back into the wooden doll in his arms.
  14. The man, distraught, pushes the doll away and rushes to the tribe to tell his story.
  15. Some tribespeople return with him, find the doll, and see two sets of footprints in the snow, one matching the doll's foot, confirming his tale, and the man grieves for the rest of his life.

Characters

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The Man

human adult male

Strong, capable hunter

Attire: Deerskin clothing, moccasins, practical for forest life and hunting

Clutching the wooden doll in despair

Lonely, grief-stricken, impulsive

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The Wife

human adult female

Healthy, capable woman

Attire: Traditional Iroquois woman's clothing, likely deerskin dress and leggings

Carrying wood with a spectral glow

Loving, obedient, cautious

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The Wooden Doll

object ageless female

Crude likeness of the wife, life-sized

Attire: The wife's clothing

Ashes smudged on its face

Inanimate, but imbued with the husband's longing

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The Great Spirit

magical creature ageless unknown

Not described

Attire: Not described

A faint glow surrounding the wife's return

Compassionate, powerful, interventionist

Locations

Hunter's Forest Home

indoor

A solitary dwelling deep within the forest, far from the tribe. Contains a fireplace and space for a wooden doll.

Mood: Initially loving and domestic, then lonely and grief-stricken, later mysterious and hopeful.

The wife dies, the husband creates the doll, the wife returns, the home is revitalized.

fireplace wooden doll ashes kettle animal skins

Forest Path

outdoor

A six-day journey through the forest to the tribe's camp.

Mood: Anticipatory, hopeful, then increasingly tense and fateful.

The couple journeys back to the tribe, representing a return to normalcy.

trees deer flesh strings footprints

Snowy Campsite

transitional night winter, snowy

A temporary campsite in the snowy forest, one day's journey from the tribe.

Mood: Cold, weary, filled with longing and temptation.

The husband breaks his promise and embraces the doll, leading to the wife's final disappearance.

fire animal skin bedding snow footprints