The Invisible Prince

by Andrew Lang · from The Yellow Fairy Book

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THE INVISIBLE PRINCE

Once upon a time there lived a Fairy who had power over the earth, the

sea, fire, and the air; and this Fairy had four sons. The eldest, who

was quick and lively, with a vivid imagination, she made Lord of Fire,

which was in her opinion the noblest of all the elements. To the

second son, whose wisdom and prudence made amends for his being rather

dull, she gave the government of the earth. The third was wild and

savage, and of monstrous stature; and the Fairy, his mother, who was

ashamed of his defects, hoped to hide them by creating him King of the

Seas. The youngest, who was the slave of his passions and of a very

uncertain temper, became Prince of the Air.

Being the youngest, he was naturally his mother’s favourite; but this

did not blind her to his weaknesses, and she foresaw that some day he

would suffer much pain through falling in love. So she thought the

best thing she could do was to bring him up with a horror of women;

and, to her great delight, she saw this dislike only increased as he

grew older. From his earliest childhood he heard nothing but stories

of princes who had fallen into all sorts of troubles through love; and

she drew such terrible pictures of poor little Cupid that the young

man had no difficulty in believing that he was the root of all evil.

All the time that this wise mother could spare from filling her son

with hatred for all womenkind she passed in giving him a love of the

pleasures of the chase, which henceforth became his chief joy. For his

amusement she had made a new forest, planted with the most splendid

trees, and turned loose in it every animal that could be found in any

of the four quarters of the globe. In the midst of this forest she

built a palace which had not its equal for beauty in the whole world,

and then she considered that she had done enough to make any prince

happy.

Now it is all very well to abuse the God of Love, but a man cannot

struggle against his fate. In his secret heart the Prince got tired of

his mother’s constant talk on this subject; and when one day she

quitted the palace to attend to some business, begging him never to go

beyond the grounds, he at once jumped at the chance of disobeying her.

Left to himself the Prince soon forgot the wise counsels of his

mother, and feeling very much bored with his own company, he ordered

some of the spirits of the air to carry him to the court of a

neighbouring sovereign. This kingdom was situated in the Island of

Roses, where the climate is so delicious that the grass is always

green and the flowers always sweet. The waves, instead of beating on

the rocks, seemed to die gently on the shore; clusters of golden

bushes covered the land, and the vines were bent low with grapes.

The King of this island had a daughter named Rosalie, who was more

lovely than any girl in the whole world. No sooner had the eyes of the

Prince of the Air rested on her than he forgot all the terrible woes

which had been prophesied to him ever since he was born, for in one

single moment the plans of years are often upset. He instantly began

to think how best to make himself happy, and the shortest way that

occurred to him was to have Rosalie carried off by his attendant

spirits.

It is easy to imagine the feelings of the King when he found that his

daughter had vanished. He wept her loss night and day, and his only

comfort was to talk over it with a young and unknown prince, who had

just arrived at the Court. Alas! he did not know what a deep interest

the stranger had in Rosalie, for he too had seen her, and had fallen a

victim to her charms.

One day the King, more sorrowful than usual, was walking sadly along

the seashore, when after a long silence the unknown Prince, who was

his only companion, suddenly spoke. ‘There is no evil without a

remedy,’ he said to the unhappy father; ‘and if you will promise me

your daughter in marriage, I will undertake to bring her back to you.’

‘You are trying to soothe me by vain promises,’ answered the King.

‘Did I not see her caught up into the air, in spite of cries which

would have softened the heart of any one but the barbarian who has

robbed me of her? The unfortunate girl is pining away in some unknown

land, where perhaps no foot of man has ever trod, and I shall see her

no more. But go, generous stranger; bring back Rosalie if you can, and

live happy with her ever after in this country, of which I now declare

you heir.’

Although the stranger’s name and rank were unknown to Rosalie’s

father, he was really the son of the King of the Golden Isle, which

had for capital a city that extended from one sea to another. The

walls, washed by the quiet waters, were covered with gold, which made

one think of the yellow sands. Above them was a rampart of orange and

lemon trees, and all the streets were paved with gold.

The King of this beautiful island had one son, for whom a life of

adventure had been foretold at his birth. This so frightened his

father and mother that in order to comfort them a Fairy, who happened

to be present at the time, produced a little pebble which she told

them to keep for the Prince till he grew up, as by putting it in his

mouth he would become invisible, as long as he did not try to speak,

for if he did the stone would lose all its virtue. In this way the

good fairy hoped that the Prince would be protected against all

dangers.

No sooner did the Prince begin to grow out of boyhood than he longed

to see if the other countries of the world were as splendid as the one

in which he lived. So, under pretence of visiting some small islands

that belonged to his father, he set out. But a frightful storm drove

his ship on to unknown shores, where most of his followers were put to

death by the savages, and the Prince himself only managed to escape by

making use of his magic pebble. By this means he passed through the

midst of them unseen, and wandered on till he reached the coast, where

he re-embarked on board his ship.

The first land he sighted was the Island of Roses, and he went at once

to the court of the King, Rosalie’s father. The moment his eyes beheld

the Princess, he fell in love with her like everyone else.

He had already spent several months in this condition when the Prince

of the Air whirled her away, to the grief and despair of every man on

the island. But sad though everybody was, the Prince of the Golden

Isle was perfectly inconsolable, and he passed both days and nights in

bemoaning his loss.

‘Alas!’ he cried; ‘shall I never see my lovely Princess again? Who

knows where she may be, and what fairy may have her in his keeping? I

am only a man, but I am strong in my love, and I will seek the whole

world through till I find her.’

So saying, he left the court, and made ready for his journey.

He travelled many weary days without hearing a single word of the lost

Princess, till one morning, as he was walking through a thick forest,

he suddenly perceived a magnificent palace standing at the end of a

pine avenue, and his heart bounded to think that he might be gazing on

Rosalie’s prison. He hastened his steps, and quickly arrived at the

gate of the palace, which was formed of a single agate. The gate swung

open to let him through, and he next passed successively three courts,

surrounded by deep ditches filled with running water, with birds of

brilliant plumage flying about the banks. Everything around was rare

and beautiful, but the Prince scarcely raised his eyes to all these

wonders. He thought only of the Princess and where he should find her,

but in vain he opened every door and searched in every corner; he

neither saw Rosalie nor anyone else. At last there was no place left

for him to search but a little wood, which contained in the centre a

sort of hall built entirely of orange-trees, with four small rooms

opening out of the corners. Three of these were empty except for

statues and wonderful things, but in the fourth the Invisible Prince

caught sight of Rosalie. His joy at beholding her again was, however,

somewhat lessened by seeing that the Prince of the Air was kneeling at

her feet, and pleading his own cause. But it was in vain that he

implored her to listen; she only shook her head. ‘No,’ was all she

would say; ‘you snatched me from my father whom I loved, and all the

splendour in the world can never console me. Go! I can never feel

anything towards you but hate and contempt.’ With these words she

turned away and entered her own apartments.

Unknown to herself the Invisible Prince had followed her, but fearing

to be discovered by the Princess in the presence of others, he made up

his mind to wait quietly till dark; and employed the long hours in

writing a poem to the Princess, which he laid on the bed beside her.

This done, he thought of nothing but how best to deliver Rosalie, and

he resolved to take advantage of a visit which the Prince of the Air

paid every year to his mother and brothers in order to strike the

blow.

One day Rosalie was sitting alone in her room thinking of her troubles

when she suddenly saw a pen get up from off the desk and begin to

write all by itself on a sheet of white paper. As she did not know

that it was guided by an invisible hand she was very much astonished,

and the moment that the pen had ceased to move she instantly went over

to the table, where she found some lovely verses, telling her that

another shared her distresses, whatever they might be, and loved her

with all his heart; and that he would never rest until he had

delivered her from the hands of the man she hated. Thus encouraged,

she told him all her story, and of the arrival of a young stranger in

her father’s palace, whose looks had so charmed her that since that

day she had thought of no one else. At these words the Prince could

contain himself no longer. He took the pebble from his mouth, and

flung himself at Rosalie’s feet.

[Illustration: The Pen Got Up and Wrote All By Itself—Rosalie]

When they had got over the first rapture of meeting they began to make

plans to escape from the power of the Prince of the Air. But this did

not prove easy, for the magic stone would only serve for one person at

a time, and in order to save Rosalie the Prince of the Golden Isle

would have to expose himself to the fury of his enemy. But Rosalie

would not hear of this.

‘No, Prince,’ she said; ‘since you are here this island no longer

feels a prison. Besides, you are under the protection of a Fairy, who

always visits your father’s court at this season. Go instantly and

seek her, and when she is found implore the gift of another stone with

similar powers. Once you have that, there will be no further

difficulty in the way of escape.’

The Prince of the Air returned a few days later from his mother’s

palace, but the Invisible Prince had already set out. He had, however,

entirely forgotten the road by which he had come, and lost himself for

so long in the forest, that when at last he reached home the Fairy had

already left, and, in spite of all his grief, there was nothing for it

but to wait till the Fairy’s next visit, and allow Rosalie to suffer

three months longer. This thought drove him to despair, and he had

almost made up his mind to return to the place of her captivity, when

one day, as he was strolling along an alley in the woods, he saw a

huge oak open its trunk, and out of it step two Princes in earnest

conversation. As our hero had the magic stone in his mouth they

imagined themselves alone, and did not lower their voices.

‘What!’ said one, ‘are you always going to allow yourself to be

tormented by a passion which can never end happily, and in your whole

kingdom can you find nothing else to satisfy you?’

‘What is the use,’ replied the other, ‘of being Prince of the Gnomes,

and having a mother who is queen over all the four elements, if I

cannot win the love of the Princess Argentine? From the moment that I

first saw her, sitting in the forest surrounded by flowers, I have

never ceased to think of her night and day, and, although I love her,

I am quite convinced that she will never care for me. You know that I

have in my palace the cabinets of the years. In the first, great

mirrors reflect the past; in the second, we contemplate the present;

in the third, the future can be read. It was here that I fled after I

had gazed on the Princess Argentine, but instead of love I only saw

scorn and contempt. Think how great must be my devotion, when, in

spite of my fate, I still love on!’

Now the Prince of the Golden Isle was enchanted with this

conversation, for the Princess Argentine was his sister, and he hoped,

by means of her influence over the Prince of the Gnomes, to obtain

from his brother the release of Rosalie. So he joyfully returned to

his father’s palace, where he found his friend the Fairy, who at once

presented him with a magic pebble like his own. As may be imagined, he

lost no time in setting out to deliver Rosalie, and travelled so fast

that he soon arrived at the forest, in the midst of which she lay a

captive. But though he found the palace he did not find Rosalie. He

hunted high and low, but there was no sign of her, and his despair was

so great that he was ready, a thousand times over, to take his own

life. At last he remembered the conversation of the two Princes about

the cabinets of the years, and that if he could manage to reach the

oak-tree, he would be certain to discover what had become of Rosalie.

Happily, he soon found out the secret of the passage and entered the

cabinet of the present, where he saw reflected in the mirrors the

unfortunate Rosalie sitting on the floor weeping bitterly, and

surrounded with genii, who never left her night or day.

[Illustration: Guarded by the Genii—The Mirror of the Present]

This sight only increased the misery of the Prince, for he did not

know where the castle was, nor how to set about finding it. However,

he resolved to seek the whole world through till he came to the right

place. He began by setting sail in a favourable wind, but his bad luck

followed him even on the sea. He had scarcely lost sight of the land

when a violent storm arose, and after several hours of beating about,

the vessel was driven on to some rocks, on which it dashed itself to

bits. The Prince was fortunate enough to be able to lay hold of a

floating spar, and contrived to keep himself afloat; and, after a long

struggle with the winds and waves, he was cast upon a strange island.

But what was his surprise, on reaching the shore, to hear sounds of

the most heartrending distress, mingled with the sweetest songs which

had ever charmed him! His curiosity was instantly roused, and he

advanced cautiously till he saw two huge dragons guarding the gate of

a wood. They were terrible indeed to look upon. Their bodies were

covered with glittering scales; their curly tails extended far over

the land; flames darted from their mouths and noses, and their eyes

would have made the bravest shudder; but as the Prince was invisible

and they did not see him, he slipped past them into the wood. He found

himself at once in a labyrinth, and wandered about for a long time

without meeting anyone; in fact, the only sight he saw was a circle of

human hands, sticking out of the ground above the wrist, each with a

bracelet of gold, on which a name was written. The farther he advanced

in the labyrinth the more curious he became, till he was stopped by

two corpses lying in the midst of a cypress alley, each with a scarlet

cord round his neck and a bracelet on his arm on which were engraved

their own names, and those of two Princesses.

[Illustration: In The Labyrinth of Despair]

The invisible Prince recognised these dead men as Kings of two large

islands near his own home, but the names of the Princesses were

unknown to him. He grieved for their unhappy fate, and at once

proceeded to bury them; but no sooner had he laid them in their

graves, than their hands started up through the earth and remained

sticking up like those of their fellows.

The Prince went on his way, thinking about this strange adventure,

when suddenly at the turn of the walk he perceived a tall man whose

face was the picture of misery, holding in his hands a silken cord of

the exact colour of those round the necks of the dead men. A few steps

further this man came up with another as miserable to the full as he

himself; they silently embraced, and then without a word passed the

cords round their throats, and fell dead side by side. In vain the

Prince rushed to their assistance and strove to undo the cord. He

could not loosen it; so he buried them like the others and continued

his path.

He felt, however, that great prudence was necessary, or he himself

might become the victim of some enchantment; and he was thankful to

slip past the dragons, and enter a beautiful park, with clear streams

and sweet flowers, and a crowd of men and maidens. But he could not

forget the terrible things he had seen, and hoped eagerly for a clue

to the mystery. Noticing two young people talking together, he drew

near thinking that he might get some explanation of what puzzled him.

And so he did.

‘You swear,’ said the Prince, ‘that you will love me till you die, but

I fear your faithless heart, and I feel that I shall soon have to seek

the Fairy Despair, ruler of half this island. She carries off the

lovers who have been cast away by their mistresses, and wish to have

done with life. She places them in a labyrinth where they are

condemned to walk for ever, with a bracelet on their arms and a cord

round their necks, unless they meet another as miserable as

themselves. Then the cord is pulled and they lie where they fall, till

they are buried by the first passer-by. Terrible as this death would

be,’ added the Prince, ‘it would be sweeter than life if I had lost

your love.’

The sight of all these happy lovers only made the Prince grieve the

more, and he wandered along the seashore spending his days; but one

day he was sitting on a rock bewailing his fate, and the impossibility

of leaving the island, when all in a moment the sea appeared to raise

itself nearly to the skies, and the caves echoed with hideous screams.

As he looked a woman rose from the depths of the sea, flying madly

before a furious giant. The cries she uttered softened the heart of

the Prince; he took the stone from his mouth, and drawing his sword he

rushed after the giant, so as to give the lady time to escape. But

hardly had he come within reach of the enemy, than the giant touched

him with a ring that he held in his hand, and the Prince remained

immovable where he stood. The giant then hastily rejoined his prey,

and, seizing her in his arms, he plunged her into the sea. Then he

sent some tritons to bind chains about the Prince of the Golden Isle,

and he too felt himself borne to the depths of the ocean, and without

the hope of ever again seeing the Princess.

Now the giant whom the invisible had so rashly attacked was the Lord

of the Sea, and the third son of the Queen of the Elements, and he had

touched the youth with a magic ring which enabled a mortal to live

under water. So the Prince of the Golden Isle found, when bound in

chains by the tritons, he was carried through the homes of strange

monsters and past immense seaweed forests, till he reached a vast

sandy space, surrounded by huge rocks. On the tallest of the rocks sat

the giant as on a throne.

‘Rash mortal,’ said he, when the Prince was dragged before him, ‘you

have deserved death, but you shall live only to suffer more cruelly.

Go, and add to the number of those whom it is my pleasure to torture.’

At these words the unhappy Prince found himself tied to a rock; but he

was not alone in his misfortunes, for all round him were chained

Princes and Princesses, whom the giant had led captive. Indeed, it was

his chief delight to create a storm, in order to add to the list of

his prisoners.

As his hands were fastened, it was impossible for the Prince of the

Golden Isle to make use of his magic stone, and he passed his nights

and days dreaming of Rosalie. But at last the time came when the giant

took it into his head to amuse himself by arranging fights between

some of his captives. Lots were drawn, and one fell upon our Prince,

whose chains were immediately loosened. The moment he was set free, he

snatched up his stone, and became invisible.

The astonishment of the giant at the sudden disappearance of the

Prince may well be imagined. He ordered all the passages to be

watched, but it was too late, for the Prince had already glided

between two rocks. He wandered for a long while through the forests,

where he met nothing but fearful monsters; he climbed rock after rock,

steered his way from tree to tree, till at length he arrived at the

edge of the sea, at the foot of a mountain that he remembered to have

seen in the cabinet of the present, where Rosalie was held captive.

Filled with joy, he made his way to the top of the mountain which

pierced the clouds, and there he found a palace. He entered, and in

the middle of a long gallery he discovered a crystal room, in the

midst of which sat Rosalie, guarded night and day by genii. There was

no door anywhere, nor any window. At this sight the Prince became more

puzzled than ever, for he did not know how he was to warn Rosalie of

his return. Yet it broke his heart to see her weeping from dawn till

dark.

One day, as Rosalie was walking up and down her room, she was

surprised to see that the crystal which served for a wall had grown

cloudy, as if some one had breathed on it, and, what was more,

wherever she moved the brightness of the crystal always became

clouded. This was enough to cause the Princess to suspect that her

lover had returned. In order to set the Prince of the Air’s mind at

rest she began by being very gracious to him, so that when she begged

that her captivity might be a little lightened she should not be

refused. At first the only favour she asked was to be allowed to walk

for one hour every day up and down the long gallery. This was granted,

and the Invisible Prince speedily took the opportunity of handing her

the stone, which she at once slipped into her mouth. No words can

paint the fury of her captor at her disappearance. He ordered the

spirits of the air to fly through all space, and to bring back Rosalie

wherever she might be. They instantly flew off to obey his commands,

and spread themselves over the whole earth.

Meantime Rosalie and the Invisible Prince had reached, hand in hand, a

door of the gallery which led through a terrace into the gardens. In

silence they glided along, and thought themselves already safe, when a

furious monster dashed itself by accident against Rosalie and the

Invisible Prince, and in her fright she let go his hand. No one can

speak as long as he is invisible, and besides, they knew that the

spirits were all around them, and at the slightest sound they would be

recognised; so all they could do was to feel about in the hope that

their hands might once more meet.

[Illustration: Prince Gnome Learns the Name of His Rival at the Golden

Fountain]

But, alas! the joy of liberty lasted but a short time. The Princess,

having wandered in vain up and down the forest, stopped at last on the

edge of a fountain. As she walked she wrote on the trees: ‘If ever the

Prince, my lover, comes this way, let him know that it is here I

dwell, and that I sit daily on the edge of this fountain, mingling my

tears with its waters.’

These words were read by one of the genii, who repeated them to his

master. The Prince of the Air, in his turn making himself invisible,

was led to the fountain, and waited for Rosalie. When she drew near he

held out his hand, which she grasped eagerly, taking it for that of

her lover; and, seizing his opportunity, the Prince passed a cord

round her arms, and throwing off his invisibility cried to his spirits

to drag her into the lowest pit.

It was at this moment that the Invisible Prince appeared, and at the

sight of the Prince of the Genii mounting into the air, holding a

silken cord, he guessed instantly that he was carrying off Rosalie.

He felt so overwhelmed by despair that he thought for an instant of

putting an end to his life. ‘Can I survive my misfortunes?’ he cried.

‘I fancied I had come to an end of my troubles, and now they are worse

than ever. What will become of me? Never can I discover the place

where this monster will hide Rosalie.’

The unhappy youth had determined to let himself die, and indeed his

sorrow alone was enough to kill him, when the thought that by means of

the cabinets of the years he might find out where the Princess was

imprisoned, gave him a little ray of comfort. So he continued to walk

on through the forest, and after some hours he arrived at the gate of

a temple, guarded by two huge lions. Being invisible, he was able to

enter unharmed. In the middle of the temple was an altar, on which lay

a book, and behind the altar hung a great curtain. The Prince

approached the altar and opened the book, which contained the names of

all the lovers in the world; and in it he read that Rosalie had been

carried off by the Prince of the Air to an abyss which had no entrance

except the one that lay by way of the Fountain of Gold.

Now, as the Prince had not the smallest idea where this fountain was

to be found, it might be thought that he was not much nearer Rosalie

than before. This was not, however, the view taken by the Prince.

‘Though every step that I take may perhaps lead me further from her,’

he said to himself, ‘I am still thankful to know that she is alive

somewhere.’

On leaving the temple the Invisible Prince saw six paths lying before

him, each of which led through the wood. He was hesitating which to

choose, when he suddenly beheld two people coming towards him, down

the track which lay most to his right. They turned out to be the

Prince Gnome and his friend, and the sudden desire to get some news of

his sister, Princess Argentine, caused the Invisible Prince to follow

them and to listen to their conversation.

‘Do you think,’ the Prince Gnome was saying, ‘do you think that I

would not break my chains if I could? I know that the Princess

Argentine will never love me, yet each day I feel her dearer still.

And as if this were not enough, I have the horror of feeling that she

probably loves another. So I have resolved to put myself out of my

pain by means of the Golden Fountain. A single drop of its water

falling on the sand around will trace the name of my rival in her

heart. I dread the test, and yet this very dread convinces me of my

misfortune.’

It may be imagined that after listening to these words the Invisible

Prince followed Prince Gnome like his shadow, and after walking some

time they arrived at the Golden Fountain. The unhappy lover stooped

down with a sigh, and dipping his finger in the water let fall a drop

on the sand. It instantly wrote the name of Prince Flame, his brother.

The shock of this discovery was so real, that Prince Gnome sank

fainting into the arms of his friend.

Meanwhile the Invisible Prince was turning over in his mind how he

could best deliver Rosalie. As, since he had been touched by the

Giant’s ring, he had the power to live in the water as well as on

land, he at once dived into the fountain. He perceived in one corner a

door leading into the mountain, and at the foot of the mountain was a

high rock on which was fixed an iron ring with a cord attached. The

Prince promptly guessed that the cord was used to chain the Princess,

and drew his sword and cut it. In a moment he felt the Princess’s hand

in his, for she had always kept her magic pebble in her mouth, in

spite of the prayers and entreaties of the Prince of the Air to make

herself visible.

So hand in hand the invisible Prince and Rosalie crossed the mountain;

but as the Princess had no power of living under water, she could not

pass the Golden Fountain. Speechless and invisible they clung together

on the brink, trembling at the frightful tempest the Prince of the Air

had raised in his fury. The storm had already lasted many days when

tremendous heat began to make itself felt. The lightning flashed, the

thunder rattled, fire bolts fell from heaven, burning up the forests

and even the fields of corn. In one instant the very streams were

dried up, and the Prince, seizing his opportunity, carried the

Princess over the Golden Fountain.

It took them a long time still to reach the Golden Isle, but at last

they got there, and we may be quite sure they never wanted to leave it

any more.

THE CROW[13]

Once upon a time there were three Princesses who were all three young

and beautiful; but the youngest, although she was not fairer than the

other two, was the most loveable of them all.

About half a mile from the palace in which they lived there stood a

castle, which was uninhabited and almost a ruin, but the garden which

surrounded it was a mass of blooming flowers, and in this garden the

youngest Princess used often to walk.

One day when she was pacing to and fro under the lime trees, a black

crow hopped out of a rose-bush in front of her. The poor beast was all

torn and bleeding, and the kind little Princess was quite unhappy

about it. When the crow saw this it turned to her and said:

‘I am not really a black crow, but an enchanted Prince, who has been

doomed to spend his youth in misery. If you only liked, Princess, you

could save me. But you would have to say good-bye to all your own

people, and come and be my constant companion in this ruined castle.

There is one habitable room in it, in which there is a golden bed;

there you will have to live all by yourself, and don’t forget that

whatever you may see or hear in the night you must not scream out, for

if you give as much as a single cry my sufferings will be doubled.’

The good-natured Princess at once left her home and her family and

hurried to the ruined castle, and took possession of the room with the

golden bed.

[Footnote 13: From the Polish. Kletke.]

When night approached she lay down, but though she shut her eyes tight

sleep would not come. At midnight she heard to her great horror some

one coming along the passage, and in a minute her door was flung wide

open and a troop of strange beings entered the room. They at once

proceeded to light a fire in the huge fire-place; then they placed a

great cauldron of boiling water on it. When they had done this, they

approached the bed on which the trembling girl lay, and, screaming and

yelling all the time, they dragged her towards the cauldron. She

nearly died with fright, but she never uttered a sound. Then of a

sudden the cock crew, and all the evil spirits vanished.

At the same moment the crow appeared and hopped all round the room

with joy. It thanked the Princess most heartily for her goodness, and

said that its sufferings had already been greatly lessened.

[Illustration: The evil spirits drag the girl to the cauldron]

Now one of the Princess’s elder sisters, who was very inquisitive, had

found out about everything, and went to pay her youngest sister a

visit in the ruined castle. She implored her so urgently to let her

spend the night with her in the golden bed, that at last the

good-natured little Princess consented. But at midnight, when the odd

folk appeared, the elder sister screamed with terror, and from this

time on the youngest Princess insisted always on keeping watch alone.

So she lived in solitude all the day-time, and at night she would have

been frightened, had she not been so brave; but every day the crow

came and thanked her for her endurance, and assured her that his

sufferings were far less than they had been.

And so two years passed away, when one day the crow came to the

Princess and said: ‘In another year I shall be freed from the spell I

am under at present, because then the seven years will be over. But

before I can resume my natural form, and take possession of the

belongings of my forefathers, you must go out into the world and take

service as a maidservant.’

The young Princess consented at once, and for a whole year she served

as a maid; but in spite of her youth and beauty she was very badly

treated, and suffered many things. One evening, when she was spinning

flax, and had worked her little white hands weary, she heard a

rustling beside her and a cry of joy. Then she saw a handsome youth

standing beside her; who knelt down at her feet and kissed the little

weary white hands.

‘I am the Prince,’ he said, ‘who you in your goodness, when I was

wandering about in the shape of a black crow, freed from the most

awful torments. Come now to my castle with me, and let us live there

happily together.’

So they went to the castle where they had both endured so much. But

when they reached it, it was difficult to believe that it was the

same, for it had all been rebuilt and done up again. And there they

lived for a hundred years, a hundred years of joy and happiness.


Story DNA

Moral

True love and unwavering devotion can break the most powerful enchantments and lead to lasting happiness.

Plot Summary

A kind princess encounters an enchanted crow, who is a prince cursed to suffer nightly torments unless she lives in his ruined castle and endures them without screaming. She bravely agrees, facing terrifying spirits each night for two years, and then serves a year as a maidservant. Her unwavering courage and sacrifice finally break the spell, transforming the crow back into a handsome prince, and they live happily ever after in his restored castle.

Themes

love and sacrificeperseverance and patiencecourage and selflessnessthe power of true love

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: rule of three (princesses), direct address to reader (implied)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: happy
Magic: Enchanted prince (crow), Magic spell/curse, Evil spirits/goblins, Transformation (crow to prince), Magical castle (ruined then rebuilt)
The crow (symbol of the enchanted prince's suffering)The golden bed (symbol of the princess's commitment and trial)The cauldron (symbol of the nightly torment and fear)

Cultural Context

Origin: Polish
Era: timeless fairy tale

The story is attributed to Kletke, a German collector of folktales, but noted as 'From the Polish', indicating a potential origin in Polish oral traditions.

Plot Beats (13)

  1. The youngest of three princesses, known for her loving nature, enjoys walking in the garden of a nearby ruined castle.
  2. She encounters a wounded crow, who reveals he is an enchanted prince and asks for her help to break his spell.
  3. The crow explains she must live in the castle's golden bed, enduring nightly horrors without screaming, or his suffering will double.
  4. The princess, out of kindness, leaves her home and family to live in the ruined castle.
  5. At midnight, terrifying beings enter her room, light a fire, place a cauldron, and drag her towards it, but she bravely refrains from screaming.
  6. The cock crows, the spirits vanish, and the crow appears, thanking her and stating his suffering has lessened.
  7. An inquisitive elder sister insists on spending a night with the princess but screams in terror when the spirits appear, forcing the youngest princess to continue alone.
  8. For two years, the princess endures the nightly torment and solitude, with the crow's suffering diminishing daily.
  9. The crow informs her that in another year, the seven-year enchantment will end, but she must first serve as a maidservant.
  10. The princess agrees and spends a year working as a maid, enduring harsh treatment despite her youth and beauty.
  11. One evening, while spinning, a handsome youth appears, kneels, and kisses her hands.
  12. The youth reveals he is the prince she saved, now freed from his crow form.
  13. They go to his castle, which is now rebuilt and splendid, and live happily together for a hundred years.

Characters

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Prince of the Air

fairy young adult male

Handsome, but prone to rash decisions and ruled by his passions

Attire: Princely attire befitting his station, perhaps with airy or cloud-like elements

Wisps of cloud or lightning crackling around his form

Passionate, impulsive, selfish

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Fairy Mother

fairy ageless female

Powerful and wise, concerned for her son's well-being but misguided in her methods

Attire: Regal robes befitting a fairy with dominion over earth, sea, fire, and air

Ornate staff representing her control over the elements

Overprotective, controlling, well-intentioned but misguided

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Rosalie

human young adult female

Exceedingly beautiful, kind-hearted

Attire: Princessly attire, elegant gowns suitable for the Island of Roses

A single perfect rose clutched in her hand

Gentle, brave, patient

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Prince of the Golden Isle

human young adult male

Brave, adventurous, resourceful

Attire: Princely attire, perhaps with golden accents reflecting his kingdom

A small, unassuming pebble held in his mouth

Courageous, determined, selfless

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King of the Island of Roses

human adult male

Grief-stricken, desperate to find his daughter

Attire: Regal robes, but perhaps disheveled due to his grief

Tears streaming down his face as he gazes at the sea

Loving, distraught, trusting

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Enchanted Prince (Crow)

magical creature young adult male

Initially a black crow, torn and bleeding; later a handsome youth

Attire: As a crow: None; As a prince: Princely attire

A single black feather transforming into a strand of golden hair

Grateful, cursed, noble

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Youngest Princess

human young adult female

Young and beautiful, but most of all loveable

Attire: Princessly attire, later a maidservant's dress

Her small, weary white hands

Kind, brave, selfless

Locations

Fairy's Forest Palace

outdoor

A new forest planted with splendid trees, filled with animals from all over the world. A palace of unmatched beauty stands in the midst of it.

Mood: magical, luxurious, secluded

The Prince of the Air spends his days hunting, sheltered from the world and women.

splendid trees exotic animals beautiful palace

Island of Roses

outdoor perpetual spring

A kingdom with a delicious climate, always green grass, sweet flowers, waves gently lapping the shore, golden bushes, and vines heavy with grapes.

Mood: idyllic, romantic

The Prince of the Air first sees Rosalie and falls in love.

green grass sweet flowers golden bushes grape vines

Golden Isle Capital City

outdoor warm, sunny

A city extending from one sea to another, with gold-covered walls washed by quiet waters. A rampart of orange and lemon trees sits above the walls, and all the streets are paved with gold.

Mood: opulent, peaceful

The Invisible Prince and Rosalie finally arrive and live happily ever after.

gold walls orange trees lemon trees gold-paved streets

Ruined Castle Garden

outdoor day

A garden surrounding a ruined, uninhabited castle, overgrown with blooming flowers and lime trees.

Mood: desolate, overgrown, magical

The Princess first meets the enchanted Prince in the form of a crow.

ruined castle blooming flowers lime trees black crow

Castle Room with Golden Bed

indoor night

A single habitable room within a ruined castle, containing a golden bed and a huge fireplace.

Mood: eerie, frightening

The Princess endures nightly torments from evil spirits without screaming, lessening the Prince's curse.

golden bed huge fireplace cauldron evil spirits