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The white duck

by Andrew Lang

The white duck

The Queen and the Witch

CEFR A1 Age 5 351 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Once upon a time, a king and queen lived in a castle. They were very happy together. The castle had tall towers and a wide moat. They loved each other very much. Every day, they walked in the garden.

But the king must go to war. He says goodbye to his queen. "Please be safe," he says. "Stay in the castle. Do not talk to strangers." The queen promises him. She is very sad when he leaves. She watches him go from the window. She waves until he is gone. She cries a little.

The queen stays in her room. She feels very lonely. She misses the king every day. She looks at his picture. She does not want to see anyone. An old woman comes to her window. The old woman looks kind. She has a gentle smile. She says, "Why are you sad? You are so pretty. Come see the garden. It is very nice. The flowers are blooming."

The queen remembers her promise. But she thinks, "A short walk is okay." She follows the old woman into the garden. The sun is warm. The flowers are colorful. Birds are singing in the trees. The air smells sweet.

They see a pond. The water looks cool and clear. "You should swim," says the old woman. "It will make you happy. The water is nice." The queen thinks, "It is a hot day. A swim is nice." She trusts the old woman. She decides to swim. The queen steps into the water. The old woman pushes her gently. "Swim, White Duck!" she says. The queen becomes a white duck. The old woman now looks like the queen. She waits for the king.

The king comes home. He is happy to be back. He hugs the witch, thinking she is the queen. The white duck is sad. She cannot go home. She swims in the pond alone. She quacks softly. She misses the king.

Always listen to your parents or guardians. If they say to stay safe, you should listen. It is important to be careful. Learn from the queen's mistake.

Original Story 671 words · 3 min read

_THE WHITE DUCK_ Once upon a time a great and powerful King married a lovely Princess. No couple were ever so happy; but before their honeymoon was over they were forced to part, for the King had to go on a warlike expedition to a far country, and leave his young wife alone at home. Bitter were the tears she shed, while her husband sought in vain to soothe her with words of comfort and counsel, warning her, above all things, never to leave the castle, to hold no intercourse with strangers, to beware of evil counsellors, and especially to be on her guard against strange women. And the Queen promised faithfully to obey her royal lord and master in these four matters. So when the King set out on his expedition she shut herself up with her ladies in her own apartments, and spent her time in spinning and weaving, and in thinking of her royal husband. Often she was very sad and lonely, and it happened that one day while she was seated at the window, letting salt tears drop on her work, an old woman, a kind, homely-looking old body, stepped up to the window, and, leaning upon her crutch, addressed the Queen in friendly, flattering tones, saying: ‘Why are you sad and cast down, fair Queen? You should not mope all day in your rooms, but should come out into the green garden, and hear the birds sing with joy among the trees, and see the butterflies fluttering above the flowers, and hear the bees and insects hum, and watch the sunbeams chase the dew-drops through the rose-leaves and in the lily-cups. All the brightness outside would help to drive away your cares, O Queen.’ [Illustration: The Witch persuades the Queen to bathe] For long the Queen resisted her coaxing words, remembering the promise she had given the King, her husband; but at last she thought to herself: After all, what harm would it do if I were to go into the garden for a short time and enjoy myself among the trees and flowers, and the singing birds and fluttering butterflies and humming insects, and look at the dew-drops hiding from the sunbeams in the hearts of the roses and lilies, and wander about in the sunshine, instead of remaining all day in this room? For she had no idea that the kind-looking old woman leaning on her crutch was in reality a wicked witch, who envied the Queen her good fortune, and was determined to ruin her. And so, in all ignorance, the Queen followed her out into the garden and listened to her smooth, flattering words. Now, in the middle of the garden there was a pond of water, clear as crystal, and the old woman said to the Queen: ‘The day is so warm, and the sun’s rays so scorching, that the water in the pond looks very cool and inviting. Would you not like to bathe in it, fair Queen?’ ‘No, I think not,’ answered the Queen; but the next moment she regretted her words, and thought to herself: Why shouldn’t I bathe in that cool, fresh water? No harm could come of it. And, so saying, she slipped off her robes and stepped into the water. But scarcely had her tender feet touched the cool ripples when she felt a great shove on her shoulders, and the wicked witch had pushed her into the deep water, exclaiming: ‘Swim henceforth, White Duck!’ And the witch herself assumed the form of the Queen, and decked herself out in the royal robes, and sat among the Court ladies, awaiting the King’s return. And suddenly the tramp of horses’ hoofs was heard, and the barking of dogs, and the witch hastened forward to meet the royal carriages, and, throwing her arms round the King’s neck, kissed him. And in his great joy the King did not know that the woman he held in his arms was not his own dear wife, but a wicked

Moral of the Story

Disobeying wise counsel, even for seemingly harmless reasons, can lead to dire consequences.


Characters 4 characters

King ◆ supporting

human adult male

Strong, capable, returning from a warlike expedition

Attire: Royal attire, armor from battle

Loving, trusting, easily deceived

Queen ★ protagonist

human young adult female

Lovely, fair

Attire: Royal robes, spinning clothes

Lonely, obedient, naive

Witch ⚔ antagonist

human elderly female

Hag-like, initially disguised as a kind old woman

Attire: Initially, simple, homely clothes; later, the Queen's royal robes

Envious, deceitful, wicked

White Duck ★ protagonist

animal adult female

Pure white plumage

Distressed, yearning for her human form

Locations 3 locations
Castle Apartments

Castle Apartments

indoor

Queen's private rooms where she spins and weaves, filled with thoughts of her husband.

Mood: lonely, sad

The Queen initially resists the witch's temptations while in her apartments.

spinning wheeltapestrieswindow overlooking the garden
Green Garden

Green Garden

outdoor daytime warm, sunny

A vibrant garden filled with trees, flowers, butterflies, bees, and insects.

Mood: inviting, deceptive

The witch coaxes the Queen into the garden with promises of beauty and joy.

singing birdsfluttering butterflieshumming beessunbeamsdew-dropsrose-leaveslily-cups
Pond in the Garden

Pond in the Garden

outdoor daytime warm, sunny

A pond of water, clear as crystal, located in the middle of the garden.

Mood: deceptive, dangerous

The witch pushes the Queen into the pond, transforming her into a white duck.

clear watercool ripples

Story DNA fairy tale · melancholy

Moral

Disobeying wise counsel, even for seemingly harmless reasons, can lead to dire consequences.

Plot Summary

A newlywed Queen is left alone when her King goes to war, with strict instructions to stay within the castle and avoid strangers. A wicked witch, disguised as a kind old woman, tempts the lonely Queen to venture into the garden and then to bathe in a pond. Despite her initial hesitation, the Queen disobeys her husband's warnings, and as she enters the water, the witch transforms her into a white duck and assumes her identity. The story ends with the King returning and unknowingly embracing the deceptive witch.

Themes

deceptionobedience vs. temptationloss of innocencethe nature of evil

Emotional Arc

joy to sorrow

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: direct address to reader (implied through moralizing tone), contrast (beauty vs. evil)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: tragic
Magic: witchcraft, magical transformation (human to animal), magical disguise
the white duck (innocence transformed and trapped)the garden (temptation and false paradise)the pond (the trap)

Cultural Context

Origin: English (Andrew Lang's collection, likely from European oral tradition)
Era: timeless fairy tale

Andrew Lang's collections were compilations of folk and fairy tales from various European and global sources, often adapted for a Victorian English audience. This particular tale reflects common European folklore motifs of deceptive witches and magical transformations.

Plot Beats (10)

  1. A King and Princess marry happily, but the King must leave for war.
  2. The King warns his Queen to stay in the castle, avoid strangers, and beware of strange women.
  3. The Queen, lonely, stays in her apartments, but an old woman approaches her window.
  4. The old woman, a disguised witch, flatters the Queen and coaxes her to come into the garden.
  5. The Queen, despite her promise, rationalizes that a short walk in the garden would be harmless and follows the witch.
  6. In the garden, the witch suggests the Queen bathe in a clear pond, citing the warm day.
  7. The Queen again hesitates but decides to bathe, believing no harm will come of it.
  8. As the Queen enters the water, the witch shoves her, transforms her into a white duck, and takes her form.
  9. The witch, disguised as the Queen, awaits the King's return.
  10. The King returns, and the witch embraces him, successfully deceiving him.

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