The Wizard King

by Andrew Lang · from The Yellow Fairy Book

fairy tale cautionary tale solemn Ages 8-14 738 words 4 min read
Cover: The Wizard King
Original Story 738 words · 4 min read

Wizard King was seen in the air under

the form of some unknown bird, exclaiming as he flew off that he would

never forgive either his son or the Fairy the cruel wrong they had

done him.

Everyone entreated the Fairy to settle in the kingdom where she now

was, to which she consented. She built herself a magnificent palace,

to which she transported her books and fairy secrets, and where she

enjoyed the sight of the perfect happiness she had helped to bestow on

the entire royal family.

THE NIXY[15]

There was once upon a time a miller who was very well off, and had as

much money and as many goods as he knew what to do with. But sorrow

comes in the night, and the miller all of a sudden became so poor that

at last he could hardly call the mill in which he sat his own. He

wandered about all day full of despair and misery, and when he lay

down at night he could get no rest, but lay awake all night sunk in

sorrowful thoughts.

One morning he rose up before dawn and went outside, for he thought

his heart would be lighter in the open air. As he wandered up and down

on the banks of the mill-pond he heard a rustling in the water, and

when he looked near he saw a white woman rising up from the waves.

He realised at once that this could be none other than the nixy of the

mill-pond, and in his terror he didn’t know if he should fly away or

remain where he was. While he hesitated the nixy spoke, called him by

his name, and asked him why he was so sad.

When the miller heard how friendly her tone was, he plucked up heart

and told her how rich and prosperous he had been all his life up till

now, when he didn’t know what he was to do for want and misery.

Then the nixy spoke comforting words to him, and promised that she

would make him richer and more prosperous than he had ever been in his

life before, if he would give her in return the youngest thing in his

house.

The miller thought she must mean one of his puppies or kittens, so

promised the nixy at once what she asked, and returned to his mill

full of hope. On the threshold he was greeted by a servant with the

news that his wife had just given birth to a boy.

[Footnote 15: From the German. Kletke.]

The poor miller was much horrified by these tidings, and went in to

his wife with a heavy heart to tell her and his relations of the fatal

bargain he had just struck with the nixy. ‘I would gladly give up all

the good fortune she promised me,’ he said, ‘if I could only save my

child.’ But no one could think of any advice to give him, beyond

taking care that the child never went near the mill-pond.

[Illustration: The miller sees the nixy of the mill-pond]

So the boy throve and grew big, and in the meantime all prospered with

the miller, and in a few years he was richer than he had ever been

before. But all the same he did not enjoy his good fortune, for he

could not forget his compact with the nixy, and he knew that sooner or

later she would demand his fulfilment of it. But year after year went

by, and the boy grew up and became a great hunter, and the lord of the

land took him into his service, for he was as smart and bold a hunter

as you would wish to see. In a short time he married a pretty young

wife, and lived with her in great peace and happiness.

One day when he was out hunting a hare sprang up at his feet, and ran

for some way in front of him in the open field. The hunter pursued it

hotly for some time, and at last shot it dead. Then he proceeded to

skin it, never noticing that he was close to the mill-pond, which from

childhood up he had been taught to avoid. He soon finished the

skinning, and went to the water to wash the blood off his hands. He

had hardly dipped them in the pond when the


Story DNA

Moral

Be careful what you promise, for the consequences may be dire and unexpected.

Plot Summary

A once-rich miller, now destitute, makes a desperate bargain with a nixy for renewed wealth, promising her the 'youngest thing in his house'. He unknowingly promises his newborn son. Despite his efforts to keep his son away from the mill-pond, the grown-up son, a hunter, is eventually lured to the water to wash his hands after a hunt, where the nixy claims him, fulfilling the tragic pact.

Themes

recklessnessconsequencesfate vs. free willsacrifice

Emotional Arc

despair to hope to dread to tragic climax

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: foreshadowing, direct address to reader (implied through moral tone)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: tragic
Magic: nixy (water spirit), supernatural bargain
the mill-pond (forbidden, dangerous place)the 'youngest thing' (innocence, unexpected sacrifice)

Cultural Context

Origin: German
Era: timeless fairy tale

Nixies (or Neck/Nix) are prevalent in Germanic and Scandinavian folklore, often associated with rivers, lakes, and ponds, and known for luring people to their deaths or demanding sacrifices.

Plot Beats (13)

  1. A wealthy miller loses all his fortune and falls into deep despair.
  2. He wanders by the mill-pond at dawn and encounters a white woman, the nixy.
  3. The nixy, knowing his name and sorrow, offers him renewed wealth.
  4. In exchange, the nixy demands the 'youngest thing in his house'.
  5. The miller, assuming it's an animal, readily agrees.
  6. He returns home to learn his wife has just given birth to a son.
  7. Horrified, the miller confesses his bargain to his wife and family.
  8. They decide to keep the child away from the mill-pond at all costs.
  9. The miller regains his wealth, but lives in constant fear of the nixy's claim.
  10. The son grows up to be a successful hunter, unaware of his father's pact.
  11. One day, while hunting, the son shoots a hare near the mill-pond.
  12. He goes to the mill-pond to wash the blood from his hands, despite being warned against it his whole life.
  13. As he dips his hands in the water, the nixy claims him.

Characters

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Wizard King

magical creature ageless male

Appears as an unknown bird

Unidentified bird form

Cruel, unforgiving

✦

Fairy

magical creature ageless female

None specified

Attire: Richly embroidered gown

Open spellbook

Kind, helpful

👤

Miller

human adult male

None specified

Attire: Simple tunic and trousers

Worried face etched with guilt

Greedy, regretful

✦

Nixy

magical creature ageless female

White woman rising from the waves

Attire: None specified, implied to be partially or fully nude

Pale hand emerging from the water

Deceptive, demanding

👤

Hunter

human young adult male

Smart and bold

Attire: Hunting leathers, green tunic

Bloodied hands at the water's edge

Brave, unsuspecting

👤

Hunter's Wife

human young adult female

Pretty

Attire: Peasant dress

Simple wedding ring

Peaceful

Locations

Mill-pond bank

outdoor dawn

The banks of a mill-pond, where the miller wanders in despair before dawn.

Mood: desolate

The miller encounters the nixy and makes a fateful bargain.

mill-pond bank open air water

Mill

indoor

The miller's mill, initially prosperous but later falling into disrepair.

Mood: desperate

The miller receives news of his son's birth and realizes the implications of his deal.

mill threshold servant

Open field near the mill-pond

outdoor

An open field close to the mill-pond, where the hunter chases a hare.

Mood: careless

The hunter unwittingly fulfills the bargain by washing his hands in the mill-pond.

hare open field mill-pond