PRINCE CHAFFINCH
by Anthony R. Montalba · from Fairy Tales From All Nations
Adapted Version
Once, a kind king and queen lived. They wished for a baby. Fairy Grumble-do was their fairy. She grumbled a lot. "Children are noisy!" she said. But she gave them a prince. They named him Prince Chaffinch.
A good coal-man lived near the palace. He had a daughter named Gracious. He wanted her to be safe. He asked Fairy Bonbon for help. Fairy Bonbon was very kind. She took Gracious to live with her.
Prince Chaffinch and Gracious were best friends. They played each day. They loved each other very much.
Fairy Grumble-do saw this. She was not happy. She used her magic. She turned Chaffinch into a chaffinch bird. She turned Gracious into a kite bird. Now they were apart.
As a bird, Chaffinch was sad. Fairy Bonbon helped him. She gave him a magic dog. The dog was his friend.
Chaffinch flew far. He found Gracious. She was stuck in a tall, dark tower. A mean king named Koloquintius kept her there. He was big and scary.
Chaffinch visited Gracious each day. The dog helped him talk to her. They were happy to see each other.
Koloquintius found out. He tried to catch Chaffinch. Chaffinch and the dog ran away. They hid in the high mountains.
Chaffinch asked Fairy Bonbon for help. She gave him a magic stick and candy. "Use these," she said.
Chaffinch went back. He faced the big army. He waved the magic stick. The soldiers became small children. Chaffinch shared his candy with them. They were happy and followed him.
Koloquintius saw Chaffinch. He became small too. He was now a tiny dwarf. He had to help Gracious.
Chaffinch saved Gracious from the tower. They were so happy. They went home to their family.
Fairy Grumble-do still grumbled. But Fairy Bonbon helped them. Chaffinch and Gracious got married.
They became king and queen. They were kind and happy. They had many children. Kindness and love help you be happy. And they lived happy ever after.
Original Story
PRINCE CHAFFINCH.
[French.]
here was once a king and queen who ruled with the greatest kindness and simplicity imaginable; and their subjects were just such good folks as themselves, so that both parties agreed very well. As, however, there is no condition in the world which has not its cares and sorrows, so also this king and queen were not free from them; in fact, the peace of their lives was considerably disturbed by a fairy, who had patronised them from their earliest years. Fairy Grumble-do—that was her name—was incessantly finding fault, would repeat the same words a hundred times a day, and grumbled at every thing that was doing, and at all that had been done. Setting aside this little failing, she was in all other respects the best soul in the world, and it gave her the greatest satisfaction when she could oblige or serve anybody.
The union of the royal pair had hitherto proved childless, but whenever they besought Fairy Grumble-do to give them children, she invariably replied:—"Children! what do you want children for? To hear them squalling from morning till night, till you, as well as I, will be ready to jump out of our skins with the noise? What's the use of children? Nobody knows what to do with them; they only bring care and trouble!"
Some such remarks were all the king and queen got for their entreaties; and the fairy's ill-humour, and the snuffling tone in which she uttered these speeches made them quite unbearable. The good king and queen, however, never lost their patience, so that at last the fairy lost hers, and, in a pet, she all of a sudden gratified them with seven princes at a birth.
The queen remarked in her usual mild and quiet manner, that she had now a great many children, to which Fairy Grumble-do answered, snarlingly:—"Well, you wished for children, Madam queen, and now you have got them according to your wish, and in order that you may have enough of them, I shall just double the number."
No sooner said than done, and the queen brought into the world seven more princes at a birth. The royal pair were now quite in trouble; fourteen princes of the blood are, in fact, no joke; for however rich one may be, fourteen princes to nurse, educate, and establish handsomely, costs a good bit of money. Fairy Grumble-do was quite right there; fourteen princes do require a good deal of waiting on, and so she found plenty to do all day, with finding fault, and scolding first this attendant, then that nursemaid, then this servant, or that preceptor; and when she once got into the children's apartment, no one could hear himself speak, for the noise she made. Still at bottom she meant very kindly, and she promised the anxious queen that she would take good care of the princes, and one day provide for them all. Those old times were very good ones, and things were managed in royal residences with great simplicity. The young princes played all day with the children of the towns-people, because they went to the same school with them, and no one had a word to say against it, which would hardly be the case now-a-days, for kings and everybody else are grown much grander than they were then.
Quite close to the palace dwelt an honest charcoal-burner, who lived in his little cottage contentedly on what he earned by the sale of his charcoal. All his neighbours esteemed him as the worthiest man in the world, and the king himself had great confidence in his capacity, and would often ask his counsel in matters of government. He was called the coal-man throughout all the country, and no one within ten miles round would have any coals but from him, so that he had to serve every household, even those of the nobility and the fairies. Wherever he carried his coals, he was a favourite, and even little children were not afraid of him, and no one ever said to them, "Behave prettily, else the charcoal-burner will take you away." After working all day at his business, he went to his little cottage at night to rest, and to enjoy his freedom, for he was sole master in the house. His wife had been long dead, and had left him only one little daughter, called Gracious; for she was the prettiest creature in the world.
PRINCE CHAFFINCH.
He loved this child beyond all measure; and, indeed, not without reason, for a prettier little maiden could not be found on earth; in spite of the coal-smoke that enveloped her, and her poor clothing, she always appeared charming and agreeable, and no one could help loving her on account of her wonderful amiability. The king's youngest son, little Prince Chaffinch, who was as sprightly as he was pretty, was extremely attached to Gracious, preferred her to all the other children of his acquaintance, and would play with no one but her, so that they were always seen together, and indeed, they could not live without one another. Meanwhile the worthy coal-man, who felt old age approaching, grew very anxious about the fate of Gracious, after he should have ceased to live; for the partiality of the king for him did not seem to him sufficient to put him at ease about her. "The king," he would say to himself, as he pondered on the subject, "has a large family of his own, and is obliged to ask so much of the fairy for his own necessities, that he surely will not have courage to put in a good word for my child. Even if he were to promise to do so, I should not depend on him. For"—thus he ever concluded his self-conferences, "the poor king, is in fact, worse off than I am; he has fourteen to provide for; I only one. His are princes; mine is only a poor burgher maid. Mine therefore will be easier to provide for. A poor girl like her can manage to get along in the world; she stands alone; but a poor prince never; hundreds hang about him, draining him, and consuming all his substance." Now, after thinking it over and over, he grew quite unhappy at heart, and he knew not what to do. So he went one day, head and heart full of care, to a very beneficent fairy, who had always behaved very kindly to him. She was called Fairy Bonbon; she it was, who, in order to please epicures, both small and great, invented those sweets which now bear her name. When the good fairy saw the coal-man in such trouble, she asked him what ailed him; and after he had given her a highly sensible reply, she promised him in good earnest, that she would take Gracious under her own care, and desired him to bring the child to her the following Sunday.
The coal-man obeyed punctually, and when the time came he made little Gracious put on her best clothes, and the new coloured little shoes he had bought for her the day before, and set off with his dear little daughter. Gracious skipped before him, then ran back to him, and took hold of his hand, saying:—"We are going to the castle, we are going to the castle!" for her father had not told her anything further about it.
When they arrived, Fairy Bonbon received them very kindly, but notwithstanding all was so fine in the castle, and that she had so many bonbons and other nice things, Gracious could not be happy when her father went away and left her behind. For the first time in her life she began to cry, and could scarcely leave off again. This touched the fairy extremely, so that she grew quite fond of Gracious, and all who were present said:—"My daughter would not cry so if she were obliged to part from me." But in time little Gracious became reconciled to her new residence, and was so obedient and docile that the good fairy Bonbon never had occasion to reprove her, nor even to tell her twice of the same thing, so that she took great delight in her.
When her father came to visit her, the pretty child always ran to meet him, and threw herself into his arms without fearing to soil the fine clothes which the fairy had given her. After kissing and caressing her dear papa to her heart's content, she always inquired after her friend, Prince Chaffinch, and sent him her best bonbons and toys. The coal-man always carried them very conscientiously to the prince, who never failed to send his thanks and a message to say how earnestly he longed to see her once again.
Thus Gracious lived till she was twelve years old, and then Fairy Bonbon, who was extraordinarily fond of her, took her father one day into her boudoir, and desired him to be seated, as she did not like to see the old man standing up in her presence. The coal-man excused himself at first, but the fairy insisted, so that at last he was obliged to obey, although it seemed to him a very strange thing to sit down in his clothes all covered with coal-dust on a white taffeta arm-chair, and he could not think how he should manage to prevent his jacket from leaving marks on it.
At last, however, the fairy constrained him to be seated; and she then said to him, "Old friend, I love your daughter."
"Honoured madam," replied he, "you are very kind; but indeed you are much in the right, for she is a very dear child."
"I wish now to consult with you what I shall do," said the fairy; "for you must know I shall be obliged shortly to travel for a considerable time in another country."
"Ah, madam, then do have the goodness to take her along with you," rejoined the coal-man.
"That is not in my power," answered she. "I can, however, provide very well for her. Only tell me what would be most agreeable to you that I should do for her."
"Then I would most humbly beg," replied the coal-man, "that you would have the kindness to make her queen of a little kingdom, just such a one as may please your ladyship."
Though gratified by this request, the fairy represented to him, that the higher the station, the more cares and sorrows it has; but the coal-man assured her in return, that cares and sorrows are to be found everywhere, and that those of royalty are the easiest to bear.
"I do not ask of you, most gracious madam fairy," continued he, "to make me a king. I prefer remaining a charcoal-burner; that is my trade, which I understand, and as for the trade of royalty, I do not think that I understand that at all. But Gracious is still young, and she can learn it, I'll be bound for it; it cannot, after all, be so very difficult, for I see every day that people manage it one way or another."
"Well," answered Fairy Bonbon, as she dismissed him, "I will see what I can do. I must tell you beforehand, however, that Gracious will have much to suffer, and she will find it very bitter."
"Very possible, gracious Madam Bonbon," replied he. "I also have gone through many bitter things, and have not gained very much after all, so have the kindness still to make a queen of her; I ask nothing."
With these words he took leave.
Meanwhile Fairy Grumble-do had provided for almost all the fourteen princes. She had sent some of them out into the wide world to seek their fortunes, whereby they had at last succeeded in obtaining kingdoms, and the rest she had wedded to rich princesses, so that at least they were safe from want. For little Prince Chaffinch, as yet, however, she had done nothing; so she came one day to court in her usual agreeable humour, and found papa and mamma caressing and fondling their child.
"Ha," said she, "that is a properly spoiled young gentleman, who will never be good for anything all his days. I lay any wager he does not know A from B. Repeat me your yesterday's lesson, sir, at once, and if you miss a single word, you shall have a proper whipping."
Chaffinch immediately repeated his lesson, which, as usual, he had learnt perfectly, and went through his examination in a style which was quite wonderful for his age. The king and queen did not dare to let their gratification at this appear, for fear thereby of redoubling Madam Grumble-do's ill-humour, for she now maintained that the instruction given to the prince was not worth a farthing; that it was far too difficult and too learned for him.
She then turned to the king and queen: "Pray, what is the reason of your never having asked me to do anything for him yet? It is just your way. I have been worried into providing for all your other simpletons—they are the most stupid kings reigning; but that one, of whom something might perhaps be made, is to be spoilt by you, just because he is your nest-quackel. But I will not allow it any longer. He shall go out, and directly too. He is a fine youth, and it would be a shame to leave him any longer with you. I will not have to reproach myself with that; folks know that I am your friend, and they shall not have to say that I encourage you in your follies. Now, let us have no words about it; let us consider together what is best to be done, for I am not at all obstinate; I am always willing to listen to good advice."
The king and queen said very politely that she must decide on that, for she knew very well that her will was theirs.
"Well then," replied Fairy Grumble-do, "he must travel; travelling gives a young man a proper finish."
"Very true," said both king and queen with one voice. "But," continued the queen, "consider that the outfit of the other princes very much exhausted our coffers, and that just at present we have not the means wherewith to send out Chaffinch in a style befitting his rank. It would be very unpleasant for folks to say, 'That is the son of a king, and he travels like a poor student.'"
"So, that's your vanity, is it?" growled the fairy; "truly vanity is vastly becoming to people who have fourteen children. You say the other youths have cost you so much; then, I did nothing for them, I suppose; you leave all that out of your calculation. Pray, what did they cost you? Just their bits of meals when they were at home, and a couple of boxes full of clothes when they went on their travels. Who found all the rest? Not you, truly; it was I; but you are a pair of ungrateful creatures, so you are."
"Kind madam," answered the queen, "my husband has set down all the expenses in the account-book; you can convince yourself."
"A pretty thing, indeed," rejoined Fairy Grumble-do. "Pray, how long has it been in fashion for a king to keep a debtor-and-creditor ledger like a tailor? That sounds vastly regal, truly. What is the use of all the good counsels I have given you, if this is the way you conduct yourselves. Shame on you! However, I will not worry myself, but I will put an end to the thing at once. The youth is as giddy as a butterfly, and wherever he goes he will be telling everybody 'I am a prince and my father is a king,' Is it not so, eh?"
"Dearest madam godmamma," interposed Prince Chaffinch, "I will say nothing but what you desire me to say."
"Wait till you are asked, Master Pert!" rejoined she; "you shall say nothing at all, and I'll take care to prevent you from opening your self-sufficient beak. Only wait a moment!"
As she blustered out this, she touched him with her wand, and transformed him into the little bird which to this day bears his name. The king and queen wished to embrace him, but there was no doing that any longer now he had become so small; they could only set him on their fingers. They had scarcely time to kiss him even, for he flew off, in obedience to the fairy, who pronounced these terrible words: "Fly where thou canst; do what thou must."
The tears of the king and queen, it is true, did move Fairy Grumble-do a little, but she would not let that be seen, and merely said, "That is just like you; you are served quite rightly," and then she seated herself in her post-chaise, which was drawn by seven magpies and seven cocks, who made a shocking noise; and off she drove in a very ill-humour to the assembly of the fairies, which was held that very day.
By chance she was seated next to the kind fairy Bonbon, and as the mouth is prompt to speak about that of which the heart is full, she related to the latter all the trouble she had had in providing suitably for the fourteen princes; during which narration she did not fail to give it well to the king and queen, just as if they were present. At last she asked her colleague if she happened to have a kingdom or a princess to bestow on Prince Chaffinch.
Fairy Bonbon, notoriously the best-hearted creature in the world, who was quite averse to this incessant scolding, told her that she would willingly undertake to find one, but only on condition that Fairy Grumble-do should not interfere in it, and permit her first to put the young prince to the proof.
"Do what you please," resumed the latter, speaking more through her nose than ever—"do what you please, so that I hear no more about the matter."
She then renounced all her fairy rights over Prince Chaffinch, and then drew up a formal contract, which they both signed with their own hands in presence of the lawyer and of competent witnesses.
Bonbon, who soon perceived that her two protegé's were well suited to each other, resolved to look still closer into the matter, in order to proceed the more securely, and to make Gracious truly happy. But she was much pressed for time as the day of her departure was irrevocably fixed, and was rapidly approaching. She had therefore to devise some means by which the two might have an opportunity of working out their own destiny by faith and truth. The first thing she did, therefore, was to catch Chaffinch, whose natural sprightliness caused him to delight greatly in flying about, to shut him up in a cage, and bring him to her castle.
As soon as the young enchanted prince beheld Gracious he was very joyful, flapped his wings, and tried with all his strength to get out of the cage and fly to her. He was delighted, however, when she said to him, "Good morrow, my little bird; dear, how beautiful you are!" Yet he felt grieved at the same time that he could only answer her by his twittering, but he did that as agreeably as he could, and made every demonstration of tenderness that a bird could. This greatly touched Gracious, though she did not in the least suspect the truth; and she said, quite unreservedly to Bonbon, that she had always been particularly fond of chaffinches; at which the kind fairy smiled, and made her a present of the enchanted prince, on condition of her taking care of him as of the apple of her eye. This Gracious willingly promised, and did so too with the greatest satisfaction.
When the day came for the fairy to depart, she said to Gracious, "Take great care of the chaffinch, and never let him out of the cage; for were he to fly away, I should be extremely displeased."
She then entered her carriage, which was made of silver-paper. Her castle, her garden, her domestics and her horses, all went off through the air with her, and Gracious now remained alone and sorrowful in her little house of porcelain, which assuredly was very pretty; but what avails prettiness when one is sad? The garden was constantly full of cherries, gooseberries, oranges, and, in short, of all imaginable fruits, always ripe and well-flavoured; the oven, of biscuits, tea-cakes, and macaroons; the store-room, of sweetmeats and confectionery of all kinds: and all these good things might well have consoled her, but she could not enjoy them, for the little chaffinch slept unbrokenly in his cage. She visited him every five minutes, but still he did not wake, and she mentally reproached the fairy with having robbed her of such sweet consolation. At last, after trying vainly every means of awaking him, she resolved to examine him closer, to see if she could not discover the fairy's secret.
It is true she did not arrive at this resolution without that uneasiness and self-reproach which one always feels when acting contrary to an express command. She even opened the cage several times, and then shut it again suddenly; but at last she blamed herself for her timidity, summoned courage, and took the bird in her pretty little hand. No sooner was he out of the cage than he flew out and perched on the window-frame, which most unfortunately she had not closed, so little had she thought on what might occur to her. Embarrassed and alarmed, she endeavoured to catch him again.
The chaffinch flew into the garden, and she jumped out of the window, which fortunately was on the ground-floor; but such was her anxiety that she would have sprung out, had it been on the fourth story. Calling him by the prettiest and tenderest names, she sought to entice him, but whenever she fancied she would certainly catch him, off he flew, from the garden to the field, and on towards a great forest, which filled her with despair, for she knew perfectly well how useless it would be to hunt after a chaffinch in a forest; when suddenly, the bird, of which she had never lost sight, turned into the prince as she had seen him when she was a child.
"What! is it you, Prince Chaffinch," exclaimed she,—"and you fly me?"
"Yes, it is I, lovely Gracious," replied he; "but a supernatural force obliges me to keep far from thee; I desire to approach thee, and cannot."
They now indeed perceived that they were always at least four paces distant from each other. Gracious, enraptured at again seeing the prince, forgot how disobedient she had been to the fairy, and her fears grew calm, in proportion as love took possession of her heart.
As neither of them dared return to the little dwelling which they had left, nor indeed did they know the way back, they went into the wood, gathered nuts, and asked each other a hundred questions as to what had occurred since they last met. They then rejoiced at their good fortune in being again together, and refreshed themselves with the hope of now remaining near each other. At last they saw a peasant's hut, and went to it to request shelter for the night, that they might resolve on what they should do the next day.
The prince, when they got very near to it, said to Gracious, "Wait here under this great tree, whilst I go and reconnoitre the house and its inhabitants."
When he got there, he found a woman who was sweeping before her door, and of her he inquired if she would receive him and Gracious for the night into her house.
The old woman answered: "You seem to me to be two disobedient children, who have run away from your parents, and do not deserve to meet with compassion."
Chaffinch was, to say the truth, a little embarrassed by this remark, but he said all sorts of flattering things to her, and offered to labour for her; in short, he spoke like a lover willing to make any sacrifice for his beloved, for he began to fear that Gracious would have to pass the night in the wood, exposed to the wolves, of which he had heard such terrible stories.
Whilst he was trying to persuade the hard-hearted old woman, it happened that the giant Koloquintius, the king, or to speak more accurately, the tyrant of the whole district, who was hunting in the wood, rode past the very spot where Gracious was waiting. He thought her surprisingly charming, and was a good deal astonished that she did not think him equally so, nor appear to be enchanted at seeing him. Without saying a word to her, he desired one of his suite to lift up the little maiden and place her under his arm, which being done, he set spurs to his horse, and galloped off to his capital city.
The cries and lamentations of Gracious did not move him in the least, and she now—when it was too late—repented of her disobedience. Her cries disturbed Prince Chaffinch and the old woman in their conversation; the former ran towards the spot where he had left Gracious; but who can describe his grief, when he saw her under the giant's arm! Had he been there at the right moment, he would have endeavoured at the risk of his life to prevent that deed of violence, but now he had nothing to do but to follow her. But night overtook him, he lost sight of her, and quite exhausted, he sat down to give free course to his grief and tears.
As he sat, he perceived, close to him, a little light, like that of a glow-worm. At first he paid no attention to it, but the light grew larger and larger, and at last changed into a female clothed in a brown garment, who said to him: "Console thyself, Chaffinch, do not give way to despair; take this flask, which is made of a gourd, and this shepherd's pouch; thou wilt find them always filled with whatever thou desirest to eat and drink. Take also this hazel-rod, and when thou hast need of me, put it under thy left foot and call me; I will always come to thy assistance. This little dog is commanded never to leave thee, thou may'st want him. Farewell, Chaffinch. I am the kind Bonbon."
Chaffinch was already greatly moved by these gifts, but when he heard the name which Gracious had so often pronounced, he sank at the fairy's feet, embraced her knees, and cried: "Ah, beneficent lady, Gracious has been carried off, how is it possible that your Highness did not hasten to deliver her?"
"I know what has befallen her," replied Bonbon,—"but she was disobedient, I want not to know anything about her; thou alone must aid her."
At these words, the light and the fairy disappeared, and Chaffinch sat in such darkness that he could not see his hand when he held it before his eyes. He was however, much comforted by thinking that he could now be of assistance to Gracious, though fear and anxiety still tormented him greatly, and his new friend, the little dog, was unable by all its caresses to divert him.
At last, the longed-for day dawned, and he was now able to continue his wanderings. Towards evening he arrived at the chief city, where he found everybody talking only of Gracious' beauty, and of Koloquintius' passion for her. It was said that the giant was very shortly to marry her, and that he had already commenced building a palace for the new queen. This news cut little Chaffinch to the heart.
When the people with whom he was speaking, saw his shepherd's pouch, they said, "This is a handsome little shepherd, why should he not tend the king's sheep? His majesty is in want of a shepherd, and would no doubt confer that high office upon him."
The desire of being near Gracious determined Chaffinch to take this hint. He therefore presented himself before Koloquintius, who regarded him attentively: as he only asked for courteous treatment, and required no wages, the king appointed him to be his own private shepherd. His new office did not, however, bring him into the vicinity of Gracious, so that he did not gain much thereby. He only learned that Koloquintius was very melancholy because Gracious did not respond to his love, and this comforted him a little.
Some days after, as he was following his sheep, he saw a state carriage, attended by twelve negroes on horseback, with drawn swords, quit the palace, and in this carriage sat Gracious. Little Chaffinch heroically threw himself in the way of the horses, held his shepherd's staff before them, and thundered out with his feeble voice, "Wretches! whither go you?"
When Gracious saw her Chaffinch in such great peril, she fainted, and he also lost his senses. When he came to himself, he seized his hazel wand,—instantly the good Bonbon stood beside him.
"Ah, kind lady!" said he, "Gracious is lost, perhaps already dead!"
"No," replied the Fairy, "Koloquintius is only sending her to the tower because he is furious at her coldness to him, and her fidelity to thee. Consider how thou may'st get thither also; think for thyself. I will assist thee; only I cannot change thee into a bird, because thou hast already been one; at all events Gracious will have much to suffer, for the tower is a terrible prison, but it serves her quite right,—why was she disobedient?"
Thereupon she vanished.
The prince, in great distress, conducted (that is, his little dog did it for him) the king's sheep along the road which the carriage that conveyed Gracious had taken, and he shortly came within sight of the terrible tower, which stood in the midst of a great plain, and had neither windows nor doors, only a small aperture at the top; it could only be entered by a subterranean passage, the entrance to which was concealed in a neighbouring mountain, which it was necessary to point out to those who were unacquainted with it. Prince Chaffinch was very glad that he had received such a clever little dog from the fairy, for it did all his business for him, whilst he kept his eyes constantly fixed on the tower. The more he considered, the more he was convinced of the impossibility of getting into it; but love, which conquers all difficulties, at last inspired him with a plan.
After he had lamented a thousand times that he could not again be a bird, he besought the good fairy Bonbon, to change him into a paper kite. She granted his request, and conferred on his little dog the power of effecting the transformation; he barked three times, took the hazel-rod in his mouth, and touched the prince with it, who now became a paper kite, with power to resume his own form as occasion might require. Then, by the aid of his faithful dog, the prince succeeded in first reaching the top of the tower, and then getting within it to Gracious.
It was no small delight to her to hear the assurances of his love, nor was it a less one to him to hear the same from her, and gratefully did he express his acknowledgments—for, in spite of his altered form, he still retained his speech. The pleasures of this conversation would have caused him to forget altogether that he could not remain for ever in the tower, and that he must feed his flock, if the little dog, more faithful to duty than he, had not pulled the string to which he was fastened, just at the right moment.
Chaffinch no sooner reached the ground, than he resumed his own figure, and drove the flock back again to the royal sheepfold; but his whole thought was on the pleasure of flying to his dear Gracious, which caused him to be greatly vexed whenever the wind blew too strongly for him to be able to ascend, and Gracious shared in his grief.
Thus they went on for some time; but as there are always to be found people who interfere in what does not concern them, others who want to know everything, and still more, others who are always striving to show themselves very obliging to the great and rich; it was soon observed by some of these, that the kite very often descended from the dark tower. Koloquintius was informed of it; he instantly went thither, in order to punish the audacious persons who dared to convey letters in this manner to Gracious, for it never struck him that the kite could serve for any other purpose. Chaffinch and Gracious were just in the most interesting conversation, when they were disturbed from it by the vehemence with which the faithful dog pulled back the prince, for Koloquintius ran up to him, exclaiming vehemently: "Where is the shepherd, where is the shepherd? I must kill him, because he has not informed me of what is going on here."
The dog, fearing that Koloquintius might take the string out of his mouth, and so get the prince into his own hands, let the kite fly, which was carried far away by the wind, which happened to be very high, and catching up the gourd flask, and the shepherd's pouch, ran off to his master, whom he loved very much, and who now had resumed his own figure. Favoured by the approaching night, they concealed themselves in the mountains, whilst Koloquintius, foaming with rage, was obliged to drive his sheep home himself. In order that no one should approach little Gracious, he caused his whole army to draw up on the plain, and commanded them to watch day and night, that no one whatsoever should approach the tower.
Prince Chaffinch beheld all this from the high mountain where he and the dog had placed themselves, and again appealed to Bonbon for assistance. She immediately appeared, but when he begged her to give him an army, wherewith to combat that of Koloquintius, she vanished without saying a word, and only left him a rod, and a great bag of sugar-plums. When one is sad, and one's heart is heavy, one is not much inclined to take a joke; and at first Chaffinch thought she meant to make a jest of him; but when he reflected how kindly she had always acted towards him, his confidence in her returned, and he took the bag of sugar-plums under his arm, and the rod in his right hand, and accompanied by his faithful dog, advanced valiantly to meet the foe. As he came nearer to them, he remarked that they grew gradually less and less, and that their lines contracted; and when he got so near that they could hear him speak, he perceived, to his no small astonishment, that all these formidable soldiers, and moustached grenadiers, had shrunk into children of four years old, so that he cried aloud to them:—"Yield this moment, or you shall all be whipped." Then the whole army began to cry, and ran away, pursued by the dog, who soon threw them into complete disorder. To as many as he could catch, Chaffinch gave sugar-plums, whereupon they immediately swore to obey him.
Encouraged by their example, the others soon returned, and they one and all submitted to Chaffinch; so that Koloquintius was now left without an army to defend him, whilst the prince had a formidable one; for as soon as they submitted voluntarily to him, they all recovered their former size and strength.
By this time Koloquintius arrived; but he no sooner saw Prince Chaffinch than he likewise lost his giant form and strength, and became not merely a little child like the others, but a very little dwarf, with crooked legs. The prince caused a dragoon's cap, and a gay-coloured garment, with hanging sleeves, to be made for him, and destined him to be train-bearer to Gracious, and to attend upon her in her apartments.
After this great victory the first care of Chaffinch was to hasten to the dark tower, in order to set his beloved free. After so many sufferings and sorrows, her joy at finding herself again free was indescribable. As they reached the city, Fairy Bonbon and Fairy Grumble-do also arrived there from opposite directions. The two lovers now expressed to them their warmest gratitude, and requested them to decide their fate. Fairy Grumble-do replied:—
"I assure you I have never troubled my head about you; I should have been a fool indeed to concern myself with such light ware. You are nothing to me, for the rest of your blessed family give me quite enough to do without you. Such a parcel of relations as belong to Prince Chaffinch, never did king's son, in all the wide world, possess before; a pretty brood truly."
"Dear madam and sister," interposed Fairy Bonbon, in the gentlest manner, "you know our agreement; only have the kindness to cause the king and queen, and the worthy coal-man, to come hither, and I will undertake the rest."
"So," rejoined Madam Grumble-do, "I am to be wedding coachman—am I?"
"Oh! not so, dear madam and sister," answered Bonbon; "you have only to say if it is not agreeable to you, and I will go myself."
"A pretty errand—a dog's errand," snarled Madam Grumble-do, who nevertheless ordered her car to turn into a coach, and to bring thither the desired guests. Whilst Bonbon, Gracious, and Chaffinch, were caressing each other, Fairy Grumble-do met the Court-dwarf, Koloquintius, who came in her way just at the right moment,—for every one was welcome to her so that she had some one to scold,—and she gave it him prettily on the text of his vanity and self-love.
"Now you are punished," said she, "and nobody pities you; but, on the contrary, you are the laughingstock of all your former subjects; that, however, you have always been, though formerly they ridiculed you secretly, and in whispers; now, however, they do it loudly, and in the market-place; it will do you a deal of good."
So she continued to abuse him till the arrival of the king and queen, when she let him go and turned to them.
"You need not trouble yourselves to thank me for anything; it was not I who sent for you, and indeed I am very sorry you are come, for now there will be no getting rid of you again. Good counsel would be thrown away upon you now, you irrational creatures."
She then perceived the old coal-man, and exclaimed:—"A pretty father-in-law that, for a prince."
The coal-man was not the sort of person to take such an address pleasantly, and would soon have given her a rough answer, but that the good Fairy Bonbon came up and begged the company to walk into the house. But Fairy Grumble-do did not like that neither; the general joy made her peevish.
Gracious embraced her dear father a thousand times, who all this while had not suffered any privation, for Bonbon had made him a present of the porcelain house in which she had often received the king and queen. These fondled their little Chaffinch, and willingly consented to his marriage with Gracious, when proposed to them by Bonbon. The subjects of Koloquintius were absolved from the oath they had sworn to him, and acknowledged Prince Chaffinch as their lawful monarch. Thus did the pretty prince obtain a fine kingdom and a charming wife.
Chaffinch and Gracious long governed in peace and happiness, and had a great many dear children, who also became kings and queens, for a good and pretty daughter makes not alone her own happiness, but also that of her parents, and her husband.
Story DNA
Moral
True love and kindness can overcome obstacles, and inner worth is more valuable than external status.
Plot Summary
Prince Chaffinch and Gracious, a charcoal-burner's daughter, fall in love as children. Fairy Grumble-do, out of spite, transforms them into a chaffinch and a kite, separating them. Chaffinch, aided by Fairy Bonbon and a magical dog, discovers Gracious imprisoned by the tyrannical Koloquintius. Through perseverance and Bonbon's magical gifts, Chaffinch defeats Koloquintius and his army, frees Gracious, and they are reunited. They marry, rule Koloquintius's kingdom, and live happily ever after, proving that love and kindness triumph over adversity.
Themes
Emotional Arc
suffering to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Reflects a pre-industrial society where social status was rigid but could be overcome by magic or exceptional circumstances. The 'grumbling fairy' trope is a common character type in folklore.
Plot Beats (14)
- A kind king and queen are childless and constantly nagged by Fairy Grumble-do, who eventually grants them fourteen princes.
- A good charcoal-burner, worried about his beautiful daughter Gracious's future, seeks help from Fairy Bonbon, who takes Gracious into her care.
- The youngest prince, Chaffinch, and Gracious become inseparable friends, falling deeply in love.
- Fairy Grumble-do, envious of Bonbon's kindness and the children's happiness, transforms Chaffinch into a chaffinch and Gracious into a kite, separating them.
- Chaffinch, in bird form, is given a magical dog by Bonbon to help him.
- Chaffinch discovers Gracious, also in bird form, imprisoned in a dark tower by the tyrannical Koloquintius, who has taken over her father's kingdom.
- Chaffinch, with the dog's help, communicates with Gracious by flying to the tower daily, transforming into a shepherd to tend Koloquintius's flock.
- Koloquintius discovers the shepherd's visits and attempts to capture him, forcing Chaffinch and the dog to flee to the mountains.
- Chaffinch appeals to Fairy Bonbon for help, who provides him with a magical rod and a bag of sugar-plums instead of an army.
- Chaffinch confronts Koloquintius's army, who, upon his approach, shrink into children and are easily defeated and won over with sugar-plums.
- Koloquintius himself shrinks into a dwarf upon seeing Chaffinch, and is made Gracious's train-bearer.
- Chaffinch frees Gracious from the tower, and they return to the city where both fairies and their families await.
- Fairy Grumble-do continues her grumbling, but Fairy Bonbon orchestrates the marriage of Chaffinch and Gracious.
- Chaffinch and Gracious marry, rule Koloquintius's former kingdom, and live a long and happy life with many children.
Characters
Fairy Grumble-do ◆ supporting
A fairy, likely of average height, with an overall appearance that suggests perpetual displeasure. Her features are probably sharp or pinched, reflecting her critical nature.
Attire: Her attire would likely be practical and perhaps a bit disheveled, rather than elegant or ethereal, in muted colors like grey, brown, or dark green, suggesting her no-nonsense, critical personality. Perhaps a simple, sturdy gown of homespun fabric.
Wants: To find fault and complain, but ultimately, to help those she patronizes in her own peculiar way.
Flaw: Her incessant grumbling and ill-humour often alienate others and make her intentions misunderstood.
She remains consistently grumpy but ultimately assists the protagonists, showing her underlying good nature without changing her core personality.
Grumpy, fault-finding, critical, secretly kind, irritable.
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An elderly fairy woman with a perpetually sour expression, thin lips, and sharp, critical eyes. Her hair is a messy bun of dull grey. She wears a practical, dark green homespun gown with a simple, unadorned belt. Her posture is slightly hunched, and she holds her hands clasped in front of her, as if ready to complain. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The King ◆ supporting
A kind and simple man, likely of average build and height, reflecting the unpretentious nature of his rule.
Attire: Simple, yet regal attire appropriate for a French monarch of a simpler era, perhaps a velvet doublet in a muted color like deep blue or forest green, with modest embroidery, paired with breeches and polished leather shoes. Not overly ostentatious.
Wants: To rule kindly, to have children, and to ensure the well-being of his family and subjects.
Flaw: Perhaps too trusting or easily swayed by the fairy's whims, and initially overwhelmed by the number of his children.
Remains a consistent figure of kindness and patience, ultimately finding joy in his family's happiness.
Kind, simple, patient, good-natured, trusting.
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A middle-aged king of average build, with a kind, gentle face and neatly trimmed grey-streaked brown hair and beard. He wears a deep blue velvet doublet with subtle silver embroidery, white linen shirt, and dark breeches. His posture is calm and dignified, with a slight, patient smile. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Queen ◆ supporting
A mild and quiet woman, likely of graceful build, reflecting her gentle nature.
Attire: A modest yet elegant gown, perhaps in a soft pastel color like lavender or pale blue, made of fine silk or brocade, with minimal ornamentation, reflecting her quiet dignity and the kingdom's simplicity.
Wants: To have children and to ensure their well-being.
Flaw: Her anxiety about her numerous children and their future.
Remains a consistent figure of grace and patience, ultimately finding joy in her family's happiness.
Mild, quiet, patient, gentle, anxious (initially about her children).
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A middle-aged queen of graceful build, with a serene, gentle face, soft brown eyes, and light brown hair styled in a modest, elegant coiffure. She wears a pale lavender silk gown with a simple, high neckline and long sleeves, unadorned save for the rich fabric. Her posture is composed and graceful, with a gentle, reassuring smile. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Coal-man ◆ supporting
An honest, hardworking man, showing the signs of age and his profession. Likely of sturdy build from his physical labor, but beginning to show the weariness of old age.
Attire: Practical, sturdy peasant clothing appropriate for a charcoal-burner in France: a coarse linen shirt, dark wool trousers, a leather apron, and sturdy leather boots. His clothes would be well-worn and likely smudged with charcoal.
Wants: To provide for his daughter, Gracious, and ensure her future security.
Flaw: His anxiety about Gracious's future, despite his practical wisdom.
His anxiety is resolved when Gracious marries Prince Chaffinch, securing her future and his own comfort.
Honest, hardworking, esteemed, anxious (about his daughter), independent, wise (in practical matters).
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An elderly, sturdy charcoal-burner with a kind, honest face, deeply lined and slightly smudged with charcoal dust. His grey hair is a bit disheveled, and he has a short, grey beard. He wears a coarse, dark grey linen shirt, dark wool trousers, a well-worn leather apron, and sturdy brown leather boots. His posture is slightly stooped from labor, but he stands with dignity. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Gracious ★ protagonist
The prettiest creature in the world, charming and agreeable, despite her humble circumstances. She is likely of slender build, with an inherent grace.
Attire: Poor but clean clothing, likely a simple, practical peasant dress of homespun linen in muted colors like cream or pale blue, perhaps with a simple apron, but always appearing charming and agreeable.
Wants: To live contentedly and to be with Prince Chaffinch.
Flaw: Her vulnerability due to her humble birth and her father's anxieties about her future.
She endures separation and imprisonment but is ultimately rescued and marries Prince Chaffinch, becoming a queen and living happily.
Pretty, amiable, charming, agreeable, loving, resilient.
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A young woman of slender build with a wonderfully amiable and pretty face, kind brown eyes, and long, warm brown hair simply tied back with a ribbon. She wears a clean, simple cream linen peasant dress with a pale blue apron, and sturdy, well-worn leather shoes. Her posture is graceful and her expression is gentle and loving. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Prince Chaffinch ★ protagonist
As sprightly as he is pretty, suggesting a lively and attractive young man. He is likely of athletic or slender build, reflecting his youthful energy.
Attire: Initially, simple clothing suitable for playing with common children, but later, more regal attire befitting a prince, though not overly grand, reflecting the kingdom's simplicity. Perhaps a well-tailored tunic and breeches in rich but not ostentatious colors, like forest green or deep red, with practical boots.
Wants: To be with Gracious, to rescue her, and to overcome obstacles to their union.
Flaw: Initially, his youth and lack of military power against Koloquintius.
He transforms from a playful boy into a valiant prince, overcoming challenges to rescue his beloved and ultimately becoming a king.
Sprightly, pretty, attached, loyal, valiant, resourceful, confident.
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A young man of slender, athletic build with a sprightly and pretty face, bright blue eyes, and neatly kept light brown hair. He wears a well-tailored forest green tunic with simple silver buttons, dark breeches, and practical brown leather boots. He holds a slender wooden rod in his right hand and a large, plain canvas bag of sugar-plums tucked under his left arm. His posture is confident and valiant, with a determined expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Fairy Bonbon ◆ supporting
A very beneficent fairy, suggesting a beautiful and benevolent appearance. She is likely graceful and ethereal.
Attire: Ethereal and beautiful, perhaps a flowing gown of shimmering silk in soft, light colors like rose, gold, or sky blue, adorned with delicate floral patterns or subtle sparkles, reflecting her sweetness and beneficence.
Wants: To help those in need, especially Prince Chaffinch and Gracious, and to ensure their happiness.
Flaw: None explicitly stated, but perhaps her gentle nature makes her less confrontational than Grumble-do.
Remains consistently benevolent, guiding and assisting the protagonists to their happy ending.
Beneficent, kind, gentle, helpful, wise, serene.
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A beautiful, ageless fairy woman with a serene, gentle face, warm, compassionate blue eyes, and long, flowing golden hair. She wears a shimmering, flowing gown of pale rose silk, adorned with delicate, iridescent floral patterns. Her posture is graceful and ethereal, with her hands gently clasped. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Koloquintius ⚔ antagonist
Initially a formidable giant, then briefly a child, and finally a very little dwarf with crooked legs. His initial giant form would be imposing and strong, his dwarf form small and misshapen.
Attire: Initially, likely military attire befitting a tyrannical ruler, perhaps dark and imposing. As a dwarf, he is forced to wear a dragoon's cap and a gay-colored garment with hanging sleeves, a costume of humiliation.
Wants: To rule, to possess Gracious, and to maintain his power and vanity.
Flaw: His vanity, his self-love, and his susceptibility to Fairy Bonbon's magic, which strips him of his power and form.
Transforms from a formidable giant and tyrant into a humiliated, crooked-legged dwarf, serving as Gracious's train-bearer, losing all his power and subjects.
Tyrannical, vain, self-loving, cruel, easily enraged, cowardly (when transformed).
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A very little dwarf man with crooked legs, a small, annoyed face, a crooked nose, and sparse dark hair. He wears a bright red dragoon's cap with a tall plume, and a garish yellow and blue garment with long, hanging sleeves. His posture is hunched, and he has a humiliated, peevish expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Dog ◆ supporting
A faithful dog, likely a medium to large breed, suggesting loyalty and capability in pursuit. Perhaps a sturdy hunting dog or a loyal shepherd breed.
Attire: None, as an animal.
Wants: To assist and protect Prince Chaffinch.
Flaw: None apparent.
Remains a faithful companion, aiding in the defeat of Koloquintius's army.
Faithful, loyal, brave, obedient, effective.
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A medium-sized, sturdy dog, resembling a loyal shepherd breed, with keen brown eyes and a well-kept brown and black coat. Its posture is alert and ready, standing faithfully beside its master. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Royal Palace and Grounds
A royal residence in a French-inspired setting, characterized by simplicity and a lack of excessive grandeur compared to modern times. The grounds are open enough for young princes to play with townspeople's children.
Mood: Initially bustling and somewhat chaotic due to the fairy's grumbling and numerous children, but fundamentally kind and simple.
The setting for the birth and upbringing of the fourteen princes, and where Prince Chaffinch first forms his bond with Gracious.
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A simple, elegant French chateau, perhaps in a regional style like a manor house, with light-colored stone walls and a slate roof, surrounded by well-maintained but not overly formal gardens. Children in period clothing play freely on a grassy lawn. Soft, diffused daylight illuminates the scene, casting gentle shadows. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Charcoal-Burner's Cottage
A small, humble cottage, likely made of wood and stone, where the charcoal-burner lives contentedly. It is filled with the lingering scent of coal smoke, but kept with a sense of order and warmth.
Mood: Cozy, humble, and filled with quiet paternal love, despite the father's anxieties about his daughter's future.
The home of Gracious and her father, where the charcoal-burner ponders her future and his approaching old age.
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A rustic, small French charcoal-burner's cottage interior at night, with rough-hewn timber beams and a stone hearth. A warm, flickering fire casts dancing shadows on the simple, whitewashed plaster walls. A wooden table and two stools are visible, with a single window showing deep blue night outside. The air is thick with the implied scent of woodsmoke. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Dark Tower in the Mountains
A formidable, isolated tower situated high in the mountains, likely built of dark, rough stone. It is surrounded by a plain where an army is stationed to prevent anyone from approaching.
Mood: Foreboding, isolated, and tense, serving as a prison for Gracious and a battleground.
Gracious is imprisoned here by Koloquintius, and Prince Chaffinch confronts Koloquintius's army to rescue her.
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A stark, imposing medieval French watchtower, constructed from dark, rough-hewn granite blocks, standing isolated on a windswept mountain plateau. Jagged peaks rise in the background under a pale, overcast sky. A vast, flat plain stretches out from the tower's base, where tiny figures of soldiers are visible. The overall impression is one of desolate strength and isolation. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
The City Market-place
A bustling public square in a French town, likely paved with cobblestones, where people gather and news spreads. It is a place of public display and interaction.
Mood: Lively and public, transitioning from tense anticipation to celebratory joy, with an undercurrent of public ridicule for Koloquintius.
The site of Prince Chaffinch's triumphant return with Gracious, and where Koloquintius is publicly shamed by Fairy Grumble-do.
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A vibrant, bustling French market square in a medieval town. Cobblestone ground is visible beneath numerous townspeople in period attire. Half-timbered houses with pitched roofs line the square, and a central fountain or well serves as a gathering point. Bright, clear daylight illuminates the scene, casting sharp shadows from the buildings and people. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.