How They Bring Back the Village Of
by Carl Sandburg · from Rootabaga Stories
Adapted Version
Little Wing Tip went to visit her uncles. They lived in a happy village. Wing Tip was very excited! She came to see Uncle Bob. She came to see Uncle Joe. She also saw Uncle Tom. And Uncle Sam was there too.
The four uncles saw Wing Tip. They were very happy. Her eyes were so blue. They were blue like pretty flowers. Blue like the sky. The uncles loved her blue eyes.
Wing Tip did not listen much. But she thought her uncles were sweet. She knew she would have fun.
The uncles asked Wing Tip two things. "Where do you come from?" they asked. "Why two freckles?" they also asked.
"I like questions!" Wing Tip said. She was happy.
"I'm from Cream Puff Village," Wing Tip said. "It is a light village. It sits on a big hill. The village looks like a small hat. It is a fun place."
"Sometimes the wind blows hard," she said. "The wind picks up the village. It blows it high in the sky. The village flies far away! It goes all by itself."
"We've a Big Spool House," Wing Tip said. "It has a very long string. The string is tied to our village. It keeps us safe."
"When wind blows, string goes out. It gets very long. Then we all wind the string back. We pull our village home again. It comes back to its place."
"You can visit my village," Wing Tip said. "I will show you the Big Spool House. It is very special."
"My freckles are special marks," Wing Tip said. "My mother put them on my chin. They look like little cream puff marks. They help me remember my home. They tell me, 'Don't stay too long.' My home is important."
The uncles said, "Oh!" They were very surprised. "Your eyes are so blue!" they said again. "Blue like pretty flowers!"
Wing Tip smiled. Her uncles smiled too. They were happy to be together. Wing Tip loved her sweet uncles. She loved her special home. She would always remember it.
Original Story
How They Bring Back the Village of
Cream Puffs When the Wind Blows
It Away
A girl named Wing Tip the Spick came to the Village of Liver-and-Onions to visit her uncle and her uncle’s uncle on her mother’s side and her uncle and her uncle’s uncle on her father’s side.
It was the first time the four uncles had a chance to see their little relation, their niece. Each one of the four uncles was proud of the blue eyes of Wing Tip the Spick.
The two uncles on her mother’s side took a long deep look into her blue eyes and said, “Her eyes are so blue, such a clear light blue, they are the same as cornflowers with blue raindrops shining and dancing on silver leaves after a sun shower in any of the summer months.”
And the two uncles on her father’s side, after taking a long deep look into the eyes of Wing Tip the Spick, said, “Her eyes are so blue, such a clear light shining blue, they are the same as cornflowers with blue raindrops shining and dancing on the silver leaves after a sun shower in any of the summer months.”
And though Wing Tip the Spick didn’t listen and didn’t hear what the uncles said about her blue eyes, she did say to herself when they were not listening, “I know these are sweet uncles and I am going to have a sweet time visiting my relations.”
The four uncles said to her, “Will you let us ask you two questions, first the first question and second the second question?”
Then the uncles asked her the first question first
“I will let you ask me fifty questions this morning, fifty questions to-morrow morning, and fifty questions any morning. I like to listen to questions. They slip in one ear and slip out of the other.”
Then the uncles asked her the first question first, “Where do you come from?” and the second question second, “Why do you have two freckles on your chin?”
“Answering your first question first,” said Wing Tip the Spick, “I come from the Village of Cream Puffs, a little light village on the upland corn prairie. From a long ways off it looks like a little hat you could wear on the end of your thumb to keep the rain off your thumb.”
“Tell us more,” said one uncle. “Tell us much,” said another uncle. “Tell it without stopping,” added another uncle. “Interruptions nix nix,” murmured the last of the uncles.
“It is a light little village on the upland corn prairie many miles past the sunset in the west,” went on Wing Tip the Spick. “It is light the same as a cream puff is light. It sits all by itself on the big long prairie where the prairie goes up in a slope. There on the slope the winds play around the village. They sing it wind songs, summer wind songs in summer, winter wind songs in winter.”
“And sometimes like an accident, the wind gets rough. And when the wind gets rough it picks up the little Village of Cream Puffs and blows it away off in the sky—all by itself.”
“O-o-h-h,” said one uncle. “Um-m-m-m,” said the other three uncles.
“Now the people in the village all understand the winds with their wind songs in summer and winter. And they understand the rough wind who comes sometimes and picks up the village and blows it away off high in the sky all by itself.
“If you go to the public square in the middle of the village you will see a big roundhouse. If you take the top off the roundhouse you will see a big spool with a long string winding up around the spool.
“Now whenever the rough wind comes and picks up the village and blows it away off high in the sky all by itself then the string winds loose of the spool, because the village is fastened to the string. So the rough wind blows and blows and the string on the spool winds looser and looser the farther the village goes blowing away off into the sky all by itself.
“Then at last when the rough wind, so forgetful, so careless, has had all the fun it wants, then the people of the village all come together and begin to wind up the spool and bring back the village where it was before.”
“O-o-h-h,” said one uncle. “Um-m-m-m,” said the other three uncles.
“And sometimes when you come to the village to see your little relation, your niece who has four such sweet uncles, maybe she will lead you through the middle of the city to the public square and show you the roundhouse. They call it the Roundhouse of the Big Spool. And they are proud because it was thought up and is there to show when visitors come.”
“And now will you answer the second question second—why do you have two freckles on your chin?” interrupted the uncle who had said before, “Interruptions nix nix.”
“The freckles are put on,” answered Wing Tip the Spick. “When a girl goes away from the Village of Cream Puffs her mother puts on two freckles, on the chin. Each freckle must be the same as a little burnt cream puff kept in the oven too long. After the two freckles looking like two little burnt cream puffs are put on her chin, they remind the girl every morning when she combs her hair and looks in the looking glass. They remind her where she came from and she mustn’t stay away too long.”
“O-h-h-h,” said one uncle. “Um-m-m-m,” said the other three uncles. And they talked among each other afterward, the four uncles by themselves, saying:
“She has a gift. It is her eyes. They are so blue, such a clear light blue, the same as cornflowers with blue raindrops shining and dancing on silver leaves after a sun shower in any of the summer months.”
At the same time Wing Tip the Spick was saying to herself, “I know for sure now these are sweet uncles and I am going to have a sweet time visiting my relations.”
Story DNA
Plot Summary
Wing Tip the Spick visits her four doting uncles, who are captivated by her blue eyes. When asked about her origins and two freckles, Wing Tip describes her home, the Village of Cream Puffs, as a light village that is occasionally blown away by the wind but can be reeled back by its inhabitants using a giant spool. She then explains that her two chin freckles are symbolic 'burnt cream puffs' placed by her mother to remind her of her home and to ensure she doesn't stay away too long, leaving her uncles amazed and both parties content with their sweet family connection.
Themes
Emotional Arc
curiosity to wonder
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Carl Sandburg's Rootabaga Stories were created as an American response to European fairy tales, featuring distinctly American settings and characters, often with a surreal and imaginative quality.
Plot Beats (13)
- Wing Tip the Spick arrives in the Village of Liver-and-Onions to visit her four uncles.
- The four uncles are delighted by Wing Tip's blue eyes, describing them with an elaborate simile.
- Wing Tip, though not listening, finds her uncles sweet.
- The uncles ask Wing Tip two questions: where she comes from and why she has two freckles.
- Wing Tip agrees to answer, stating she likes questions.
- She describes her home, the Village of Cream Puffs, as a light village on an upland prairie that resembles a hat.
- Wing Tip explains that sometimes the wind picks up the entire village and blows it away into the sky.
- She reveals that the village has a 'Roundhouse of the Big Spool' with a string attached to the village.
- When the village is blown away, the string unwinds, and the villagers wind it back to return the village to its place.
- Wing Tip offers to show the uncles the Roundhouse if they visit her village.
- She then answers the second question, explaining her freckles are 'burnt cream puffs' placed by her mother to remind her of home and not to stay away too long.
- The uncles are amazed by her answers and continue to praise her eyes.
- Wing Tip, in turn, continues to find her uncles sweet and looks forward to her visit.
Characters
Wing Tip the Spick ★ protagonist
A small, light-bodied girl, likely of a delicate build given her association with 'cream puffs' and 'light little village'. Her most striking feature is her eyes.
Attire: Not explicitly described, but given the whimsical nature of the story and her name 'Wing Tip', one might infer light, perhaps slightly unusual or airy clothing. Likely a simple, comfortable dress suitable for a visiting child in a fantastical setting.
Wants: To visit her uncles and have a 'sweet time'. She is also driven by a desire to share the unique story of her home village.
Flaw: Perhaps a slight naiveté or a tendency to get lost in her own thoughts, as she doesn't fully engage with her uncles' repetitive comments.
She serves primarily as a catalyst for the story, revealing the whimsical nature of her home. Her arc is subtle, reinforcing her sweet nature and her connection to her unique heritage.
Imaginative, observant, polite (answers questions patiently), internally amused, a good storyteller, and somewhat independent-minded (doesn't listen to her uncles' repetitive praise). She is also sweet and affectionate towards her family.
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A young girl with a light build, standing upright and facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has a child's round face with fair skin and two distinct, small, dark brown freckles on her chin. Her eyes are a striking, clear light blue, like cornflowers. Her hair is not specified, but it is neat and styled away from her face. She wears a simple, light-colored dress, perhaps made of linen, with a modest neckline and short sleeves. She has a gentle, slightly amused expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Uncle (Mother's Side 1) ◆ supporting
Not explicitly described, but implied to be an ordinary adult man. He is one of four uncles, suggesting a similar, perhaps slightly older, appearance to his brothers/brothers-in-law.
Attire: Not specified, but likely simple, respectable clothing appropriate for an adult man in a rural or small-town setting, perhaps a shirt and trousers of sturdy fabric.
Wants: To get to know his niece and express his admiration for her.
Flaw: Repetitiveness and a tendency to echo his brothers.
Remains consistent, serving as an appreciative audience for Wing Tip's story.
Affectionate, proud, repetitive (especially in his praise of Wing Tip's eyes), easily impressed, and a good listener when Wing Tip tells her story.
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An adult man with a kind face, standing upright and facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a simple, unadorned appearance. He wears a plain, light-colored shirt and dark trousers, made of sturdy fabric. He has a gentle, slightly open-mouthed expression of wonder. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Uncle (Mother's Side 2) ◆ supporting
Not explicitly described, but implied to be an ordinary adult man, similar to his brother.
Attire: Not specified, but likely simple, respectable clothing appropriate for an adult man in a rural or small-town setting, perhaps a shirt and trousers of sturdy fabric.
Wants: To get to know his niece and express his admiration for her.
Flaw: Repetitiveness and a tendency to echo his brothers.
Remains consistent, serving as an appreciative audience for Wing Tip's story.
Affectionate, proud, repetitive (especially in his praise of Wing Tip's eyes), easily impressed, and a good listener when Wing Tip tells her story.
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An adult man with a kind face, standing upright and facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a simple, unadorned appearance. He wears a plain, light-colored shirt and dark trousers, made of sturdy fabric. He has a gentle, slightly open-mouthed expression of wonder. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Uncle (Father's Side 1) ◆ supporting
Not explicitly described, but implied to be an ordinary adult man, similar to his brother and brothers-in-law.
Attire: Not specified, but likely simple, respectable clothing appropriate for an adult man in a rural or small-town setting, perhaps a shirt and trousers of sturdy fabric.
Wants: To get to know his niece and express his admiration for her.
Flaw: Repetitiveness and a tendency to echo his brothers.
Remains consistent, serving as an appreciative audience for Wing Tip's story.
Affectionate, proud, repetitive (especially in his praise of Wing Tip's eyes), easily impressed, and a good listener when Wing Tip tells her story. He is the one who says 'Tell us more'.
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An adult man with a kind face, standing upright and facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a simple, unadorned appearance. He wears a plain, light-colored shirt and dark trousers, made of sturdy fabric. He has a gentle, slightly open-mouthed expression of wonder. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Uncle (Father's Side 2) ◆ supporting
Not explicitly described, but implied to be an ordinary adult man, similar to his brother and brothers-in-law.
Attire: Not specified, but likely simple, respectable clothing appropriate for an adult man in a rural or small-town setting, perhaps a shirt and trousers of sturdy fabric.
Wants: To get to know his niece and express his admiration for her.
Flaw: Repetitiveness and a tendency to echo his brothers, as well as a slight hypocrisy in his 'no interruptions' rule.
Remains consistent, serving as an appreciative audience for Wing Tip's story.
Affectionate, proud, repetitive (especially in his praise of Wing Tip's eyes), easily impressed, and a good listener when Wing Tip tells her story. He is the one who says 'Interruptions nix nix' but then interrupts himself.
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An adult man with a kind face, standing upright and facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a simple, unadorned appearance. He wears a plain, light-colored shirt and dark trousers, made of sturdy fabric. He has a gentle, slightly open-mouthed expression of wonder, with a hint of a thoughtful frown. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Village of Liver-and-Onions
The village where Wing Tip the Spick visits her four uncles. Implied to be a typical, grounded village contrasting with the fantastical Village of Cream Puffs.
Mood: warm, welcoming, familial, curious
Wing Tip the Spick arrives to visit her uncles and tells them about her home village.
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A cozy, sun-drenched farmyard in a Midwestern American village, with a simple, sturdy wooden farmhouse in the background. The ground is a mix of packed earth and short, green grass, with burdock leaves growing along a deep, clear riverbank. Soft morning light casts long shadows from a few mature oak trees. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Village of Cream Puffs
A 'little light village' situated on an 'upland corn prairie' far to the west, past the sunset. It looks like a 'little hat you could wear on the end of your thumb'. It is so light that strong winds can pick it up and blow it away into the sky.
Mood: whimsical, airy, precarious, unique
Wing Tip the Spick describes her fantastical home village and its unique characteristic of being blown away by the wind.
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A surreal, ethereal village composed of light, cream-colored structures resembling puffed pastries, nestled on a gently sloping upland corn prairie under a vast, open sky. The prairie stretches endlessly, with tall, ripe cornstalks swaying in a gentle breeze. The village buildings appear almost weightless, with soft, rounded edges, bathed in the warm, late afternoon light. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Public Square with the Roundhouse of the Big Spool
The central public square of the Village of Cream Puffs, featuring a large, roundhouse. Inside the roundhouse is a 'big spool with a long string winding up around the spool'. The village is fastened to this string.
Mood: ingenious, communal, central, proud
The mechanism for bringing the village back after it's blown away is revealed and explained.
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A wide, open public square in the center of the whimsical Village of Cream Puffs, paved with smooth, light-colored flagstones. In the middle stands a prominent, perfectly spherical roundhouse, its walls made of a light, almost translucent material, with a removable domed roof. A faint, glowing string extends from the top of the roundhouse, disappearing into the sky. The surrounding village buildings are soft and cream-colored, under a bright, clear sky. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.