The Magic Mirror
by Edith Howes · from Wonderwings and other Fairy Stories
Adapted Version
Long ago, there was a wise king. He had a son and a daughter. He gave them each a kingdom. He cut his land in two. Eastroyal was for his son. Westroyal was for his daughter.
Eastroyal people were not happy. They often fought. Westroyal people were happy. They were always kind. Westroyal queens were loved. Eastroyal kings were not.
People did not like the Eastroyal king. He lost his throne. His small son became The Young King. The Queen Mother felt sad. Her son was often angry. She worried for him.
The Queen Mother walked alone. An Old Woman came. 'Go to Westroyal,' she said. 'They have a secret.' She hobbled away. The Queen Mother thought about it.
The Queen Mother went to Westroyal. She met The Westroyal Queen. The Queen had a magic mirror. It showed people's lives. It showed their work. It showed their sadness. The Westroyal Queen used it. She helped her people. She was very kind.
The Queen Mother asked for a mirror. The Westroyal Queen had no other. The Queen Mother felt sad. She went back home. She had no magic mirror.
The Queen Mother walked in her garden. The Old Woman came again. 'Go to the Deeps,' she said. 'It is dark and scary.' She walked away. The Queen Mother was afraid.
The Queen Mother was brave. She left her home. She walked many miles. The path was long and hard. It was a scary place. She walked in the dark. She found a black pool. It was the Deeps.
Strange things were there. They stood near her. The Queen Mother was afraid. But she spoke. 'Give my son a magic mirror,' she said. 'He must learn to rule well.'
Lights shone around her. The strange things were fairies. They were beautiful. 'You are brave,' they said. 'You show great love.' 'Look in the water.'
The Old Woman came from the water. Her rags fell away. She became a beautiful fairy. She was a queen. She held a small, shiny mirror. 'I have your mirror,' she said. 'It is for your son.'
The fairies took them to the palace. They went to The Young King's room. He was asleep. They put the mirror on the wall. It grew big. It showed all of Eastroyal. It showed people's lives.
Next morning, The Young King woke up. He saw the mirror. He looked at the pictures. He saw his people's lives. He saw their hard work. He saw their sadness. He wanted to help them. He became kind.
The Young King was a good ruler. He cared for his people. His people were happy. They loved their king. This is how a good king rules. He made Eastroyal a happy place.
Original Story
The Magic Mirror
There was once a wise old king in a far-off land who said to himself, "I have a daughter as well as a son; why should she not have a kingdom too? I will see to it at once."
He called the chief map-maker to him, and said: "Make a map of my kingdom and divide it by a line so evenly that each part shall be exactly half. There must not be one hair's breadth more on the east of the line than on the west."
The chief map-maker worked hard, and soon had the map ready, and it was divided so evenly that there was not a hair's breadth more on the east of the line than on the west. Then the king made a law that when he died the Prince should rule over all the country on one side of the line, and the Princess should rule over all the country on the other side. The Prince's land he called Eastroyal, and the Princess's land he called Westroyal, and from that day to this there have always been kings over Eastroyal and queens over Westroyal.
But it was soon noticed that in Eastroyal the people became discontented and quarrelsome and poor, and were always finding fault with the government; whereas in the west country over the border they were so happy and kindly that they praised each queen from the beginning of her reign to the end. Nobody knew why there should be so great a difference, but a great difference there was. Things grew worse and worse in Eastroyal, until at last the people rose and turned the reigning king off his throne and set his little son in his place. "Perhaps we shall be better satisfied now!" they said.
The new king's mother walked alone, deep in thought; and she was very troubled. "How can I teach my little son to please his people better than his father did?" she wondered. "It would break my heart if he too angered them and lost his crown, yet already he is showing a haughty temper in his treatment of his lords, and I know not what to do."
"I know! I know!" said a voice.
The Queen-mother was much startled; though she had not spoken aloud, the words seemed an answer to her thought. She looked over the low wall of the garden into the road. There an old woman hobbled, leaning on a stick, and muttering to herself. She was poor and ragged, and bent with age. "I know, I know!" she said again.
"What do you know?" asked the Queen-mother gently.
The old woman looked up at her. "Go to Westroyal," she said; and she hobbled away.
"Ah, a witch!" thought the Queen-mother; "and she is right. The Queens of the West have undoubtedly some secret means of making their people love them. I will find out what it is."
She prepared for a visit to Westroyal, and arrived a few days later at the palace of the reigning queen. Here she was welcomed and feasted and treated right lovingly, but though she kept her eyes and her ears as wide open as it was possible for eyes and ears to be, she could not discover the secret. She grew sad with disappointment.
"She led the way to her own lovely sleeping-chamber."
The young queen saw that she was sorrowful. "You are not happy here. What is the matter?" she asked. "What can I do to make you glad?"
The Queen-mother held out her hands imploringly. "Only give me your secret," she begged. "Tell me how you gain the love of your people and keep it through all the years. Tell me so that I may teach my young son how to hold his throne?"
"Is that all?" exclaimed the Queen. "Come, I will show you."
She led the way to her own lovely sleeping-chamber, hung with rose silk and panelled with polished silver and amethyst, and she pointed to a great mirror set strongly into the wall. "Look within!" she said.
Wonderingly, the Queen-mother obeyed. On the surface of the mirror the faces and forms of herself and the young queen were reflected; but after a few moments, as she gazed, these faded away, and in their places came a picture of a mine, with blackened toilers filling tracks with coal. That, too, faded, and a golden cornfield showed upon the polished glass; under the hot summer sun the busy reapers moved, wiping the sweat from their brows when they stopped a moment to rest. A third picture was of weavers making cloth. A cottage home came next, and a lordly mansion of the rich, and a homeless child seeking shelter under a city bridge. So scene followed scene, beautiful, or sad, or sordid, sometimes wild and violent, and sometimes gay and peaceful, showing in the main a people happy and content.
"What is it?" asked the amazed Queen-mother at last. "How come these pictures here?"
"They are the life of my state reflected on this magic mirror for my help," replied the Queen. "Long ago, when the first queen came to rule the new kingdom of Westroyal, the fairies brought this mirror and set it in the wall as here you see it. Faithfully ever since it has reflected the daily happenings through-out the land, the people's toil and pleasures, their dangers and their comforts and rewards. So each queen has known her country. Your son, looking in his mirror, sees but himself; I see the sufferings of my people and know what things they need, and so plainly are these pictures set before me that I cannot rest till I have used my power to give relief."
"Oh!" cried the Queen-mother, "now I see why you are loved. How can I get such a mirror for my son?"
"That I know not," replied the Queen.
Then the Queen-mother returned sad at heart to the kingdom of her son, pondering on what she had seen.
Once again she walked in her garden alone. "How shall I get such a mirror?" she wondered. "What should I do?"
As once before, a voice replied "I know! I know!"
The Queen-mother looked over the garden wall. Hobbling along the road was the old woman who had bade her go to Westroyal. "You who helped me before, help me again!" cried the Queen-mother. "I have obeyed you. How now shall I get a magic mirror for my son?"
The old woman looked up at her. "Go to the Deeps," she said, and she hobbled off.
Now this was a dreadful command to the Queen-mother, for the Deeps was a horrible black pool in the roughest and most dangerous part of the country. It was said to be formed of the country's tears and to be also bottomless, and to be haunted by beings of strange shape. There were stories of their mysterious power and evil ways. Yet go she must, if going meant the gaining of a magic mirror for her son. And she must go alone, for only so could any seeker find the pathway to the pool, so it was said.
"I will go at once, before my courage fails," she said, and she left her sheltered garden and set off across the land.
She had many weary miles to travel, past villages and towns and fields, and she was footsore and faint when at last she reached the winding track that led between the darkening hills. Yet on she went, following the murmur of a tiny stream that dropped through thick-set bushes into a shadowed valley. On she went still, and now the darkness came, and she had lost her way. She stumbled over fallen logs, pushed with bleeding hands and torn clothes through bramble wildernesses, and found at last her way again to the narrow track beside the little stream that murmured in the dark.
On she went, and down. The stream suddenly widened into a round blackness open to the sky, but walled in by jagged rocks. It was the pool. Utterly spent through weariness and fear, she sank down among the rocks to rest, and waited there for what might come to her.
Strange rustlings sounded round the rocks, strange forms loomed close beside her, strange voices asked her: "What are you? Why come you to our haunts?" Though her heart was sick with dread she answered boldly in a firm clear voice. "Give me a magic mirror for my son, that he may learn to rule."
There was a flash, and the pool and all the rocks were lit by a light brighter and softer than that of moon or stars. All round her stood the beings who had loomed so strangely in the darkness. They were fairies, exquisite in shape and fineness, robed in flowing gossamer of many colours. They smiled at her, and touched her with their gentle hands, and immediately she was well. "Your love has brought you nobly through much fear and hurt," they said. "You shall have your due reward. Look into the Deeps."
She rose into the air a shining queen of fairies, holding in her hands a tiny gleaming mirror.
One took her hand and led her to the edge, and the Queen-mother, fearless and smiling now, looked down into the fathomless water of the pool. As she gazed, ripples came upon its surface. They broke away into shining cascades of diamonds and pearls, and between them appeared the face and shoulders of the old woman of the road. "I have your magic mirror," she cried. "It is formed of the lowest teardrops of the Deeps."
She sprang out and trod the water to the shore, and as she went her rags fell from her and she rose into the air a shining queen of fairies, more beautiful than any other there, holding in her hand a tiny gleaming mirror. "Come," she said, "let us set it in its place."
She touched the Queen-mother's hand, and in a flash they were all at the palace, within the young king's sleeping chamber of turquoise and gold. There as he lay asleep the fairies set the mirror in its place with magic words, and as it touched the wall it lengthened out and widened till it stood as large as that of the young queen across the border line. Over the polished glass began to float the pictures of the country's life. "How can I show my gratitude?" the Queen-mother asked; but the fairies were gone.
Next morning when the little king awoke he ran to see the fine new mirror in his room. He gazed and gazed upon the strange entrancing pictures that came on it, and every day he spent long hours at the mirror. And as he learned to recognise the hardships and the sufferings of his people his heart grew hot to give relief, and he was no more haughty, but used his power to ease their woes. So in Eastroyal as in Westroyal there was content, and the people loved their king and praised him through all his days until the end. And all the kings who followed after him ruled wisely and were loved.
"Look cosely at my flowers," she said, "and tell me which you think most beautiful."
Story DNA
Moral
True leadership comes from understanding and alleviating the suffering of one's people, not from haughty self-interest.
Plot Summary
A wise king divides his land, but his son's kingdom, Eastroyal, suffers from discontent, while his daughter's, Westroyal, thrives. The Queen-mother of Eastroyal seeks the secret to good governance after her son's haughty nature emerges. Guided by a mysterious old woman, she discovers Westroyal's queen uses a Magic Mirror reflecting her people's lives. Desperate to obtain one for her son, the Queen-mother undertakes a perilous journey to the dreaded Deeps. There, her courage is rewarded by fairies, and the old woman reveals herself as a fairy queen, providing a magic mirror for Eastroyal. The young king, seeing his people's struggles in the mirror, transforms into an empathetic ruler, bringing prosperity and love to his kingdom.
Themes
Emotional Arc
trouble to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Reflects common concerns about good governance and the welfare of the common people in pre-democratic societies.
Plot Beats (14)
- A wise king divides his kingdom into Eastroyal (for his son) and Westroyal (for his daughter), establishing a tradition of kings and queens.
- Over time, Eastroyal becomes discontented and quarrelsome, while Westroyal flourishes under beloved queens.
- The reigning king of Eastroyal is overthrown, and his young son is placed on the throne; his mother, the Queen-mother, worries about his haughty temper.
- An old woman advises the Queen-mother to visit Westroyal to learn their secret.
- The Queen-mother visits Westroyal and discovers the reigning queen's Magic Mirror, which shows the daily life and suffering of her people, enabling her to rule with empathy.
- Unable to obtain such a mirror, the Queen-mother returns to Eastroyal, disheartened.
- The old woman reappears and instructs the Queen-mother to go to the dangerous and dreaded 'Deeps'.
- The Queen-mother embarks on a long, arduous, and frightening journey through wild lands to reach the black pool of the Deeps.
- At the Deeps, she bravely requests a magic mirror from the strange beings that appear.
- Fairies reveal themselves, praising her love and courage, and instruct her to look into the Deeps.
- The old woman emerges from the Deeps, transforming into a beautiful fairy queen holding a tiny magic mirror.
- The fairies transport the Queen-mother and the mirror to the young king's chamber, installing the mirror which expands to show the life of Eastroyal.
- The young king awakens, is captivated by the mirror's images, and learns to understand and care for his people.
- The king rules wisely and with empathy, bringing contentment to Eastroyal and earning the love of his subjects, a tradition continued by his successors.
Characters
The Wise Old King ○ minor
A man of advanced years, likely with a distinguished but perhaps slightly stooped posture from age, reflecting a life of thought and rule. His build would be consistent with a life of relative comfort, not manual labor.
Attire: Rich, flowing robes of a deep, regal color such as crimson or royal blue, possibly embroidered with gold thread, consistent with a monarch in a 'far-off land' (implying a fantastical, perhaps European-inspired setting). A golden circlet or simple crown might adorn his head.
Wants: To ensure fair succession for both his children and the well-being of his kingdom.
Flaw: His wisdom, while great, doesn't foresee the differing outcomes of his division, indicating a limit to his foresight.
Introduces the central conflict by dividing his kingdom, but does not change himself within the story.
Wise, fair-minded, progressive (for his time, in considering his daughter for rule), decisive.
Image Prompt & Upload
An elderly man with a long, well-groomed white beard and hair, a wise and thoughtful expression. He wears rich, flowing crimson robes embroidered with gold thread and a simple golden circlet on his head. He stands with a deliberate, thoughtful posture. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Queen-mother (of Eastroyal) ★ protagonist
A woman of noble bearing, likely slender and graceful, though her journey to the Deeps would leave her temporarily disheveled and weary. Her transformation at the end suggests an inherent beauty that shines through.
Attire: Initially, she wears the elegant, yet practical, attire of a queen-mother, perhaps a fitted gown of deep blue or green velvet, suitable for a European-inspired monarchy. During her journey, her clothes become torn and bramble-scratched, revealing a sturdy underdress. At the end, she is transformed into a shining queen of fairies, robed in gossamer.
Wants: To save her son's throne and teach him to be a good ruler, driven by maternal love.
Flaw: Initially, her lack of understanding of true leadership and her reliance on external solutions.
Transforms from a worried, conventional queen-mother seeking a magical solution to a courageous, enlightened figure who understands the true source of good leadership, earning her own reward and the magic mirror for her son.
Loving, determined, resourceful, courageous, humble (in seeking help).
Image Prompt & Upload
A courageous adult woman with a determined expression, her face showing signs of weariness but also resolve. She has dark hair, slightly disheveled, and wears a torn, bramble-scratched deep green velvet gown over a sturdy cream linen underdress. Her posture is weary but resolute. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Old Woman / Fairy Queen ◆ supporting
Initially, a poor, ragged old woman, bent with age, hobbling with a stick. Her true form is an exquisite fairy, more beautiful than any other, shining and graceful.
Attire: As an old woman: tattered, patched brown and grey woolen rags, indicative of extreme poverty. As a fairy: flowing gossamer robes of many shimmering colors, ethereal and delicate.
Wants: To guide the Queen-mother towards understanding true leadership and to reward her courage and love.
Flaw: None apparent, as she is a powerful magical being.
Reveals her true identity and power, transforming from a seemingly helpless old woman to a magnificent fairy queen.
Mysterious, wise, helpful, benevolent, powerful.
Image Prompt & Upload
An elderly woman, hunched and bent with age, leaning heavily on a gnarled wooden stick. She wears tattered, patched brown and grey woolen rags. Her face is wrinkled, and a few wisps of grey hair escape from a tattered scarf. She has a cryptic expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Young Queen (of Westroyal) ◆ supporting
A graceful and serene young woman, radiating kindness and contentment, reflecting the happiness of her people.
Attire: Elegant, yet not ostentatious, robes of fine silk or brocade in soft, pleasing colors like rose, lavender, or pale gold, reflecting her gentle nature and the prosperity of her kingdom. Her attire would be of a European-inspired royal style.
Wants: To rule her people justly and ensure their happiness, guided by the magic mirror.
Flaw: None apparent, as she embodies ideal leadership.
Serves as an example of ideal leadership, demonstrating the benefits of the magic mirror but does not change herself.
Kind, compassionate, wise, welcoming, humble.
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A young adult woman with a serene and compassionate expression, clear, kind eyes, and soft, elegantly styled golden-brown hair. She wears a flowing gown of pale rose silk brocade, with delicate embroidery at the cuffs. Her posture is graceful and welcoming. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Young King (of Eastroyal) ★ protagonist
A young boy, initially perhaps a bit stiff or proud in his bearing, but softening as he learns empathy. He would be of a slender build, typical for a child of his age.
Attire: Initially, fine but somewhat stiff royal attire for a child, perhaps a tunic and breeches of rich blue velvet with silver embroidery. After his transformation, his clothes might remain regal but appear more comfortable and less ostentatious, reflecting his changed heart.
Wants: Initially, to hold his throne. Later, to ease the woes of his people.
Flaw: His initial haughty temper and lack of understanding of his people's suffering.
Transforms from a haughty child ruler into a wise and beloved king by learning empathy through the magic mirror.
Initially haughty and temperamental, but later becomes compassionate, wise, and beloved.
Image Prompt & Upload
A young boy, a child, with neatly kept light brown hair and a thoughtful, compassionate expression. He wears a comfortable, yet regal, tunic of deep blue velvet with subtle silver embroidery and matching breeches. His posture is relaxed and attentive. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Queen-mother's Garden (Eastroyal)
A sheltered garden within the palace grounds of Eastroyal, featuring a low wall overlooking a road. It is a place for quiet contemplation.
Mood: Initially troubled and pensive, later hopeful and determined.
The Queen-mother first encounters the old woman, receiving cryptic advice to visit Westroyal and later to go to 'The Deeps'.
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A serene, walled palace garden in a temperate climate, with neatly trimmed hedges and flowering bushes. A low, weathered stone wall separates the garden from a dusty, winding road. Soft afternoon sunlight casts gentle shadows across the manicured lawn. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Queen of Westroyal's Sleeping Chamber
A luxurious and lovely sleeping-chamber, sumptuously decorated with rose silk hangings and panels of polished silver and amethyst. A large, magic mirror is set strongly into one wall.
Mood: Elegant, revealing, and magical, holding the secret to good governance.
The Queen-mother discovers the magic mirror and learns its purpose: reflecting the lives of the people of Westroyal.
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An opulent sleeping chamber in a grand palace, adorned with flowing drapes of rose-colored silk. Walls are paneled with highly polished silver and deep purple amethyst, reflecting the soft light. A large, ornate mirror with a simple, elegant frame is set into one of the paneled walls, its surface subtly shimmering. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
The Deeps
A horrible, black, bottomless pool in the roughest and most dangerous part of the country, walled in by jagged rocks. It is said to be formed of the country's tears and haunted by strange beings. The path leading to it is a winding track between darkening hills, through thick-set bushes and bramble wildernesses, beside a murmuring stream.
Mood: Dreadful, mysterious, dangerous, and ultimately magical and transformative.
The Queen-mother bravely journeys to the Deeps, confronts her fears, and is rewarded by the fairies with a magic mirror for her son.
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A desolate, rugged landscape under a moonless night sky. A narrow, winding dirt track disappears into a shadowed valley, flanked by gnarled, dark hills. The path leads to a perfectly circular, inky black pool, its surface reflecting no light, surrounded by sharp, jagged rock formations. Sparse, thorny bushes cling to the rocky slopes. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Young King's Sleeping Chamber (Eastroyal)
The young king's sleeping chamber, decorated in turquoise and gold. It is here that the magic mirror is magically installed by the fairies.
Mood: Initially a typical royal chamber, transformed into a place of enlightenment and wisdom.
The fairies install the magic mirror in the young king's room, allowing him to see the lives of his people and learn to rule wisely.
Image Prompt & Upload
A regal sleeping chamber in a palace, adorned with rich turquoise silk drapes and gilded wooden panels. A large, polished mirror, now reflecting subtle, shifting images, is set into one of the walls. Soft, early morning light filters through a window, illuminating the luxurious fabrics and gleaming gold accents. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.