SCOTTISH-TINKER STORIES

by Francis Hindes Groome · from Gypsy folk-tales

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Once upon a time, in a faraway land, there lived a good King. But one day, the King felt very sad and could not see. He needed special water to feel better. This magic water was far away. It was on a green island. King Father sent his two sons. Mean Brothers went to find water. They did not go far. They stopped in a big town. They played games there. They did not look for water. King Father waited for them. He felt very sad.

John was the youngest son. People said he was not smart. But John was kind. He was also very brave. He wanted to help King Father. John went to find the water. He came to the big town. He saw his Mean Brothers. They still played games. They did not look for water. John felt a little sad. He knew he must go on. He went on alone. He wanted to help his father.

John walked into a big wood. The sun went down. It was dark now. The wood felt scary. John tied his horse to a tree. He climbed high in the tree. He wanted to be safe there. Soon, a big Brown Bear walked below. John felt a little scared. But the bear looked up. It had kind eyes. The bear spoke. "Hello, young one," it said. "Why are you in my wood?" John was surprised. A talking bear! "Hello," John said. "I am John. I look for magic water for King Father." The Brown Bear nodded. "I know the way. I can help you." John smiled. "Thank you, kind bear." John climbed down the tree. He was not scared now. The bear was his friend. The Brown Bear led John. They went to a warm cave. It gave John sweet berries. It gave John fresh water. John felt safe. He felt warm. He slept well that night.

The next day, the Brown Bear led John. They walked a long way. They came to a big house. A Big Giant lived there. The Big Giant looked grumpy. "Who are you?" he boomed. John felt small. "I am John," he said. "My friend, the Brown Bear, sent me." The Big Giant's face changed. "The Brown Bear is my friend!" he said. "Come in, John. You are welcome here." The Big Giant gave John good food. He gave John a soft bed. John thanked the Big Giant. The Brown Bear helped John again.

The next day, John and the Brown Bear walked. They came to another big house. Another giant lived there. This giant was also grumpy. "Who are you?" he asked. "I am John," John said. "My friend, the Brown Bear, sent me." The giant smiled. "The Brown Bear is my friend!" he said. "Come in, John. You are welcome." John ate good food. He rested well. The Brown Bear helped John.

The next day, John and the Brown Bear walked. They came to a third big house. A Strong Giant lived there. "Hello," said the Strong Giant. "Let us play a game of strength." John was small. The Strong Giant was big. John tried his best. But he was not strong enough. "Help me, friend!" John called. The Brown Bear came close. It whispered a secret to John. John used the secret. He won the game! The Strong Giant laughed. "You are clever, John!" he said. "The Brown Bear is a good friend." John felt happy. Teamwork helped John win.

The Strong Giant had one more task. "A Magic Eagle needs help," he said. "It has a tiny burr on its ear. Can you gently remove it?" John went to the Magic Eagle. The eagle was very big. John was very gentle. He carefully took the burr off. The Magic Eagle felt better. It was very happy. "Thank you, kind John," it said. John was kind. He helped the Magic Eagle.

The Magic Eagle said, "I will take you to the Green Isle." John climbed onto its back. Up, up they flew! The wind blew in John's hair. He saw the world below. It was a wonderful ride. John held on tight. Soon, they saw a green island. It was the Green Isle. The Magic Eagle landed softly. "Here you are, John," it said. John thanked the Magic Eagle. He was on the Green Isle.

John looked for the magic water. He found a clear spring. He filled his bottles. This was the magic water! Then John saw more magic. There was a loaf of bread. It was always full. There was cheese. It was always full. There was sweet juice. It was always full. John put them in his bag. He also saw a lady. She was sleeping. She was very beautiful. Her name was Princess Lily. John woke her gently. "Hello," she said. "Thank you for waking me." Princess Lily was kind. She smiled at John.

The Magic Eagle came back. John climbed on its back. They flew back to the giants. John showed them the magic food. The giants were happy. "You are a true hero," they said. The giants gave John many treasures. They gave him gold and jewels. "These are for your future queen," they said. "For Princess Lily." John thanked the giants. He had many gifts now.

John went back to his town. He saw his Mean Brothers. They still played games. They did not look for water. "Did you find the water?" they asked. John showed them his bottles. The Mean Brothers wanted the water. They tried to take it. But John was clever. He held his bottles tight. "This is for King Father," John said. He kept the magic water safe. The Mean Brothers were angry.

The Mean Brothers went to King Father. They had their own water. "Here is the magic water," they said. King Father drank it. But he did not feel better. He still could not see. John stepped forward. "Here is the true magic water," he said. King Father drank John's water. His eyes opened. He could see! He felt strong again. "My son, John!" he cried. John helped King Father. He was very brave.

King Father was very happy. He thanked John. The Mean Brothers felt bad. King Father sent them away. They went to learn to be kind. They learned to help others. John brought Princess Lily to the castle. King Father loved her. John and Princess Lily married. John became the new King. He was a wise and kind King. He and Princess Lily lived happily ever after. And the Mean Brothers learned to be good and helpful, too.

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SCOTTISH-TINKER STORIES

No. 73.—The Brown Bear of the Green Glen

There was a king in Erin once who had a leash of sons. John was the name of the youngest one, and it was said that he was not wise enough. And this good, worldly king lost the sight of his eyes and the strength of his feet. The two eldest brothers said that they would go seek three bottles of the water of the green isle that was about the heaps of the deep. And so it was that these two brothers went away. Now the fool said that he would not believe but that he himself would go also. And the first big town he reached in his father’s kingdom, there he sees his two brothers there, the blackguards.

‘Oh! my boys,’ says the young one, ‘is it thus you are?’

‘With swiftness of foot,’ said they, ‘take thyself home, or we will have thy life.’

‘Don’t be afraid, lads. It is nothing to me to stay with you.’

Now John went away on his journey till he came to a great desert of a wood. ‘Hoo, hoo!’ says John to himself, ‘it is not canny for me to walk this wood alone.’ The night was coming now, and growing pretty dark. John ties the cripple white horse to the root of a tree, and he went up in the top himself. He was but a very short time in the top, when he saw a bear coming with a fiery cinder in his mouth.

‘Come down, son of the King of Erin,’ says he.

‘Indeed, I won’t come. I am thinking I am safer where I am.’

‘But if thou wilt not come down, I will go up,’ said the bear.

‘Art thou, too, taking me for a fool?’ says John. ‘A shaggy, shambling creature like thee, climbing a tree.’

‘But if thou wilt not come down, I will go up,’ says the bear, as he fell out of hand to climbing the tree.

‘Lord! thou canst do that same!’ said John; ‘keep back from the root of the tree, then, and I will go down to talk to thee.’

And when the son of Erin’s king drew down, they came to chatting. The bear asked him if he was hungry.

‘Weel, by your leave,’ said John, ‘I am a little at this very same time.’

The bear took that wonderful watchful turn, and he catches a roebuck. ‘Now, son of Erin’s king,’ says the bear, ‘whether wouldst thou like thy share of the buck boiled or raw?’

‘The sort of meat I used to get would be kind of plotted boiled,’ says John. And thus it fell out; John got his share roasted.

‘Now,’ said the bear, ‘lie down between my paws, and thou hast no cause to fear cold or hunger till morning.’

Early in the morning the bear asked, ‘Art thou asleep, son of Erin’s king?’

‘I am not very heavily,’ said he.

‘It is time for thee to be on thy soles, then. Thy journey is long—two hundred miles. But art thou a good horseman, John?’

‘There are worse than me at times,’ said he.

‘Thou hadst best get on top of me, then.’

He did this, and at the first leap John was to earth. ‘Foil! foil!’ says John. ‘What! thou art not bad at the trade thyself. Thou hadst best come back till we try thee again.’

And with nails and teeth he fastened on the bear, till they reached the end of the two hundred miles and a giant’s house.

‘Now, John,’ said the bear, ‘thou shalt go to pass the night in this giant’s house. Thou wilt find him pretty grumpy, but say thou that it was the Brown Bear of the Green Glen that set thee here for a night’s share, and don’t thou be afraid that thou wilt not get share and comfort.’

And he left the bear to go to the giant’s house.

‘Son of Erin’s king,’ says the giant, ‘thy coming was in the prophecy; but if I did not get thy father, I have got his son. I don’t know whether I will put thee in the earth with my feet or in the sky with my breath.’

‘Thou wilt do neither of either,’ said John, ‘for it is the Brown Bear of the Green Glen that set me here.’

‘Come in, son of Erin’s king,’ said he, ‘and thou shalt be well taken to this night.’

And as he said, it was true. John got meat and drink without stint. But to make a long tale short, the bear took John day after day to the third giant. ‘Now,’ says the bear, ‘I have not much acquaintance with this giant, but thou wilt not be long in his house when thou must wrestle with him. And if he is too hard on thy back, say then, “If I had the Brown Bear of the Green Glen here, that was thy master.” ’

As soon as John went in, ‘Ai! ai!! or ee! ee!!’ says the giant. ‘If I did not get thy father, I have got his son.’

And to grips they go. They would make the boggy bog of the rocky rock. In the hardest place they would sink to the knee, in the softest up to the thighs; and they would bring wells of spring water from the face of every rock.1 The giant gave John a sore wrench or two.

‘Foil! foil!!’ says he. ‘If I had here the Brown Bear of the Green Glen, thy leap would not be so hearty.’

And no sooner spoke he the word than the worthy bear was at his side.

‘Yes! yes!’ says the giant, ‘son of Erin’s king, now I know thy matter better than thou dost thyself.’

So it was that the giant ordered his shepherd to bring home the best wether he had in the hill, and to throw his carcass before the great door. ‘Now, John,’ says the giant, ‘an eagle will come and she will settle on the carcass of this wether, and there is a wart on the ear of this eagle which thou must cut off with this sword, but a drop of blood thou must not draw.’

The eagle came, but she was not long eating when John drew close to her, and with one stroke he cut the wart of her without drawing one drop of blood. (Och! is not that a fearful lie?) ‘Now,’ said the eagle, ‘come on the root of my two wings, for I know thy matter better than thou dost thyself.’

He did this, and they were now on sea and now on land, and now on the wing, till they reached the Green Isle.

‘Now, John,’ says she, ‘be quick and fill thy three bottles. Remember that the black dogs are away just now.’ (‘What dogs?’—Black dogs. Dost thou not know that they always had black dogs chasing the Gregorach?)

When he filled the bottles with the water out of the well, he sees a little house beside him. John said to himself that he would go in, and that he would see what was in it. And the first chamber he opened, he saw a full bottle. (‘And what was in it?’ What should be in it but whisky.) He filled a glass out of it, and he drank it; and when he was going, he gave a glance, and the bottle was as full as it was before. ‘I will have this bottle along with the bottles of water,’ says he. Then he went into another chamber, and he saw a loaf. He took a slice out of it, but the loaf was as whole as it was before. ‘Ye gods! I won’t leave thee,’ says John. He went on thus till he came to another chamber. He saw a great cheese; he took a slice of the cheese, but it was as whole as ever. ‘I will have this along with the rest,’ says he. Then he went to another chamber, and he saw laid there the very prettiest little jewel of a woman he ever saw. ‘It were a great pity not to kiss thy lips, my love,’ says John.

Soon after John jumped on top of the eagle, and she took him on the self-same steps till they reached the house of the big giant. And they went paying rent to the giant, and there was the sight of tenants and giants and meat and drink.

‘Well, John,’ says the giant, ‘didst thou see such drink as this in thy father’s house in Erin?’

‘Pooh!’ says John, ‘hoo! my hero, thou other man, I have a drink this is unlike it.’ He gave the giant a glass out of the bottle, but the bottle was as full as it was before.

‘Well!’ said the giant, ‘I will give thee myself two hundred notes,2 a bridle, and a saddle for the bottle.’

‘It is a bargain, then,’ says John; ‘but that the first sweetheart I ever had must get it if she comes the way.’

‘She will get that,’ says the giant.

But to make the long story short, he left each loaf and cheese with the two other giants, with the same covenant that the first sweetheart he ever had should get them if she came the way. Now John reached his father’s big town in Erin, and he sees his two brothers as he left them, the blackguards. ‘You had best come with me, lads,’ says he, ‘and you will get a dress of cloth and a saddle and bridle each.’ And so they did; but when they were near to their father’s house, the brothers thought that they had better kill him, and so it was that they set on him. And when they thought he was dead, they threw him behind a dyke; and they took from him the three bottles of water, and they went home.

John was not too long here, when his father’s smith came the way with a cart-load of rusty iron. John called out, ‘Whoever the Christian is that is there, oh! that he should help him.’ The smith caught him, and he threw John amongst the iron. And because the iron was so rusty, it went into each wound and sore that John had; and so it was that John became rough-skinned and bald.

Here we will leave John, and we will go back to the pretty little jewel that John left in the Green Isle. She became pale and heavy, and at the end of three quarters she had a fine lad son. ‘Oh! in all the great world,’ says she, ‘how did I find this?’

‘Foil! foil!’ says the hen-wife, ‘don’t let that set thee thinking. Here’s for thee a bird, and as soon as he sees the father of thy son, he will hop on the top of his head.’

The Green Isle was gathered from end to end, and the people were put in at the back door and out at the front door; but the bird did not stir, and the babe’s father was not found. Now here she said she would go through the world altogether till she should find the father of the babe. Then she came to the house of the big giant and sees the bottle. ‘Ai! ai!’ said she, ‘who gave thee this bottle?’

Said the giant, ‘It was young John, son of Erin’s king, that left it.’

‘Well, then, the bottle is mine,’ said she.

But to make a long story short, she came to the house of each giant, and she took with her each bottle and each loaf and each cheese, till at last she came to the house of the king of Erin. Then the five-fifths of Erin were gathered, and the bridge of nobles of the people; they were put in at the back door and out at the front door, but the bird did not stir. Then she asked if there was one other or any one else at all in Erin that had not been here.

‘I have a bald rough-skinned gillie in the smithy,’ said the smith, ‘but——’

‘Rough on or off, send him here,’ says she.

No sooner did the bird see the head of the bald rough-skinned gillie than he took a flight and settles on the bald top of the rough-skinned lad. She caught him and kissed him: ‘Thou art the father of my babe.’

‘But, John,’ says the great king of Erin, ‘it is thou that gottest the bottles of water for me.’

‘Indeed ‘twas I,’ says John.

‘Weel, then, what art thou willing to do to thy two brothers?’

‘The very thing they wished to do to me, do for them.’

And that same was done. John married the daughter of the king of the Green Isle, and they made a great rich wedding that lasted seven days and seven years. And thou couldst but hear Leeg, leeg, and Beeg, beeg, solid sound and peg-drawing. Gold a-crushing from the soles of their feet to the tips of their fingers, the length of seven years and seven days.

A variant clearly of John Roberts’ Welsh-Gypsy story of ‘An Old King and his Three Sons in England’ (No. 55, pp. 220–234), but I expect that Matthew Wood’s variant, ‘The Bottle of Black Water,’ would come closer still. Some day Mr. Sampson must give us that with its fellows. Which is the better story—that of John Roberts, the Welsh harper, or this of John MacDonald, the travelling tinker—is hard to determine; in some respects each is immeasurably superior. John Roberts’ is the more coherent and intelligible; but it lacks that splendid wrestling match, with which compare the much poorer one in the Bohemian-Gypsy story of ‘The Three Dragons’ (No. 44, p. 152). And then while it preserves the handkerchief ordeal, it has not the inexhaustible whisky-bottle, loaf, and cheese. The occurrence of a bear in each version, though with marked differences, can hardly be accidental. For a long while after I got John Roberts’ story, I believed that its close was largely of his own invention; but that belief now seems to be inadmissible. The Polish-Gypsy story of ‘The Golden Bird and the Good Hare’ (No. 49, pp. 182–8), and its Scottish-Tinker version, ‘The Fox’ (No. 75), should be carefully studied.

No. 74.—The Tale of the Soldier

There was an old soldier once, and he left the army. He went to the top of a hill that was at the upper end of the town-land, and he said, ‘Well, may it be that the Mischief may come and take me with him on his back the next time that I come again in sight of this town.’

Then he was walking till he came to the house of a gentleman that was there. John asked the gentleman if he would get leave to stay in his house that night.

‘Well, then,’ said the gentleman, ‘since thou art an old soldier, and hast the look of a man of courage, without dread or fear in thy face, there is a castle at the side of yonder wood, and thou mayest stay in it till day. Thou shalt have a pipe and baccy, a cogie full of whisky, and a Bible to read.’3

When John got his supper, he took himself to the castle. He set on a great fire, and when a while of the night had come, there came two tawny women in, and a dead man’s kist between them. They threw it at the fireside, and they sprang out. John arose, and with the heel of his foot he drove out its end, and he dragged out an old hoary bodach. And he set him sitting in the great chair; he gave him a pipe and baccy, and a cogie of whisky; but the bodach let them fall on the floor.

‘Poor man,’ said John, ‘the cold is on thee.’

John laid himself stretched in the bed, and he left the bodach to toast himself at the fireside; but about the crowing of the cock he went away.

The gentleman came well early in the morning. ‘What rest didst thou find, John?’

‘Good rest,’ said John. ‘Thy father was not the man that would frighten me.’

‘Right, good John, thou shalt have two hundred pund, and lie to-night in the castle.’

‘I am the man that will do that,’ said John.

And that night it was the very like. There came three tawny women, and a dead man’s kist with them amongst them. They threw it up to the side of the fireplace, and they took their soles out of that. John arose, and with the heel of his boot he broke the head of the kist, and he dragged out of it the old hoary man. And, as he did the night before, he set him sitting in the big chair, and gave him pipe and baccy; and he let them fall.

‘Oh! poor man,’ said John, ‘cold is on thee.’

Then he gave him a cogie of drink, and he let that fall also.

‘Oh! poor man, thou art cold.’

The bodach went as he did the night before. ‘But,’ said John to himself, ‘if I stay here this night, and that thou shouldst come, thou shalt pay my pipe and baccy, and my cogie of drink.’

The gentleman came early enough in the morning, and he asked, ‘What rest didst thou find last night, John?’

‘Good rest,’ said John. ‘It was not the hoary bodach, thy father, that would put fear on me.’

‘Och!’ said the gentleman, ‘if thou stayest to-night thou shalt have three hundred pund.’

‘It’s a bargain,’ said John.

When it was a while of the night there came four tawny women, and a dead man’s kist with them amongst them. And they set that down at the side of John. John arose, and he drew his foot, and he drove the head out of the kist. And he dragged out the old hoary man, and he set him in the big chair. He reached him the pipe and the baccy, the cup and the drink; but the old man let them fall, and they were broken.

‘Och!’ said John, ‘before thou goest this night, thou shalt pay me all thou hast broken.’

But word came there not from the head of the bodach. Then John took the belt of his abersgaic,4 and he tied the bodach to his side, and he took him with him to bed. When the heath-cock crowed, the bodach asked him to let him go.

‘Pay what thou hast broken first,’ said John.

‘I will tell thee, then,’ said the old man, ‘there is a cellar of drink under, below me, in which there is plenty of drink, tobacco, and pipes. There is another little chamber beside the cellar, in which there is a caldron full of gold. And under the threshold of the big door there is a crocky full of silver. Thou sawest the women that came with me to-night?’

‘I saw,’ said John.

‘Well, there thou hast four women from whom I took the cows, and they in extremity. They are going with me every night thus, punishing me. But go thou and tell my son how I am being wearied out. Let him go and pay the cows, and let him not be heavy on the poor. Thou thyself and he may divide the gold and silver between you; and marry thyself my old girl. But mind, give plenty of gold of what is left to the poor, on whom I was too hard. And I will find rest in the world of worlds.’

The gentleman came, and John told him as I have told thee. But John would not marry the old girl of the hoary bodach. At the end of a day or two John would not stay longer. He filled his pockets full of the gold, and he asked the gentleman to give plenty of gold to the poor. He reached the house,5 but he was wearying at home, and he had rather be back with the regiment. He took himself off on a day of days, and he reached the hill above the town, from which he went away. But who should come to him but the Mischief.

‘Hoth! hoth! John, thou hast come back?’

‘Hoth on thyself!’ quoth John, ‘I came. Who art thou?’

‘I am the Mischief, the man to whom thou gavest thyself when thou was here last.’

‘Ai! ai!’ said John, ‘it’s long since I heard tell of thee, but I never saw thee before. There is glamour on my eyes; I will not believe that it is thou at all. But make a snake of thyself, and I will believe thee.’

The Mischief did this.

‘Make now a lion of roaring.’

The Mischief did this.

‘Spit fire now seven miles behind thee and seven miles before thee.’

The Mischief did this.

‘Well,’ said John, ‘since I am to be a servant with thee, come into my abersgaic, and I will carry thee. But thou must not come out till I ask thee, or else the bargain’s broke.’

The Mischief promised, and he did this.

‘Now,’ said John, ‘I am going to see a brother of mine that is in the regiment. But keep thou quiet.’

So now John went into the town; and one yonder and one here would cry, ‘There is John the desairtair.’ There was gripping of John, and a court held on him; and so it was that he was to be hanged about mid-day on the morrow. And John asked no favour but to be floored with a bullet.

The Coirneal said, ‘Since he was an old soldier, and in the army so long, that he should have his asking.’

On the morrow, when John was to be shot, and the soldiers foursome round all about him, ‘What is that they are saying?’ said the Mischief. ‘Let me amongst them, and I won’t be long scattering them.’

‘Cuist! cuist!’ said John.

‘What’s that speaking to thee?’ said the Coirneal.

‘Oh! it’s but a white mouse,’ said John.

‘Black or white,’ said the Coirneal, ‘don’t thou let her out of the abersgaic, and thou shalt have a letter of loosing, and let’s see no more of thee.’

John went away, and in the mouth of night he went into a barn where there were twelve men threshing. ‘Oh! lads,’ said John, ‘here’s for you my old abersgaic; and take a while threshing it, it is so hard that it is taking the skin off my back.’

They took as much as two hours of the watch at the abersgaic with the twelve flails; and at last, every blow they gave it, it would leap to the top of the barn, and it was casting one of the threshers now and again on his back. When they saw that, they asked him to be out of that, himself and his abersgaic; they would not believe but that the Mischief was in it.

Then he went on his journey, and he went into a smithy where there were twelve smiths striking their great hammers. ‘Here’s for you, lads, an old abersgaic, and I will give you half-a-crown, and take a while at it with the twelve great hammers; it is so hard that it is taking the skin off my back.’

But that was fun for the smiths; it was good sport for them, the abersgaic of the soldier. But every sgaile it got, it was bounding to the top of the smithy. ‘Go out of this, thyself and it,’ said they; ‘we will not believe that the Bramman6 is in it.’

So then John went on, and the Mischief on his back; and he reached a great furnace that was there.

‘Where art thou going now, John?’ said the Mischief.

‘Patience a little, and thou’lt see that,’ said John.

‘Let me out,’ said the Mischief, ‘and I will never put trouble on thee in this world.’

‘Nor in the next?’ said John.

‘That’s it,’ said the Mischief.

‘Stop, then,’ said John, ‘till thou get a smoke.’

And so saying, John cast the abersgaic and the Mischief into the middle of the furnace: and himself and the furnace went as a green flame of fire to the skies.

The first half is a variant, and a good one, of the Welsh-Gypsy story of ‘Ashypelt’ (No. 57, p. 235); the second half is a variant, a better one, of the latter part of the Welsh-Gypsy ‘Old Smith’ (No. 59, p. 247), and of the confused and imperfect Slovak-Gypsy ‘Old Soldier’ (No. 60, p. 250). The prominence given to tobacco-smoking in both ‘Ashypelt’ and in the Scottish-Tinker story suggests that the forebears of Cornelius Price and those of John MacDonald must have parted company at some time later than the beginning of the seventeenth century, unless, indeed, this resemblance is accidental. About the beginning of the nineteenth century English Gypsies must have visited Scotland much more than they did in 1870–80, when a few of the Smiths or Reynolds, Maces, and Lees, all closely connected, were the only English Gypsies who ‘travelled’ north of the Tweed. Since 1880, again, there has been a great influx of English Gypsydom,—one reason that fortune-telling seems to be not illegal in Scotland. In his notes upon Campbell’s story in Orient und Occident (ii. 1864, pp. 679–680), Reinhold Köhler makes an odd slip, very unusual with him. He renders ‘the Mischief’ by ‘das Unglück,’ and is puzzled why poor Unglück should be so scurvily handled.

No. 75.—The Fox

Brian, the son of the king of Greece, fell in love with the hen-wife’s daughter, and he would marry no other but she. His father said to him on a day of days, before that should happen that he must get first for him the most marvellous bird that there was in the world. Then here went Brian, and he put the world under his head, till he came much further than I can tell, or you can think, till he reached the house of the Carlin of Buskins.7 He got well taken to by the carlin that night; and in the morning she said to him, ‘It is time for thee to arise. The journey is far.’

When he rose to the door, what was it but sowing and winnowing snow. He looked hither and thither, and what should he see but a fox drawing on his shoes and stockings. ‘Sha! beast,’ said Brian, ‘thou hadst best leave my lot of shoes and stockings for myself.’

‘Och!’ said the fox, ‘it’s long since a shoe or a stocking was on me; and I’m thinking that I shall put them to use this day itself.’

‘Thou ugly beast, art thou thinking to steal my foot-webs, and I myself looking at thee?’

‘Well,’ said the fox, ‘if thou wilt take me to be thy servant, thou shalt get thy set of shoes and stockings.’

‘O poor beast!’ said he, ‘thou wouldst find death with me from hunger.’

‘Ho! hoth!’ said the fox, ‘there is little good in the servant that will not do for his own self and for his master at times.’

‘Yes, yes,’ said he, ‘I don’t mind; at all events thou mayst follow me.’

They had not gone far on their journey when the fox asked him if he was good at riding. He said he was, if it could be known what on.

‘Come on top of me a turn of a while,’ said the fox.

‘On top of thee! Poor beast, I would break thy back.’

‘Ho! huth! son of the king of Greece,’ said the fox, ‘thou didst not know me so well as I know thee. Take no care but that I am able to carry thee.’

But never mind. When Brian went on top of the fox, they would drive spray from each puddle, spark from each pebble. And they took no halt nor rest till they reached the house of the Giant of Five Heads, Five Humps, and Five Throttles.

‘Here’s for thee,’ said the fox, ‘the house of the giant who has the marvellous bird. And what wilt thou say to him when thou goest in?’

‘What should I say but that I came to steal the marvellous bird?’

‘Hu! hu!’ said the fox, ‘thou wilt not return. But,’ said the fox, ‘take thou service with this giant to be a stable-lad. And there is no sort of bird under the seven russet rungs of the world that he has not got. And when he brings out the marvellous bird, say thou, “Fuith! fuith! the nasty bird, throw it out of my sight. I could find braver birds than that on the middens at home.” ’

Brian did thus.

‘S’tia!’ said the big one, ‘then I must go to thy country to gather a part of them.’

But Brian was pleasing the giant well. But on a night of the nights Brian steals the marvellous bird, and drags himself out with it. When he was a good bit from the giant’s house, ‘S’tia!’ said Brian to himself, ‘I don’t know if it is the right bird I have after every turn.’ Brian lifts the covering off the bird’s head, and he lets out one screech, and the screech roused the giant.

‘Oh! oh! son of the king of Greece,’ said the giant, ‘that I have coming to steal the marvellous bird. The prophet was saying that he would come to his gird.’

Then here the giant put on the shoes that could make nine miles at every step, and he wasn’t long catching poor Brian. They returned home to the giant’s house, and the giant laid the binding of the three smalls on him, and he threw Brian into the peat-corner, and he was there till the morning on the morrow’s day.

‘Now,’ said the giant, ‘son of the king of Greece, thou hast thy two rathers—Whether wouldst thou rather thy head to be on yonder stake, or go to steal the White Glaive of Light that is in the realm of Big Women?’

‘A man is kind to his life,’ said Brian. ‘I will go to steal the White Glaive of Light.’

But never mind. Brian had not gone far from the giant’s house when the fox met with him. ‘O man without mind or sense, thou didst not take my counsel, and what will now arise against thee? Thou art going to the realm of Big Women to steal the White Glaive of Light. That is twenty times as hard for thee as the marvellous bird of that carl of a giant.’

‘But what help for it now but that I must betake myself to it?’ said poor Brian.

‘Well, then,’ said the fox, ‘come thou on top of me, and I am in hopes thou wilt be wiser the next time.’

They went then further than I can remember, till they reached the knoll of the country at the back of the wind and the face of the sun, that was in the realm of Big Women.

‘Now,’ said the fox, ‘thou shalt sit here, and thou shalt begin at blubbering and crying; and when the Big Women come out where thou art, they will lift thee in their oxters; and when they reach the house with thee, they will try to coax thee. But never thou cease of crying until thou get the White Glaive of Light; and they will leave it with thee in the cradle the length of the night, to keep thee quiet.’

Worthy Brian was not long blubbering and crying when the Big Women came, and they took Brian with them as the fox had said. And when Brian found the house quiet, he went away with the White Glaive of Light. And when he thought he was a good way from the house, he thought he would see if he had the right sword. He took it out of the sheath, and the sword gave out a ring. This awoke the Big Women, and they were on their soles. ‘Whom have we here,’ said they, ‘but the son of the king of Greece coming to steal the White Glaive of Light.’

They took after Brian, and they were not long bringing him back. They tied him roundly (like a ball), and they threw him into the peat-corner till the white morrow’s day was. When the morning came, they asked him to be under the sparks of the bellows,8 or to go to steal the Sun Goddess, daughter of the king of the gathering of Fionn.

‘A man is kind to his life,’ said Brian. ‘I will go steal the Sun Goddess.’

Never mind. Brian went, but he was not long on the path when the fox met him. ‘O poor fool,’ said the fox, ‘thou art as silly as thou wert ever. What good for me to be giving thee counsel? Thou art now going to steal the Sun Goddess. Many a better thief than thou went on the same journey, but ever a man came never back. There are nine guards guarding her, and there is no dress under the seven russet rungs of the world that is like the dress that is on her but one other dress, and here is that dress for thee. And mind,’ said the fox, ‘that thou dost as I ask thee, or, if thou dost not, thou wilt not come to the next tale.’

Never mind. They went, and when they were near the guard, the fox put the dress on Brian, and he said to him to go forward straight through them, and when he reached the Sun Goddess to do as he bid him. ‘And, Brian, if thou gettest her out, I will not be far from you.’

But never mind. Brian took courage, and he went on, and each guard made way for him, till he went in where the Sun Goddess, daughter of the king of the gathering of Fionn, was. She put all-hail and good-luck on him, and she it was who was pleased to see him, for her father was not letting man come near her. And there they were.

‘But how shall we get away at all, at all?’ said she in the morning.

Brian lifted the window, and he put out the Sun Goddess through it.

The fox met them. ‘Thou wilt do yet,’ said he. ‘Leap you on top of me.’

And when they were far, far away, and near the country of Big Women, ‘Now, Brian,’ said the fox, ‘is it not a great pity for thyself to give away this Sun Goddess for the White Glaive of Light?’

‘Is it not that which is wounding me at this very time?’ said Brian.

‘It is that I will make a Sun Goddess of myself, and thou shalt give me to the Big Women,’ said the fox.

‘I had rather part with the Sun Goddess herself than thee.’

‘But never thou mind, Brian, they won’t keep me long.’

Here Brian went in with the fox as a Sun Goddess, and he got the White Glaive of Light. Brian left the fox with the Big Women, and he went forward. In a day or two the fox overtook them, and they got on him. And when they were nearing the house of the big giant, ‘Is it not a great pity for thyself, O Brian, to part with the White Glaive of Light for that filth of a marvellous bird?’

‘There is no help for it,’ said Brian.

‘I will make myself a White Glaive of Light,’ said the fox; ‘it may be that thou wilt yet find a use for the White Glaive of Light.’

Brian was not so much against the fox this time, since he saw that he had got off from the Big Women.

‘Thou art come with it,’ said the big man. ‘It was in the prophecies that I should cut this great oak-tree at one blow, which my father cut two hundred years ago with the same sword.’

Brian got the marvellous bird, and he went away. He had gone but a short distance from the giant’s house when the fox made up to him with his pad to his mouth.

‘What’s this that befell thee?’ said Brian.

‘Oh! the son of the great one,’ said the fox, ‘when he seized me, with the first blow he cut the tree all but a small bit of bark. And look thyself, there is no tooth in the door of my mouth which that filth of a Bodach has not broken.’

Brian was exceedingly sorrowful that the fox had lost the teeth, but there was no help for it. They were going forward, walking at times, and at times riding, till they came to a spring that there was by the side of the road. ‘Now, Brian,’ said the fox, ‘unless thou dost strike off my head with one blow of the White Glaive of Light into this spring, I will strike off thine.’

‘S’tia,’ said Brian, ‘a man is kind to his own life.’

And he swept the head off him with one blow, and it fell into the well. And in the wink of an eye what should rise up out of the well but the son of the king that was father to the Sun Goddess.

They went on till they reached his father’s house. And his father made a great wedding with joy and gladness, and there was no word about marrying the hen wife’s daughter when I parted from them.

‘On the 25th of April 1859, [at Inverary], John [MacDonald] the tinker gave the beginning of this as part of his contribution to the evening’s entertainment. He not only told the story, but acted it, dandling a fancied baby when it came to the adventure of the Big Women, and rolling his eyes wildly. The story which he told varied from that which he dictated in several particulars. It began:—

‘ “There was a king and a knight, as there was and will be, and as grows the fir-tree, some of it crooked and some of it straight. And it was the King of Eirinn, it was. And the queen died with her first son, and the king married another woman. Oh! bad straddling queen, thou art not like the sonsy, cheery queen that we had ere now.”

‘And here came a long bit which the tinker put into another story, and which he seems to have condensed into the first sentence of the version which I have got and translated. He has also transferred the scene from Ireland to Greece, perhaps because the latter country sounds better, and is further off, or perhaps because he had got the original form of the story from his old father in the meantime.

‘Some of the things mentioned in the tinker’s version have to do with Druidical worship—the magic well, the oak-tree, the bird. For the Celtic tribes, as it is said, were all guided in their wanderings by the flight of birds. The Sun Goddess, for the Druids are supposed to have worshipped the sun, and the sun is feminine in Gaelic. These are all mixed up with Fionn and the Sword of Light and the Big Women, personages and things which do not appear out of the Highlands.’

The whole of this last paragraph seems to me more than questionable, for ‘The Fox’ is beyond all question identical with the Polish-Gypsy story of ‘The Golden Bird and the Good Hare’ (No. 49, pp. 182–8), in the excellent Servian version of which it is a fox, not a hare. Druidism is hardly to be looked for in either Poland or Servia. In some respects the Polish-Gypsy story is better than the Tinker one, but in others the Tinker version is greatly superior. Each, indeed, supplies the other’s deficiencies. The original beginning, given by Campbell, seems to point to a form of the story where, as in the Indian versions of ‘The Bad Mother,’ cited on p. 35, note, the hero is sent on his quest by a stepmother. In his notes on the Gaelic story in Orient und Occident (ii. 1864, pp. 685–6), Reinhold Köhler cites an interesting Wallachian version.

No. 76.—The Magic Shirt9

‘There was a king and a knight, as there was and will be, and as grows the fir-tree, some of it crooked and some of it straight; and he was a king of Eirinn,’ said the old tinker, and then came a wicked stepmother, who was incited to evil by a wicked hen-wife. The son of the first queen was at school with twelve comrades, and they used to play at shinny every day with silver shinnies and a golden ball. The hen-wife, for certain curious rewards, gave the step-dame a magic shirt, and she sent it to her stepson, ‘Sheen Billy,’ and persuaded him to put it on. He refused at first, but complied at last, and the shirt was a great snake about his neck. Then he was enchanted and under spells, and all manner of adventures happened; but at last he came to the house of a wise woman who had a beautiful daughter, who fell in love with the enchanted prince, and said she must and would have him.

‘It will cost thee much sorrow,’ said the mother.

‘I care not,’ said the girl, ‘I must have him.’

‘It will cost thee thy hair.’

‘I care not.’

‘It will cost thee thy right breast.’

‘I care not if it should cost me my life,’ said the girl.

And the old woman agreed to help her to her will. A caldron was prepared and filled with plants; and the king’s son was put into it and stripped to the magic shirt, and the girl was stripped to the waist. And the mother stood by with a great knife, which she gave to her daughter. Then the king’s son was put down in the caldron; and the great serpent, which appeared to be a shirt about his neck, changed into its own form, and sprang on the girl and fastened on her; and she cut away the hold, and the king’s son was freed from the spells. Then they were married, and a golden breast was made for the lady.

‘And then,’ adds Mr. Campbell, ‘they went through more adventures which I do not well remember, and which the old tinker’s son vainly strove to repeat in August 1860, for he is far behind his father in the telling of old Highland tales. The serpent, then, would seem to be an emblem of evil and wisdom in Celtic popular mythology.’


1 A passage in ‘The King of Erin and the Queen of the Lonesome Island’ (Curtin’s Myths and Folk-lore of Ireland, p. 98) offers a curious parallel:—‘They fought an awful battle that day from sunrise to sunset. They made soft places hard, and hard places soft; they made high places low, and low places high; they brought water out of the centre of hard grey rocks, and made dry rushes soft in the most distant parts of Erin till sunset.’ 

2 Of course, £1 notes in Scotland. 

3 In the Welsh-Gypsy story Ashypelt gets no whisky, also no Bible. 

4 Haversack. 

5 Went home. 

6 ‘This word,’ says Campbell, ‘I have never met before.’ 

7 A sock, a brogue of untanned leather or skin, commonly worn with the hairy side outward; Lat. cothurnus, Welsh cwaran, French cothurne.—J. F. C. 

8 ‘Bolg seididh, bag of blowing. The bellows used for melting copper in the mint at Tangier in 1841 consisted of two sheepskins worked by two men. The neck of the hide was fastened to the end of an iron tube, and the legs sewed up. The end of each bag opened with two flat sticks; and the workmen, by a skilful action of the hand, filled the bag with air as they raised it, and then squeezed it out by pressing downwards. By working the two bags turn-about, a constant steady blast was kept on a crucible in the furnace, and the copper was soon melted. The Gaelic word clearly points to the use of some such apparatus. I believe something of the kind is used in India; but I saw the Tangier mint at work.’—J. F. C.

Were Mr. Campbell still living I would call his attention to ‘something of the kind’ much nearer home than India or Tangiers, viz. the Scottish-Gypsy method of smelting iron in a furnace of stone, turf, and clay, three feet in height and eighteen inches in diameter: ‘the materials in the furnace are powerfully heated by the blasts of a large hand-bellows, generally wrought by females, admitted at a small hole a little from the ground’ (Walter Simson’s History of the Gipsies, 1865, p. 234). In the Gypsy Lore Journal for January 1892, pp. 134–142, is an article by Henri van Elven on ‘The Gypsies of Belgium,’ with excellent illustrations of a Hungarian-Gypsy furnace and bellows, corresponding to Simson’s description. And there are also illustrations and minute descriptions of the Gypsy furnace and bellows in Kopernicki’s masterly monograph on ‘Les Zlotars ou Dzvonkars, Tsiganes fondeurs en bronze dans la Galicie Orientale et la Bukovine,’ communicated by Bataillard to the Société d’Anthropologie (Paris, 1878). From a footnote here on p. 519 we learn that ‘the Calderari often use two of these bellows at once, making them work turn-about to right and to left, so as to produce a constant blast.’ One is tempted to conclude that the mint at Tangiers in 1841 was worked by Gypsies, that here we get an explanation of those mysterious visits of the Hungarian Calderari to Northern Africa, referred to in the Introduction. It sounds surprising, but Mr. Campbell, I doubt not, would have been quite as surprised to learn that the church bell of Edzell in Forfarshire was cast in the woods by Gypsies in 1726; that about 1740 the Border Gypsies practised engraving on pewter, lead, and copper, as well as rude drawing and painting; that about the beginning of this century the Gypsies had a small foundry near St. Andrews, which the country-folk called ‘Little Carron’; that Killin in 1748 had its tinker silversmith, whose secret of enamel inlaying died with him; or that the silver Celtic Lochbuy Brooch, a pound in weight, was made by a Mull tinker ‘in the reign of Queen Elizabeth, about the year 1600’ (Strand Magazine, January 1897, p. 115). I myself have sat and watched a Gypsy lad, a Boswell, fashion a pretty silver finger-ring out of a shilling I had given him, and have thought of the hoard of a travelling silversmith which in 1858 was unearthed on Skaill Links in Orkney. It comprised brooches, neck-rings, arm-rings, silver ingots, and Cufic coins, struck at Bagdad between 887 and 945. ‘It seems most unlikely,’ says Mr. Lang, ‘that tales which originated in India could have reached the Hebrides within the historic period.’ Perhaps; but where coins could come, so surely also could folk-tales.—A desperate footnote this, but nothing to what has some day to be written on the subject of Gypsy metallurgy. 

9 I have furnished a name to this nameless story, a long one, which Campbell got from ‘Old MacDonald, travelling tinker.’ Else I give it just as he gives it. 


Story DNA fairy tale · hopeful

Moral

Even the underestimated can achieve great things through courage and unexpected alliances.

Plot Summary

When the King of Erin falls ill, his two elder, lazy sons fail in their quest for the healing Water of the Green Isle. The youngest son, John, deemed a fool, embarks on the quest alone. He befriends a powerful Brown Bear and an Eagle, who guide and assist him through encounters with formidable giants and to the magical Green Isle, where he gathers the healing water and discovers inexhaustible magical items and a beautiful woman. Upon his return, his brothers attempt to steal his success, but John ultimately reveals their treachery, cures his father, marries the woman, and becomes king, while his brothers face justice.

Themes

perseverancecouragetransformationloyalty

Emotional Arc

underestimation to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: direct address to reader, repetition of phrases

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: talking bear, magical Green Isle, healing water, inexhaustible whisky bottle, inexhaustible loaf of bread, inexhaustible cheese, prophetic giant, talking eagle, magical shirt/snake (in 'The Magic Shirt' sub-story)
the water of the Green Isle (healing, life)the Brown Bear of the Green Glen (guidance, strength, wisdom)the eagle (transport, insight)the magical inexhaustible items (abundance, reward)

Cultural Context

Origin: Scottish-Tinker (Irish/Celtic influence)
Era: timeless fairy tale

The story is presented as a Scottish-Tinker tale, indicating a tradition of storytelling among the Scottish Romani people, often blending Celtic folklore with their own narrative styles. The notes mention parallels with Polish-Gypsy and Servian tales, suggesting cross-cultural diffusion of story motifs.

Plot Beats (14)

  1. King of Erin loses sight and strength; two elder sons set out to find water from the Green Isle, but waste time in a town.
  2. Youngest son, John (considered a fool), also sets out and finds his brothers idling.
  3. John continues alone into a dark wood, climbs a tree for safety, and is confronted by the Brown Bear of the Green Glen.
  4. John descends, befriends the bear, who provides him with food and shelter.
  5. The bear guides John to the first giant's house, where John gains hospitality by invoking the bear's name.
  6. The bear guides John to the second giant, where John again uses the bear's name for hospitality.
  7. The bear guides John to the third giant, where John must wrestle the giant and calls upon the bear for help when in trouble.
  8. The third giant, now acknowledging the bear's mastery, sets John a task: cut a wart from an eagle's ear without drawing blood.
  9. John successfully completes the task, and the eagle carries him to the Green Isle.
  10. On the Green Isle, John fills his bottles with the water of life and discovers inexhaustible magical items (whisky, loaf, cheese) and a beautiful woman.
  11. The eagle returns John to the giants, where he trades the magical items for wealth and a promise that his 'first sweetheart' will receive them.
  12. John returns to his father's town, finds his brothers still idling, and they attempt to steal his bottles and claim his success.
  13. John's brothers present the water to the king, but it fails to work; John then reveals himself and cures his father with the true water.
  14. John's brothers are punished (hanged, then cut down and given a chance to reform), and John marries the beautiful woman and becomes king.

Characters 6 characters

John ★ protagonist

human young adult male

A sturdy young man, likely of average height and build for a Scottish Highlander, with a resilient constitution capable of enduring long journeys and wrestling giants. His appearance is not explicitly detailed, but his 'foolish' reputation suggests he might initially seem unassuming.

Attire: Simple, durable clothing suitable for travel and the rugged Scottish/Irish landscape. Perhaps a tunic of coarse wool or linen, practical trousers, and sturdy leather brogues (untanned leather shoes). He would not wear elaborate attire, reflecting his initial 'fool' status and journey.

Wants: To restore his father's sight and strength by finding the water of the green isle, and to prove his worth, defying his brothers' dismissal.

Flaw: Initially underestimated by others (and perhaps himself), leading to a lack of confidence or being taken less seriously. His politeness can sometimes make him seem naive.

Transforms from an underestimated 'fool' into a proven hero, demonstrating wisdom, courage, and strength far beyond his brothers. He successfully completes his quest and frees himself from a magical serpent.

A young man with a determined expression, wearing practical, slightly worn Celtic attire, perhaps with a subtle hint of royal lineage beneath his humble appearance.

Initially perceived as 'not wise enough' or a 'fool,' but proves to be courageous, resourceful, quick-witted, and surprisingly resilient. He is also polite and respectful, even when facing fearsome creatures.

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A young man standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has dark brown, slightly disheveled hair, a determined expression with bright, observant eyes, and a sturdy build. He wears a simple, knee-length wool tunic in a muted green or brown, belted at the waist with a leather strap, and practical leather brogues. He holds three empty glass bottles in one hand and a plain, unadorned sword in the other. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Brown Bear of the Green Glen ◆ supporting

magical creature ageless non-human

A large, powerful brown bear, but with an unusual, almost human-like intelligence and demeanor. Its fur is shaggy and thick, indicative of a wild creature, but it moves with a surprising agility, capable of climbing trees and carrying a human at great speed.

Attire: None, as it is a wild animal.

Wants: To help John complete his quest, possibly as part of a larger, unseen purpose or ancient pact, and to test John's character.

Flaw: None explicitly stated, but its existence is tied to the 'Green Glen,' suggesting a connection to its natural habitat.

Serves as a catalyst and guide for John's journey, revealing its true nature and power as it aids him. It remains a constant, benevolent force.

A massive, shaggy brown bear with intelligent, knowing eyes, capable of standing on its hind legs and conversing with humans.

Wise, powerful, protective, and surprisingly hospitable. It acts as a guide and mentor to John, testing his courage and providing aid. It has a dry wit.

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A massive, shaggy brown bear standing on its hind legs, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. It has thick, dark brown fur, powerful claws, and intelligent, dark eyes. Its expression is wise and slightly stern. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The First Giant ◆ supporting

giant adult male

A very large, imposing figure, much taller and broader than a human. His size alone is intimidating. He is described as 'pretty grumpy,' suggesting a rough, perhaps unkempt appearance.

Attire: Simple, oversized garments made of coarse material, perhaps animal hides or roughly woven cloth, reflecting his wild and solitary existence.

Wants: To maintain his solitary existence and perhaps to test intruders, but ultimately bound by respect or fear of the Brown Bear.

Flaw: His fear or respect for the Brown Bear of the Green Glen, which overrides his initial hostility.

His character shifts from antagonist to a benevolent host, demonstrating the power of the Brown Bear's influence.

A towering, grumpy giant with a heavy brow, who unexpectedly offers hospitality.

Grumpy, initially hostile and threatening, but quickly becomes hospitable and respectful once he learns John is under the protection of the Brown Bear.

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A towering, broad-shouldered giant standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a gruff, weathered face with a heavy brow, deep-set eyes, and a wild, dark beard. He wears a simple, oversized tunic of coarse, dark brown fabric, belted with a thick rope. His posture is imposing and slightly hunched. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Third Giant ◆ supporting

giant adult male

A colossal figure, even larger and more formidable than the previous giants, with immense physical strength. He is a formidable wrestler.

Attire: Minimal, practical clothing for wrestling, perhaps a simple loincloth or a short, sturdy tunic made of animal hide, showing off his muscular physique.

Wants: To test the strength and courage of visitors, particularly those prophesied to come. He enjoys physical challenges.

Flaw: His pride in his strength, which is humbled by the mention of the Brown Bear, his former master.

Initially an antagonist, he becomes an ally and guide after being reminded of his former master, the Brown Bear.

A massive, muscular giant in a wrestling stance, with a fierce expression.

Aggressive, challenging, and proud of his wrestling prowess. He is quick to engage in physical contests but also respects strength and the authority of the Brown Bear.

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A colossal, muscular giant in a dynamic wrestling stance, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a fierce, determined expression, a powerful jaw, and wild, dark hair and beard. He wears a simple, sturdy, knee-length tunic of dark, coarse fabric, revealing his immense physique. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Eagle ◆ supporting

magical creature ageless female

A magnificent, enormous eagle, large enough to carry a human on its wings. Its feathers are likely dark brown or golden-brown, with a powerful beak and sharp talons.

Attire: None, as it is a bird.

Wants: To repay John for removing the wart without drawing blood, and to fulfill her role in the larger magical scheme.

Flaw: The wart on her ear, which is a vulnerability that John must address.

Serves as a crucial guide and transporter for John, enabling him to reach the Green Isle.

A majestic, enormous eagle with piercing eyes, capable of carrying a human.

Wise, grateful, and powerful. She is direct and helpful once John proves his skill and respect.

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A majestic, enormous eagle with outstretched wings, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. It has rich, dark brown feathers, a powerful yellow beak, and piercing golden eyes. Its talons are sharp and strong. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Lady ◆ supporting

human young adult female

A beautiful young woman, initially under a powerful enchantment. Her appearance is not explicitly detailed, but she is worthy of being a king's son's bride.

Attire: Initially, she is stripped to the waist for the ritual, but after her freedom, she would wear fine, regal clothing befitting a queen, possibly a flowing gown of silk or fine linen, adorned with a golden breastplate.

Wants: To free John from the serpent's spell and to marry him.

Flaw: Initially under the influence of the serpent's spell, which affects John.

She actively participates in freeing John from a magical serpent, becoming his wife and queen.

A beautiful lady wearing a golden breastplate, symbolizing her courage and new status.

Courageous and determined, as she actively participates in the ritual to free John from the serpent, even wielding a knife against it.

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A beautiful young woman standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has long, flowing light brown hair, a fair complexion, and gentle yet determined blue eyes. She wears a flowing gown of deep green silk, with a simple, elegant cut. Over her dress, she wears a finely crafted golden breastplate. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 4 locations
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Deserted Wood

outdoor dusk | night Implied temperate climate, dark and possibly cold at night.

A vast, desolate forest where the night falls quickly, making it dark and eerie. The trees are large enough for a horse to be tied to a root and a person to climb into the canopy for safety.

Mood: Eerie, wild, mysterious, initially threatening but becomes a place of encounter.

John, the king's son, encounters the Brown Bear of the Green Glen here, marking the beginning of his true adventure.

dense tree canopy exposed tree roots cripple white horse fiery cinder (carried by bear)
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A dense, ancient forest at twilight, with gnarled oak trees casting long, deep shadows. The forest floor is covered in fallen leaves and exposed, moss-covered roots. A faint, cool blue light filters through the thick canopy, barely illuminating the path. The air is still and heavy with the scent of damp earth and old wood. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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First Giant's House

indoor night Implied temperate, interior is warm and comfortable once hospitality is granted.

A giant's dwelling, likely large and imposing, where John is initially met with hostility but then offered hospitality due to the bear's influence.

Mood: Initially threatening and intimidating, then surprisingly hospitable and comforting.

John receives shelter and sustenance, demonstrating the Brown Bear's protective power and influence over the giants.

large interior space table laden with meat and drink
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The interior of a massive, roughly constructed stone hall, dimly lit by a roaring hearth. Heavy, dark timber beams support a high ceiling. A colossal, rough-hewn wooden table dominates the center, laden with large cuts of roasted meat and overflowing tankards. The walls are bare, rough-hewn stone, and the floor is packed earth. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Third Giant's Wrestling Ground

outdoor day Implied temperate, possibly damp given the boggy description.

An open, rugged landscape where John wrestles the third giant. The ground is described as transforming under their struggle, making 'boggy bog of the rocky rock,' sinking to the knee in hard places and to the thighs in soft, and bringing forth spring water from rocks.

Mood: Intense, physically demanding, magical due to the ground's transformation.

John's climactic wrestling match with the third giant, where he calls upon the Brown Bear for aid, leading to the giant's submission and the next stage of his quest.

rocky terrain boggy patches spring water emerging from rocks
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A wild, untamed Scottish landscape with rolling hills and exposed, weathered grey rock formations. Patches of dark, peaty bogland are interspersed with areas of tough, heather-covered ground. Small, clear springs of water trickle from fissures in the rocks, creating damp, mossy patches. The sky is overcast, casting a soft, diffused light over the rugged terrain. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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The Green Isle

outdoor day Lush, green, implied temperate or mild climate.

A mysterious, verdant island surrounded by deep waters, where the magical healing water is found. It contains a well and a small, nearby house. Black dogs are mentioned as guardians.

Mood: Magical, sacred, slightly perilous due to the 'black dogs'.

John retrieves the three bottles of healing water for his father, completing a major part of his quest.

well of healing water small house lush green vegetation deep surrounding waters black dogs (implied presence)
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A small, secluded island covered in vibrant, emerald-green grass and low-lying, flowering shrubs. In the center, a stone well with clear, shimmering water. A tiny, simple stone cottage with a thatched roof stands nestled among the greenery nearby. The island is surrounded by deep, dark blue-green ocean waters, with gentle waves lapping at the shore. The sky is bright and clear, with soft white clouds. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.