The Magic Palace[ToC](#toc)
by Gertrude Landa · from Jewish Fairy Tales and Legends
Adapted Version
Ibrahim was a good man. But he was very poor. Ibrahim's wife and five sons were hungry. Their clothes were old.
Ibrahim's wife saw this. She told him, "Go find work."
Ibrahim's wife got a cloak for him. Ibrahim wore it. He felt hope. He left.
A Helper met Ibrahim. The Helper was a builder. He showed Ibrahim plans. He had a small palace model. It was very nice.
The Helper said, "Find a rich man. He needs a builder. You can help me."
Ibrahim found a Rich Man. The Rich Man wanted a palace. Ibrahim showed him the model. The model was good.
The Rich Man loved the model. He hired the Helper. He gave Ibrahim much gold. Ibrahim was happy.
Ibrahim went home with the gold. His kin was not poor now. Helper said, 'Palace ready next day.'
The Rich Man took the Helper. They went to the land. The sun set. The Helper said, "I must pray alone."
Ibrahim slept. The Rich Man slept. They both dreamed. Many workers built a palace. The Helper watched them.
In his dream, Ibrahim saw the Helper. The Helper was special. He was the Prophet.
Ibrahim woke up. The Rich Man woke up. They saw a big palace. It was new and bright. It was like their dream.
The Helper came out. He said, "The palace is ready. I kept my word." He blessed Ibrahim. He blessed the Rich Man. He went inside. He was gone.
Ibrahim and the Rich Man went inside. They looked for the Helper. They did not find him. He was gone. He was special.
Ibrahim said, "It was the Prophet. He is a Prophet. He helps good people." They felt happy. They felt lucky.
The Rich Man had a big party. It was in the new palace. He gave gold and silver. All were happy.
Ibrahim and his kin were happy. The Rich Man was happy too. They knew good things happen to good people.
Original Story
The Magic PalaceToC
Ibrahim, the most learned and pious man of the city, whom everybody held in esteem, fell on troubled days. To none did he speak of his sufferings, for he was proud and would have been compelled to refuse the help which he knew would have been offered to him. His noble wife and five faithful sons suffered in silence, but Ibrahim was sorely troubled when he saw their clothes wearing away to rags and their bodies wasting with hunger.
One day Ibrahim was seated in front of the Holy Book, but he saw not the words on its pages. His eyes were dimmed with tears and his thoughts were far away. He was day-dreaming of a region where hunger and thirst and lack of clothes and shelter were unknown. He sighed heavily and his wife heard.
"My dear husband," she said to him gently, "we are starving. You must go forth to seek work for the sake of our five little sons."
"Yes, yes," he replied, sadly, "and for you, too, my devoted wife, but"—and he pointed to his tattered garments—"how can I go out in these? Who will employ a man so miserably clad?"
"I will ask our kind neighbors to lend you some raiment," said his wife, and although he made some demur at first, she did so and was successful in obtaining the loan of a cloak which completely covered Ibrahim and restored to him his dignified appearance.
His good wife cheered him with brave words. He took his staff and set out with head erect and his heart filled with a great hope. All people saluted the learned Ibrahim, for it was not often he was seen abroad in the busy streets of the city. He returned their greetings with kindly smiles, but halted not in his walk. He had no wish to make any claims upon his fellow citizens, who would no doubt have gladly assisted him. He desired to go among strangers and work so that he should not be beholden to anyone.
Beyond the city gates, where the palm trees grew and the camels trudged lazily toward the distant desert, he was suddenly accosted by a stranger dressed as an Arab.
"O learned and holy man of the city," he said, "command me, for I am thy slave." At the same time he made a low bow before Ibrahim.
"My slave!" returned Ibrahim, in surprise. "You mock me, stranger. I am wretchedly poor. I seek but the opportunity to sell myself, even as a slave, to any man who will provide food and clothing for my wife and children."
"Sell not thyself," said the Arab. "Offer me for sale instead. I am a marvelous builder. Behold these plans and models, specimens of my skill and handiwork."
From beneath the folds of his ample robes, the Arab produced a scroll and a box and held them out to Ibrahim. The latter took them, wonderingly. On the scroll were traced designs of stately buildings. Within the box was an exquisite model of a palace, a marvelous piece of work, perfect in detail and workmanship. Ibrahim examined it with great care.
"I have never seen anything so beautiful," he admitted. "It is wrought and fashioned with exceeding good taste. It is in itself a work of art. You must indeed be a wondrous craftsman. Whence come you?"
"What matters that?" replied the Arab. "I am thy slave. Is there not in this city some rich merchant or nobleman who needs the services of such talents as I possess? Seek him out and dispose of me to him. To thee he will give ear; to me he will not listen."
Ibrahim pondered over this strange request for a while.
"Agreed!" he said, at length.
Together they returned to the city. There Ibrahim made inquiries in the bazaar where the wealthy traders met to discuss their affairs, and soon learned of a rich dealer in precious stones, a man of a multitude of charitable deeds, who was anxious to erect an imposing residence. He called upon the jeweler.
"Noble sir," he said, "I hear that it is thy intention to erect a palace the like of which this city has not yet seen, an edifice that will be an everlasting joy to its possessor, a delight to all who gaze upon it, and which will bring renown to this city."
"That is so," said the merchant. "You have interpreted the desire of my heart as if you had read its secret. I would fain dedicate to the uses of the ruler of this city a palace that will shed luster on his name."
"It is well," returned Ibrahim. "I have brought thee an architect and builder of genius. Examine his plans and designs. If they please thee, as assuredly they will, purchase the man from me, for he is my slave."
The jeweler could not understand the plans on the scroll, but on the model in the box he feasted his eyes for several minutes in speechless amazement.
"It is indeed remarkable," he said at last. "I will give thee eighty thousand gold pieces for thy slave, who must build for me just such a palace."
Ibrahim immediately informed the Arab, who at once consented to perform the task, and then the pious man hastened home to his wife and children with the good news and the money, which made him rich for the rest of his days.
To the Arab the jeweler said, "Thou wilt regain thy liberty if thou wilt succeed in thy undertaking. Begin at once. I will forthwith engage the workmen."
"I need no workmen," was the Arab's singular reply. "Take me to the land whereon I must build, and to-morrow thy palace shall be complete."
"Tomorrow!"
"Even as I say," answered the Arab.
The sun was setting in golden glory when they reached the ground, and pointing to the sky the Arab said: "Tomorrow, when the great orb of light rises above the distant hills, its rays will strike the minarets and domes and towers of thy palace, noble sir. Leave me now. I must pray."
In perfect bewilderment, the merchant left the stranger. From a distance he watched the man devoutly praying. He had made up his mind to watch all the night; but when the moon rose, deep sleep overcame him and he dreamed. He dreamed that he saw myriads of men swarming about strange machines and scaffolding which grew higher and higher, hiding a vast structure.
Ibrahim dreamed, too, but in his vision one figure, that of the Arab, stood out above all other things. Ibrahim scanned the features of the stranger closely; he followed, as it were, the man's every movement. He noticed how all the workmen and particularly the supervisors did the stranger great honor, showing him the deference due to one of the highest position. And with grave and dignified mien, the Arab responded kindly. From the heavens a bright light shone upon the scene, the radiance being softest wherever the Arab stood.
In his dream, it so appeared to Ibrahim, he rose from his bed, went out into the night, and approached the palace magically rising from the waste ground beyond the city. Nearer and nearer his footsteps took him, until he stood beside the Arab again. One of the chief workmen approached and addressed the stranger—by name!
Then it was Ibrahim understood—and he awoke. The sun was streaming in through the lattice of his bedroom. He sprang from his bed and looked out upon a magnificent spectacle. Beyond the city the sun's rays were reflected by a dazzling array of gilded cupolas and glittering spires, the towers of the palace of marble that he had seen builded in his dream. Instantly he went out and made haste to the palace to assure himself that his dream was really over. Ibrahim and the jeweler arrived before the gates at the same moment. They stood speechless with amazement and admiration before the model of the Arab grown to immense proportions.
Almost at the same moment, the gates, ornamented with beaten gold, opened from within and the Arab stood before them. Ibrahim bent low his head.
The Arab addressed the merchant.
"Have I fulfilled my promise and earned my freedom?" he asked.
"Verily thou hast," answered the merchant.
"Then farewell, and may blessings rest on thee and the good Ibrahim and on all your works."
Thus spoke the Arab, raising his hands in benediction. Then he disappeared within the golden doors.
The jeweler and Ibrahim followed quickly, but though they hastened through the halls and corridors of many colored marbles, in and out of rooms lighted by windows of clearest crystal, and up and down staircases of burnished metal, they could find no one. Emerging into the open again, they saw a huge crowd standing in wonderment before the gates.
"Tell me," said the jeweler, "who was the builder of this magic palace."
"Elijah, the Prophet," said Ibrahim, "the benefactor of mankind, who revisits the earth to assist in their distress those deemed worthy. Blessed am I, and blessed art thou for thy good deeds, for we have been truly honored."
To show his gratitude, the merchant gave a banquet in his palace to all the people in the city and scattered gold and silver pieces among the crowds that thronged the streets.
Story DNA
Moral
Goodness and piety, even in times of suffering, will be rewarded by divine intervention.
Plot Summary
Ibrahim, a learned and pious man, falls into poverty, causing his family to suffer. His wife encourages him to seek work, and he sets out with borrowed dignity. Outside the city, he encounters a mysterious Arab who declares himself Ibrahim's slave and a master builder, presenting a magnificent palace model. The Arab instructs Ibrahim to sell him to a wealthy merchant. Ibrahim finds a charitable jeweler who is amazed by the model and buys the 'slave' for a fortune. The Arab promises to build the palace overnight, needing no workmen, and both Ibrahim and the jeweler dream of its magical construction. They awaken to find the palace completed, and the Arab reveals himself as Elijah the Prophet before disappearing. The jeweler, in gratitude, celebrates their divine blessing by hosting a banquet and distributing wealth.
Themes
Emotional Arc
suffering to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The story draws on themes common in Jewish folklore, particularly the role of Elijah the Prophet as a helper of the poor and righteous. The setting evokes a generalized 'Orientalist' fairy tale aesthetic common in 19th/early 20th-century European literature.
Plot Beats (16)
- Ibrahim, a respected and pious man, falls into extreme poverty, silently enduring hardship with his wife and five sons.
- His wife, seeing their suffering, gently urges him to go seek work, despite his tattered clothes.
- Ibrahim's wife borrows a cloak from neighbors, restoring his dignified appearance, and he sets out with hope.
- Outside the city, a mysterious Arab accosts Ibrahim, declaring himself his slave and a master builder, showing him impressive plans and a palace model.
- The Arab instructs Ibrahim to sell him to a wealthy merchant, as Ibrahim's reputation will grant him an audience.
- Ibrahim finds a charitable jeweler who wishes to build a magnificent palace and presents the Arab's model.
- The jeweler is astonished by the model and purchases the 'slave' from Ibrahim for 80,000 gold pieces.
- Ibrahim returns home with the money, ending his family's poverty, while the Arab promises the jeweler the palace will be complete by the next morning.
- The jeweler takes the Arab to the building site at sunset, where the Arab asks to be left alone to pray.
- Both Ibrahim and the jeweler fall asleep and dream of the palace being magically constructed overnight by a multitude of workers, with the Arab as the revered supervisor.
- Ibrahim, in his dream, recognizes the Arab as the Prophet Elijah.
- They both awaken to find a magnificent, dazzling palace standing where the empty ground was, exactly as seen in their dreams.
- The Arab emerges from the palace, confirms his promise is fulfilled, blesses Ibrahim and the jeweler, and disappears into the golden doors.
- The jeweler and Ibrahim search the palace but find no trace of the Arab, confirming his divine nature.
- Ibrahim reveals the builder was Elijah, the Prophet, a benefactor of mankind, and they acknowledge their blessed fortune.
- The jeweler, in gratitude, hosts a grand banquet in the new palace and distributes gold and silver to the city's people.
Characters
Ibrahim ★ protagonist
A man of dignified appearance, though initially clad in tattered garments due to poverty. He is likely of average height and build, with features consistent with a man from a Middle Eastern city, possibly with a scholarly or gentle demeanor.
Attire: Initially, tattered and worn garments. Later, he borrows a dignified cloak that completely covers him, restoring his esteemed appearance. This cloak would likely be a simple, flowing outer garment in a muted color, suitable for a pious scholar.
Wants: To provide for his noble wife and five faithful sons, to alleviate their suffering and hunger, and to maintain his dignity.
Flaw: His pride initially prevents him from seeking help from his fellow citizens, prolonging his family's suffering.
Transforms from a man suffering in silent despair and poverty to a man of renewed hope and wealth, having been blessed by a divine encounter and recognizing the true nature of the 'Arab'. He learns that his piety and good deeds are rewarded.
Pious, learned, proud, devoted, humble (in seeking work), grateful, observant (in his dream).
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A middle-aged man with a dignified and scholarly appearance, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a neatly trimmed dark beard and kind, observant dark eyes. He wears a simple, flowing, cream-colored thobe with a wide, dark brown cloak draped over his shoulders, covering most of his body. He holds a plain wooden staff in his right hand. His posture is upright and noble, with a thoughtful expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Ibrahim's Wife ◆ supporting
Described as 'noble,' suggesting a graceful and perhaps resilient build, though her body is 'wasting with hunger.' She is likely of average height and build, with features consistent with a woman from a Middle Eastern city.
Attire: Initially, 'wearing away to rags,' indicating very simple, worn garments. She would wear modest, traditional clothing, likely a simple dress or tunic and trousers, covered by an outer garment and a head covering, in muted, practical colors.
Wants: To ensure the survival and well-being of her husband and five sons.
Flaw: Her own suffering and the suffering of her children, which compels her to push her proud husband to seek work.
Remains a steadfast and supportive figure, her suffering is alleviated by her husband's success, and her family's well-being is restored.
Noble, devoted, brave, practical, gentle, supportive, resourceful (in obtaining the cloak).
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A noble woman of Middle Eastern descent, standing gracefully, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has soft, kind dark eyes and a gentle, concerned expression. Her dark hair is modestly covered by a simple, flowing cream-colored headscarf. She wears a long, loose-fitting, light blue linen dress with long sleeves, and a simple, unadorned outer robe in a muted beige color. Her hands are clasped gently in front of her. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Arab (Elijah, the Prophet) ◆ supporting
Appears as a man dressed as an Arab, but with an aura of dignity and power. In Ibrahim's dream, he stands out, receiving deference and bathed in soft light, suggesting a majestic and perhaps ethereal presence.
Attire: Dressed in 'ample robes' typical of an Arab, which conceal a scroll and a box. These robes would be of fine, flowing fabric, perhaps white or light-colored, suggesting purity and wisdom, with a simple head covering like a keffiyeh or a small turban.
Wants: To assist those deemed worthy in their distress, specifically Ibrahim, and to demonstrate divine blessing through the construction of the magic palace.
Flaw: None apparent, as he is a divine being.
Reveals his true divine nature, fulfilling his purpose of assisting Ibrahim and the jeweler, and then disappears.
Mysterious, powerful, benevolent, humble (in his disguise), wise, efficient, divine.
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A majestic man of Middle Eastern descent, appearing ageless, standing calmly, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a long, flowing white beard and kind, wise dark eyes. He wears a pristine white thobe made of fine linen, with a matching white keffiyeh draped over his head and secured with a black agal. His ample robes flow gracefully around him. He holds a rolled parchment scroll in his left hand and a small, intricately carved wooden box in his right. His expression is serene and benevolent. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Jeweler (Rich Merchant) ◆ supporting
A rich dealer in precious stones, described as a man of 'a multitude of charitable deeds.' He would likely be well-fed and well-groomed, reflecting his wealth and status. His features would be consistent with a wealthy merchant from a Middle Eastern city.
Attire: Wears clothing appropriate for a rich merchant in a Middle Eastern city. This would include fine, flowing robes made of silk or brocade, possibly in rich colors like deep blue or maroon, perhaps with subtle embroidery. He might wear a turban or a more elaborate head covering.
Wants: To erect a magnificent palace that will bring renown to the city and shed luster on the ruler's name, and to perform charitable deeds.
Flaw: Initially unable to comprehend the plans on the scroll, relying solely on the visual model, and bewildered by the Arab's strange requests.
Witnesses a miracle, receives a divine blessing, and expresses his gratitude through a grand banquet and generosity to the city's people.
Wealthy, charitable, ambitious (desiring an imposing residence), discerning (recognizing the model's beauty), amazed, grateful.
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A wealthy Middle Eastern merchant, middle-aged, standing confidently, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a neatly trimmed dark beard and intelligent, discerning dark eyes. He wears a flowing, deep blue silk thobe with subtle gold embroidery on the collar and cuffs, and a matching blue turban adorned with a single large, polished gemstone. His hands are clasped in front of him, conveying a sense of authority and generosity. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Ibrahim's Humble Home
A modest dwelling within the city, likely a simple house with a lattice window, showing signs of poverty with tattered garments and hunger.
Mood: Somber, filled with quiet suffering and desperation, but also love and resilience.
Ibrahim contemplates his family's poverty and is urged by his wife to seek work.
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A humble, sun-drenched room in a traditional Middle Eastern house. Sunlight streams through a carved wooden lattice window, illuminating dust motes in the air. The room is sparsely furnished with worn textiles and a low wooden table where a large, ancient book lies open. The walls are made of rough plaster, and the floor is cool, simple tile. The overall impression is one of quiet dignity amidst hardship. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
City Gates and Desert Edge
The boundary of the city, where the urban environment gives way to a more natural, arid landscape. Palm trees grow, and camels are seen trudging towards the distant desert.
Mood: Hopeful, expectant, a threshold between the known and the unknown.
Ibrahim leaves the city and encounters the mysterious Arab, who offers him the plans for the magic palace.
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A wide, ancient stone archway marking the city gates, with a dusty, well-trodden path leading out into a sun-baked landscape. On either side of the path, tall date palm trees sway gently, their fronds casting dappled shadows. In the distance, the golden-brown undulations of a vast desert stretch to the horizon under a clear, pale blue sky. A few camels are visible, slowly making their way towards the desert. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
The Bazaar
A bustling marketplace where wealthy traders meet and discuss their affairs, filled with the sounds and sights of commerce.
Mood: Lively, vibrant, a hub of activity and wealth.
Ibrahim seeks out a rich merchant to sell the Arab's services as a builder.
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A bustling, sun-drenched Arabian bazaar, with narrow, winding alleyways shaded by colorful awnings and intricate wooden latticework. Stalls overflow with vibrant textiles, gleaming metalwork, and sparkling precious stones. Merchants in flowing robes haggle with customers, and the air is filled with the scent of spices and the murmur of many voices. The ground is packed earth or worn cobblestones. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
The Magic Palace
A miraculously built palace of marble, with dazzling gilded cupolas, glittering spires, and towers. Inside, it features halls and corridors of many-colored marbles, rooms with crystal windows, and staircases of burnished metal. Its gates are ornamented with beaten gold.
Mood: Awe-inspiring, magnificent, magical, opulent, mysterious.
The palace appears overnight, built by Elijah the Prophet, and serves as the setting for the merchant's banquet.
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A breathtaking Arabian palace, gleaming under the bright morning sun. Its numerous domes and minarets are adorned with dazzling gold leaf, reflecting the light like jewels. The entire structure is crafted from pristine white and subtly veined marble, rising majestically from the desert landscape. Ornate, beaten gold gates stand open, revealing glimpses of grand, arching entrances. The sky above is a clear, brilliant blue. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.