The Outcast Prince[ToC](#toc)
by Gertrude Landa · from Jewish Fairy Tales and Legends
Adapted Version
Once upon a time, a young prince named Leo lived. He lived in a big castle. Prince Leo was not always kind. He was often very proud. He thought he was better than others. He did many naughty actions. He would push people. He would take their toys. He made many people feel sad. He did not think about others. He thought only of himself. He liked to have his own way.
Many people felt sad about Prince Leo. They went to King Arthur. They told King Arthur their stories. King Arthur listened carefully. He heard many sad tales. He saw that the stories were true. King Arthur felt very sad too. He loved his son. But he knew he must do something important. He knew it was hard.
King Arthur called Prince Leo. He told Prince Leo he must leave the castle. He must go out into the world. He must learn five important things. He would have no money. He would have no fancy clothes. He would be like everyone else. Prince Leo felt very sad. He was also a little angry. He did not want to go.
Prince Leo walked all alone. The wind blew cold. He felt very cold. His tummy was empty. He was very hungry. He missed his warm, soft bed. He missed yummy food from the castle. He had simple, plain clothes now. They were not fancy. He was not a prince now. He was just Leo.
Prince Leo walked for many, many days. He walked through towns. He walked through fields. He saw other people on the road. They were also cold. They were also hungry. They had no warm homes. He started to feel sad for them. He saw their struggles. He started to think about his unkind actions. He thought about why the King sent him away. He understood a little more.
One cold day, a kind man saw Prince Leo. The man helped him. He took Prince Leo to a warm house. Princess Lily made this special house. It was a place for people who need help. Prince Leo got warm food to eat. He felt safe inside. He felt so much better. He cried a little bit. He was happy to be safe. He was also sad about his past.
Princess Lily saw Prince Leo was still sad. She sat with him. She asked him gently why. He told her he was not kind before. He told her about his proud heart. He told her about the King's words. "Learn five good things," the King had said. Prince Leo did not say he was a prince. He just told his story.
Princess Lily brought a wise old man to meet Prince Leo. The wise man had kind eyes. He listened to Prince Leo's story. Then, he told Prince Leo the five important things. He said they are: feeling hungry, feeling cold, being kind to others, saying thank you, and being humble (not proud). Prince Leo listened closely. He thought about his journey. He had felt all these things. He understood now.
Prince Leo knew deep in his heart. He knew he had learned. He learned all five good things. He felt different inside. The wise man smiled. He said Prince Leo could go home now. He could go to his father. Prince Leo was ready to be a good son. He was ready to be a good prince.
Prince Leo thanked Princess Lily. He thanked her for her help. He thought she was very kind. He thought she had a good heart. He said he would come back. He would see her again soon. He wanted to tell her more about his new life.
Prince Leo went back to King Arthur. He walked into the castle. He told his father all he learned. He spoke of his journey. He spoke of the five things. The King was very, very happy. Prince Leo was now a kind person. He was a fair person. He was a good prince. He had changed for the better.
Later, some time passed. Prince Leo went back to Princess Lily's house. He brought his good friends with him. He reminded her of their first meeting. He told her how kind she was. He asked her to marry him. He wanted her to be his queen.
Princess Lily smiled. She said yes! They went to Prince Leo's kingdom together. Everyone was happy to see them. The people cheered loudly. They lived happy ever after. They were very kind rulers. They ruled with kindness and love. All people in the land were happy. Their kingdom was peaceful.
Original Story
The Outcast PrinceToC
There lived a king who had an only son, on whom he doted. No one, not even his oldest tutor, was permitted to utter a word of correction to the prince whenever he did anything wrong, and so he grew up completely spoiled. He had many faults, but the worst features of his character were that he was proud, arrogant and cruel. Naturally, too, he was selfish and disobedient. When he was called to his lessons, he refused, saying, "I am a prince. Before many years I shall be your king. I have no need to learn what common people must know. Enough for me that I shall occupy the throne and shall rule. My will alone shall prevail. Says not the law of the land, 'The king can do no wrong'?"
Handsome and haughty, even as a youth, he made the king's subjects fear him by his imperious manner. His appearance in the streets was the signal for everyone to run into his house, bar the doors, and peer nervously through the casements. He was a reckless rider, and woe betide the unfortunate persons who happened to be in his way. Sparing neither man, woman, nor child, he callously rode over them, or lashed out vindictively with the long whip he always carried, laughing when anyone screamed with pain.
So outrageous did his public conduct become that the people determined to suffer in silence no longer. They denounced the prince in public, they petitioned the king himself to restrain his son, and his majesty could not disregard the complaints. At first he was merely annoyed, then he was indignant, but when he saw that the people were thoroughly aroused and threatened revolt, he deemed it wise to inquire into the charges against his son.
A commission of three judges was appointed to investigate. They made fullest inquiry and finally laid a document before the king summarizing what they did not hesitate to declare the "infamous actions of His Royal Highness, the Crown Prince."
The king's sense of justice and righteousness at once overcame his foolish pride.
"My people stand justified in their attitude which at first I thought only disrespectful to my royal person," he said. "I owe them an apology and recompense. I shall atone. And my son shall atone, too. He shall not escape punishment."
He summoned his son to appear before him, and the prince entered the royal justice chamber with the air of a braggart, smiling contemptuously at the learned judges who were seated to right and left of his majesty, and defiantly cracking his whip.
"Knowest thou why thou hast been bidden to stand before the judges of the land?" asked the king.
"I know not and I care not," was the haughty answer. "The foolish chatter of the mob interests me not."
The king frowned. He had not seen the prince behave in this fashion before. In the presence of his father, he had always been respectful.
"Thou hast disgraced thy honored name and thy mother's sacred memory, foolish prince," exclaimed the monarch angrily. "Thou hast humiliated thyself and me before the people."
Still the prince tried to laugh off the matter as a joke, but he quickly discovered that the king was in no mood for trifling. Standing grave and erect, his majesty pronounced sentence in a loud and firm voice.
"Know all men," he said, while all the judges, counselors, officers of state and representatives of the people stood awed to silence, "that it having been proved on indisputable evidence that the prince, my son, hath grievously transgressed against the righteous laws of this land and against the people, my subjects, on whom he hath heaped insult, I have taken counsel with my advisers, the ministers of state, and it is my royal will and pleasure to pronounce sentence. Wherefore, I declare that my son, the prince, shall be cast forth into the world, penniless, and shall not return until he shall have learned how to Count Five. And be it further known that none may minister unto his wants should he crave assistance by declaring he is my son, the prince."
The prince stood astounded. What did the mysterious sentence mean? None could tell him. The only answer to his inquiries was a shrug of the shoulders, for nobody would speak to him.
In the dead of night, with only the stars gazing down on the strange scene, the prince, clad in the cast-off garments of a common laborer, with his golden curls cut off and not a solitary coin in his pocket, was conducted outside the palace grounds and left alone in the road.
He was too much dazed to weep. He told himself this was some horrible dream from which he would waken in the morning, to find himself in his own beautiful room, lying on his gilded bed under the richly embroidered silken coverlet.
When dawn broke, however, he found himself hungry, tired, and his body painfully stiff, under a hedge. He knew now it was no dream but a reality. He was alone and friendless, with no means of earning his food. He understood then what hardships the poor were compelled to undergo, and he began to realize how he had made them suffer, and how, in turn, he was now to pay a heavy price for his brutal treatment of the people.
All that day he wandered aimlessly, until, foot-sore and exhausted, he sank down at the door of a wayside cottage and begged for food and shelter. These were given to him, and next day he was set to work in the fields. But his hands were not used to labor, and he was sent adrift, his fellow workers jeering at him. With a heavy heart, and his pride humbled, he set forth again to learn the mystery of how to Count Five.
Long days and endless nights, through the heat of the summer, through the snows of winter, the autumnal rains and cold blasts of early spring, he wandered.
A whole year passed away, and he had learned nothing. In truth, he had almost forgotten why he was aimlessly drifting from place to place, farther and farther from his home.
Hunger and thirst were more often than not his daily portion, and the cold earth by night was frequently his couch. Time seemed to drag along without meaning, and oft-times for a week he heard not the sound of a human voice.
He was a beggar, generally accepting gratefully what was given to him, sometimes with harsh words, often with kindly expressions. When he could, he worked, doing anything for small coins, for a rabbi, who had taken compassion on him, had said, "Do any honest work, however repugnant it may at first seem, rather than say haughtily, 'I am the son of a rich father.'"
For a moment he wondered whether the rabbi had guessed his secret, but the learned man said to him he was but repeating a maxim from the Talmud.
Exactly a year from the date of his sentence, as well as he could keep count, the prince found himself in a strange land on the outskirts of a great city. There he fell in with a beggar who hailed him as a brother.
"Come with me," said the beggar. "I know the lore of our fraternity as few do. I know where to obtain the best food and shelter for naught. Here, in this city, a beautiful and noble princess has established a place where all wayfarers may rest and refresh. None are turned away. I will take you thither."
The beggar was as good as his word, and the prince enjoyed the best meal and the most comfortable shelter since he had been an outcast. Overcome with emotion at the thoughts which were conjured up, he retired into a corner and wept. Suddenly he heard a voice of entrancing sweetness say, "Why do you weep?"
He looked up and beheld the most beautiful woman his eyes had ever seen. Instinctively, he rose and bowed low, but made no answer.
"The princess speaks. It is your duty to answer," said another voice, that of an attendant.
A princess! Of course, none but a princess could be so fair. And what a sympathetic voice she possessed. As a prince, he remembered, he had spoken harshly as a rule, and had never visited any of the charitable institutions.
"You must have a history," said the princess, kindly. "Tell it to me. If it is to be kept a secret, you may place confidence in me. I shall not betray you."
The prince was on the point of telling her everything but he hesitated and said:
"Alas! I am an unhappy, wandering beggar, as you see, O most gracious princess. But pity me not. I am not worthy of your kind thoughts. A year ago I dwelt in a—a beautiful house. I was the only son of a—rich merchant, and my father lavished all his love and wealth on me. But I was wicked. I was unkind to people, and I was cast forth and ordered not to return until I had learned to Count Five. I have not yet learned. I am doomed to a wretched life. That is the whole of my history."
"Strange," murmured the princess. "I will help thee if I can."
Next day she came again to the shelter, and with her was the rabbi who had given the prince good counsel. The rabbi made no sign that he had seen the stranger before.
"This sage of the Jews is a wise man and will teach thee," said the princess, and, at her bidding, the prince repeated what he had said the previous night.
"It is a simple lesson," said the rabbi, "so absurdly simple, unfortunately, that proud people overlook it. Tell me, my son," he added. "Hast thou experienced hunger?"
"That I have," returned the prince, sadly.
"Then canst thou count One. Dost thou know what it is to feel cold?"
"I do."
"Two canst thou count. Tell me, further, dost thou know what kindness of heart is?"
"That have I received from the poorest and also from the gracious princess."
"Thou hast proceeded far in thy lesson," said the rabbi. "Thou canst now count Three. Hast thou ever felt gratitude?"
"Indeed I have, often during this past year, and now most particularly."
"Four is now the toll of thy count," said the rabbi. "Tell me, my son, hast thou learned the greatest lesson of all? Dost thou feel humble in spirit?"
With tears in his eyes, the prince answered, "I do, most sincerely."
"Then hast thou truly learned to Count Five. Return to thy father. He must be a wise and just man to impose on thee this lesson. He will assuredly forgive thee. Go, with my blessing," and the rabbi raised his hands above the young man's head and uttered a benediction.
"Take also my good wishes," said the princess, and she offered him her hand to kiss.
"Gracious princess," he said, "it is not meet that a beggar in rags should speak what is in his heart. But I shall return, and if thou deemest me worthy, perchance thou wilt grant a request that I shall make."
"Perchance," replied the princess, with a laugh.
The prince made haste to return to his father's palace and related all his adventures. The old man listened quietly, then he clasped his son in his arms, forgave him, and proudly proclaimed him prince before all the people again. He was a changed man, and nevermore guilty of a cruel action.
Before many months had passed, he returned to the city where he had seen the princess, with a long retinue of attendants, all bearing presents.
"Gracious princess," he said, when he had been granted an audience. "I said I would return."
"Indeed! I know thee not."
The prince told her of their former meeting and she seemed highly pleased.
"Now," he said, "put the crown on thy work which restored to me the manhood I had foolishly cast away by my conduct. I would make thee my bride, and with thee ever my guide and counselor, I shall be the most faithful of kings, and thou a queen of goodness and beauty and wisdom such as the world has not yet seen."
The princess did not give her answer immediately, but in due course she did; and once again, the prince returned home, this time happier than ever. Sitting by his side in the chariot of state, was the princess, radiant in smiles, for the people welcomed her heartily, strewing flowers in her path. And ever afterward there was happiness throughout the land.
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Story DNA
Moral
True wisdom and the right to rule come not from birthright, but from understanding suffering, kindness, gratitude, and humility.
Plot Summary
A king's only son grows up to be a cruel and arrogant prince, terrorizing his subjects. Faced with a potential revolt, the king banishes his son, ordering him not to return until he learns to 'Count Five'. Stripped of his wealth and identity, the prince endures a year of hardship, experiencing hunger, cold, and the kindness of strangers, which slowly transforms his character. He eventually meets a wise rabbi and a compassionate princess who help him understand that 'Count Five' represents empathy, gratitude, and humility. The reformed prince returns to his father, is forgiven, and later marries the princess, ruling as a just and beloved king.
Themes
Emotional Arc
pride to humility
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The story reflects common themes of royal responsibility and the consequences of unchecked power, often found in European folklore. The inclusion of a rabbi and a maxim from the Talmud suggests a specific cultural or religious lens for the moral instruction.
Plot Beats (13)
- A king's son grows up completely spoiled, becoming proud, arrogant, and cruel, terrorizing the common people with his reckless behavior.
- The people petition the king, who, after initial annoyance, investigates and finds the charges against his son to be true.
- The king, prioritizing justice over pride, summons his son and, despite the prince's defiance, sentences him to be cast out, penniless, until he learns to 'Count Five'.
- The prince is left alone, stripped of his royal identity, and experiences hunger, cold, and the harsh realities of poverty.
- He wanders for a year, humbled by his experiences, and begins to understand the suffering of others and the meaning of his punishment.
- He meets a kind beggar who leads him to a shelter established by a noble princess, where he receives food and comfort, prompting him to weep.
- The princess, seeing his distress, kindly asks his story, and the prince, though not revealing his true identity, admits his past wickedness and the mysterious 'Count Five' condition.
- The princess brings the rabbi who had previously given the prince good counsel, and the rabbi reveals that 'Count Five' refers to experiencing hunger, cold, kindness, gratitude, and humility.
- The prince, having genuinely experienced all five, is declared to have learned his lesson and is blessed to return to his father.
- He expresses his admiration for the princess and promises to return if he is deemed worthy.
- The prince returns to his father, recounts his transformation, is forgiven, and is reinstated as prince, becoming a changed and just man.
- Months later, the prince returns to the princess with a retinue, reminds her of their meeting, and asks her to be his bride.
- The princess accepts, and they return to his kingdom, where they are welcomed by the people and live happily ever after, ruling justly.
Characters
The Prince ★ protagonist
Handsome and haughty in youth, he becomes gaunt and weathered from his time as an outcast. Initially well-fed and pampered, he grows lean and hardened by manual labor and hunger. His hands, once soft, become calloused.
Attire: Initially, he wears rich, probably silk or velvet, royal attire befitting a prince, likely in vibrant colors with gold embroidery. After his banishment, he is clad in the cast-off, coarse linen or wool garments of a common laborer, likely patched and faded, and later, the rags of a beggar.
Wants: Initially motivated by self-indulgence and a desire for absolute power without responsibility. After exile, his primary motivation is to understand 'how to Count Five' to return home, which evolves into a deeper desire for redemption and self-improvement.
Flaw: His fatal flaw is his unchecked pride, arrogance, and cruelty, which blinds him to the suffering of others and leads to his downfall.
Transforms from a cruel, arrogant, and selfish prince into a humble, empathetic, and wise man who understands the value of human suffering, kindness, gratitude, and humility. He learns the true meaning of leadership and love.
Starts as proud, arrogant, cruel, selfish, and disobedient. He is initially contemptuous of common people and their knowledge. Through his journey, he transforms into a humble, compassionate, grateful, and wise individual.
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A young man standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has short, dark brown hair, a lean build, and a weathered but handsome face with kind, thoughtful brown eyes. He wears a patched, coarse linen tunic in muted earth tones, simple dark trousers, and worn leather boots. His hands are calloused. He has a humble, sincere expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The King ◆ supporting
An older man, likely of regal bearing, though initially blinded by paternal love. He possesses a strong sense of justice and righteousness.
Attire: Royal robes, likely of rich fabrics like velvet or silk, possibly in deep reds or blues, with gold embroidery and a crown, signifying his status and authority.
Wants: To maintain justice and order in his kingdom, and to ensure his son is a worthy successor, even if it means harsh lessons.
Flaw: His initial weakness is his excessive doting on his son, which allowed the prince to become spoiled and cruel.
He overcomes his foolish paternal pride to make a difficult but just decision, ultimately leading to his son's redemption and the happiness of his kingdom.
Initially doting and foolishly proud of his son, he is also just, righteous, and responsive to the needs of his people. He is firm in his decisions once convinced of the truth.
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An elderly man standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a long white beard and hair, a stern but wise face, and deep-set eyes. He wears a rich, deep blue velvet robe with gold embroidery, a golden crown adorned with jewels, and holds a simple golden scepter in his right hand. His posture is regal and authoritative. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Princess ◆ supporting
The most beautiful woman the prince has ever seen, noble and kind. She is likely graceful and possesses a gentle demeanor.
Attire: Elegant and noble attire, likely a flowing gown of fine fabric, possibly silk or brocade, in soft, pleasing colors, reflecting her charitable nature and royal status. It would be culturally appropriate for a princess in a 'great city' setting, possibly Middle Eastern or Mediterranean inspired.
Wants: To help those in need and to use her position for good. She is also seeking a worthy partner.
Flaw: None explicitly stated, but perhaps a slight naiveté in initially believing the prince's fabricated story, though her wisdom quickly discerns his true character.
She remains consistently good and wise, acting as a catalyst for the prince's final transformation and ultimately becoming his queen, guiding him with her wisdom.
Kind, sympathetic, noble, wise, and charitable. She is discerning and possesses a gentle humor.
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A young woman standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has long, dark, wavy hair styled elegantly, a beautiful, oval face with large, kind brown eyes, and a gentle smile. She wears a flowing, pale blue silk gown with delicate silver embroidery along the neckline and sleeves, and a simple silver circlet on her head. Her posture is graceful and serene. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Rabbi ◆ supporting
A wise and compassionate old man, likely with a gentle but knowing demeanor.
Attire: Traditional rabbinical attire, likely a simple, dark robe or coat, possibly with a prayer shawl (tallit) draped over his shoulders, and a kippah or other head covering.
Wants: To impart wisdom and guide others towards self-awareness and righteousness.
Flaw: None apparent; he embodies wisdom and compassion.
Serves as a consistent source of wisdom and guidance, directly facilitating the prince's final understanding of his lesson.
Wise, compassionate, discerning, and patient. He teaches through gentle questioning and profound insight.
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An elderly man standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a long, flowing white beard and hair, a kind, wrinkled face with deep-set, intelligent brown eyes. He wears a simple, dark grey linen robe, a white prayer shawl with black stripes draped over his shoulders, and a small, dark cap (kippah) on his head. His expression is serene and wise. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Royal Justice Chamber
A formal chamber within the palace, likely grand and imposing, where the king sits in judgment. Judges are seated to his right and left, and various state officials and representatives of the people are present.
Mood: Solemn, tense, authoritative, formal
The prince is summoned before his father and the judges, where he is formally sentenced to be cast out until he learns to 'Count Five'.
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A vast, high-ceilinged royal justice chamber in a medieval European palace, with heavy, carved oak paneling on the walls and tall, arched windows letting in diffused daylight. A raised dais holds a large, ornate throne, flanked by two smaller, equally grand chairs for judges. The floor is covered in rich, patterned tapestries. Numerous figures in period attire stand respectfully, their faces illuminated by the soft, filtered light. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Palace Grounds Edge at Night
The boundary of the palace grounds, where the prince is left alone on a road. It's dark, with only stars visible.
Mood: Desolate, bewildering, stark, lonely
The prince is stripped of his royal identity and possessions, then abandoned outside the palace gates to begin his exile.
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A desolate, unpaved road stretching into darkness, bordered by the high, rough-hewn stone walls of a vast medieval European palace grounds. The sky above is a deep, inky blue, peppered with countless bright stars. A lone, forlorn figure in simple, coarse clothing stands on the road, his back to the imposing palace walls, which recede into the gloom. No artificial light, only starlight illuminating the scene. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Wayside Cottage
A humble cottage by the side of a road, where the prince first seeks aid. It implies a simple, rural setting with fields nearby.
Mood: Humble, weary, a place of temporary respite and labor
The prince, hungry and tired, begs for food and shelter, and is subsequently put to work in the fields, experiencing manual labor for the first time.
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A small, rustic half-timbered Fachwerk cottage with a thatched roof, nestled beside a dusty, unpaved country road. Wildflowers and tall grasses grow along the road's edge, leading to vast, sun-drenched agricultural fields stretching into the distance. The late afternoon sun casts long shadows, highlighting the weathered wood and plaster of the cottage walls. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Princess's Wayfarer Shelter in a Great City
A charitable institution established by a princess in a great city, offering food and comfortable shelter to wayfarers. It is a place of kindness and refuge.
Mood: Compassionate, welcoming, serene, comforting
The prince finds refuge and kindness here, meets the princess, and begins to articulate his journey of self-discovery, eventually learning to 'Count Five' with the rabbi's guidance.
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A spacious, well-maintained communal hall within a charitable shelter in a bustling medieval European city. The room features sturdy wooden tables and benches, with warm, diffused light filtering through tall, arched windows. Simple but clean straw mattresses are arranged along one wall for sleeping. A large, stone hearth glows with a gentle fire, casting a soft, inviting warmth across the timbered ceiling and plastered walls. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.