Dame Soåsan.[1](#xd32e1447)

by Herman Hofberg · from Swedish fairy tales

folk tale cautionary tale solemn Ages 8-14 1014 words 5 min read
Cover: Dame Soåsan.[1](#xd32e1447)

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 395 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Long ago, in green hills, lived Dame Soåsan. She was a powerful old Troll. She liked her home quiet.

Dame Soåsan lived in the hills. She was a very old Troll. She was also very strong. She liked her rules followed. She did not like noise. She moved to a new home.

One day, a soldier saw Dame Soåsan. He was not kind to her. Dame Soåsan did not like this. She used her magic. The soldier was placed high up. He was in a tall pine tree.

A poor Old Woman lived near the hills. She had no food. A Troll's Helper came to her door. The helper gave her some yarn. She must spin it. There was one important rule. Do not wet the thread with spit.

The Old Woman worked hard. She spun the yarn well. She took it to a special place. Every day, she found silver. She also found new yarn. She became very rich.

The Old Woman wanted more and more. She became very greedy. She forgot her good habits. She forgot the Troll's rule. She did not care. She wet the thread with spit.

She took the yarn to the woods. She could not find the place. She got lost in the woods. She came home a day later. She was very sad.

She looked at her silver money. All her silver changed. It became plain stones. She had no money now. She was never happy again. She lived a sad, poor life.

Many years later, a Kind Girl worked. She looked for cows in the woods. The cows were lost. She saw two small children. They were Troll Children.

The Kind Girl was very polite. She knew about Trolls. It is good to be kind. She had bread and butter. She gave it to the children. They ate it very fast.

A voice spoke from the woods. It was Dame Soåsan. She thanked the Kind Girl. "You are kind. Cows will come home."

From that day, cows came home. They came to the gate. They came every night. They gave good milk. The milk was very rich. The Kind Girl was happy. She did not worry.

The Kind Girl was always happy. The Old Woman was never happy again. This shows us: Be kind. Follow rules. Good things come. Be greedy. Break rules. You will be sad.

Original Story 1014 words · 5 min read

Dame Soåsan.1

In early times there lived in Soåsan, a range of hills not far from the well-known city of Eksjö, a woman Troll who was called Dame Soåsan. She and her forefathers had, for ages, dwelt there, but when the soldiers came and fired their guns—cracked their nuts, as the mountain folk expressed it—on the camp ground of Ränneslätt, the place became intolerable to her and she departed to her sister’s, an equally distinguished Troll, who lived in Skurugata, which has been mentioned in a preceding story.

Dame Soåsan was very clever and rich, also the possessor of a very bad temper. It was advisable, therefore, not to anger her in any way, for such as were so unfortunate were instantly punished.

A trooper of that time, belonging to the Hussars of Småland, by name Grevendal, serving under Apelarp in Flisby parish, stood one morning on guard in a distant part of the drill grounds, when he saw, wandering toward him, along the edge of a wood, a very little old woman, whom he rashly assailed with scoffing and vile epithets, whereupon he received a blow on the ear from some unseen hand, which sent him flying to the top of a tall pine tree near by, where he remained unable to descend until assisted down by his comrades.

Toward those who were careful not to offend her the woman exhibited much kindness and extended many favors. A poor old woman of the human family living near Soåsan, in a little hut, was one time in great distress, her table bare and no one near to help her, with famine, already a guest in her hut, menacing her with terrible glare.

Late one evening a knock was heard upon the hut door.

“Come in, in the name of the Lord,” answered the old woman, wondering who her visitor might be.

“In that name I can not enter, but here is work for you from the mistress of the mountain. Spin beautiful yarn, but do not wet the threads with spittle, for then it will become christened and that the madam will not tolerate.”

“Where shall I leave the yarn?” asked the trembling woman.

“Go straight forward into the woods, where you will find a smooth green lawn. Lay the yarn there and next day you shall have your pay.”

The old woman began at once to spin the flax which she found outside the cottage door, but during the work stood a vessel of water beside her with which to wet the thread.

The yarn was soon finished and she betook herself, with profit and pleasure in prospect, to the wood. As the Troll’s servant maid had declared she came to a beautiful glade encircled by high trees. She there laid down the yarn and hastened to return home, not daring to look behind her. The next day she went again to the spot and found a new bundle of flax, also several silver pieces.

Now followed a period of prosperity for the poor woman. She accumulated money from her work, became rich, but at the same time avaricious, and forgot the prayers, which she had never before neglected, when she retired to rest.

Finally, she did not even trouble herself to keep faith with the Trolls, but spun the yarn according to general custom, wetting the thread with her spittle.

The skeins of yarn were deposited in the usual place, but when she went the next day to get her reward she was unable to find the glade again, and in the end went astray in the woods, from which she did not succeed in finding her way home before a whole day later. Upon arriving home, as was her every-day custom, she brought forth and was about to count over her money, when she found that all the silver pieces had been transformed into small stones.

Want pursued her now with greater severity than ever, for none would help one who was known to have had to do with the infamous Soåsan dame, and the old woman died shortly after in great poverty and distress.


A girl who many years ago was a servant in the house of a Senator of Eksjö, named Lind, went one day to find the cattle, which usually grazed in the woods surrounding Soåsan. The animals, for some time back, had not thrived upon the pastures allotted them and were wont to wander far away in search of food, it was supposed, so, at times the girl, notwithstanding the most diligent search, was unable to find them, and when they were found, the cows had already been milked. This day she went plodding sadly along through the dark woods, thinking of the scolding which awaited her at home, when she returned with neither cows nor milk; her mind was also busied with the many stories she had heard about ghosts and Trolls who infested the woods, when she saw two pair of Pigmies, a boy and girl, sitting under the shadow of a large pine tree.

“It is best to be polite when on the Trolls’ own ground,” thought the girl. Whereupon she addressed the Troll infants in a very friendly manner and invited each to partake of some bread and butter which she had with her in her little bag. The children ate with exceeding greed, a disgusting sight, as they had extremely large mouths into which the bread and butter vanished rapidly. When the girl was about to depart she heard a voice saying, “As you have taken pity on my children, you shall hereafter escape searching after the cows. Go home! They stand at the gate.”

From that day the girl no longer had to search for the cows; they came to the gate every night of their own accord, sweet-laden with a rich tribute of the most excellent milk.


1 The inhabitants of Eksjö and thereabout relate many stories of Trolls and the like, but these are the most complete and characteristic. 


Story DNA folk tale · solemn

Moral

Respect supernatural beings and their rules, and do not let greed corrupt your good fortune, for kindness is rewarded while disrespect and avarice are punished.

Plot Summary

Dame Soåsan, a powerful and ill-tempered Troll, punishes a disrespectful trooper by flinging him into a tree. Later, she offers a poor old woman a magical spinning task that brings her wealth, but when the woman becomes greedy and breaks the Troll's rules, her fortune turns to stone, and she dies in poverty. In contrast, a kind servant girl who shows respect to Dame Soåsan's children is rewarded with cows that always return home with abundant milk, illustrating that respect and kindness are favored, while disrespect and avarice lead to ruin.

Themes

respect for the unknownconsequences of greedkindness and its rewardssupernatural power

Emotional Arc

suffering to triumph (for the kind) | prosperity to ruin (for the greedy)

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: episodic structure, direct address to reader (implied through notes)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: moral justice
Magic: Trolls (Dame Soåsan and her children), Invisible hands inflicting punishment, Magical transformation of silver to stone, Cows returning on their own accord with abundant milk
the spinning yarn (representing labor and fortune)silver pieces (representing wealth)stones (representing loss and ruin)

Cultural Context

Origin: Swedish
Era: pre-industrial

The mention of 'Hussars of Småland' and 'Ränneslätt' suggests a specific regional Swedish context, possibly 18th or 19th century, where military drills were common.

Plot Beats (11)

  1. Dame Soåsan, an ancient and powerful Troll with a bad temper, lives in the Soåsan hills, having relocated due to human activity.
  2. A trooper named Grevendal mocks Dame Soåsan and is instantly punished by being thrown to the top of a tall pine tree.
  3. A poor old woman in a hut near Soåsan is approached by a Troll servant and given flax to spin, with the strict instruction not to wet the threads with spittle.
  4. The old woman diligently spins the yarn, leaves it in a designated glade, and receives silver pieces and new flax daily, leading to her becoming rich.
  5. Over time, the old woman becomes avaricious, neglects her prayers, and eventually breaks the Troll's rule by wetting the yarn with spittle.
  6. When she goes to deposit the yarn and collect her reward, she cannot find the glade, gets lost in the woods, and returns home a day later.
  7. Upon her return, she discovers all her accumulated silver has turned into small stones, and she dies shortly after in poverty and distress.
  8. Years later, a servant girl searching for lost cattle in the Soåsan woods encounters two small Troll children.
  9. Remembering to be polite on Troll ground, the girl kindly offers the children her bread and butter.
  10. A voice, presumably Dame Soåsan's, thanks the girl for her kindness and promises she will no longer have to search for the cows.
  11. From that day forward, the cows return to the gate on their own every night, providing abundant, excellent milk.

Characters 6 characters

Dame Soåsan ⚔ antagonist

Troll elderly female

A very little old woman, small in stature, with an unseen hand capable of delivering powerful blows. Her true Troll form is likely more imposing, but she appears as a diminutive human elder.

Attire: Not explicitly described, but as a powerful Troll living in Swedish hills, she would likely wear practical, perhaps rustic, clothing made of natural fibers like wool or linen, possibly in muted earth tones, but with an underlying sense of ancient power. Perhaps a dark, heavy wool cloak over a simple dress.

Wants: To live undisturbed in her ancestral lands, to maintain her power and influence, and to ensure her rules are followed. She also seems to care for her children and sister.

Flaw: Intolerance for anything 'christened' or associated with Christian faith, which limits her interaction with humans and makes her vulnerable to their religious practices.

She remains largely unchanged, serving as a powerful, ancient force of nature. Her interactions demonstrate her consistent character traits.

Her diminutive, ancient appearance as a 'very little old woman' contrasted with the immense, unseen power she wields.

Clever, rich, and possessive of a very bad temper. She is quick to punish those who offend her but shows kindness and generosity to those who are respectful and helpful to her or her kin. She is also strict about her rules, especially regarding 'christened' items.

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A very small, ancient-looking elderly woman, with a deeply wrinkled face and wispy grey hair pulled back in a simple bun. She wears a dark, heavy wool cloak with a deep hood over a simple, long, dark green linen dress. Her hands are gnarled, and her eyes, though small, hold an ancient, knowing glint. She stands with a slightly hunched posture, but an air of immense, hidden power. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Trooper Grevendal ○ minor

human young adult male

A soldier, likely of average build for a Hussar of Småland during that era. His specific height and build are not mentioned, but he is strong enough to be a trooper.

Attire: A uniform of the Hussars of Småland. This would typically include a dolman (short jacket) and a pelisse (outer jacket, often fur-trimmed) worn over one shoulder, tight breeches, and tall boots, possibly a shako or fur busby. Colors would likely be dark blue or green with contrasting trim (e.g., yellow or red).

Wants: To perform his guard duty, but also to assert dominance or mock what he perceives as weak or unusual.

Flaw: Arrogance and disrespect, leading him to offend powerful beings.

Experiences a swift and humiliating punishment, learning a lesson about respect, though his long-term change is not shown.

Stuck helplessly at the very top of a tall pine tree, still in his Hussar uniform.

Rash, scoffing, disrespectful, and quick to use vile epithets. He lacks caution and respect for unknown entities.

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A young male soldier, dressed in a dark blue Hussar uniform with yellow braiding and a fur-trimmed pelisse slung over one shoulder. He wears tight breeches and tall black boots. His face is clean-shaven, with a look of shock and discomfort. He is precariously perched at the very top of a tall pine tree, clinging to the trunk. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Poor Old Woman ◆ supporting

human elderly female

A poor old woman, likely thin and frail from hardship and famine. Her exact height and build are not specified, but her poverty suggests a worn appearance.

Attire: Simple, worn peasant clothing typical of 18th-19th century Sweden. This would include a plain, long-sleeved linen or wool dress, possibly a simple apron, and sturdy, well-worn shoes or clogs. Colors would be muted, like grey, brown, or undyed linen.

Wants: To survive famine and poverty, to provide for herself. Later, her motivation shifts to accumulating wealth.

Flaw: Avarice and a lack of steadfast faith or gratitude. She forgets her principles when prosperity arrives.

Transforms from a pious, struggling woman to a prosperous but avaricious one, then back to extreme poverty and distress, dying shortly after. Her arc is a cautionary tale about greed and broken promises.

Her hands, either diligently spinning yarn or clutching transformed stones, symbolizing her changing fortunes.

Initially pious and desperate, then industrious and grateful. She becomes avaricious and forgets her prayers, eventually losing her faith and respect for the Trolls. She is ultimately weak-willed and easily corrupted by wealth.

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An elderly woman with a gaunt face, deep wrinkles, and thin, grey hair pulled back tightly. She wears a patched, undyed linen dress and a simple grey apron, with worn wooden clogs on her feet. Her posture is slightly hunched, and her expression is one of deep sorrow and despair. In her trembling hands, she holds a handful of small, ordinary stones. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Troll's Servant Maid ○ minor

Troll (implied) adult female

Not explicitly described, but as a servant of Dame Soåsan, she would likely be a Troll or a magical being. Her appearance is unseen, only her voice is heard.

Attire: Unseen.

Wants: To carry out Dame Soåsan's commands and ensure her rules are followed.

Flaw: Bound by Dame Soåsan's rules, particularly the inability to enter a place invoked 'in the name of the Lord'.

Remains a static character, serving as a messenger.

A disembodied voice speaking from outside a hut door.

Loyal to Dame Soåsan, direct, and clear in her instructions. She enforces her mistress's rules.

Image Prompt & Upload
A shadowy, indistinct female figure standing just outside a rustic wooden hut door, only partially visible. Her form is ethereal and slightly translucent, suggesting a non-human presence. She appears to be of average height and build, with a simple, flowing dark garment that blends into the shadows. Her face is obscured, but her posture is upright and attentive. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Servant Girl ★ protagonist

human young adult female

A young girl, likely of a sturdy build from working as a servant and searching for cattle. Her specific height and features are not detailed, but she is capable of long walks in the woods.

Attire: Practical peasant clothing suitable for working in the woods in Sweden. This would include a sturdy linen or wool dress, possibly an apron, and comfortable, durable shoes or boots. Colors would be earthy and muted.

Wants: To find the cattle and avoid scolding, to fulfill her duties. Later, to maintain the cows' good health and milk production.

Flaw: Her fear of scolding and the unknown, though she overcomes the latter with politeness.

Transforms from a worried and burdened servant to one whose duties are made easy and prosperous due to her kindness. She learns the value of respect and compassion towards magical beings.

Offering bread and butter to two small, large-mouthed Pigmies under a pine tree.

Diligent, worried, respectful, and compassionate. She is cautious when encountering unknown beings and kind to the Troll children.

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A young peasant girl with a sturdy build, wearing a practical, long-sleeved dark blue linen dress with a simple brown apron over it. Her light brown hair is pulled back in a practical braid. Her face shows a mix of weariness and gentle kindness. She is holding out a piece of bread and butter from a small, woven bag to two small, grotesque pigmy children sitting at the base of a large pine tree. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Pigmies (Troll Children) ○ minor

Troll (children) child non-human

Two small children, a boy and a girl, described as 'Pigmies'. They have 'extremely large mouths' into which food vanishes rapidly, making their eating a 'disgusting sight'.

Attire: Not described, but as Troll children in the woods, they would likely wear simple, perhaps crude, garments made of natural materials, possibly in earthy tones, or even appear somewhat wild and unkempt.

Wants: To eat and satisfy their hunger.

Flaw: Their hunger and perhaps their childlike vulnerability, which the servant girl exploits with kindness.

Static characters, serving as a catalyst for the servant girl's good fortune.

Two small, grotesque children with disproportionately large mouths, greedily devouring food.

Greedy, as evidenced by their rapid and 'disgusting' eating. They are the children of Dame Soåsan, implying a connection to her temperament.

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Two small, grotesque child-like figures, a boy and a girl, sitting under a large pine tree. They have disproportionately large, wide mouths that are open in a greedy expression. Their skin is earthy and rough, and they wear simple, tattered garments made of leaves and rough cloth. Their eyes are dark and eager. The boy has spiky, dark hair, and the girl has tangled, dark hair. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 3 locations
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Soåsan Hills

outdoor Implied temperate climate, possibly cool and damp given the 'dark woods' description.

A range of hills not far from the city of Eksjö, characterized by dense, dark pine forests and clearings. The terrain is rugged, with exposed rock and mossy ground, typical of Småland's forested areas in southern Sweden. The air is often cool and still, especially within the deeper woods.

Mood: Mysterious, ancient, potentially dangerous due to Troll inhabitants, but also a source of hidden kindness.

Dame Soåsan's ancestral home; location of the trooper's punishment; the general area where the poor old woman and the servant girl encounter Trolls.

Dense pine trees Rocky terrain Forest paths Hidden glades Mossy ground
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A dense, ancient pine forest in the Småland region of Sweden, with tall, dark pine trees dominating the landscape. Sunlight filters sparsely through the thick canopy, creating dappled light on the forest floor, which is covered in a thick layer of pine needles, moss, and exposed granite rocks. A narrow, winding dirt path disappears into the shadows between the trees, suggesting depth and mystery. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Poor Old Woman's Hut

indoor evening | night Implied cold or harsh conditions, leading to famine.

A small, humble wooden hut, likely a simple stuga or torp, with a low, possibly turf or thatched roof, nestled near the edge of the Soåsan woods. The interior is sparse, with a bare table and a simple hearth, reflecting extreme poverty. The exterior might have a small, unkempt patch of ground or garden.

Mood: Desperate, impoverished, but becomes a place of unexpected opportunity and later, regret.

The old woman receives the mysterious spinning work from the Troll's servant; she spins the yarn here, initially following instructions, then later defying them.

Small wooden hut (stuga) Bare wooden table Spinning wheel (implied) Small window Simple wooden door
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A humble, weathered wooden stuga, a traditional Swedish cottage, with a low, dark thatched roof and a single small window, nestled at the edge of a dense pine forest. Smoke curls faintly from a stone chimney. The wooden walls are dark with age, and a simple, rough-hewn wooden door stands slightly ajar. The ground around the hut is sparse, with patches of dry grass and exposed earth. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Smooth Green Lawn (Troll Glade)

outdoor night | morning Implied mild conditions for a 'green lawn', possibly spring or summer.

A secluded, perfectly smooth, vibrant green lawn or glade, encircled by tall, ancient trees within the deeper parts of the Soåsan woods. The grass is unusually lush and well-maintained, suggesting an unnatural origin. It is a place of exchange with the Trolls.

Mood: Magical, serene, but also slightly eerie due to its hidden nature and association with Trolls.

The old woman deposits the spun yarn and later collects her payment; it becomes inaccessible after she breaks her promise.

Smooth, vibrant green grass Tall, encircling trees (pines, birches) Secluded clearing Bundles of flax/yarn Silver coins (later stones)
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A perfectly smooth, vibrant green lawn, almost unnaturally verdant, forming a secluded glade deep within a dense Swedish pine and birch forest. Tall, ancient pine trees with dark, rough bark and slender white birch trees with peeling bark encircle the clearing, their canopies filtering soft, diffused light onto the pristine grass. The ground is free of undergrowth within the glade, creating a stark contrast with the wild forest beyond. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.