The Bell in Själevad
by Herman Hofberg
The Big Bell's Secret
Long ago, in a town, people had problems. It was a big problem. They wanted a new church. But they could not agree. Many people talked. They talked for days. No one could agree. Some people lived north. They wanted the church there. Other people lived south. They wanted it there.
So, they found a way to decide. It was a strange idea. They put two logs in the water. If logs went one way, church went south. If logs went other way, church went north. This was their plan. But it was fair. All watched the logs.
The logs floated to the north. So the church would be built there. The people in the north were very happy. They cheered loudly. They danced with joy. The north was chosen. The choice was made.
But people in the south were not happy. They did not like this plan. They felt sad. They felt angry. They wanted to change it. They made a secret plan.
One night, they went to the north. They took a big, old bell. It was very heavy. They pushed it. They pulled it. This was The Big Bell. They took it to the south. They thought the church would follow. They wanted the church near them. They hoped it would work.
The Big Bell did not want to stay. The bell had a secret. It had magic. It knew where the church should be. It wanted to go home. It knew its true place. It grew hidden wings. The Big Bell flew up high. It flew back to its home.
An Old Woman saw a thing flying. She was walking home. She looked up at the stars. Then she saw it. A big, dark shape. She looked up. It was The Big Bell! She knew the bell. She was very surprised. She cried out, "Oh! Our church bell!"
The Old Woman spoke. So the bell stopped flying. Its magic was gone. The magic broke. The bell could not fly. The Big Bell fell down. It dropped fast. Down, down it went. It fell like a stone. It splashed into the water.
The Big Bell is still in the water. It is at the bottom. It sleeps there now. A cold, deep sleep. Each winter, ice forms there. But there is always a hole. The hole is a sign. A puzzle remains. The church was never built.
The Big Bell stayed in water. A secret. Some things just happen. People cannot change them.
Original Story
The Bell in Själevad.
When the church at Själevad was about to be built, parishioners could not agree upon a location. Those who resided farthest north wished it built at Hemling, and those dwelling to the south desired it more convenient to them. To terminate the wrangle an agreement was arrived at as ingenious as simple. Two logs were thrown out into Hörätt Sound, and it was decided that if they floated out to sea the church should be built at Voge, but if they floated in toward the Fjord of Själevad, Hemling should be the building spot.
It happened that just then it was full high tide, when the current changes from its usual course, and in consequence the logs floated in favor of Hemling.
The Southerners found it hard to swallow their disappointment and at once set their wits at work to find a way to defeat the accidental good luck of their neighbors. In the old chapel of Hemling there was an unusually large bell, said to have been brought from some strange land, and regarded with great veneration. Upon this the Southerners set their hope. One beautiful night they stole the bell and took it southward, persuaded that their opponents would follow and build the church near Voge. But the bell, which knew best where the church ought to stand, provided itself with invisible wings and started to fly back to the place from which it had been brought.
As it was winging its way homeward, an old woman standing on Karnigberg—Hag Mountain—saw something strange floating through the air, at which she stared earnestly, wondering what it could be, finally recognizing the much prized bell of the parish, whereupon she cried out:—
“Oh! See our holy church bell!”
Nothing more was needed to deprive the bell of its power of locomotion and it plunged, like a stone, into Prest Sund—priest sound—where, every winter, a hole in the ice marks its resting place at the bottom.
Moral of the Story
Sometimes, external forces or fate determine outcomes despite human efforts to control them.
Characters
The Bell ★ protagonist
A very large, heavy church bell, likely made of bronze, with a dark, aged patina. Its surface would show signs of its foreign origin, possibly with intricate, non-local engravings or symbols, though these are not explicitly described. It is unusually large for a local chapel bell.
Attire: N/A (object)
Wants: To return to its rightful place at Hemling, where the church was destined to be built.
Flaw: Its magical power of locomotion is vulnerable to being recognized and called out by a human.
It attempts to fulfill its destiny by returning to Hemling but is thwarted by human recognition, leading to its permanent resting place in Prest Sund.
Determined, wise (it 'knew best where the church ought to stand'), possesses a strong sense of belonging and purpose, somewhat mystical.
The Old Woman on Karnigberg ○ minor
An elderly woman, likely of a sturdy, weathered build from a life of rural labor in a Nordic climate. Her face would be lined with age, her hands gnarled. She is observant and quick to recognize familiar objects.
Attire: Simple, practical clothing suitable for a peasant woman in a Nordic region, such as a dark wool skirt, a linen blouse, and a plain shawl or head covering to protect against the cold. Her attire would be functional rather than decorative.
Wants: To understand the strange phenomenon she witnesses and to express her recognition and reverence for the parish bell.
Flaw: Her exclamation, though well-intentioned, inadvertently causes the bell's downfall.
She serves as the catalyst for the bell's fate, unknowingly ending its journey.
Observant, curious, excitable, devout (referring to the bell as 'holy').
Locations
Hörätt Sound
A body of water where two logs were cast to decide the church's location, experiencing a full high tide with a changing current.
Mood: Anticipatory, decisive
The initial decision-making for the church's location is made by observing the logs' drift.
Old Chapel of Hemling
An ancient, venerated chapel in Hemling, housing an unusually large and prized bell, said to be from a strange land.
Mood: Sacred, then secretive and tense
The Southerners steal the revered bell from this chapel.
Karnigberg (Hag Mountain)
A mountain where an old woman stands, witnessing the flying bell.
Mood: Mysterious, awe-struck
An old woman spots the flying bell, and her exclamation causes it to fall.
Prest Sund (Priest Sound)
The body of water where the bell plunges and rests, marked by a hole in the ice every winter.
Mood: Somber, mysterious, cold
The bell falls into the sound, establishing its final resting place.
Story DNA
Moral
Sometimes, external forces or fate determine outcomes despite human efforts to control them.
Plot Summary
When parishioners in Själevad cannot agree on a church location, they decide by floating logs, which favor the northern faction. Disappointed, the southern faction steals a venerated bell from the northern chapel, hoping to force the church southward. However, the bell miraculously gains wings and flies back towards its origin. An old woman spots the flying bell and exclaims, causing it to fall into Prest Sund, where it remains lost, its resting place marked by a recurring hole in the ice each winter.
Themes
Emotional Arc
disagreement to resolution to renewed conflict to supernatural intervention to permanent loss
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This tale reflects local legends common in Scandinavian folklore, often explaining natural phenomena (like a recurring ice hole) or the origin of place names through supernatural events.
Plot Beats (9)
- Parishioners in Själevad are divided over where to build a new church, with northern and southern factions each wanting it closer to them.
- They agree to settle the dispute by throwing two logs into Hörätt Sound: if they float out to sea, the church goes to Voge (south); if they float into Själevad Fjord, it goes to Hemling (north).
- Due to a high tide, the logs float towards Hemling, deciding the church's location in favor of the northern faction.
- The southern faction is displeased and plots to undermine this outcome.
- One night, the Southerners steal a large, venerated bell from the old Hemling chapel, hoping to force the church to be built near Voge by making their opponents follow the bell.
- The stolen bell, possessing a will of its own, grows invisible wings and begins to fly back towards Hemling.
- An old woman on Karnigberg sees the flying object, recognizes it as the parish bell, and cries out in surprise.
- Her exclamation breaks the bell's magical flight, causing it to fall like a stone into Prest Sund.
- The bell now rests at the bottom of Prest Sund, its location marked by a hole in the ice every winter.
