The Lost Treasure
by Herman Hofberg · from Swedish fairy tales
Adapted Version
Long ago, there was a farmer. He had much silver. He hid it in the ground. Then, he went away.
The Farmer put his silver in two cans. He buried the cans at Kalfhagsberg. He wanted to keep them safe. But the Farmer went away. He could not get his silver back. The silver stayed in the ground. It was still there.
Every night, two lights shone there. They glowed over the buried silver. The lights showed a special secret. A magic rule kept the silver safe. No one could take it easily. The lights were a sign.
Old Man Lars heard about the silver. He was a poor man. He knew the magic rule. He must dig on Thursday night. He must not speak one word. Then, the silver was his.
Old Man Lars waited for Thursday. The sun went down. He went to Kalfhagsberg. He dug in the ground. He found the two cans. They were heavy with silver. He took the cans.
Old Man Lars walked home. He carried the heavy cans. Strange friends met him. They looked like his neighbors. They asked him, "Where did you go?" They wanted him to talk. But Lars knew the rule. He must be quiet.
Old Man Lars did not speak. He stayed very quiet. He knew they were tricky. They wanted him to break the rule. He held the cans tight. He walked on. He did not say a word.
Then, Father Erik stood on the path. Father Erik was a kind man. He said, "Hello, Lars!" Lars felt he must speak. He must show respect. He took off his hat. He said, "Hello, Father."
He spoke the words. At that moment, he tripped. He fell on a tree root. The cans dropped to the ground. The silver cans rolled away. He watched them go.
Lars looked at the cans. They were not silver now. They were old birch boxes. They had no value. Old Man Lars was sad. He went home with nothing. It is important to follow rules. Even when it is hard.
Original Story
The Lost Treasure.
Many hundreds of years ago, at a time when Sweden was invaded by enemies, the people of Stenbrohult gathered their money and jewelry together and concealed them in a large copper kettle, which they sunk to the bottom of Lake Möckeln.
There it lies to-day and will lie for all time, though many have touched it with poles when driving fish into their nets. Meantime, at each touch, it has moved further away until it now lies near the outlet of the lake, where it is so deep that it can not be reached.
When the other residents of the place hid their treasures in the lake there was a rich farmer who buried his silver at Kalfhagsberg in two cans. Shortly after he died so suddenly that no opportunity was given to dig them up. Immediately following his death, two lights were seen every evening over the place where the treasures lay hidden, a sure sign that an evil spirit or dragon had appropriated the treasure.
A poor cottager heard of it, and knowing that man may acquire undisputed possession of the treasures of the earth, if dug upon a Thursday evening and carried away without looking back or uttering a word to any one, he already regarded himself as good as the owner of the wealth. Betaking himself to the place, he succeeded in getting the cans out of the mountain, but on the way home he met one after another of his neighbors who asked where he had been. The old man knew well that the evil spirits had a hand in this, and that what appeared to be his neighbors was nothing less than the spirits transformed, and he was, therefore, stubbornly quiet. But finally he met the priest, who stood by the wayside and greeted him as he was passing with a “good evening, neighbor.” Hereupon the old man dared keep quiet no longer, but took his hat off and saluted, “good evening, father,” in return, at the same instant he tripped against a root and dropped the cans. When he stopped to pick them up there lay in their stead only a pair of little old birch-bark boxes, and the old man was compelled to go home, his mission fruitless.
Story DNA
Moral
Superstition and the inability to resist temptation can lead to the loss of fortune.
Plot Summary
In a time of invasion, a rich farmer buries silver but dies, leaving it guarded by spirits. A poor cottager learns he can claim it by digging it up on a Thursday evening and carrying it away in silence. He succeeds in retrieving the treasure but is accosted by spirits disguised as neighbors, whom he resists. However, when he meets the priest and feels compelled to return a greeting, he speaks, trips, and the silver transforms into worthless birch-bark boxes, leaving him empty-handed.
Themes
Emotional Arc
hope to disappointment
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The story references a time when Sweden was invaded, suggesting a period of conflict and instability where hiding valuables would be common.
Plot Beats (10)
- During an invasion, the people of Stenbrohult hide their money in a copper kettle in Lake Möckeln, which becomes unreachable over time.
- A rich farmer buries his silver in two cans at Kalfhagsberg but dies suddenly before retrieving them.
- After the farmer's death, two lights appear nightly over the burial spot, signaling an evil spirit or dragon guarding the treasure.
- A poor cottager learns of the hidden silver and the superstition that it can be claimed if dug up on a Thursday evening and carried away in silence.
- The cottager goes to Kalfhagsberg on a Thursday evening and successfully digs up the two cans of silver.
- On his way home, the cottager encounters several 'neighbors' who are actually evil spirits in disguise, attempting to make him speak.
- The cottager resists the temptation to speak, knowing it would break the spell.
- He then meets the priest, who greets him, and the cottager feels compelled to respond out of respect.
- Upon speaking and returning the greeting, the cottager trips, dropping the cans.
- The silver cans transform into worthless birch-bark boxes, and the cottager is forced to go home empty-handed.
Characters
The Poor Cottager ★ protagonist
A man of advanced years, likely thin and wiry from a lifetime of hard labor, with a stooped posture. His hands would be calloused and weathered from working the land.
Attire: Simple, worn peasant clothing typical of 17th-18th century rural Sweden: a coarse, undyed linen or wool tunic, patched trousers, and sturdy, well-worn leather boots or wooden clogs. His clothes would be functional and drab, reflecting his poverty.
Wants: To escape poverty and acquire wealth for himself.
Flaw: His inability to resist social convention and respond to a greeting, even from a perceived spirit.
Starts hopeful and disciplined, successfully retrieves the treasure, but ultimately fails due to a moment of social politeness, returning home empty-handed and disillusioned.
Determined, hopeful, superstitious, disciplined (initially), easily swayed by social custom.
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An elderly Swedish peasant man, thin and wiry, with a stooped posture, facing forward. He has a gaunt, wrinkled face, deep-set eyes, and sparse, unkempt grey hair with a short, scraggly beard. He wears a coarse, patched, undyed linen tunic, dark wool trousers, and sturdy, worn leather boots. His hands are calloused. He is carrying two heavy, dull metal cans, one in each hand, with a look of intense concentration. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Priest ◆ supporting
A man of respectable bearing, likely of average height and build, well-nourished compared to the cottager, reflecting his position in the community.
Attire: Formal, dark clerical attire typical of a 17th-18th century Swedish Lutheran priest: a black cassock or long coat, a white ruff or band collar, and a simple, dark hat. His clothes would be well-maintained and clean.
Wants: To offer a friendly greeting to a parishioner.
Flaw: Unknowingly disrupts the cottager's magical task.
Appears briefly as a catalyst for the cottager's failure, remaining unchanged himself.
Polite, observant, community-minded, perhaps a little naive to the supernatural circumstances.
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A middle-aged Swedish priest, standing upright and facing forward. He has a kind, clean-shaven face with clear eyes and neatly combed, dark hair with grey at the temples. He wears a formal, dark black cassock with a white band collar, and a simple, dark, wide-brimmed hat. His posture is dignified and calm. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Rich Farmer ○ minor
Likely a robust man, well-fed and sturdy, reflecting his wealth and status as a farmer. His hands would be strong, but perhaps less gnarled than a cottager's.
Attire: Sturdy, good-quality wool and linen clothing, perhaps a jerkin over a shirt, practical trousers, and sturdy boots. His clothes would be functional but clearly of better quality than a poor cottager's.
Wants: To protect his wealth from invaders.
Flaw: His sudden death prevented him from retrieving his treasure.
Dies suddenly, setting the stage for the main plot.
Prudent (in hiding his treasure), unlucky (in his sudden death).
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A robust, middle-aged Swedish farmer, facing forward, with a full, ruddy face and a neatly trimmed dark beard. He wears a sturdy brown wool jerkin over a cream linen shirt, practical dark trousers, and strong leather boots. He is depicted in the act of burying two dull metal cans into the earth. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Lake Möckeln
A large, deep freshwater lake in Stenbrohult, Sweden, where a copper kettle filled with valuables was sunk. The lakebed is deep, especially near its outlet.
Mood: Mysterious, lost, inaccessible, holding ancient secrets
The initial hiding place of the community's treasure, which moves further away each time it's touched.
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A wide, serene view of a large Swedish lake, its dark, deep waters reflecting a pale, overcast sky. The distant shoreline is lined with dense, dark pine and birch forests. A subtle current is visible near the lake's outlet, hinting at its depth. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Kalfhagsberg
A specific mountain or hill where a rich farmer buried his silver in two cans. After his death, two mysterious lights are seen hovering over this spot every evening.
Mood: Eerie, haunted, secretive, foreboding
The burial site of the farmer's silver, guarded by an evil spirit or dragon, marked by nightly lights.
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A dark, rugged Swedish hillside at night, with sparse, gnarled pine trees silhouetted against a deep indigo sky. The ground is rocky and uneven, with patches of heather and moss. Two distinct, ethereal glowing orbs hover just above the earth in the foreground, casting a faint, unnatural light on the immediate surroundings. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Path from Kalfhagsberg to Cottager's Home
A winding path leading from Kalfhagsberg back towards the cottager's home, likely through a rural Swedish landscape. The path is uneven, with exposed roots.
Mood: Tense, supernatural, deceptive, rural
The cottager's journey home with the treasure, where he encounters disguised spirits and ultimately loses the silver.
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A narrow, winding dirt path cutting through a dark, moonlit Swedish forest at night. Tall, slender birch trees line the path, their white bark ghostly in the dim light. Exposed, gnarled tree roots crisscross the path, creating tripping hazards. The air is cool and still, with a sense of watchful silence. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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