The Stone in Grönan Dal
by Herman Hofberg · from Swedish fairy tales
Adapted Version
Long, long ago, there was a special stone. It stood in Grönan Dal. Many people talked about this stone. It had old words on it. It had special pictures too. People wanted to see the stone. But it was hard to find. The stone was very old. It was very special.
One day, St. Jaffen rode his horse. He was a kind man. He was very tired. He came to the green valley. It was a beautiful place. St. Jaffen got off his horse. He lay down to rest. He closed his eyes.
St. Jaffen woke up. He felt happy in the valley. He saw a big, flat stone. He thought, 'This place is good.' He wanted to leave important words. He wanted to leave special messages. He used a tool. He carved the stone.
St. Jaffen wrote about the future. He wrote about changes. He wrote about people forgetting old stories. He wrote about the world getting noisy. He wrote about people being busy. But the special stone would stand. It would stand tall. The stone in Grönan Dal would stand. He wrote about changes. But the stone would stand. He wrote about noise. But the stone would stand. He wrote about busy times. The stone would stand.
St. Jaffen wrote one last thing. He wrote, 'If people forget the stone.' He wrote, 'If the world gets too busy.' Then the stone would lie down. It would rest.
Many years passed. A man came. His name was Baron Tilas. He walked in the valley. He saw the stone. The stone was lying down.
Baron Tilas knew it. This was the special stone. He saw the old words. He saw the pictures. He made his own small mark.
Baron Tilas helped the stone. He helped it stand up. The stone stood tall again. And so, the special stone still stands today. It reminds us that some things stay strong. Even when the world changes.
Original Story
The Stone in Grönan Dal.
It is probable that the “Stone in Grönan Dal” is like the traditional Phœnix, a pure tradition, since it has never been found by any one of the many who have made pilgrimages to the valley in search of it, for the purpose of deciphering the Runic characters said to be engraved thereon. Yet many stories are widely current in the land concerning it, and the old people relate the following:
When St. Jaffen, “the Apostle of the North,” was one time riding through Jämtland from the borders of Norway, his way led along a beautiful green valley, in the parish of Åre. Becoming weary, he dismounted and laid himself down for a nap. When he awoke it occurred to him that such a garden spot must some day be inhabited by mankind, so, selecting a slab of stone, he cut in its surface the following prophetic lines:
“When Swedish men adopt foreign customs
And the land loses its old honor,
Yet, shall stand the Stone in Grönan Dal.
When churches are converted into prisons,
And God’s services have lost their joyous light,
Yet shall stand the Stone in Grönan Dal.
When rogues and villains thrive
And honest men are banished,
Yet will stand the Stone in Grönan Dal.
When priests become beggars,
And farmers monsters,
Then shall lie the Stone in Grönan Dal.”
When the Governor of the Province, Baron Tilas, in 1742, traveled through Jämtland, he found, a few paces east of the gate of Skurdal, a stone lying, which he concluded must be the stone so much talked about. When his coat of arms and the date had been engraved upon it, he caused it to be raised, so that, “even yet it stands, the Stone in Grönan Dal.”
Story DNA
Moral
Even amidst societal decay and change, some symbols of tradition and prophecy will endure.
Plot Summary
A legend tells of the elusive 'Stone in Grönan Dal' bearing ancient Runic prophecies. St. Jaffen, 'the Apostle of the North,' once carved these prophecies onto a stone, foretelling a future of societal decline where foreign customs, corruption, and moral decay would prevail, yet the stone itself would endure. The final prophecy stated that when conditions worsened further, the stone would 'lie'. Centuries later, in 1742, Baron Tilas discovered a stone matching the description, lying down, and had it raised, thus confirming the legend and ensuring the stone's continued 'standing'.
Themes
Emotional Arc
anticipation to confirmation
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The story grounds itself in a specific historical event (Baron Tilas in 1742) to lend credibility to the ancient legend, blending myth with historical record.
Plot Beats (9)
- The legend of the 'Stone in Grönan Dal' and its Runic characters is introduced, noting its elusive nature.
- St. Jaffen, weary from travel, rests in the beautiful Grönan Dal valley.
- Inspired by the valley's beauty, St. Jaffen decides to engrave a stone with prophecies.
- He carves lines foretelling societal decline: foreign customs, loss of honor, churches as prisons, lost joy in services, rogues thriving, honest men banished.
- Each of these prophecies concludes with the assurance that 'the Stone in Grönan Dal' shall stand.
- The final prophecy states that when priests become beggars and farmers monsters, the stone shall 'lie'.
- In 1742, Baron Tilas travels through Jämtland and finds a stone lying a few paces east of Skurdal gate.
- Tilas concludes this is the legendary stone and has his coat of arms and the date engraved upon it.
- He then causes the stone to be raised, so that 'even yet it stands, the Stone in Grönan Dal'.
Characters
St. Jaffen ★ protagonist
A man of sturdy build, likely weathered from extensive travel and outdoor life, consistent with a missionary of the era. His height is average, and he possesses a resilient physique suitable for long journeys on horseback.
Attire: Practical, durable traveling attire typical of a missionary or holy man in 10th-11th century Scandinavia. This would include a simple, long-sleeved tunic made of coarse wool or linen, possibly a hooded cloak for protection against the elements, and sturdy leather boots. Colors would be earthy and muted, like browns, greys, or undyed fabrics.
Wants: To spread Christianity and wisdom, to leave a lasting message for future generations, to find moments of rest during his arduous travels.
Flaw: Physical weariness, which leads him to rest and thus discover the valley.
He serves as the catalyst for the story, establishing the central artifact and its prophecy. His actions set the stage for the legend.
Prophetic, observant, weary (initially), thoughtful, dedicated.
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A sturdy adult man of average height, with a weathered face and a natural, unkempt beard and hair, consistent with a 10th-11th century Scandinavian missionary. He wears a simple, long-sleeved tunic of coarse grey wool, a hooded dark brown wool cloak draped over his shoulders, and sturdy leather boots. He is kneeling beside a large, flat stone slab, intently carving runic characters into its surface with a small metal chisel. His expression is focused and solemn. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Baron Tilas ◆ supporting
A man of authority, likely well-groomed and of a respectable stature befitting a provincial governor in 18th-century Sweden. His build would suggest a life of administrative duties rather than manual labor.
Attire: Formal attire of a Swedish provincial governor from 1742. This would include a tailored coat (justacorps) in a rich color like dark blue or burgundy, possibly with gold embroidery, a waistcoat, breeches, silk stockings, and buckled shoes. A lace jabot and cuffs would complete the look.
Wants: To investigate local legends, to confirm the existence of the fabled stone, to leave his own mark on a significant historical artifact.
Flaw: A potential desire to associate himself with historical legends, perhaps a touch of vanity in adding his coat of arms.
He serves as the character who 'finds' and 'raises' the stone, thus fulfilling a part of its legend and ensuring its continued 'standing.'
Observant, decisive, historically interested, authoritative.
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A formally dressed adult man of respectable stature, with a composed face and a powdered white wig, consistent with a Swedish provincial governor from 1742. He wears a tailored dark blue wool justacorps with gold embroidery on the cuffs and lapels, a white silk waistcoat, cream breeches, white silk stockings, and black buckled shoes. A lace jabot is at his neck. He stands upright, observing a large stone being raised, with a discerning and authoritative expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Grönan Dal (The Green Valley)
A beautiful, verdant valley in the parish of Åre, Jämtland, Sweden, near the Norwegian border. It is described as a 'garden spot,' implying lush vegetation and a pleasant, fertile landscape.
Mood: Peaceful, serene, ancient, with a sense of hidden magic and prophecy.
St. Jaffen rests here and carves the prophetic runes into the stone. Later, Baron Tilas finds a stone here and has it re-erected.
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A wide, verdant valley in the Jämtland region of Sweden, with gentle, tree-covered slopes rising on either side. The valley floor is a carpet of lush green grass, dotted with wildflowers. A clear, winding stream meanders through the center. In the foreground, a large, flat, grey granite slab, partially covered in moss, rests on the ground. The sky is a soft, clear blue with a few wispy clouds, indicating a peaceful summer afternoon. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Area near Skurdal Gate
A specific spot 'a few paces east of the gate of Skurdal' within the broader Grönan Dal. This suggests a more defined point of entry or passage, possibly marked by an old gate or boundary.
Mood: Historical, significant, a place of discovery and re-establishment.
Baron Tilas discovers the stone here in 1742 and has his coat of arms and the date engraved upon it before raising it upright.
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An ancient, weathered wooden gate, possibly a simple post-and-lintel structure, stands partially open on a grassy track in rural Jämtland, Sweden. A few paces to the east of the gate, a tall, grey granite monolith stands upright, its surface bearing faint, ancient runic carvings and a more recent, crisply engraved coat of arms and date (1742). The ground is a mix of short grass and exposed rock, with scattered pine trees in the background under a bright, clear sky. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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