THEY DIDN'T THINK
by James H. Fassett
The Mouse and the Robin Who Didn't Listen
Little Mouse smells something good. It is cheese! Big, yellow cheese. The cheese is in a strange little box. It smells very yummy. Little Mouse wants the cheese.
Old Rat sees Little Mouse. Old Rat is wise. He says, "Stop! Box is bad." Old Rat knows many things. He is old.
Little Mouse does not listen. He says, "No! I want cheese!" He runs to the box. But Little Mouse did not think.
Little Mouse ran into the box. He took a big bite of cheese. The cheese was so yummy. He was happy for a moment. Then...
The strange box closed fast. Little Mouse was stuck inside. He was very scared. He cried, "Oh no! I did not think!" Old Rat came quickly. He helped Little Mouse get out. Little Mouse was safe.
Now here is another story. Little Robin lives in a tree. He sees a house door. He sees the floor inside. Little Robin wants to hop there.
Mama Robin is near. She is warm and kind. She says, "Stay in tree. It is safe." Do not go down. Mama Robin loves Little Robin.
Little Robin does not listen. He says, "No! I want to go!" He flew down fast. But Little Robin did not think.
Little Robin flew to the ground. A Big Cat saw him there. Big Cat ran very fast. Little Robin was very scared. Mama Robin flew down. She helped Little Robin fly up. He was safe in the tree.
Little Robin was shaking. He said, "Oh, Mama! I did not think!" Mama Robin held him close. She was very kind. Little Robin knew Mama was right. He understood now. He was safe in the tree. He learned a big lesson.
Little Mouse and Little Robin both learn something big. Listen. Think. Then you are safe.
Original Story
THEY DIDN'T THINK
Once a trap was baited With a piece of cheese; It tickled so a little mouse, It almost made him sneeze. An old rat said, "There's danger, Be careful where you go!" "Nonsense!" said the other, "I don't think you know!" So he walked in boldly— Nobody in sight— First he took a nibble, Then he took a bite; Close the trap together Snapped as quick as wink, Catching mousey fast there, 'Cause he didn't think.
Once there was a robin, Lived outside the door, Who wanted to go inside And hop upon the floor. "No, no," said the mother, "You must stay with me; Little birds are safest Sitting in a tree." "I don't care," said Robin, And gave his tail a fling, "I don't think the old folks Know quite everything." Down he flew, and kitty seized him Before he'd time to blink; "Oh," he cried, "I'm sorry, But I didn't think."
PHŒBE CARY
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Moral of the Story
Disregarding the advice of those with more experience can lead to dangerous and regrettable consequences.
Characters
The Little Mouse ★ protagonist
Small, agile, and somewhat plump for a mouse, with soft, grey-brown fur. He has delicate whiskers that twitch with curiosity and a long, thin tail.
Attire: None, as he is an animal.
Wants: Driven by immediate gratification and hunger for the cheese, coupled with a desire to prove his independence and superior knowledge.
Flaw: Impulsiveness and a lack of foresight; he doesn't consider consequences.
Starts as an overconfident, dismissive youth and ends caught in a trap, realizing his mistake too late.
Impulsive, overconfident, dismissive of advice, curious, and ultimately regretful.
The Old Rat ◆ supporting
Larger and more grizzled than the mouse, with coarser, darker grey fur. He moves with a cautious, experienced air.
Attire: None, as he is an animal.
Wants: To warn and protect younger, less experienced creatures from danger.
Flaw: His advice is often ignored, leading to frustration.
Remains consistent as a voice of wisdom, though his advice is unheeded.
Wise, cautious, experienced, and concerned for others.
Robin ★ protagonist
A small, plump robin with bright red breast feathers, brown wings, and a short tail. He is full of youthful energy.
Attire: None, as he is an animal.
Wants: To explore the world beyond his mother's watchful eye and to prove his own understanding.
Flaw: Overconfidence and a refusal to heed warnings, leading to immediate danger.
Starts as a defiant, independent bird and ends caught by a cat, realizing his mistake too late.
Rebellious, independent, dismissive of parental advice, curious, and ultimately regretful.
Mother Robin ◆ supporting
A slightly larger, more subdued robin than her child, with a less vibrant red breast and slightly ruffled brown feathers, indicating experience.
Attire: None, as she is an animal.
Wants: To keep her child safe from harm and teach him the dangers of the world.
Flaw: Her inability to prevent her child from making his own mistakes.
Remains consistent as a protective parent, though her advice is unheeded.
Protective, wise, cautious, and caring.
Kitty ⚔ antagonist
A sleek, agile domestic cat, likely with dark or tabby fur, moving with predatory grace. Its movements are swift and silent.
Attire: None, as it is an animal.
Wants: Instinctual hunting and hunger.
Flaw: None shown in the story; it is a force of nature.
Remains a consistent, silent threat.
Predatory, opportunistic, silent, and efficient.
Locations
Kitchen/Pantry Floor
A domestic indoor setting, likely a kitchen or pantry, where a mouse trap is set on the floor, baited with cheese.
Mood: Initially tempting and seemingly safe, quickly turning dangerous and fatal.
A young mouse ignores an old rat's warning and is caught in a trap after being lured by cheese.
Garden/Yard Outside a House
The area immediately outside a house door, featuring a tree where a robin's nest is, and the ground where a cat lurks.
Mood: Initially safe and natural, quickly becoming perilous and predatory.
A young robin disobeys its mother's warning, flies down from the tree, and is caught by a cat.
Story DNA
Moral
Disregarding the advice of those with more experience can lead to dangerous and regrettable consequences.
Plot Summary
A little mouse ignores an old rat's warning about a cheese-baited trap, walks in boldly, and is caught, regretting that he didn't think. Similarly, a robin disregards its mother's advice to stay in the tree and flies down, only to be seized by a cat, also regretting its impulsiveness. Both stories serve as cautionary tales about the dangers of not heeding the wisdom of elders and acting without thinking.
Themes
Emotional Arc
overconfidence to regret
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
This poem by Phoebe Cary (often misattributed to James H. Fassett) is a classic example of 19th-century didactic poetry for children, emphasizing obedience and prudence.
Plot Beats (10)
- A trap is set with cheese, tempting a little mouse.
- An old rat warns the mouse of danger, advising caution.
- The little mouse dismisses the warning, believing the old rat doesn't know everything.
- The mouse boldly enters the trap and takes a bite of the cheese.
- The trap snaps shut, catching the mouse, who regrets not thinking.
- A robin living outside a door wants to go inside and hop on the floor.
- The robin's mother warns it to stay in the tree for safety.
- The robin disregards its mother's advice, believing the old folks don't know everything.
- The robin flies down, and a cat seizes it instantly.
- The robin cries out in regret, realizing it didn't think.
