THE RAINDROP’S STORY

by James Hume-Cook · from Australian Fairy Tales

fairy tale adventure whimsical Ages 8-14 1334 words 6 min read
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CEFR A1 Age 5 423 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Once, there was a little drop of water. It lived in the big, blue ocean. Ocean was like its mother.

Little Drop was very small. It lived in the big Ocean. Ocean was its mother. Ocean rocked Little Drop gently. Little Drop felt safe. It felt happy in the water. Wind made waves. Ocean rocked Little Drop to sleep.

One day, the Sun shone bright. Sun was warm. Sun called to Little Drop. Little Drop went up. Sun lifted Little Drop. It went into a soft Cloud. Cloud was white and fluffy.

Little Drop felt new. It looked down. The world looked big. Little Drop was not alone. Many drops were there. They were friends. They talked and played. They were happy together.

Cloud flew high. Little Drop could see far. It saw the big Ocean. It saw deep down. It saw many things. The world was so wide. They saw everything below.

Little Drop saw pretty coral. Coral was pink. It glowed under the water. They saw old ships. Ships were deep down. They stayed very still. The ships had treasures.

Cloud flew over new lands. Little Drop saw people. They wore bright clothes. They danced and sang. They made loud sounds. Some drops fell down. They went to the land.

Cloud flew to a hot place. It was a big desert. Little Drop saw camels. Camels walked slowly. People rode on them. They had pretty clothes. It was a long journey.

Cloud flew north. They saw a big mountain. It was Mount Vesuvius. Smoke came out. It was very tall. Little Drop felt its heat. Cloud held Little Drop safe.

Then they saw tall mountains. Snow was on top. Snow was white and cold. Sun shone on the snow. Snow turned gold. It looked so pretty. Mountains of gold.

Cloud flew over many lands. It saw new places. Then it flew over the ocean. It went back home. It saw Australia. It was happy to be back. The journey was long.

Little Drop was very happy. It smelled sweet trees. It was time to fall. Little Drop fell down. It landed on a leaf. It was soft and green.

Little Drop had a job. It helped plants grow. It made flowers fresh. It gave water to trees. This was its special work. Little Drop felt good.

Little Drop was very happy. It knew its special job. It helped the whole world grow. Even small things have a big job. They make the world better. Everyone has a special job to do!

Original Story 1334 words · 6 min read

THE RAINDROP’S STORY

“Once upon a time, a long while ago, I stood upon a hill-top, watching the rain clouds drifting past. Suddenly a raindrop fell into the palm of my outstretched hand, and lay there looking at me! He was so clear and cool, so bright-eyed and so fearless, that I said to him: ‘Tell me, Raindrop, what is your story, and why do you fall?’

“And this is the tale he told:—

“ ‘When I was very young, and very, very tiny, I lay upon the bosom of my mother, the Ocean. And many a time when I was inclined to be fretful, because the wind ruffled my spray-like hair, she gently rocked me off to sleep.

A RAIN FAIRY.

“ ‘Then came a day when the sun held out his hands and arms to me in such a winning fashion, that before I knew what he was doing, he had lifted me up and placed me in the downy folds of a fleecy cloud.

“ ‘At first I felt a little frightened, especially when I peeped down at the great big moving world beneath.

“ ‘But very soon I perceived that there were quite a number of us being carried by the cloud, and as we were all in the same boat, so to speak, it was not long before we became quite friendly.

“ ‘As the days went by we often talked about the things over which we passed, and many a time we wondered what some of them meant.

“ ‘Very strangely, perhaps, the higher we were taken into the air, the better our eyesight became; until, like ocean birds, we could see right down into the deepest deeps of the sea. It was, therefore, not at all difficult for us to pick out all kinds of things not usually seen from the surface of the water, or even from the top of a ship’s mast.

“ ‘One of the first and most alluring sights we thus saw, was a circular bed of coral, all pink and glowing in the clear still depths of the Pacific Ocean.

“ ‘Later on, when crossing the Caribbean Sea, we saw enormous masses of coloured sea-weeds fantastically curling their hands and arms in a never-ending variety of graceful movements. Almost immediately, there came before our eyes dark old Spanish galleons, stuffed with stolen gold, sunk by British merchant-ships, or maybe privateers, all their crews still stark and stiff in the deep unmoving waters. Not far removed was the gallant little ship in which Sir Richard Grenville and his glorious crew fought, single-handed, a fleet of Spanish Buccaneers; and, rather than yield, sank beside their guns. There they were, still resolute of pose in spite of all the years that have gone since then, and, seemingly, ready as ever to uphold the valour and the honour of the British race.

“ ‘Anon came other sights and scenes. Southward over Africa we float, peering at the Kraals, or houses, of African negroes; the patches where they grow their mealies, and the wide open spaces where their cattle roam. And, heavy now with our growing weight, the cloud just skims over the tall tops of a far-flung forest, when, full in view upon a great square of cleared land, we see a mighty host of stalwart Zulus being marshalled by their Chief in readiness for war. Without the slightest warning, they give vent to a most terrifying shout. Instantly a vast number of our fellow-travellers, thoroughly startled, fall from the cloud to the ground, and, as it suddenly rises again, we see them running as hard as they can for the creeks and the river not far away.

“ ‘Turning northward, for days and days we seemed to do nothing but drift and drift, the weather all the time becoming warmer and warmer. Then, just as if an intervening screen had been pulled suddenly and swiftly away, there below us lay the great Desert of Sahara. Far, far down, a thin stream of camels, heavily laden, were wending their way in the peculiar, tortuous, twisting fashion which is common to them. Upon the camels’ backs were gaily-coloured coverings fringed and tasseled with red and gold. On certain of the camels, in a kind of tent, rode a number of dark-eyed ladies, dressed in the most gorgeous silks and satins, their faces partly veiled, their little feet encased in dainty slippers, but always their flashing teeth and shining eyes to show that they were happy.

“ ‘All at once the scene is changed. A broad line of swiftly-moving horses comes, as it were, from nowhere—grey horses, whose arching necks, slim legs, and small round feet, show them to be Arab thoroughbreds. Astride these horses there are dark-browed men in cloak-like white burnooses, racing forward in such a way that it is plainly their intention to surround, and, maybe, murder, those connected with the camels.

“ ‘But not without a struggle will they be permitted to do as they please, for as soon as they are seen, the camels are drawn into a circle, and the dark-eyed ladies set within its very centre. Inside the ring, behind their animals, who have been told to lie down, are crouched the grim, alert, and silent merchants. In their hands are their rifles, ready loaded. Everything is death-like in its stillness. Even the thudding of the horses’ hoofs, at all times faint upon the sand, is, by the gentle breeze blown in the opposite direction.

“ ‘Suddenly there comes a yell from the charging horsemen, and, at the very same instant, a flash of guns from the merchants. But, alas! in less time than it takes to describe it, the horsemen are victorious, the merchants are dead or captive, the dark-eyed ladies tied with silken cords, and the whole train—camels, horses and human beings—set in motion towards the desert City, wherein those of the merchants who are still alive will be turned into slaves, their goods and camels sold to the highest bidders, and their ladies taken into the harems of the Arabs rich enough to buy them.

“ ‘Northward still we go, until Mount Vesuvius is reached. Oh, what a smoke and heat! I nearly dropped with suffocation! Indeed, I should have fallen straight into the great red yawning crater, with its awful fires, had it not been for the soft but strong hold by which the cloud upheld me. Never again do I want to see that burning place. The very memory of it, even now, causes me to tremble.…

“ ‘Then, not far from Mount Vesuvius it seemed, we barely succeeded in passing over such gigantic mountains that their tops are forever covered in snow—white, cold and unutterably still. Yet, even as we gazed, dumb-struck with the wonder of it all, there came the sun’s great rays, and, magically, gloriously, turned the snow to gold—to gleaming gold, mountains of gold!

“ ‘Southward and Eastward then we went! Over the burning plains of India, past the Taj Mahal, that mighty monument to woman’s love and virtue, and to the memory of a great Prince; southward to Ceylon, set within the circling seas, and then, rapidly over the ocean back to Australia, where, glad to see and smell the Eucalypts again, down I fell to do them service!

“ ‘As to why I fall, it is because that is the only way in which I can do my share of the things that must be done. My chief duty is to nurture and refresh everything that grows; and as that can best be accomplished by falling on or about them, therefore that is the thing I do.’ ”

When this story was completed, there suddenly broke out such a hum of conversation that it was quite a little time before the Prince was able to announce that, by special request, the Official Recorder had consented to give a contribution towards the evening’s entertainment.

And this is what he said:—


Story DNA fairy tale · whimsical

Moral

Everyone, no matter how small, has an important role to play in the world.

Plot Summary

A person on a hilltop encounters a talking raindrop, who recounts its life story. The raindrop describes being lifted from the ocean by the sun into a cloud, where it travels with other drops. From high above, it observes various wonders and dramatic events across the globe, including sunken ships, African warriors, a violent desert raid, Mount Vesuvius, and golden mountains. After a long journey, the raindrop falls in Australia, explaining that its purpose is to nurture and refresh the earth, fulfilling its essential role in the world's cycle.

Themes

purposeinterconnectednessjourneyobservation

Emotional Arc

curiosity to fulfillment

Writing Style

Voice: first person (nested within third person)
Pacing: episodic
Descriptive: lush
Techniques: personification, frame narrative, vivid imagery

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs nature (raindrop's journey) and person vs person (observed human conflicts)
Ending: moral justice
Magic: talking raindrop, raindrops gaining enhanced vision in clouds, personification of sun and ocean
the raindrop (representing an individual's journey and purpose)the cloud (representing a collective journey and perspective)

Cultural Context

Origin: English (implied by references to British valour)
Era: timeless fairy tale

The story includes references to historical events like Sir Richard Grenville's last fight, reflecting a certain nationalistic pride common in the era of its writing. Descriptions of desert raids and harems reflect common Western perceptions of Middle Eastern cultures at the time.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. A narrator on a hilltop catches a raindrop and asks for its story.
  2. The raindrop recounts its origin as a tiny drop in the ocean, nurtured by its mother.
  3. The sun's warmth gently lifts the raindrop into a fleecy cloud.
  4. Initially frightened, the raindrop soon finds companionship with other drops in the cloud.
  5. As they travel, their eyesight improves, allowing them to see deep into the ocean.
  6. They observe a coral bed in the Pacific and sunken Spanish galleons in the Caribbean, including Sir Richard Grenville's ship.
  7. The cloud drifts over Africa, where the drops witness Zulu warriors preparing for war, causing some drops to fall.
  8. They then cross the Sahara Desert, observing a camel caravan and a sudden, violent raid by Arab horsemen.
  9. The raindrop describes the tragic outcome of the raid: merchants killed or enslaved, ladies captured.
  10. The journey continues northward, passing over the terrifying Mount Vesuvius.
  11. They then marvel at snow-capped mountains, which the sun's rays turn to gleaming gold.
  12. Finally, the cloud travels over India (Taj Mahal) and Ceylon, before returning to Australia.
  13. Glad to be back, the raindrop falls to the ground.
  14. The raindrop explains that its purpose in falling is to nurture and refresh everything that grows.
  15. The frame narrative concludes with the narrator listening to another story.

Characters 5 characters

The Narrator (Human) ◆ supporting

human adult unknown

The story does not provide specific physical details for the narrator, only that they have an outstretched hand.

Attire: Not described.

Wants: To understand the world and the experiences of others.

Flaw: None explicitly stated, but perhaps a passive observer rather than an active participant.

Remains a listener and recorder of the raindrop's story.

An outstretched hand, palm open, receiving a single raindrop.

Curious, observant, receptive, gentle.

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A human hand, palm open and facing upwards, with a single, perfectly spherical, clear raindrop resting in the center. The hand is gently cupped, with visible lines and subtle texture of human skin. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Raindrop ★ protagonist

water droplet ageless non-human

Very tiny, clear, cool, bright-eyed. Appears as a perfect, glistening sphere of water.

Attire: None, as it is a water droplet.

Wants: To fulfill its duty of nurturing and refreshing everything that grows.

Flaw: Vulnerable to external forces (wind, sun, gravity, startling noises).

From a fretful youth on the ocean to a seasoned traveler who understands its purpose and embraces its duty.

A single, perfectly spherical, clear, and glistening water droplet with a tiny, bright, reflective 'eye'.

Fearless, observant, curious, dutiful, a little fretful when young, resilient.

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A single, perfectly spherical, clear water droplet, glistening with internal light, with a tiny, bright, reflective 'eye' on its surface. It appears translucent and cool. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Ocean ◆ supporting

natural element ageless female

Vast, deep, with a 'bosom' implying a nurturing, expansive presence. 'Ruffled spray-like hair' suggests the surface waves.

Attire: None, as it is a body of water.

Wants: To sustain life and be the origin of water.

Flaw: None explicitly stated, but subject to natural forces like wind.

Remains a constant, foundational presence.

The vast, undulating surface of a deep blue ocean, with gentle, foamy waves at the edges, suggesting a comforting embrace.

Nurturing, gentle, comforting, immense, patient.

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A vast, deep blue ocean surface, gently undulating with soft, foamy waves at the edges, suggesting a comforting, expansive embrace. The water is clear and reflects light. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Sun ◆ supporting

natural element ageless non-human

Radiant, warm, with 'hands and arms' implying an active, lifting force.

Attire: None, as it is a celestial body.

Wants: To draw water upwards, initiating the water cycle.

Flaw: None explicitly stated.

Remains a constant, powerful force.

A radiant, golden sun with stylized, outstretched rays resembling welcoming arms, emanating warmth and light.

Winning, inviting, powerful, transformative.

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A radiant, golden sun with stylized, outstretched rays resembling welcoming arms, emanating warmth and brilliant light. The sun is a perfect sphere of glowing energy. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Cloud ◆ supporting

natural element ageless non-human

Fleecy, downy folds, carries many raindrops. Grows heavy with water.

Attire: None, as it is a cloud.

Wants: To carry the raindrops across the world.

Flaw: Can be startled, causing raindrops to fall prematurely; becomes heavy.

Travels across the world, growing heavier, eventually releasing its contents.

A large, soft, fleecy white cumulus cloud, with distinct, downy folds, appearing to drift gently across the sky.

Carrying, protective (initially), responsive to external stimuli (like Zulu shouts).

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A large, soft, fleecy white cumulus cloud, with distinct, downy folds, appearing to drift gently across a clear sky. The cloud is voluminous and bright. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
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The Ocean (Mother)

outdoor Windy, creating spray

The vast, open expanse of the sea, where the raindrop was born. The surface is sometimes ruffled by wind, creating spray-like effects.

Mood: Nurturing, vast, serene, occasionally turbulent

The raindrop's birth and early childhood, being rocked to sleep by the Ocean.

Ocean surface Sea spray Wind
Image Prompt & Upload
A wide, expansive view of a calm ocean surface, with gentle ripples and a fine mist of sea spray catching the light. The horizon stretches endlessly under a soft, diffused sky. The water is a deep, tranquil blue-green, reflecting the subtle light from above. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Sahara Desert Caravan Route

outdoor day Warm, clear desert conditions

A vast, desolate desert landscape under a warm sky. A thin, winding stream of heavily laden camels moves across the sand, adorned with gaily-colored, fringed, and tasseled coverings. Some camels carry tents housing dark-eyed ladies in gorgeous silks. The scene is later disrupted by charging Arab thoroughbreds and men in white burnooses.

Mood: Vast, desolate, tense, dangerous

The raindrop observes a merchant caravan being ambushed by horsemen, leading to a battle and the capture of the caravan.

Endless sand dunes Thin stream of camels Gaily-colored camel coverings Tents on camels Dark-eyed ladies in silks Arab thoroughbred horses Men in white burnooses Rifles
Image Prompt & Upload
A sweeping vista of the Sahara Desert at midday, with undulating golden sand dunes stretching to the horizon under a clear, warm sky. A winding line of camels, adorned with vibrant red and gold tassels, traverses the sandy expanse. In the foreground, a group of dark-browed men in flowing white burnooses on lean, grey Arabian thoroughbreds charge across the sand, kicking up fine dust. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Himalayan Mountain Range

outdoor morning | day Cold, snowy, clear

Gigantic, snow-covered mountains with their tops perpetually white, cold, and still. The sun's rays later transform the snow into gleaming gold.

Mood: Awe-inspiring, majestic, cold, magical

The raindrop witnesses the majestic beauty of snow-capped mountains, which are then transformed into 'mountains of gold' by the sun.

Gigantic snow-capped peaks White, still snow Sun's rays Golden snow
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A breathtaking panorama of the towering Himalayan mountains, their jagged peaks perpetually covered in pristine, brilliant white snow under a clear, crisp blue sky. Golden sunlight streams from the left, illuminating the snow-covered slopes and transforming patches into a shimmering, ethereal gold, casting long, soft shadows. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Hill-top in Australia

outdoor Varies, implies a pleasant, post-rain atmosphere

A hill-top overlooking a landscape where Eucalyptus trees are visible and their scent is present. This is where the narrator stands.

Mood: Reflective, fresh, natural, welcoming

The narrator receives the raindrop and hears its story; the raindrop's final destination.

Hill-top Eucalyptus trees Rain clouds Outstretched hand
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A gentle, grassy hill-top in the Australian bush, with several mature Eucalyptus trees scattered across the landscape, their distinctive grey-green leaves rustling softly. The ground is covered in dry, golden-brown grass and scattered bark. Rain clouds drift away in the distance, revealing patches of clear, soft blue sky. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.