DEDICATION
by John Gay · from Fables of John Gay (Somewhat Altered)
Adapted Version
I am a writer. I write stories. One day, I met a lady. She had a big smile. She had bright, long hair. She was very nice. I liked her. She liked me too. We were good friends. But she wanted something from me. Something very, very big.
Then the lady looked at me. "I want a book!" she said. "A big book!" She jumped up and down. "A big, big, big book!" She clapped. "How big?" I asked. "Big as a table!" she said. "Heavy as a dog!" She spread her arms. "All for me!" I looked at her. She really, really wanted it. A very big book. Just for her! Oh my!
That night, I wished on a star. "I wish for a big book!" The star was funny. It gave me half my wish. So I wrote a book. But it was not big. It was small! Very, very small. It was thin. I held it in one hand. I looked at it. "Oh no!" I said. "This is a small, small book!"
Long ago, people liked long stories. Very, very long stories! They sat and listened all day. All day long! Can you believe it? They just sat there! But now, we like short stories. A long story makes you sleepy. A long story makes you miss playtime! No one wants to miss playtime. So short is good. Short is better. Short is the best!
Now there are so many fun things! There are cartoons to watch. There are games to play. There are videos to see. So many fun things! No one wants to sit all day! Not me! Not you! We want to play and laugh. We want to have fun. A short story is just right. Then we go and play!
So I had an idea. A short book is the best book! I made a little book. It was thin and small. But it was full of good stuff! I gave it to the lady. "It is so small!" she said. Then she read it. She smiled. She hugged the little book. "I love it!" she said. And I was happy too. A small book can hold a big story.
Original Story
DEDICATION.
Si doulce la Margarite.
When I first saw you—never mind the year—you could speak no English, and when next I saw you, after a lapse of two years, you would prattle no French; when again we met, you were the nymph with bright and flowing hair, which frightened his Highness Prince James out of his feline senses, when, as you came in by the door, he made his bolt by the window. It was then that you entreated me, with "most petitionary vehemence," to write you a book—a big book—thick, and all for yourself—
"Apollo heard, and granting half the prayer,
Shuffled to winds the rest and tossed in air."
I have not written the book, nor is it thick: but I have printed you a book, and it is thin. And I take the occasion to note that old Geoffry Chaucer, our father poet, must have had you in his mind's eye, by prescience or precognition, or he could hardly else have written two poems, one on the daisy and one on the rose. They are poems too long for modern days, nor are we equal in patience to our fore-fathers, who read 'The Faërie Queen,' 'Gondibert,' and the 'Polyolbion,' annually, as they cheeringly averred, through and out. Photography, steam, and electricity make us otherwise, and Patience has fled to the spheres; therefore, if feasible, shall "brevity be the soul of wit," and we will eschew "tediousness and outward flourishes" in compressing 'The Flower and the Leaf' into little:—
Story DNA
Moral
In modern times, brevity and conciseness are more appreciated than lengthy works.
Plot Summary
The narrator recalls a woman who, after several encounters, vehemently asked him to write her a large, dedicated book. He humorously notes that he has instead produced a thin book, explaining that modern society, influenced by technology, lacks the patience for the lengthy works enjoyed by previous generations. He concludes that brevity is now paramount and resolves to adapt a classic, 'The Flower and the Leaf,' into a concise form, thereby fulfilling her request in a contemporary manner.
Themes
Emotional Arc
amusement to acceptance
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
John Gay was an 18th-century English poet and dramatist. The text reflects a shift in literary tastes and the impact of early industrial/technological advancements on societal attention spans.
Plot Beats (7)
- The narrator reminisces about first meeting a woman who spoke no English, then later spoke no French, and finally appeared as a captivating nymph.
- He recalls how this woman, with 'most petitionary vehemence,' entreated him to write her a 'big book' entirely for herself.
- The narrator humorously quotes Apollo granting only half the prayer, indicating he has not written a big book, but a thin one.
- He notes that old Geoffry Chaucer must have had her in mind when writing poems about the daisy and the rose.
- He observes that these long poems, and other epic works, are too long for modern readers who lack the patience of their ancestors.
- The narrator attributes this change to modern inventions like photography, steam, and electricity, which have made people less patient.
- He concludes that brevity is now the 'soul of wit' and resolves to compress a classic work, 'The Flower and the Leaf,' into a small, thin book, eschewing tediousness.
Characters
The Nymph ◆ supporting
A woman of graceful build, likely of average height, with a striking presence that captivates attention. Her movements are probably fluid and expressive, given her 'petitionary vehemence'.
Attire: Given the period and her description as a 'nymph', she would likely wear elegant, perhaps slightly less formal than court attire, but still fashionable for the era (early 18th century English). This could include a silk or brocade gown with a fitted bodice and flowing skirt, possibly in pastel shades, with delicate lace or ribbon embellishments. Her attire would emphasize her graceful form.
Wants: To have a book written specifically for her, a 'big book—thick, and all for herself', indicating a desire for personal attention and a grand gesture.
Flaw: Perhaps a touch of vanity or an expectation of grand gestures, as she desires a 'big book' solely for herself.
She is the catalyst for the dedication but does not undergo a significant internal change within this short piece. Her desire is partially fulfilled.
Expressive, persistent, charming, demanding (in a playful way), and perhaps a bit dramatic. She knows how to get what she wants through 'petitionary vehemence'.
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A young adult woman standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. She has bright, flowing golden-blonde hair that cascades down her back, with a few loose curls framing her expressive face. Her eyes are a striking blue, and her complexion is fair and clear. She wears an elegant early 18th-century English gown made of pale blue silk with delicate lace trim at the sleeves and neckline, a fitted bodice, and a full, flowing skirt. Her posture is graceful and slightly dramatic, with one hand gently raised as if in a gesture of entreaty. She has a charming, persuasive expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Author (John Gay) ★ protagonist
Likely of average build for an early 18th-century English gentleman, perhaps a bit scholarly in appearance. His demeanor suggests a thoughtful and witty individual.
Attire: As an English gentleman and poet of the early 18th century, he would wear a formal coat (possibly in wool or velvet), a waistcoat, breeches, silk stockings, and buckled shoes. His attire would be refined but not overly ostentatious, reflecting his status as a man of letters.
Wants: To fulfill a promise (partially) to the Nymph and to present his work, while also reflecting on literary traditions and modern changes.
Flaw: Perhaps a tendency to procrastinate or not fully commit to grand projects, as he didn't write the 'big book' requested.
He presents his work and reflects on the changing nature of literature and readership, demonstrating his adaptability as a writer.
Witty, observant, somewhat playful, self-deprecating (regarding the book's thickness), and appreciative of classical literature. He is also pragmatic, acknowledging modern impatience.
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An adult man of average height and slender build, standing upright, facing forward, full body visible from head to toe. He has a powdered white periwig styled in the fashion of the early 18th century, with a thoughtful, slightly amused expression on his fair-skinned face. His eyes are dark and observant. He wears a dark blue wool frock coat with silver buttons, a cream-colored silk waistcoat embroidered with subtle floral patterns, white linen breeches, white silk stockings, and black leather buckled shoes. His posture is composed and slightly formal. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Prince James ○ minor
Not explicitly described, but as a Prince, he would likely carry himself with a certain regal bearing, even in a moment of surprise.
Attire: As a Prince, he would be dressed in the finest court attire of the early 18th century. This would include a richly embroidered velvet or brocade coat, a lace jabot, a waistcoat, breeches, silk stockings, and buckled shoes. His clothing would be indicative of his high status.
Wants: To escape whatever 'frightened his Highness... out of his feline senses'.
Flaw: Easily frightened by unexpected sights.
A momentary appearance to illustrate the Nymph's striking appearance; no personal arc.
Easily startled, perhaps a bit dramatic in his reaction to the Nymph's hair. His presence suggests a certain level of social standing.
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An adult man of regal bearing, dressed in early 18th-century court attire, mid-action as if startled. He wears a richly embroidered crimson velvet coat with gold trim, a white lace jabot, a matching waistcoat, and white breeches. His powdered periwig is slightly askew, and his face shows a fleeting expression of surprise and alarm. He is depicted in the act of turning sharply, as if about to make a hasty exit. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Prince James's Cat ○ minor
A domestic cat, likely a well-groomed and perhaps pampered pet, given its owner's status. Its 'feline senses' suggest it is a typical cat, prone to sudden fright.
Attire: None, as it is an animal.
Wants: To escape the perceived threat of the Nymph's 'bright and flowing hair'.
Flaw: Its easily frightened 'feline senses'.
A momentary appearance to add a humorous detail to the Nymph's striking appearance; no personal arc.
Skittish, easily startled, true to its feline nature.
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A domestic cat, sleek and well-groomed, with short, dark fur, standing on all fours. Its back is slightly arched, and its tail is bristled, indicating alarm. Its green eyes are wide with surprise, and its ears are flattened slightly. It is looking towards an unseen stimulus with a startled expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Unspecified Meeting Place (First Encounter)
A place where the narrator first met the dedicatee, who at the time spoke no English. No specific visual details are provided.
Mood: Nostalgic, reflective
The narrator's first encounter with the dedicatee, establishing their long-standing acquaintance.
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An elegant, softly lit interior of a 17th-century English manor house, perhaps a drawing-room with tall, leaded-glass windows looking out onto a formal garden. Polished dark wood paneling lines the walls, and a large, ornate fireplace dominates one side. Plush velvet armchairs are arranged around a small, carved oak table. Sunlight streams gently through the windows, illuminating dust motes in the air. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Unspecified Meeting Place (Second Encounter)
A place where the narrator met the dedicatee again, two years later, when she would not speak French. No specific visual details are provided.
Mood: Nostalgic, reflective
The second meeting, noting the dedicatee's change in language preference.
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A sun-drenched, airy salon in a grand 17th-century French chateau, with tall, arched windows overlooking a parterre garden. Walls are adorned with delicate rococo plasterwork and large tapestries depicting pastoral scenes. A polished parquet floor reflects the light, and elegant fauteuils are arranged informally. Soft, diffused light fills the room, creating a serene and refined atmosphere. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
The Room with the Door and Window
A room where the dedicatee, described as a nymph with bright and flowing hair, entered through a door, causing Prince James (a cat) to bolt out a window.
Mood: Lively, amusing, slightly chaotic
The memorable incident where the dedicatee's entrance startled Prince James, leading to her request for a book.
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A cozy, well-appointed study in a 17th-century English country house, with a heavy oak door slightly ajar and a large casement window flung open. Sunlight streams through the window, illuminating a worn Persian rug on the wooden floor. Bookshelves filled with leather-bound volumes line the walls, and a comfortable, high-backed armchair sits beside a small writing desk. A playful, slightly startled cat is mid-leap towards the open window. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
