Binnorie

by Joseph Jacobs · from Collected Folk Tales

fairy tale moral tale solemn Ages 8-14 773 words 4 min read
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Original Story 773 words · 4 min read

BINNORIE

Once upon a time there were two king's daughters lived in a bower near the

  bonny mill-dams of Binnorie. And Sir William came wooing the eldest and


  won her love and plighted troth with glove and with ring. But after a time


  he looked upon the youngest, with her cherry cheeks and golden hair, and


  his love grew towards her till he cared no longer for the eldest one. So


  she hated her sister for taking away Sir William's love, and day by day


  her hate grew upon her, and she plotted and she planned how to get rid of


  her.

So one fine morning, fair and clear, she said to her sister, “Let us go

  and see our father's boats come in at the bonny mill-stream of Binnorie.”


   So they went there hand in hand. And when they got to the river's bank the


  youngest got upon a stone to watch for the coming of the boats. And her


  sister, coming behind her, caught her round the waist and dashed her into


  the rushing mill-stream of Binnorie.

“O sister, sister, reach me your hand!” she cried, as she floated away,

  “and you shall have half of all I've got or shall get.”

“No, sister, I'll reach you no hand of mine, for I am the heir to all your

  land. Shame on me if I touch the hand that has come 'twixt me and my own


  heart's love.”

“O sister, O sister, then reach me your glove!” she cried, as she floated

  further away, “and you shall have your William again.”

“Sink on,” cried the cruel princess, “no hand or glove of mine you'll

  touch. Sweet William will be all mine when you are sunk beneath the bonny


  mill-stream of Binnorie.” And she turned and went home to the king's


  castle.

And the princess floated down the mill-stream, sometimes swimming and

  sometimes sinking, till she came near the mill. Now the miller's daughter


  was cooking that day, and needed water for her cooking. And as she went to


  draw it from the stream, she saw something floating towards the mill-dam,


  and she called out, “Father! father! draw your dam. There's something


  white—a merry maid or a milk-white swan—coming down the


  stream.” So the miller hastened to the dam and stopped the heavy cruel


  mill-wheels. And then they took out the princess and laid her on the bank.

Fair and beautiful she looked as she lay there. In her golden hair were

  pearls and precious stones; you could not see her waist for her golden


  girdle; and the golden fringe of her white dress came down over her lily


  feet. But she was drowned, drowned!

And as she lay there in her beauty a famous harper passed by the mill-dam

  of Binnorie, and saw her sweet pale face. And though he travelled on far


  away he never forgot that face, and after many days he came back to the


  bonny mill-stream of Binnorie. But then all he could find of her where


  they had put her to rest were her bones and her golden hair. So he made a


  harp out of her breast-bone and her hair, and travelled on up the hill


  from the mill-dam of Binnorie, till he came to the castle of the king her


  father.

That night they were all gathered in the castle hall to hear the great

  harper—king and queen, their daughter and son, Sir William and all


  their Court. And first the harper sang to his old harp, making them joy


  and be glad or sorrow and weep just as he liked. But while he sang he put


  the harp he had made that day on a stone in the hall. And presently it


  began to sing by itself, low and clear, and the harper stopped and all


  were hushed.

And this was what the harp sung:

“O yonder sits my father, the king,

Binnorie, O Binnorie;

And yonder sits my mother, the queen;

By the bonny mill-dams o' Binnorie,

“And yonder stands my brother Hugh,

Binnorie, O Binnorie;

And by him, my William, false and true;

By the bonny mill-dams o' Binnorie.”

Then they all wondered, and the harper told them how he had seen the

  princess lying drowned on the bank near the bonny mill-dams o' Binnorie,


  and how he had afterwards made this harp out of her hair and breast-bone.


  Just then the harp began singing again, and this was what it sang out loud


  and clear:

“And there sits my sister who drownèd me

By the bonny mill-dams o' Binnorie.”

And the harp snapped and broke, and never sang more.


Story DNA fairy tale · solemn

Moral

Truth, especially about wicked deeds, will always find a way to be revealed, even from beyond the grave.

Plot Summary

Two royal sisters live near the Binnorie mill-dams. Sir William, initially betrothed to the elder, falls for the younger, inciting murderous jealousy in the elder. The elder sister lures the younger to the mill-stream, pushes her in, and refuses to help as she drowns. The younger princess's body is found by a miller, and later, a harper discovers her remains, crafting a magical harp from her bones and hair. During a performance at the king's castle, the harp miraculously sings, revealing the entire royal family and Sir William, then directly accuses the elder sister of murder before breaking.

Themes

jealousybetrayaljusticethe supernatural

Emotional Arc

innocence to tragedy to revelation

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: repetition (Binnorie), poetic verse within prose, supernatural intervention

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: a harp made from human remains that can sing and speak the truth
the mill-stream (a place of beauty turned into a site of murder)the harp (truth, justice, the voice of the dead)

Cultural Context

Origin: Scottish (Joseph Jacobs collected it, but it's a traditional Scottish ballad, 'The Twa Sisters')
Era: timeless fairy tale

This story is a prose adaptation of a very old and widespread folk ballad known as 'The Twa Sisters' or 'Binnorie', found across various European cultures. The magical instrument revealing the truth is a common motif in such tales.

Plot Beats (14)

  1. Two king's daughters live near the Binnorie mill-dams.
  2. Sir William woos the elder sister, but then falls in love with the younger sister.
  3. The elder sister's jealousy and hatred for her younger sister grow, leading her to plot murder.
  4. The elder sister tricks the younger into going to the mill-stream to watch for boats.
  5. The elder sister pushes the younger into the stream and refuses her desperate pleas for help, mocking her.
  6. The younger princess drowns, floating down the stream towards the mill.
  7. The miller's daughter spots the body, and the miller stops the mill-wheels to retrieve it.
  8. The drowned princess, adorned with jewels, is laid on the bank.
  9. A passing harper sees her beautiful, pale face and is haunted by it.
  10. The harper returns later to find only her bones and golden hair, from which he crafts a magical harp.
  11. The harper performs at the king's castle, where the entire court, including the elder sister and Sir William, is present.
  12. The magical harp begins to sing by itself, identifying the king, queen, brother, and Sir William.
  13. The harper explains the harp's origin, and it sings again, directly accusing the elder sister of murder.
  14. The harp snaps and breaks, its purpose fulfilled.

Characters 5 characters

The Youngest Daughter ★ protagonist

human young adult female

Cherry cheeks, golden hair, fair and beautiful, lily feet. Her waist was not visible due to her golden girdle.

Attire: White dress with a golden fringe, golden girdle, pearls and precious stones in her hair.

Her golden hair adorned with pearls and precious stones.

Innocent, trusting, victimized.

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A young woman in her late teens with long, flowing chestnut hair and bright, hopeful green eyes. She wears a simple but well-made dress of soft blue linen with a white apron, the hem slightly dusty from travel. Her expression is kind and determined, standing straight with a gentle smile. She holds a small, worn leather satchel in one hand and a single white flower in the other. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Eldest Daughter ⚔ antagonist

human young adult female

Not explicitly described, but implied to be less striking than her younger sister.

Attire: Implied to be royal attire, appropriate for a king's daughter.

A cold, hateful expression as she pushes her sister into the stream.

Jealous, hateful, cruel, deceitful.

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A stern woman in her late twenties with sharp, angular features and pale skin. Her dark hair is pulled back severely into a tight bun, accentuating her high cheekbones and cold, calculating eyes. She wears an elegant but oppressive high-collared gown of deep burgundy velvet with black lace trim at the cuffs and neckline. Her posture is rigid and authoritative, standing tall with her shoulders back and chin slightly raised. One hand rests on her hip while the other holds a closed, leather-bound book. Her expression is one of disdainful superiority, with a thin, cruel smile playing on her lips. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Sir William ◆ supporting

human young adult male

Not explicitly described.

Attire: Implied to be noble attire, appropriate for a knight.

A glove and ring, representing his plighted troth.

Fickle, easily swayed by beauty.

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A middle-aged knight in practical, well-worn steel plate armor, a deep blue cape draped over his shoulders. He has short, salt-and-pepper hair and a kind, weathered face with a gentle smile. He stands in a relaxed, confident posture, one hand resting on the pommel of a sheathed longsword at his hip. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Harper ◆ supporting

human adult male

Not explicitly described.

Attire: Implied to be the attire of a travelling musician.

A harp made from bone and golden hair.

Observant, artistic, persistent, just.

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A middle-aged man with a kind, weathered face and a short, salt-and-pepper beard. He has gentle eyes and a slight, knowing smile. He wears a worn leather vest over a cream-colored linen shirt, dark brown trousers, and sturdy travel boots. A wide-brimmed, soft hat rests on his head. He is seated on a simple wooden stool, cradling a beautiful, ornate wooden harp in his lap. His posture is relaxed yet attentive, with one hand gently plucking a string. A worn leather satchel sits at his feet. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Harp ◆ supporting

object ageless non-human

Made from the breast-bone and golden hair of the drowned princess.

Its strings made of golden hair.

Truth-telling, mournful, vengeful.

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A graceful young woman with an ethereal, serene expression, her long flowing hair resembling golden harp strings cascading over her shoulders. She wears a flowing gown of deep sapphire blue that subtly shimmers, its silhouette reminiscent of a harp's curved frame. Her posture is elegant and poised, one hand gently raised as if plucking an invisible string, the other resting softly at her side. She stands in a tranquil, sun-dappled forest clearing, surrounded by softly glowing fireflies and delicate wildflowers. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 4 locations
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Bower near the bonny mill-dams of Binnorie

indoor Implied pleasant, as it's a place of residence and initial courtship.

A dwelling or private chamber, likely within a larger estate, situated close to the mill-dams.

Mood: Initially romantic and peaceful, later becoming tense and filled with growing hatred.

Where the two sisters live and where Sir William first courts the eldest, then shifts his affection to the youngest, leading to the eldest's hatred.

bower mill-dams (visible or nearby)
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At dawn, a soft mist rises from the still waters of the mill-dams, their stone weirs and wooden sluices half-hidden. Nestled on a mossy bank nearby, a small, ancient stone bower is overgrown with climbing roses and ivy, its arched window dark. The air is cool and damp, the light a delicate pink and gold, reflecting on the calm water and dew-dropped cobblestones. Lush, emerald-green grass surrounds the scene, with willow trees trailing their fingers into the misty pools. The atmosphere is serene, silent, and deeply enchanted. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
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River's bank at the bonny mill-stream of Binnorie

outdoor morning Fine morning, fair and clear.

The edge of a flowing river, specifically the mill-stream, with a stone for standing on.

Mood: Deceptively serene, then quickly turning treacherous and murderous.

The eldest sister pushes the youngest into the mill-stream, leading to her drowning.

river's bank mill-stream stone rushing water
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Early morning light filters through ancient willow trees, casting dappled gold and green shadows upon the mossy bank of the Bonny mill-stream. Crystal-clear water flows swiftly over smooth, rounded stones, its surface shimmering with captured sunlight. A large, flat grey stone, worn smooth by time and water, sits half-submerged in the gentle current, perfect for standing upon. Lush emerald moss carpets the riverbank, dotted with tiny white and violet wildflowers. Delicate ferns unfurl near the water's edge, and the air is filled with the soft, constant murmur of the flowing stream. The atmosphere is serene, magical, and untouched, with a gentle mist rising from the cooler water. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Mill-dam of Binnorie

outdoor day Implied ordinary day, suitable for cooking and drawing water.

The area around a mill, including the dam and heavy mill-wheels, where the stream's flow is controlled.

Mood: Initially mundane, then becoming a place of discovery and sorrow.

The miller's daughter discovers the drowned princess, and the miller stops the wheels to retrieve her body.

mill-dam heavy cruel mill-wheels river bank floating body
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Late afternoon sunlight filters through ancient oak trees, casting long shadows across the moss-covered stone dam of Binnorie. Two massive, weathered mill-wheels rest half-submerged in the churning, emerald-green stream, their wooden spokes thick with glistening wet moss. The water flows steadily over the weir, creating a soft, constant roar. The old mill building itself, with its stone walls and a thatched roof, sits nestled against the riverbank, its windows dark. Wildflowers dot the grassy verges, and the air is cool and damp with a faint mist rising from the water. The color palette is rich with deep greens, warm stone grays, and the golden-amber light of the setting sun. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
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King's Castle Hall

indoor night Implied calm evening, suitable for a performance.

A grand hall within the king's castle, where the royal family and court gather.

Mood: Initially festive and entertaining, then turning somber, shocked, and revealing.

The harper performs, and the magical harp reveals the truth of the youngest princess's murder to the entire court.

castle hall king queen daughter son Sir William harper harp stone
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Late afternoon sunlight streams through towering stained glass windows, casting long, dramatic shafts of gold and crimson across a vast stone floor. The grand hall is defined by immense vaulted ceilings supported by carved marble pillars, with intricate tapestries depicting royal hunts hanging between them. A long, polished banquet table of dark oak dominates the center, set with gleaming silver goblets and candelabras. Dust motes dance in the light, and the air feels still and solemn. The architecture is Gothic, with pointed arches and detailed stone masonry. The color palette is rich with deep reds, royal blues, and the warm glow of gold leaf accents on the walls. A massive, unlit fireplace with a carved mantelpiece anchors one wall. The atmosphere is majestic, silent, and steeped in history. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.