Earl Mar's Daughter

by Joseph Jacobs · from Collected Folk Tales

fairy tale transformation romantic Ages 8-14 1093 words 5 min read
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CEFR A1 Age 5 350 words 2 min Canon 100/100

A girl found a dove in her garden. The dove was pretty. It sat in a green tree. "Come down, dove," said Lady Mar. "I will give you a nice home." The dove flew down. It sat on her shoulder. She took it to her room. She put it in a golden cage.

Night came. Lady Mar saw a young man. He stood by her bed. "Hello," he said softly. "I am the dove." Lady Mar was surprised. "How?" she asked.

"I am the prince," he said. "My mother is a queen. She knows magic. I am under a spell. By day, I am a dove. By night, I am a man. I want to stay with you. Please, be my friend."

"Yes," said Lady Mar. "I will be your friend." They made a happy promise. They lived in the castle. They had children. The prince took them to his mother. He flew over the sea.

Years passed. Earl Mar wanted Lady Mar to marry. He wanted her to marry a noble man. "No," she said. "I am happy with my dove." Earl Mar was angry. "I will take that dove away!" he said.

"Oh no!" said the dove. "I must go." He flew out the window. He flew and flew. He flew over the sea. He went to his mother's castle.

"Mother, help me!" he said. "My wife is in trouble." "What can I do?" asked the Queen Mother. "I will use my magic."

The Queen Mother used her magic. She turned people into birds. Some became big birds. Some became small birds. The prince became a big bird too. They flew and flew. They flew to the castle.

They saw a wedding party. The birds flew around. They helped Lady Mar. The big birds made a soft bed. They put Lady Mar on it. They carried her away.

They flew to the Queen Mother's castle. The magic went away. The prince was not a dove now. He was a man always. They were all with each other. They were a home. And they all lived happy ever after.

Original Story 1093 words · 5 min read

EARL MAR'S DAUGHTER

One fine summer's day Earl Mar's daughter went into the castle garden,

  dancing and tripping along. And as she played and sported she would stop


  from time to time to listen to the music of the birds. After a while as


  she sat under the shade of a green oak tree she looked up and spied a


  sprightly dove sitting high up on one of its branches. She looked up and


  said: “Coo-my-dove, my dear, come down to me and I will give you a golden


  cage. I'll take you home and pet you well, as well as any bird of them


  all.” Scarcely had she said these words when the dove flew down from the


  branch and settled on her shoulder, nestling up against her neck while she


  smoothed its feathers. Then she took it home to her own room.

The day was done and the night came on and Earl Mar's daughter was

  thinking of going to sleep when, turning round, she found at her side a


  handsome young man. She was startled, for the door had been locked


  for hours. But she was a brave girl and said: “What are you doing here,


  young man, to come and startle me so? The door was barred these hours ago;


  how ever did you come here?”

“Hush! hush!” the young man whispered. “I was that cooing dove that you

  coaxed from off the tree.”

“But who are you then?” she said quite low; “and how came you to be

  changed into that dear little bird?”

“My name is Florentine, and my mother is a queen, and something more than

  a queen, for she knows magic and spells, and because I would not do as she


  wished she turned me into a dove by day, but at night her spells lose


  their power and I become a man again. To-day I crossed the sea and saw you


  for the first time and I was glad to be a bird that I could come near you.


  Unless you love me, I shall never be happy more.”

“But if I love you,” says she, “will you not fly away and leave me one of

  these fine days?”

“Never, never,” said the prince; “be my wife and I'll be yours for ever.

  By day a bird, by night a prince, I will always be by your side as a


  husband, dear.”

So they were married in secret and lived happily in the castle and no one

  knew that every night Coo-my-dove became Prince Florentine. And every year


  a little son came to them as bonny as bonny could be. But as each son was


  born Prince Florentine carried the little thing away on his back over the


  sea to where the queen his mother lived and left the little one with her.

Seven years passed thus and then a great trouble came to them. For the

  Earl Mar wished to marry his daughter to a noble of high degree who came


  wooing her. Her father pressed her sore but she said: “Father dear, I do


  not wish to marry; I can be quite happy with Coo-my-dove here.”

Then her father got into a mighty rage and swore a great big oath, and

  said: “To-morrow, so sure as I live and eat, I'll twist that birdie's


  neck,” and out he stamped from her room.

“Oh, oh!” said Coo-my-dove; “it's time that I was away,” and so he jumped

  upon the window-sill and in a moment was flying away. And he flew and he


  flew till he was over the deep, deep sea, and yet on he flew till he came


  to his mother's castle. Now the queen his mother was taking her walk


  abroad when she saw the pretty dove flying overhead and alighting on the


  castle walls.

“Here, dancers come and dance your jigs,” she called, “and pipers, pipe

  you well, for here's my own Florentine, come back to me to stay for he's


  brought no bonny boy with him this time.”

“No, mother,” said Florentine, “no dancers for me and no minstrels, for my

  dear wife, the mother of my seven, boys, is to be wed to-morrow, and sad's


  the day for me.”

“What can I do, my son?” said the queen, “tell me, and it shall be done if

  my magic has power to do it.”

“Well then, mother dear, turn the twenty-four dancers and pipers into

  twenty-four grey herons, and let my seven sons become seven white swans,


  and let me be a goshawk and their leader.”

“Alas! alas! my son,” she said, “that may not be; my magic reaches not so

  far. But perhaps my teacher, the spaewife of Ostree, may know better.” And


  away she hurries to the cave of Ostree, and after a while comes out as


  white as white can be and muttering over some burning herbs she brought


  out of the cave. Suddenly Coo-my-dove changed into a goshawk and around


  him flew twenty-four grey herons and above them flew seven cygnets.

Without a word or a good-bye off they flew over the deep blue sea which

  was tossing and moaning. They flew and they flew till they swooped down on


  Earl Mar's castle just as the wedding party were setting out for the


  church. First came the men-at-arms and then the bridegroom's friends, and


  then Earl Mar's men, and then the bridegroom, and lastly, pale and


  beautiful, Earl Mar's daughter herself. They moved down slowly to stately


  music till they came past the trees on which the birds were settling. A


  word from Prince Florentine, the goshawk, and they all rose into the air,


  herons beneath, cygnets above, and goshawk circling above all. The


  weddineers wondered at the sight when, swoop! the herons were down among


  them scattering the men-at-arms. The swanlets took charge of the bride


  while the goshawk dashed down and tied the bridegroom to a tree. Then the


  herons gathered themselves together into one feather bed and the cygnets


  placed their mother upon them, and suddenly they all rose in the air


  bearing the bride away with them in safety towards Prince Florentine's


  home. Surely a wedding party was never so disturbed in this world. What


  could the weddineers do? They saw their pretty bride carried away and away


  till she and the herons and the swans and the goshawk disappeared, and


  that very day Prince Florentine brought Earl Mar's daughter to the castle


  of the queen his mother, who took the spell off him and they lived happy


  ever afterwards.

Story DNA fairy tale · romantic

Plot Summary

Earl Mar's daughter befriends a dove, which transforms into Prince Florentine, cursed to be a bird by day. They secretly marry and have seven sons, whom the prince takes to his magical queen mother. When Earl Mar tries to force his daughter into another marriage, threatening the dove, the prince flies to his mother for help. She transforms him, their sons, and her attendants into a flock of birds, who disrupt the wedding, rescue the daughter, and bring her to the prince's home, where the curse is broken, and they live happily ever after.

Themes

love overcoming obstaclessecret identitymagic and enchantmentfamily loyalty

Emotional Arc

peace to peril to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: repetition (e.g., 'flew and flew'), direct address to reader ('Surely a wedding party was never so disturbed'), rule of three (seven years, seven sons)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs society (forced marriage) and person vs supernatural (curse)
Ending: happy
Magic: transformation (man to dove, people to birds), magic spells, magical queen mother, spaewife (witch)
the dove (representing the prince's cursed form and secret identity)the golden cage (initial attempt to domesticate magic)the various birds (herons, swans, goshawk) as a unified rescue force

Cultural Context

Origin: Scottish (from Joseph Jacobs' English Fairy Tales, but the ballad 'Earl Mar's Daughter' is Scottish)
Era: timeless fairy tale

This tale is a prose version of a traditional Scottish ballad, 'Earl Mar's Daughter' or 'The Great Silkie of Sule Skerry' (though the latter is about a selkie, the themes of secret marriage and magical transformation are similar). Joseph Jacobs collected and retold many British Isles folk tales.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. Earl Mar's daughter finds a sprightly dove in her garden and invites it home.
  2. The dove transforms into a handsome young man, Prince Florentine, in her room.
  3. Prince Florentine reveals he is cursed by his magic-wielding queen mother to be a dove by day and a man by night, and declares his love.
  4. The daughter agrees to marry him, and they wed in secret, living happily for seven years.
  5. Each year, they have a son, whom Prince Florentine, as a dove, carries across the sea to his mother's castle.
  6. Earl Mar tries to force his daughter to marry a noble, threatening to kill her pet dove.
  7. Prince Florentine, as the dove, flies to his mother's castle to seek her help.
  8. His mother, the queen, initially believes he has returned permanently, but he explains his wife's plight.
  9. The queen consults a spaewife (witch) to find a way to help her son.
  10. The queen transforms twenty-four dancers and pipers into grey herons, and the seven sons into white swans, and Prince Florentine into a goshawk.
  11. The transformed group flies to Earl Mar's castle, arriving just as the wedding procession is heading to church.
  12. The herons scatter the men-at-arms, the swans take charge of the bride, and the goshawk ties the bridegroom to a tree.
  13. The herons form a 'feather bed' for the daughter, and the swans place her on it, carrying her away.
  14. Prince Florentine brings Earl Mar's daughter to his mother's castle, where the spell on him is broken.
  15. They live happily ever after.

Characters 7 characters

Earl Mar's Daughter ★ protagonist

human young adult female

Pale and beautiful

Attire: Wedding attire (implied, as she is setting out for her wedding)

A beautiful young woman in wedding attire being carried away by swans and herons

Brave, loving, loyal, determined

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A young woman in her late teens with flowing auburn hair adorned with small wildflowers. She wears a practical yet elegant emerald green dress with embroidered sleeves and a leather belt. Her expression is one of determined kindness as she stands tall, one hand resting on a worn satchel at her hip, the other gently holding a glowing silver pendant. She appears poised for a journey. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Florentine ★ protagonist

magical creature young adult male

Handsome young man (in human form)

Attire: Not specified, but likely noble attire in human form; as a dove, white feathers; as a goshawk, predatory bird plumage

A white dove transforming into a handsome young man

Romantic, persistent, devoted, courageous

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A young woman in her early twenties with long flowing auburn hair cascading past her shoulders, bright hazel eyes full of determination and warmth, fair skin with a light dusting of freckles across her nose. She wears a deep emerald green medieval-style dress with fitted bodice, flowing sleeves, and a golden embroidered trim along the neckline. A leather satchel hangs at her side. She stands tall with confident posture, one hand resting on her hip, the other gently holding a weathered leather-bound book against her chest. Her expression is brave yet kind, with a subtle hopeful smile. She wears simple brown leather ankle boots and a thin braided belt at her waist. A small golden pendant in the shape of a star rests at her throat. Her stance is grounded and heroic, feet shoulder-width apart, chin slightly lifted with quiet courage. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature

Earl Mar ⚔ antagonist

human adult male

Not specified

Attire: Implied to be noble attire, befitting an Earl

A furious Earl stamping out of his daughter's room

Authoritative, quick-tempered, controlling

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A middle-aged man with a sharp, angular face, thin lips, and cold, calculating eyes. He has slicked-back dark hair with streaks of grey at the temples. He wears a high-collared, long black coat with subtle silver embroidery over dark trousers and polished boots. A single silver signet ring adorns his finger. He stands tall with a rigid, authoritative posture, one hand resting on the hilt of a sheathed sword at his hip, the other clenched at his side. His expression is one of stern contempt. The setting is a dimly lit stone throne room with a large, ominous throne behind him. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Queen (Florentine's Mother) ◆ supporting

magical creature adult female

Not specified, but implied to be powerful

Attire: Implied to be royal attire

A queen muttering over burning herbs, performing magic

Powerful, magical, caring (towards her son), resourceful

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A mature woman in her late forties with an elegant, composed posture. She has high cheekbones, kind yet authoritative hazel eyes, and her silver-streaked auburn hair is swept up into a intricate braided updo adorned with a small pearl circlet. She wears a floor-length gown of deep emerald green velvet with intricate gold embroidery along the neckline and sleeves, a high collar, and a full skirt. A velvet mantle of the same color is draped over her shoulders. Her hands are gently clasped before her, and she wears a simple gold signet ring. Her expression is one of calm, supportive wisdom. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Spaewife of Ostree ○ minor

human elderly female

As white as white can be (after coming out of the cave)

Attire: Not specified, but likely simple, perhaps mystical attire for a spaewife

An old woman emerging from a cave, pale and muttering

Knowledgeable, powerful (in magic)

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An elderly woman with deep wrinkles and wise, crinkled eyes, her long silver hair braided with small feathers and dried herbs. She wears layered, earth-toned robes of rough-spun wool and linen, adorned with beaded necklaces and a pouch at her waist. She stands in a slight stoop, leaning on a gnarled wooden staff, her expression serene yet knowing as she gazes forward. Her hands are weathered and strong. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Bridegroom ○ minor

human young adult male

Not specified, but described as a noble of high degree

Attire: Wedding attire, befitting a noble

A noble tied to a tree by a goshawk

Not developed, passive

Image Prompt & Upload
A young man in his early twenties with neatly combed dark hair and a pleasant, slightly stiff smile. He wears a classic black tailcoat suit with a white waistcoat, a crisp white shirt, and a black bow tie. His posture is formal and upright, standing with his hands clasped politely in front of him. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

Seven Sons ◆ supporting

magical creature child male

Bonny (in human form); white swans (in animal form)

Attire: Not specified in human form; white feathers as swans

Seven white swans flying in formation

Loyal (to their parents)

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A young man, approximately eighteen years old, with short, wavy brown hair and light skin. He wears a loose-fitting white shirt with rolled-up sleeves, a brown leather vest, dark trousers, and sturdy boots. His posture is relaxed, standing with one hand on his hip and the other holding a small satchel. Expression is friendly and slightly curious, with a faint smile. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 5 locations
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Castle Garden

outdoor summer's day summer, fine weather

A pleasant garden within the castle grounds, where Earl Mar's daughter danced and listened to birds. It features a green oak tree.

Mood: peaceful, idyllic, innocent, beginning of magic

Earl Mar's daughter meets the dove (Prince Florentine) for the first time.

green oak tree birds flowers (implied)
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Late afternoon golden hour in a secluded castle garden. Dappled sunlight filters through the vast, ancient green oak tree at the center, its leaves glowing emerald and lime. Winding gravel paths lead through lush, manicured lawns and circular flower beds bursting with foxgloves, lavender, and white roses. A low, ivy-covered stone wall borders the scene, with hints of a tall castle turret beyond. Warm light catches the delicate wings of birds flitting between branches. Soft shadows stretch across the grass, and the air feels still, warm, and fragrant. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
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Earl Mar's Daughter's Room

indoor night

A private room in Earl Mar's castle, where the door is locked at night. It's where the dove transforms into a man.

Mood: intimate, secret, magical, later tense

Prince Florentine reveals his true form and they secretly marry. Later, the Earl threatens the dove here, leading to Florentine's escape.

locked door bed (implied) window-sill
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A private chamber in a gothic castle at midnight, bathed in cool moonlight filtering through a tall, arched window. The atmosphere is hushed and mysterious. A heavy, ornate wooden door with an iron lock dominates one wall. A large, canopied bed with deep blue velvet drapes sits against another. On the stone floor, scattered white feathers catch the silver light. The walls are hung with faded tapestries depicting birds in flight. A single, ornate candelabra on a carved nightstand holds flickering, unburnt candles. The room feels still, waiting, with an ethereal glow and subtle, feather-like patterns in the shadows. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
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Queen Mother's Castle

indoor

The castle of Prince Florentine's mother, a queen with magical powers. It has castle walls where the dove alights.

Mood: magical, powerful, place of refuge

Prince Florentine returns to his mother for help, and she uses her magic (or seeks help from the spaewife) to transform him and his sons for the rescue.

castle walls dancers pipers
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At twilight, the Queen Mother’s Castle rises from a misty hilltop, its silver stone walls glowing faintly with an inner magical light. The sky is a gradient of deep indigo and soft lavender, with the first stars appearing. A single, pristine white dove perches on the crenellated battlement, its feathers catching the last golden rays of sunset. The castle features elegant, slender spires and arched windows that emit a warm, amber glow. Below, a serene lake reflects the castle’s silhouette, surrounded by ancient, whispering willow trees and gardens of night-blooming moonflowers. The air is still and cool, with a soft luminescent mist clinging to the ground. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
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Deep Blue Sea

transitional stormy (implied during flight), windy

A vast expanse of ocean, deep and blue, described as 'tossing and moaning' during the flight.

Mood: vast, dangerous, journey, determined

Prince Florentine (as a dove) and later the transformed rescue party fly over it to travel between the castles.

waves horizon
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A vast, storm-tossed ocean at dusk, deep indigo waves churning violently under a darkening sky. The water's surface is a chaotic dance of white-capped swells and shadowy troughs, reflecting the last dramatic rays of a hidden sun piercing through bruised purple and grey clouds. The atmosphere is wild and melancholic, with salty mist hanging in the air. The only light comes from the dying sun, casting long, golden streaks across the heaving water and illuminating the foam on the crashing waves. No land in sight, only the endless, moaning sea under a turbulent sky. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
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Earl Mar's Castle Grounds (Wedding Procession)

outdoor morning/afternoon (wedding time)

The area outside Earl Mar's castle where the wedding procession is forming, moving towards the church. It includes trees where the birds initially settle.

Mood: tense, ceremonial, then chaotic, dramatic

The dramatic rescue of Earl Mar's daughter by Prince Florentine and their sons, disrupting the wedding.

men-at-arms bridegroom Earl Mar's daughter trees church (implied destination)
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A grand medieval castle of grey stone with tall turrets and fluttering banners stands under a soft morning sky. A wide, sunlit cobblestone path leads from the castle's main gate towards a distant stone church visible through the trees. The path is lined with ancient oak trees, their leaves dappled with sunlight, where small colorful birds perch and sing. The air is clear and bright, with a gentle breeze rustling the branches. The castle grounds are lush with manicured green lawns and patches of wildflowers in purple and yellow. The lighting is warm and golden, casting long, soft shadows. The atmosphere is serene and anticipatory, capturing the quiet moment before a festive event. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.