The Battle of the Birds
by Joseph Jacobs · from Collected Folk Tales
Adapted Version
Once, a prince took a walk. The forest was big and green. He heard a sound. "Help! Help!" it said.
The prince looked around. He saw a big black bird. The bird was stuck in some thorns. The thorns held its wings tight.
"Do not worry," said the prince. "I will help you."
He was gentle. He pulled the thorns away. One by one. The big black bird was free.
The bird shook its wings. It looked at the prince with kind eyes.
"Thank you," said the bird. "You are very kind. I will help you too. One day."
Then the bird flew away. Up, up into the sky. The prince smiled and walked on.
Next morning, the prince went back. But the bird was not there. A boy stood in its place. He had gold rings in his hair.
"Who are you?" said the prince.
"I am the bird," said the boy. "A bad man put a spell on me. You helped me. Now I am free!"
The prince was so happy.
"I have a gift!" said the boy. He held up a small bag. "This is a magic bag. But listen well."
The boy looked at the prince.
"Do not open it on the hill. Do not open it by the river. Open it only at home."
"I will not forget," said the prince.
The boy smiled. Then he was gone.
The prince walked and walked. He carried the bag. It felt heavy. He wanted to know. What was inside?
He stopped by a big tree. "I will just look," he said.
He opened the bag.
POP!
Out came a pretty castle! Out came a garden with red flowers! Out came tall green trees!
"Oh no," said the prince. "This is not my home."
Then the ground shook. BOOM. BOOM. BOOM. A big tall man walked up. He was very, very big. And he was grumpy.
"HEY!" said the big tall man. "You broke the rule! You opened the bag too soon!"
"I am sorry," said the prince.
The big tall man frowned. "I will put it back. But you must help me one day. Do you promise?"
"I promise," said the prince.
The big tall man waved his hands. The castle went back in the bag. The garden went back in the bag. The flowers went back too.
"Now go home," said the big tall man. "And keep your promise."
The prince walked and walked and walked. At last he came home. He opened the bag.
POP!
Out came the castle again! Out came the garden with flowers! Red ones and yellow ones and blue ones!
A pretty girl stood at the door. She had red hair and kind eyes.
"Hello," she said. "I am glad you are here."
"Hello," said the prince. He smiled.
They became friends. Then they married. They were very happy in their pretty castle.
But one day, BOOM. BOOM. BOOM. The big tall man came back.
"Keep your promise!" he said. "You must come and work for me."
The prince was sad. But a promise is a promise. He said goodbye to his wife. He walked away with the big tall man.
The prince worked hard for him. He was tired. He was sad.
But then he met a girl. She had brown hair and brave eyes. She was the big tall man's daughter.
"I am the brave girl," she said. "I will help you go home!"
"How?" said the prince.
"I know magic," she said. "Hold my hand!"
She waved her hand. The prince turned into a bird! She turned into a bird too! They flew up, up, up!
The big tall man looked up. "Where did they go?" He looked and looked. But he saw only two birds.
Then the brave girl waved her hand again. The prince turned into a fish! She turned into a fish too! They swam away fast!
The big tall man looked in the water. "Where are they?" He saw only two fish.
Then she waved her hand one more time. They turned into two flowers! A red one and a yellow one.
The big tall man walked right past them. He did not see them at all.
The big tall man was angry. The brave girl grew a big forest. Trees and trees and more trees. So many trees!
The big tall man pushed and pushed. But he could not get through.
"I give up!" he said. He was grumpy. But he went home.
The prince and the brave girl were safe. They walked toward his home.
"Listen," said the brave girl. "Go home. No one must lick your face. Or you will forget me."
"I will not forget you," said the prince.
He got home. His mother hugged him. His father hugged him. He was so happy.
But then his little dog ran up. The dog jumped and licked his face.
And just like that, a sad spell came. The prince forgot the brave girl. He forgot it all.
The brave girl waited and waited. She sat by the road. She was sad.
An old man walked by. He had kind eyes.
"You look sad," he said. "Come work with me. I make shoes."
"Thank you," said the brave girl.
She helped him make shoes. She was good at it. But she was still sad inside.
One day, the prince planned a wedding. There was a big party at the castle.
The brave girl came to the party. She brought two magic birds. One was gold. One was silver.
The gold bird sang out loud. "She turned you into a bird. You flew in the sky!"
They all looked at the birds.
The silver bird sang. "She turned you into a fish. You swam in the water!"
The prince stopped. He listened.
The gold bird sang again. "She turned you into a flower. She saved you!"
The prince looked at the brave girl. He thought and thought. And then — he knew!
"I know!" said the prince. "I know it all! You are my true friend! You saved me!"
He ran to the brave girl. He took her hands.
"You helped me fly. You helped me swim. You helped me hide. You were so brave."
The brave girl smiled. She was not sad now.
"You came back," she said.
The prince turned to them all. "This is the one I will marry. She helped me. She saved me. I will not forget her again."
And so the prince married the brave girl. They lived in their pretty castle, with the garden full of flowers, and they were happy together — because they never forgot each other again.
The End.
Original Story
THE BATTLE OF THE BIRDS
will tell you a story about the wren. There was once a farmer who was seeking a servant, and the wren met him and said: "What are you seeking?"
"I am seeking a servant," said the farmer to the wren.
"Will you take me?" said the wren.
"You, you poor creature what good would you do?"
"Try me," said the wren.
So he engaged him, and the first work he set him to do was threshing in the barn. The wren threshed (what did he thresh with? Why, a flail to be sure), and he knocked off one grain. A mouse came out and she eats that.
"I'll trouble you not to do that again," said the wren. [224]
He struck again, and he struck off two grains. Out came the mouse and she eats them. So they arranged a contest to see who was strongest, and the wren brings his twelve birds, and the mouse her tribe.
"You have your tribe with you," said the wren.
"As well as yourself," said the mouse, and she struck out her leg proudly. But the wren broke it with his flail, and there was a pitched battle on a set day.
When every creature and bird was gathering to battle, the son of the king of Tethertown said that he would go to see the battle, and that he would bring sure word home to his father the king, who would be king of the creatures this year. The battle was over before he arrived all but one fight, between a great black raven and a snake. The snake was twined about the raven's neck, and the raven held the snake's throat in his beak, and it seemed as if the snake would get the victory over the raven. When the king's son saw this he helped the raven, and with one blow takes the head off the snake. When the raven had taken breath, and saw that the snake was dead, he said, "For thy kindness to me this day, I will give thee a sight. Come up now on the root of my two wings." The king's son put his hands about the raven before his wings, and before he stopped, he took him over nine Bens, and nine Glens, and nine Mountain Moors.
"Now," said the raven, "see you that house yonder? Go now to it. It is a sister of mine that makes her [225] dwelling in it; and I will go bail that you are welcome. And if she asks you, 'Were you at the battle of the birds?' say you were. And if she asks, 'Did you see any one like me,' say you did, but be sure that you meet me to-morrow morning here, in this place." The king's son got good and right good treatment that night. Meat of each meat, drink of each drink, warm water to his feet, and a soft bed for his limbs.
On the next day the raven gave him the same sight over six Bens, and six Glens, and six Mountain Moors. They saw a bothy far off, but, though far off, they were soon there. He got good treatment this night, as before—plenty of meat and drink, and warm water to his feet, and a soft bed to his limbs—and on the next day it was the same thing, over three Bens, and three Glens, and three Mountain Moors.
On the third morning, instead of seeing the raven as at the other times, who should meet him but the handsomest lad he ever saw, with gold rings in his hair, with a bundle in his hand. The king's son asked this lad if he had seen a big black raven.
Said the lad to him, "You will never see the raven again, for I am that raven. I was put under spells by a bad druid; it was meeting you that loosed me, and for that you shall get this bundle. Now," said the lad, "you must turn back on the self-same steps, and lie a night in each house as before; but you must not loose the bundle which I gave ye, till in the place where you would most wish to dwell."
The king's son turned his back to the lad, and his [226] face to his father's house; and he got lodging from the raven's sisters, just as he got it when going forward. When he was nearing his father's house he was going through a close wood. It seemed to him that the bundle was growing heavy, and he thought he would look what was in it.
When he loosed the bundle he was astonished. In a twinkling he sees the very grandest place he ever saw. A great castle, and an orchard about the castle, in which was every kind of fruit and herb. He stood full of wonder and regret for having loosed the bundle—for it was not in his power to put it back again—and he would have wished this pretty place to be in the pretty little green hollow that was opposite his father's house; but he looked up and saw a great giant coming towards him.
"Bad 's the place where you have built the house, king's son," says the giant.
"Yes, but it is not here I would wish it to be, though it happens to be here by mishap," says the king's son.
"What's the reward for putting it back in the bundle as it was before?"
"What's the reward you would ask?" says the king's son.
"That you will give me the first son you have when he is seven years of age," says the giant.
"If I have a son you shall have him," said the king's son.
In a twinkling the giant put each garden, and orchard, and castle in the bundle as they were before. [227]
"Now," says the giant, "take your own road, and I will take mine; but mind your promise, and if you forget I will remember."
The king's son took to the road, and at the end of a few days he reached the place he was fondest of. He loosed the bundle, and the castle was just as it was before. And when he opened the castle door he sees the handsomest maiden he ever cast eye upon.
"Advance, king's son," said the pretty maid; "everything is in order for you, if you will marry me this very day."
"It's I that am willing," said the king's son. And on the same day they married.
But at the end of a day and seven years, who should be seen coming to the castle but the giant. The king's son was reminded of his promise to the giant, and till now he had not told his promise to the queen.
"Leave the matter between me and the giant," says the queen.
"Turn out your son," says the giant; "mind your promise."
"You shall have him," says the king, "when his mother puts him in order for his journey."
The queen dressed up the cook's son, and she gave him to the giant by the hand. The giant went away with him; but he had not gone far when he put a rod in the hand of the little laddie. The giant asked him—
"If thy father had that rod what would he do with it?" [228]
"If my father had that rod he would beat the dogs and the cats, so that they shouldn't be going near the king's meat," said the little laddie.
"Thou 'rt the cook's son," said the giant. He catches him by the two small ankles and knocks him against the stone that was beside him. The giant turned back to the castle in rage and madness, and he said that if they did not send out the king's son to him, the highest stone of the castle would be the lowest.
Said the queen to the king, "We'll try it yet; the butler's son is of the same age as our son."
She dressed up the butler's son, and she gives him to the giant by the hand. The giant had not gone far when he put the rod in his hand.
"If thy father had that rod," says the giant, "what would he do with it?"
"He would beat the dogs and the cats when they would be coming near the king's bottles and glasses."
"Thou art the son of the butler," says the giant and dashed his brains out too. The giant returned in a very great rage and anger. The earth shook under the soles of his feet, and the castle shook and all that was in it.
" Out here with thy son ," says the giant, "or in a twinkling the stone that is highest in the dwelling will be the lowest." So they had to give the king's son to the giant.
When they were gone a little bit from the earth, the giant showed him the rod that was in his hand and said: "What would thy father do with this rod if he had it?" [229]
The king's son said: "My father has a braver rod than that."
And the giant asked him, "Where is thy father when he has that brave rod?"
And the king's son said, "He will be sitting in his kingly chair."
Then the giant understood that he had the right one.
The giant took him to his own house, and he reared him as his own son. On a day of days when the giant was from home, the lad heard the sweetest music he ever heard in a room at the top of the giant's house. At a glance he saw the finest face he had ever seen. She beckoned to him to come a bit nearer to her, and she said her name was Auburn Mary but she told him to go this time, but to be sure to be at the same place about that dead midnight.
And as he promised he did. The giant's daughter was at his side in a twinkling, and she said, "To-morrow you will get the choice of my two sisters to marry; but say that you will not take either, but me. My father wants me to marry the son of the king of the Green City, but I don't like him." On the morrow the giant took out his three daughters, and he said:
"Now, son of the king of Tethertown, thou hast not lost by living with me so long. Thou wilt get to wife one of the two eldest of my daughters, and with her leave to go home with her the day after the wedding."
"If you will give me this pretty little one," says the king's son, "I will take you at your word." [230]
The giant's wrath kindled, and he said: "Before thou gett'st her thou must do the three things that I ask thee to do."
"Say on," says the king's son.
The giant took him to the byre.
"Now," says the giant, "a hundred cattle are stabled here, and it has not been cleansed for seven years. I am going from home to-day, and if this byre is not cleaned before night comes, so clean that a golden apple will run from end to end of it, not only thou shalt not get my daughter, but 'tis only a drink of thy fresh, goodly, beautiful blood that will quench my thirst this night."
He begins cleaning the byre, but he might just as well keep baling the great ocean. After midday when sweat was blinding him, the giant's youngest daughter came where he was, and she said to him:
"You are being punished, king's son."
"I am that," says the king's son.
"Come over," says Auburn Mary, "and lay down your weariness."
"I will do that," says he, "there is but death awaiting me, at any rate." He sat down near her. He was so tired that he fell asleep beside her. When he awoke, the giant's daughter was not to be seen, but the byre was so well cleaned that a golden apple would run from end to end of it and raise no stain. In comes the giant, and he said:
"Hast thou cleaned the byre, king's son?"
"I have cleaned it," says he.
"Somebody cleaned it," says the giant. [231]
"You did not clean it, at all events," said the king's son.
"Well, well!" says the giant, "since thou wert so active to-day, thou wilt get to this time to-morrow to thatch this byre with birds' down, from birds with no two feathers of one colour."
The king's son was on foot before the sun; he caught up his bow and his quiver of arrows to kill the birds. He took to the moors, but if he did, the birds were not so easy to take. He was running after them till the sweat was blinding him. About midday who should come but Auburn Mary.
"You are exhausting yourself, king's son," says she.
"I am," said he.
"There fell but these two blackbirds, and both of one colour."
"Come over and lay down your weariness on this pretty hillock," says the giant's daughter.
"It's I am willing," said he.
He thought she would aid him this time, too, and he sat down near her, and he was not long there till he fell asleep.
When he awoke, Auburn Mary was gone. He thought he would go back to the house, and he sees the byre thatched with feathers. When the giant came home, he said:
"Hast thou thatched the byre, king's son?"
"I thatched it," says he.
"Somebody thatched it," says the giant.
"You did not thatch it," says the king's son. [232]
"Yes, yes!" says the giant. "Now," says the giant, "there is a fir tree beside that loch down there, and there is a magpie's nest in its top. The eggs thou wilt find in the nest. I must have them for my first meal. Not one must be burst or broken, and there are five in the nest."
Early in the morning the king's son went where the tree was, and that tree was not hard to hit upon. Its match was not in the whole wood. From the foot to the first branch was five hundred feet. The king's son was going all round the tree. She came who was always bringing help to him.
"You are losing the skin of your hands and feet."
"Ach! I am," says he. "I am no sooner up than down."
"This is no time for stopping," says the giant's daughter. "Now you must kill me, strip the flesh from my bones, take all those bones apart, and use them as steps for climbing the tree. When you are climbing the tree, they will stick to the glass as if they had grown out of it; but when you are coming down, and have put your foot on each one, they will drop into your hand when you touch them. Be sure and stand on each bone, leave none untouched; if you do, it will stay behind. Put all my flesh into this clean cloth by the side of the spring at the roots of the tree. When you come to the earth, arrange my bones together, put the flesh over them, sprinkle it with water from the spring, and I shall be alive before you. But don't forget a bone of me on the tree." [233]
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"How could I kill you," asked the king's son, "after what you have done for me?"
"If you won't obey, you and I are done for," said Auburn Mary. "You must climb the tree, or we are lost; and to climb the tree you must do as I say."
The king's son obeyed. He killed Auburn Mary, cut the flesh from her body, and unjointed the bones, as she had told him.
As he went up, the king's son put the bones of Auburn Mary's body against the side of the tree, using them as steps, till he came under the nest and stood on the last bone.
Then he took the eggs, and coming down, put his foot on every bone, then took it with him, till he came to the last bone, which was so near the ground that he failed to touch it with his foot.
He now placed all the bones of Auburn Mary in order again at the side of the spring, put the flesh on them, sprinkled it with water from the spring. She rose up before him, and said: "Didn't I tell you not to leave a bone of my body without stepping on it? Now I am lame for life! You left my little finger on the tree without touching it, and I have but nine fingers."
"Now," says she, "go home with the eggs quickly, and you will get me to marry to-night if you can know me. I and my two sisters will be arrayed in the same garments, and made like each other, but look at me when, my father says, 'Go to thy wife, king's son'; and you will see a hand without a little finger."
He gave the eggs to the giant. [235]
"Yes, yes!" said the giant, "be making ready for your marriage."
Then, indeed, there was a wedding, and it was a wedding! Giants and gentlemen, and the son of the king of the Green City was in the midst of them. They were married, and the dancing began, that was a dance! The giant's house was shaking from top to bottom.
But bed time came, and the giant said, "It is time for thee to go to rest, son of the king of Tethertown; choose thy bride to take with thee from amidst those."
She put out the hand off which the little finger was, and he caught her by the hand.
"Thou hast aimed well this time too; but there is no knowing but we may meet thee another way," said the giant.
But to rest they went. "Now," says she, "sleep not, or else you are a dead man. We must fly quick, quick, or for certain my father will kill you."
Out they went, and on the blue grey filly in the stable they mounted. "Stop a while," says she, "and I will play a trick to the old hero." She jumped in, and cut an apple into nine shares, and she put two shares at the head of the bed, and two shares at the foot of the bed, and two shares at the door of the kitchen, and two shares at the big door, and one outside the house.
The giant awoke and called, "Are you asleep?"
"Not yet," said the apple that was at the head of the bed. [236]
At the end of a while he called again.
"Not yet," said the apple that was at the foot of the bed.
A while after this he called again: "Are you asleep?"
"Not yet," said the apple at the kitchen door,
The giant called again.
The apple that was at the big door answered.
"You are now going far from me," says the giant.
"Not yet," says the apple that was outside the house.
"You are flying," says the giant. The giant jumped on his feet, and to the bed he went, but it was cold—empty.
"My own daughter's tricks are trying me," said the giant. "Here's after them," says he.
At the mouth of the day, the giant's daughter said that her father's breath was burning her back.
"Put your hand, quick," said she, "in the ear of the grey filly, and whatever you find in it, throw it behind us."
"There is a twig of sloe tree," said he.
"Throw it behind us," said she.
No sooner did he that, than there were twenty miles of blackthorn wood, so thick that scarce a weasel could go through it.
The giant came headlong, and there he is fleecing his head and neck in the thorns.
"My own daughter's tricks are here as before," said the giant; "but if I had my own big axe and [237] wood knife here, I would not be long making a way through this."
He went home for the big axe and the wood knife, and sure he was not long on his journey, and he was the boy behind the big axe. He was not long making a way through the blackthorn.
"I will leave the axe and the wood knife here till I return," says he.
"If you leave 'em, leave 'em," said a hoodie that was in a tree, "we'll steal 'em, steal 'em."
"If you will do that," says the giant, "I must take them home." He returned home and left them at the house.
At the heat of day the giant's daughter felt her father's breath burning her back.
"Put your finger in the filly's ear, and throw behind whatever you find in it."
He got a splinter of grey stone, and in a twinkling there were twenty miles, by breadth and height, of great grey rock behind them.
The giant came full pelt, but past the rock he could not go.
"The tricks of my own daughter are the hardest things that ever met me," says the giant; "but if I had my lever and my mighty mattock, I would not be long in making my way through this rock also."
There was no help for it, but to turn the chase for them; and he was the boy to split the stones. He was not long in making a road through the rock.
"I will leave the tools here, and I will return no more." [238]
"If you leave 'em, leave 'em," says the hoodie, "we will steal 'em, steal 'em."
"Do that if you will; there is no time to go back."
At the time of breaking the watch, the giant's daughter said that she felt her father's breath burning her back.
"Look in the filly's ear, king's son, or else we are lost."
He did so, and it was a bladder of water that was in her ear this time. He threw it behind him and there was a fresh-water loch, twenty miles in length and breadth, behind them.
The giant came on, but with the speed he had on him, he was in the middle of the loch, and he went under, and he rose no more.
On the next day the young companions were come in sight of his father's house. "Now," says she, "my father is drowned, and he won't trouble us any more; but before we go further," says she, "go you to your father's house, and tell that you have the likes of me; but let neither man nor creature kiss you, for if you do, you will not remember that you have ever seen me."
Every one he met gave him welcome and luck, and he charged his father and mother not to kiss him; but as mishap was to be, an old greyhound was indoors, and she knew him, and jumped up to his mouth, and after that he did not remember the giant's daughter.
She was sitting at the well's side as he left her, but the king's son was not coming. In the mouth of night she climbed up into a tree of oak that was beside the [239] well, and she lay in the fork of that tree all night. A shoemaker had a house near the well, and about midday on the morrow, the shoemaker asked his wife to go for a drink for him out of the well. When the shoemaker's wife reached the well, and when she saw the shadow of her that was in the tree, thinking it was her own shadow—and she never thought till now that she was so handsome—she gave a cast to the dish that was in her hand, and it was broken on the ground, and she took herself to the house without vessel or water.
"Where is the water, wife?" said the shoemaker.
"You shambling, contemptible old carle, without grace, I have stayed too long your water and wood thrall."
"I think, wife, that you have turned crazy. Go you, daughter, quickly, and fetch a drink for your father."
His daughter went, and in the same way so it happened to her. She never thought till now that she was so lovable, and she took herself home.
"Up with the drink," said her father.
"You home-spun shoe carle, do you think I am fit to be your thrall?"
The poor shoemaker thought that they had taken a turn in their understandings, and he went himself to the well. He saw the shadow of the maiden in the well, and he looked up to the tree, and he sees the finest woman he ever saw.
"Your seat is wavering, but your face is fair," said the shoemaker. "Come down, for there is need of you for a short while at my house." [240]
The shoemaker understood that this was the shadow that had driven his people mad. The shoemaker took her to his house, and he said that he had but a poor bothy, but that she should get a share of all that was in it.
One day, the shoemaker had shoes ready, for on that very day the king's son was to be married. The shoemaker was going to the castle with the shoes of the young people, and the girl said to the shoemaker, "I would like to get a sight of the king's son before he marries."
"Come with me," says the shoemaker, "I am well acquainted with the servants at the castle, and you shall get a sight of the king's son and all the company."
And when the gentles saw the pretty woman that was here they took her to the wedding-room, and they filled for her a glass of wine. When she was going to drink what was in it, a flame went up out of the glass, and a golden pigeon and a silver pigeon sprang out of it. They were flying about when three grains of barley fell on the floor. The silver pigeon sprang, and ate that up.
Said the golden pigeon to him, "If you remembered when I cleared the byre, you would not eat that without giving me a share."
Again there fell three other grains of barley, and the silver pigeon sprang, and ate that up as before.
"If you remembered when I thatched the byre, you would not eat that without giving me my share," says the golden pigeon. [241]
Three other grains fall, and the silver pigeon sprang, and ate that up.
"If you remembered when I harried the magpie's nest, you would not eat that without giving me my share," says the golden pigeon; "I lost my little finger bringing it down, and I want it still."
The king's son minded, and he knew who it was that was before him.
"Well," said the king's son to the guests at the feast, "when I was a little younger than I am now, I lost the key of a casket that I had. I had a new key made, but after it was brought to me I found the old one. Now, I'll leave it to any one here to tell me what I am to do. Which of the keys should I keep?"
"My advice to you," said one of the guests, "is to keep the old key, for it fits the lock better, and you're more used to it."
Then the king's son stood up and said: "I thank you for a wise advice and an honest word. This is my bride the daughter of the giant who saved my life at the risk of her own. I'll have her and no other woman."
So the king's son married Auburn Mary and the wedding lasted long and all were happy. But all I got was butter on a live coal, porridge in a basket, and paper shoes for my feet, and they sent me for water to the stream, and the paper shoes came to an end.
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Story DNA
Moral
Promises, once made, must be honored, and true love, though forgotten, can be rekindled through persistent effort and symbolic reminders.
Plot Summary
A king's son, after helping a raven, embarks on a magical journey, receives a wondrous bundle, but makes a fateful promise to a giant. He marries a mysterious maiden, but the giant returns for their son. The giant's daughter helps the king's son escape her father's wrath, but he forgets her due to a magical kiss. She later appears at his new wedding, disguised, and uses a series of symbolic actions and a riddle to restore his memory, leading to their reunion and marriage.
Themes
Emotional Arc
innocence to peril to reunion and triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Joseph Jacobs collected and retold British and Irish folktales, often adapting them for a wider audience while retaining their core elements. This tale reflects common Celtic motifs of magical transformation, giants, and tests of loyalty.
Plot Beats (14)
- A farmer seeks a servant; a wren offers to work, threshes one grain, and a mouse eats it, leading to a challenge.
- The wren and mouse arrange a battle of their tribes; the king's son goes to witness it.
- The king's son arrives after the battle, saves a raven from a snake, and the raven, in gratitude, takes him on a magical journey.
- The raven takes the king's son to its sisters' houses for three nights, each journey shorter than the last.
- The raven transforms into a handsome lad, revealing he was under a spell, and gives the king's son a magical bundle, warning him not to open it prematurely.
- The king's son opens the bundle too soon, releasing a castle and garden, and a giant appears, demanding the king's firstborn son as payment to re-bundle it.
- The king's son returns home, opens the bundle at his desired location, and marries the beautiful maiden who appears from the castle.
- Seven years later, the giant returns for the son; the queen attempts to trick the giant with the cook's and butler's sons, but the giant sees through the deception and kills them.
- The king's true son is given to the giant; the giant's daughter helps him escape by transforming them into animals and then objects, using magic to evade the pursuing giant.
- The giant's daughter creates obstacles (blackthorn wood, rock, loch) to stop her father, ultimately drowning him.
- The daughter warns the king's son not to be kissed upon returning home, or he will forget her; a greyhound kisses him, and he forgets.
- The forgotten giant's daughter waits by a well, is discovered by a shoemaker, and becomes his assistant.
- On the day of the king's son's new wedding, the giant's daughter attends with the shoemaker and uses magical pigeons and a riddle about keys to restore the king's son's memory.
- The king's son remembers the giant's daughter, declares her his true bride, and they marry.
Characters
King's Son ★ protagonist
None explicitly given, but implied to be a handsome lad after the raven transformation.
Attire: Implied to be royal or noble attire, though not specified. Later, simple clothes when traveling.
Brave, honorable (keeps his promise to the giant), somewhat forgetful (due to magic), and ultimately loyal.
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A young adult prince, early twenties, with a kind and determined expression. He has short, wavy chestnut brown hair and warm hazel eyes. He stands tall in a confident, ready posture, wearing a fine but practical deep blue tunic with subtle silver embroidery at the collar, brown leather trousers, and sturdy black boots. A simple, unadorned silver circlet rests on his brow. His traveling cloak is slung over one shoulder. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Raven ◆ supporting
A great black raven, later transforms into a handsome lad.
Attire: As a raven, none. As a lad, implied to be simple traveling clothes.
Mysterious, grateful, powerful, under a curse, helpful.
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A young woman with long, flowing raven-black hair and deep, thoughtful dark eyes. She wears a fitted, dark grey tunic with subtle feather-like embroidery at the collar and cuffs over black leggings, and sturdy leather boots. A short, hooded cloak of deep navy blue, lined with a darker shade, is clasped at her throat. Her posture is alert yet relaxed, standing with a slight tilt of her head as if listening intently, one hand resting gently on a worn leather satchel at her hip. Her expression is calm, observant, and quietly supportive. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Giant ⚔ antagonist
A great giant, implied to be physically imposing and strong.
Attire: None explicitly given.
Demanding, powerful, persistent, vengeful, easily tricked by his daughter.
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A towering, muscular figure with a menacing expression, appearing middle-aged with wild, long gray hair and a thick beard. His eyes are cold and cruel, glaring forward. He wears tattered dark robes over rough leather armor, with a large, spiked club held firmly in one hand. His posture is aggressive, leaning slightly forward with a stance ready for attack. Scars mark his face and arms, adding to his intimidating presence. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature
Giant's Daughter ★ protagonist
The handsomest maiden the King's Son ever saw. Later called 'Auburn Mary'.
Attire: Implied to be regal or noble attire once she is in the castle. Later, simple clothes when traveling.
Intelligent, resourceful, loyal, loving, powerful (possesses magic), self-sacrificing.
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A tall, strong teenage girl with a curious and determined expression. She has long, wavy chestnut hair tied back with a leather cord, and bright hazel eyes. Her clothing is simple and rustic: a rough-spun cream-colored tunic over brown leggings, with sturdy leather boots. She stands in a confident, slightly wide-legged posture, one hand resting on her hip, the other holding a small, intricately carved wooden figurine. Her posture suggests both strength and a sense of wonder. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Shoemaker ◆ supporting
None explicitly given, but implied to be a common working man.
Attire: Simple, practical clothing of a shoemaker.
Kind, observant, practical, hospitable, somewhat bewildered by his family's behavior.
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An elderly man with kind, crinkled eyes and a gentle smile, his white hair neatly combed back. He wears a simple linen shirt beneath a well-worn brown leather apron, its surface marked with years of use. He is seated on a low wooden stool in a cluttered, cozy workshop, leaning forward slightly as he carefully stitches a piece of tan leather with a large curved needle. His posture is focused and patient, surrounded by wooden shelves holding spools of thread, pots of glue, and finished shoes. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Wren ○ minor
A small, poor creature.
Attire: Feathers.
Determined, feisty, proud, surprisingly strong.
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A young child around eight years old with a curious expression, wearing a simple brown tunic over beige leggings and worn leather boots. Their short, tousled hair is a mix of dark brown and auburn. They stand with a slight lean forward, one hand holding a small, smooth wooden bird figurine. Their posture is alert and inquisitive. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Mouse ○ minor
A small mouse.
Attire: Fur.
Bold, proud, challenging.
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A young anthropomorphic mouse with soft gray fur and large, round ears stands in a curious, slightly hunched posture. He wears a simple, earthy-toned tunic with a leather belt and small patched trousers. His big, dark eyes look upward with a gentle, inquisitive expression, and his long whiskers twitch slightly. He carries a tiny woven satchel over one shoulder. The style is reminiscent of classic storybook illustrations. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
The Barn
A farmer's barn where the wren is set to thresh grain.
Mood: mundane, initially industrious, then tense
The wren's first task and the initial confrontation with the mouse, leading to the 'Battle of the Birds'.
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Late afternoon golden hour, a weathered wooden barn with a thatched roof stands in a vast, rolling wheat field. The large barn doors are slightly ajar, revealing a dim interior where shafts of dusty sunlight illuminate scattered grain on the earthen floor. The surrounding wheat glows amber and gold, swaying gently in a soft breeze under a vast, clear sky with a few wispy clouds. The scene is serene and rustic, bathed in warm, soft light. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
The Battleground
A place where creatures and birds gather for a pitched battle. Later, a specific spot where a great black raven and a snake are locked in a final struggle.
Mood: chaotic, violent, pivotal
The main battle of the birds and creatures, and the king's son's intervention to save the raven.
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A vast, storm-scarred moor under a bruised twilight sky, churned earth littered with discarded feathers and splintered antlers. A single, lightning-split oak stands stark against the horizon, its bark scarred with deep claw marks. The air hangs heavy with the scent of ozone and damp soil, the last rays of a setting sun casting long, dramatic shadows across the desolate landscape. Muted colors of charcoal grey, deep brown, and blood-red dominate the scene. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Raven's Sister's House (First)
A house, implied to be comfortable and welcoming, where the king's son receives good treatment.
Mood: welcoming, hospitable, mysterious
The king's son's first night of rest and hospitality after helping the raven, and a test of his honesty.
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Dusk settles over a quaint, storybook cottage nestled in a clearing. The thatched roof glows amber under the soft, purple twilight sky. Warm, golden light spills from diamond-paned windows, illuminating a meticulously kept cottage garden bursting with foxgloves, roses, and climbing ivy. A stone path, lined with smooth river pebbels, leads to a sturdy, welcoming oak door with a black iron knocker. A gentle wisp of smoke curls from the fieldstone chimney, promising a hearthfire within. The air is still and peaceful, with fireflies beginning to blink in the lavender shadows of the surrounding ancient forest. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
The Close Wood
A dense forest near the king's father's house.
Mood: confining, magical, transformative
The king's son, unable to resist, opens the magical bundle, causing the castle and orchard to appear.
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A dense, ancient forest in late afternoon, sunlight piercing the canopy in golden shafts. Towering, gnarled oaks and beeches with thick, moss-covered trunks create a cathedral-like space. The air is hazy with a soft, green-gold mist. The forest floor is a carpet of deep emerald ferns, fallen leaves, and clusters of pale mushrooms. A faint, overgrown path winds between the colossal roots. The atmosphere is serene, mysterious, and deeply secluded, with a sense of timeless quiet. Soft, diffused light filters through the leaves, casting long, dappled shadows. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
The King's Son's Castle (and Orchard)
A very grand castle with an orchard containing every kind of fruit and herb. It appears magically from a bundle.
Mood: magical, opulent, desired, later domestic
The magical appearance of the castle, the king's son's marriage to the giant's daughter, and later, the giant's arrival to claim his son.
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A majestic, sprawling castle of pale stone with soaring spires and gleaming golden rooftops emerges at sunrise from a softly glowing, ancient bundle of cloth lying near the gate. The air is crisp with a gentle morning mist, bathing the scene in soft pinks and golds. Surrounding the castle is an impossibly lush, magical orchard, where trees heavy with every conceivable fruit—gleaming apples, plump peaches, clusters of exotic berries—grow alongside vibrant, fragrant herb bushes. The ground is carpeted with dew-kissed grass and wildflowers. The light is ethereal and warm, highlighting the intricate stonework of the castle and the saturated colors of the abundant harvest. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration
The Wellside with the Oak Tree
A well with a large oak tree beside it, located near a shoemaker's house.
Mood: desolate, waiting, later enchanting
The giant's daughter waits for the king's son, and her reflection in the well enchants the shoemaker's family before she is discovered.
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Ancient stone well draped in emerald moss, its wooden bucket resting beside the cool, dark water. A massive, gnarled oak tree with sprawling branches towers over the well, its leaves glowing amber and gold in the soft light of dusk. Nearby stands a cozy, half-timbered shoemaker's house with a thatched roof and a warm lantern glowing in the window. The scene is bathed in the golden hour's gentle glow, with long shadows and a few early fireflies blinking in the twilight. A winding dirt path leads from the well to the house, bordered by wildflowers and soft green grass. The atmosphere is peaceful, quiet, and deeply magical. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration