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The Rose-tree

by Joseph Jacobs

The Rose-tree

The Kind Girl and the Singing Bird

CEFR A1 Age 5 366 words 2 min Canon 85/100

Once upon a time, a kind girl lived. Her brother loved her very much. Her stepmother did not like her. The girl was always kind.

The stepmother sent the girl for water. The girl walked to the well. She tripped on a stone. The water spilled on the ground. She went home crying. The stepmother was very angry.

The stepmother sent the girl to the forest. "Find flowers," she said. "Do not come back without flowers." The girl walked into the trees. She felt scared and alone.

The stepmother told the father the girl was gone. The father was very sad. The brother missed his sister. He cried every day.

The brother planted a rose-tree. He remembered his sister. He watered the little tree. He cried under its leaves. The tree grew tall and strong.

A white bird came to the tree. It sat on a branch. The bird sang a sweet song. The song was about being kind. It sang, "Kindness is good. Truth is important." The brother listened to the song.

The bird flew to a shop. It sang its sweet song. A man heard the song. He gave the bird a red ribbon. The bird took the ribbon in its beak.

The bird flew to another shop. It sang its song again. Someone heard the song. They gave the bird a shiny button. The bird was happy.

The bird sang for three people. Each person gave it a stone. The stones were heavy, like a millstone. The bird had three gifts.

The bird flew home with the gifts. It carried the ribbon, button, and stone. The bird flew back to the rose-tree.

The bird dropped the red ribbon for the brother. The brother found the ribbon. He smiled a big smile.

The bird dropped the shiny button for the father. The father found the button. He felt happy inside.

The bird sang its song again. The stepmother heard the song. She listened to the words. The song said, "Being good is important. Bad actions are always found out." The stepmother felt sorry. She said, "I will be kind. I am sorry." The family was together again.

And they all lived kindly ever after.

Original Story 958 words · 5 min read

THE ROSE-TREE There was once upon a time a good man who had two children: a girl by a first wife, and a boy by the second. The girl was as white as milk, and her lips were like cherries. Her hair was like golden silk, and it hung to the ground. Her brother loved her dearly, but her wicked stepmother hated her. “Child,” said the stepmother one day, “go to the grocer's shop and buy me a pound of candles.” She gave her the money; and the little girl went, bought the candles, and started on her return. There was a stile to cross. She put down the candles whilst she got over the stile. Up came a dog and ran off with the candles. She went back to the grocer's, and she got a second bunch. She came to the stile, set down the candles, and proceeded to climb over. Up came the dog and ran off with the candles. She went again to the grocer's, and she got a third bunch; and just the same happened. Then she came to her stepmother crying, for she had spent all the money and had lost three bunches of candles. The stepmother was angry, but she pretended not to mind the loss. She said to the child: “Come, lay your head on my lap that I may comb your hair.” So the little one laid her head in the woman's lap, who proceeded to comb the yellow silken hair. And when she combed the hair fell over her knees, and rolled right down to the ground. Then the stepmother hated her more for the beauty of her hair; so she said to her, “I cannot part your hair on my knee, fetch a billet of wood.” So she fetched it. Then said the stepmother, “I cannot part your hair with a comb, fetch me an axe.” So she fetched it. “Now,” said the wicked woman, “lay your head down on the billet whilst I part your hair.” Well! she laid down her little golden head without fear; and whist! down came the axe, and it was off. So the mother wiped the axe and laughed. Then she took the heart and liver of the little girl, and she stewed them and brought them into the house for supper. The husband tasted them and shook his head. He said they tasted very strangely. She gave some to the little boy, but he would not eat. She tried to force him, but he refused, and ran out into the garden, and took up his little sister, and put her in a box, and buried the box under a rose-tree; and every day he went to the tree and wept, till his tears ran down on the box. One day the rose-tree flowered. It was spring, and there among the flowers was a white bird; and it sang, and sang, and sang like an angel out of heaven. Away it flew, and it went to a cobbler's shop, and perched itself on a tree hard by; and thus it sang, “My wicked mother slew me, My dear father ate me, My little brother whom I love Sits below, and I sing above Stick, stock, stone dead.” “Sing again that beautiful song,” asked the shoemaker. “If you will first give me those little red shoes you are making.” The cobbler gave the shoes, and the bird sang the song; then flew to a tree in front of a watchmaker's, and sang: “My wicked mother slew me, My dear father ate me, My little brother whom I love Sits below, and I sing above Stick, stock, stone dead.” “Oh, the beautiful song! sing it again, sweet bird,” asked the watchmaker. “If you will give me first that gold watch and chain in your hand.” The jeweller gave the watch and chain. The bird took it in one foot, the shoes in the other, and, after having repeated the song, flew away to where three millers were picking a millstone. The bird perched on a tree and sang: “My wicked mother slew me, My dear father ate me, My little brother whom I love Sits below, and I sing above Stick!” Then one of the men put down his tool and looked up from his work, “Stock!” Then the second miller's man laid aside his tool and looked up, “Stone!” Then the third miller's man laid down his tool and looked up, “Dead!” Then all three cried out with one voice: “Oh, what a beautiful song! Sing it, sweet bird, again.” “If you will put the millstone round my neck,” said the bird. The men did what the bird wanted and away to the tree it flew with the millstone round its neck, the red shoes in one foot, and the gold watch and chain in the other. It sang the song and then flew home. It rattled the millstone against the eaves of the house, and the stepmother said: “It thunders.” Then the little boy ran out to see the thunder, and down dropped the red shoes at his feet. It rattled the millstone against the eaves of the house once more, and the stepmother said again: “It thunders.” Then the father ran out and down fell the chain about his neck. In ran father and son, laughing and saying, “See, what fine things the thunder has brought us!” Then the bird rattled the millstone against the eaves of the house a third time; and the stepmother said: “It thunders again, perhaps the thunder has brought something for me,” and she ran out; but the moment she stepped outside the door, down fell the millstone on her head; and so she died.

Moral of the Story

Evil deeds will eventually be exposed and punished, while innocence, though suffering, will find justice.


Characters 5 characters

The Girl ★ protagonist

human child female

Skin as white as milk, lips like cherries, hair like golden silk reaching the ground.

Attire: Implied simple peasant dress of the period.

Obedient, innocent, trusting.

The Wicked Stepmother ⚔ antagonist

human adult female

Not explicitly described, but her actions suggest a cruel and calculating demeanor.

Attire: Implied period-appropriate dress, perhaps dark or severe.

Cruel, jealous, deceptive, murderous.

The Boy ◆ supporting

human child male

Not explicitly described, but implied to be young.

Attire: Implied simple peasant clothing.

Loving, sensitive, mournful, observant.

The Father ○ minor

human adult male

Not explicitly described.

Attire: Implied simple clothing of a good man.

Unobservant, easily deceived, somewhat passive.

The White Bird ★ protagonist

magical creature ageless non-human

A white bird, appearing among the flowers of the rose-tree.

Attire: Its own feathers, later acquiring red shoes, a gold watch and chain, and a millstone.

Melancholy, determined, vengeful.

Locations 4 locations
The Stepmother's House

The Stepmother's House

indoor Implied to be indoors, so weather is not a direct factor, but events span from day to night.

A domestic setting where the stepmother lives with her husband and stepchildren. It contains a lap for combing hair, a billet of wood, and an axe. Later, it has eaves where a bird rattles a millstone.

Mood: Initially appears normal, but quickly becomes sinister and violent, then later filled with a sense of impending doom and eventual justice.

The stepmother murders the girl here; later, the bird returns here to deliver justice.

lapbillet of woodaxeeaves of the house
The Garden under the Rose-tree

The Garden under the Rose-tree

outdoor Spring, with the rose-tree flowering.

A garden area adjacent to the house, featuring a rose-tree under which the little girl's body is buried in a box. The boy weeps here daily.

Mood: Initially sorrowful and mournful, transforming into a place of magic and rebirth when the white bird appears.

The boy buries his sister here; the white bird, embodying the girl's spirit, emerges from the rose-tree.

rose-treebox (buried)flowers
Cobbler's Shop (outside)

Cobbler's Shop (outside)

outdoor day Implied to be pleasant, allowing for outdoor work and singing.

A tree hard by a cobbler's shop where the white bird perches. The cobbler is making little red shoes.

Mood: Curious and appreciative, as the cobbler is enchanted by the bird's song.

The bird sings its song for the first time to an outsider and receives the red shoes.

treecobbler's shoplittle red shoes
Millers' Location

Millers' Location

outdoor day Implied to be suitable for outdoor labor.

An outdoor area where three millers are picking a millstone. There is a tree nearby where the bird perches.

Mood: Initially industrious, then shifts to wonder and awe at the bird's song, and finally to compliance with its request.

The bird sings its full song, and the millers provide the millstone, which becomes the instrument of the stepmother's demise.

treethree millersmillstonetools

Story DNA fairy tale · dark

Moral

Evil deeds will eventually be exposed and punished, while innocence, though suffering, will find justice.

Plot Summary

A wicked stepmother, jealous of her beautiful stepdaughter, murders her with an axe and serves her organs to the unsuspecting father. The stepdaughter's loving brother buries her under a rose-tree. The girl's spirit transforms into a white bird, which sings a song revealing the truth of her murder to various people, collecting gifts. The bird returns home, dropping the gifts for her brother and father, and finally drops a millstone on the stepmother, killing her and bringing justice.

Themes

justiceinnocence betrayedretributionthe power of truth

Emotional Arc

innocence to suffering to justice

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: sparse
Techniques: repetition, rule of three, song as narrative device

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: moral justice
Magic: talking dog (implied to be supernatural or a narrative device for the stepmother's plan), transformation of a human spirit into a bird, bird's ability to speak and carry objects, millstone falling from the sky
the rose-tree (symbol of remembrance, growth, and the girl's spirit)the white bird (symbol of the innocent victim, truth, and divine justice)the millstone (symbol of ultimate retribution and the weight of guilt)

Cultural Context

Origin: English
Era: timeless fairy tale

This tale is a variant of the 'Juniper Tree' (Grimm) or 'The Little Bird' (Perrault), common across European folklore, reflecting anxieties about step-parents and the belief in spiritual retribution.

Plot Beats (13)

  1. A beautiful girl, loved by her brother but hated by her stepmother, lives with her family.
  2. The stepmother sends the girl on an errand for candles, which are repeatedly stolen by a dog, causing the girl to return home distressed and without the items.
  3. The stepmother feigns anger, then tricks the girl into placing her head on a block of wood, where she murders her with an axe.
  4. The stepmother cooks the girl's organs and serves them to the father, who eats them unknowingly, while the brother refuses.
  5. The brother buries his sister's body under a rose-tree in the garden.
  6. A white bird, embodying the girl's spirit, appears in the rose-tree and sings a song revealing her murder.
  7. The bird flies to a cobbler's shop, sings its song, and receives red shoes in exchange for a repeat performance.
  8. The bird flies to a watchmaker's shop, sings its song, and receives a gold watch and chain.
  9. The bird flies to three millers, sings its song in parts, and receives a millstone in exchange for a full performance.
  10. The bird, laden with gifts, returns to its former home.
  11. The bird rattles the millstone against the eaves, dropping the red shoes for the brother.
  12. The bird rattles the millstone again, dropping the watch and chain for the father.
  13. The bird rattles the millstone a third time; the stepmother, expecting a gift, runs out and is crushed by the millstone, dying instantly.

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