THE NECK
by Juliana Horatia Ewing · from Old-Fashioned Fairy Tales
Adapted Version
A special sprite lived in a quiet lake. His name was Neck the Sprite. He wished to be a real human. He wanted a human heart. He played his harp. The music was very sweet. He wished to live forever.
An old man sat on a big rock. He was by the lake. He felt very sad. He felt very lonely. He was alone always. His life was hard.
Neck the Sprite played his harp. The music went to the old man. The old man felt a little better. His sad feelings went away. He asked Neck to play often.
Neck the Sprite said yes. He asked the old man a question. "How can I be human?" he asked. "How can I get a human heart?"
The Old Man thought for a day. He told Neck the Sprite. "Someone must love you much," he said. "They must give their life for you. Then you will change. You will become human. You will have a human heart."
Neck the Sprite asked for help. He asked the old man. The Old Man said no. He wanted to live his last days. Life was very sweet to him.
The Old Man became very weak. He gave Neck the Sprite advice. "Live like a human," he said. "Help many, many people. Maybe someone will love you. They will help you change."
The Old Man went to sleep. Neck the Sprite wore his robe. He helped many people. He helped for a very long time. He fed the hungry. He helped the sick. But no one gave their life.
Neck the Sprite felt very sad. He went back to the lake. He was quiet there. He felt alone again.
A big storm came to the lake. The wind blew hard. Tom was in a boat. He was in the water. Lily was on the shore. She was very scared for Tom.
Neck the Sprite saw Lily. He looked like an old man. He seemed not to care. Lily asked him to play. "Please save Tom!" she cried. "Play your harp now! Stop the big storm."
Lily knew Neck the Sprite. "You are the Water Sprite!" she said. "Save Tom for me. I will give my life for you. I will help you change."
Neck the Sprite said yes. He played his harp. The storm stopped. Tom was safe on land. Neck played a very sad song. Lily listened to the music. Her heart felt much love. She closed her eyes. She went to sleep forever.
The sun went down low. Neck the Sprite changed. He became a real human. He had a human heart. Tom ran to the shore. He found a beautiful harp.
Tom played the harp. The music was very good. He helped many people. He did good things. He remembered Lily always. He knew her love was true. They will be together one day.
The water sprite found his human heart. He learned love and help make us happy.
Original Story
THE NECK.
a legend of a lake.
On a certain lake there once lived a Neck, or Water Sprite, who desired, above all things, to obtain a human soul. Now when the sun shone this Neck rose up and sat upon the waves and played upon his harp. And he played so sweetly that the winds stayed to listen to him, and the sun lingered in his setting, and the moon rose before her time. And the strain was in praise of immortality.
Furthermore, out of the lake there rose a great rock, whereon dwelt an aged hermit, who by reason of his loneliness was afflicted with a spirit of melancholy; so that when the fit was on him, he was constantly tempted to throw himself into the water, for his life was burdensome to him. But one day, when this gloomy madness had driven him to the edge of the rock to cast himself down, the Neck rose at the same moment, and sitting upon a wave, began to play. And the strain was in praise of immortality. And the melody went straight to the heart of the hermit as a sunbeam goes into a dark cave, and it dispelled his gloom, and he thought all to be as well with him as before it had seemed ill. And he called to the Neck and said, "What is that which thou dost play, my son?"
And the Neck answered, "It is in praise of immortality."
Then said the hermit, "I beg that thou wilt play frequently beneath this rock; for I am an aged and solitary man, and by reason of my loneliness, life becomes a burden to me, and I am tempted to throw it away. But by this gracious strain the evil has been dispelled. Wherefore I beg thee to come often and to play as long as is convenient. And yet I cannot offer thee any reward, for I am poor and without possessions."
Then the Neck replied, "There are treasures below the water as above, and I desire no earthly riches. But if thou canst tell me how I may gain a human soul, I will play on till thou shalt bid me cease."
And the hermit said, "I must consider the matter. But I will return to-morrow at this time and answer thee."
Then the next day he returned as he had said, and the Neck was waiting impatiently on the lake, and he cried, "What news, my father?"
And the hermit said, "If that at any time some human being will freely give his life for thee, thou wilt gain a human soul. But thou also must die the selfsame day."
"The short life for the long one!" cried the Neck; and he played a melody so full of happiness that the blood danced through the hermit's veins as if he were a boy again. But the next day when he came as usual the Neck called to him and said, "My father, I have been thinking. Thou art aged and feeble, and at the most there are but few days of life remaining to thee. Moreover, by reason of thy loneliness even these are a burden. Surely there is none more fit than thou to be the means of procuring me a human soul. Wherefore I beg of thee, let us die to-day."
But the hermit cried out angrily, "Wretch! Is this thy gratitude? Wouldst thou murder me?"
"Nay, old man," replied the Neck, "thou shalt part easily with thy little fag-end of life. I can play upon my harp a strain of such surpassing sadness that no human heart that hears it but must break. And yet the pain of that heartbreak shall be such that thou wilt not know it from rapture. Moreover, when the sun sets below the water, my spirit also will depart without suffering. Wherefore I beg of thee, let us die to-day."
"Truly," said the hermit, "it is because thou art only a Neck, and nothing better, that thou dost not know the value of human life."
"And art thou a man, possessed already of a soul, and destined for immortality," cried the Neck, "and dost haggle and grudge to benefit me by the sacrifice of a few uncertain days, when it is but to exchange them for the life that knows no end?"
"Our days are always uncertain," replied the hermit; "but existence is very sweet, even to the most wretched. Moreover, I see not that thou hast any claim upon mine." Saying which he returned to his cell, but the Neck, flinging aside his harp, sat upon the water, and wept bitterly.
Days passed, and the hermit did not show himself, and at last the Neck resolved to go and visit him. So he took his harp, and taking also the form of a boy with long fair hair and a crimson cap, he appeared in the hermit's cell. There he found the old man stretched upon his pallet, for lie was dying. When he saw the Neck he was glad, and said, "I have desired to see thee, for I repent myself that I did not according to thy wishes. Yet is the desire of life stronger in the human breast than thou canst understand. Nevertheless I am sorry, and I am sorry also that, as I am sick unto death, my life will no longer avail thee. But when I am dead, do thou take all that belongs to me, and dress thyself in my robe, and go out into the world, and do works of mercy, and perchance some one whom thou hast benefited will be found willing to die with thee, that thou mayst obtain a soul."
"Now indeed I thank thee!" cried the Neck. "But yet one word more—what are these works of which thou speakest?"
"The corporal works of mercy are seven," gasped the hermit, raising himself on his arm. "To feed the hungry and give the thirsty drink, to visit the sick, to redeem captives, to clothe the naked, to shelter the stranger and the houseless, to visit the widow and fatherless, and to bury the dead." Then even as he spoke the last words the hermit died. And the Neck clothed himself in his robe, and, not to delay in following the directions given to him, he buried the hermit with pious care, and planted flowers upon his grave. After which he went forth into the world.
Now for three hundred years did the Neck go about doing acts of mercy and charity towards men. And amongst the hungry, and the naked, and the sick, and the poor, and the captives, there were not a few who seemed to be weary of this life of many sorrows. But when he had fed the hungry, and clothed the naked, and relieved the sick, and made the poor rich, and set the captive free, life was too dear to all of them to be given up. Therefore he betook himself to the most miserable amongst men, and offering nothing but an easy death in a good cause, he hoped to find some aged and want-worn creature who would do him the kindness he desired. But of those who must look forward to the fewest days and to the most misery there was not one but, like the fabled woodcutter, chose to trudge out to the end his miserable span.
So when three hundred years were past, the Neck's heart failed him, and he said, "All this avails nothing. Wherefore I will return to the lake, and there abide what shall befall." And this he accordingly did.
Now one evening there came a tempest down from the hills, and there was a sudden squall on the lake. And a certain young man in a boat upon the lake was overtaken by the storm. And as he struggled hard, and it seemed as if every moment must be his last, a young maid who was his sweetheart came down to the shore, and cried aloud in her agony, "Alas, that his young life should be cut short thus!"
"Trouble not thyself," said the Neck; "this life is so short and so uncertain, that if he were rescued to-day he might be taken from thee to-morrow. Only in eternity is love secure. Wherefore be patient, and thou shalt soon follow him."
"And who art thou that mockest my sorrow?" cried the maiden.
"One who has watched the passing misfortunes of many generations before thine," replied the Neck.
And when the maiden looked, and saw one like a little old man wringing out his beard into the lake, she knew it was a Neck, and cried, "Now surely thou art a Neck, and they say, 'When Necks play, the winds wisht;' wherefore I beg of thee to play upon thy harp, and it may be that the storm will lull, and my beloved will be saved."
But the Neck answered, "It is not worth while."
And when the maiden could not persuade him, she fell upon her face in bitter grief, and cried, "Oh, my Beloved! Would GOD I could die for thee!"
"And yet thou wouldst not if thou couldst," said the Neck.
"If it be in thy power to prove me—prove me!" cried the maiden; "for indeed he is the only stay of aged parents, and he is young and unprepared for death. Moreover his life is dearer to me than my own."
Then the Neck related his own story, and said, "If thou wilt do this for me, which none yet has done whom I have benefited, I will play upon my harp, and if the winds wisht, thou must die this easy death; but if I fail in my part, I shall not expect thine to be fulfilled. And we must both abide what shall befall, even as others." And to this the maiden consented most willingly. Only she said, "Do this for me, I beg of thee. Let him come so near that I may just see his face before I die." And it was so agreed.
Then the aged Neck drew forth his harp and began to play. And as he played the wind stayed, as one who pauses to hearken with cleft lips, and the lake rose and fell gently, like the bosom of a girl moved by some plaintive song, and the sun burst forth as if to see who made such sweet music. And so through this happy change the young man got safe to land. Then the Neck turned to the maiden and said, "Dost thou hold to thy promise?" And she bowed her head.
"In the long life be thy recompense!" cried the Neck, fervently, and taking his harp again, he poured his whole spirit into the strain. And as he played, it seemed as if the night wind moaned among pine-trees, but it was more mournful. And it was as the wail of a mother for her only son, and yet fuller of grief. Or like a Dead March wrung from the heart of a great musician—loading the air with sorrow—and yet all these were as nothing to it for sadness. And when the maiden heard it, it was more than she could bear, and her heart broke, as the Neck had said. Then the young man sprang to shore, and when she could see his face clearly, her soul passed, and her body fell like a snapped flower to the earth.
Now when the young man knew what was befallen, he fell upon the Neck to kill him, who said, "Thou mayest spare thyself this trouble, for in a few moments I shall be dead. But do thou take my robe and my harp, and thou shalt be a famous musician."
Now even as the Neck spoke the sun sank, and he fell upon his face. And when the young man lifted the robe, behold there was nothing under it but the harp, across which there swept such a wild and piteous chord that all the strings burst as if with unutterable grief.
Then the young man lifted the body of his sweetheart in his arms, and carried her home, and she was buried with many tears.
And in due time he put fresh strings to the harp, which, though it was not as when it was in the hands of the Neck, yet it made most exquisite music. And the young man became a famous musician. For out of suffering comes song.
Furthermore, he occupied himself in good works until that his time also came.
And in Eternity Love was made secure.
Story DNA
Moral
True love and selfless sacrifice can transcend mortal bounds and secure eternal happiness.
Plot Summary
A Water Sprite, or Neck, longs for a human soul and learns from a hermit that he can gain one if a human freely sacrifices their life for him, provided he also dies. After failing to convince the dying hermit, the Neck spends 300 years in human form performing acts of mercy, but no one he helps is willing to give up their life. Returning to the lake, he encounters a maiden whose beloved is caught in a storm. She offers to die for her love if the Neck saves him. The Neck agrees, saves the young man, and then plays a melody so sorrowful it breaks the maiden's heart, fulfilling the condition. The Neck dies as the sun sets, having gained his soul, and the young man, inheriting the magical harp, becomes a famous musician, eventually reuniting with his sweetheart in eternity.
Themes
Emotional Arc
longing to fulfillment | suffering to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Juliana Horatia Ewing was a prominent English writer of children's stories in the Victorian era, often incorporating moral lessons and elements of folklore.
Plot Beats (15)
- A Water Sprite (Neck) desires a human soul and plays his harp, praising immortality.
- The Neck encounters a melancholy hermit on a rock, who is tempted to end his life.
- The Neck's music dispels the hermit's gloom, and the hermit asks him to play often.
- The Neck agrees, asking in return how to gain a human soul.
- The hermit tells the Neck that he can gain a soul if a human freely gives their life for him, but the Neck must also die that day.
- The Neck tries to persuade the dying hermit to sacrifice his remaining days, but the hermit angrily refuses, valuing his life.
- The hermit, on his deathbed, advises the Neck to take his form and do works of mercy in the human world, hoping someone will eventually sacrifice for him.
- The Neck buries the hermit, takes his robe, and spends 300 years performing acts of charity, but no one he helps is willing to die for him.
- Discouraged, the Neck returns to the lake.
- During a storm, a young man is in danger of drowning, and his sweetheart cries out in despair on the shore.
- The Neck, in his old man form, mocks her sorrow, but she begs him to play his harp to calm the storm and save her beloved.
- The maiden, realizing he is a Neck, offers to die for her beloved if the Neck saves him.
- The Neck agrees, saves the young man with his music, and then plays a heartbreaking melody that causes the maiden to die.
- The Neck dies as the sun sets, and the young man takes his harp.
- The young man becomes a famous musician with the Neck's harp and lives a life of good works, ultimately reuniting with his sweetheart in eternity.
Characters
The Neck ★ protagonist
Initially appears as a being of the lake, rising from the water. Later takes the form of a boy with long fair hair and a crimson cap. After 300 years, he appears like a 'little old man wringing out his beard into the lake'. His true form is ethereal, tied to the water.
Attire: When taking human form, he wears a crimson cap. After the hermit's death, he dons the hermit's coarse, simple robe. This robe is a key item, suggesting a plain, possibly brown or grey, rough-spun garment.
Wants: To obtain a human soul and achieve immortality.
Flaw: His initial inability to comprehend the value and sweetness of human life, leading to insensitivity. His dependence on a human's free sacrifice for his goal.
Begins as an ethereal, somewhat detached being focused solely on his own gain. Through his interactions with the hermit and 300 years of performing acts of mercy, he gains a deeper understanding of human life, suffering, and love, ultimately leading to a selfless act.
Determined, persistent, initially naive about human life, compassionate (after the hermit's guidance), sorrowful, ultimately self-sacrificing.
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An ageless male water sprite with long, flowing fair hair, sitting cross-legged on the surface of a calm lake. He wears a simple crimson cap and a coarse, plain brown robe over his ethereal, water-like body. His hands are gracefully positioned on a golden, intricately carved harp, which he plays with a serene, focused expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Hermit ◆ supporting
An aged and solitary man, described as feeble and sick unto death. His life of loneliness and melancholy would suggest a gaunt, perhaps stooped figure.
Attire: A coarse, simple robe, likely made of rough, undyed fabric like wool or linen, practical for a solitary existence. Perhaps patched or worn.
Wants: To alleviate his loneliness and despair. Later, to guide the Neck towards understanding human life and mercy.
Flaw: His profound loneliness and melancholy, which tempt him to end his life.
Begins in despair, finds temporary solace in the Neck's music, resists the Neck's initial request, but ultimately repents and provides the Neck with crucial guidance on how to gain a soul through acts of mercy.
Melancholy, despairing, initially selfish (refusing to die for the Neck), but ultimately repentant, wise, and compassionate.
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An elderly man with a gaunt, weathered face, long unkempt white hair and beard, sitting on a rough stone pallet. He wears a simple, coarse, undyed linen robe that appears worn. His posture is weak and slightly hunched, and his expression is one of quiet contemplation and weariness. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Maiden ◆ supporting
A young woman, described as the sweetheart of the young man. Her agony and willingness to sacrifice suggest a delicate yet strong spirit. No specific physical details are given, but she would be of a typical Northern European appearance, given the story's origin.
Attire: Simple, practical clothing suitable for a young woman living near a lake, perhaps a linen dress and apron, in muted, natural colors. Not elaborate, but well-kept.
Wants: To save her beloved's life, even at the cost of her own. Her love for him and concern for his aged parents drive her.
Flaw: Her overwhelming love and grief, which make her vulnerable to manipulation, though she ultimately chooses her fate freely.
Begins in despair over her beloved's peril, offers her life as a sacrifice, and through her selfless act, enables the Neck to gain a soul and secures her own love in eternity.
Loving, selfless, courageous, deeply empathetic, determined.
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A young woman standing on a lake shore, facing forward, full body visible head to toe. She has fair skin, a round face, and long, light brown hair tied back in a simple braid. She wears a plain, long-sleeved blue linen dress and a white apron. Her expression is one of deep sorrow mixed with unwavering determination. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Young Man ◆ supporting
A young man, described as being in a boat on the lake during a storm. He is the beloved of the maiden and the 'only stay of aged parents,' suggesting he is strong and capable, likely of a sturdy build from a life of labor.
Attire: Practical, sturdy clothing suitable for working on a lake, such as a woolen tunic or shirt, trousers, and perhaps a simple cap. Muted, natural colors.
Wants: To survive the storm and return to his beloved and parents. Later, to honor the sacrifice made for him and live a life of purpose.
Flaw: His initial anger and desire for revenge after his sweetheart's death.
Is saved from a storm by the maiden's sacrifice, initially seeks revenge on the Neck, but then inherits the Neck's harp and purpose, becoming a famous musician and dedicating his life to good works, living out the Neck's original mission.
Resilient (surviving the storm), loving (implied by the maiden's devotion), initially vengeful (towards the Neck), but ultimately compassionate and dedicated to good works.
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A young man standing upright, facing forward, full body visible head to toe. He has a sturdy build, short dark brown hair, and a clean-shaven, earnest face. He wears a practical, dark green woolen tunic over a cream linen shirt, and simple brown trousers. He holds a golden, intricately carved harp in his hands, with a solemn and reflective expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
The Lake
A large, calm body of water, capable of sudden squalls. It is the domain of the Neck, who rises from its surface to play his harp.
Mood: Initially serene and magical due to the Neck's music, later becomes dangerous and sorrowful during the storm.
The Neck plays his harp here, the storm overtakes the young man, and the maiden makes her sacrifice.
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A wide, tranquil lake surface reflecting a soft, lingering sunset, with gentle ripples. In the distance, dark, ominous storm clouds gather over rolling hills, hinting at a coming tempest. The air is still and heavy with anticipation. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Hermit's Rock
A great rock rising out of the lake, serving as the solitary dwelling for an aged hermit. It has an edge from which the hermit contemplates throwing himself.
Mood: Initially desolate and melancholic, later becomes a place of philosophical debate and a brief respite from despair due to the Neck's music.
The hermit contemplates suicide here, hears the Neck's music for the first time, and later debates the value of life with the Neck.
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A massive, weather-beaten rock formation juts dramatically from the calm, dark waters of a large lake. The rock face is rough and craggy, with sparse, wind-stunted vegetation clinging to its crevices. A small, almost imperceptible, cave-like opening suggests a hermit's dwelling. The sky above is a vast expanse of twilight, with the last vestiges of a golden hour fading into deep blues. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Hermit's Cell
The simple, spartan dwelling of the aged hermit, likely a small, rough-hewn structure or a natural cave within the rock.
Mood: Somber and reflective, a place of quiet contemplation and eventually, death.
The Neck visits the dying hermit here, receives instructions on how to gain a soul, and buries the hermit.
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A stark, small cell carved into rough-hewn stone, with a single, narrow opening looking out onto a vast lake. The interior is dimly lit by a faint, diffused light, revealing a simple straw pallet on the stone floor. The air feels cool and still, with a sense of quiet solitude. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Lakeshore
The edge of the lake where the maiden stands, watching the storm and her beloved's struggle.
Mood: Desperate, anxious, and ultimately sorrowful.
The maiden cries out in agony, debates with the Neck, and ultimately sacrifices herself as her beloved reaches safety.
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A rugged, windswept lakeshore at dusk, with dark, churning water crashing against a pebbled beach. Overhanging, gnarled pine trees are bent by the fierce wind, their needles whipping. The sky is a dramatic canvas of bruised purples and greys, with a sliver of fiery orange on the horizon where the sun is setting. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.