THE KING of THE BUFFALOES
by Katharine Pyle · from Wonder Tales from Many Lands
Adapted Version
Long ago, Ago lived with Iola. Ago walked slowly, but he was very smart. A big Beast King lived near them. He bothered them. The Beast King wanted Iola.
One day, Ago was away. The Beast King came with his friends. They were big beasts. They broke Ago's house. The house was gone. They took Iola away. Iola was very scared.
Ago came home later. His house was broken. Iola was not there. He looked and looked. He found his special fast shoes. They were magic shoes.
Ago put on his fast shoes. He ran very, very fast. The shoes helped him jump. He followed the beasts' tracks. He found their secret place.
Ago saw the Beast King. The King looked like a man. He was not a nice man. He played a flute. Iola sat there. She was very sad. The King wanted her to stay.
Ago made a bird sound. It was a soft whistle. This was a secret sound. Iola heard it. She knew it was her dad!
Iola stood up. "I need water," she said. The Beast King heard her. He thought she would stay. He let her go. He was happy.
Iola went outside. She ran to her dad. Ago put on his fast shoes. He picked her up. They jumped away fast! They ran in the forest.
The Beast King waited. Iola did not come back. He saw she was gone. He was very, very mad! He called his beast friends. They ran after them.
Ago ran with Iola. He was slower now. Iola was heavy. The beasts came close. They were on a big field. They were very, very close.
Some hunters were hiding. They saw the chase. They shot many arrows. Whizz! Whizz! The beasts got scared. They ran away fast. The Beast King got hurt.
The hurt Beast King was angry. He was very, very mad. He ran far away. His friends ran with him. They went to a very far place.
Ago and Iola went with the kind hunters. Iola found a new home. She found many new friends. She was very happy. They were all safe now.
Ago and Iola were safe. Iola found a happy new home. They were all very happy. The scary Beast King never came back. You can be smart and brave. You can win against big, scary problems!
Original Story
THE KING OF THE BUFFALOES
AN AMERICAN INDIAN TALE
A LAME Indian and his daughter once lived on the edge of a lonely forest, apart from any tribe or village. The Indian, whose name was Agodaguada, was a great hunter and fisher in spite of his lameness. Every day he went off into the forest, and while he was away his daughter, Iola, took care of the lodge and did the cooking.
They would have been very contented there if it had not been for a herd of buffaloes that lived on the other side of the forest. The king of this herd was a magician. He had seen Iola once as she was gathering wood in the forest, and had fallen in love with her, for she was very beautiful. Agodaguada often came upon him hiding in the bushes near the hut, or heard him bellowing down at a stream near by. Agodaguada cautioned his daughter never to leave the lodge while he was away, for he feared the buffalo might seize her and carry her off.
He himself was tormented by the ungainly beasts. They muddied the streams where he fished and drove away the game by their bellowing. Gradually he was obliged to go farther and farther from the lodge to find deer or fish. Often as he sat quietly watching for game a hoarse voice would begin to sing at him from behind the bushes or rocks:
“You lame mannikin,
Don’t you think it a sin
To pen up your daughter?
—Say, Agodaguada—
To shut up your daughter,
Don’t you think it a sin?”
Sometimes he aimed an arrow or a stone at the place from which the voice sounded, and then a great dark body would go lumbering and crashing away through the forest, and Agodaguada would know that it was one of the buffaloes that had followed him.
HE SPOKE TO HER IN THE SOFTEST VOICE HE COULD MANAGE
One day, when Agodaguada was far from home, his daughter climbed up on top of the lodge, and sat there to comb her hair, for it was very long. Every now and then she stopped to listen and look about her, to make sure there was no danger.
For a long time all was silent except for the singing of the birds. She finished combing her hair, and was just about to go down into the lodge when suddenly a great noise arose, a crashing of underbrush and thundering of hoofs. The herd of buffaloes, with the king at their head, was charging down upon the hut. Iola had no time to move before she felt the logs breaking away beneath her. They were scattered this way and that like straws. In another moment Iola found herself seated on the back of the king of buffaloes. She was being carried swiftly away through the forest, while the lodge lay in ruins behind them.
On and on went the buffalo, until at last, in the deepest and darkest part of the forest, he paused and allowed Iola to slip from his back.
This was the spot where he and his followers had their camp, and it was here he intended to keep Iola until she consented to become his wife. He spoke to her in the softest voice he could manage, telling her that this was to be her home, but Iola would not look at him, nor answer. She only turned away, wringing her hands and weeping bitterly.
But the buffalo king was not discouraged. He had the power to take the shape of a man when he chose, and it was in this shape that he meant to woo her and win her to be his wife. And this he had no doubt of being able to do before long.
Meanwhile Agodaguada had been trying to fish, but he found his enemies more tormenting than ever. Their hoarse voices sang after him wherever he went:
“You lame mannikin,
Don’t you think it a sin
To shut up your daughter?
—Say, Agodaguada—
To shut up your daughter?
Do you think she is in?
Are you sure she is in?”
As Agodaguada listened, he became thoughtful. He rolled up his line and started back through the forest toward the lodge. As he came near his home he quickened his steps. He noticed that the small trees and underbrush had been trampled down as though a great herd had passed that way. Presently he began to run, and he was still running when he broke into the open where his lodge had stood. But the lodge was there no longer. Instead, he saw only the ruins that the buffaloes had left behind them. Iola was gone.
Agodaguada did not at once follow the enemy, however. He ran to the ruins and began tearing the logs aside and burrowing under them. Presently he gave a cry of joy and drew out from beneath them an old worn pouch of deerskin. From this pouch he took a pair of moccasins and put them on his feet. They were magic moccasins and were Agodaguada’s greatest treasure. And now he was ready to follow Iola and save her from the buffaloes.
It was not hard to trace the way they had gone. The herd had left a broad track of broken trees and branches through the dark forest.
The magic moccasins leaped a hundred yards at each step. They carried Agodaguada along faster than a bird can fly. The buffaloes had gone at full speed, and had had the start of him by several hours, but so swiftly he went that by twilight he found himself close to their camp.
Here he slipped the moccasins from his feet. As silently as a snake he crawled past the other wigwams toward the lodge of the king.
As he came near it he heard the sound of a flute, and soon he was close enough to look inside and see who was playing. It was the king himself. He had taken his human form and was playing upon his flute a love song to Iola, but as a man he was even more hideous than he was as a buffalo.
Iola sat with her back turned toward him. She looked very sad. Her head was sunk on her breast, and she took no notice of his love song or of his languishing glances.
Suddenly Iola started. From the thicket outside had sounded the whistle of a partridge. It was the whistle her father always gave as he came near home after a day of hunting. The buffalo, playing on his flute, had heard nothing.
Iola sat still a few moments longer, and then she rose. “I will go down to the spring,” she said, “and fetch the water for the cooking.”
When the buffalo heard her say this he was filled with joy. He took it as a sign that she was now ready to live with him in his wigwam and be his wife. Believing this, he was quite willing to allow her to go down to the spring by herself.
Iola stepped outside, and as soon as her father saw her alone there he rose up from among the bushes. His magic moccasins were once more upon his feet. He motioned her to follow. “Quick!” he whispered. As soon as they were clear of the bushes Agodaguada lifted his daughter in his arms and leaped away with her through the forest.
In the lodge the buffalo waited for Iola a long time. Sometimes he listened for her footsteps, and sometimes he played upon his flute. At last he began to grow suspicious and went out to look for her. Everywhere he looked and hunted, and at last he came to where her father had hidden in the bushes, and there he saw the marks Agodaguada had made as he had leaped away with Iola in his arms.
Then the buffalo knew he had been tricked. With a bellow of rage he called his herd together and started after Iola and her father.
Agodaguada had already gone some distance, but his daughter weighed him down, and the moccasins could not move as swiftly as when they had only himself to carry. He had only just reached the edge of the forest when he heard the buffaloes behind him. They had caught sight of him. The king gave a bellow of triumph. But now Agodaguada was out of the forest and leaping swiftly over an open plain. The whole herd were thundering after him at full speed, but just as the leader reached him Agodaguada leaped aside. Before the buffaloes could stop themselves they had charged on past him.
They turned and again rushed at him. But suddenly a flight of arrows darkened the air. Several buffaloes fell dead upon the plain, and the king was wounded. These arrows were shot by a band of hunters who had come to this plain in search of game, and had hidden themselves in a thicket. From there they had seen Agodaguada race with the buffaloes.
Though the king was wounded, he would still have pursued Agodaguada, but his followers had turned tail and were fleeing back into the forest. He stood pawing the earth and frothing until another arrow struck him, and then, bellowing with rage, he turned and followed his herd.
He did not stop at the camp, however. He was so full of anger and chagrin that he went on and on until he reached the wide plains of the West, where he had never been seen or heard of before.
But Agodaguada joined the band of hunters who had saved him, and Iola was married to their young chief and lived happily with him in his lodge for ever after.
Story DNA
Moral
With courage and cleverness, even the weak can overcome powerful adversaries.
Plot Summary
Agodaguada, a lame hunter, and his daughter Iola are harassed by a magical buffalo king who desires Iola. One day, the buffalo king abducts Iola after destroying their lodge. Agodaguada, using his magic moccasins, tracks them to the buffalo camp and, through a secret signal, helps Iola escape. The buffalo king and his herd pursue them, but a band of hidden hunters intervenes, wounding the king and scattering the buffaloes. The buffalo king flees to distant lands, and Iola marries the young chief of the hunters, living happily ever after.
Themes
Emotional Arc
fear to relief and triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Reflects traditional Native American storytelling elements, including respect for nature, the presence of magic, and the importance of family and community.
Plot Beats (13)
- Agodaguada, a lame hunter, and his daughter Iola live in isolation, tormented by a magical buffalo king who desires Iola.
- The buffalo king and his herd attack their lodge, destroying it and abducting Iola.
- Agodaguada returns home to find the ruins and Iola missing, but unearths his magic moccasins from beneath the debris.
- Wearing the magic moccasins, Agodaguada swiftly tracks the buffalo herd to their hidden camp.
- He observes the buffalo king, in human form, attempting to woo a sorrowful Iola with a flute song.
- Agodaguada whistles a secret partridge call, which Iola recognizes as her father's signal.
- Iola pretends she needs to fetch water from the spring, and the buffalo king, believing she is relenting, allows her to go.
- Iola meets her father, who quickly puts on his magic moccasins, lifts her, and leaps away through the forest.
- The buffalo king discovers their escape, bellows in rage, and rallies his herd to pursue them.
- Agodaguada, slowed by carrying Iola, is nearly overtaken by the buffaloes on an open plain.
- A hidden band of hunters, seeing the chase, shoots arrows at the buffaloes, killing several and wounding the king.
- The wounded buffalo king, filled with anger, flees with his remaining herd to the far-off plains of the West.
- Agodaguada and Iola join the hunters, and Iola marries their young chief, living happily ever after.
Characters
Agodaguada ★ protagonist
A Native American man, lean and wiry, with a noticeable limp due to his lameness. Despite his disability, he possesses a strong, resilient build from years of hunting and fishing. His movements are deliberate and careful due to his leg, but can be surprisingly swift when aided by magic.
Attire: Practical, durable clothing made from tanned deerskin, likely a simple tunic and leggings, adorned with minimal, functional elements. His attire would be earth-toned to blend with the forest, possibly fringed. He wears his magic moccasins when needed.
Wants: To protect his daughter Iola and ensure their survival and safety from the buffalo king.
Flaw: His physical lameness makes him vulnerable without his magic moccasins, and his deep love for Iola makes him susceptible to worry and fear for her safety.
He starts as a cautious, protective father tormented by the buffaloes. He transforms into a determined rescuer, using his magic to save his daughter, and ultimately finds a new community and security for his family.
Resourceful, protective, determined, cautious, and intelligent. He is a devoted father and a skilled hunter despite his physical challenge.
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A Native American man, adult, lean and muscular build, medium height. He has dark, observant eyes, a weathered face, and long black hair tied back simply. He wears a fringed deerskin tunic and leggings, earth-toned. One leg is slightly bent, indicating a limp, but he stands with a determined expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Iola ◆ supporting
A beautiful young Native American woman, graceful and slender. Her beauty is striking enough to attract the attention of a powerful magical being.
Attire: Simple, practical clothing suitable for living in the wilderness, likely a deerskin dress or tunic, possibly adorned with natural elements like beads or quillwork, but not overly elaborate. Her attire would be functional and modest.
Wants: To return to her father and escape the Buffalo King's unwanted advances.
Flaw: Her physical vulnerability makes her an easy target for the powerful Buffalo King.
She begins as a sheltered daughter, becomes a captive, and then is rescued, ultimately finding a new life and marriage within a tribe.
Obedient, beautiful, sad, observant, and quick-witted (recognizing her father's whistle). She is initially passive in her capture but actively participates in her escape.
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A young Native American woman, slender and graceful, with a beautiful, serene face. She has very long, straight black hair that reaches her waist. She wears a simple, knee-length deerskin dress, unadorned, in a natural tan color. Her expression is gentle but with a hint of sadness. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The King of the Buffaloes ⚔ antagonist
As a buffalo: A massive, dark-bodied buffalo, larger and more imposing than the rest of his herd, with powerful shoulders and a bellowing voice. As a man: He is described as even more hideous than his buffalo form, suggesting a grotesque or unsettling human appearance.
Attire: As a buffalo: His natural hide. As a man: The story doesn't specify, but likely simple, perhaps crude, garments that do not enhance his appearance, possibly made of animal hides or rough cloth, reflecting his wild nature.
Wants: To possess Iola and make her his wife.
Flaw: His arrogance and overconfidence in his magical abilities, and his inability to truly understand human emotions or consent. He is also vulnerable to arrows.
He begins as an unseen tormentor, becomes a captor, and ends as a defeated, enraged figure driven far away to the plains of the West.
Obsessive, persistent, arrogant, magical, cunning, and prone to rage. He believes his power and magic will win him what he desires.
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A large, dark-bodied buffalo, standing on all fours, with a powerful, shaggy head and prominent horns. Its eyes are dark and intense, conveying a sense of cunning and anger. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Hunters ○ minor
A group of Native American men, strong and agile, skilled in archery and tracking, typical of plains hunters.
Attire: Practical hunting attire made from tanned animal hides, likely deerskin or buffalo hide, in natural earth tones. They would carry quivers of arrows and bows.
Wants: To hunt game and protect their territory/people.
Flaw: Not explicitly stated, but as a group, they rely on teamwork and their hunting skills.
They appear to save Agodaguada and Iola, then welcome them into their community.
Observant, skilled, brave, and decisive. They act quickly to take down the buffaloes.
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A Native American man, adult, muscular build, medium height. He has a serious expression, dark eyes, and long black hair in a single braid. He wears a fringed deerskin tunic and leggings, holding a recurve bow drawn back, an arrow nocked. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
The Young Chief ○ minor
A strong and capable young Native American man, likely well-built and commanding, befitting a chief.
Attire: Likely more adorned than a regular hunter, perhaps with some ceremonial elements or finer quality deerskin, possibly with quillwork or beadwork, signifying his leadership.
Wants: To lead his people and build a family.
Flaw: Not specified in the story.
He provides a happy ending for Iola by marrying her.
Kind, welcoming, and a good leader, as he marries Iola and provides her with a happy home.
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A young Native American man, adult, strong and well-built, medium height. He has a kind, dignified face with dark eyes and long black hair, possibly adorned with a single feather. He wears a finely crafted deerskin tunic with subtle beadwork and fringed leggings. He stands with a welcoming, confident expression. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations
Agodaguada and Iola's Lodge
A simple, single-room dwelling constructed from logs, likely a wigwam or similar structure, situated on the edge of a lonely forest. It is a humble home where Iola cares for daily chores and cooking.
Mood: Initially contented and secure, later becomes vulnerable and then utterly destroyed.
Iola is abducted from the roof of the lodge by the buffalo king; the lodge is subsequently destroyed.
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A simple, conical wigwam-style lodge made of rough-hewn logs and animal hides, nestled at the edge of a dense, ancient forest. Sunlight filters through the tall pine and birch trees, dappling the forest floor around the lodge. A faint wisp of smoke rises from the smoke hole. The ground is covered with fallen leaves and pine needles, with some wild grasses growing around the base. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Deepest Part of the Forest (Buffalo Camp)
A secluded, dark, and dense area within the forest, serving as the buffalo herd's camp. It contains the king's lodge (wigwam) and other structures for his followers. The atmosphere is initially menacing and later becomes a place of tense waiting.
Mood: Foreboding, captive, tense, later relieved.
Iola is held captive here by the buffalo king; Agodaguada infiltrates the camp and rescues her.
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A clearing deep within a primeval North American forest, where towering ancient pines and oaks create a perpetual twilight. Several simple, hide-covered wigwams are scattered amongst the trees, with the largest one centrally located. The ground is a mix of dark earth, moss, and fallen leaves. A small, clear spring bubbles up from rocks at the edge of the clearing. Shafts of dim, filtered light occasionally pierce the thick canopy. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
Open Plain
A vast, treeless expanse of land, likely a prairie or savanna, stretching out from the edge of the forest. It is open and exposed, offering no cover.
Mood: Exposed, desperate, then triumphant and safe.
Agodaguada and Iola are pursued across the plain by the buffalo herd, and are ultimately saved by a band of hunters.
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A sweeping, golden-hour prairie landscape. Tall, dry grasses ripple across a vast, flat plain under a wide, dramatic sky with streaks of orange and purple. In the distance, a dark line of dense forest marks the horizon. A small, dense thicket of low bushes and scrub offers a hiding spot near the edge of the plain. The ground is firm earth, sparsely covered with short, tough prairie grass. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.
